list of beauty girls : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

ajeemaniz wrote:

raageee mooooooood...! aaaarrrght!
(rage mod brought to you by PROGUY)
aa, i adore the repetitive pattern, your mapping style, and song tho..!
i will do a 'very detail' mod, bcuz it's hard to find a mistake on each of your beatmap generally..

list of beauty girls : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

[general]
>> need to compress the audio bitrate to 192 kbps, so the file size is smaller
>> timing points is conflict each other with other diffs..
>> i cant find mistake on your beatmap that much, whoa.... teach mee.. ><
idk if marathon style map is rank-able instead approve-able.. need verification tho..


[NM Normal]
>> diff name : Normal or Hard? idk.. ==a

00:58:308 (58308|4) - > 01:06:698 (66698|2,66783|1) - in this section, perhaps you want to move and spread the pattern like :

at least try to make the other fingers playing too, without changing the pattern itself.. :3
*note : 01:06:952 (66952|4,67122|5,67206|4,67376|1,67461|2,67630|4) - dont change this part though..

01:14:410 (74410|2,74410|4,74579|2,74579|4) - move to 1 & 2
01:19:834 (79834|4,79834|2,80003|2,80003|4) - ^
01:25:257 (85257|4,85257|2,85427|2,85427|4) - ^

02:57:291 (177291|2) - move to 7

03:05:766 (185766|6,185850|5,185935|4,186020|3,186105|0,186189|1,186274|2,186359|3,186444|6,186528|5,186613|4,186698|3,186783|0,186867|1,186952|2,187037|3) - suggestion pattern : or
and the next part with flipped horizontally :3

03:09:834 (189834|0,189918|1,190003|2,190088|3) - Ctrl + j
03:10:172 (190172|6,190257|5,190342|4,190427|3) - ^
03:10:511 (190511|1,190596|2,190681|3,190766|4) - ^

consider to remove streams from 03:35:596 (215596|0,215596|2) - > 03:38:308 (218308|5,218308|0) - let the stream flowing at the ending to make it more intense.. :3

03:42:037 (222037|4,222037|2,222122|3,222206|4,222206|2) - : http://puu.sh/9L2VF/5d0b99243f.png

04:30:003 (270003|0,270088|1,270173|0) - move it like 3 5 3, let 2 hands playing on some pattern like that one

04:42:037 (282037|0,282206|0,282376|0,282545|0,282715|0,282884|0,283054|0) - iidx style ahuehuehue... this is actually not normal.. :v
consider to flip horizontally some pattern, like http://puu.sh/9L3dj/84450a29f4.png
AND OR
04:43:393 (283393|0,283562|4,283562|0,283732|0,283901|4,283901|0,284071|0,284240|4,284240|0,284410|0,284579|4,284579|0,284749|0) - i'd rather let my right index fingers doing this jacky stream, like http://puu.sh/9L3rf/9f874b191f.jpg

Fixed pretty much all according to suggestions.

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[Advanced]
orz how to pass this, and mod 'harder diffs' (eg : ET map) but i hope i can point something useful.. (or not.. x3)

i cant.. :I
no.. i can.. :I

04:58:312 (298312|0) - add notes on 4? i saw there's some 2 notes only, when another part have 3 and 4 notes on double white lines..

05:52:549 (352549|1,352549|5,352549|3) - crash with 3 notes? or 4? or 5? re check all notes with crash hitsound.. yeah, it intentionally is this way

06:14:244 (374244|0,374244|5) - medium have 3 longnotes, but without notes.. hmm.. oops lol

[Star+]
wow.. just... wow
my mod on this diff wont helpful here.. still trying to mod though
04:25:515 (265515|0,265515|6,265600|6,265600|0,265685|0,265685|6,265770|1,265770|5,265770|3) - http://puu.sh/9L6A9/8720d4386e.png
.... I'm pretty sure the alternation feels a bit more intense.
orz

zeroclover wrote:

chat log

01:35 Agka: post log plz ;_;
01:36 zeroclover: k wait

jk jk :p http://puu.sh/9L7hP/e8a88408f3.txt

ajeemaniz wrote:

