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Nishino Kana - Darling

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Topic Starter
Giralda
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on November-16-14 at 12:46:51 AM

Artist: Nishino Kana
Title: Darling
Tags: with love
BPM: 160
Filesize: 7263kb
Play Time: 04:10
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.84 stars, 573 notes)
  2. Insane (4.01 stars, 700 notes)
  3. Normal (1.98 stars, 344 notes)
Download: Nishino Kana - Darling
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Ah なんで好きになっちゃったのかなぁ
私って少し変わり者なのね
Ah こんなにも放っておけない人は
星の数ほどいる中で ねぇ Darling
あなたしかいない


HAPPY 4 MONTHS, DARLING ♥
(submitted on our 4th month, ranked during our 6th month together)
captin1
wwwwww hazuri!

FIRST
11t
happy valentine's day hazuri!
kisata
happy birthday hazuri~!

私って少し変わり者なのね
jonathanlfj
happy anniversary Hazuri~
Trust
You lovebirds are adorable. Happy 4 months Hazuri!

♥ Forever H & G ♥
Kanari
happy 4 months! >w<
Kihhou
Hazuri senpaiaaya ~ Giraa senpaiieee! happy 4 months, my bullies! c:
Raose
ANNIVERSARY

YES

MAY YOU LIVE LONG AND PROSPER
those
May 4 months become 4 lifetimes
[ n a i c h u ]
AWEAAAAHHHH TT u TT THANK YOU GUYS <3 and i hate you Gira <333 HAPPY BIRTHDAY... =3
Raose
wa

[Insane]

00:44:329 (4) - clap on head?
00:50:329 (4) - ^
00:51:079 (6) - idk is there suppose dto be a clap on the tail? @_@
00:53:329 (4) - clap
01:05:329 (5,6) - ^
01:13:766 (2) - ^
01:22:766 (2) - ^
01:33:829 (9) - ^
01:51:266 (7) - ^
01:58:766 (2) - head
02:18:079 (9) - i actually don't think there should be claps here. it's a rather calm part, and i think it would be more powerful and stand out more if there weren't claps here. Maybe you could put a finish on the head though, to match the sound the music
02:34:204 (1) - normal hit normal on clap
02:34:766 (3) - clap
02:39:266 (6) - ^
02:43:766 (2) - on head maybe?
02:44:329 (3) - clap
02:44:704 (5) - normal hit normal
02:45:079 (6) - head & tail clap
02:45:454 (7,8) - missing grrrrrr
02:47:329 (4) - head
02:54:454 (7) - tail
02:55:016 (9) - clap
02:55:204 (1) - clap on tail? D:
02:57:454 (6,7) - clap on 7 head, not 6
03:04:204 - spinner is a good idea here
03:28:204 (1) - tail
03:33:454 (7,8) - heads
03:35:329 (4,5) - think it'd be nice to have a jump here :D
03:36:829 (8) - clap
03:39:641 (11,12) - maybe whistle at 12 instead of 11, since it's on a white tick (is that what they call a downbeat) and there's a tick sound in the bg
03:45:454 (7) - dont' think the clap on tail matches anything in music, but it's kaaaay
03:46:016 (9) - move this up a bit so there's no overlap? http://puu.sh/bmcdo/91bdf8546b.jpg
03:47:704 (5) - normal hit normal?
03:58:204 (1,2) - i think the whistles sound out of place D:
04:00:829 (8) - clap head
04:01:204 (1) - normal head, clap tail
04:01:766 (2) - clap
04:04:204 (1) - whistle head?
LunarSakuya
awwww happy 4 months!!!!!!!!!!!

hi n愛a ww
Sharlo
love this song <3
Topic Starter
Giralda
谢谢star~
Kibbleru
happy birthday.
dkun
Great map for an adorable song! I'd love to mod this if you finish the set. :)
Topic Starter
Giralda

dkun wrote:

Great map for an adorable song! I'd love to mod this if you finish the set. :)
Thank you and thanks and for the stars! :)
Kinshara
oh you two lovebirds heh

If such an awesome mapset is being made for your 4 months anniversary, I can't wait to see the one for your one year anniversary~ :D

But besides, best wishes from Texas!!
Topic Starter
Giralda
Raose

Raose wrote:

wa

[Insane]

