Aphrodena wrote:

Hi~ Just came about this song randomly and thought it was pretty cool, so I decided to mod it. (I'm new to this, so these are just my suggestions)

|0|1|2|3|

[4K HD]
00:06:649 (6649|3) - Could add a note to |0| or |1| because it's a strong drum + guitar here
00:28:921 (28921|1) - Move to |0|

00:54:830 (54830|2) - you mapped this to the guitar
00:55:436 (55436|2) - but then this seems to follow your pattern for drums

00:56:194 (56194|3) - Add a note
00:57:709 (57709|3) to 00:59:376 (59376|1) you could add a note at the start/end of each LN, since it's HD and gives a bit of a response to the kick drum rather than the vocals too.
01:00:133 (60133|1) - Hmm, I don't see why this has 2 notes but nothing else from this section does
01:00:285 (60285|3) - isn't mapped to a sound in the song (as far as I can hear)

01:04:527 (64527|0) - move to 01:04:603 (64603|0) - play it at 25% and you can hear that the drum starts at 01:04:603 (64603|3) instead
01:14:603 (74603|2) - you missed a drum beat here
01:16:043 (76043|2) - you missed a kick drum beat here
01:16:346 (76346|3) - and here

Good luck! I love this song

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hi Takanyan
mod ready

[NM]
00:02:558 - move to 3
00:15:588 - add note
00:31:952 - delete 1 note
00:41:649 - add note
00:42:255 - ^
00:43:467 - ^
00:44:073 - ^
00:48:315 - ^
00:50:285 - ^
01:04:073 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1952913
01:04:982 - add note
01:19:830 - ^
01:21:497 - ^
01:21:649 - ^

[HD]
00:29:376 - add note
00:29:527 - ^

[MX]
00:17:406 - add note
00:25:285 - ^
00:30:739 - ^
00:34:376 - ^
00:36:043 - add note to 3
00:36:346 - ^
00:45:739 - add note to 2
00:46:043 - ^
00:56:194 - add note
00:56:800 - ^
00:59:224 - ^
00:59:830 - ^
01:01:649 - ^
01:02:255 - ^
01:07:103 - ^
01:07:255 - delete 1 note
01:08:921 - add note
01:19:830 - ^

[Shiki's SC]
00:36:043 - add note
00:37:103 - ^
00:45:739 - ^
01:25:588 - ^
01:25:891 - ^
01:26:194 - ^
01:26:497 - ^
01:26:800 - ^
01:27:406 - ^

p.s need a warning message : you can break your fingers *joke*
Good diff

Good luck !~

Sky_Demon wrote:

Hello mod by request~

key: 1|2|3|4|

NM

00:01:649 (1649|3) - move to 3
00:02:255 (2255|2) - move to 4
00:11:043 - http://puu.sh/b4w27/770b460ae1.jpg
00:14:376 - add note
00:16:043 - add note to 3
00:16:194 - add note to 2
00:21:043 - add note to 3
00:23:618 - ^
00:23:770 (23770|2) - move to 2
00:49:073 - add note to 3
00:54:073 - http://puu.sh/b4wqv/d6da53e3e4.jpg
01:07:406 - add note to 1
01:25:739 - 01:26:043 - 01:26:346 - add note

HD

00:22:406 - add note to 4
00:23:618 - ^
00:24:830 - ^
00:26:649 - add note to 3
00:42:406 - add note to 4
01:21:800 - http://puu.sh/b4wVk/dc4323d1a9.jpg
01:23:012 - http://puu.sh/b4wXj/e36f43762e.jpg
01:24:224 - http://puu.sh/b4wYX/a602c37907.jpg

MX

00:16:346 - http://puu.sh/b4x5l/97e514adb7.jpg
00:44:982 (44982|2) - Deleted
00:47:330 (47330|2) - ^
01:19:376 (79376|1) - move to 1
01:19:452 - add note to 2

Shiki's SC

00:15:588 - add note to 2
00:15:891 - ^
00:54:527 - ^
01:12:861 - add note to 1
01:20:739 - add note to 2
01:27:179 (87179|0) - Deleted
01:27:861 - http://puu.sh/b4xGg/cea7330679.jpg

Mod End ~ good luck

lZenxl wrote:

Mod by Request

[Shiki's SC]
00:06:270 (6270|1) - Move to 00:06:346 - 3rd column? | The guitar hammers here 00:06:194 (6194|2,6194|3,6346|0,6346|3) -
00:15:740 - The SV here is a bit unreadable to a large extent, I suggest to fix it
00:50:133 (50133|3,50133|1,50133|2) - Move 1/4 forward? The rhythm here feels weird to play
01:15:209 - Hammer here for vocal?

[MX]
00:41:952 (41952|3) - Shouldn't this start 1/2 earlier cause of the guitar?
00:45:058 - Add for drums?

[HD]
00:21:649 - TO 00:22:709 - It's rather weird in playing that you didn't map some of these imo
00:29:679 - Add 1 more note here? | The vocals are rather strong here
00:33:315 - Not adding anything here?
00:33:921 - Add 1 more note here? | The guitar is strong here
00:34:527 - ^

Nice HD, liking the patterning


[NM]
00:27:103 - Add a note here so that the 1/1 to 1/2 transition is smoother
00:28:315 - Add for vocal?

[EZ]
Don't think there's anything important to point out here

Good luck for this

ExUsagi wrote:

mod by reqs.. =w=)/

seems your map already got bunch of helping mods.. <3 will do general modding..

1/2/3/4

[General]
> delete file takane.png in folder

other things? seems clean..
[EZ]
00:16:346 - add on 3, then 00:16:800 (16800|2) - move to 4
00:26:043 add on 1, you hear another guitar sounds after LN sound, right?
00:27:255 ^ same case above, add on 4 or 3
00:35:285 (35285|2) - turn into LN and stop at 00:35:891 (35891|1) -
00:38:012 (38012|2,38164|0) - want to ctrl+h?
01:20:739 add 1 note in 1
01:21:043 (81043|0) - move to 3

[NM]
hmm, since this is NM, you can freely follow 1 specific instrument to layer..

