1. Easy (1,45 stars, 68 notes)
2. Fatfan Kolek's Insane (4,15 stars, 269 notes)
3. Gex's Hard (2,77 stars, 172 notes)
4. Kenterz's Insane (3,58 stars, 261 notes)
5. Normal (1,8 stars, 125 notes)

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1. The artist should be TK from 凛として時雨. Leave the romanized artist as it is.
2. Your audio file has a very low quality. Here you have a better one: http://puu.sh/aUjIg/44b30d3697.mp3
3. The background must be exactly 1366x768 and yours is 1365x768. This image has the right resolution: http://puu.sh/aUjZf/22125b9362.jpg Also I deleted the text that was at the top-right corner for a nicer looking.
4. BPM is okay, but offset should be 8100. When you are timing a song you wanna make sure that the first timing point (red line) matches with the first note of the song, this is very important because it makes mapping a lot easier. Also make sure that you change the offset in every diff or else you will get errors.
5. The hitsounds hurt my ears ;w; They are too loud. Please go to "song setup > audio" and decrease the sample volume to 50%. Do this in all the diffs.
6. I like to encourage people to use nice combo colors, the default ones never fit well...
7. Consider adding a preview point. You can do this by going to the timing menu and selecting "Set Current Position as Preview Point". I'd recommend to set it at 00:55:006
8. You haven't added any tags to the song. You could add "anime, opening" and anything else that is somewhat related to the song.
9. The countdown is not needed here, disable it in all diffs from "song setup > design" and uncheck "Enable Countdown"

Gexigamma wrote:

Hi! ^.^ Here is my mod as requested

I won't mod specifically the diffs but the whole mapset itself because there are some flaws that need to be fixed before enter in detail.

1. The artist should be TK from 凛として時雨. Leave the romanized artist as it is.
2. Your audio file has a very low quality. Here you have a better one: http://puu.sh/aUjIg/44b30d3697.mp3
3. The background must be exactly 1366x768 and yours is 1365x768. This image has the right resolution: http://puu.sh/aUjZf/22125b9362.jpg Also I deleted the text that was at the top-right corner for a nicer looking.
4. BPM is okay, but offset should be 8100. When you are timing a song you wanna make sure that the first timing point (red line) matches with the first note of the song, this is very important because it makes mapping a lot easier. Also make sure that you change the offset in every diff or else you will get errors.
5. The hitsounds hurt my ears ;w; They are too loud. Please go to "song setup > audio" and decrease the sample volume to 50%. Do this in all the diffs.
6. I like to encourage people to use nice combo colors, the default ones never fit well...
7. Consider adding a preview point. You can do this by going to the timing menu and selecting "Set Current Position as Preview Point". I'd recommend to set it at 00:55:006
8. You haven't added any tags to the song. You could add "anime, opening" and anything else that is somewhat related to the song.
9. The countdown is not needed here, disable it in all diffs from "song setup > design" and uncheck "Enable Countdown"

These are some basic things that need to be fixed asap. When you finish with all that poke me ingame so I can help you in more detail with the diffs.

GL

1. First of all, there are some problems with the timing points and kiai time. You changed the offset, and because of that you have to change the timing points in the timing section. But before that, you have to decide where the kiai time will be, and tbh I don't think the current ones fit well with the song. I'd suggest to delete the timing points and set another 2 at 00:56:099 - and 01:20:988 - because here the song feels more powerful than the other 2 kiai segments you marked. However, if you decide to keep the other kiai times, plz ensure that they start and end in a big white tick.
2. There are some notes that you didn't fixed :/ Some are placed in blue ticks, which is definitely not a good idea for an easy diff. Others are placed in red ticks, which are possible, but should be avoided to keep things easier for the player. Here's a list of wrong placed notes:
   
   1. 00:27:433 (6) - Move to the next white tick.
   2. 00:37:655 (6) - Move to the previous white tick. 00:37:877 (7) - Move to the next white tick. 00:39:655 (9) - 00:40:211 (10) - These are badly placed.
   3. 00:48:877 (1) - Badly placed :/
   4. 00:51:766 (1) - ^^^
   5. 01:06:877 (1) - ^^^
   6. 01:12:099 (1) - Slider end is on blue tick.
3. Once everything from above is fixed I'd like to recommend some rhythm changes here and there:
   