00:44:329 (4) - clap on head?
00:50:329 (4) - ^
00:51:079 (6) - idk is there suppose dto be a clap on the tail? @_@
00:53:329 (4) - clap
01:05:329 (5,6) - ^
01:13:766 (2) - ^
01:22:766 (2) - ^
01:33:829 (9) - ^
01:51:266 (7) - ^
01:58:766 (2) - head
02:18:079 (9) - i actually don't think there should be claps here. it's a rather calm part, and i think it would be more powerful and stand out more if there weren't claps here. Maybe you could put a finish on the head though, to match the sound the music
02:34:204 (1) - normal hit normal on clap
02:34:766 (3) - clap
02:39:266 (6) - ^
02:43:766 (2) - on head maybe?
02:44:329 (3) - clap
02:44:704 (5) - normal hit normal
02:45:079 (6) - head & tail clap
02:45:454 (7,8) - missing grrrrrr
02:47:329 (4) - head
02:54:454 (7) - tail
02:55:016 (9) - clap
02:55:204 (1) - clap on tail? D:
02:57:454 (6,7) - clap on 7 head, not 6
03:04:204 - spinner is a good idea here
03:28:204 (1) - tail
03:33:454 (7,8) - heads
03:35:329 (4,5) - think it'd be nice to have a jump here :D
03:36:829 (8) - clap
03:39:641 (11,12) - maybe whistle at 12 instead of 11, since it's on a white tick (is that what they call a downbeat) and there's a tick sound in the bg
03:45:454 (7) - dont' think the clap on tail matches anything in music, but it's kaaaay
03:46:016 (9) - move this up a bit so there's no overlap? http://puu.sh/bmcdo/91bdf8546b.jpg
03:47:704 (5) - normal hit normal?
03:58:204 (1,2) - i think the whistles sound out of place D:
04:00:829 (8) - clap head
04:01:204 (1) - normal head, clap tail
04:01:766 (2) - clap
04:04:204 (1) - whistle head?

Applied pretty much everything LOL
Sorry to have to make you go through my terrible hearing and hitsounding! :o
Modem
Happy 4 months Hazuri!!!
captin1
here take another star cause i can fc this dt now

rank pls
Frostings
[General]

- Background is...1024x576. It's 16:9 but why not find a 1366x768 like a normal person

- Audio rate is higher than 192 kbps so you'll have to recompress the mp3

03:07:204 - extend the break start to here (if you don't take any other suggestion in this mod, make sure you take this one!)

- Delete any unused hitsounds (slidertick4)


[Insane]
  1. 00:10:204 (1,2,3,4) - flow is kinda weird here . maybe ctrlG on (4) and make it look neater
  2. 00:12:266 (6,7,8,9) - Personally, I wouldn't add jumps like this in this section of the song
  3. 00:13:204 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  4. 00:18:454 (8,9,1) - Personal preference, this pattern doesn't look like it fits very well
    Maybe use a curve or something instead of zigzag? (I would also move the next few sliders left a little bit to give the whole thing more shape, regardless of whether the above suggestion is taken or not)
    like
  5. 00:20:704 (5) - ctrl+G works here better imo
  6. 00:23:329 (6,7) - curve these more outwards to give more shape
  7. 00:28:204 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is kinda meh . maybe like this
  8. 00:35:329 (3,4,5) - I dunno, these kind of patterns break flow a little bit too strongly for such a delicate song like this
  9. 00:36:079 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - same with jumps like this .. maybe just reduc jumps a little bit and make less harsher angles
  10. 00:42:454 (7,8,1) - triangle for visual?
  11. 00:49:954 (3,4) - make this neater
  12. 00:52:204 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is a nice pattern :3
  13. 00:56:329 (4,5,6) - what I mentioned earlier
  14. 00:59:329 (4,5) - looks kinda odd and breaks flow a little.. I wouldn't attempt a pattern like this in this part of the song
  15. 01:00:829 (8) - 2x better flow ctrl+G imo. then rotating it a little so that it looks good with the (7) and (1)
  16. 01:26:329 (4,5,6) - this one works nice here since the whole section is more jumpy and it fits the song
  17. 01:34:579 - I dunno, it seems a strange choice to leave this part empty. I think it'll make it much better if you map this section
    It makes it more awkward because the (11) slider doesn't fit. You should make it a single hitcircle.
  18. 01:40:204 (1) - I think ctrl+G is better
  19. 03:01:204 - This section looks a bit messy. It's my personal opinion, but I think excessively curved sliders like (3) (4) (5) look a bit messy. I would make them curve less.
    also the zigzag slider (6) is the same as the other zigzag slider from before... it just looks really out of place
  20. 03:32:704 (5,6,7,8,1) - nice :3
  21. 03:43:204 (1) - I think the curve here is a bit excessive to the point where it looks kinda strange
    try to smoothen it out a little bit
I highly suggest breaking up your combos into 2 combos (NC on every bar)