00:01:497 (1497|1,1649|2,2255|3) - ==a might want to fully follow guitar sounds.. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1964628
00:03:770 add on 4
00:06:649 (6649|3) - add on 1
00:15:285 (15285|1) - add on 3
00:54:073 (54073|0,54224|0,54376|0,54527|1) - ppl will like something like 2 3 2 3 pattern : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1964634
01:09:830 (69830|1) - add ( hear strong sound? cymbal sounds? )
01:11:043 (71043|1) - ^
01:14:679 (74679|3) - ^^
01:18:618 (78618|0) - not really loud sounds you can remove it

[HD]
you can add more 1/4 stream in more spot
00:03:846 - add
00:04:149 - ^
00:46:421 - ^

00:11:497 (11497|2) - add on 4 for strong sound
00:39:376 (39376|3) - ^

00:50:436 (50436|2,50436|1) - to 1 & 4
00:54:527 (54527|1) - not recommended to layer this, remove?
00:55:285 (55285|3) - instead above, you might want to add 1 more notes here (first kiai shot!)
01:00:133 (60133|1) - ^

01:04:830 (64830|3,64906|2) - switch those notes, 3 to 4, and 4 to 3, then 01:04:982 (64982|1) - add on 3 http://puu.sh/b7536.jpg

01:09:830 (69830|1) - add 2 notes (at least 1)
01:12:255 (72255|1) - add 1 note
01:13:164 (73164|2) - ^

01:14:073 (74073|0,74073|3,74679|2,74679|3) - http://puu.sh/b757L.jpg

01:14:830 (74830|1) - move forward to 01:14:982 (74982|2) -
01:19:527 (79527|2) - add 1 note
01:21:800 (81800|1) - add 1 note

[MX]
00:03:618 (3618|3) - remove, no need to layer that
00:06:649 (6649|1) - strong sound, add 1 note
00:11:497 (11497|0) - add 1 note
00:38:239 (38239|2) - do you hear a sound there? remove..
00:38:315 - add 1 note
00:39:376] - ^
00:40:739 - ^
00:41:952 (41952|0) - move backward to 00:41:800 (41800|1) -
00:43:012 - add
00:48:012 - add on 3 or 4? strong sound

[ shiki's SC ]
hardcore.. some part just a bit.. ==a overmapped? (overchord is fine IMO, but you need to avoid mapping in silent part)
try to prove yourself with 50% / 75% playback rate (press down arrow to adjust)

(*oiya takane, mungkin lu harus cek mod ini untuk diff HD & MX, gw takut sebelumnya ada yg kelewatin, just in case your diffs isn't overmapped too)

00:25:209 (25209|1) - remove
00:25:664 (25664|0) - ^
00:25:815 (25815|2) - ^
00:37:785 (37785|2) - ^
00:38:088 (38088|0,38088|2,38239|0,38239|2) - ==a not sure if you add this for adding the curve difficulty or not, i cant hear sound there.. remove
00:40:209 (40209|2,40361|0,40512|0) - ^ same, can't hear any.. (you might tricked by some echoes from those drum trill)
00:45:361 (45361|3,45512|2) - ^
00:46:118 (46118|1) - ^
00:47:027 (47027|2) - ^
orz too many of them..
00:47:330 (47330|2,47482|2) - remove
00:47:785 (47785|2,47785|3) - remove.. >:I
00:54:073 (54073|0,54224|3,54376|0) - overchord (this is sc indeed, but overchord isn't best way to layer lower sound), remove
01:13:694 (73694|2,73694|1,73997|0,73997|3) - aarght.. remoove.. >:I

o__o 01:19:414 (79414|0,79489|0) - can you explain this 1/8? there's no exact 1/8 guitar stream there..
01:20:209 (80209|1,80626|2,80702|2) - same case above.. o__o man
01:21:724 (81724|1) - highly recommend to remove

anyway, don't take this wrong, i still newbie in mapping too, and sorry if i am too blunt this case, but for your chart sake, please.. don't put notes in silence part, you can use lower playback rate to check how many notes you should put in a stream to avoid overmapping....

00:25:740 add
00:25:891 ^
00:46:421 - drum roll, add
01:15:815 - drum roll, add
01:16:043 you can add more notes instead making free space like this

[Overall]
nice song is nice for nice chart.. <3 good luck on rank!

[ M o m o ] wrote:

Hi Takane o/, sorry for delay >.<
Columns 1 2 3 4

MX

00:06:952 (6952|3) - delete
00:09:073 (9073|1) - move to 1 and 00:09:224 (9224|3) - delete
00:11:649 (11649|1) - delete and 00:11:800 (11800|3) - move to 2
00:25:740 - You like it? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1994689
00:28:921 - to 00:30:436 - You like it? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1994705 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1994708

SC

00:05:739 - to 00:06:346 - You like it? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1994724
00:08:618 (8618|2) - move to 2 and 00:08:770 (8770|0) - delete
00:09:376 (9376|2) - delete and 00:09:376 (9376|1) - move to 1
00:14:224 (14224|2) - delete
00:19:527 (19527|1) - move to 3
00:21:194 (21194|0) - extends this LN to 00:21:497 -
00:21:497 (21497|2) - delete
00:30:285 (30285|2) - move to 1 and 00:30:588 (30588|1) - move to 3
00:34:982 - To 00:35:891 - I think this is better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1994781
00:43:315 (43315|1) - delete
00:50:436 (50436|1) - move to 3 and... 00:50:739 - to 00:51:497 - I thin this is better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1994794
00:51:800 (51800|2) - delete
00:55:588 - To 01:12:255 - Re-edit chords in red line >.<

Good luck \o/, nice map .

