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No_Gu
Hibikase吧
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

No_Gu wrote:

Hibikase吧
那谁和我说是Hibikaze,本来我也写得是Hibikase哒╮(╯▽╰)╭
屁股摸摸大
BAKER BAKER
(〜 ̄▽ ̄)〜☆ *copied*

General:
-slidertick:2
-Disable widescreen support

Easy:
- 01:22:714 (3) - new combo
- fix this 01:47:571 (2,1) - like this:

-Delete this 01:54:428 (2) - and place a short slider starting from here 01:54:214 ,so it is easier to expect (like in the normal diff)
-no new combo here 01:56:571 (1) - also here 02:03:428 (1) - (even if there is a finish)
-shorten this spinner 03:13:607 (1) - till 03:16:928
- I don't know if this 03:58:285 (1,2) - is a blanket (you can fix the blanket or move 03:59:571 (2) - this note away like this x:40;y:256

Normal:
-00:17:142 (1) - replace it by this:

- 00:39:214 (1) - remove new combo
- 00:39:428 (2) - add new combo
- 00:57:214 (1) - remove new combo
- 01:47:142 (3) - remove clap from slider's end (not only from here there is generally no hitclap in 1/4 beats in this song,examples: 01:00:857 (3,3,4,3,4,4,3) - Hope you get what i mean :lol:
- 02:03:428 add note here?
- 02:27:214 (1) - remove NC
- 02:27:428 (2) - add NC
- 03:13:714 (1) - same as easy

Hope my mod is a bit useful :)
Topic Starter
tutuhaha
no more slidertick2..too noise......thankyou for your mod <3
JeZag
M4M~
Your mapping style is very unique and makes the map look pretty (at least in editor :3)
Nazi mod bc its already too perfect for my modding skillz T^T
Many blankets can be improved though can't tell if on purpose, or not enough time spent
Easy
00:44:571 (2,3) - Not perfect :<
00:56:571 (1,2) - ^
01:00:857 (3,1) - ^
01:19:285 (2,1) - Change 01:19:285 (2) to make it symmetric?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2094684 something like this?
or maybe https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2094687 to keep flow (sort of)
01:22:714 (3,1) - Not perfect stack orz (1 pixel left lel)
01:47:571 (2,1) - Not perfect
01:56:571 (1,2,1) - Arrange in a [perfect] triangle?
02:00:000 (2,1,2,3) - Looks messy to me...
I would do something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2094732 where 02:02:142 (2,3,1) form a triangle :P
02:09:428 (3,1) - Not perfect :<
02:18:857 (1,2,1,2) - Square pattern perhaps?
02:27:857 (2,1) - Perfect symmetry plox? change 02:27:857 (2)
02:32:571 (1) - 1 pixel right for better stack?
02:53:571 (2) - Not perfect stack
03:20:571 (1) - My OCD tells me that it could be 03:18:857 (1) reversed
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2094748
03:38:571 (3,1) - Not perfect x.x
03:52:714 (2,1,2,3,1) - Would please OCD 10/10 if it had consistent curve
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2094751

Normal
01:19:714 (4,1) - Not perfect x.x
01:22:285 (2,3) - OCD tells me this should blanket
01:53:785 (2,3) - Stacking with the distance between the two might confuse
02:02:142 (2,3) - :<
02:21:000 (3) - Not parallel (move slider tail up a bit?)
02:30:857 (2,3) - Day 326: finally calming down my ocd but its still there
02:44:357 (4,1) - Iffy blanket
03:26:142 (2,3,1) - Not perfect parallel
Nice diff :D

Hard
00:11:142 (7,1) - Not perfect :<
00:40:607 (5,1) - Could be better
00:58:714 (3,4,5) - Looks awk to me
01:27:000 (6,7) - I can totally see ppl raging from combo breaks here
01:59:571 (4,2) - Stack these?
02:37:071 (3,4,5) - I hate spaced triplets x.x (as a bad osu! player ofc)
03:18:642 (1,2) - Blanket better?
Pro diff again (compared to mine orz)

Insane
00:15:000 (3,4) - Purfect blanket req.
00:40:714 (9,1) - Doesn't look that nice
00:44:892 (3) - Strange... can't hear the hitsound at all >.<
01:02:357 (3,4,5,6) - OCD bugging me again for [seemingly] weird choice of spacing
02:00:642 (3,4) - Purposeful not-blanket makes my OCD sad
02:10:928 (3,4,5,6) - :<
02:42:000 (1,3) - Can these be upside down? Looks better to me
03:14:357 (3) - Can this be a blanket?
Pro diff as always ._.
Good luck on rank :)
pw384
m4m via in-game pm.
QuQ看到是2ha果断先射一星

mod info:
Black: Suggestions.
Bule: Emphasis suggestions.
Red: Unrankable stuffs. Must be fixed.


[General]
  1. Clear!


[Insane]
  1. 02:31:928 (3,4,5) - unsnapped. 是忘了加绿线还是怎么...?
  2. 00:36:750 - 不加一个note吗;w;
  3. 01:03:107 - 加个note?
  4. 01:04:392 (5,6) - 感觉好卡手
  5. 01:27:214 - 我建议这里关闭kiai,01:27:428 - 这里打开kiai,然后01:27:535 - 加一根绿线关掉kiai
  6. 01:52:928 - 这里貌似有个重音
  7. 02:11:678 - 加note?
  8. 02:15:857 (3,4) - 这间距很容易让人以为是1/4跳的啦
  9. 03:18:428 (1) - 听说去掉NC以后followpoints有奇效
  10. 03:54:857 (1,2) - 这边应该还是蓝色的note啊,03:55:607 (3) - 加上NC改成灰色
  11. 没啦


[Hard]
  1. -settings- CS用4.8吧,5还是太小了
  2. 02:48:000 (1) - 我觉得这个slider用0.75x会比较好,不然变化太大了。02:49:285 (1) - 这个用0.5x
  3. 貌似没啥问题


[Normal]
  1. 00:57:214 (1) - 去掉NC
  2. 01:22:285 (2,3) - 整个blanket?:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2094924
  3. 02:30:857 (2,3) - ^
  4. 貌似也没啥orz


[Easy]
  1. 02:36:000 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2094934
  2. 低难度有什么好看的啊啪啪啪


好怀念这种风格 ;w;
MirinH
神马破你好
[General]
NP
[Easy]
00:17:357 (1) - normal的finish效果更好
00:56:571 (1,2) - blanket
00:59:571 (3) - 这里可以上normal finish然后后面那个可以用一个特别的音效
01:13:714 (1) - 同上,像这种音的地方都改下音效
01:47:571 (2,1) - blanket
03:58:285 (1,2) - why not blanket?
[Normal]
00:18:000 (3) - normal finish
00:58:285 (1) - finish
01:00:000 (1) - 这个音效建议还是所有难度弄一下后面就不说了
[Hard]
略乱。。。
02:21:321 (3,5) - blanket
没有什么其他问题
[Insane]
玛雅我看了十五分钟没看出问题
就是排列有些乱
然后音效跟上面一样最好改下
美丽
玛雅太神了完全摸不动
Topic Starter
tutuhaha
给384点32个赞!
test play 都没test出来!
AIR
m4m没赶上,算了就这样吧

  • Easy
  1. 00:32:571 (1,2) - blanket
  2. 00:49:714 (1) -
  3. 00:51:428 (2,1) - ^
  4. 01:58:285 (1,2) - 感觉可以有点花样
  • Insane
  1. 00:38:142 (4) - 尾部叠在3开头感觉不错
  2. 00:44:892 (3,4,5,6) - 我是觉得这个往前到红线比较合适
  3. 00:58:714 (3) - 二连怎么样
  4. 01:03:107 - circle
Mafumafu
Hi, tutuhaha ! There is Regraz's mod! :) From QQ Group!
There is a few points of my mod:

  1. Thank you for requesting a mod from me! Note that I am still learning modding skills, so I am sorry if I cannot provide help to you!
  2. Mod is just a kind of suggestion, so feel free if you dont want to make change.
  3. I hope you can reply to my mod since it can help me know the other mappers' ideas and I can also learn something new.
  4. Bond means highly suggest.
  5. This is the one of the maps I modded since I used modding framework version 3 (mfv3)

GigaP!! :3

General

  1. Uncheck widescreen support if you wont add a storyboard.
  2. You can use custom diff name as to the hardest diff, why not have a try?

