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Sakaue Nachi

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Sakaue Nachi 2014-09-26T13:41:55+00:00

Ayakura Mei wrote:
Good luck for first rank

EDIT：刚才看了下LUNATiC发现了一个问题：
就是你00:13:424 (1) - 到00:35:367 (1) - 这一段用镲作为普通击打音效表现的是在inst方面然而你的节奏却是跟着vocal来的
这样就会出现一个问题就是节奏会混乱比如00:26:110 (2,3,4,5) - 这种连打你放慢来听得话就会感觉节奏有问题
还有这种00:33:310 (6) - 这个地方其实是没任何音的如果是用你这个镲音你应该加在00:33:224 (6) - 这个位置
00:23:024 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 像这种的用镲就比较合适
所以这里建议你就是把除了00:23:024 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 像这类连打的地方保留镲的音效其他地方还是用默认音效作为普通击打音效会比较好
或者如果想要镲的音效全程覆盖的话那么有些pattern要改下才行完全按照inst去走才不会出现问题不过那样工作量肯定没有上面那种方法大

00:38:795 (3,4) - 这个这样的话接后面的slider感觉不顺改成这样好点
SPOILER

fixed & thx for providing me the hitsound

[Twinkle]

179 posts

Joined October 2012

[Twinkle] 2014-09-28T13:27:38+00:00

[Normal]
OK

[Hard]
音量有点小，特别是00:13:424 (1) - 开始其他没什么问题

[Lunatic]
总体上来说排列上没有什么可以说的，但是想要到能rank的水平梗还是少了一点，比方说这个难度里单点的摆放比较单一，偶尔一需要一些位置变化不是很大的单点或者是在原地的单点。还有就是回转滑条除了1/4的有用到以外，难度里比较长的滑条都没有使用回转。虽然有00:47:710 (1,2) - 这样的3/4滑条+一个note的梗，但是却完全没有3/4滑条+1/2滑条或者是1/2滑条+1/4拍note+1/2滑条。另外难度上起伏也不是太大，比如从这里开始的低沉部分使用较小的间距多使用滑条，或者回转滑条，然后到KIAI的时候再加大一些间距，把要强调的节拍提现出来。滑条造型上也可以多样化一点。。。。

Sakaue Nachi

558 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Sakaue Nachi 2014-09-28T16:57:54+00:00

[Twinkle] wrote:
[Lunatic]
总体上来说排列上没有什么可以说的，但是想要到能rank的水平梗还是少了一点，比方说这个难度里单点的摆放比较单一，偶尔一需要一些位置变化不是很大的单点或者是在原地的单点。还有就是回转滑条除了1/4的有用到以外，难度里比较长的滑条都没有使用回转。虽然有00:47:710 (1,2) - 这样的3/4滑条+一个note的梗，但是却完全没有3/4滑条+1/2滑条或者是1/2滑条+1/4拍note+1/2滑条。另外难度上起伏也不是太大，比如从这里开始的低沉部分使用较小的间距多使用滑条，或者回转滑条，然后到KIAI的时候再加大一些间距，把要强调的节拍提现出来。滑条造型上也可以多样化一点。。。。

感谢方向性建议，修改中(´･ω･`)

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

4,298 posts

Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2014-09-29T11:52:50+00:00

lunatic:
01:18:053 (1,2) - 这里感觉反过来比较好

Narcissu's Hard:
一个hard 我觉得每段结尾那两个跳有点大
od6吧

我看了半天觉得挺好的没啥能挑的蜡烛

edit:
lunatic
00:24:395 (1) - blanket没做好
00:29:881 (1) - blanket的和前面的太近了, 放远一点滑条显得软一些
00:50:453 (1) - blanket没走好
01:00:910 (4,5) - 建议放在这里 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2083828
01:07:081 (2) - 上面的串blanket没做好

其实我觉得blanket什么的没多大的影响啊除了特别难看的..

