IamKwaN wrote:

[General]

1. White combo color is unrankable, please switch it to another similar color.
2. The "Spinner- Misc" set isn't completed for your mapset, you still owe these http://puu.sh/c6vnh.png except spinner-glow.png. Reference: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Skinning
3. There are quite a number of previous mods being ignored, please respond them accordingly.
4. Epilepsy Warning for all diffs.
5. Add an audio-leadin of 2000 ms manually.

[Edelweiss]

1. 00:21:649 (6) - NC
2. 00:32:249 - Maybe a circle for the heavy drum and solving the polarity issue. sorry
3. 01:29:249 - I am afraid the slider head hitnormal is audible, try to insert a green line of 30%. Same for 02:20:449 (9).
4. 02:07:649 (3,4) - Same as above. 20% is fine enough.
5. 02:18:449 (1) - Try S:C3 whistle so as to make it audible.
6. 02:31:249 (1) - Placing at 296,316 sounds more reasonable. sorry

[Insane]

1. 00:08:049 (2) - Whistle?
2. 02:07:649 - As mentioned in Edelweiss, increase the volume by 10%.

[Hard]

1. 00:01:649 - Silent the sliderslide by using S:C2 sample? Sounds quite noisy currently imo.
2. 00:46:849 - Maybe a circle here as of avoiding restarting at the red tick.

[Normal]

1. CS4 sounds harsh for current pattern and rhythm choices, how about CS3.5?
2. Redundant green lines: 00:26:449 - 00:43:849 - 02:26:449 - 03:00:049
3. 00:02:449 (4) - No solid beat on the middle and end node of this slider, you may try something like this: http://puu.sh/c6yA6.jpg
4. 00:42:449 (7) - NC? 10 is a bit too long for a Normal.
5. 00:45:249 (1,2) - Swap NC.
6. 02:26:449 - If possible, please simplify the rhythm starting from here till the end. Although I can see your thinking on mapping this part, it's very difficult for newbies to press consecutive 7 1/2 objects even they are all sliders. Let me provide you a benchmark, maximum 5 consecutive 1/2 objects in a row. Also, avoid using kick sliders, 02:48:849 (1,2) and 03:01:649 (1,2) even though you got NC on them, it's quite hard to read.
7. 02:46:849 (2) - Note density is too high within this stanza. Try to replace 02:46:849 (2) by a circle at 02:46:849 to give a slight gap.

fix
[Easy]

1. "Soft-slidertick9" and "Soft-sliderslide9" can't be mute at the same time. Just lower the volume to 10% is fine and keep only the sliderslide silent.
2. Change the preview time to 89449 like other diffs.
3. 01:18:449 (1) - Delete this or try any other alternatives as of recent spinner guideline. Same applies on 02:09:649 (1).
4. 01:59:349 - 10% please.

Nice set c:

buhei wrote:

快点填sb啊 这还用摸？
[Easy]
00:14:449 - 这段这里不要clap 有点毁歌了 麻烦去掉或者用默认softwhistle代替之类的
01:04:849 (1,1) - 不考虑在slider中间加上clap么
01:29:649 - 02:20:849 - 感觉这里还是加一个滑条或者两个note好点
01:51:249 (3,4,1) - 没对上 改成下面的然后后面再处理一下间距

131,54,151249,6,0,B|164:44|188:60|188:60|228:52|228:52|256:68|286:62,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,95,152449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,163,152849,2,0,P|391:203|396:251,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

02:03:249 - 这段也不要clap 减弱声音听起来还是毁歌
02:13:649 (3,4,3,4) - 这里保持和02:10:449 (2,3) - 一样的节奏
[Normal]
00:02:449 (4) - 这种节奏有点突然，最好在00:08:849 (1) - 也用一下保持统一
01:40:049 (1,2) - 436,308 然后处理一下前后间距
01:51:249 (4) - 莫名 一次折返不就好了
02:51:249 (3) - ^
02:54:449 (2,2,2) - clap音效怎么忽然突出了
[Hard]
00:19:049 (4) - whistle
01:04:049 (1,2,3,4,5) - 形状看着难受 后面短折返滑条弄成直的 尾端抬高
01:29:649 (1) - 这太奇怪了吧;w; 拆成两个
01:42:849 (6) - 一次折返就够了 要不然就直接变成四连打
02:20:849 (1) - 拆成两个
02:46:249 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - WTF 麻烦改成两连+折返滑条
02:47:249 (1) - 这段finish用得实在太过度了 还是换成clap吧 后面那段也是
[Melt's Insane]
00:38:049 (2) - ctrl+g
01:46:049 (4,5,6) - 三连去掉
01:53:849 (4,5,6) - 顺序改成(5)(6)(4)
02:46:849 (3) - 在这里放一个滑条吧
02:50:449 (1) - ctrl+g一下然后后面两个note再摆近一点 这里鼓点渐弱应该跳得比之前小 像03:03:249 (1) - 这里就做得不错
[EdelWeiss]
01:04:049 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 虽然无关紧要;w; 倾斜的角度不一样
01:12:449 (7,8,9) - 怎么这里三连啊? 放到01:12:249 - 这里
02:23:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 怎么这里放1/4跳啊 你后面02:36:849 - 这里就没放

没了
一个难度比一个难度难摸;w;

wcx19911123 wrote:

[General]
不影响sb的话建议把bg上下黑边切掉做成16:9
现在有要求要把guest name写进creator word里

[Melt's Insane]
setting太低了，HD跟OD请至少+1 ok
01:42:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这串的难度超出diff平均难度不少。。不改下spacing么。。

[EdelWeiss]
01:02:849 (4) - 这个slider感觉不太合曲，不如直接停在01:03:049 - 然后接2连 听着不太对劲 感觉还是这样好点
01:49:149 (6,1,4,1) - 希望可以再靠近点。。 靠近点有点不舒服
02:20:849 - ^ 靠近点打起来有点不舒服
02:46:849 (3,4) - 感觉不太合曲，这两个拼成1个slider可能好点，换个奇葩shape，降低下SV ok

打算谁泡啊？

IamKwaN wrote:

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wcx19911123 wrote:

missed image or useless sb code? about particle300.png

[Normal]
00:00:849 - S:C1 and S:C2 together

[EdelWeiss]
00:00:849 - same

最好不要动其他diff，再叫我吧

wcx19911123 wrote:

particle300.png only works for creator's diffs, ranked

rui wrote:

finally!
Congrats [Mahua]