Easy


  • Rhythm:
  1. Fine
    Structure:
  2. 00:37:714 (1,2,3) - Make a perfect triangle with 1 2 and 3's head.
  3. 00:39:428 (1) - make a curve at the middle point of this slider, just like this: http://puu.sh/bXdDn/37f1af5c9a.jpg You can emphasize the vocal. (可以让这个滑条弯一下,弯的地方正好压在vocal上。)
  4. 00:47:142 (3,1) - Why not symmetrical?
  5. 00:53:571 (2,1) - Avoid the slight overlap.
  6. 00:56:571 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved if you want to make a blanket here.
  7. 00:58:285 (2,2) - Also a slight overlap.
  8. 01:24:000 (1) - Move to 395|40 for a perfect stack here. (Also the same in other KIAI times.)
  9. 01:44:571 (1) - Try this: http://puu.sh/bXdX9/3792f0c077.jpg Also this pattern can follow the vocal better
  10. 01:47:571 (2,1) - Blanket issue: http://puu.sh/bXe0Z/6c60dc9426.jpg (Wont repeat :3)
  11. 02:52:285 (2,2) - Stack..QwQ This one is so obvious...so I repeated :3
    Hitsounds
  12. Nice
    Others:
  13. 01:13:500 How about creating a fountian (disable and enable KIAI quickly) here? (Also other diff)

Normal

  1. Wow, AR6 and CS4..and some stacks at first..Hmm... :D ..Tbh, maybe there will be difficulties in some ranking procedures about this diff/style at current atm.
    Rhythm:
  2. Hmm...
    Structure:
  3. Better to stack well in some notes. By doing this way you can make the diff neat :3
  4. 00:57:214 (1,2) - For a better flow: http://puu.sh/bXfVs/3dceb154da.jpg
  5. 02:02:142 (2,3) - 让这个滑条好好的躺在外面滑条的怀抱里 :3
  6. 03:54:428 (3) - Maybe a curve wont hurt? http://puu.sh/bXgDe/e355948bd2.jpg
    Hitsounds
  7. The sliderslides in the start secyion of this map sound a little loud, consider silence them.
    Others:
  8. 00:38:571 (3) -Better to NC here instead of 00:39:214 (1) - Since you change your rhythm into 3/4 here, you need an NC to tel theplayers expecially newie players. Also, NC 00:39:428 (2) - here. (Also in anoter part at 01:47:142 (3) - .)
  9. 00:56:571 (1) - remove NC

Hard

  1. Some nazi points wont be repeated :3
    Rhythm:
  2. 02:55:285 (2,3) - Why not a triplet and a single note? http://puu.sh/bYBY2/18219d7822.jpg Or a repeat slider? http://puu.sh/bYBYU/de81ad28d7.jpg
    Structure:
  3. 02:18:321 (5) - You need a jump here to emphasize the high pitch vocal instead of jumping at 02:17:142 (1,2) - . Also, for a better flow, Ctrl+G this: 02:17:142 (1) -
    Hitsounds
  4. 01:27:000 (6) - How about adding some hitsounds to emphasize the background music?
  5. Add Finish at 02:58:285 (1) - 03:00:000 (1) - 03:01:714 (1) -
    Others:
  6. 01:54:428 (2) - Better NC here as you did at 00:45:857 (1) - . Also here you changed SV, so you need to NC to tell the players.

Insane

Dance~! Consider improving some slider shapes and flows.
Just one point: 01:27:214 (4) - You should NC when changing the SV.

In all, this is a nice map with great rhythm. Maybe working on the structure of this map will make this map perfect. :3
Finally, good luck on your ranking!
Thanks for reading this! :D If you have something that you dont understand, feel free to send me a forum-pm and I will try my best to explain it to you clearly!



2ha BL maps 求带啊qwq 哭哭~
Harubi Lira
2haprpr
[General]
aimod说KIAI过长,我橘得KIAI复制粘贴,,,后面的KIAI其实可以更难点比如加大间距(泥垢!

[Hard]
00:18:000 (4) - 我橘得这里和③做个block可能要更好?(是叫这个玩意来着)
01:45:428 (4) - 前面落了一个音,故意or so?
02:11:035 (3,4) -
02:24:750 (3,4) - 我听得感觉是他们要向后移一个四分拍更好
美丽,,,

[Insane]
00:14:571 (1,2) - 颠倒过来试试?
01:02:678 (7) -
02:11:250 (7) -
03:21:535 (7) -
03:33:857 (8) - 上面这种都好别扭,最少加个NC吧OAO
01:27:214 (4) - 这个滑条弯曲度有点大...
02:00:642 (3,4) - 他俩可以做成平行的
Akiyama Mizuki
See who's here It's tutuhaha <3
And now you're in USA?
CSLM
hi! M4M
my mod:

  • [Easy]
    SV 1.10 -> 0.90
  1. 00:13:285 (1) - move to x124 y192 for be paralel with 00:11:571 (1) -
  2. 00:33:857 (2,2) - ^ x268 y220
  3. 00:48:857 (2) - make this slider rect
  4. 00:53:571 (2,1) - overlap
  5. 00:58:285 (2) - move to x192 y156 for a improve blanket
  6. 01:00:857 (3,1) - bad blanket
  7. 01:15:857 (2) - move to x428 y208
  8. 01:22:714 (3,1) - i think what this is unrankeable, better fix it
  9. 01:46:285 (1) - make it paralel with 01:44:571 (1) -
  10. 01:44:571 (1) - bad blanket
  11. 02:08:571 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - how this is the same of the kiai before, the same things must fix here
  12. 02:37:714 (2) - maybe a improve blanket with 02:36:000 (1) - and 02:39:428 (1) - will be fine
  13. 02:52:285 (2,2) - the same of 01:22:714 (3,1)
  14. 03:10:285 (1,1) - this is unrankeable, you have to give a full measure of recovery time after a spinner in a easy
  15. 03:25:285 (2) - move to x240 y92
  16. 03:27:428 (1) - why this are in this position? move to x264 y200

    [Normal]
    actual: HP4 - CS4 - AR6 - OD4
    better: HP3.5 - CS3 (apply this if you don't change the SV) - AR5 - OD4
    SV 1.50 -> 1.30
  17. 00:15:428 (1,2) - bad blanket
  18. 00:12:642 (2,3) - move to x64 y152
  19. 00:18:000 (3) - ctrl - g?
  20. 00:58:285 (1,1) - unrankeable spinner, must leave 2 tick of bpm of recovery time
  21. 01:19:714 (4,1) - bad blanket
  22. 01:52:714 (4) - in that position make bad blanket with 01:51:857 (2) - i suggest what move this slider to x104 y192
  23. 02:06:857 (1,1) - the same of 00:58:285 (1,1)
  24. 02:28:285 (4,1) - again, bad blanket
  25. 02:44:357 (4,1) - ^
  26. 03:10:285 (1,1) - unrankeable slider
  27. 03:48:428 (2) - bad blanket with 03:47:571 (4) - and 03:49:500 (1) -

    [Hard]
    actual: HP6 - CS4.8 - AR8 - OD6
    better: HP5 - CS4 - AR7 - OD5
    SV 1.80 -> 1.60
  28. 00:17:357 (2,4) - bad blanket
  29. 00:40:607 (5,1) - ^
  30. 00:42:000 (5,1) - ^
  31. 00:42:857 (1,2) - ^
  32. 00:45:857 (1) - i hate reverse sliders of this kind curves, please change
  33. 00:56:142 (6,1) - bad blanket
  34. 00:58:714 (3,4,5) - why this? for that make a reverse stream slider, like this: 01:00:857 (4,5) -
  35. 01:12:750 (3) - bad blanket with 01:12:000 (1) - and 01:13:285 (5) -
  36. 01:12:000 (1,5) - bad stacked
  37. 01:18:000 (5) - the same about the curve stream sliders, please change
  38. 01:19:714 (5) - ^
  39. 01:27:000 (6) - overmap
  40. 01:40:285 (1,2) - this is something confusing, please change
  41. 02:00:428 (2,3,4) - bad blankets
  42. 02:07:285 (3,4,5) - the same about 00:58:714 (3,4,5)
  43. 02:08:571 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - how this is the same of the kiai before, the same things must fix here
  44. 02:37:071 (3,4,5) - this is confusing, move it out of here please
  45. 02:39:000 (5,2) - bad blanket
  46. 02:44:571 (1,2,3,4) - overlap
  47. 03:01:178 (5,1) - bad blanket
  48. 03:02:571 (5) - reduce this reverse stream slider to 03:03:214
  49. 03:57:750 (5,1) - bad blanket
  50. 03:59:142 (2,3) - overmap

    [Insane]
    actual: HP8 - CS5 - AR9 - OD8
    better: HP8 - CS5 - AR9 - OD7
    SV 2.20 -> 1.80
  51. 00:12:857 (3) - make bad blanket with 00:12:642 (2) - and 00:13:500 (1) -
  52. 00:15:000 (3,4) - ^
  53. 00:40:714 (9,1) - ^
  54. 01:02:571 (6,7) - confusing
  55. 01:03:214 (8) - move to 01:03:000 - for make it less confusing and add note in 01:03:428
  56. 02:08:785 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - how this is the same of the kiai before, the same things must fix here
  57. 02:37:285 (3) - wtf are this slider? :/ change it please
  58. 02:38:785 (3) - ctrl - g and change the curvature of this slider
  59. 02:39:214 (5) - ^
  60. 03:03:214 (2) - make this rect and make it paralel with 03:03:000 (1) -
  61. 03:14:357 (3) - bad blanket with 03:14:142 (2) - and 03:15:000 (4) -
  62. 03:21:428 (6,7) - confusing
  63. 03:22:071 (1) - move to 03:21:857 - and add note in 03:22:500
  64. 03:33:750 (7,8) - confusing
  65. 04:01:714 (7) - NC?
get careful with the blankets
great song, and is great what you back :D
PD: i'm noob modder, if my mod don't helps you don't jugde me lolololol xD
i'm waiting my mod
map: Natsu-P - Scattered Cherry Blossoms ~Elegant~
mod: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/243695
thx in advance
bye~
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

