Kagamine Ren wrote:

M4M
[General]
none

[Easy]

• 
  00:35:045 (3) - ends 00:35:045 (3) - better ? ending fine., you linked same ending.
  01:06:981 (1,2) - improve the blanket
  01:12:981 (1,2) - blanket
  01:24:206 (3,4) - make them parallel better?
  01:24:206 (4,1) - hmm,i think blanket is better
  some blankets fixed, others because of certain design I want

[Normal]

• 
  00:40:852 (1,2) - improve the blanket
  00:53:626 (3) - add finish? like u did at 00:52:852 (2) - loud to me.
  01:14:916 (3,4) - improve the blanket not mean't to blanket e.e

[Hard]

• 
  01:09:690 (3,4,5) - the spacing is different
  00:08:142 (1) - ctrl+G then try this flow?
  
  00:34:852 (2,3) - try this?maybe it has more fun,and care the blanket with 00:34:271 (5)
  
  00:38:529 (5) - finish
  00:47:626 (3,4) - try this
  
  00:52:852 (3,1,2) - improve the blanket

[Insane]

• 
  00:21:884 (1) - the slider's tail perfect stack with 00:22:658 (3) - it's head intentional to make it more visible.
  00:54:787 (1,2) - stack them well
  01:19:561 (1) - finish? there is finish.
  01:20:336 (2) - finish?
  00:23:045 (4,5,6,7,1) - try thss flow?if u do this,make00:23:626 (7) perfect stack with00:22:658 (3)
  
  01:03:884 (1) - [box=]
  try this because the spacing of01:03:690 (4,1) and01:05:239 (5,1) should be the same can't see image
  [/box]

That's all!
Good luck
hope it'll be useful for you

RandomEffect wrote:

hey~

[General]

1. tags suggetion:
   frontwing
2. mp3: end too soon. I suggest to add fadeout at outro

[Easy]

1. 00:00:594 (1,2) - why not make DS 1.0x? impossible without break symmetry, maybe CTRL+G , but that flow is strange to me.
2. 00:35:819 (4,1) - too near, not good looking. I suggest to curve 00:36:206 (1) -
3. 00:54:787 (2) - I prefer to curve righetside of slider i like mines
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:06:206- whistle
5. 01:06:981 (1,2) - how about blanketting?
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:11:432 (3,4) - check DS
7. 01:27:206 (1) - I feel too short for easy imo its fine.

[Normal]

1. 00:34:658 (4,5,6) - suggetion the vocals are not shown properly.
   
2. 00:40:852 (1,2) - blanket correctly
3. 00:44:916 (3,1) - you can make better flow. I suggest to move 00:45:497 (1) - rightward or rotate clockwise
4. 00:57:690 (1,2) - this overlapping is not good looking
5. 01:23:819- follow this strong sound. otherwise, I feel strange...
6. 01:25:174 (5) - i prefer 1/2 slider not reverse the violin has many beats..
   

[Insane]

1. 00:06:013 (1) - why not end at 00:06:303? music stops quickly.
2. 00:06:594 (3,1) - I prefer to combine into 1 slider won't fit well with vocals here.
3. 00:10:271 (2,4) - blanket?
4. 01:11:239 (5) - rotate anti-clocwise for good flow hmm current is fine imo..
5. 01:18:013 (1) - Ctrl+G unsure atm
6. 01:26:336 (4,1,2) - these spacing is so confusing. increase DS of 01:26:723 (1,2) -

[Mochi's Hard]
wow, see you again~

1. 00:03:690 (3) - move downward for good flow
2. 00:06:013 (1,2) - u~m, combine into 1 slider?
3. 00:12:787 (1) - curve leftward a little
4. 00:52:852 (3,1) - check blanketting
5. 00:59:239 (1,2) - ^
6. 01:10:077 (6,1) - swap DS
7. 01:24:594 (2,4) - move 01:25:368 (4) - downward. hard to play because slider start is almost covered.
8. 01:27:110- I highly recommend to add a note!

if you OK, M4M please
~Good Luck~

examination wrote:

M4M

[General]
00:00:594 - I guess a red up line is needed here to change the offset, as you see many of the following beats start at the red lines (I don't know if I express it right 0.0 it's the 2nd of the 4/4 beats), even the kiai time starts there. Also this will make the first red line lead the sting music and the second red line lead the drum, which makes sense.
I guess the audio is not cutted well since it ends suddenly (? just my idea.

[Easy]
01:12:594 (4) - guess it has been mentioned by modders above.

00:51:690 (1) - I didn't expected a spin here, I think a long slider will work well w spin works well here, maybe get more opinions.

[Normal]
00:40:852 (1,2) - blanket
00:42:400 (3,4,5) - I guess curves will make these three sliders look nice

SPOILER

I like straight slider here
01:02:529 (3) - Remove this and add notes on 01:02:336 & 01:02:723 to follow the rhythm patterns, or it will make players feel a bit strange.
01:14:916 (3) - ^ Nope, I'd prefer mine.

[Mochi's Hard]
00:15:110 (3,4) - I think just a slider is enough~
01:11:626 (1,2) - These 2 sliders should be placed apart or players will be think that 2 is follow 1/4 beats after 1 since it's just after 01:10:658 (1,2)
01:27:110 - A note is needed?

[Insane]
00:07:368 (1,2,3,4,1) - A regular star maybe?
00:28:465 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - A regular hexagon?
00:30:206 (2) - blanket
00:31:561 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't think a stream is rightly placed here, since I can't find sounds at 00:31:658 00:31:852 00:32:045. You can place jumps here.
01:09:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same ^ but you can keep this stream since 00:57:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6) is placed

00:57:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This one is rightly placed cuz it follows the piano
keep all streams, fix some more patterns.


Good Luck~wwww