Jona18 wrote:

yo! takane !

here's some mods for you
sorry for the long delay and sorry for my offline for a full 2 month... im reall busy

column : 0 1 2 3

[EZ]
nothing important to mod here :I

[NM]
00:44:679 - add note
00:50:436 - ^
00:59:830 - ^
00:55:588 - ^
00:56:194 - ^
00:56:800 - ^
00:58:012 - ^
00:58:618 - ^
00:57:709 - ^
00:59:224 - ^
01:00:436 - ^
01:01:043 - ^
01:13:164 - ^
01:13:315 (73315|0) - move to 01:13:467

[HD]
00:59:224 - add note
01:17:103 - ^
01:18:315 - ^
01:18:618 - ^
01:18:770 - ^

[MX]
00:54:982 - add note
01:20:436 - ^

[Shiki's SC]
00:06:649 - add note
00:53:846 - ^
01:25:739 - ^
01:26:346 - ^
01:27:255 - ^

Kyousuke- wrote:

halo takane~
mod by request.
Column 1 2 3 4

lu bakal kebanjiran mod di diff HD

[General]
Butuh mod di bagian SV! *gw blom bsa mod SV :v

EZ, NM, HD, Shiki's SC unchecklist the widescreen support *because has no storyboard on this map

NM -> HP = 7
HD -> HP = 7

EZ

00:00:740 (740|1) - pindah ke 4
00:01:346 (1346|2) - pindah ke 4, more hand balance?
00:02:558 - add note di 1, karena ada suara snare
00:02:861 (2861|3) - pindah ke 1
00:04:679 (4679|3,4982|0,5285|3) - ctrl + H karena yg awal patterny ud kyk gtu
00:04:982 - add note di 2
00:06:649 - add note di 4
00:09:527 (9527|2) - pindah ke 4 ikutin suara drum yg sebelumnya 00:08:921 (8921|3) -
00:10:740 (10740|1) - pindah ke 3 ^
00:14:982 - add note di 3
00:16:043 - add note di 1
00:19:830 (19830|3,20436|0) - ctrl + h
00:21:043 (21043|0) - pindah ke 4
00:23:467 (23467|3,24073|0) - ctrl + h
00:26:043 (26043|2) - pindah ke 1
00:27:861 (27861|1) - ganti ke LN sampe 00:28:467 - sini
00:29:679 - add note di 1
00:30:891 (30891|1) - pindah ke 1
00:30:891 - add note di 4
00:31:346 (31346|2,31649|3) - ctrl + h
00:31:649 (31649|0) - hapus. add LN di 3
00:32:103 (32103|0) - pindah ke 2
00:33:164 - add note di 3
00:33:770 - add note di 2
^ kalo itu udh, 00:33:618 (33618|0,33770|1,33921|2) - ctrl + h
00:34:679 - add note di 3
00:40:436 - add note di 3
00:42:255 - add note di 3
00:43:467 - add note di 4
00:44:679 - add note di 3
00:44:982 - add note di 4
00:53:164 - add note di 1
00:55:285 - add note di 4
00:56:800 (56800|1) - pindah ke 1
01:21:346 - add note di 2
01:21:649 - add note di 3
01:27:861 - add note di 4

NM

00:02:406 - add note di 2
00:03:467 (3467|1) - pindah ke 3
00:03:618 (3618|2,3770|3,3921|2,4073|1,4224|0,4679|2) - ctrl + h
00:04:830 - add note di 3
00:06:800 (6800|1) - pindah ke 00:06:952 - bawahnya
00:12:103 - add note di 2
00:14:603 - add note di 2
00:14:679 (14679|1) - pindah ke 4
00:22:406 - add note di 4
00:23:770 (23770|2) - hapus
00:25:436 (25436|3) - LN nya dipanjangin sampe 00:26:043 -
00:28:467 (28467|3) - hapus. trus add note di 1 sama 4
00:28:618 - add note di 2
00:28:921 (28921|0,29073|1,29224|2,29679|0) - ctrl +h
^ kalo udah 00:29:224 (29224|1) - dipanjangin sampai 00:29:679 -
00:30:739 - add note di 1
00:31:573 (31573|1) - pindah ke 00:31:497 - bawahnya
00:33:770 (33770|0) - pindah ke 4
00:34:527 - add note di 4
00:36:800 - add note di 3
00:38:315 - add note di 3
00:40:739 (40739|0) - pindah ke 4
00:41:043 (41043|1,41043|3,41346|2,41649|1,41649|0) - ctrl + h
00:41:952 (41952|3) - pindah ke 1
00:42:709 (42709|2) - pindah ke 4
00:43:467 (43467|0) - pindah ke 2
00:43:921 (43921|3,44073|1,44073|2,44224|3) - ctrl + h
00:51:649 (51649|1) - pindah ke 3
00:51:952 (51952|2) - pindah ke 4
00:52:861 (52861|1) - pindah ke 4
00:55:285 (55285|1) - pindah ke 1
00:55:891 (55891|3) - pindah ke 1
00:56:800 (56800|2) - pindah ke 4
00:57:103 (57103|1) - pindah ke 3
00:57:406 (57406|1) - pindah ke 1, 00:57:709 (57709|1) - pindah ke 1
00:58:012 (58012|2) - hapus
00:58:618 (58618|3) - pindah ke 3, 00:59:224 (59224|2) - pindah ke 4
^ kalo udah, 00:58:012 (58012|0,58315|1,58618|2,58618|0,58921|1,59224|0,59224|3) - ctrl + h
00:59:527 (59527|3) - pindah ke 2
00:59:830 (59830|2) - pindah ke 4
01:08:012 (68012|3) - pindah ke 2
01:08:921 (68921|2) - pindah ke 1
01:09:224 (69224|1) - pindah ke 4
01:09:527 (69527|2) - pindah ke 1
01:09:830 (69830|1) - pindah ke 4
01:11:800 (71800|3) - pindah ke 1
01:17:103 (77103|0) - pindah ke 4
01:16:497 (76497|2) - pindah ke 4
01:16:649 (76649|0) - pindah ke 3
01:16:800 (76800|1) - pindah ke 1
01:17:103 (77103|0) - pindah ke 3
01:18:315 (78315|3) - pindah ke 2
01:18:467 - add note di 4
01:19:527 (79527|2) - pindah ke 4
01:19:830 (79830|1) - pindah ke 3
01:20:133 (80133|2) - pindah ke 4
01:21:649 (81649|0) - pindah ke 3
01:21:800 (81800|2) - pindah ke 1
01:22:255 (82255|2) - pindah ke 1, 01:22:255 (82255|3) - hapus
01:22:558 (82558|1) - pindah ke 4
01:22:861 - add note di 1
01:23:012 (83012|2) - pindah ke 2, 01:23:012 (83012|3) - pindah ke 3
01:24:073 - add note di 4
01:24:679 (84679|2) - pindah ke 1
01:25:285 - add note di 3
01:25:436 - pindah ke 4
01:26:649 (86649|2) - pindah ke 2
01:26:649 (86649|1,86649|0,86952|3,86952|1,87255|1,87255|0,87558|3,87558|1) - ctrl + h
01:27:861 (87861|0) - pindah ke 4, 01:27:861 - add note di 1