CSLMVenezuela wrote:

hi! M4M
my mod:

  • [Easy]
    SV 1.10 -> 0.90
  1. 02:08:571 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - how this is the same of the kiai before, the same things must fix here

    [Hard]
    actual: HP6 - CS4.8 - AR8 - OD6
    better: HP5 - CS4 - AR7 - OD5
    SV 1.80 -> 1.60
  2. 02:08:571 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - how this is the same of the kiai before, the same things must fix here

    [Insane]
    actual: HP8 - CS5 - AR9 - OD8
    better: HP8 - CS5 - AR9 - OD7
    SV 2.20 -> 1.80
  3. 02:08:785 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - how this is the same of the kiai before, the same things must fix here
get careful with the blankets
great song, and is great what you back :D
PD: i'm noob modder, if my mod don't helps you don't jugde me lolololol xD
i'm waiting my mod
map: Natsu-P - Scattered Cherry Blossoms ~Elegant~
mod: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/243695
thx in advance
bye~
dear, if you play a lot for my map, you should know I always did that xP.............
and..I hope you know change SV almost equal remap...sorry about that
still thank you for your mod, mua~

bbj0920 wrote:

See who's here It's tutuhaha <3
And now you're in USA?
yep
Sun Rainbow


Sun Rainbow's Modding


Mod request from QQ,Insane因无法pass不予mod,多谢谅解

haha姐这种风格让我根本无法好好mod啊

Easy

00:11:571 (1,1) - 为何不考虑平行?
00:15:000 (3,1,2) - 其实可以弄成三角形嘛OAO(各note开头
00:32:571 (1) - 如果不考虑包住00:33:857 (2) - 的话就移动成
00:37:714 (1) - 摆歪了,六边形。稍微移下一点点
00:40:714 (2) - 没有包好
00:48:000 (1,1) - 两个尾叠一起了
00:56:571 (1) - 没包好 我曾经因为这个被BAT骂了一顿
01:07:714 (2) - ^
01:17:142 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这里我觉得还可以再调整下

01:20:571 (1) - 如果你改了上面那条记得对齐这个note
01:20:571 (1,3) - 这样就显得有点儿乱了?为何不试试将1的尾和3的头叠在一起?
01:42:428 (2,1,2,1) - 这个正方形没有叠好
有事 回来继续摸
Topic Starter
tutuhaha
....无....无法pass么...
kakifly
m4m :3

offset - 5142?
For kiai time i think you should have finish every downbeat

Easy

- 01:00:428 (2) - move up a bit to avoid overlap?
- 00:59:571 (3) - add finish?
- 01:22:714 (3) - 01:24:000 (1) - stack is off
- 02:01:714 (1) - 02:03:428 (1) - 02:05:142 (1) - 02:06:857 (2) - add finish on head
- 02:31:285 (3) - 02:32:571 (1) - stack is off
- 02:52:285 (2) - 02:53:571 (2) - ^
nice diff :3




Normal

CS 3 or 3.5 for better consistency; it suddenly goes from CS 2 to 4 from easy to normal
(for the beginning i think you should add more hitsounds; maybe some whistles and claps?)
- 00:42:000 (3,4) - just keep in mind; since (3) ends on a blue tick it feels weird to play and the player could temporarily lose track of the tempo so getting a 300 on the circle would be a bit harder; i think (4) should be a 1/2 ?
- 01:45:000 (2,3) - maybe make this a 1/2 slider? the sound on (3) is a bit weaker than (2)
- 01:49:500 (1,2) - same as first suggestion ; btw 01:49:714 (2) - add nc 01:49:500 (1) - remove nc
- 01:47:785 (1,2) - (1) is not nc (2) is nc
- 02:05:142 (1) - add finish on head
- 02:53:142 (1,2) - why randomly stacked?
- 02:58:285 (1) - finish on head
- 03:00:000 (5) - add finish
- 03:01:714 (1) - ^
- 03:02:571 (3,4,5,6,1) - maybe they can all have clap?

Hard

- 00:43:285 (2,3,4) - i think the distance here should be closer; they're only 1/4 apart :<
- 01:18:000 (5) - curve less? i think too much curve doesnt look good
- 01:27:214 (1) - maybe lower the SV here a little to create a nice effect
- 01:51:857 (2,3,4) - same as first suggestion :<
- 02:03:214 (1) - the downbeat here is pretty important; it should be emphasized with the start of a note (btw add finish) :!:
- 02:44:571 (1,2,3) - this looks a bit hard to read at first; maybe put (3) down like this? http://puu.sh/c0PBO/c498006350.jpg
- 02:49:285 (1) - finish on tail

good luck!
Milan-
uuoo m4m (if it was somehow helpful ><)

[Easy]
  1. 00:05:142 - Map this part as you did on your others diffs?
  2. 00:12:428 (2) - make it just 1/1 slider. otherwise You should map almost every 1/2 in this section (you can also try to change 00:15:000 (3,1) - to something like this >http://puu.sh/c0X1k/1487bc8648.jpg)
  3. I think, these sliders 00:34:285 (1) - 00:36:000 (1) - 00:39:428 (1) - doesnt follow the neither vocals nor music. The start of each slider should be a circle imo, so they have the emphasis they need (maybe like this http://puu.sh/c0XFw/8b7715f09e.jpg or the other way around http://puu.sh/c0XIj/a77f364415.jpg) For 00:38:571 (3,1) - i suggest this http://puu.sh/c0XZN/6a4fb42a4d.jpg (same for the other similar section 01:43:148 - xd)
  4. 00:42:857 (1) - maybe curve this to the other side to follow the music better
  5. 00:44:571 (2,3) - blanket?
  6. 00:54:857 (1) - i'd recommend not to stack There, it looks like a mass of approach circles (also you could move 00:54:428 (4) - to x444 y204 or x484 y112, to follow better the music
  7. 00:56:571 (1,2) - blanket?
  8. 01:22:714 (3) - ctrl g? (also these 01:22:714 (3,1) - overlaps almost unreadable for a new player, make it easier)
  9. 01:47:571 (2,1) - improve blanket owo
  10. 01:53:142 (1) - move it to x19 y165 to stack 01:50:571 (2,1) -
  11. 01:53:571 - add note for the clap?
  12. 02:12:428 (2) - dont stack. It'd be ok if it wasn't on the very next note i think (you can also stack on 02:12:000 (1) - i guess)
  13. 02:31:285 (3,1) - same as before
  14. 02:48:857 (3) - Add reverse instead?
  15. 02:54:857 (1) - move to x388 y184
  16. 03:39:857 (2,1,2) - make a triangle? :3
  17. 03:46:285 (1,2) - this looks bad, rotate the square a bit?
  18. 03:48:857 (3) - make it 1/1 reversed slider? (if you do so, you should do the same with 03:54:857 (1) - i think)
  19. There are inconsistency on NC (also, every 1 measure isn't too short for easy? make them every 2 measures i think)
  20. For ej: 00:44:571 (2) - NC
  21. 00:46:285 - from here 2 measures fit well imo
[Normal]
  1. 00:17:142 (1) - this would work better without the on 00:17:142 - so just make a circle on 00:17:357 - . Otherwise, map this 00:17:571 -
  2. 00:38:571 (1) - I don't this should end on the blue tick (you can also do reverse here).. Anyways, i think the clap is on 00:39:000 - take care of it and some others that are on the map
  3. 00:43:071 - this space feels so empy. make 00:42:857 (1) - 1/2 slider? so 00:44:142 (4) - would make more sense
  4. 01:08:785 (2) - delete this note? mostly because it looks more like a hard than a normal using 1/2 rhythms a lot
  5. 01:23:785 (5) - ^^ (or maybe a slider(?)
  6. 02:44:357 (4,1) - improve blanket?
  7. If you stack these 02:53:142 (1,2) - i think you should stack 02:54:857 (1,2) - too
  8. 03:03:000 (5,6) - these can be just a 1/2 slider to follow the music better
  9. 03:40:928 (1,1) - ovelap would be nice :3
  10. 00:38:571 (3) - delete NC
  11. 00:39:428 (3) - NC
  12. 00:57:214 (1) - delete NC
  13. 01:04:928 (1) - delete NC ; add on 01:05:142 (2) - because the music and vocals doesn't finish there
  14. 01:10:071 (1,2) - 01:18:642 (1,2) - ^^
  15. I couldn't figure out your NC pattern >< sometimes i think you are doing it according to the vocals but other you do it according to the music. For instance, you wouldn't NC this note 00:36:000 (1) - if you did here 00:38:571 (1) - . But I'll leave up to you (also maybe evey 2 measures?)
  16. Sometimes it gets as hard as a Hard is I think ><
[Hard]
  1. 00:12:000 - this seccion would feel much better if you ignore some 1/2 rhythms i think, (like 00:12:214 -
  2. 00:34:178 (1) - i swear i've seen some bat saying that nc on blue ticks are mostly no sense. But i don't know, maybe it would be better to have it on 00:34:285 (2) -
  3. 00:35:464 (5) - this current DS seems like it were 1/2 away
  4. 00:49:285 (6,2) - this overlap doesn't looks good , and doesn't play well either. You can rotate 1 and 2 a bit up
  5. 00:52:714 (4) - this part plays bad >< mostly cuz 00:51:857 (2,4) - overlap, something like this maybe?http://puu.sh/c17JG/85f2d86395.jpg
  6. 00:55:500 (3) - is this jump even needed?
  7. Maybe stack these 01:02:892 (1,2) - since the emphasis is lost when you mapped 01:03:642 (3) -
  8. 01:15:214 (1) - ctrl g and use the same DS as before (2.0x)
  9. 01:24:857 (1) - this NC is really needed? if so, i think you have to NC 03:43:714 (3) - because of constancy
  10. 01:43:714 (4,1) - this overlap doesn't seem nice. Doesn't affect the gameplay, but maybe move it a bit down?
  11. 02:00:857 - i thought you were using mostly the same rhythm, should be a space here?
  12. 02:08:035 (6) - make this jump closer. it's too big xd looks like 1/1 away
  13. 02:35:785 (7) - this a bit hard to see and read properly, can you move it a bit down maybe?
  14. 02:45:214 (3) - i think this is almost unrankable >< you can barely see when it starts and ends. Try moving it down like this?
[Insane]
  1. I didn't have any problem playing it, except for 01:27:214 (1) - (it's quite hard to know that it is only 1/4 away and the speed up for some reason><. Maybe it's me playing badly tho)
  2. 00:14:571 (1) - Delete NC ; 00:15:000 (3) - add nc
  3. 00:16:928 (1) - delete nc ; 00:17:142 (3) - add nc?
  4. 00:44:464 (1) - delete ; 00:44:571 (2) - add?
  5. It's a weird song, i don't think i understand your NC enough >< but you get what i mean
Also, add "c89" on tags, the album was sold on that event, wasn't it?