还有01:06:707 (1) - 这个折返看不清

supersbj

5 posts

Joined October 2010

supersbj 2014-09-29T14:20:03+00:00

irc mod

22:07 supersbj: 00:04:853 (5) -
22:07 Sakaue Nachi: 现在是不是3/4滑条经常被un
22:07 supersbj: bushi
22:08 supersbj: 00:07:767 (6) -
22:08 supersbj: stack with 00:05:710 (2) -
22:08 supersbj: 00:10:338 (7) -
22:10 supersbj: 00:10:338 (7) - 128,172
22:13 supersbj: 00:16:167 (1) - 352,264
22:14 supersbj: 00:23:710 (7,8) - 改成四个单点
22:15 Sakaue Nachi: 卧槽这么丧病
22:15 Sakaue Nachi: 00:10:338 (7) - 
22:15 Sakaue Nachi: pre2.7 next 3.27
22:15 Sakaue Nachi: 现在我都觉得大
22:16 supersbj: 才4.7星
22:16 Sakaue Nachi: 之前就是有个h 和 i难度差太大
22:16 Sakaue Nachi: 被un了
22:17 Sakaue Nachi: 3.5 5.1
22:17 supersbj: 放心 你这个不会
22:17 Sakaue Nachi: 最好不要过4.9
22:18 supersbj: 00:27:995 (6) - 252，92
22:19 supersbj: 00:27:653 (5) - 108 128
22:19 supersbj: 00:34:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 你这个能不能做好看点
22:20 Sakaue Nachi:   怎样算好看。。
22:20 Sakaue Nachi: 现在感觉还行啊
22:20 Sakaue Nachi: _(:3」∠)_
22:20 supersbj: 还行≠漂亮
22:20 supersbj: 用slider拉
22:20 Sakaue Nachi: 我就是用slider转换的
22:20 supersbj: 00:40:510 (7) -
22:22 supersbj: 那敢问00:34:681 (1) - 在不在你拉的slider上
22:22 Sakaue Nachi: 这个就不是啊
22:22 supersbj: 00:44:624 (1) - NC
22:23 supersbj: 所以丑
22:23 Sakaue Nachi: 这种很正常啊最后那个滑条不和前面成弧线
22:23 Sakaue Nachi: 我看很多图都有
22:26 Sakaue Nachi: 00:27:995 (6) - 这个摆哪里太远了 我先试下 等下你打下看看感觉
22:26 Sakaue Nachi: 和原来有后文
22:26 Sakaue Nachi: 哦
22:27 supersbj: 00:53:538 (2,4) - Ctrl+G
22:27 supersbj: 啥后文
22:27 Sakaue Nachi: 还改了前面一个
22:28 supersbj: 觉得太远可以近一点 那个2 4的
22:28 supersbj: 00:56:795 (1) - NC
22:28 supersbj: 01:01:767 (2,3) - Ctrl+G
22:29 Sakaue Nachi: 2 4那里换了感觉flow不太好啊 我test看上去
22:29 Sakaue Nachi: 先改等下打打吧orz
22:30 supersbj: 01:11:710 (3,4,5,6,7) - 老实说这种排列真的用太多了 很新手很捞
22:30 Sakaue Nachi: 求推荐
22:30 Sakaue Nachi: 好像是多了点
22:30 Sakaue Nachi: _(:3」∠)_
22:31 supersbj: 01:05:710 (2) - 440 84
22:31 supersbj: 01:06:053 (4) - 460 8
22:32 supersbj: 01:10:510 (4) - 87 267
22:33 supersbj: 01:10:338 (3) - 192 176
22:33 Sakaue Nachi: 对了 你发第一个图是哪里的
22:34 supersbj: 01:12:224 (7) - 232 212
22:34 supersbj: 00:23:710 (1) -
22:34 supersbj: 第一个图

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2014-09-30T11:27:46+00:00

[General]

白色太瞎眼，默认皮肤对着这个bg根本读不了图，换一个
再做个easy

[LUNATiC]

00:10:307 (7) - 放在163、107，这个和56不是同一类梗就不要放在一起了
00:11:336 (1) - 这个NC取消吧，没什么必要
00:11:679 (5) - NC
00:12:793 (3) - NC
00:17:336 (8,1) - 这个连打前面有拖音，我觉得滑条在这里比较适合，节奏不像这个00:22:822 (8) -
SPOILER
00:18:193 (7) - NC，你后面的也NC了，统一一下
00:28:307 (8,1) - 同理
00:38:079 (1) - 头加finish比较好听，这段finish整段起不错
00:39:450 (1) - 同上
01:17:507 (2) - NC

[Narcissu's Hard]

00:02:421 (1) - 头加finish
00:20:079 (3) - ctrl+g？多爽
00:38:079 (1) - 头加finish，整段起才好听
00:39:450 (1) - 同上
00:44:250 (3,1) - 弄开点，变成像00:11:250 (3,1) - 一样，才爽
00:46:993 (3) - 268,68
01:06:193 (3,1) - 也是跳吧
01:12:022 (4) - 这个前面没说，我觉得ctrl+g更适合。顺便我建议你，01:08:250到最后直接全部ctrl+h，现在看上去几乎完全复制，很不爽的

[Sharlo's Normal]

00:35:336 这条绿线的vol提到60，现在几乎听不出clap
00:40:822 这条绿线的vol提到65
01:00:536 (2,3) - 跟完鼓又跟人声非常别扭，改为这样
SPOILER
01:06:536 (3) - NC

都做得很好的

Sharlo

667 posts

Joined May 2012

Sharlo 2014-09-30T13:01:42+00:00

Sellenite wrote:
[General]
再做个easy 最低难度2.0stars以下不需要Easy
[Sharlo's Normal]
00:35:336 这条绿线的vol提到60，现在几乎听不出clap √
00:40:822 这条绿线的vol提到65 √
01:00:536 (2,3) - 跟完鼓又跟人声非常别扭，改为这样保留
SPOILER
01:06:536 (3) - NC √

Thx

Sakaue Nachi

558 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Sakaue Nachi 2014-09-30T14:42:07+00:00

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
lunatic:
01:18:053 (1,2) - 这里感觉反过来比较好现在还行啊

Narcissu's Hard:
一个hard 我觉得每段结尾那两个跳有点大改小了
od6吧猴

我看了半天觉得挺好的没啥能挑的蜡烛

edit:
lunatic
00:24:395 (1) - blanket没做好
00:29:881 (1) - blanket的和前面的太近了, 放远一点滑条显得软一些
00:50:453 (1) - blanket没走好
01:00:910 (4,5) - 建议放在这里 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2083828 现在也行啊，其他都改了
01:07:081 (2) - 上面的串blanket没做好

其实我觉得blanket什么的没多大的影响啊除了特别难看的..