HD

00:01:497 (1497|1) - pindah ke 1, 00:01:497 (1497|2) - pindah ke 4
00:01:649 (1649|1) - ^ 00:01:649 (1649|2) - ^
00:03:618 (3618|2) - pindah ke 1
00:03:770 (3770|1) - pindah ke 4
00:15:588 (15588|1) - pindah ke 4
00:21:649 (21649|2) - hapus
00:26:800 (26800|0) - hapus
00:27:255 (27255|0) - pindah ke 4, add note di 3
00:27:406 (27406|3) - hapus, 00:27:406 (27406|2) - pindah ke 2
00:28:012 (28012|0) - pindah ke 00:27:861 - bawahnya
00:28:164 - add note di 1
00:28:467 - add note di 4
00:28:618 (28618|3) - hapus
00:29:073 (29073|0,29224|3,29376|0) - hapus
00:29:527 (29527|3) - pindah ke 2
00:29:679 (29679|0) - pindah ke 4
00:28:921 (28921|0,28921|1,28921|3,29073|2,29224|1,29376|2,29527|1,29679|3,29679|2) - ctrl + h
00:31:649 (31649|2) - pindah ke 2, 00:31:800 (31800|2) - pindah ke 1
00:32:861 (32861|0,33012|3,33164|0) - hapus
00:33:315 (33315|1) - pindah ke 1
00:33:921 (33921|2) - pindah ke 00:33:770 - kolom ke 2
00:33:921 (33921|1) - pindah ke 3
00:36:497 (36497|0) - pindah ke 3
00:37:255 (37255|1) - pindah ke 1
00:37:406 (37406|2) - pindah ke 2
00:38:770 - add note di 2
00:39:527 - add note di 3
00:41:194 - add note di 3
00:41:346 (41346|2) - pindah ke 4
00:43:012 (43012|1,43164|0,43164|2,43315|3,43467|2,43467|0) - ctrl + h
00:43:618 (43618|3) - pindah ke 3
00:51:649 (51649|1) - pindah ke 3
00:51:952 (51952|2) - pindah ke 4
00:52:255 (52255|1,52406|1) - pindah ke 3
01:03:164 (63164|3) - pindah ke 2
01:03:467 (63467|1) - pindah ke 1
01:08:467 (68467|2) - pindah ke 4
01:09:679 (69679|3) - pindah ke 1
01:09:830 (69830|0) - hapus
01:13:164 (73164|3) - hapus
01:15:285 (75285|1) - pindah ke 1
01:15:436 (75436|0) - pindah ke 2
01:15:588 (75588|1) - pindah ke 3
01:16:194 (76194|3,76194|0,76346|1,76497|2,76649|0,76800|3,76800|1) - ctrl + h
01:18:315 (78315|0,78315|1,78315|3,78618|1,78618|3,78618|0,78770|2,78921|3,79073|0,79224|2,79224|1) - ctrl + h
01:20:436 (80436|2) - pindah ke 1
01:20:588 (80588|3) - pindah ke 2
01:20:739 (80739|0) - pindah ke 1
01:22:103 - add note di 1
01:23:012 (83012|3) - pindah ke 2
01:23:618 (83618|2) - pindah ke 4
01:24:073 (84073|2) - pindah ke 1
01:24:224 (84224|0) - pindah ke 3
01:24:224 (84224|3) - pindah ke 2
01:25:436 - suggesting http://puu.sh/bscUf/95b11ae056.jpg

MX

khusus yg MX, ud lumayan bgs. perhatikan patternnya dan penempatan double~triple-note (pake 25% playback rate)
tinggal di arrange sedikit kog =w=

Shiki's SC

=w=)b

Sorry klo mod nya ga membantu ><

gudlak~

- [ S o r a ] - wrote:

hi~ :3
by you request now xD

[EZ]
00:21:194 (21194|2) - move this to 1 and add note at 2 , seem loudly (cymbal and guitar sounds)
00:26:800 (26800|0) - this LN should end at here 00:27:103 i guess...
00:27:861 (27861|1) - ^ end at here 00:28:315
00:29:679 (29679|3) - you should remove this , it the same volumn as this 00:28:467 (28467|2) and 00:27:255 (27255|3)
00:31:649 (31649|2) - end at here seem better 00:31:952
00:34:679 (34679|2) - ahh.. i don't heard the sound here so , you should remove this too :3
00:39:376 (39376|2) - move to 4 or 1
00:59:224 (59224|2) - move to 4 and 00:59:830 (59830|3) - move to 3 or 2 (hand balance)
01:04:679 (64679|2) - move to 1 or 4 (recommend 1)
01:04:982 - add note at 4 (cymbal , check this 00:55:285 (55285|2,55285|3) it the same sound) and 01:02:558 (62558|1) - end this LN at 01:04:679 It better , i guess
01:05:285 (65285|3) - move to 2
01:21:800 (81800|1) - end at 01:22:103 since the guitar sounds is end at here through
01:23:012 (83012|3) - ^ same here >> end here 01:23:315
01:24:224 (84224|2) - ^ >> 01:24:527
01:25:436 (85436|0) - change to short note ,its not the long sound , don't use LN as short sound. :3

[NM]
I feel strange with this diff. Dx
so i'll check this diff. a little
00:14:603 (14603|1) - remove , not need here , reduce diffculty
00:49:830 (49830|0,50058|2,50285|1) - remove all these , seem this is too hard , i guess
00:50:739 - add note at 3 for cymbal

[HD]
00:17:406 - add note at 3 (hithat) as this >>> 00:18:012 (18012|3,18012|2)
00:06:497 - lol too fast >> shift 2.00x <> 0.50x and change 1.5x
change all 2.0x SV to 1.4x
00:26:497 (26497|1) - remove , not strong enough
00:28:921 (28921|2) - ^
00:46:649 (46649|2,46952|2) - ^
:3