mostly suggestions i guess.. fun map gl <3
00:19:071 - i wanted that section mapped, would've been so fun ;w;
Your Good Self
m4m? :D

[Easy]
00:16:714 (2) - Add a repeat here? Either that, or make the spinner start 1/2 beat earlier.
00:56:571 (1) - Blanket could be improved.
01:00:428 (2) - A bit close to 00:58:285 (2) , move it up just a bit.
01:41:142 (1,2) - Move so 01:42:857 (1) blankets it.
01:48:000 (1) - Blanket could be *that* little bit better.
01:53:142 (1) - Slider ending on 01:53:785
02:17:142 (1) - Move it above 02:17:571 (2)
02:37:714 (2) - Great blanket potential here.
02:46:285 (1) - Straight slider is kind of boring, could use a more curved/wavy design.
03:10:285 (1) - Remove, start 03:13:714 (1) on 03:12:857
03:34:285 (1) - Curve a bit

[Normal]
00:40:714 (4) - Use 1/2 beat slider
00:48:857 (4,5) - Replace with 1/1 slider
00:49:500 - Add note
00:56:142 (5) - Change to 1/2 beat slider
01:02:571 (3) - Curve more to blanket around 01:03:428 (1)
01:26:357 (3,4,1) - Try this:
02:36:428 (2,3) - Unmapped white tick sounds strange, try this:
02:39:857 (2,3) - ^
02:43:285 (2,3) - Combine into a single slider
03:10:285 (1,1) - See the point in the Easy diff

[Hard]
00:16:928 (1) - Change to 1/2 beat slider
03:17:142 - Add note with NC
Other than that, not much issue :)

[Insane]
00:11:571 (1) - Is this meant to be a loop? You should change it, I'm dying a bit inside looking at it.
00:18:000 (1) - ^
01:27:214 (1) - Agree with Milan- above, you should ctrl+g this. The sudden double spacing is quite big for a 1/4 time.
Can't find much issue here either, since it's a bit out of my skill range.

[Random Thoughts]
Pretty good mapset overall. Hard & Insane were quite fun to play, but Insane was a bit out of my league. Blankets on Easy and Normal could use a few finishing touches though.

Good luck! :)
Kodora
(ノ゚ω゚)ノ★
Selisi
超喜欢这首呀>///<
Aerous
From your M4M Queue , Sorry for the late mod, I have exams last week :l

Hard

Should make the circle size bigger for hard diff.

00:01:392 This is a suggestion : Add a spinner here and stop at 00:04:821

00:25:714 This is a suggestion : Add a spinner here and stop at 00:32:142

01:40:714 Add a note here .

02:35:571 (6,7) Change it to this http://puu.sh/c3rRZ/a9005aae21.jpg

03:16:071 space them out a little bit, or make a pattern example : http://puu.sh/c3rZ1/ce1061e688.png

03:24:857 (4,5,6,7) Personally I hate doubles in hard , but should be okay.




Insane
[/b][/i][/u]
Make the Circle Size a bit bigger or just leave it

00:01:392 This is a suggestion : Add a spinner here and stop at 00:04:821

00:25:714 This is a suggestion : Add a spinner here and stop at 00:32:142

00:45:964 (1,2,3) Make the spacing a bit smaller here, maybe a DS of 1.0

00:58:285 (1) This is a suggestion : Change it to this ------ > http://puu.sh/c3qKv/083d3a1e67.png

01:13:178 (1,2,3,4,5) This is a suggestion : Make the spacing here a bit smaller, leave it if you don't want to .

01:27:214 (1) I think you can change this shape into something a bit more irregular. Example ----> http://puu.sh/c3qXW/9ef46211d9.jpg

01:40:285 (1) Suggestion --------> http://puu.sh/c3r1Y/a209fc0cbf.png

2:21:750 (1,2,3,4,5) Bring them closer to each other .

03:03:142 (1,2,3,4) Combine these four notes , into a small stream .

Overall pretty good and nice to play :D
Rakuen
M4M from your queue~

My map: Hanatan - Hajimete no Oto

[General]
:3
Nice Vocaloid~

[Background Picture]
The BG looks sorta blur/stretched to the reso, any way to find a new BG or a better quality for that? Some players use monitor with high reso, just so you know

[Easy]
00:48:000 (1) - Minor, avoid touching 00:49:714 (1) - (opt.)
00:49:714 (1) - For Easy diffs I'd make slider tick 00:50:142 - as the clap (with sometimes 10% lower vol) instead of 1/2 red
02:37:714 (2) - I'd make this blanket which border line of it is closer to 02:36:000 (1) - , like this (pic), this looks fine 02:44:571 (2) - :


[Normal]
00:43:071 - Put something here and 00:43:500 - for full vocal? Yeah a small rest here is okay too
00:57:214 (1) - Remove NC, think it's not needed
01:00:000 (1) - Considering the BPM it's a bit hard after just a small gap from spinner 00:58:285 (1) - , and the first hit is a circle which is little harder to aim. Something like 01:41:142 - would make it safer
01:12:000 (2) - Minor, just to mention it's a bit off the same angle with 01:12:428 (3) -

[Hard]
00:33:857 (6) - Might be slightly hard to read on 00:34:178 (1) - , could try Ctrl+G (opt.)
00:38:571 (4) - I would sometimes NC for strong vocal seems they are not constant rhythm like white > red (opt.)
00:58:928 (4) - imo a bit awkward pattern to use here, 00:58:714 (3) - and 00:59:035 (5) - are for vocal and 00:58:928 (4) - is for er...drum I guess. Suggest to remove the circle and add a reverse at 00:58:714 (3) - , something like this:
01:26:571 (4) - NC here for constant NC with 01:24:000 (1,2,3) - and 01:24:857 (1,2,3) - ? OR NC at 01:26:357 (3) - to sound the "hibikaze" 1/2, something like 01:12:000 - too
01:40:821 (2) - Weird sound XD ww, I would take this as 1/4 jump hits seems they're close to previous double tap patterns. Suggest to extend the spinner 01:38:571 (1) - to 01:40:285 - and maybe add a circle at 01:40:607 - , not really important, just a suggestion
^ OR NC 01:40:821 (2) -
01:42:428 (6) - like 00:33:857 (6) - , whatever XD
01:47:142 (4) - If you agree with previous NC mod to sound the vocal
02:46:285 (1,2,3) - This one is just too specific imo, I'd change to drum seems nearly 90% are all on drums and vocal. OR add a circle 02:46:500 - and/or 02:46:714 - here as well, might fit better?
02:49:285 (1) - imo this one should be a speed up (slightly) slider instead of slow down, or maybe you can make it 2 sliders with 1 speed up and 1 speed down?
02:53:142 (4) - Suggest just to NC this one, time distance like 02:53:571 (1) - is kinda short, not needed for NC. Instead to remain 3 hits combo do NC for 02:54:000 (3) - too
03:02:571 (5) - Suggest to change to 2 reverse sliders, would bring more feel to the vocal at 03:03:000 - and 03:03:214 -
03:18:428 (8) - This one might needs NC, after 03:16:928 (7) - disappeared the next note is not approaching. NC also give some HP in case...everything
03:47:464 - Add a circle stacked on 03:47:571 (5) - , helps to read the slider of (5) to prevent like 1/4 jump read (example of this 01:42:000 (4,5,6,1,2) - ) and 03:48:000 (1) - is quite fat from it
03:54:000 (4,5,6) - A bit hyper here, sometimes I'd use a retry to FC. Maybe Ctrl+G 03:54:321 (5) - and for 03:54:642 (6) - too? Make it into just a small jump on 03:54:857 (1) -
03:55:607 (2) - Here looks like 1/8, should be no problem when reading/playing tho, but suggest to remove just to let it 5 hits stream of 1/4 at 03:55:714 -