还有01:06:707 (1) - 这个折返看不清

Sellenite wrote:
[General]
白色太瞎眼，默认皮肤对着这个bg根本读不了图，换一个之后再想想重新选色
再做个easy 问过bat不用了
[LUNATiC]
00:10:307 (7) - 放在163、107，这个和56不是同一类梗就不要放在一起了 fixed
00:11:336 (1) - 这个NC取消吧，没什么必要 fixed
00:11:679 (5) - NC fixed
00:12:793 (3) - NC fixed
00:17:336 (8,1) - 这个连打前面有拖音，我觉得滑条在这里比较适合，节奏不像这个00:22:822 (8) - 这里不想跟人声
SPOILER
00:18:193 (7) - NC，你后面的也NC了，统一一下 fixed
00:28:307 (8,1) - 同理
00:38:079 (1) - 头加finish比较好听，这段finish整段起不错 fixed
00:39:450 (1) - 同上 fixed
01:17:507 (2) - NC fixed
[Narcissu's Hard]
00:02:421 (1) - 头加finish fixed
00:20:079 (3) - ctrl+g？多爽保留
00:38:079 (1) - 头加finish，整段起才好听 fixed
00:39:450 (1) - 同上 fixed
00:44:250 (3,1) - 弄开点，变成像00:11:250 (3,1) - 一样，才爽时间间隔不同
00:46:993 (3) - 268,68 fixed
01:06:193 (3,1) - 也是跳吧没改
01:12:022 (4) - 这个前面没说，我觉得ctrl+g更适合。顺便我建议你，01:08:250到最后直接全部ctrl+h，现在看上去几乎完全复制，很不爽的这都被你发现。。。fixed

都做得很好的

感谢mod和射星

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2014-09-30T16:17:05+00:00

一開始你自作主張把音效下了我就覺得很無語了……我一般都是不跟原曲的……我覺得和原曲寫一樣有點沙比……就像女孩子穿了兩件一樣的外套出門。我更傾向一套額外的……標準而規範的音效。你下的也辛辛苦苦的而且我覺得也不錯就沒說啥……音效方面你幫我改我也沒意見……排版你動了我就覺得不能忍……這樣你直接把前綴去掉當你自己做的好了……每段結尾的兩個3.0DS的note跳我都是右上往左下讓用數位板的玩家打的爽用的，你一個ctrl+h就直接反人類了啊少年……

Sakaue Nachi

558 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Sakaue Nachi 2014-09-30T16:21:03+00:00

Narcissu wrote:
一開始你自作主張把音效下了我就覺得很無語了……我一般都是不跟原曲的……我覺得和原曲寫一樣有點沙比……就像女孩子穿了兩件一樣的外套出門。我更傾向一套額外的……標準而規範的音效。你下的也辛辛苦苦的而且我覺得也不錯就沒說啥……音效方面你幫我改我也沒意見……排版你動了我就覺得不能忍……這樣你直接把前綴去掉當你自己做的好了……每段結尾的兩個3.0DS的note跳我都是右上往左下讓用數位板的玩家打的爽用的，你一個ctrl+h就直接反人類了啊少年……

骚年别激动。。。你说3.0 ds那里对于hard来说有点大，我就ctrl+s缩小而已没改变方向
至于ctrl+H那里你是复制黏贴的不太合适，其实想叫你重新排列下的。。。

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

-Nya- 2014-10-03T16:17:18+00:00

Hey! M4M!
Well, here's my mod:

Sharlo's Normal:
00:14:593 (2) – Ctrl+G. It supports the flow better00:18:879 (1) - ^ (There are other places as well.)00:28:307 (2) – Ctrl+J and place the slider here: X:96 Y:4800:35:336 (1) – Ctrl+G and then place 00:36:022 (2) – here: X:216 Y:28800:53:679 (4) – Rather place this slider here: X:116 Y:18001:01:393 – Add a note here? It sounds like there should be one

Narcissu's Hard:
00:04:822 (4) – Move this slider downwards to this spot: X:472 Y:32. It will then be in-line with 00:04:479 (3) – and look neater00:49:736 (3) – Curve this slider a bit. Maybe try to curve it like 00:49:050 (1) –

Picture

00:57:964 (3,5,6,1) – Try to improve this blanket01:01:050 (4) – Rather do this?