[MX]
00:23:618 - add note at 3 , the guitar sounds
00:26:043 - add note at 3 , cymbal
00:31:649 (31649|2) - move to 4 to prevent from jack pattern
00:34:982 (34982|3) - move to 2
00:35:436 (35436|1) - move to 3 seem better , i guess
00:44:224 - add note here , cymbal sound
00:50:739 - add note at 3 (4 notes) seem this louder than 00:50:285 (50285|1,50285|2,50285|3,50436|2,50436|1,50436|0)
01:15:285 until last - try to remove one of triple-notes > like this 01:15:285 (75285|3,75285|2,75285|0,75436|0,75436|2,75436|1)

[Shiki's SC]
nothing to mod too much , since its SC through
00:02:103 (2103|2,2103|1) - remove
00:03:315 (3315|2) - ^ and 00:04:527 (4527|2) - there are no sounds lol so , remove these is the best way :3
00:09:073 (9073|3) - this LN should end at 00:09:527 since the guitar sound end at here , and 00:09:527 (9527|3) - move to 1
00:13:921 (13921|0) - remove
00:17:558 - add note at 3 > 00:18:770 (18770|1,18770|2,18770|0) seem you forgot this note xD
00:28:467 - add note at 2 and 00:28:315 (28315|1) - move to 1 (prevent from jack pattern lol)
just a little check for this diff. lol
too many notes that place without the sound (ghost note)
try to find and remove it

Good luck :3

hokin1995 wrote:

hello O/
sorry for delay
Here is my short and poor mod lol

Poor mod

[General]

column:1|2|3|4

[EZ]
00:05:436 (5436|1) - move to 3 the sound same with 00:05:739 (5739|2,6194|2)
00:23:467 (23467|0) - move to 2
00:27:255 (27255|3) - move to 3
00:28:467 (28467|2) - move to 4
00:38:921 (38921|2,39376|3) - move 1 column to the left

[NM]
00:33:012 (33012|3,33164|2,33315|1) - move 1 column to the left
00:36:497 (36497|1) - move to 4
00:34:679 (34679|0) - move to 00:34:830
00:35:285 (35285|0) - move to 2
01:25:436 (85436|0,85739|3,86043|2,86346|0,86649|2,86952|1,87255|3,87558|0) - I suggest to change to short notes

[HD]
00:06:497 - SV: x2.00>x1.20 or 1.30 beacuse x2.00 is too sudden
00:15:588 - ^ same reason
00:54:982 - ^ same reason

00:16:043 (16043|0) - move to 2
00:34:679 (34679|0) - remove
00:39:527 (39527|2) - ^
00:41:952 (41952|3) - ^
00:43:164 (43164|3,43164|1) - why double notes? remove
00:44:376 (44376|2) - ^
00:48:770 - add note at 3
00:51:800 - ^


[MX]
00:06:497 - SV: x2.00>x1.20 or 1.30 beacuse x2.00 is too sudden
00:15:588 - ^ same reason
00:54:982 - ^ same reason

00:06:800 (6800|2) - remove? I can't hear sound here
00:11:649 (11649|2) - ^
00:13:315 (13315|2,13315|3,13467|0,13467|1,13619|2,13619|3,13770|1,13770|0) - Ctrl+j
00:34:679 (34679|0) - remove
00:41:194 - add a note at 2
00:41:952 (41952|3) - remove
00:43:164 (43164|2) - ^
00:44:376 (44376|2) - ^
00:51:649 (51649|2) - move to 00:51:800
01:13:770 (73770|0) - move to 2
01:14:830 (74830|2) - remove

[Shiki's SC]
00:06:497 - SV: x2.00>x1.20 or 1.30 beacuse x2.00 is too sudden
00:54:982 - ^ same reason

01:02:709 (62709|1) - remove?
Nice diff

Good luck

Mysticalia wrote:

Random mod~

Mod

Columns = 0/1/2/3

1. "add one / delete one" (no numbers) = the number of notes to add to an open column (column choice up to you)
2. <time A> / <time B> = timeA and timeB
3. 1/2/3/4 = number of notes at the time position.
4. Sections are in brackets e.g. (TimeA to TimeB )

[Timing/AIMod/Offset/BPM/Setup]

1. Clear~

[EZ]

1. 00:03:770 - Add one for consistency with 00:02:558 / 00:04:982?
2. 00:11:194 - Add one for pattern consistency with 00:16:043?
3. 00:11:497 / 00:16:346 / 00:57:709 / 01:00:133 / 01:02:558 / 01:07:406 / 01:09:830 / 01:11:043 / 01:12:255 / 01:14:679 - these seem like the same strength as 00:06:649 - Add a note to each for consistency? (optional, since this is easy difficulty)
4. 00:26:043 - Add one for consistency with 00:21:194? (same sound, but one is a double and the other is a single (the end of the LN doesn't count as a proper 'pressed' note)
5. 00:30:891 - This feels slightly random since this is the only occasion where you use doubles for this sound in this section (inconsistent with 00:29:679 / 00:28:647 etc) - delete one?
6. 00:50:133 - Move this to the previous blue line since I think you're following the 3/4 note?

[NM]

1. 00:06:952 - Maybe move to 00:07:255 to follow drums (since the drum is louder in this section)?
2. 00:18:012 - Delete one (inconsistent with 00:19:224 - same sound)?
3. 00:18:770 - Replace with LN to follow guitar (end at 00:19:073) - or it feels kinda inconsistent?
4. 00:25:133 / 00:25:436 - What're these two LNs following? Maybe replace with normal notes:
   1. Add note at 00:25:285 / 00:25:436, then
   2. Add LN at 00:25:740 ending at 00:26:043 to follow guitar?
5. 00:26:497 to 00:35:891 - Not sure what your LNs are doing at all, check this section...
   1. The one at 00:27:255 seems to be following guitar...
   2. but the one at 00:31:649 seems to be following vocal...
   3. and I can't hear anything that the 00:26:800 / 00:29:224 LNs are following. (if 00:29:224 is following vocal, then have it start at 00:29:376 instead)
6. 00:39:376 / 00:39:982 (optional) / 00:40:739 - Add one (strong beat - emphasis)
7. 00:41:800 - Add one, strongish sound
8. 00:41:952 - Delete (ghost position)
9. 00:42:861 / 00:45:285 - Add one (inconsistent with 00:43:467 / 00:44:073 etc (same instrument))
10. 00:47:255 - Add one (inconsistent with 00:46:952 / 00:46:649 / etc (same instrument))
11. 00:48:012 - Add one for emphasis (music burst)
12. 00:49:073 - Add something here to follow guitar (optional)?
13. 00:54:527 - Delete one since this sounds about the same strength as the previous 3 notes?
14. 01:01:149 / 01:02:255 / 01:02:861 - Add one (instrumental consistency for this section)?
15. 01:12:255 - Add one for consistency with 01:09::830 / 01:11:043?
16. 01:23:012 / 01:24:224 - Delete the normal note? (This is the same as the ending section (01:25:739 to 01:27:558) but you've used two notes instead of one.