[Insane]
01:40:821 - Just a bit detailed, prefer to shorten 01:40:607 (2) - to 01:40:714 - and then make the vocal at 01:40:821 - a hit seems nothing sounded at 01:40:928 (1) - . Could also use 1/8 for the drags cuz it's Insane and not too many things at that part. OR could lower down the volume of the tick 01:40:928 - if you insist to keep
03:18:428 (9) - Might need NC for long timing distance

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Insane:
I'd prefer using soft hitsounds for this section, because right now it sounds WAY too heavy.
00:38:142 (4) - please like this isnt you
01:02:357 (3,4,5,1,2) - The spacing here is really fucked up not gonna lie
01:04:071 (3,4,5) - LIKE REALLY
OK STOPPING MOD HERE. STOP STOP. Spacing is a really cool thing, and it'd be really nice, especially if you decide to do a bunch of 1/4 stuff, to space it consistently. Otherwise it's literally unreadable.

Hard:
01:27:214 (4) - This overlap oh no
03:18:428 (8) - NC

Normal:
01:58:928 (2) - you can make this a pretty pattern come on i believe in you
02:02:571 (3) - Nazi "make the curve same as (2) shit

Easy:
03:10:285 (1,1) - You know, to be honest, i'm not sure if there's a rule against this. I can check.

IT's a nice mapset, but I don't feel confortable bubbling insane with all of it's spacing stuff. If you want to fix it and stuff, call me back. If you don't, that's fine, but I won't feel comfortable bubbling it.
Topic Starter
tutuhaha
Fix another differents, but serious this is the first time someone said it is "unreadable" for most space....it seen most of it are working when i find test player for this map ;-;....and someone play dt
I hope you can consider it again...if still not..still thankyou CDFA >-<
Oracle
agreed with CDFA the spacing of some patterns are confusing at times so we did something to improve it
huh
16:17 *tutuhaha is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/511901 Giga-P - Hibikaze]
16:17 tutuhaha: 这个..
16:20 Oracle: 咦。。
16:21 tutuhaha: orz
16:21 Oracle: 我玩玩看。。
16:21 tutuhaha: 真心不懂他喷什么orz....明明某个丧病居然能dt.......
16:26 tutuhaha: 肿么样._.
16:26 Oracle: kiai有点
16:26 Oracle: 但是我觉得还好啊
16:26 tutuhaha: 应该没他说的unreadable这么严重?
16:26 tutuhaha: 因为我从头到尾都是用的这种style...kiai里也应该ok?...
16:27 Oracle: 因为你滑条的1/4跳都很大 所以01:07:285 (3,4) - 有点容易读成1/4
16:27 tutuhaha: 哦这里...因为节奏很明显所以...
16:27 Oracle: 01:12:000 (2,3,4) - 这里我也读成1/4了
16:28 tutuhaha: 那这边拉近一点会好一点么?
16:28 tutuhaha: ..
16:28 tutuhaha: 不对,拉远一点?
16:28 Oracle: 我是觉得拉远一点好 不过没到他说的unreadable的程度
16:28 tutuhaha: .....要不然就再加个note!
16:28 Oracle: 几个特别难读的地方稍微调一下就好了
16:29 tutuhaha: :O哪几个?
16:30 tutuhaha: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2134393
16:30 tutuhaha: 这个地方改成这样了
16:30 Oracle: 00:59:571 (3,4,1) -
16:31 Oracle: 你改了之后好读多了
16:31 tutuhaha: 行那就先这样
16:31 Oracle: 其实我也不是太敢泡
16:31 Oracle: 因为我自己都读不太好
16:31 tutuhaha: QAQ辣么严重么
16:32 Oracle: 没*说的那么严重。。不过比起你其他图难读好多啊
16:34 tutuhaha: T-T他以前明明没那么.........
16:34 tutuhaha: orz再考虑看看?我找了很多很好的player test 过了基本上没问题?.........
16:34 tutuhaha: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2134401
16:35 tutuhaha: 这个地方我直接改成三连了
16:36 tutuhaha: 比我其他图难读可能是因为圈圈搞小了orz?..
16:37 Oracle: 02:16:392 (6,7,8) - 这个也没法读。。
16:38 tutuhaha: 啊哈..这块确实有点...
16:39 tutuhaha: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2134413
16:39 tutuhaha: 改成这样了
16:39 Oracle: 其实第二PC大部分都能读了
16:40 Oracle: *说的地方一都能读
16:41 tutuhaha: 01:07:071 (2,3) - 听你这么一说我这俩还是稍微拉开点比较好
16:41 Oracle: 你这次的图打起来有点怪怪的
16:41 Oracle: 我想了一下可能是因为1/4跳太多
16:41 Oracle: 导致普通1/2spacing的时候感觉移动突然变慢了
16:41 Oracle: 像卡住了一样
16:41 tutuhaha: 嗯哼/口\
16:41 tutuhaha: 啊哈/口\
16:42 Oracle: 01:08:571 (1,2,3,4,5) - 大部分时间都是这种强度的移动
16:42 tutuhaha: 咦...原来会有这种情况么....
16:43 tutuhaha: 话说,最后哪一段不难读么?
16:43 tutuhaha: 我还以为最后那一段是最难得D:?!
16:44 *tutuhaha is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/509388 Giga-P - Hibikaze]
16:44 tutuhaha: 传好了
16:44 tutuhaha: 再打一遍?
16:44 Oracle: 03:22:071 (2) - 这个前后的移动就非常不平滑。。
16:45 tutuhaha: 还是拆开来不搞折返比较好?
16:45 Oracle: 最后一段反而好毒
16:45 Oracle: 因为前面都知道会出啥东西了
16:45 tutuhaha: -口-
16:45 Oracle: 我再试试
16:47 tutuhaha: 等!
16:47 tutuhaha: 马上串号!!!
16:47 tutuhaha: 等等等....
16:47 Oracle: 好好
16:48 tutuhaha: 自己不是触作图起来就是费劲啊.....
16:48 *tutuhaha is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/509388 Giga-P - Hibikaze]
16:48 tutuhaha: 传好了
16:53 tutuhaha: 差一丢丢...
16:54 Oracle: 那是我弱 其实已经都能读了
16:54 tutuhaha: :DDDDDD
Topic Starter
tutuhaha
ask KSHR and fix tag and title
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Garven


Just giving my two cents since you asked

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best
I wish the hitsounds were a little louder. The song is really loud comparatively.
AR vs. OD is pretty ridiculous for the Normal and Hard maps. Get those closer to each other please.
Difficulty progression is pretty tough, but it is very even. Nice work.
00:18:857 - I can add the title text here if you'd like.

[Normal]
01:00:000 (1) - Give more recovery time post-spinner for Normals. Aim for 2 beats.
02:08:571 (1) - etc

[Insane]
03:03:214 (2) - Make the repeat arrow more visible please

I think the spacing is fine, but I might be under the influence of the MBC 6 judging, so who knows :U At least what you use is consistent and I find that to work much better than sporadic difficulty spikes.
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

Garven wrote:

←_←....

Just giving my two cents since you asked

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best Dear;_; Why you always say that orz....it just tooooo...noise orz!
I wish the hitsounds were a little louder. The song is really loud comparatively. Sure, why not ╮(╯▽╰)╭
AR vs. OD is pretty ridiculous for the Normal and Hard maps. Get those closer to each other please. fix
Difficulty progression is pretty tough, but it is very even. Nice work. ~\(≧▽≦)/~
00:18:857 - I can add the title text here if you'd like. great :D
I think the spacing is fine, but I might be under the influence of the MBC 6 judging, so who knows :U At least what you use is consistent and I find that to work much better than sporadic difficulty spikes <3
fix all, thanks Garven
Xiaolin
Shingeki no tutuhaha
Koiyuki


From No_Gu's modding team

  1. Grey——Just some complaints.
  2. Black——My personal suggestions.
  3. Bold——Highly recommended.
  4. Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you have to fix it.

