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Ayano Mashiro - ideal white (TV size)

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Chloe
有出处 ,等我回家贴。
smallboat
Sorry delay.

  1. Red words: Should be fixed.
  2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
  1. Fine.
[sammy's Easy]
  1. 00:21:274 (2) - Have a rhythm is here,why not add a note + finish? Makes play better.
  2. 00:48:607 (1) - Missed a finish hitsound,this song start which I think.
  3. 01:09:274 (3) - Stack better?
  4. 01:09:941 (1) - Cancel additions ' soft' to Auto,need to stress this downbeat here.
  5. 01:11:274 (3) - This slider end hitsound volume which I feel not fit (sounds like noisy),suggest to reduce 70~80% here.
  6. 01:20:607 (1) - Cancel this reverse and end finish here,sounds like have a bit weird now.
  7. 01:22:774 (1) - Delete this rhythm,and add a note at 01:22:607 (1),last the spinner head move to 01:23:274 here,end at 01:24:607,feel better.
  8. 01:26:607 (2,3) - This pattern looks weird,why not to do a symmetry here?
[Sharlo's Normal]
  1. 00:11:274 (1) - Feel place a big rhythm gap have a bit play to hard,why not use a 2/1 slider here?
  2. 00:26:607 (5) - Suggest use sampleset 'soft' ,not'drum',change this I feel better.
  3. 00:48:607 (1) - Missed a finish I think.
  4. 00:50:107 (4) - Use a samplset hitsound with the same 00:50:107 (4) head will be sound better.
  5. 01:14:607 (5) - I feel remove this reverse clap will be sounds better.
  6. 01:22:774 (4) - Move a bit make close to spinner?
  7. 01:25:941 (1,2,3,4) - Reduce to this part green line volume to 70~80%,100% too loud.
[Yuki's Hard]
  1. 00:07:607 (2) - Perhaps can stack 00:06:941 (6).
  2. 00:35:607 (2) - Maybe can move down a bit make a blanket.
  3. 01:27:274 (3,4) - Use a sampleset 'drum 'for these slider head? (Sounds like have the drum voice I think)
  4. 01:27:941 (1) - The slider end sounds like should white big line ,not blue line.
[Yomi's Insane]
  1. 00:17:607 (4,5) - This 2 note use ctrl+g will be flow better.
  2. 00:39:941 (1) - Stack better?
  3. 01:09:107 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern looks like not good,perhaps can try to this pattern,avoid ovelap here:
  4. 01:28:524 (11,12) - Add 2 notes to big white line? Because the song end is here.
[xxdeathx's Insane]
  1. 00:06:274 (2) -Feel this note crooked off,stack better here?
  2. 00:16:607 (1,2) - If ther are symmetry will be become a good pattern,why not try it?
  3. 00:22:941 (5,6) - Sounds like this music feel the notes jump have a bit close I think,make (5) move to (424|80) with same part 00:24:607 (1,2) ?
  4. 00:39:274 (1,2,3) - Select all move to (292|56) avoid overlap here.
  5. 00:39:941 (4,5,6) - Same above,move to (20|300) here.
  6. 00:51:107 (6) - Stack 00:51:774 (2) slider end?
  7. 01:22:607 (4,5) - This music sounds like have stream voice there,maybe you can change 4 1/4 slider here?
[iNsAnE]
  1. 00:22:941 (2) - Umm,I suggest this speed change set NC better,or will be hard to read here and many people pick this part to fix it (Won't comment more anymore,you should know how to fix it.)
  2. 00:31:774 (3) - (320|289) will be have a good flow.
  3. 00:48:441 (1,1) - Suggest move to (349|291) make close to spinner medium point better.
  4. 01:16:441 (2) - Feel use ctrl+g have a good flow better and fit the music.
  5. 01:19:274 (4) - Suggest add a note here ,make the playing become smooth and comfortable I think.
  6. 01:28:441 (9) - Sounds like still have bit loud,reduce to 30% here?

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Nyukai
oh it's starred =w=

I'm late to mod it I guess >:

why am I creating always a new page xD
xxdeathx

smallboat wrote:

Sorry delay.