[fullerene 4k]
Open AIMod
>> some notes are not snapped fixed
yea, star+ is star-'s senpai.. :v

00:47:375 (47375|1) - remove.. =w= minijack is there to emphasize the reversed kick here, and the snare also goes on here. (ps minijacks also break monotony of the map)
01:52:206 (112206|2,112206|0,112291|1,112291|3,112375|2,112375|0,112460|3,112460|1) - sounds is not strong enough to make double notes, : http://puu.sh/9L5tr/4f89f5cd28.png this was the best choice i had for emphasizing the sound pans and staccato effect. the synth here switches from each side and this is the closest i could get with the limitations of this editor to making a good staccato.
02:18:816 (138816|0) - move to 4 breaks pitch relevancy
02:24:240 (144240|0,144325|1) - move to 3 & 4 done sorta, moved it to 3 and 4 because the previous two notes have the first note on the same pitch as the next
02:29:409 (149409|1,149494|2,149663|0,149748|1) - push it 1 column to right, like 34 23 moved to 24 23 like the above
03:19:329 (199329|0) - not too strong enough for 3 notes, remove 1 triple here is kick + synth + sustained bass kick
04:46:193 - perhaps you want to add note on 2 only following the main synth here

PyaKura wrote:

[box=[Medium:1337]]
(Are you sure about HP9 on this diff ?) Almost, it's a long song, which makes me hesitate, but the overall structure (and what comes afterwards in higher difficulties!) make me lean towards the other side. If someone just asks me to do it, though...

I believe you can put most - if not all - SVs present in the higher diffs in this diff, seeing that this map is HP9 anyways and as such is noob-unfriendly. As such I don't think SVs would be detrimental to the map, actually the opposite. Applied.

02:14:240 - to 02:34:579 - Use blk.wav just like you did for the intro.Applied

Well consider fixing them I guess. Okay. ;_;

PyaKura wrote:

[box=[Rene's 4K:1337]]
02:16:952 - to 02:30:511 - Reduce HS volume to 20.
02:30:511 - 02:34:579 - Needs blk.wav (Same as intro)


04:44:583 - 04:46:109 - Reduce HS volume to 40.
did all and then some

PyaKura wrote:

It's rankable it's for approval lul

-Kamikaze- wrote:

First things first. I hope you realize that this spread is unrankable. You should forceask Fulle or someone else to create lower 4K diffs, because it'd be a shame to delete Fulle's 4K which is awesome if i have to make another easier 4k i have some ideas for that

[Fullerene's 4K Star-]
fixed. it was like that because there wasn't any actual bpm change, but agka put one there to have better sync in that section. need to clarify if he wants to keep or remove it

Columns are: |1|2|3|4|

Same as Star+, try to put slowdown on the beggining, it just feels right done. not sure why i didn't think of that first

00:00:257 - If you're not mapping this "waterdrop falling into pond" sound, than you should put LN from here to 00:02:714 - for the other sound the 'other sound' is just a sustained cymbal crash from hitsounds lol

01:07:714 (67714|2) - You could make some funky SV on this hold
01:29:409 (89409|3) - ^
04:02:634 (242634|0) - ^
04:41:956 (281956|0) - ^
05:51:109 (351109|2) - ^ done all

01:30:511 (90511|2) - You sure about this hold? Burst would fit here better imo it's like 1/16 or 1/32 or something lol. didn't feel right to me to put an undercharted burst (since 1/16 is obviously too dense). also the other sounds temporarily stop here.

03:38:312 - 03:39:668 - Try to scramble those a bit
04:44:753 - 04:46:109 - ^ trill emphasizes the 1/4 bass kick better imo

03:40:600 - 03:40:854 - Burst here fixed. didn't catch that, thanks

-Kamikaze- wrote:

Add marathon and trancecore to tags and idk, but it seems like DJNightmare made that BG (what I read here with help of google translate, lel) so maybe point that out in map's page Probably no need for these in the tags.

