sheela901 wrote:

Hey handsome!

General

Clyine's Extra

1. 00:00:438 (1) - This note doesn't land on any sound, but there is one on a 1/6 tick, 00:00:438 . But I would remove the first note, since it doesn't fit with the music. used a slider starting on a 6th.
2. 00:05:200 (1) - Try a note. It sounds better than the slider. The slider sound doesn't really fit with the vocals there. feels empty
3. 00:09:128 (4) - Move it closer to the next object, like x:27 y:152, so we won't get confused if we have to click (1)earlier, or later. This goes the same for 00:13:414 (6,7) and 00:54:664 (5,6) . at this level of playing it wouldnt make a differnce
4. 00:13:593 to 00:17:878 - The new combo was different from the others. And it doesn't have the consistency. I suggest that you check it. checked all only 2 nc on a sliders starts on a red tick. those have reasons behind them
5. 00:19:307 (1,2) - Why did you slow down the players there? A low distance make the players slow down when there's some intense before. But these notes aren't following the music. So, I suggest to move them more further. ^ wouldnt make a diff.
6. 00:49:485 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - It's best if you follow the same pattern. I mean that they aren't on the "same line". I mean, it should be somewhere like this: ok did that and rreadjust the position
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   Sorry if you can't see anything, but here's the code:
   
   349,106,49485,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   308,102,49575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   268,99,49664,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   370,311,49843,1,4,0:3:0:0:
   281,80,50021,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   242,96,50111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   206,114,50200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   370,311,50379,1,4,0:3:0:0:
   222,78,50557,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   189,104,50646,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   159,129,50736,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   370,311,50914,1,4,0:3:0:0:
   157,112,51093,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   132,145,51182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   109,178,51271,1,0,0:0:0:0:

7. 01:00:736 (1,2) - The flow there is bad. (2) is too outside of (1)'s curve. I suggest to remove the node on the body, and make it diagonal. done
8. 01:06:450 (9,10) - Same thing, it's a bad flow. You can make the curve of (9) facing to the left, or make it straight. done
9. 01:28:950 (1) - I think an only note would be best (replace the slider by a note). In my opinion, the note should handle the final syllable. a circles feels really empty

I found some new combo issues, but I didn't mention in the mod. That's why I want you to check them, and the pattern constant. You add a new combo on each downbeat, so you should stay on this pattern.

Well, I guess that's all! Don't hesitate on asking me questions! Good Luck on ranking this map!

Verlaren wrote:

Mod 4 mod from PM

Clyne's extra:
00:00:557 (2) - stack with 00:00:736 (3) and add note on 00:00:646 Change the pattern prev mod
00:13:414 (6,7) - quite difficult to read, try make a triple notes, imo is better: changed to circle

if you make ^, then add clap on 00:13:593
00:27:700 - add note. nope
00:39:128 (4) - add note? nope no following the stuff i want.
00:53:593 - Why You skip a strong beat? add note. theres no sound here even tho its a big white tick. and a slider plays weird.
00:54:664 (5,6) - same as in 00:13:414 (6,7) triplets
01:05:200 (2) - remove this pattern and extend 01:04:843 (1) until 01:05:200 nope
01:28:950 (1) - remove finish from head done

Nice map, good luck

handsome wrote:

pishifat wrote:

100 SP hype

no BAT hype

1. 00:06:450 increase the vol. to abou 40% or 50%，i cant here the clap these place,other diff is also mention this
2. 00:16:271 (5,1) - switch NC
3. 00:48:414 (2) - i think it is better to copy from 00:47:700 (2) - and ctrl+h，it will be more beautiful！
4. 00:46:807 (1) - i recommend you cancel NC here cuz 00:46:271 (2,2) - is a group，this make them more clear
5. 00:48:235 (1) - same as above
6. 01:10:557 (1) - slider head add finish，also in other diff
7. 01:14:218 (4) - NC

SPOILER

1. 00:35:021 (1) - slider head use normal additions
2. 00:45:021 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - so confusing，should make something circle into slider and make not overlap anymore like this，but i am sorry i cant leave a plan for you so change depend on you！
3. 00:46:271 (2) - also you can make this shape like 00:46:985 (2) - and NC like i mentioned in insane，more clear
4. 00:48:414 (2,1) - 1‘s end stack on 2’s head？more beautiful imo
5. 00:57:342 (3,4) - dont use random jump here，keep ds and make square shape，dont forget to adjust 00:57:700 (5) -
6. i adjust some NC here cuz you only use NC follow the vocal in these place，try to unify them：
   
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   01:07:700 (5) - NC
   01:08:414 (1) - cancel NC
   01:09:307 (3) - NC
   01:09:843 (1) - cancel NC
   01:10:557 (3) - NC
   01:11:093 (1) - cancel NC
   01:12:164 (4) - NC
   01:13:057 (1) - cancel NC

1. 01:14:128 (5) - NC to let player know it is new change(on red line)
2. 01:28:950 (5) - NC?

1. clear

Aleks719 wrote:

Couple of suggestions, generally map is good enough.