[General]
  1. I'm quite... very confused about you CS dicision on E,N and H, 2.0 to 4.0 to 4.4 is soooooooooo weirddddddddddddd and not a good thread.
    I recommend CS 3.0 on Easy, and 3.5 on Normal, and 4.0 on Hard.
    Please take it in serious consideration.
  2. 最近英语摸用惯了,请允许我用双语mod。

[Easy]
  1. 01:47:571 (2,1) - nazi, blanket
  2. 02:03:428 (1) - soft finish at head?
  3. 02:37:714 (2) - 这个不弄成blanket吗?感觉比较好看呢

[Normal]
  1. I recommend to add a silent soft-sliderslide.wav before 00:11:571 - .
  2. 00:38:571 (1,2) - maybe hard to catch for players. change 1 to a repeat slider? same to the following
  3. 01:12:000 (2,3) - 平行?

    说真的除了四维,E和N感觉没啥好吐槽的

[Hard]
  1. I recommend to add a silent soft-sliderslide.wav before 00:11:571 - .(+10086)
  2. 00:33:857 (6,1,2) - although it's 140bpm, dont you think the flow is too hard for players?
  3. 00:58:714 (3,4,5) - that may be too trickkkkkk, 打图的时候最讨厌的就是这种梗了
  4. 01:40:285 (1,2) - 这里和前面的1/4滑条跳基本没区别,太容易读错了
  5. 01:42:428 (6,1,2) - same as above, 这flow太卡手,其它的接1/4也就算了
  6. 02:03:214 (1) - soft finish at end?
  7. 02:05:142 (2,3,1) - the overlap maybe too strange in hard diff.
  8. 02:07:607 (5,6) - that 3.02x quite farrrrrrrrr
  9. 02:37:071 (3,4,5) - the distance of triplet is too large in hard diff :<
  10. 02:49:285 (1) - finish at end?
  11. 03:00:000 (1) - make a turnup curce for better flow? 弧度往上偏一点?

    后面的部分基本想说的和前面的差不多
    这个hard感觉偏难了啊,有点担心N-H的thread

[Insane]
  1. I recommend to add a silent soft-sliderslide.wav before 00:11:571 - .(+身份证号)
  2. 00:15:000 (1,2) - blanket better?
  3. 00:50:357 (3,5) - ^
  4. 00:57:214 (3,4,5,6) - 这有点坑.-.
  5. 00:58:285 (1,2,3,4) - everytime I meet this, makes me feel strange about the rhythm. Make 1 to 1/4 slider and 2 to a triplet on 1/8? (1做1/4滑条,2那里改一个1/8的三连?)
  6. 00:59:571 (3,4,5) - why the 1/4 jumps here so short? 前面1/4note跳这么大怎么这里缩了
  7. 01:03:000 (2,3,4) - and 01:06:321 (5,6,7,1) - and 01:12:750 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - , the difference among normal insane, harder insane and extra, the difficulty change is too sudden. 难度变化太快了,一会缩一会又这么大间距,最好不要差太多吧毕竟这只是个insane,不是你以往的dance啊
  8. 02:03:428 (2) - finish
  9. 02:07:660 - 这里有个beat,而且我觉得还是挺清楚的
  10. 02:48:000 (1) - finish at end
  11. 03:33:428 (5,6,7,8) - hmm,你还说你有人性

Although the icon of all diffs are in a consecutive order, but I'm really worried about the real difficulty of the thread.
imo there is a small gap between N and H, since H with the use of 1/4 jumping notes(although not very far and it's 140bpm)
some patterns in insane is not reasonable enough.

imo you can make a easier hard and insane, then make another diff like https://osu.ppy.sh/b/145669, i'm really looking forward to it~
or make a harder normal? but cs4 is not recommended.

good luck~
Topic Starter
tutuhaha
嘉文说难度跨度还ok拉其实
为了hard可以直接到insane我也是很拼的了;-;b
no plan to add any new diff btw

Minakami Yuki wrote:



From No_Gu's modding team

  1. Grey——Just some complaints.
  2. Black——My personal suggestions.
  3. Bold——Highly recommended.
  4. Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you have to fix it.

[General]
  1. I'm quite... very confused about you CS dicision on E,N and H, 2.0 to 4.0 to 4.4 is soooooooooo weirddddddddddddd and not a good thread.
    I recommend CS 3.0 on Easy, and 3.5 on Normal, and 4.0 on Hard.
    Please take it in serious consideration.
  2. 最近英语摸用惯了,请允许我用双语mod。

[Easy]
  1. 01:47:571 (2,1) - nazi, blanket
  2. 02:03:428 (1) - soft finish at head?
  3. 02:37:714 (2) - 这个不弄成blanket吗?感觉比较好看呢

[Normal]
  1. I recommend to add a silent soft-sliderslide.wav before 00:11:571 - .
  2. 00:38:571 (1,2) - maybe hard to catch for players. change 1 to a repeat slider? same to the following
  3. 01:12:000 (2,3) - 平行?

    说真的除了四维,E和N感觉没啥好吐槽的

[Hard]
  1. I recommend to add a silent soft-sliderslide.wav before 00:11:571 - .(+10086)
  2. 00:33:857 (6,1,2) - although it's 140bpm, dont you think the flow is too hard for players?
  3. 00:58:714 (3,4,5) - that may be too trickkkkkk, 打图的时候最讨厌的就是这种梗了
  4. 01:40:285 (1,2) - 这里和前面的1/4滑条跳基本没区别,太容易读错了
  5. 01:42:428 (6,1,2) - same as above, 这flow太卡手,其它的接1/4也就算了
  6. 02:03:214 (1) - soft finish at end?
  7. 02:05:142 (2,3,1) - the overlap maybe too strange in hard diff.
  8. 02:07:607 (5,6) - that 3.02x quite farrrrrrrrr
  9. 02:37:071 (3,4,5) - the distance of triplet is too large in hard diff :<
  10. 02:49:285 (1) - finish at end?
  11. 03:00:000 (1) - make a turnup curce for better flow? 弧度往上偏一点?

    后面的部分基本想说的和前面的差不多
    这个hard感觉偏难了啊,有点担心N-H的thread

[Insane]
  1. I recommend to add a silent soft-sliderslide.wav before 00:11:571 - .(+身份证号)既然你都加身份证号了那就..
  2. 00:15:000 (1,2) - blanket better?fix
  3. 00:50:357 (3,5) - ^fix
  4. 00:57:214 (3,4,5,6) - 这有点坑.-.还行啦..
  5. 00:58:285 (1,2,3,4) - everytime I meet this, makes me feel strange about the rhythm. Make 1 to 1/4 slider and 2 to a triplet on 1/8? (1做1/4滑条,2那里改一个1/8的三连?)hmm...先放着
  6. 00:59:571 (3,4,5) - why the 1/4 jumps here so short? 前面1/4note跳这么大怎么这里缩了..因为前面跳完了啊!
  7. 01:03:000 (2,3,4) - and 01:06:321 (5,6,7,1) - and 01:12:750 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - , the difference among normal insane, harder insane and extra, the difficulty change is too sudden. 难度变化太快了,一会缩一会又这么大间距,最好不要差太多吧毕竟这只是个insane,不是你以往的dance啊fix不过最后一个我觉得还ok
  8. 02:03:428 (2) - finishfix
  9. 02:07:660 - 这里有个beat,而且我觉得还是挺清楚的不清楚啦..
  10. 02:48:000 (1) - finish at endfix
  11. 03:33:428 (5,6,7,8) - hmm,你还说你有人性
超有人性好么!

Although the icon of all diffs are in a consecutive order, but I'm really worried about the real difficulty of the thread.
imo there is a small gap between N and H, since H with the use of 1/4 jumping notes(although not very far and it's 140bpm)
some patterns in insane is not reasonable enough.

imo you can make a easier hard and insane, then make another diff like https://osu.ppy.sh/b/145669, i'm really looking forward to it~
or make a harder normal? but cs4 is not recommended.

good luck~
CSLM
rank this! :/
riffy
Yo, as requested.