[HD]

1. 00:06:043 - Maybe delete one since the sound isn't as strong here as some of your other doubles?
2. 00:06:649 - Add one (needs more emphasis - stronger sound than your double notes)?
3. 00:06:800 / 00:24:982 / 00:28:618 - Ghost positions (delete)?
4. 00:26:043 - Add one (consistency with 00:24:830 / 00:23:618 - same sound)?
5. 00:27:861 /00:28:164 - Not sure why these are doubles since you only use them for guitar in this section? In my opinion this needs to be less emphasised than the guitar since the sound isn't too strong.
6. 00:29:527 / 00:30:133 / 00:31:346 / 00:33:164 / - Add one (instrumental consistency with 00:28:911)?
7. 00:51:649 / 00:51:800 - Move one column left to avoid repetitiveness? (optional)
8. (00:52:861 to 00:54:073 ) - I'm not sure if the pattern you're using fits the music since you're using broken stairs (which is a 4-note pattern) - so there's this awkward break in the middle (00:53:515) because the drum pattern is 5-5-4. Maybe follow that instead of using a pattern suited to 4-note repetitions only?
9. 00:54:073 - Needs an extra note since this is the same strength as the next three positions:
   1. Maybe make a stair pattern from left to right at 00:53:770 (53770|0,53846|1,53921|3,53997|2), then
   2. Add note to column 2 at 00:54:073?
10. 01:02:255 / 01:07:103 - Needs an extra note for instrumental consistency with 01:03:467?
11. 01:07:406 - Add one for consistency with 01:04:982? (same relative position)
12. 01:08:618 - ^ (check with 01:06:194 )
13. 01:09:830 - ^ (check with 01:04:982 )
14. 01:14:679 / 01:14:982 - double-triple seems like a wrong emphasis especially since 01:14:679 is stronger than 01:14:982 - so maybe use triple-double instead?
15. 01:18:618 - Overlayered instrumental consistency break - maybe delete one? (refer to e.g. 00:17:406 / 01:16:194 - same instrument)
16. 01:19:830 - Add one (instrumental consistency break - refer to e.g 01:19:224 / 01:18:012 - same instrument)
17. 01:22:103 - Inconsistent with 01:23:315 / 01:24:527 - either delete one here or add one to 01:23:315 / 01:24:527?
18. 01:27:861 - Add either a note or an LN (ending at 01:28:467) here - there's a cymbal here which makes it a stronger sound than the previous notes.

[MX]

1. 00:03:846 - Missing drum note? (optional)
2. 00:16:346 - Same sound as 00:15:588 - maybe add one?
3. 00:17:558 / 00:18:770 / 00:19:982 - These three sound the same - so maybe add one to 00:19:982?
4. 00:20:588 - This LN should probably be at 00:21:043? The guitar pattern seems to be LN -> note -> 3 joined LNs.
5. 00:22:406 - Check with 00:23:618 / 00:24:830 - missing LN here.
6. 00:33:164 / 00:33:315 - Listen carefully to the sound at these two points - maybe doubles instead of triple-single might be better?
7. (00:33:012 to 00:33:467 ) - this rhythm is repeated at (00:33:618 to 00:34:073 ), and then repeated again at (00:34:224 to 00:34:527 ) - so maybe follow this in your mapping?
8. 00:35:891 - Needs an extra note for consistency with 00:36:194 / 00:36:497 etc, since you use triples for that instrument in this section.
9. (00:52:861 to 00:54:073 ) - This section looks good, but there seems to be a pattern break on the third trill:
   1. The first trill is column 0-1-0-1-0
   2. The second trill is column 1-2-1-2-1
   3. Following this pattern, the third trill at 00:53:770 I'd expect to be on 2-3-2-3-2 instead of 2-1-2-1-2.
   4. So maybe something like this - note the position of the third trill and the two triples which come afterwards: http://puu.sh/bFdux/f57f009d41.jpg
10. (00:57:406 to 00:57:709 ) - I'd expect this to be corresponding to (00:54:982 to 00:55:285 ). In any case, I have no idea why there's a double on 00:57:558 - especially since that's a ghost position.
11. 01:04:982 - Missing a note for consistency - check with the start of every vocal sentence e.g. 00:55:285 ).
12. 01:14:527 - Not sure if the sound is strong enough for a triple - maybe use doubles instead (delete one)?
13. 01:17:861 - Same strength as 01:18:164 - so why is one a double and the other one a single?
14. 01:19:830 - Missing a note for instrument consistency.
15. (01:21:649 to 01:25:436 ) - Inconsistent layering - for example:
    1. Check 01:21:800 vs 01:23:012 vs 01:24:224 vs 01:25:436 - more or less the same sound but you've used single-double-double-triple - maybe change all to triple for consistency with the ending?
    2. The triples in the middle of an LN - such as 01:21:649 / 01:22:255 / 01:22:558 etc - can probably be made into doubles for contrast with the guitar triples later on?
    3. 01:28:467 / 01:28:543 / 01:28:618 - Delete the normal notes - just the LN release would be fine, since the guitar is fading here so you don't really need to map it...