[xxdeathx's Insane]
  1. 00:06:274 (2) -Feel this note crooked off,stack better here? moved 1 grid right
  2. 00:16:607 (1,2) - If ther are symmetry will be become a good pattern,why not try it? FIXED
  3. 00:22:941 (5,6) - Sounds like this music feel the notes jump have a bit close I think,make (5) move to (424|80) with same part 00:24:607 (1,2) ? fixed
  4. 00:39:274 (1,2,3) - Select all move to (292|56) avoid overlap here. ok
  5. 00:39:941 (4,5,6) - Same above,move to (20|300) here. ok
  6. 00:51:107 (6) - Stack 00:51:774 (2) slider end? ok
  7. 01:22:607 (4,5) - This music sounds like have stream voice there,maybe you can change 4 1/4 slider here? I don't want to make it too hard for 4.2 star map, and it feels a little overmapped to have 1/4 in this part.

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thanks xiaochuan~

Chloe I really think the http://puu.sh/c6c5o/e1355e8332.mp3 is better. Higher volume and converted from 320 kbps.
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Artist:Ayano Mashiro
ArtistUnicode:綾野ましろ
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Topic Starter
Chloe

smallboat wrote:


[iNsAnE]
00:22:941 (2) - Umm,I suggest this speed change set NC better,or will be hard to read here and many people pick this part to fix it (Won't comment

more anymore,you should know how to fix it.) since i had already nc'd it in the previous kickslider and tho it's a dischanged slider,

it's still very fast due to it's a kick, so I guess it's acceptable here.
00:31:774 (3) - (320|289) will be have a good flow. k, put it as better flow and placement here.00:48:441 (1,1) - Suggest move to (349|291) make close to spinner medium point better. the spacing isn't very far here by my

testing
01:16:441 (2) - Feel use ctrl+g have a good flow better and fit the music. sry i don't think so, i guess the flow now is better

01:19:274 (4) - Suggest add a note here ,make the playing become smooth and comfortable I think.a short pause in the end is

completely acceptable for insane diff imo, and i set it here for a big jump of 01:20:274 (1,2) - and the sv change of 01:20:941 (1) -
01:28:441 (9) - Sounds like still have bit loud,reduce to 30% here?sure

[b]Call me back.
others are fixed by gders, let me update for them

to Flower:
yes...... kshr checked it, you're right, fixed
Koiyuki

smallboat wrote:

[Yuki's Hard]
  1. 00:07:607 (2) - Perhaps can stack 00:06:941 (6). no, this looks better and easier to read
  2. 00:35:607 (2) - Maybe can move down a bit make a blanket. 2end,3,4beginning is on the same line, i keep that
  3. 01:27:274 (3,4) - Use a sampleset 'drum 'for these slider head? (Sounds like have the drum voice I think) ok changed
  4. 01:27:941 (1) - The slider end sounds like should white big line ,not blue line. This sounds better to me, i keep this
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Kinomi

smallboat wrote:

[Yomi's Insane]
  1. 00:17:607 (4,5) - This 2 note use ctrl+g will be flow better.
  2. 00:39:941 (1) - Stack better? stack了就歪啦。。打的时候看不出和前面的叠的
  3. 01:09:107 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern looks like not good,perhaps can try to this pattern,avoid ovelap here: 这个处于考虑我还是让1/2的间距是0,1/4保持不变
  4. 01:28:524 (11,12) - Add 2 notes to big white line? Because the song end is here.



Call me back.
smallboat
Fix some placement and everything looks fine on all diffs are okay imo.


Improve things by IRC :
  1. Add opening op TYPE-MOON tag
  2. Fix some placement , prevent some uncertain issue.

Bubbled !