[General]
  1. Please, disable both letterboxes and widescreen support in all of your diffs. Keeping them enabling makes no sense, moreover, those letterboxes huty your video in a weird way.
[Easy]
  1. Please, reduce both OD and HP by 1 tick. Your current diff settings are unreasonably high and it makes the diff too difficult for the easiest diff.
  2. 00:17:357 (1) - the spinner is too short and feels more like a filler, than a fitting element of the gameplay. I highly recommend you to remove the spinner and map this part properly.
  3. 00:44:571 (2) - have you missed a new combo here? It feels like this slider should have a New Combo as both Music and Vocals have a strong beat here.
    Note: 00:48:000 (4) - then you have another missed new combo here (I assume so because you've placed NC at 00:54:857 (1) - which has a very similar sound/lyrics). To be honest, the whole diff feels sorta inconsistent because your comboing feels glitchy/irregular and even random sometimes. Try to get someone to help you with that or work on it on your own. I strongly believe that your comboing is not okay in its current state.
  4. 00:54:000 (3,1) - sorry, this pattern is not readable for beginners. The (3) and (1) stack is just too confusing and I highly suggest you to avoid such patterns.
    Note: 02:52:285 (2,1,2) - similar issue here. I highly suggest changing that. // 03:21:857 (2,1,2) - and here.
  5. 01:17:142 (1,1,2) - minor - sorry, but I don't find this kind of overlaps good-looking. I highly suggest you to find a way to avoid these overlaps.
  6. 01:42:857 (1) - the slider is too close to 01:41:142 (1)'s tail, it may confuse beginners + the flow here does not feel playable. Try to re-arrange the pattern, so it'd look more begnner-friendly? Example.
  7. 01:53:571 - I suggest to place a circle here, so, players will be able to keep tapping to the beat. Afaik, 2/1 gaps are signficantly more playable than 3/1 ones are.
  8. 02:07:285 - the drums suddenly kick in here and ignoring them with a slider seem weird. I'd replace 02:06:857 (2) - with a repeated 1/1 slider.
  9. 02:34:285 (1,2) - 03:44:571 (1,2) - these two are the only 1/2 patterns in the whole diff. They feel kinda random and maybe even out of place. I'd try to replace them with 3/2 sliders in order to make the diff more consistent.
  10. 03:10:285 (1,1) - double-spinners willl bug beginners. Merge them into one spinner or make an acceptable (4/1) gap between them.

    Sorrry to say that, but I think that you need more mods as you can improve quality of the diff a lot.
[Normal]
  1. The AR 6 is overkill for the diff, I'd go with 5,5 as it looks gerat and keeps the spread well balanced. Remember, this is a Normal diff and it shouldn't be too hard! :P
  2. 00:05:142 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - sorry, this is too much for a Normal diff. You mix up 1/1, 3/2 and 2/1 stacks. The pattern is nearly uinreadable itself becomes even harder as it is the beginning of the map. I highly recommmend you to change the rhythm here or at least unstack the objects.
  3. 00:17:571 - minor - avoid using unnecessary green lines, they might slowdown osu a little or even make it glitchy. Not to menion, such lines confuse modders!
  4. 00:38:571 (1,2) - have you heard of polarity? I'm sure you do know what it is. Anyways, please, check this awesome guide to find a way to fix the 3/4 beat here which feels weird here.
    Note: this is not the only 3/4 slider here, so, please, check them all and try to avoid them as they seem weird/exaggerated/unfitting in this diff.
    Note2: 01:02:571 (3) - nice choice of the rhythm. See, it's not that hard to avoid those tricky 3/4 gaps! :)
  5. 02:36:642 (3) - there's a clear stop in the vocals at 02:37:071 - so, if you want to follow the vocals, the rhythm will look more like this
  6. 02:49:714 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - tappig so many circles in a row with a perfect timing is also an overkill. Espicially fot the Normal diff. Please, please, find a way to replace some of the circles with sliders or do something else in order to simplify the pattern.
    Note: 03:02:571 (3,4,5,6,1) - I'd say that this is also a bit too challenging for a Normal, but it's up to you.
  7. 03:10:285 (1,1) - exatly the same as with the Easy diff.

    The rhythm needs some serious work, in my opinion. Some of the patterns are too complicatedtricky and the diff itself feels more like a Normal+/Hard which isn't a good thing, if you ask me.
[Hard]
  1. I'd say that your usage of jumps becomes abusive as some patterns like 02:08:142 (7,1) - take it too far. In addition, there are too many jumps in general, so the diff feels too hard to me.
  2. The usage of 1/4 jumps makes the spread hurt a little. The Normal had no any 1/4s and here, you suddenly start using 1/4 jumps. That makes the spread unbalanced so I recommend making a Light Hard or simplifying this one.
  3. 00:43:607 (3) - sounds totally off music and vocals. I don't know why you decided to place the slider here, but I am sure that it is extra here.
    Note: 01:52:178 (3) - same.
  4. 00:45:857 (1) - the curve makes this slider feel unnatural/weird, in addition, it is really hard to read it. I recommend to keep the shape straight.
    Note: avoiding slowdowns might also be a great idea, but it is up to you. Just keep in mind that slowdown make this diff much harder.

    Modding the diff in its current state does not make much sense as a lot of patterns should be (and hopefully will be) changed. Feel free to contact me if you decide to simplify this Hard or to make a Light Hard.
[Insane]
  1. Exactly the same issue related to the jumps appears in the Hard diff happens here. Except that in this diff, the DS gets really choppy. To be honest, I don't feel like it is readable enough and, apparently, I am not the only person who thinks so.
  2. 00:11:571 (1) - the shape of such loops is too untidy/agressive/rough. Try to check this or that guide to make your sliders appear more tidy.

    Please, take a look at the jumps and think about each of the jumps separately. Does the jump fit? Is it reasonable? Would you be happy to play such a jump? Pay more attention to your jumps is the only thing I can suggest you for now.
Sorry, I did not like the two harder diffs playable enough and I think that the spread itself is kinda too hard. I think that the set needs more serious work. Anyways, keep going and hope you'll make a diamond out of it!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, as requested.

[General]
  1. Please, disable both letterboxes and widescreen support in all of your diffs. Keeping them enabling makes no sense, moreover, those letterboxes huty your video in a weird way.
fix

[Easy]
  1. Please, reduce both OD and HP by 1 tick. Your current diff settings are unreasonably high and it makes the diff too difficult for the easiest diff. fix
  2. 00:17:357 (1) - the spinner is too short and feels more like a filler, than a fitting element of the gameplay. I highly recommend you to remove the spinner and map this part properly. fix
  3. 00:44:571 (2) - have you missed a new combo here? It feels like this slider should have a New Combo as both Music and Vocals have a strong beat here. hmmm..no
    Note: 00:48:000 (4) - then you have another missed new combo here (I assume so because you've placed NC at 00:54:857 (1) - which has a very similar sound/lyrics). To be honest, the whole diff feels sorta inconsistent because your comboing feels glitchy/irregular and even random sometimes. Try to get someone to help you with that or work on it on your own. I strongly believe that your comboing is not okay in its current state. remake combo color
  4. 00:54:000 (3,1) - sorry, this pattern is not readable for beginners. The (3) and (1) stack is just too confusing and I highly suggest you to avoid such patterns. fix
    Note: 02:52:285 (2,1,2) - similar issue here. I highly suggest changing that. // 03:21:857 (2,1,2) - and here.
  5. 01:17:142 (1,1,2) - minor - sorry, but I don't find this kind of overlaps good-looking. I highly suggest you to find a way to avoid these overlaps.
  6. 01:42:857 (1) - the slider is too close to 01:41:142 (1)'s tail, it may confuse beginners + the flow here does not feel playable. Try to re-arrange the pattern, so it'd look more begnner-friendly? Example. fix
  7. 01:53:571 - I suggest to place a circle here, so, players will be able to keep tapping to the beat. Afaik, 2/1 gaps are signficantly more playable than 3/1 ones are. fix
  8. 02:07:285 - the drums suddenly kick in here and ignoring them with a slider seem weird. I'd replace 02:06:857 (2) - with a repeated 1/1 slider.
  9. 02:34:285 (1,2) - 03:44:571 (1,2) - these two are the only 1/2 patterns in the whole diff. They feel kinda random and maybe even out of place. I'd try to replace them with 3/2 sliders in order to make the diff more consistent. should be fun here
  10. 03:10:285 (1,1) - double-spinners willl bug beginners. Merge them into one spinner or make an acceptable (4/1) gap between them. fix

    Sorrry to say that, but I think that you need more mods as you can improve quality of the diff a lot.
[Normal]
  1. The AR 6 is overkill for the diff, I'd go with 5,5 as it looks gerat and keeps the spread well balanced. Remember, this is a Normal diff and it shouldn't be too hard! :P
  2. 00:05:142 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - sorry, this is too much for a Normal diff. You mix up 1/1, 3/2 and 2/1 stacks. The pattern is nearly uinreadable itself becomes even harder as it is the beginning of the map. I highly recommmend you to change the rhythm here or at least unstack the objects. :I
  3. 00:17:571 - minor - avoid using unnecessary green lines, they might slowdown osu a little or even make it glitchy. Not to menion, such lines confuse modders!
  4. 00:38:571 (1,2) - have you heard of polarity? I'm sure you do know what it is. Anyways, please, check this awesome guide to find a way to fix the 3/4 beat here which feels weird here.
    Note: this is not the only 3/4 slider here, so, please, check them all and try to avoid them as they seem weird/exaggerated/unfitting in this diff.
    Note2: 01:02:571 (3) - nice choice of the rhythm. See, it's not that hard to avoid those tricky 3/4 gaps! :)
  5. 02:36:642 (3) - there's a clear stop in the vocals at 02:37:071 - so, if you want to follow the vocals, the rhythm will look more like this
  6. 02:49:714 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - tappig so many circles in a row with a perfect timing is also an overkill. Espicially fot the Normal diff. Please, please, find a way to replace some of the circles with sliders or do something else in order to simplify the pattern.
    Note: 03:02:571 (3,4,5,6,1) - I'd say that this is also a bit too challenging for a Normal, but it's up to you.
  7. 03:10:285 (1,1) - exatly the same as with the Easy diff.