Picture

01:05:850 (2) – Move this slider till it’s here: X:228 Y:68. Make it in-line with previous slider01:06:536 (1) – Rather place this hitcircle somewhere here: X:384 Y:112. It looks and plays better01:08:936 (3,4) – Improve the blanket01:13:736 (1,2) - ^, use the approach circle of 01:14:250 (2) –

Sorry, but I really suck at modding Insane diffs. I can’t even map or play them.

Overall, very nice mapset.
Here’s a star~
Good Luck!

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Knotts 2014-10-03T20:07:24+00:00

Sorry for being late, mod from my queue

General

Add Sharlo and Narcissu to tags
Try 2,451 for offset. Don't forget to resnap everything if you decide to change

Insane

00:06:879 (2) - Prefer blanket with curved slider instead
00:13:393 - The clap hitsound doesn't really fit here, I'd find something more quieter and softer
00:18:193 (1) - Remove NC?
01:18:022 (1) - Move to ~ (31, 133) to have the same distance like 01:17:679 (2,2)

Narcissu's Hard

00:07:564 (4) - Use the same slider as 00:07:222 (3), looks better to me
00:24:879 (2) - Equal spacing between (1) and (3)

Sharlo's Normal

00:33:793 (2) - Doesn't sound like finish fits here
01:01:564 (3) - Maybe move this to 01:01:393
01:09:964 (4) - Ctrl + J for better flow

Good luck

Sakaue Nachi

558 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Sakaue Nachi 2014-10-04T05:58:29+00:00

Knotts wrote:
Sorry for being late, mod from my queue

General
Add Sharlo and Narcissu to tags no need,because have written their names in diff names
Try 2,451 for offset. Don't forget to resnap everything if you decide to change I have changed the MP3 file ._.

Insane
00:06:879 (2) - Prefer blanket with curved slider instead
00:13:393 - The clap hitsound doesn't really fit here, I'd find something more quieter and softer I have changed the hitsound before
00:18:193 (1) - Remove NC?
01:18:022 (1) - Move to ~ (31, 133) to have the same distance like 01:17:679 (2,2) OK fixed

Good luck

thanks

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-10-04T06:32:25+00:00

你需要把GDer写到 tags里因为官网上是搜不了diff名的. 没有tag 官网就搜不到GD mapper

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-10-04T06:37:09+00:00

Sakaue Nachi wrote:
Knotts wrote:
Sorry for being late, mod from my queue

General
Add Sharlo and Narcissu to tags no need,because have written their names in diff names
no, it is necessary!

Ranking Criteria wrote:
Guest mappers must be added to the tags of a mapset.

no kd

KaedekaShizuru

625 posts

Joined January 2013

KaedekaShizuru 2014-10-04T06:58:59+00:00

from game
sorry so late

[General]
You must add Sharlo and Narcissu to tags，it's RULE.
~~英文太累了还是用中文Orz~~
预览点黄线没有对齐注意
我觉得slider静音比较好
SC2的clap有点恼人尤其下在连打上

[Lunatic]
删掉00:02:422这根没有意义的绿线（这里有红线了而且你没有做任何调整）另外这边在摸的时候发现对齐红线时下方时间轴显示00:02:421，差0.001s 不知是否是bug
01:16:307 (1) - 很难看感觉还不如像hard那样空着
结尾可以放个spin 目前来看01:18:622 的绿线没有任何意义
别的……貌似真没啥了（？
排列很棒我打不了（死

[Narcissu's Hard]
00:02:422 - 同L
00:12:707 (3,4,5,6) - 对于hard来说过难了
00:34:822 (6,7,8) - ↑
00:52:479 (3) - 真的有必要用一个红锚点吗
结尾可以放个spin 目前来看01:18:622 的绿线没有任何意义

水仙君还是一如既往地高水准=w=

[Sharlo's Normal]
00:02:422 - 疑似bug同L，差0.001s
00:24:364 (1,2) - 感觉就算1是折角slider，2还是blanket一下更好看
最后可以放个spin啦

夏萝姐姐prpr

美丽

Sharlo

667 posts

Joined May 2012

Sharlo 2014-10-04T09:35:14+00:00

-Nya- wrote:
Sharlo's Normal:
00:14:593 (2) – Ctrl+G. It supports the flow better You should keep a same distance in a Normal diff.00:18:879 (1) - ^ (There are other places as well.) 00:28:307 (2) – Ctrl+J and place the slider here: X:96 Y:48 √00:35:336 (1) – Ctrl+G and then place 00:36:022 (2) – here: X:216 Y:28800:53:679 (4) – Rather place this slider here: X:116 Y:180 It will cover 00:54:536 (1) - 01:01:393 – Add a note here? It sounds like there should be one Change to another one.

Knotts wrote:
Sharlo's Normal
00:33:793 (2) - Doesn't sound like finish fits here There is a finish in the music, listen to it carefully
01:01:564 (3) - Maybe move this to 01:01:393 oh nice
01:09:964 (4) - Ctrl + J for better flow √

Sakaue Nachi wrote:
Knotts wrote:
General
Add Sharlo and Narcissu to tags no need,because have written their names in diff names

It is Ranking Rule.