FINALLY SOMEONE IS BALLSY ENOUGH TO SET NORMAL OD/HP SETTINGS OMG srsly, all I modded lately was HP/OD 5/6/7 for no goddamn reason Hehe
That said, why is HP on Advanced 8 when Medium is 9? Changed both to 8.5
Also consider OD +0,5 on Star+ OD8 feels too spammy done

Columns are: |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[Medium]
That's one hell of a left-hand map in the first section after intro, lol


00:35:257 (35257|4) - Move to 4th?

01:25:257 (85257|0,85257|1,85426|1,85426|0) - Move those to middle maybe? Or move those 01:25:002 (85002|0,85087|1) - somewhere middle
Moved the second set.
03:32:714 - Add 1/2 LN for the burst sound, feels a bit empty now
03:35:426 - ^ Added LN at those bursts from that section.

05:52:545 - 06:06:104 - The Repetetive Patterns. This section feels a bit boring in my opinion, isn't there any other way to express the music? Or just reverse the pattern sometimes Flipped

[Advanced]

01:09:325 - 3-chord here? I'd say remove one note removed

01:52:460 (112460|6) - Move to 4th Intentional jack

03:51:532 - Add note at 1st and then move 03:51:617 (231617|0) - to 2nd done

04:07:634 - Why 3-chord here? removed

[Star+]

No slowdown SV for the beggining? It feels right with some 0.7x done


That's it, I hope it helps even a little. I absolutely love this map even tho I can't play it well, good luck with it o/

yoshilove wrote:

[Fullerene's 4K Star-]
http://puu.sh/9OFMW.png
from https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Metadata

Diff name Star-
I do not know if this is allowed
There may be a need to change.
but most difficult 4K n~~...
I'll wait for BATs in this case. Star- is differentiated from Star+ imo

00:30:172 (30172|3) - add clap?
00:32:545 (32545|1) - remove clap?
03:08:820 (188820|3) - add clap?
03:52:888 (232888|1) - add clap
04:20:007 (260007|3) - ^
05:46:786 (346786|2) - ^
fixed all

nice 4K~~~
Thanks!

Quavio wrote:

\o

column: 0 1 2 3 4 5 6

[7K Medium]
00:58:308 - since you have changed those doublets you could 00:58:817 (58817|4) - put all these bracketing note on the 2 column till here 01:07:799 -
01:06:782 - slide in 0 till 01:06:952 -
01:06:952 - slide in 4 till 01:07:121 -
01:07:291 - slide in 6 till 01:07:460 -
remove 01:07:376 (67376|1) - and slide in 0 at 01:07:291 - till here 01:07:460 -
remove 01:07:630 (67630|4) - and slide in there till 01:07:799 - and
add in 2 01:07:799 -
remove 01:14:409 (74409|0) - and add in 5
remove 01:14:579 (74579|0,74579|1) - and add in 2 and 4
01:19:833 (79833|0,79833|1,80002|0,80002|1) - same here ^
02:30:511 (150511|6,151020|5,151528|4) - switch position for pitch relevancy (?) they're pitch relevant
these don't work

02:38:817 (158817|6,158986|6) - if you are following electronic sound in background move the first one to 4 and second one to 2
02:41:528 (161528|0,161698|0) - same ^ but move to 2 the first and to 4 the second this time
hihat


04:32:715 (272715|3) - move to 5
04:33:223 (273223|6) - move to 6
04:33:732 (273732|1) - move to 2
05:07:800 (307800|0,308139|6) - not sure those are glitches
05:07:800 (307800|0,308139|6) - I don't feel like these are good, I would keep continuous stairs variety
05:08:816 - add in 0
05:08:816 - add in 6
so it should be this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1770536
05:57:630 - http://puu.sh/9R0pp/5d02f51144.png maybe (?)
06:03:053 - same here ^

