Yo, as reqeusted.
[General]
[Allure]
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Best of luck!
[General]
- Don't you feel like the volume of your mp3 can be increased a little? picture, I'd say that it can get like 10-20% louder.
- The title was changed after our in-game discussion. Leaving a note here for next BATs.
- Maybe, you could fade the green combo colour a bit. It seems a bit too bright and may hurt eyes a bit.
- 00:05:349 (1,2) - please, try to avoid such patterns. The tail of (2) is overlapped and it may trick beginners, which isn't a good idea for the easiest diff.
Note: 00:13:354 (1,2) - same here, and 01:06:721 (1,2) - here. You can either use something like this or this. - 00:22:694 (3,2) - minor - the overlap is noticeable in-game. It is not a big problem, but you can avoid this overlap and make the diff even neater. example
Note: 00:29:364 (1,2,4) - soing something about these overlaps would also be nice, because the way how 00:32:700 (2,4) - overlap is probably confusing for beginners. - 00:42:706 - ignoring the strong downbeat with the end of the kiai is not a good thing. Besides, it breaks the consistency with the rest of the diffs. How about ending the spinner at the downbeat and moving the slider? Something like this
- 00:52:713 (3) - this is the only 1/2 slider in the whole diff, how about replacing it with just one 1/1 slider?
- 01:02:719 (3,4,1) - minor - might also be tricky as the beginners are not used to play overlapped patterns.
I like the diff, it looks good, well-mapped and intuitivel understandable. Though a couple of patterns were quite tricky.
- Try CS 3,5. It will improve the gap between Easy and Normal / Normal and Hard + it will make your Normal look even better.
- 00:29:364 (1) - I'm in love with this slider. ♥
- 00:44:040 - 00:45:375 - consider mapping these downbeats. They are quite strong and will help you to keep more consistency in your rhythm. MApping them would make your rhythm much easier, which is important for a Normal.
Note: 00:51:879 - for a similar reason, I suggest you placing a circle here. using some kind of polarity would seems to work great here.
Looks great.
- 00:16:023 (1) - what do you think about replacing this slider with a repeated 1/2 slider in order to stress the beat on 00:16:189? Example
- 00:20:692 - a circle here would also fit grteat, imo. Just give it a try and you'll hear it.
- 00:24:194 (2) - the whistling-sounds starts here, we can stress it and make the pattern flow better. Example
Note: while we are here, leaving 00:25:362 - unstressed does not sound right. How about a circle here? And maybee another circle at 01:14:059 - for a similar reason. - 00:29:364 (1) - wow, I"m impressed! ♥
- 00:43:207 - 00:44:207 (1) - I highly suggest you end this these sliders 1/4 earlier. Ending them on the blue tick does not really fit and seems exaggerated for this diff.
Quite decent diff, I like it.
[Allure]
- 00:10:186 (4,5,6) - Consider making tails of such sliders less loud. A 5% sections on the tails of these sliders will do great and make them sound more natural.
- 00:46:709 (1) - pretty sure that this slider should be finished at 00:47:042 - since there is a strong beat.
- 00:58:383 (4,1) - minor - to avoid any problems with readability, rotate (1) a bit, so, its reverse-arrow will be more noticeable. Example
- 01:13:059 (3,4,1) - jumps here feel exaggerated. The music goes relativelycalm at this part and the jump seem really weird, in my opinion. Same happens with 00:04:015 (1,2) - and 00:39:371 (3,4) .
I just feel unsure about the spacing as it goes quite agressive while the song is quite calm and relaxing. Your rhythm can also use just a bit more work. Though the diff is quite alright even as it is, I feel like it can get better.
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Best of luck!