   1. 00:18:099 - Consider add note here to fill this gap. You can either add a note or repeat the slider. You choose.
   2. 00:19:655 (1) - This slider should end at 00:20:544 - imo
   3. 00:23:655 - Add note here again to fill gap.
   4. 00:24:544 (4) - You could make this a repeating slider.
   5. 00:27:211 - You can hear here the drums remarking, to achieve the same effect I'd suggest to add two hitcircles at 00:27:211 - and 00:27:655 -
   6. 01:12:988 (2,1) - You aren't following the music here. Consider remapping this part.
   7. 01:20:988 (1) - After this note you could add a spinner.
4. Combos should be based on the sound (drumming, guitar-streaming, singing) of the music in some way. I'm not sure if I can explain this, but you can look it as if they were verses in the lyrics of the song. When a verse ends, the combo ends. More or less.

Gexigamma wrote:

K here is my recheck. I'll point out everything I can Don't give kds

[Easy]

1. First of all, there are some problems with the timing points and kiai time. You changed the offset, and because of that you have to change the timing points in the timing section. But before that, you have to decide where the kiai time will be, and tbh I don't think the current ones fit well with the song. I'd suggest to delete the timing points and set another 2 at 00:56:099 - and 01:20:988 - because here the song feels more powerful than the other 2 kiai segments you marked. However, if you decide to keep the other kiai times, plz ensure that they start and end in a big white tick.
2. There are some notes that you didn't fixed :/ Some are placed in blue ticks, which is definitely not a good idea for an easy diff. Others are placed in red ticks, which are possible, but should be avoided to keep things easier for the player. Here's a list of wrong placed notes:
   
   1. 00:27:433 (6) - Move to the next white tick.
   2. 00:37:655 (6) - Move to the previous white tick. 00:37:877 (7) - Move to the next white tick. 00:39:655 (9) - 00:40:211 (10) - These are badly placed.
   3. 00:48:877 (1) - Badly placed :/
   4. 00:51:766 (1) - ^^^
   5. 01:06:877 (1) - ^^^
   6. 01:12:099 (1) - Slider end is on blue tick.
3. Once everything from above is fixed I'd like to recommend some rhythm changes here and there:
   
   1. 00:18:099 - Consider add note here to fill this gap. You can either add a note or repeat the slider. You choose.
   2. 00:19:655 (1) - This slider should end at 00:20:544 - imo
   3. 00:23:655 - Add note here again to fill gap.
   4. 00:24:544 (4) - You could make this a repeating slider.
   5. 00:27:211 - You can hear here the drums remarking, to achieve the same effect I'd suggest to add two hitcircles at 00:27:211 - and 00:27:655 -
   6. 01:12:988 (2,1) - You aren't following the music here. Consider remapping this part.
   7. 01:20:988 (1) - After this note you could add a spinner.
4. Combos should be based on the sound (drumming, guitar-streaming, singing) of the music in some way. I'm not sure if I can explain this, but you can look it as if they were verses in the lyrics of the song. When a verse ends, the combo ends. More or less.

[Normal & Hard O.o]
I'm afraid that you'll have to redo both :S The main issue is the rhythm, the notes are bad time-spaced and the sliders seems to be randomly placed. idk what can I do to help you with those ;w;

I'd recommend you to read these links with useful info if you are really willing to remap.
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Beatmapping
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Music_Theory

Pulses wrote:

Easy:

SPOILER

You should change the beat snap divisor to 1/3 or 1/4 for mapping this map.