IRC
2014-10-12 00:09 smallboat: 诶  怎麼不加type-moon 的tag 感覺對不起公司阿
2014-10-12 00:09 smallboat: 一打type-moon就好多
2014-10-12 00:09 Chloe: 咦 我忘了加tags
2014-10-12 00:10 Chloe: 等等
2014-10-12 00:10 smallboat: 一百多首
2014-10-12 00:10 smallboat: 竟然不加
2014-10-12 00:10 smallboat: 應該只有這tag搜尋最多了
2014-10-12 00:11 smallboat: Fate Project 也蠻多
2014-10-12 00:12 Chloe: fare project也要?
2014-10-12 00:12 Chloe: 我感觉这个不需要了吧
2014-10-12 00:13 smallboat: 好吧
2014-10-12 00:13 Chloe: 我加了OPENING OP TYPE-MOON
2014-10-12 00:13 smallboat: 行
2014-10-12 00:13 smallboat: update
2014-10-12 00:13 Chloe: done
2014-10-12 00:17 smallboat: 嗯 開始recheck
2014-10-12 00:24 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/516545 Ayano Mashiro - ideal white (TV size) [xxdeathx's Insane]]
2014-10-12 00:24 smallboat: widescreen
2014-10-12 00:27 Chloe: done
2014-10-12 00:27 Chloe: 因为只影响sb
2014-10-12 00:27 Chloe: 话说这个好像也是rankable
2014-10-12 00:27 smallboat: 為了不要有爭議就改一下吧..
2014-10-12 00:28 Chloe: 对
2014-10-12 00:28 Chloe: 改完了
2014-10-12 00:30 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/515455 Ayano Mashiro - ideal white (TV size) [Sharlo's Normal]]
2014-10-12 00:30 smallboat: 00:12:274 (2,3) - test了一下好像太上面額
2014-10-12 00:31 Chloe: hao
2014-10-12 00:31 Chloe: 别的还有吗
2014-10-12 00:33 smallboat: 00:03:941 (2) -
2014-10-12 00:33 smallboat: 這個薩米的
2014-10-12 00:33 smallboat: 00:25:941 (2) - 薩米的
2014-10-12 00:35 Chloe: 00:03:941 (2) - 这个还行吧
2014-10-12 00:36 Chloe: 另外一个改了
2014-10-12 00:36 smallboat: 好
2014-10-12 00:43 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/515828 Ayano Mashiro - ideal white (TV size) [Yuki's Hard]]
2014-10-12 00:43 smallboat: 01:27:941 (1) - 尾端應該白線(?
2014-10-12 00:44 smallboat: 看了一下薩米和瞎樓都在紅
2014-10-12 00:44 Chloe: 船爷说不用
2014-10-12 00:44 Chloe: M酱说*
2014-10-12 00:44 Chloe: 插鸡皮也在蓝线好像
2014-10-12 00:44 smallboat: 好
2014-10-12 00:44 Chloe: 虽然我不明
2014-10-12 00:45 smallboat: 算了應該結尾不一樣不會有爭議
2014-10-12 00:58 smallboat: 剩最後一個你的
2014-10-12 00:58 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/514874 Ayano Mashiro - ideal white (TV size) [iNsAnE]]
2014-10-12 00:59 Chloe: 好
2014-10-12 00:59 smallboat: 00:38:274 (2) - 這麼上面一直在同一個位置感覺會被干
2014-10-12 00:59 Chloe: 这个不会的
2014-10-12 01:01 Chloe: 00:54:774 (3) -
2014-10-12 01:01 Chloe: 这个屁股漏了个clap我补了
2014-10-12 01:01 smallboat: 00:51:274 (3) - 這個就真要改一下
2014-10-12 01:01 Chloe: 这个不用啊 滑条屁股被遮了也不影响实际play
2014-10-12 01:02 Chloe: 屁股碰血条也不算unrankable
2014-10-12 01:02 smallboat: 好吧
2014-10-12 01:02 Chloe: 我那张birth碰了好多
2014-10-12 01:03 smallboat: 00:58:607 (1) -
2014-10-12 01:04 Chloe: 好
2014-10-12 01:04 Chloe: 这边改了一小下
2014-10-12 01:04 Chloe: 后面滑条也拉了
2014-10-12 01:04 smallboat: 恩
2014-10-12 01:05 smallboat: ok go update
2014-10-12 01:07 Chloe: done
Shohei Ohtani
nice boat

OVERALL:
PREVIEW POINT ISN'T SNAPPED
Is there any reason why the softclap only registers in the left ear? (or at least is much stronger in the left ear)

