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Timing check:
-Offset: 8710 then resnap all notes
Remove timing sections at: 00:00:998 , 00:08:535 , 00:08:313
-Remove the title "Unravel" and '東京喰種 from the tags', and add: Toukyou Kushu , Shueisha , opening, japanese...

Hey there~ from #modreqs

Normal+

General: I don't recommend using a DS of 1.6x in a Normal diff even if it's Normal+ I suggest going with 1.0x or 1.2x
You also need to have a difficulty with less than 2 stars. You can read the ranking criteria here https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_criteria

00:10:312 (1,2) - Blanket them (If you don't know how a blanket looks like here is the link: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Blanket_Combos )
00:12:090 (2,3,4) - Make a cleaner triangle pattern
00:15:646 (1,3) - Always avoid overlaps like this. Especially in Easy/Normal maps
00:17:423 (3,1) - Make them parallel or try curved blanket
00:19:646 (3,4,5) - Create a more flowing pattern. Right now it's very straight but still not in one line
00:23:646 (2,3) - Blanket
00:21:201 (1,1) - I feel like these spinners are unnessecary
00:26:090 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Pattern looks broken. Try to make it symmetrical
00:28:979 (1,2) - Blanket
00:39:646 (3) - For me there is no reason why this slider is not curved as well. Try a blanket with 00:38:757 (2) -
00:38:757 (2) - Add a clap
00:42:312 (1,2,3,4) - You should avoid jumps like this in Normal diffs. Just change the DS
00:49:423 (1,2,3,4) - Flow seems a bit weird. Try to create some interesting patterns! Also avoid overlaps like this 00:50:312 (2,3) -
00:52:979 (1,2,3) - Try a symmetrical pattern
00:55:646 (1,2,3) - Sliders seem way too random to me. Try stuff like that : http://puu.sh/blGfw/f2d3152342.jpg (I used DS 1.0x)
00:59:201 (1,3) - Make them parallel
01:04:534 (4,2) - Avoid overlaps like this
01:06:090 (2,3,4,1) - Pattern doesn't look nice. Try to make it smooth
01:11:646 (3) - Curve it so it connects with 01:12:312 (4) - better
01:14:312 (1,2,3) - Same as 01:06:090 (2,3,4,1) -
01:16:090 (2,4) - Make them parallel
01:17:868 (2,3) - You should avoid reverse sliders with more than one repeat for easier diffs since it's pretty hard for beginners to read how often it will repeat
01:21:423 (1) - Don't let the spinner end on a blue tick! End it on the big white one.

That's it from me This map definitely needs a LOT of work tbh. You should be way more creative with the patterns. Try to learn the basics here https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Mapping_Techniques or here https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Beatmapping . Hope I was able to help you. Leaving some feedback whether my mod was helpful would be nice
Good luck with your map!

nabnab wrote:

Timing check:
-Offset: 8710 then resnap all notes
Remove timing sections at: 00:00:998 , 00:08:535 , 00:08:313
-Remove the title "Unravel" and '東京喰種 from the tags', and add: Toukyou Kushu , Shueisha , opening, japanese...

Sorry, I can not understand why offset set in 8710 ...
I can not hear the beat falling on the correct position, I'm sorry ...
Tag has been added, thank you
Thank you MOD my beatmap

TaikuGx wrote:

Hey there~ from #modreqs

Normal+

General: I don't recommend using a DS of 1.6x in a Normal diff even if it's Normal+ I suggest going with 1.0x or 1.2x
You also need to have a difficulty with less than 2 stars. You can read the ranking criteria here https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_criteria
I put the DS changes to X1.2, Tnahk You
I would Try Production Easy Difficult