1- 00:39:877 - Should move a note earlier
2- 00:40:211 - ^ same
3- 00:53:877 - should replace the spinner with circles or sliders... just don't spinner

Normal:

SPOILER

You should mod/map this diff under beat snap 1/6.

and nothing's wrong

1. so the first difficulty i testplayed was easy, and i noticed that you hadn't used distance snap the whole time. on easy/normal diffs, distance snap is necessary throughout the entire map, with the exception of large gaps/stacks. by large gaps, i mean something like 00:19:655 (2,1) - since the length of time given between these two objects is enough to read the approach circle on 00:21:877 (1) - . stacks... well you know what those are. so, in the easy, something like 00:24:544 (4,1) - which is a sudden jump of 1.5x should be reduced to 1.0x, which seems to be your base distance snap. something like 00:44:544 (5,1) - , which is a .8x jump, should be increased to 1x and so on for everywhere in this difficulty and the normal.
2. when opening your map in the editor, the first thing i noticed was your grid level was really low. increase your grid level to 4 while you're mapping. this is just a technical thing that will make everything a lot easier for you in regards to spacing. right now you use 1x mostly, but because grid level is set to 2, spacing is more variable. for example, 00:56:099 (1,2,3) - there should be equal spacing between the tail of 1, 2, and the head of 3. visually, from this to this. pretty much all minor spacing inconsistencies can be fixed if you go through your map after adjusting your grid size to 4 then using the distance snap thing. sometimes you'll even want to turn off grid snap to get precise stuff with sliders, so don't be afraid to do that.
3. last thing about spacing here - your hard diff. on hards, you don't have to follow distance snap the whole time, but it's recommended that you do so for a lot of it. when things are consistent in the music, make them consistent with your spacing. 00:49:877 (3,4,5) - and 00:51:655 (2,3,4) - represent the same rhythm, but the first is spaced at .7x distance snap and the latter 1x. for the most part, you used 1x distance snap on this diff, so it's not something you need to worry about too much.
4. since i just mentioned 00:56:099 (1,2,3) - above, i thought i should say something about symmetrical patterns. when doing symmetrical stuff, make sure they're exactly symmetrical. it's really obvious when something isn't symmetrical, like this place currently isn't, so use keyboard shortcuts like ctrl+h and ctrl+j when working with horizontal or vertical symmetry respectively. so, in this instance, you can create 00:56:099 (1) - as your first slider, then copy/paste it to 00:57:877 and finally then press ctrl+H to have perfect symmetry between 1 and 3
5. next, a bit on your "new combo" usage. in most cases, you'll want to follow a pattern of some sort. what fits best for the way you've currently mapped is a 2 measure NC pattern for easy/normal and a 1 measure pattern for hard. if you're unfamiliar with music terminology, a "measure" is just the period between large white ticks. what i mean by this is you'll want to start a new combo on every other measure for your easy/normal difficulties and one on every measure for your hard diff. combos affect how fast your health drains, so you really should keep them consistent throughout the entire map, excluding places where you're pointing out inconsistencies in the music with slider velocity changes, 1/3 or 1/6 rhythms, or anything else that's just abnormal.
6. neeeext, sliders with red anchors/sharp curves. this is referring to sliders shaped like 00:15:211 (1,2) in the easy diff. the red anchors there are... well, unnecessary. when making sharp curves with red anchors like these, it should be done to emphasize something strong, but these aren't emphasizing anything. they're just there, i guess. since there's rhythmic stuff on the 1/2 beats during this song, you could move it so that the curve changes on the 1/2 beats, but it would probably be more appropriate to just have an ordinary curve here. there's nothing to indicate something strong or abnormal, which red anchors are used for in sliders like these.
7. not too major since you didn't do this much, but make sure you avoid overlaps with slider bodies in easy/normal. of course there are some exceptions, but overlapping circles with the slider body, an example being 00:42:544 (2,3,4,5) - on the easy, is pretty much a no-go. as i said, you don't really do this much, but yeah. just remember to avoid that. those playing easy/normal diffs are mentally handicapped and can't read that kind of object placement
8. i hope you like reading. next thing is hitsounding. there's some places where you've got some claps, but aside from that, you've got pretty much no hitsounds, which is unrankable. similarly to new comboing, you'll want to create a pattern of some sort with your hitsounds based on the repetitive instrumental stuff going on in the backbeats (so the drums). in the easy difficulty, you've got a pattern going for a bit at 00:56:099 (1) - with a clap on every third beat of a measure, but you stopped that after a few measure and went back to no hitsounds at all. a simple pattern like claps on beats 1 and 3 works, but it's best to create something that sounds good in accordance to the actual song. in silent parts like 00:41:877 (1) - that kind of clap pattern wouldn't really fit, so you'll want to do something different. whatever you do happen to decide on doing, make sure it's consistent throughout the section. if you don't know what i mean by that, take 00:48:988 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - as an example of a "section." you've got a bunch of claps spammed on every beat for 00:48:988 (1,2,3,4,1) - , but you don't have any claps on 00:52:544 (2,3,4) - . nothing in the music has changed between these, so it doesn't make much sense to stop your hitsounding pattern. you can probably tell where the "sections" of the song are just by listening, so judge for yourself and see what you think would work for a hitsounding pattern for each section. BeatOfIke wrote some stuff about specific hitsounds, so that's located in the box below.
   