KaedekaShizuru wrote:
[Sharlo's Normal]
00:02:422 - 疑似bug同L，差0.001s √
00:24:364 (1,2) - 感觉就算1是折角slider，2还是blanket一下更好看 √
最后可以放个spin啦放了spin的时间也好短啊对normal会不会太难

夏萝姐姐prpr

Thanks for mod~!
爱抚prpr m酱prpr 静留prpr

@大卫: 00:02:422 - 这里超奇怪的要F6把红线删掉然后手动重新加一条才能fix
另外在你和水仙的难度第一根绿线都要删掉

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: 01 - Keep Going!.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
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Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2014-10-04T10:20:47+00:00

KaedekaShizuru wrote:
[Narcissu's Hard]
00:02:422 - 同L……刪掉了
00:12:707 (3,4,5,6) - 对于hard来说过难了……只是1/2拍額……並沒有實際難度吧……大概
00:34:822 (6,7,8) - ↑
00:52:479 (3) - 真的有必要用一个红锚点吗……去掉了
结尾可以放个spin 目前来看01:18:622 的绿线没有任何意义……去掉了……加轉盤有點短……

水仙君还是一如既往地高水准=w=……終於有人叫我水仙了><

Knotts wrote:
Narcissu's Hard
00:07:564 (4) - Use the same slider as 00:07:222 (3), looks better to me……ok~
00:24:879 (2) - Equal spacing between (1) and (3)……fix~

-Nya- wrote:
Narcissu's Hard:
00:04:822 (4) – Move this slider downwards to this spot: X:472 Y:32. It will then be in-line with 00:04:479 (3) – and look neater……i think it's comfortable now ……00:49:736 (3) – Curve this slider a bit. Maybe try to curve it like 00:49:050 (1) – ……i wish it parallel wish 00:50:764 (2) - ……
Picture
00:57:964 (3,5,6,1) – Try to improve this blanket……fix~01:01:050 (4) – Rather do this?……ok
Picture
01:05:850 (2) – Move this slider till it’s here: X:228 Y:68. Make it in-line with previous slider……no……in-line not …… proper ？01:06:536 (1) – Rather place this hitcircle somewhere here: X:384 Y:112. It looks and plays better…………i think it's comfortable now ……01:08:936 (3,4) – Improve the blanket……fix~01:13:736 (1,2) - ^, use the approach circle of 01:14:250 (2) – ……fix……

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Sharlo

667 posts

Joined May 2012

Sharlo 2014-10-04T10:21:51+00:00

Narcissu wrote:
KaedekaShizuru wrote:
水仙君还是一如既往地高水准=w=……終於有人叫我水仙了><

原来我不是人

Sakaue Nachi

558 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Sakaue Nachi 2014-10-04T10:37:37+00:00

Sharlo wrote:
Narcissu wrote:
原来我不是人

卧槽，你们改之前更新下啊【那个跪在地上哭的表情
我又要重新弄过combo colours了_(:3」∠)_

xxdeathx

2,661 posts

Joined July 2013

xxdeathx 2014-10-04T10:38:10+00:00

M4M from my queue

[Normal]

00:10:307 (4) - Ctrl-G plays better and is more consistent with the previous sliders going down.
00:57:964 (2) - How come you switch to following drums here? I think it's still better to continue following vocals at 00:57:793 like the next next stanza.

[Hard]

00:10:479 (1,2,3) - What are you trying to here? Why are you having stuff start on blue ticks?
00:12:707 (3,4,5,6) - I wouldn't use more than 2 1/4 sliders in a row in hard diff, since they are very fast and hard to read.
00:19:564 (2) - Blanket is off. Move middle point to 340, 88.
00:28:307 (4,5) - Follow the drums—have sliders start on 00:28:307 and 00:28:650 to stay consistent with 00:25:564 (4,5) -
00:33:622 (2,3) - ^
00:59:507 (3) - Lower the distance spacing a bit, this is feeling like an insane.
01:08:936 (3,4) - Try to blanket so it looks neater.

[Insane]

00:40:822 (1) - Don't use 3/4 sliders that ignore anything on the 1/2 tick 00:40:993 in favor of a blue 3/4 tick with nothing on it. It's much more important to map the red tick.
00:43:907 (2) - This would play better if you curve it the other way. Then you could ctrl-g and adjust the position of 00:44:250 (3,4,5,6,1) - and 00:44:764 (2) - so it ends up something like this:
SPOILER
00:47:679 (1) - Same thing I said earlier about 3/4 sliders. There is a very audible tick in the music at 00:47:850 that you shouldn't ignore.
00:51:793 (1) - 00:55:907 (1) - ^ Another thing you could do is remove the circle and change to 1/1 slider.
00:48:022 (2,3,4) - The bigger jump should be between 00:48:022 (2,3) - because that's where the vocal is strong.
01:07:307 (1) - I really discourage having a spinner here. 1/2 beat between spinner and next object is allowed but extremely hard to play, and already the spinner is really short and easy to spin 100 or 50 on. Plus, the tick it ends on is already arbitrary so you don't really need it.