[Shiki's SC]

1. 00:03:315 / 00:04:527 - Missing a note? Those small LNs usually have another note on them. Inconsistent with 00:02:103.
2. The four guitar holds are actually 00:02:255 / 00:02:406 / 00:02:558 / 00:02:709 (and their corresponding positions later on). I understand if you don't want to hold the last note because of the drum trill, but this means two things:
   1. Your 00:02:103 LN isn't following anything, and
   2. Your 00:05:133 LN is inconsistent - either delete this or make a note into an LN at 00:02:709 and 00:03:921.
3. 00:06:043 - A double would work fine here - same strength as 00:05:891.
4. (00:06:952 to 00:08:618 ) - Your note rhythm for this section is 2-3-3-2-2-3-1-2-2-3-3-2, and this section repeats twice:
   1. Compare this with the next section, where the music first repeats itself (00:09:376 to 00:11:043) - your rhythm is 1-3-3-2-2-3-2-1-1-3-3-2.
   2. Also compare with your rhythm for the second repeat (00:11:800 to 00:13:467) - 1-3-3-2-2-3-2-2-2-3-2-2.
   3. See the differences? Taking contrast and consistency into account, I'd suggest following this pattern for all three - 1-3-3-2-2-3-2-2-2-3-3-2.
5. 00:15:285 - Guitar - make column 1 into an LN, end at 00:15:588?
6. 00:30:891 - ^ - End at next red line at 00:31:194 (also move your column 2 note there to column 0)?
7. (00:33:012 to 00:33:467 ) - This also repeats twice - first repeat is (00:33:618 to 00:34:073 ) and second repeat is (00:34:224 to 00:34:830 ) - The first repeat is inconsistent with the other two repeats where your rhythm is 2-3-(2+LN), so consider matching this section with the other two.
8. 00:40:739 - Guitar - Make the middle note on column 1 into an LN ending at 00:41:043?
9. (00:49:527 to 00:50:285 ) - Listen carefully - I think they're the same strength - so maybe triples for all of them?
10. 00:52:558 / 00:52:709 - Probably doubles is enough, no random really loud drum here.
11. (00:52:861 to 00:54:073 ) - Again, the same pattern is repeated three times - and from the last two pattern repeats you're doing a 3-1-2 rhythm - but this might not leave any contrast between this section and the next, nor does it show any consistency within the pattern (but the music sounds the same) - so maybe just use double trills for consistency within this section and for contrast between this and the next section? (For example, something like this as a suggestion? http://puu.sh/bFo6l/94280bd85c.jpg) But why this particular suggestion?
    • 
      ->You have the three five-note single trills (column 1-0-1-0-1, then 2-1-2-1-2, then 3-2-3-2-3) - which is a variation of the trill pattern that was in the MX difficulty
      ->This is then incorporated into three different variations of a double trill for the first three notes, which are the stronger parts of the trill - so the playing doesn't feel monotonous.
      ->The triple pattern is altered slightly too for a slightly less awkward pattern while avoiding jackhammers, but keeps some form of your previous pattern (instead of alternating gaps between columns 0 and 3 it alternates gaps between columns 1 and 2).
      ->Of course, this is just probably just one out of several ways to keep this section consistent and contrasting, so you don't technically have to follow this - especially if it destroys your mapping style (sorry if it does that).
12. Kiai time:
    1. I'm not sure if your kiai time has enough contrast - maybe only use triples when you hear the instrument at 00:55:588 and any cymbals in the background such as at 01:00:133 - otherwise stick to doubles? (for example, 01:10:285 / 01:05:588 / 01:06:194 would probably be better as a double note, but triples for e.g. 01:02:861 / 01:03:467 / 01:04:982 / 01:05:285 etc is good)
    2. 01:03:012 - Delete at least one - inconsistent.
13. Your ending section (01:25:436 to 01:27:558) has nearly no contrast at all with the last note which clearly has a stronger sound - The guitar in this section is the same as in the vocal (at e.g. 00:18:770 ) so maybe use that pattern instead? Also, the notes in the middle of those quadruple notes are ghosts (sound of the guitar releasing - don't need to be mapped with an actual note)
    1. (For example, maybe something like this, making sure there's an overall pattern at the very least: http://puu.sh/bFqz8/6ee8ffc651.png)
14. 01:27:861 - Maybe make column 3 into an LN too? (optional)

Really nice map, make sure you stay consistent with what you're hearing though (instrumental consistency). Otherwise really nice, good job~

Good luck!

Column:
      _ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|

arcwinolivirus wrote:

"Arcwinolivirus BAT checking/modding"

Take note that I am focusing on note patterns, comfortability, placements and consistency.
Also, do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod but reason them out with sense.


[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: It should be exactly 800x600 / 1024x768 / 1366x768
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
AiMod:
• No problem!

NOTE:
• To make this map rankable, You need to apply Hitsounds in EACH difficulty. Put HS to EZ, NM (finish the HS),
• Also set soft hitsound as default sample because normal sample is too noisy
• Dont forget to move the HS to other note when I suggest "remove"

Column:
      _ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|

[EZ]

SPOILER

Too much LNs for an EZ difficulty. Beginner players will sure have hard time here. Just suggesting to reduce especially the long ones.

00:06:346 - add note to 2 consistent sound.

00:08:921 (8921|2,9224|3,9527|2) - move 1 column to left so it wont be too repetitive.

00:11:497 (11497|1) - reduce length until 00:15:285 because on ward there are no more long guitar/bass sound

00:54:376 (54376|0) - move to 3

01:02:558 (62558|1) - reduce length until 01:03:770 same reason as previous and if applied..

01:03:770 - add note to 4
01:04:376 - ^

01:19:527 (79527|3) - reduce length until 01:20:739

[NM]

SPOILER

00:05:133 - add note to 1for the drum sound
00:05:285 - ^ to 3

00:11:649 (11649|2) - remove. ghost note.

00:12:558 - add note. 2-noter snare like you did at 00:08:921 (8921|0,8921|2) -

00:13:770 - ^

00:22:558 (22558|0) - remove. This note breaks the flow of previous pattern

00:28:315 (28315|0) - remove sudden 2-noter

00:26:497 to 00:34:982 - actually you can do the flow of patterns at 00:16:800 to 00:21:194 to make balance and continuous pattern without awkward press of notes.

00:52:861 , 00:53:315 , 00:53:770 - add note for 2-noter. They are very consistent.

01:04:982 to 01:14:679 - add note to all snare sound there as you made 2-noters snare at 00:55:285 to 01:03:467 to balance the chorus.

01:27:861 (87861|3) - should end at 01:28:618 like you did at NM

[HD]

SPOILER

00:01:497 (1497|3,1497|0) - move to 2 and 3 so we can avoid the stacking at 00:01:346 (1346|0,1497|0,1649|0) -

00:01:800 , 00:03:012, 00:04:224 - add note. Strong sound with cymbals.

00:05:739 (5739|1,5739|0) - ctrl h for hand balance.