   BeatofIke's hitsounding tips. ignore any timestamp examples he gives since they're for another map

   BeatofIke wrote:

   For Finish hitsounding, I like to add them in parts where I can hear the cymbal crashes (like a loud "pssshh" sound) in the music. The finish hitsounding is often the easiest to do, since most of the time you just add finishes for cymbal crashes or just any loud prominent sound your hear in the music.
   
   For clap hitsounding, almost ANY type of music (other than those with complex beats, break rhythms, guitar riffs, and what not such as in dnb, metal, etc.) will sound good if you add claps on every 2nd and 4th beats in respect with a 4/4 measure (4 beats per measure). More often, you will hear a constant percussion (drum) sounds on every 2nd and 4th beats. This is also considered to be relatively easy to hitsound if used carefully. Again, you can use any type of clap hitsound you like (soft-clap is often my personal preference, but I sometimes use normal-claps and drum-claps if I feel that it sounds better on some parts of the music). And lastly, they the whistle hitsounding.
   
   Whistle hitsounding - You can use whistles for keysounds (piano for example), synths, vocals, guitar, finger snaps, and any other melodic sounds out there. You can even use whistles as the same for claps (every 2nd and 4th beats for example), usually for softer parts of the music like in 02:16:815 - 02:40:088 (the slow part you did is good btw). There are obliviously many other ways to use whistles, but for now....only focus on the softer parts of the music since this is instrumental (non-vocal) music with no keysounds in it. It may helpful to look at other ranked mapsets to discover other ways you can use whistles. Anyways, that's all I can really help you with. Hope this advice helps and good luck!