Mapset is decent, good luck.

Sakaue Nachi

558 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Sakaue Nachi 2014-10-04T13:14:07+00:00

yf_bmp wrote:
你需要把GDer写到 tags里因为官网上是搜不了diff名的. 没有tag 官网就搜不到GD mapper

Minakami Yuki wrote:
Guest mappers must be added to the tags of a mapset.

no kd

fixed thanks

lkx_Shore

1,453 posts

Joined January 2010

lkx_Shore 2014-10-04T13:25:12+00:00

才看到关于Narcissu难度的事。

你应该认识到。。。在得到GDer的许可以之前，你是不能帮他动任何东西的。

Sakaue Nachi

558 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Sakaue Nachi 2014-10-04T13:35:49+00:00

lkx_Shore wrote:
才看到关于Narcissu难度的事。

你应该认识到。。。在得到GDer的许可以之前，你是不能帮他动任何东西的。

额。。之后我们讨论过了

Sakaue Nachi

558 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Sakaue Nachi 2014-10-04T14:57:35+00:00

KaedekaShizuru wrote:
from game
sorry so late

[General]
You must add Sharlo and Narcissu to tags，it's RULE.
~~英文太累了还是用中文Orz~~
预览点黄线没有对齐注意 fixed
我觉得slider静音比较好现在也不太明显吧orz
SC2的clap有点恼人尤其下在连打上挺符合音乐的啊

[Lunatic]
删掉00:02:422这根没有意义的绿线（这里有红线了而且你没有做任何调整）另外这边在摸的时候发现对齐红线时下方时间轴显示00:02:421，差0.001s 不知是否是bug fixed
01:16:307 (1) - 很难看感觉还不如像hard那样空着换成好看点的
结尾可以放个spin 目前来看01:18:622 的绿线没有任何意义 fixed
别的……貌似真没啥了（？
排列很棒我打不了（死

美丽

xxdeathx wrote:
M4M from my queue

[Insane]
00:40:822 (1) - Don't use 3/4 sliders that ignore anything on the 1/2 tick 00:40:993 in favor of a blue 3/4 tick with nothing on it. It's much more important to map the red tick. 3/4 sliders are commonly used to emphasize the vocal in many other maps
00:43:907 (2) - This would play better if you curve it the other way. Then you could ctrl-g and adjust the position of 00:44:250 (3,4,5,6,1) - and 00:44:764 (2) - so it ends up something like this: I think it's ok now not a problem
SPOILER
00:47:679 (1) - Same thing I said earlier about 3/4 sliders. There is a very audible tick in the music at 00:47:850 that you shouldn't ignore. the same
00:51:793 (1) - 00:55:907 (1) - ^ Another thing you could do is remove the circle and change to 1/1 slider. ^
00:48:022 (2,3,4) - The bigger jump should be between 00:48:022 (2,3) - because that's where the vocal is strong. fixed
01:07:307 (1) - I really discourage having a spinner here. 1/2 beat between spinner and next object is allowed but extremely hard to play, and already the spinner is really short and easy to spin 100 or 50 on. Plus, the tick it ends on is already arbitrary so you don't really need it. Ok deleted it
Mapset is decent, good luck.

Thanks

streeteelf

439 posts

Joined May 2013

streeteelf 2014-10-04T22:57:30+00:00

SEE's Modding Queue

Sry for delay.

[General]

-I think it's Short Version, so you must include this in title: Keep Going! (Short Ver.)

[Sharlo's Normal]

-01:13:736 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Make this, it's better for me, like in a mirror:

[Narcissu's Hard]

-00:12:707 (3,4,5,6) - Not too hard for this diff?
-00:34:822 (6,7,8) - ^

[LUNATiC]

-I'd only make this diff more "jumpy", because term Lunatic is from Touhou where on Difficulty "Lunatic" you have to be always in move. Except this diff is good, I don't know what to mod here.

Sry for this kind of small mod, but I really don't know how it could be impoved more.

Good luck~

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2014-10-05T02:14:14+00:00

其实做个easy不是rule不rule的问题，多为玩家着想
譬如你这首歌很好听啊，图也看起来不错，有人想去打，可是最低也只有1.96的normal，有些人打不动啊怎么办，不打了
说到底你的歌只有1分多钟，而且节奏这么鲜明，做个easy亚不难，算我慢的做个tv的easy要6个小时，你的应该不用吧
很多歌normal都低于2.0，可是他们还是有easy，长歌可能还可以原谅，但在这首剪切的歌里，不应该这么偷懒。

Sakaue Nachi

558 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Sakaue Nachi 2014-10-05T05:13:47+00:00

Sellenite wrote:
其实做个easy不是rule不rule的问题，多为玩家着想
譬如你这首歌很好听啊，图也看起来不错，有人想去打，可是最低也只有1.96的normal，有些人打不动啊怎么办，不打了
说到底你的歌只有1分多钟，而且节奏这么鲜明，做个easy亚不难，算我慢的做个tv的easy要6个小时，你的应该不用吧
很多歌normal都低于2.0，可是他们还是有easy，长歌可能还可以原谅，但在这首剪切的歌里，不应该这么偷懒。