00:10:312 (1,2) - Blanket them (If you don't know how a blanket looks like here is the link: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Blanket_Combos )
Fixed
00:12:090 (2,3,4) - Make a cleaner triangle pattern
Fixed
00:15:646 (1,3) - Always avoid overlaps like this. Especially in Easy/Normal maps
Fixed
00:17:423 (3,1) - Make them parallel or try curved blanket
Fixed
00:19:646 (3,4,5) - Create a more flowing pattern. Right now it's very straight but still not in one line
Fixed
00:23:646 (2,3) - Blanket
Fixed
00:21:201 (1,1) - I feel like these spinners are unnessecary
I deleted the Spinner
00:26:090 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Pattern looks broken. Try to make it symmetrical
fixed
00:28:979 (1,2) - Blanket
fixed
00:39:646 (3) - For me there is no reason why this slider is not curved as well. Try a blanket with 00:38:757 (2) -
fixed
00:38:757 (2) - Add a clap
fixed
00:42:312 (1,2,3,4) - You should avoid jumps like this in Normal diffs. Just change the DS
fixed
00:49:423 (1,2,3,4) - Flow seems a bit weird. Try to create some interesting patterns! Also avoid overlaps like this 00:50:312 (2,3) -
fixed
00:52:979 (1,2,3) - Try a symmetrical pattern
fixed
00:55:646 (1,2,3) - Sliders seem way too random to me. Try stuff like that : http://puu.sh/blGfw/f2d3152342.jpg (I used DS 1.0x)
I put it on DS x1.2
00:59:201 (1,3) - Make them parallel
fixed
01:04:534 (4,2) - Avoid overlaps like this
fixed
01:06:090 (2,3,4,1) - Pattern doesn't look nice. Try to make it smooth
fixed
01:11:646 (3) - Curve it so it connects with 01:12:312 (4) - better
fixed
01:14:312 (1,2,3) - Same as 01:06:090 (2,3,4,1) -
fixed
01:16:090 (2,4) - Make them parallel
fixed
01:17:868 (2,3) - You should avoid reverse sliders with more than one repeat for easier diffs since it's pretty hard for beginners to read how often it will repeat
fixed
01:21:423 (1) - Don't let the spinner end on a blue tick! End it on the big white one.
fixed 1:24:867 >> 1:24:978

That's it from me This map definitely needs a LOT of work tbh. You should be way more creative with the patterns. Try to learn the basics here https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Mapping_Techniques or here https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Beatmapping . Hope I was able to help you. Leaving some feedback whether my mod was helpful would be nice
Good luck with your map!

Your Mod is very useful for me!
Thank you

Random mod since I'm bored (Only gona mod general issues for now but feal free to pm me for irc mod
General

kristi71111 wrote:

Random mod since I'm bored (Only gona mod general issues for now but feal free to pm me for irc mod
General

SPOILER

Romanised Artist is TK from Ling tosite sigure
Fixed
Title is : unravel (TV edit)
Fixed
Disable widescreen support since u are not using a story board.
Fixed
Delete the TK from Rin toshite Shigure - unravel (ALEFY).osb it adds unnecesarry file size
Fixed
Map set needs adleast one normal or easy diff.
Easy difficulty in making
Where are the hitsounds XD
I found that I did not use to: P
Has been deleted: D
Background is not in the right dimenson use this http://puu.sh/bmZoE/8d707103b9.jpg (1366x768 pixels for 16:9.)
I found my Background size 1365x768 ...
Has been changed to 1366x768

Thank you mod my map

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[General]
没有系统的hitsound，感觉用系统默认的S音效也不太合适，至少24clap长白线whistle，觉得哪个图的音效好就去偷过来0.0
排列尽量不要在看得见的地方不完全叠好，要叠就叠好，要不就不叠，比如像normal+这种00:11:868 (1,2,4) - hard这种01:12:757 (4,6) -
[easy]
01:05:200 (1,2) - DS不是1.0是1.47误差太大
01:16:978 (6,1) - 这两个物件不要叠起来，不怎么美观
[hard]
感觉滑条排列看起来挺随机的，有点偷懒了

from #modreqs

also first time I have done a mod

Easy
00:08:313 (1) - I felt that the slider did not flow well with rhythm, consider moving it two ticks ahead
00:55:423 (1) - ^
01:03:423 (1) - ^
01:08:756 (1) - ^
00:28:089 (4) - new combo
00:37:867 (4,5,1) - maybe make this one combo color, it fits better with 00:34:311 (1,2,3)

Normal +
00:16:534 (2) - should be 1/2 slider, listen carefully
00:20:979 (5) - place it two ticks behind, I feel it fits better there
00:42:311 (1,2,3,4) - exactly like same part in Easy, consider changing it maybe? not a big problem though

I think that's about it for now
GL!