[Normal]
  1. 00:10:204 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe, like, make this an actual pentagon? :3
  2. 00:28:579 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  3. 00:53:704 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^
  4. 01:07:204 - add a note or extend the break to here
  5. 02:19:204 - ^
  6. 02:30:829 - note ^^
  7. 03:47:704 (3,4,5,6,1) - wow, like why is this randomly 1.1 spacing (also fix that pentagon)
Oh, you might want to get someone to check the rhythm of the beginning of this diff
I'd say there're problems but what do I know about rhythm

[Hard]
  1. 01:30:454 (7,8,1) - try to improve this pattern visually
  2. 01:33:454 (8,9,10) - make the spacing visually the same
  3. 01:34:204 (1) - note instead of slider
  4. 02:19:204 - note :3
  5. 02:30:829 - ^
  6. 01:37:204 (4) - OK GIRALDA TIME FOR A NC MOD. here we go. If you wanna be edgy and keep your 2-measure combos, you NEED a NC here.
    otherwise your entire combo pattern becomes OFFSET by an entire measure. THIS IS TOTALLY UNRANKABLE.
    NC fits here because songs are divided into 4 beats in one measure, but they can also be divided by 8 beats in two measures
    WHICH MEANS YOU WILL NEED ONE NC EVERY TWO MEASURES WHICH IS NOW 01:37:204 (4) - 01:37:204 (4) - 01:37:204 (4) - 01:37:204 (4) -
    Then proceed to delete the next combo and add one 01:40:204 (6) - etc. etc.
    you'll notice if you do this correctly that you will successfully NC the beginning of the kiai. baka Giralda.

    It's the same here 03:16:204 (3) - YOU NEED TO NC THIS OTHERWISE THE SONG IS RUINED
  7. 04:07:204 (1) - Why does the spinner end where it does

Nice
Topic Starter
Giralda

Frostings wrote:

[General]

- Background is...1024x576. It's 16:9 but why not find a 1366x768 like a normal person

- Audio rate is higher than 192 kbps so you'll have to recompress the mp3

03:07:204 - extend the break start to here (if you don't take any other suggestion in this mod, make sure you take this one!)

- Delete any unused hitsounds (slidertick4)
Will fix all of these when I get the chance to. The break and audio bitrate will be done within the next 24 hours.

[Insane]
  1. 00:10:204 (1,2,3,4) - flow is kinda weird here . maybe ctrlG on (4) and make it look neater
  2. 00:12:266 (6,7,8,9) - Personally, I wouldn't add jumps like this in this section of the song It fits due to the banjo in the background music creating that jumpy feeling in the song.
  3. 00:13:204 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
  4. 00:18:454 (8,9,1) - Personal preference, this pattern doesn't look like it fits very well
    Maybe use a curve or something instead of zigzag? I used the zigzag here as it emphasizes the introduction of the drum patterns here, as opposed to only the banjo being played prior to this point in time. Straight-styled sliders bring out heavy/stronger drum notes better than beziers and circular curves. The sudden stop at 9 by stacking on the end of 8 helps build momentum for the player to go up and then bring the cursor back down for a stronger drum-hitting feeling.(I would also move the next few sliders left a little bit to give the whole thing more shape, regardless of whether the above suggestion is taken or not)
    like
  5. 00:20:704 (5) - ctrl+G works here better imo Continuing the circular/oval flow from 00:19:954 (3,4)
  6. 00:23:329 (6,7) - curve these more outwards to give more shape Trying to maintain circular flow here so I wouldn't
  7. 00:28:204 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is kinda meh . maybe like this Adjusted my current pattern a bit.
  8. 00:35:329 (3,4,5) - I dunno, these kind of patterns break flow a little bit too strongly for such a delicate song like this Not necessarily, since 00:35:329 (3,4) emphasize strong vocal points. Circles help make these vocals stand out better than a 1/2 slider.
  9. 00:36:079 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - same with jumps like this .. maybe just reduc jumps a little bit and make less harsher angles These are used to emphasize vocals so these jumps fit accordingly
  10. 00:42:454 (7,8,1) - triangle for visual? This would require me to adjust nearly the entire kiai time since moving this would mess up my spacing and cause messy overlaps.
  11. 00:49:954 (3,4) - make this neater
  12. 00:52:204 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is a nice pattern :3
  13. 00:56:329 (4,5,6) - what I mentioned earlier Same response ~
  14. 00:59:329 (4,5) - looks kinda odd and breaks flow a little.. I wouldn't attempt a pattern like this in this part of the song Doesn't break flow imo, since 4 slightly curves into 5, which the wave slider is meant to match the changing vocal pitch.
  15. 01:00:829 (8) - 2x better flow ctrl+G imo. then rotating it a little so that it looks good with the (7) and (1) This was meant to be a simple movement going into circular flow. The circular flow at 01:00:829 (8,1,2) is much more important for me.
  16. 01:26:329 (4,5,6) - this one works nice here since the whole section is more jumpy and it fits the song
  17. 01:34:579 - I dunno, it seems a strange choice to leave this part empty. I think it'll make it much better if you map this section
    It makes it more awkward because the (11) slider doesn't fit. You should make it a single hitcircle.
  18. 01:40:204 (1) - I think ctrl+G is better Reworked the pattern here.
  19. 03:01:204 - This section looks a bit messy. It's my personal opinion, but I think excessively curved sliders like (3) (4) (5) look a bit messy. I would make them curve less.
    also the zigzag slider (6) is the same as the other zigzag slider from before... it just looks really out of place
  20. 03:32:704 (5,6,7,8,1) - nice :3
  21. 03:43:204 (1) - I think the curve here is a bit excessive to the point where it looks kinda strange
    try to smoothen it out a little bit
I highly suggest breaking up your combos into 2 combos (NC on every bar)