9. still about hitsounds -- one thing that i'm not sure if you know about is the ability to change between the normal/soft/drum samplesets. by creating a new uninherited timing point (these green lines) you can change between the pre-existing samplesets under the "Audio" tab. there's a lot of extremely soft sections in this song which would definitely benefit from usage fo the soft sampleset.
10. another thing about htisounds (i could include them in the same bullet point but i think it may be better to separate lol). whenever you have a hitsound pattern that you're using, make sure that you don't ignore any beats that have hitsounds based on your pattern. going back to your clap on every third beat hitsound pattern in the easy diff at 00:56:099 (1) - you're emphasizing every third beat of a measure by including the clap hitsound there. however, you adjust some rhythm stuff and end up with a slider going through the place where a clap should be at 01:05:877 - , leading to a lack of expected emphasis on that part. so yeah, there should be an object of some kind in the middle of the slider at 01:05:433 (2) - to support the emphasis provided by the clap hitsound in your pattern thing (assuming that was the pattern you were going with).
11. last thing (and most important in my opinion) would be your rhythms. to start, in the hard diff, you're only following the vocals for a large portion, which leaves huge gaps, like the one between 00:09:433 (5,1) - . if you listen, you can hear there are some pretty strong beats that are being ignored which you really should consider adding objects to. notice that i also circled the end of 00:09:433 (5) - because slider ends usually don't allow for much emphasis. when the player actually "clicks" on an object, they're able to actually feel/produce the emphasis, but having a slider end on an important beat like this kind of messes that up. you can read more about that on Jenny's userpage since it's explained a lot better there. anyway, back to the point of this - when you're mapping vocals, don't map so that you're ignoring the backbeats. they're more important than vocals (in most cases), so you'll really want to map with those in mind first, then vocals as additional rhythmic somethingsomething.
12. last last thing (still about rhythms). gaps in rhythms. throughout the entire hard diff there's unnatural gaps in your rhythm placement that are not apparent in the song, such as 01:04:988 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - 01:08:544 (1,2) - 00:20:544 (5,1) - etc. since the map is supposed to represent the song, it would be a good idea to fill in those gaps. like a reeeally good idea. if you were to take a look at some of the recently ranked hards, you'll be able to see that there's nothing majorly ignored as you've done so a lot throughout this difficulty. pretty much wherever you've got a gap, think to yourself whether or not there's something that actually indicates so in the music. something like 00:54:322 (1,2) - is deserving of the gap since there's a definite stop in the music, but other places not quite as much.
13. lastlastlast thing. i was hoping this was not the case, but it became pretty obvious while writing things that your normal difficulty is a copy/paste of the hard diff with some objects removed and a few areas changed. doing that is a really bad idea for reasons that i don't even know how to explain. it's just... don't. for the sake of mankind. i don't know what i'm talking about anymore but yeahdon'tdothat

Sky Trias wrote:

[Hi .. From #modreqs]

• [Easy]

1. 00:39:211 (5) - remove Clap ? Done
   
2. 01:05:877 (4) - repeat this Slider I disagree
   
3. 01:06:766 (1) - move this Spinner to 01:06:988 until 01:09:877 I disagree

• [Normal]

1. 00:41:877 (4,5) - Change to Slider , and put the slider in 00:41:877 (4) place Done
   ( like this http://puu.sh/bdWve/5a06b850d9.png )
   
2. 00:42:766 (6) - Put in end of slider I disagree made a blanket instead

• [Gex's Hard]

1. 00:21:766 (7) - move this to 00:21:655 I disagree
   
2. 00:21:877 - add a note
   make like this ( http://puu.sh/bdVLD/ce7816e917.png )I disagree

Hope this help you
Good Luck !

Anyway Thanks for moding

Kenterz wrote:

Hey, mod from my queue

Easy

1. 00:41:877 (2,3) - Maybe you can try to fix this overlap by making a blanket ? Exemple :
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:59:655 (1,3,1) - I think you can try to stack these 3 sliders with 00:56:099 (1,3) ? Then the pattern you made is gonna be cleaner and prettier.
3. 01:05:877 (4) - Maybe you can add a hitclap on this slider's head, it'll follow the hitsound pattern you made before

Done

Normal

00:08:099 (1,2) - You can increase the flow of this pattern I think, maybe if you move (2) in (1)'s movement (it's hard to understand, here is an exemple

SPOILER

[*]01:01:433 (6,2) - Try to avoid the overlap here, for exemple by moving (2) at x196|y196
[*]01:12:988 (4) - Not really important, but you may stack it with 01:11:211 (2) ?[/list]

Done

Gex's Hard

1. 00:14:322 (6,7) - I think you can avoid the overlap here, try to move (7) around x300|y224
2. 00:16:544 (5,6) - The flow is quite bad here, (5)'s slider's movement goes at the opposite way of 00:16:988 (6), so maybe you could reverse the curve ? Like this exemple :
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:19:655 (3,4) - Same problem here, as I said you can reverse the slider's curve (and maybe make a blanket with 00:18:766 (1)'s tail ?)
4. 00:49:322 (2,3,4) - I think these kinds of distance for 1/4 is very hard, it's only used for Extra, so I really think you should use a shorter distance between these objects :
   
   SPOILER

   
   Try to fix the other ones in this part : 00:51:099 (2,3,4) - and 00:52:877 (2,3,4,5,1).
5. 01:05:655 (6,7) - I think you can make a cleaner blanket, try to move (7) at x168|y72.
6. 01:13:211 (8) - I suggest a clap on this slider's tail ? :3
7. 01:19:877 - Maybe you can add a circle here, it'll follow the voice ; I was thinking 01:20:099 (6) was at 01:19:877, so it'll avoid these kinds of fail.