00:06:346 (6346|2) - move to 1

00:06:649 (6649|1) - move to 3 to have 00:06:952 (6952|1) - an opening

00:09:679 (9679|1) - move to 4

00:16:346 (16346|3) - change to LN until 00:16:800 consistent long sound guitar.

00:16:800 - add note to 1 snare sound same as 00:17:406 (17406|3,17406|2) -

00:21:194 (21194|3) - change to short note since bass sound is not that strong to be 2-LNoter. if applied...

00:21:649 - - add note to 3 snare sound.

00:22:255 , 00:22:861, 00:23:467, 00:24:073, 00:24:679 - add note. Snare sounds.

00:25:133 (25133|1,25285|0) - change to short note. guitar sound not too long to make these LNs. also its not that consistent.

00:26:497 to 00:30:891 - add notes to all snare sounds to make them 2-noters like you did at 00:31:346 (31346|3,31346|1,31952|1,31952|3,32558|0,32558|2) -

00:40:739 , 00:41:800 , 00:43:012 , 00:44:224 - add note. strong sound: cymbals.

00:47:103 (47103|1) - move to 3

00:48:012 - add note to 4 strong sound:cymbals.

00:49:073 - add 2-noter here.

00:57:558 (57558|0) - remove. sound is not that strong here and just beatsound.

01:04:527 - add note.

01:07:406 (67406|1) - remove yes very strong sound but not all cymbals have 3-noters in your HD. You can reject this suggest but if that's the case then add note to other cymbal sounds to make them 3-noters.
01:09:830 (69830|2) - ^
01:12:255 (72255|3) - ^

01:14:679 (74679|1) - remove

01:14:982 - add note to 3

01:15:891 (75891|0,77103|3,78315|2) - remove. These are only beat sound parts. not even snare or cymbals.

01:22:406 (82406|0) - move to 2 for pitch.
01:23:618 (83618|3) - ^ to 3 pitch
01:24:830 (84830|0) - ^

01:27:861 (87861|0,87861|1) - should end at 01:28:618 like you did at NM

[MX]

SPOILER

00:02:861 (2861|2) - remove. Why sudden 3-noter? this part isnt very strong to be 3-noter and its just the same sound as 00:02:709 (2709|2,2709|3) - which is a 2-noter

00:05:285 (5285|2) - ^

00:11:194 (11194|1,11497|3) - ^

00:16:952 - add note, strum

00:20:436 (20436|0) - remove not strong sound.

00:46:421 - add note to 3

01:15:285 (75285|2) - remove only beat sound.

01:16:497 (76497|3) - ^

01:17:709 (77709|1) - ^

01:18:921 (78921|0) - ^

01:20:133 (80133|0) - ^

01:25:436 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2118285
• remove some 2-noters because they are only hithats!
• 3-noters for that very strong and consistent guitar sound.
• Balanced pattern I used here also symmetrical.
• Last notes are 4-noters since very strong.

[Shiki's SC]

SPOILER

00:03:618 (3618|3,4073|0) - ctrl h for comfortability.

00:15:285 (15285|3) - remove. not that very strong to be 3-noter also same as 00:15:588 (15588|1,15588|2,15588|3) - which only 3-noter press.

00:35:058 (35058|2,35133|3,35133|0) - remove no sound of percussion here. listen at mp3.

00:35:361 (35361|0,35664|0) - ^

00:37:709 - add note to 1 and 3

00:47:406 - add note too like above.

01:02:861 - add note to 3 and 4 snare sound 3-noter.

01:16:346 - add note. There's a beat sound here at mp3.

01:18:770 (78770|3) - move to 3 different instrument

01:19:073 (79073|1) - move to 3 for comfortability.

01:20:588 (80588|0) - ^ to 4

Fun SC~

[Overall]
Very nice song choice. I like this song too :3/ anyway Good luck ^o^

iJinjin wrote:

Hello from queue~
Looks like this map has already been thoroughly modded by many other people and checked by arcwin, so the mapset is overall in a finalized state.
I will still try to give some suggestions

Columns: |1|2|3|4|

[EZ]
Everything is good here!

[NM]
01:07:103 - Add note to 2 for pattern consistency with 00:57:406 (I realize that you switched from using doubles to emphasize the drum beats to single notes from 01:04:982 , but I still think that part should be emphasized.

[HD]
Everything is good! Nothing to change here ^^

[MX]
01:21:043 (81043|3,81043|1,81043|2) - Consider making these three chords as long notes (or one of them, either is fine)

[Shiki's SC]
00:54:224 (54224|3,54224|2,54224|1,54376|0,54376|2,54376|1) - Ctrl + H for pitch relevancy (vocal part raises in pitch here)
01:18:012 - Add note at 4 for that strong drum beat

[Overall thoughts]
Okay, I've playtested each map and everything is good (patterning, sense of rhythm, etc.). I see not much to fix here now. Sorry if the mod quality was less than you expected, but everything is good! Good luck ^^

arcwinolivirus wrote:

Rechecked notes and AiMod. Before I bubble...

Here's what I recommend:
• It seems that we have some 1ms unsnapped notes in your difficulties (The New AiMod Cutting-edge version detects unsnapped notes even in 1ms). Change to cutting-edge then fix those unsnapped notes.
• Those SVs are feels awkward and surprising (testplayed). You might want to adjust the speed until it's comfortable to players. It is best to ask our BAT SV expert Rumia hhhhh :v

arcwinolivirus wrote:

Rechecked notes and AiMod. Before I bubble...

Here's what I recommend:
• It seems that we have some 1ms unsnapped notes in your difficulties (The New AiMod Cutting-edge version detects unsnapped notes even in 1ms). Change to cutting-edge then fix those unsnapped notes.
• Those SVs are feels awkward and surprising (testplayed). You might want to adjust the speed until it's comfortable to players. It is best to ask our BAT SV expert Rumia hhhhh :v

Aphrodena wrote:

OH SNAAAP - It's time to get this thing bubbled~~~

arcwinolivirus wrote:

I think its a good mapset and ready to go~ Bubbled~!

ichia7x wrote:

Wow, finally your mapset is bubbled. Congratz on your first bubbled ><)

Kyousuke- wrote:

grats takane! >w<

Shinzo- wrote:

Finally -,- ...... Grats takane ^0^