[Normal]
  1. 00:10:204 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe, like, make this an actual pentagon? :3
  2. 00:28:579 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  3. 00:53:704 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^
  4. 01:07:204 - add a note or extend the break to here
  5. 02:19:204 - ^
  6. 02:30:829 - note ^^
  7. 03:47:704 (3,4,5,6,1) - wow, like why is this randomly 1.1 spacing (also fix that pentagon)
Oh, you might want to get someone to check the rhythm of the beginning of this diff
I'd say there're problems but what do I know about rhythm

[Hard]
  1. 01:30:454 (7,8,1) - try to improve this pattern visually
  2. 01:33:454 (8,9,10) - make the spacing visually the same
  3. 01:34:204 (1) - note instead of slider
  4. 02:19:204 - note :3
  5. 02:30:829 - ^
  6. 01:37:204 (4) - OK GIRALDA TIME FOR A NC MOD. here we go. If you wanna be edgy and keep your 2-measure combos, you NEED a NC here.
    otherwise your entire combo pattern becomes OFFSET by an entire measure. THIS IS TOTALLY UNRANKABLE.
    NC fits here because songs are divided into 4 beats in one measure, but they can also be divided by 8 beats in two measures
    WHICH MEANS YOU WILL NEED ONE NC EVERY TWO MEASURES WHICH IS NOW 01:37:204 (4) - 01:37:204 (4) - 01:37:204 (4) - 01:37:204 (4) -
    Then proceed to delete the next combo and add one 01:40:204 (6) - etc. etc.
    you'll notice if you do this correctly that you will successfully NC the beginning of the kiai. baka Giralda.

    It's the same here 03:16:204 (3) - YOU NEED TO NC THIS OTHERWISE THE SONG IS RUINED hue
  7. 04:07:204 (1) - Why does the spinner end where it does

Nice
No reply = fixed or applied
Thanks Frostings!
See? THIS CAN TOTALLY BE MODDED.
pishifat
hi can i mod ?
ok !
fuhrer will be proud of mein work for nazi party !

general

  1. preview point is unsnapped :/
  2. normal and hard have widescreen support enabled :/
  3. eat your new bg in ringapost