    The rhythm needs some serious work, in my opinion. Some of the patterns are too complicatedtricky and the diff itself feels more like a Normal+/Hard which isn't a good thing, if you ask me. is no that hard :I
[Hard]
  1. I'd say that your usage of jumps becomes abusive as some patterns like 02:08:142 (7,1) - take it too far. In addition, there are too many jumps in general, so the diff feels too hard to me.
  2. The usage of 1/4 jumps makes the spread hurt a little. The Normal had no any 1/4s and here, you suddenly start using 1/4 jumps. That makes the spread unbalanced so I recommend making a Light Hard or simplifying this one.
  3. 00:43:607 (3) - sounds totally off music and vocals. I don't know why you decided to place the slider here, but I am sure that it is extra here.
    Note: 01:52:178 (3) - same. those slider are absolutely following background music
  4. 00:45:857 (1) - the curve makes this slider feel unnatural/weird, in addition, it is really hard to read it. I recommend to keep the shape straight.
    Note: avoiding slowdowns might also be a great idea, but it is up to you. Just keep in mind that slowdown make this diff much harder. fix

    Modding the diff in its current state does not make much sense as a lot of patterns should be (and hopefully will be) changed. Feel free to contact me if you decide to simplify this Hard or to make a Light Hard.
[Insane]
  1. Exactly the same issue related to the jumps appears in the Hard diff happens here. Except that in this diff, the DS gets really choppy. To be honest, I don't feel like it is readable enough and, apparently, I am not the only person who thinks so.
  2. 00:11:571 (1) - the shape of such loops is too untidy/agressive/rough. Try to check this or that guide to make your sliders appear more tidy.

    Please, take a look at the jumps and think about each of the jumps separately. Does the jump fit? Is it reasonable? Would you be happy to play such a jump? Pay more attention to your jumps is the only thing I can suggest you for now. actually...when I find test player and modder, they response are no that bad so ;-;...
Sorry, I did not like the two harder diffs playable enough and I think that the spread itself is kinda too hard. I think that the set needs more serious work. Anyways, keep going and hope you'll make a diamond out of it!
thanks~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!
well, it is no bad things that people spent more time to play your map actually :I...
lkx_Shore

General

  1. Fine.

Insane

  1. 00:11:571 (1) - SV高但间距却用了0.7x...这样给人感觉很松散.
  2. 00:40:714 (9) - 无意义的3/4滑条,用1/2效果会更好。
  3. 00:45:321 (5) - 滑条头并没有打击到任何在跟的音轨。
  4. 00:58:285 (1,2,3,4) - 这一小段怎么看都是瞎糊节奏了吧...跟人声或者背景音也好啊。
  5. 00:59:892 (4,5) - 去掉00:59:892 (4) - 然后把01:00:000 (4) - 改成1/2加速滑条叠在00:59:571 (3) - 尾巴比现在好多了.
  6. 01:09:428 (4) - 这里不适合用撞击滑条折返来表现人声重音。
  7. 01:27:214 (1) - 弄成回转大半圈的那种滑条更好玩。
  8. 01:52:178 (3,5) - ......没有跟到音轨,我也不觉得这样overmap很好...
  9. 01:54:000 (1,2,3,4) - 瞎糊。
  10. 02:02:785 (5,6,1,2) - 整个Kiaitime都是快速移动的...放这种要减速的梗很破坏整体,表现不出音乐玩起来也没什么意思..
  11. 02:06:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
  12. 02:17:142 (1) - 用1/4滑条的话是无法把它和前面的人声部分区分开来的,换了轨不换梗那不就黏在一起了吗..
  13. 02:20:892 (3) - 滑条头没有打击到轨,而滑条尾撞人声我觉得不好。
  14. 02:49:500 - 这个扭一下的音是从这里开始的....但为什么你却选择了滑条尾撞击这里呢...
  15. 03:16:285 (5,6,7,8) - 用1/4滑条,滑条尾5%音量吧..

Hard

  1. 多余的绿线。
    02:48:000 -
  2. 00:43:607 (3) - 在跟什么音轨...我也不觉得这个overmap好。
  3. 01:52:178 (3) - ^.
  4. 04:01:714 (1) - 04:01:714 (1) - 在hard里,转盘要隔一个拍子才能放物件。
    Kiaitime里的节奏太松散了,试试这个↓

Normal

  1. Fine.

Easy

  1. Fine.

Others

就个人而言我不太喜欢Insane...
Goodluck.
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

lkx_Shore wrote:

General

  1. Fine.

Insane

  1. 00:11:571 (1) - SV高但间距却用了0.7x...这样给人感觉很松散.还ok啦我觉得,要是还有人说我就改好了
  2. 00:40:714 (9) - 无意义的3/4滑条,用1/2效果会更好。改了
  3. 00:45:321 (5) - 滑条头并没有打击到任何在跟的音轨。改了
  4. 00:58:285 (1,2,3,4) - 这一小段怎么看都是瞎糊节奏了吧...跟人声或者背景音也好啊。有跟啊
  5. 00:59:892 (4,5) - 去掉00:59:892 (4) - 然后把01:00:000 (4) - 改成1/2加速滑条叠在00:59:571 (3) - 尾巴比现在好多了.
  6. 01:09:428 (4) - 这里不适合用撞击滑条折返来表现人声重音。还好啦..
  7. 01:27:214 (1) - 弄成回转大半圈的那种滑条更好玩。不懂..
  8. 01:52:178 (3,5) - ......没有跟到音轨,我也不觉得这样overmap很好...在跟那个咚咚的_(:зゝ∠)_
  9. 01:54:000 (1,2,3,4) - 瞎糊。有跟啊
  10. 02:02:785 (5,6,1,2) - 整个Kiaitime都是快速移动的...放这种要减速的梗很破坏整体,表现不出音乐玩起来也没什么意思..咦我觉得还行哎
  11. 02:06:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 有跟啊
  12. 02:17:142 (1) - 用1/4滑条的话是无法把它和前面的人声部分区分开来的,换了轨不换梗那不就黏在一起了吗..改了一下
  13. 02:20:892 (3) - 滑条头没有打击到轨,而滑条尾撞人声我觉得不好。还好啦
  14. 02:49:500 - 这个扭一下的音是从这里开始的....但为什么你却选择了滑条尾撞击这里呢...改了
  15. 03:16:285 (5,6,7,8) - 用1/4滑条,滑条尾5%音量吧..还是想用note..

Hard

  1. 多余的绿线。
    02:48:000 -
  2. 00:43:607 (3) - 在跟什么音轨...我也不觉得这个overmap好。
  3. 01:52:178 (3) - ^.
  4. 04:01:714 (1) - 04:01:714 (1) - 在hard里,转盘要隔一个拍子才能放物件。 我擦泪_(:зゝ∠)_..
    Kiaitime里的节奏太松散了,试试这个↓

Normal

  1. Fine.

Easy

  1. Fine.

Others

就个人而言我不太喜欢Insane...so sad_(:зゝ∠)_
Goodluck.
DeletedUser_1574070
  • Easy
  1. Im losing concentration coz of the song so i couldn't find anything...


  • Normal
  1. nothing special.


  • Hard
  1. 00:43:285 (2,3,4) - try make innercircle consist a triangle.
  2. 00:58:714 (3) - try make this to 2circles for difficulty adjustment. OR convert kickslier+circle to a repeatslider. it fits more.
  3. 01:58:071 (4) - isn't 2.44x is too far in hard? i think 1.8x is enough.
  4. 02:01:607 (1) - remove a circle. no need for rhythmic decoration.
  5. 02:37:071 (3,4,5) - try stacking these. i think there can be effective stack. same on 02:40:500 (3,4,5) -
  6. 02:43:714 - remove repeatarrow and put slider instead. contact to me. i'll give u some suggestions.
  7. and an concern about the spacing not consistent even though there exist slider 3/4jumps and 1/2 sliders together.


  • Insane
  1. 00:11:571 (1) - try make this kind of sliders more symmetrical. I'll help you when we meet online.
  2. 00:38:571 (5) - NC needed imo coz of the rhythm and spacing.
  3. 00:48:857 (5) - remove the last dot and then, move last dot to 288:183. use same here 00:55:714 (5) -
  4. 01:06:642 (6,7) - consider making these into a kickslider.
  5. 02:48:857 (3) - NC for velocity change


Plz come to me with the song which never contains vocaloid next time........ I'm really not good at it and i don't like it actually. (not ur map)

GL
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