Finally here.
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General]
The light gray combo color should be changed as in kiai it blends a bit with circle numbers and it also strobes and may hurt some people.
03:33:266 - 03:36:649 -You should increase the volume here at least by 10%, the soft hits are really hard to be heard there.
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Easy]
00:50:452 (1) - It'd be better to remove this note so the player begins to play in a stronger beat, which is more natural imo.
The rest is
00:50:452 (1) - NC
01:03:985 (1,2) - NC should be on (2)
01:41:199 (1,2) - ^
03:36:860 (1) - The spinner ending in the downbeat for the kiai feels just weird to play and kills the emphasis this beat should have. Make it end in 03:38:340 - and put objects since 03:40:032, this way player will click here, which makes more than finish a spinner there and leaving 4 beats in the climax of the song.
03:45:318 (1) - Something similar here.
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Sieg's Normal]
03:36:755 - If you could increase the volume here it'd be nice, as it's barely hearable ;w;
03:38:340 (3,4) - These can be heard, but I think they deserve a little higher volume.
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Hard]
04:05:617 (1,2,3) - This triple touches the HP bar, move these notes a bit down.
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Insane]
03:38:340 (2) - I still think the circle pattern here should begin here :<
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Shiro's Insane]
01:14:557 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - You don't know how much I loved this.
03:45:318 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - These overlaps are just ugly considering the tidiness in the map, also idk if you were aiming for slightly tilted sliders instead of totally vertical ones.
I'll edit later (some hours, not days) for the Taiko =w=Done![
Muzukashii]
I find the beginning a bit weird due the mixing in the percusions and the other instrument like in 00:15:141 (30,31,32,33). But can't suggest nothing here without changing drastically the map, so I'll just let you know this.
00:33:113 - This beat really needs a note. I suggest to make this whole pattern a k k d d k d k k d, or something easier, with no 1/4 notes, it would fit nicely with the guitar there.
00:40:726 (1) - I find the big note a bit loud for this beat.
00:50:664 (38) - Move this to 00:50:241 - and make it a don, it will be consistent with previous pattern and will let the next pattern begin on a strong beat, which will emphasize it better.
00:52:356 (44) - Probably remove this note for a similar reason.
00:56:162 (58) - Remove this note, so you keep short 1/2 patterns in this part.
01:04:197 (88) - Same as in previous part.
01:05:888 (94) - Same.
01:07:368 (100) - I'd suggest to make it a don, so the ddk triples are more unique to the final part.
01:12:231 (121,122,123,124) - d kkk -> ddd k ?
01:17:306 (141,142,143,144) - ^
01:41:411 (38) - ^Same as in other parts.
01:43:103 (44) - ^
01:46:909 (58) - Remove this one, as in 00:56:162 (58).
01:54:944 (88) - Here just move it to 01:54:520.
02:10:168 (146) - Remove?
02:50:659 (61) - This note could fit better in 02:50:871.
02:52:879 (71) - Remove it to have consistency with previous pattern?
02:57:637 (93) - Move it to 02:57:426 for the same reason as above?
03:02:817 - I'd suggest to make this easier, the Oni is nearly the same except for some colours changing maybe.
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Oni]
1.60 is unneeded difficulty imo, though the last speed up really fits there, so just adjust it to be the same but with 1.40SV =w=
02:22:220 - So we go from somehow hardish o o o ooo o o patterns in Muzukashii to deathstreams in Oni. I'll recomend to delete some notes that could make the spread better without changing anything here, besides the deathstream not being a deathstream anymore and fitting better the song because it'll follow the lead guitar there.
02:22:749 (6) -
02:24:441 (21) -
02:24:969 (26) - If you delete this, maybe make 02:25:181 (27) - a kat, would compliment nicely.
02:26:132 (36) -
02:27:824 (51) -
02:29:516 (64) -
02:30:361 (72) -
02:31:207 (80) -
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00:07:952 (14,15) - It'd be nicer if you have some consistency in the use of doubles like this.
00:40:726 (1) - As in Muzukashii
00:50:242 (42) - This could fit better as a kat.
01:03:773 (99) - ^
01:09:589 (129) - imo, moving this to 01:09:376 would fit better the song with the resulting triples.
01:12:972 (155) - Something similar
01:40:989 (43) - This could fit better as a kat.
02:36:598 - This beat definitely needs a note.
02:41:991 (40,42) - How about removing these notes and make 02:42:097 (41,44) - big notes, this could fit complement nicely the big note in 02:40:828 (32).
02:43:364 - This beat definitely needs a note.
02:55:945 - Add a note here and remove the finish in the next note? it's really inconsistent with the next patterns, where the music is very similar.
03:04:510 (6) - Remove this note? I don't find it really fitting there.
03:07:893 (17) - ^
03:08:527 (19) - Make it a don so the next kat feels more unique and make the pattern fit better the drums?
03:21:426 (58) - Remove this note? I don't find it really fitting there.
03:46:375 - This beat definitely needs a note.
03:59:380 (99) - Removing this note and making 03:59:275 (98) a kat would play better imo.
04:09:634 (168) - Remove note for consistency?
04:15:133 (198,199) - Both notes could go faster, gradual increase doesn't work nicely here as the intensity goes up suddenly, so the speed up should come suddenly, it may sound crazy, but 2x fits nicely here?
I think I extended a bit here, but map lacked a bit of consistency and has some rhythm that could be improved. Adding the spread issues. Poke me back when done.