insane

  1. 00:11:704 (5,9) - because both of these objects' overlaps are visible at the same time, making them parallel would be less eww.
  2. 00:16:579 (3) - curve is not a curve. try moving the pseudo-grey anchor. i dont know but yea doubt it was intentional
  3. 00:37:579 (2,3,4,5,6) - nice pentagon you're an artist please do something about it
  4. 01:34:204 (11) - if you look at hard and normal, this object has a new combo, but on insane nope. same sort of deal with 02:41:704 (4) - , but there's no combo for this object on all diffs. across all diffs, these objects should share same comboing stuffs
  5. 01:41:704 (7,1) - i assume you've got that new combo because of the nasty overlaps, but even so, it would make more sense to swap these combos since 7 is where that newish section starts and it also has a nasty overlap with 01:41:141 (4) -
  6. 01:42:641 (2,3) - spacing between these is really small compared to like everyhwere ever. don't really see why they should be so close together when the exact same musical thing at 00:30:454 (7,8) - has normal spacing. do larger k
  7. 01:47:141 (4,6) - having these overlap exactly looks really weird. you'd usually think not-precise overlaps like 01:48:454 (8,10) - would be worse, but they seem to fit a lot better than this current exactly-in-middle-placement. you do that same sort of offset placement everywhere, like 00:56:141 (3,6) - 01:14:891 (6,7) - etc, and it fits better than what you've currently got here. 02:07:016 (11,2) - same deal if you're into it
  8. 01:55:766 (2,4) - copy/pasting then moving straight sliders usually looks fine since they're parallel, but doing so for curved sliders looks really gross becuase of blanketish stuff. would be better to rotate 4 or something like that so it's just less gross. can't even explain why just please it hurts
  9. 02:18:079 (9) - 03:39:079 (9) - dunno why you're ignoring the finishes here. they're audible in the song and you put a finish in this position during the first kiai at 01:06:079 (9) - yet not the second and third. should just add them to those other two places (or remove the first one but uh bad since finish is in music ya). applies to other diffs toooooooooooo
  10. 02:25:954 (3) - the not-curve on this seems a bit overdone. the head and tail of the slider are even touching which could easily be avoided with a shape similar to 02:26:329 (4) - .
  11. 02:45:829 (8,1) - epicenter of gross strikes again
  12. 03:38:329 (5) - 03:39:079 (9) - both of these should be at y182 to match the line thing going through 03:37:954 (3,4,5) - and 03:39:079 (9) - yaknow this thing
  13. 03:48:829 (9) - why touching other objects in the pentagon move it further away like 03:49:204 (1) - yeayayeaye
  14. 04:07:016 (1) - the guitar chord comes in earlier than the red tick here, so ummmmmmm snapping object to red tick not good. doesn't sound like any standard snapping would work out very well for this because of music reasons, so it would be better to either not map it entirely or encode the mp3 with that part capable of snapping to the red tick (told you about this ingame but you didn't care so ooookaaaaaay)

hard

  1. 00:48:641 (7,1) - it would probably be better to do a custom-stack thing with these objects, since it's visually awkward when compared to teh auto-stack done with 00:49:204 (1,2) - . would look like this ingame with a custom stack, which is much less wat and much more mmmm
  2. 01:18:079 (1) - really not understand the point of the new combo here. insane doesn't have one so why does this one object deserve its own combo
  3. 01:56:704 (1) -

    Frostings wrote:

    OK GIRALDA TIME FOR A NC MOD. here we go. If you wanna be edgy and keep your 2-measure combos, you NEED a NC here.
    otherwise your entire combo pattern becomes OFFSET by an entire measure. THIS IS TOTALLY UNRANKABLE.
    NC fits here because songs are divided into 4 beats in one measure, but they can also be divided by 8 beats in two measures
    WHICH MEANS YOU WILL NEED ONE NC EVERY TWO MEASURES
    don't be a lump
  4. 02:19:204 (4) - whatever you went with for the comboing stuff at 01:34:204 (11) - on insane should be done here. so if 01:34:204 (11) - got a NC, this should too, and other way around
  5. 03:17:704 (1) -

    so the "hue" reply means you didn't fix it cuz it's still broken
  6. 03:36:454 (4,5) - what i said about 01:55:766 (2,4) - in insane would apply here if you did that
  7. 04:07:016 (4) - new combo stuff is inconsistent with object in the same position on insane. do something it doesnt even matter what just something

normal

  1. 01:38:704 (1) - lock your doors there have been reports of the kombo killer near your area. he's closer than you'd think. your combos are off by a measure sttop}}'agbv
  2. 02:46:204 (1) - not understanding why this slider is a 2 beat long reversething. like there's nothing in the song indicating it should be more extended than anything else and this is the onlyyyy one. it also screws up your clap hitsounding completely because there's nothing on these ticks to support claps. if you were to shorten this to a 1.5 beat slider and add a circle on the following downbeat things would be a lot more sense
  3. 02:49:204 (4,5) - what is distance snap
  4. 02:50:704 (1) - is this familiar?
  5. 03:17:704 (1) - im gonna punch you these combos are as good as my air conditioning which is broken it's like 80 degrees at 3am how can i sleep in such heat and with the kNOWLEDGE THAT YOUR COMBOS ARE GARBAGE
gifs courtesy of ringating , bye !
Ringating

pishifat wrote:

  1. eat your new bg in ringapost
bg mod

1024×576 why

I took the original image and upscaled it from 1100×619 to 1366×768, then applied a selective/surface blur to smooth out the artifacts that resulted from upscaling. here is the image with only that change:I also made two more versions. This first alternate has some extra color adjustment:This second alternate has some extra luminance adjustment (basically just the original w/ buffed contrast):choose whichever you like

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