4anke wrote:

From #modreq
[General]
没有系统的hitsound，感觉用系统默认的S音效也不太合适，至少24clap长白线whistle，觉得哪个图的音效好就去偷过来0.0
还没找到合适的声音..
排列尽量不要在看得见的地方不完全叠好，要叠就叠好，要不就不叠，比如像normal+这种00:11:868 (1,2,4) - hard这种01:12:757 (4,6) -
改了，谢谢:)
[easy]
01:05:200 (1,2) - DS不是1.0是1.47误差太大 已修正
01:16:978 (6,1) - 这两个物件不要叠起来，不怎么美观我把大滑条改了个方向，谢谢:)
[hard]
感觉滑条排列看起来挺随机的，有点偷懒了
我把一些地方的滑条改了些，应该能解决一些了

谢谢你MOD我的图 !

Harrharrqi wrote:

from #modreqs

also first time I have done a mod

Easy
00:08:313 (1) - I felt that the slider did not flow well with rhythm, consider moving it two ticks ahead
Fixed
00:55:423 (1) - ^
Fixed
01:03:423 (1) - ^
Fixed
01:08:756 (1) - ^
Fixed
00:28:089 (4) - new combo
Fixed
00:37:867 (4,5,1) - maybe make this one combo color, it fits better with 00:34:311 (1,2,3)
Fixed

Normal +
00:16:534 (2) - should be 1/2 slider, listen carefully
Fixed
00:20:979 (5) - place it two ticks behind, I feel it fits better there
Did you mean 00:20:978 (6) - Change to 00:20:756 - ?
00:20: 756 - I am here to add a Circle, Thank
00:42:311 (1,2,3,4) - exactly like same part in Easy, consider changing it maybe? not a big problem though
I added a few Circle

I think that's about it for now
GL!
Thank

Thank you mod my map

From #modreqs

Just going to mod this...

These are all suggestions, though some I recommend you make the changes. Recommendations will be in bold

[General]

Red Timing Points

Your red timing points I don't really understand

00:00:998 - You have a red timing point here in all difficulties. Though you don't really need to put one here as there is no beat. I would most likely remove it. (vocals don't count as a beat)
00:08:313 - This red timing point is in the wrong place. Remember, vocals don't count as a beat, therefore there should not be a red timing point here. Rather this point should be here: 00:08:535
00:10:312 - This red timing point is not needed as the red timing point before it is really all you need.

Kiai Time

00:31:645 - I don't think this Kiai Time is needed. I suggest to remove it.
00:55:423 - Kiai time here should not start here, rather it should start here: 00:56:534 - because that's where you have a (if you've made the timing changes above) downbeat and a huge beat in the song.

Difficulty Stars

You have a difficulty under 2 stars. That's great but if you have an easy it needs to be below or equal to 1.50 stars.(Check here if you want to know about star rating)

Spacing

So looking at your easier difficulties like Normal+, your notes are actually overlapping a bit, though this isn't a big problem, it makes the map look very squished or cluttered. Looking back at previous mods someone has told you to change it to 1.2x DS. I completely disagree with that. 1.2x DS makes the notes way to close to each other meaning you'll get a ton of overlapping. I think 1.5x DS would be the sweet spot so that there is at least a little bit of space in between each note.

Hit sounds

Let's go through your timing points and change up some of the hit sound properties.

00:31:645 - Change to Normal hit sounds (TBH I can't decide if Normal hit sounds should start here 00:33:423 - haha)
00:42:089 - Keep this soft
00:56:534 - Change this to normal hit sounds

Change this for all of the difficulties.

Taking a look at your actually hit sounds on your notes, when putting hit sounds on sliders, double click the slider end or slider head that way when you put a clap on a slider it will only be put on either the slider head or slider end depending on which ever end you double clicked. <---- You probably already know this but I hear claps on every 1/2 beat in some parts of the song.