要做的话估计又要找人了，我做低难度渣渣;w;

Number5

245 posts

Joined March 2014

Number5 2014-10-08T13:53:13+00:00

Sakaue Nachi wrote:
Sellenite wrote:
其实做个easy不是rule不rule的问题，多为玩家着想
譬如你这首歌很好听啊，图也看起来不错，有人想去打，可是最低也只有1.96的normal，有些人打不动啊怎么办，不打了
说到底你的歌只有1分多钟，而且节奏这么鲜明，做个easy亚不难，算我慢的做个tv的easy要6个小时，你的应该不用吧
很多歌normal都低于2.0，可是他们还是有easy，长歌可能还可以原谅，但在这首剪切的歌里，不应该这么偷懒。
要做的话估计又要找人了，我做低难度渣渣;w;

easy什么的我可以做个GD吗

Number5

245 posts

Joined March 2014

Number5 2014-10-08T14:22:23+00:00

From Q~
[General]
加tag
"恋色マスタースパーク"
"Eiyashou"
"Imperishable Night"
"th08"
[L]
00:10:479 (8) - 加一个NC也许会好一点因为这里是重音提前
00:56:250 (2) - 离note1可以近一点感觉不会那么突兀手感也会好一点
00:58:993 (2) - ^
01:04:822 (5) - Blanket可以包好一点

[H]
00:10:822 (2,3) - 可能有点难读了

[N]
00:56:764 (5,6) - 改滑条可能会容易读一点打normal的可能不是很适应这种节奏
01:05:507 (1,2,1) - 这里的1/2的形式可以换一下也可以不换

最后这张图质量是比较好的没有发现什么有太大疑问的地方

Sakaue Nachi

558 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Sakaue Nachi 2014-10-08T14:22:38+00:00

Number5 wrote:
easy什么的我可以做个GD吗

应该不用了，现在这样就行了，不想太麻烦

Sakaue Nachi

558 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Sakaue Nachi 2014-10-10T15:05:18+00:00

Number5 wrote:
From Q~
[General]
加tag
"恋色マスタースパーク"
"Eiyashou"
"Imperishable Night"
"th08"
[L]
00:10:479 (8) - 加一个NC也许会好一点因为这里是重音提前
00:56:250 (2) - 离note1可以近一点感觉不会那么突兀手感也会好一点
00:58:993 (2) - ^
01:04:822 (5) - Blanket可以包好一点

最后这张图质量是比较好的没有发现什么有太大疑问的地方

fixed tags & blanket, thank you

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Mei 2014-10-11T07:13:19+00:00

我看了下L感覺沒啥好摸的.-.能不能射個星就走啊

Sakaue Nachi

558 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Sakaue Nachi 2014-10-11T07:20:26+00:00

Mei wrote:
我看了下L感覺沒啥好摸的.-.能不能射個星就走啊

N H也可以看看啊，不水一下骗个KD么._.

Sakaue Nachi

558 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Sakaue Nachi 2014-10-11T10:44:55+00:00

Mei wrote:
我看了下L感覺沒啥好摸的.-.能不能射個星就走啊

顺便问下有空摸下这图吗？没空就算了https://osu.ppy.sh/s/208095

-[Hikari]-

84 posts

Joined February 2014

-[Hikari]- 2014-10-11T12:46:11+00:00

Hello. Mod from Paper Modding Team.

[Narcissu's~~辅导员~~ Hard]

00:03:793 (1) - ……为啥不直接弄个弧线滑条
00:04:479 (3) - 用滑条4旋转180度摆一个试试
00:37:050 (2) - ctrl+G
00:37:736 (4) - ^
00:58:479 (5,6,1) - 感觉这三个和滑条3有点近，向右边摆一点

[Lunatic]

00:15:107 (2,3,4,5,6) - 我觉得这样的5连可以多一些变化，至少不要这样stack在原地……可以做个小距离的移动连打
00:20:593 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ 后面还有好多……
00:33:793 (3,4) - ctrl+G
00:36:364 (6) - 再朝左下方摆一些
00:37:736 (5,6) - 5 stack 3然后6可以摆开一些
01:03:622 (4,5) - 这个接着像之前那样单点滑条，单点摆在橙色6处，然后01:04:136 (1) - 摆在现在5的那个位置
01:06:707 (2) - 改成单点
01:10:307 (3,4) - ctrl+G

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2014-10-11T12:47:43+00:00

-[Hikari]- wrote:
00:03:793 (1) - ……为啥不直接弄个弧线滑条……因為擺不下啦~
00:04:479 (3) - 用滑条4旋转180度摆一个试试……額……我覺得一直完全對稱有點土……
00:37:050 (2) - ctrl+G……平時就兩個ctrl+G會太遠的啦……我在kiai裏面都是逆向的
00:37:736 (4) - ^
00:58:479 (5,6,1) - 感觉这三个和滑条3有点近，向右边摆一点……好

