Irreversible wrote:

Hey No_Gu!

Sorry for the really late unrank, but there are issues concerning the timing.

[General]

The Offset is slightly too early, we agreed that it's too early and suggest +10 (but someone else will check that as well). A rebubble + rerank is required, to be sure that it's correct after it's reranked!
00:58:731 (3) - The start of that is unsnapped.. somehow. Can you re-check that one?i don't know what do you mean

[Insane]

While we're at it, two small things that came into my mind.

00:16:037 (3,4) - What do you think about making a stacked pattern? http://puu.sh/b4zii.png Since the 1/4 patterns change a lot, it would be really appreciated if you could make this part a bit more readable (because the big spacing is quite confusing in the early state of the map) It's common now that no overlap for 1/4 notes.don't stack just for more nice arrangement and it's not hard to hit and read imo.
01:27:102 (8) - Don't you want to unsilence that one? I am aware that you silenced it because there is no instrument anymore, yet the strong vocal needs the emphasis a lot. It's completely up to you tho.I'm not a mapper that likes following vocal if you knows my style.so as I do in this map.

Overall, the map is really well done!

[Azure's Hard]

00:26:883 (2) - http://puu.sh/b4zz2.png Hm.. for me, the flow seems more interesting, and also the slidershapes compliment each other a bit better. You might consider it!ok
01:17:870 - I highly recommend to add a circle here, the rhythm is quite broken at the moment.no inst of vocal here.and next note follows the drum,so not a broken patter imo.
01:27:101 (1) - Same as in insane.same

1. 00:11:661 (1) - This Spinner sounds a bit weird since it doesn't fit the BGM, make it quiter or mute it?
2. 00:14:892 (2) - As you do not follow the vocal, how about removing the whistle from the start since pitch actually plays the same tone height?
3. 00:21:585 (3) - Add a soft whistle addition to the start to follow the piano.
4. 00:22:392 (6) - This blue tick doesn't have an actual tone, so you could make 6 an 1/2 Slider to follow the music better and more accurate.
5. 00:23:085 (2) - If you don't want to follow the vocal, you could just remove this note and increase spacing to increase the emphasis on the snare drum. Also it will be more consistent with 00:24:931 - .
6. 00:29:431 (4) - You could add a soft addition whistle to the start to follow the piano.
7. 00:32:891 (5) - Here aswell if you did above.
8. 00:34:508 (3) - And here too, of course.
9. 00:34:969 (6) - And here to the start.
10. 00:35:546 (10) - I see that you catch the drums here, but a hitnormal would fit better to the intensity than a clap.
11. 00:46:738 (1) - Add a soft whistle addition to fit the high piano?
12. 00:48:585 (1) - Same here as above.
13. 00:50:431 (1,3) - Here to 1's start and 3 too, to follow the high guitar pitch and emphasize the more intense vocal line.
14. 01:14:301 (7) - The piano you were previously following ends after the triplet, would be cool if you removed this note therefore.
15. 01:27:109 (8) - Add a quite soft finish to the start to follow the cymbals?

Zero__wind wrote:

哭了 刷了好多遍才HDSS

IamKwaN wrote:

ლ(╹◡╹ლ )

General

1. Snap the preview time to 00:59:661 for all diffs.00:59:648加了跟红线证明副歌应该是这里起的
2. May add 'opening' to tags.懒

Insane

1. Snap this green line 01:27:221 to 01:27:224.k
2. 00:07:508 (5) - Whistle?k
3. 00:21:585 (3) - Soft-whistle on head for piano.
4. 00:34:969 (6) - ^这张主要跟鼓进了前奏之后基本没加whistle了

Hard

1. HP6 is high enough as the patterns in this Hard are quite harsh.k
2. 00:21:354 (3) - Whistle on tail.
3. 00:34:969 (5) - ^这两边应该都是偏鼓而且这个前面1/2还有whis加了会很怪
4. 00:50:431 (3) - NC here instead of 00:50:200 (1). Same for 00:52:277 (3) as of 00:28:046 (6,7,1) and 00:29:892 (5,6,1) - k

Normal

1. Since there are up to 3 stacking objects like 00:07:046 (2,3,4) , better adjust the SL to 0.7.我看了下test好像1和7对这个没影响吧
2. 00:07:508 (4) - Whistle on head.k

Easy

1. 00:07:046 (3) - Whistle on tail?e里面连着加好像不太好
2. Nice

Senpai please mutual me and call me back!

Fycho wrote:

[General]

1. Source: アオハライド, and add “AO HARU RIDE” and “AO-HARU-RIDE” to tags. I can’t find any evidence that “AO HARU RIDE” can be the source. 我不确定英文source有没有短横，但是可以的话请用日文source。我强迫症不想加日文source.这个也没硬性规定。至于短杠，KSHR让我用AO HARU RIDE.你要不跟他再统一一下
   官方图片：http://puu.sh/bkVUA/509b08c9c5.jpg.
2. Unsnapped KIAI timing point at 01:14:301- k

[Insane]

1. 00:26:200 –volume is too small here, try 40%.
2. 00:29:892 -^本身音乐就是小碎鼓不想搞太大.30%吧

[Hard]

1. 00:15:354 (1) - soft whistle on head cuz there is a cymbal in music.k
2. 00:08:892 (2) –whistle on head like00:10:738 (4) -, remove it from tail then.我觉得相比之下后面音调更强一些
3. 00:42:585 (5,1) –exchange them, just circle at00:42:585 –and slider at00:42:815 –to follow music better like00:41:892 (3) –k
4. 00:43:739 (4,5) –same, I mentioned this when I modded before, 00:43:738 –this beat need to be emphasized IMO这边没有像前面那样明显 5直接开始换drum part也不错啊

[Normal]

1. 00:37:508 - 00:55:046 -please reduce the volume of all storyboard hitsounds at least, they are really noisy.后

[Easy]

1. 01:12:571 (3,4,5,6) –I still think normal sample fits best, they are snare drums.这个真心不是军鼓
2. 01:28:032 -30% volume at least, silencing the slider tail is really not needed.恩

Also Oyatsu please check all the mods ignored, call me back for recheck then.唉我回去修了下

21:14 (IamKwaN) AO HARU RIDE / AO-HARU-RIDE?
21:16 (KSHR) will discuss with JP staff
21:17 (IamKwaN) okee
21:35 (KSHR) AO--HARU--RIDE
21:35 (KSHR) go
21:47 (IamKwaN) ok!!!
21:47 (IamKwaN) i will tell fycho