[Easy]

00:49:200 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1) - I think this is a bit too hard for newer players. Remove a few circles <--- This will also help in lowering the difficulty a little bit
00:58:089 (4) - There's no need for a really long slider. There are beats in the slider that need mapping. The slider ticks don't really help in hearing the beat because most of the time they are not very audible.
01:00:089 (2) - ^
01:13:423 (4) - Blanket this note with this notes: 01:13:423 (4) - slider end.
01:17:867 (1,3) - blanket (3) better

[Normal+]

00:11:201 (2) - Move this slider to here: 00:10:979
00:24:757 (1) - Slider is too short. Get rid of it please.
01:07:645 (1) - This slider is also short. I would map this with notes but that's up to you.

[Hard]

00:49:423 - Try Copy and Pasting sliders just because having slider with different curves looks really ugly. Though this is different for every song.
00:57:201 (3,1) - How about stacking these notes.
01:03:423 (1,3) - Blanket?

[Insane]

00:27:534 (1,2) - Place these notes closer to the stream
00:37:978 - Why is there a gap here?

I fell as though this difficulty is bland. Maybe that's just me or maybe it because of the timing points. (Which you should really change! >.<)

[Extra]

00:09:646 (6,2,5) - Please stack properly.
00:11:423 (1) - Should probably stack with the ones above as well.
00:54:312 (1,2,3,4) - Not matter how hard I try the best I could do was only get two 100's. I know it is an extra but I really don't like this here.
01:03:978 (3,4,5) - Blanket better

I also feel this is bland. It's almost like you're kinda just placing sliders at random with no real pattern to them. It's hard, not so much fun.

Final Comments

This map mostly has general problems which can be fixed quite easily. May take some time, but it can be fixed as with other things in this map.
All in all, this map needs a ton of work still, it's getting there though so keep going!

Z3R0Xx wrote:

From #modreqs

Just going to mod this...

These are all suggestions, though some I recommend you make the changes. Recommendations will be in bold

[General]

Red Timing Points

Your red timing points I don't really understand

00:00:998 - You have a red timing point here in all difficulties. Though you don't really need to put one here as there is no beat. I would most likely remove it. (vocals don't count as a beat)
Fixed
00:08:313 - This red timing point is in the wrong place. Remember, vocals don't count as a beat, therefore there should not be a red timing point here. Rather this point should be here: 00:08:535
Fixed
00:10:312 - This red timing point is not needed as the red timing point before it is really all you need.
Fixed

Kiai Time

00:31:645 - I don't think this Kiai Time is needed. I suggest to remove it.
Fixed
00:55:423 - Kiai time here should not start here, rather it should start here: 00:56:534 - because that's where you have a (if you've made the timing changes above) downbeat and a huge beat in the song.
Fixed

Difficulty Stars

You have a difficulty under 2 stars. That's great but if you have an easy it needs to be below or equal to 1.50 stars.(Check here if you want to know about star rating)
Easy it is now 1.48 Star Thank

Spacing

So looking at your easier difficulties like Normal+, your notes are actually overlapping a bit, though this isn't a big problem, it makes the map look very squished or cluttered. Looking back at previous mods someone has told you to change it to 1.2x DS. I completely disagree with that. 1.2x DS makes the notes way to close to each other meaning you'll get a ton of overlapping. I think 1.5x DS would be the sweet spot so that there is at least a little bit of space in between each note.
Normal+ >> 1.2 Change to 1.5 DS

Hit sounds

Let's go through your timing points and change up some of the hit sound properties.

00:31:645 - Change to Normal hit sounds (TBH I can't decide if Normal hit sounds should start here 00:33:423 - haha)
00:42:089 - Keep this soft
00:56:534 - Change this to normal hit sounds

Change this for all of the difficulties.