Insane:
00:21:607 (4,5,6,7,1) - You know what i'd be concerned about this but I was modding Irre's version and like it had this but worse so like the only issue now is the icky overlap
00:49:774 (3,1) - This doesn't neccesarily sound very nice.
01:18:607 (2) - overlaps like is this 2014 mapping like what
01:19:441 (1) - ^unreadable overlaps aaaa

Yomi:
Good

xxdeathx:
00:07:941 (2,3,4,5) - Yeeeah. . . uhhhh, not quite yet.
00:22:107 (2) - Flow kind of is weird here, so attempt to find a way to fix it. If not, it's not game-killing I guess.
00:51:274 (1) - Finish on beginning of slider
00:56:607 (1) - ^
00:59:274 (1) - ^
01:01:941 (1) - ^
01:04:607 (1) - ^
01:07:274 (1) - ^
01:12:607 (1) - ^
01:20:607 (1) - Actual Finish (cymbal crash) or something
01:21:107 (4) - ^
01:21:607 (6) - ^
01:22:107 (2) - ^
01:22:607 (4) - ^
01:27:941 (4,5,6,7,8) - Is this offset stacking to offset stack leniency???

This map actually isn't as problematic as the mod makes it look. The hitsounds just seem lazily done.

Hard:
00:12:274 (4) - AaaAAAaaaA like change this so it doesn't go back on itself.
00:40:607 (1) - finish on beginning of slider head

Normal:
If literally anybody else was modding this, they'd be like "the SV omg", but I like high SV normals, so today's your lucky day.
00:08:607 (1) - Is there any reason why these hitsounds only register on the left ear?
00:50:107 (4) - Remove clap on end of slider

Easy:
00:12:274 (1) - TECHNICALLY because of the spinner rule, this is unrankable.
00:48:441 - while you're here just go ahead and remove this.

Nyan nyan!!~ I'll have to see if the hitsounding issue is something that will force me to only be able to re-bubble instead of qualify, but nyan~
Topic Starter
Chloe
fixed some and told CDFnyA lol, updated
Shohei Ohtani
Man this is going to bite me in the ass when people are like "wow CDFA speedranker"

Talked to QATs, and the hitsound thing is fine

So uhhhhh
Melophobia
Are you sure about the TV size label?
Topic Starter
Chloe

Melophobia wrote:

Are you sure about the TV size label?
we(kshr flower smallboat) are all fine with it.

also thx CDFA!
Rakuen
Grats Chole :cry:
Irreversible
\:D/ gz chloe choel chloa
ffstar
so fast!
gratz chloe
RemiFlan

CDFA wrote:

Man this is going to bite me in the ass when people are like "wow CDFA speedranker"

Talked to QATs, and the hitsound thing is fine

So uhhhhh

wow CDFA speedranker
Flower

Chloe wrote:

Melophobia wrote:

Are you sure about the TV size label?
we(kshr flower smallboat) are all fine with it.

also thx CDFA!
What is shown in the official site is song name w/o "TV size", so nah don't include my appreciation.

As long as KSHR approves it I won't complain with this, though.
Shohei Ohtani
crying rn
xxdeathx
Omfg holy shit
Azer
wow CDFA speedranker
pw384
打爆
Fycho
nice boat,那个臭了直播剁吊的表情
kisata
congratulations and all that for the cool map
KSHR
RobotoRaccoon
It must be nice being able to get away with mapping 1/6 difficulties yourself and a 6 day speedrank. :^)
hehe
delcious speedrank, grasts :)
Flower
My search result only had off vocal. Well I'm convinced now.
Shohei Ohtani

RobotoRaccoon wrote:

It must be nice being able to get away with mapping 1/6 difficulties yourself and a 6 day speedrank. :^)
yeah it is nice maybe you should try it sometime.
Umi
seriously, i'm not against speedrank at all, but u guys could at least wait for the video to be released though.

that's pretty sad :<
xxdeathx
i wanted to but scores would be wiped D;
Kodora
hehe, gratz Chloe!

eh, i miss iNsAnE over 5.25 stars /runs
Sum41forever
汗 这个三星的难度感觉比四星半还难 一个没点错用不了多久就GG了..
哎 还是太菜
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