Clyine's Extra
00:00:438 (1) - 1st slider looks unnecessary. Feels weird if i left it out for me
00:32:164 (1,1,1,1,1,3) - i personally don't like when stack goes too long, would be great to see notes not only at the same point. did some manual stacking
00:42:879 (1) - slider is not enough visible shifted.

dsdssda

Aleks719 wrote:

I think it's worth to be bubbled.

For next BAT:
i'm not sure about 1st slider in Clyine's Extra (00:00:438 (1) -) because it apeears before timeline. Up for you to accept it or deny.

1. All of the stacking can be improved using default stacking function. I don't plan to show them one by one here.
2. 00:22:164 (7,1) - Swap NC. Same for 01:06:450 (9,1).
3. 00:59:307 - Finish.
4. 01:26:450 (1,3,5) - Remove finish. Claps on (1) and head of (5). Consecutive finishes are annoying.
5. 01:28:950 - 40% so as to make it audible.

1. Insane: 00:49:485 (2,3,4,1) - Stack. Same for 01:25:914 (4,5,6,2).
2. Hard: 00:40:021 - Soft-addition.
3. Normal: 01:16:985 (2) - Replace this with a circle at 01:17:164 . And for 01:17:878 (1,2,3) - try http://puu.sh/c6CXP.jpg, as it sticks to the drum better.
4. 00:59:307 - Finish.
5. 01:28:950 - Sounds like inaudible, try 40%.

IamKwaN wrote:

WTF with the BG????

I found my standard on no-ranked-map mappers ultra-lenient. Keep improving your mapping or else I will kill you.

IamKwaN wrote:

WTF with the BG????
[Extra]

1. All of the stacking can be improved using default stacking function. I don't plan to show them one by one here. :c fixed
2. 00:22:164 (7,1) - Swap NC. Same for 01:06:450 (9,1). done
3. 00:59:307 - Finish. done
4. 01:26:450 (1,3,5) - Remove finish. Claps on (1) and head of (5). Consecutive finishes are annoying. done
5. 01:28:950 - 40% so as to make it audible. done

I found my standard on no-ranked-map mappers ultra-lenient. Keep improving your mapping or else I will kill you. :c

xxdeathx wrote:

don't kill anybody pls

IamKwaN wrote:

xxdeathx wrote:

don't kill anybody pls

I only give up to kill u as ur already dead

Beep! Gratz for your first rank!

handsome wrote:

BASED MODDERS

Clyine, TestApple, Rtyzen, Kato, Lumision, kepel, Takoyaki-, Koxeida, iamdarren, Estellia-, LizeKotze, Artavia, MikasaYuri, smallbeans, ThEBonzi, Pjecoo, neonat, paseli, Jaltzu, xLoupGarou, ichia7x, P o M u T a, Moo-Chan, CelsiusLK, 340, xxdeathx, NoHitter, kamisamaa, skinnyjimmy, Miramono, pishifat, Xinely, Xanandra, Midge, Alplaza, Inyuschan, Cherry Blossom, rui, TT Mouse, HabiHolic, Indeed, IamKwaN, RandomEffect, OniJAM, ShiraKai, buhei, Hollow Wings, Leorda, jesus1412, Yasora, ts8zs, Rakuen, eINess, Star Stream, Kibbleru, DarkVortex, Support, ProfessionalBox, Knotts, Gamu, onoz, - Nya-, sheela901, kakifly, iNickel, Verlaren, Sellenite, Aleks719

WE DID IT BOYSSS

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Umi wrote:

MANDOM

gratz on first rank

Gamu wrote:

finally!

Congrats

Rtyzen wrote:

GRATZZZZZ

Kato wrote:

Congrats on rank wooo

Inb4 QAT unrank

Koxeida wrote:

TIME TO DO ANOTHER MAP GOGO!

sheela901 wrote:

Cool, handsome! Congrats!

CelsiusLK wrote:

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Oriental Tank wrote:

G0od map Congratz

handsome wrote:

BASED MODDERS

Clyine, TestApple, Rtyzen, Kato, Lumision, kepel, Takoyaki-, Koxeida, iamdarren, Estellia-, LizeKotze, Artavia, MikasaYuri, smallbeans, ThEBonzi, Pjecoo, neonat, paseli, Jaltzu, xLoupGarou, ichia7x, P o M u T a, Moo-Chan, CelsiusLK, 340, xxdeathx, NoHitter, kamisamaa, skinnyjimmy, Miramono, pishifat, Xinely, Xanandra, Midge, Alplaza, Inyuschan, Cherry Blossom, rui, TT Mouse, HabiHolic, Indeed, IamKwaN, RandomEffect, OniJAM, ShiraKai, buhei, Hollow Wings, Leorda, jesus1412, Yasora, ts8zs, Rakuen, eINess, Star Stream, Kibbleru, DarkVortex, Support, ProfessionalBox, Knotts, Gamu, onoz, - Nya-, sheela901, kakifly, iNickel, Verlaren, Sellenite, Aleks719

WE DID IT BOYSSS

handsome wrote:

Fycho wrote:

handsome wrote:

good, new couple gets.

IamKwaN wrote:

Fycho wrote:

good, new couple gets.

No please, I would rather marry u okay.