Fixed

Taking a look at your actually hit sounds on your notes, when putting hit sounds on sliders, double click the slider end or slider head that way when you put a clap on a slider it will only be put on either the slider head or slider end depending on which ever end you double clicked. <---- You probably already know this but I hear claps on every 1/2 beat in some parts of the song. <<I cannot find problems ..> < Sorry

[Easy]

00:49:200 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1) - I think this is a bit too hard for newer players. Remove a few circles <--- This will also help in lowering the difficulty a little bit
Fixed
00:58:089 (4) - There's no need for a really long slider. There are beats in the slider that need mapping. The slider ticks don't really help in hearing the beat because most of the time they are not very audible.
Fixed
01:00:089 (2) - ^
Fixed
01:13:423 (4) - Blanket this note with this notes: 01:13:423 (4) - slider end.
I do not understand Sorry
01:17:867 (1,3) - blanket (3) better

I do not understand ... Sorry ><

[Normal+]

00:11:201 (2) - Move this slider to here: 00:10:979
Fixed
00:24:757 (1) - Slider is too short. Get rid of it please.
Did you mean Spinner? Fixed
01:07:645 (1) - This slider is also short. I would map this with notes but that's up to you.
I think it is not necessary to remove ...


[Hard]

00:49:423 - Try Copy and Pasting sliders just because having slider with different curves looks really ugly. Though this is different for every song.
I try to put it modified some
00:57:201 (3,1) - How about stacking these notes.
Fixed
01:03:423 (1,3) - Blanket?
Yes Fixed

[Insane]

00:27:534 (1,2) - Place these notes closer to the stream
Fixed
00:37:978 - Why is there a gap here?
I added some Note

I fell as though this difficulty is bland. Maybe that's just me or maybe it because of the timing points. (Which you should really change! >.<)
I can not put it confused too hard, so that he will become Extra.
But I also can not make it too simple, so that it will become a Hard ...
(Google translation, Sorry my English Very bad...)

[Extra]

00:09:646 (6,2,5) - Please stack properly.
Fixed
00:11:423 (1) - Should probably stack with the ones above as well.
I modified it, Thank You
00:54:312 (1,2,3,4) - Not matter how hard I try the best I could do was only get two 100's. I know it is an extra but I really don't like this here.
think this is suitable for Extra @@
01:03:978 (3,4,5) - Blanket better
I have slightly modified

I also feel this is bland. It's almost like you're kinda just placing sliders at random with no real pattern to them. It's hard, not so much fun.
I think this is no problem Maybe ..

Final Comments

This map mostly has general problems which can be fixed quite easily. May take some time, but it can be fixed as with other things in this map.
All in all, this map needs a ton of work still, it's getting there though so keep going!
I will work hard

Thank You mod my map

Hello, from #modreqs

General:
Take out commas from your tags, it's not necessary : P

Easy:
00:13:898(1) - Maybe try to make this slider more rounded
00:49:413 New combo could fit here
01:08:998(1,1,1) - This might be hard/confusing for new players to read these combos
Change your approach rate to 3 or 4. AR 5 is quite fast for new players.

Notes: Your easy difficulty has many overlaps and 1/2 beats. The flow is kind of off as well. This might be hard for easy players to play ^^;

Overall, the rhythm you have is great and follows the music

Best of luck on your map! ^^

trammiexo wrote:

Hello, from #modreqs

General:
Take out commas from your tags, it's not necessary : P

Easy:
00:13:898(1) - Maybe try to make this slider more rounded
Fixed
00:49:413 New combo could fit here
Fixed
01:08:998(1,1,1) - This might be hard/confusing for new players to read these combos
, I do not think it difficult @@ Sorry
Change your approach rate to 3 or 4. AR 5 is quite fast for new players.
AR Change to 3


Notes: Your easy difficulty has many overlaps and 1/2 beats. The flow is kind of off as well. This might be hard for easy players to play ^^;
I will try to modify it ..

Overall, the rhythm you have is great and follows the music
:)

Best of luck on your map! ^^

Thank You Mod My map

starred <3 (now u hav 2 rank it k)

will mod this tomorrow

VINXIS wrote:

starred <3 (now u hav 2 rank it k)

will mod this tomorrow

OK, Thank you for helping me