Hi,
Lots of work here. Good job and good luck!
[Marathon]
- 00:18:865 (1,2,3,4) - I understand why you put 1/8 sliders here, but they're really not needed.
- 00:25:604 (1,2,3) - A triple 1/4 fits better
- 00:30:386 (2) - I would change this for a single note and 1/2 slider on the next white tick. More catchy.
- 00:34:082 (4,5) - CTRL+G those 2 notes
- 00:36:039 (4,5,1,2,3) - It would play better to have the triple before the sliders.
- 04:39:602 (5) - Make the slider end on the next red tick maybe, to follow the voice.
- 05:22:233 (1) - to 05:26:519 (3) - This part should be mapped 1/6 !!
- 06:11:101 (4) - a note then a 1/2 slider instead
- 06:12:870 (2) - I'm not fan of this overmapping
- 06:13:709 (2) - This is clearly a strong note but it's hidden in ur pattern. put 06:13:523 (1) on x:256 y:72
- 07:10:541 (3) - Reduce volume on the red tick in the middle of the slider *_*
- 07:23:212 (8) - ctrl+J ?
- 08:44:920 - add note
- 08:45:013 (6,1,2) - a stream or slider reverse instead of all this blank?
- 09:23:319 (5) - Reduce volume in the middle of the slider a bit
- 09:24:303 (7) - ^
- 09:25:041 (8) - stack with 09:25:286 (1) and :
- 09:26:270 (3) - put a reverse on this slider
- 09:48:647 (5,7) - Not a big fan of those shapes, especially the second one. For the first one, the curve start a bit too late, and the second one, it's too early.
- 09:51:720 - add note
- 09:51:844 (5,6) - timing problem here. try mapping 1/3
- 10:03:524 - add note
- 09:56:762 (5,6) - 1/3
- 10:01:802 - add note
- 10:02:294 - ^
- 12:37:328 (2) - ctrl+j
- 12:35:953 (1) - to 13:06:953 (4) - Nice section
- 12:54:078 (2) - tricky, consider removing 2 reverses
- 13:01:578 (1) - ^
- 13:28:348 (6,1) - weird spacing, put it higher, it's confusing, we don't really know if it's mapped 1/4 or wat.
- 14:15:465 (2) - uh? to fix: single note here 14:14:759 (1) - and slider 1/2 or 1/1 here 14:15:112 -
- 14:23:230 (1) - single note then slider
- 14:33:465 (1) - higher spacing here too.
- 15:05:230 (4,1) - a stream between those 2 would be cool too
Lots of work here. Good job and good luck!