Most of these mods are advices, it's up to you agka ^^

[7K Advanced]
03:18:731 (198731|4) - remove synth
03:18:647 - and this maybe http://puu.sh/9R50C/5f344f3abd.png current is more intense
03:25:257 (205257|5,205257|4,205257|1) - are you sure about hitsounds here? oops previous ones should't have had them
03:32:714 - this part should be the same of this 03:35:426 - they're different
03:41:867 (221867|6,221952|0) - remove this so it sounds like it's decreasing the volume
03:42:036 - put open chords here with 3 or 4 notes with HS of course
04:03:901 (243901|1) - remove
04:03:986 (243986|5) - remove and add in 1 and 2 with HS
04:25:765 - change hitsounds to finish
not removing notes because of hitsounds, ever

05:51:528 - I think those drums are overnoted since they are the same of 05:49:833 - section change, so it's okay
05:52:375 - open chords instead of minijacks changed to not be jacks instead

06:13:562 - rework this part using slides and notes... Maybe http://puu.sh/9R6Oa/052a7d857d.png
I'm okay with the way it is.

Good luck with this Agka!

richardfeder wrote:

00:32:037 (32037|2) - delete Follows synths.

00:47:037 (47037|0) - delete it's obviously different from 00:46:783 (46783|6,46867|4,46952|2,47122|3) - don't mess them up kay

01:07:799 (67799|2,67800|3,67800|4) - why is this triple? even 01:09:156 (69156|2,69156|4) - you use double notes and ignore the extra crash sound why triple here ;w; kay

01:08:478 (68478|3) - delete be consistent if you want to add notes for this then you should do the same 01:09:833 - 01:10:511 - ect Subsection switch, so no need

01:14:409 (74409|1,74579|1) - move to space done
omg repeated patterns too many /.\ and space column is mostly empty... Intentional, it's the first instance of proper 1/4ths
yeah you really map with no space...I suggest you to rearrange some part and avoid repeat too much. It seems that you leave space only for special sounds eg clap heavy beat ect but it's extremely unnature when you leave it totally empty it just turn out to be 6K. Holistics > specifics.
Also repeat too much is really annoying and not fun to play seriously... I had already tried switching them around...

02:11:867 (131867|3,132545|3) - unnecessary imo removed

02:50:172 (170172|4) - add a note done

02:53:478 (173478|2) - delete don't do this or you will have to map all sounds like this done

02:56:698 (176698|1) - no sound here/not the sound you should map. delete imo mapped to synth, not kick, but k


I can't check every single notes but I can ensure you 1/4 aren't nonstop...example 03:17:884 (197884|4) - 03:18:562 (198562|4) - and even tho you can hear some of the 1/4 under 50%/25% playback rate actually many of them are hardly audible/can't be noticed by player when they are really playing example 03:15:850 (195850|5) - so better recheck this part on your own
please forgive my laziness QAQ Yeah, it's intentional.

03:31:189 (211189|3) - ?
03:32:545 (212545|3) - ^
shouldn't be double? beat+electronic sound done

03:33:901 (213901|3) - ^

03:34:748 (214748|4) - add a note

03:37:122 (217122|1,217122|0,217206|2,217291|0,217461|0,217630|0,217630|1,217800|0,217800|2,217969|0,218054|1) - this is very not handy beatmania kicks

03:44:748 (224748|3) - move to 6 don't mess it up with 03:44:410 (224410|6,224495|5,224664|2,224834|4,224918|5) -

03:47:630 (227630|6) - add a note

04:01:697 (241697|5,242037|6) - delete

04:03:647 (243647|0) - add a note 04:03:816 (243816|4) - move to 1
Just pointing out some crucial...I didn't check note by note just pick some and say my idea that you may apply to the rest

04:35:681 (275681|5) - delete and move 04:35:765 (275765|6) - to 4

04:48:477 (288477|2,288477|3) - add notes

All applied..
Just go through the rest quickly and didn't find big problem, this is too long and please give me some times to mod the rest T.T

Good luck~~~

Sp3ct3r_2k11 wrote:

Get this shit ranked.