Number5 wrote:
00:10:822 (2,3) - 可能有点难读了 …… 是有一點點……但是我想不到其他合適的辦法啦

streeteelf wrote:
[Narcissu's Hard]

-00:12:707 (3,4,5,6) - Not too hard for this diff?……it's hard to read …… but , when second play……it's easy
-00:34:822 (6,7,8) - ^

xxdeathx wrote:
00:10:479 (1,2,3) - What are you trying to here? Why are you having stuff start on blue ticks? …… i don't kown what should i do …… just choose a easy typesetting ……
00:12:707 (3,4,5,6) - I wouldn't use more than 2 1/4 sliders in a row in hard diff, since they are very fast and hard to read.…… yes it's hard to read …… but easy …… player can FC it when second play ……
00:19:564 (2) - Blanket is off. Move middle point to 340, 88.…… fix~
00:28:307 (4,5) - Follow the drums—have sliders start on 00:28:307 and 00:28:650 to stay consistent with 00:25:564 (4,5) - ……good idea …… but i follow vocal now……
00:33:622 (2,3) - ^
00:59:507 (3) - Lower the distance spacing a bit, this is feeling like an insane.……difficult than usual in kiai …… i think it's ok
01:08:936 (3,4) - Try to blanket so it looks neater.…… fix~

SPOILER

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 46136
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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TitleUnicode:Keep Going!
Artist:ALiCE'S EMOTiON
ArtistUnicode:ALiCE'S EMOTiON
Creator:Sakaue Nachi
Version:Narcissu's Hard
Source:Touhou
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436,80,68250,6,0,P|362:80|303:125,1,150,14|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,216,68764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
367,263,68936,2,0,P|379:299|378:336,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,69279,2,0,L|182:334,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,292,69622,6,0,B|104:240|104:240|93:146,1,150,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,72,70136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,100,70307,2,0,L|179:174,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,64,70650,2,0,L|268:144,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,52,70993,6,0,B|384:44|384:44|440:60|456:124,1,150,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,208,71507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,260,71679,2,0,P|343:297|353:333,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,208,72022,2,0,P|391:183|356:172,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,224,72364,6,0,B|160:328,1,150,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,364,72879,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,280,73050,2,0,L|14:209,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,104,73393,2,0,L|97:174,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,108,73736,6,0,P|246:76|317:94,1,150,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,180,74250,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,192,74422,2,0,L|430:165,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
505,291,74764,2,0,L|436:264,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,344,75107,6,0,P|296:363|223:348,1,150,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,260,75622,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,180,75793,2,0,L|285:248,1,75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,260,76136,5,8,0:0:0:0:
44,344,76307,1,4,0:0:0:0:
378,80,77507,5,4,0:0:0:0:
255,231,77679,1,4,0:0:0:0:
386,115,78022,5,4,0:0:0:0:
264,266,78193,1,4,0:0:0:0:

KUURAhoshi

585 posts

Joined January 2014

KUURAhoshi 2014-10-11T14:56:17+00:00

Mod Request From Kazamastar’s Modding Queue
Hello, Sakaue Nachi !
Thank’s for calling me to mod your beatmap 
Let’s get started.. sorry, short mod >.<

Sharlo’s Normal

Nothing to mod..

Narcissu's Hard

AR 7 is better
00:06:536 (1) – reshape

LUNATiC

Instead of stacking, why not making a ‘mini-stream’ ?

I’m sorry because of the short mod.. take my star..
Again, I’m sorry.. Good luck..

Sakaue Nachi

558 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Sakaue Nachi 2014-10-12T11:50:49+00:00

-[Hikari]- wrote:
Hello. Mod from Paper Modding Team.

[Lunatic]
00:15:107 (2,3,4,5,6) - 我觉得这样的5连可以多一些变化，至少不要这样stack在原地……可以做个小距离的移动连打想保持一致性
00:20:593 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ 后面还有好多……^
00:33:793 (3,4) - ctrl+G 喜欢逆向flow
00:36:364 (6) - 再朝左下方摆一些 fixed
00:37:736 (5,6) - 5 stack 3然后6可以摆开一些故意做成这效果的
01:03:622 (4,5) - 这个接着像之前那样单点滑条，单点摆在橙色6处，然后01:04:136 (1) - 摆在现在5的那个位置觉得现在可以了
01:06:707 (2) - 改成单点 ^
01:10:307 (3,4) - ctrl+G ^

谢摸

Kazamastar11 wrote:
Mod Request From Kazamastar’s Modding Queue
Hello, Sakaue Nachi !
Thank’s for calling me to mod your beatmap 
Let’s get started.. sorry, short mod >.<
Sharlo’s Normal
Nothing to mod..
Narcissu's Hard
AR 7 is better
00:06:536 (1) – reshape
LUNATiC
Instead of stacking, why not making a ‘mini-stream’ ?
I’m sorry because of the short mod.. take my star..
Again, I’m sorry.. Good luck..

No change, but still thanks for the star