Leaving it to gexi

I really like the song, I think maybe you can add an Insane here ?

Anyway, good luck for rank \:D/

Kenterz wrote:

Gex's Hard

1. 00:14:322 (6,7) - I think you can avoid the overlap here, try to move (7) around x300|y224 why should be avoided? it's ok imo
2. 00:16:544 (5,6) - The flow is quite bad here, (5)'s slider's movement goes at the opposite way of 00:16:988 (6), so maybe you could reverse the curve ? I look at it again and yeah you're right
3. 00:19:655 (3,4) - Same problem here, as I said you can reverse the slider's curve (and maybe make a blanket with 00:18:766 (1)'s tail ?) I made someting different
4. 00:49:322 (2,3,4) - I think these kinds of distance for 1/4 is very hard, it's only used for Extra, so I really think you should use a shorter distance between these objects. Try to fix the other ones in this part : 00:51:099 (2,3,4) - and 00:52:877 (2,3,4,5,1). You're right, all fixed here
5. 01:05:655 (6,7) - I think you can make a cleaner blanket, try to move (7) at x168|y72. I rotated things a bit to get a better blanket
6. 01:13:211 (8) - I suggest a clap on this slider's tail ? :3 Oh I missed that ;w; Fixed
7. 01:19:877 - Maybe you can add a circle here, it'll follow the voice ; I was thinking 01:20:099 (6) was at 01:19:877, so it'll avoid these kinds of fail. hmmmk

appleeaterx wrote:

from #modreq

:idea: General

* Clean

:arrow: Testplay

* Easy (+DT,HR) - Score ~ Replay
* Normal (+DT,HR) - Score ~ Replay
* Gex's Hard - Score ~ Replay
* Kenterz's Insane - Score ~ Replay

Kenterz's Insane

* 00:11:655 (1) - Adding another slider point makes the slider prettier imo.

* 00:15:211 (1) - The begin of the slider is missing a hitsound. Find a deep finish hitsound to make it sound better. (I suggest the standard drum finish) Okey
* 00:27:211 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe you did this on purpose, but I don't really understand the spacing in this small stream. Then fixed
* 00:53:877 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - I see that you are NC all notes on 1/8 streams, but don't do this too much. It's to warning people about the 1/6 because they can think it's 1/4

Nice mapset, work a little more on the easier diff's patterns and it should be good to go! Good luck

EDIT: Just saw it, but the difficulty settings need to be checked by a high-skilled modder/BAT imo.[/color]

-Mo- wrote:

Since you helped me with my first beatmap, I'll give my first modding a go here. I guess I gotta start somewhere.

Orange Notes = Not so important, ignore if you really want.

Easy

00:08:099 (1) - You're missing a Clap at the slider start, and it is inconsistent with the combo. Fixed
00:43:655 (3,4) - Replacing it with a reverse slider that lands on White|Blue|Red ticks matches with the vocals better.
01:19:211 (4,5) - The Claps sounds out of place. Either make it consistent with everything after the first spinner, or consider replacing with Finishes.
There are no clap sounds (it sounds just fine to me )

Normal

00:08:099 (1,2) - I would have it like the second combo so it is consistent. I want it this way
00:13:433 (3) - Replacing with a circle has a better feel to it. Fixed
00:16:544 (3) - Moving this to the left a bit, possibly past 2, would have a better flow.
00:41:877 (4,5) - Similar to the Orange in Easy. Slider at White|Blue|Red matches better.
00:43:655 (1,2,3) - Same as above. If you do this, having a slider instead of three circles will have better polarity.
00:45:433 (1,2,3,4,5) - This just doesn't sound like it goes with the music. I would personally redo this and incorporate red ticks. Gona keep it as it is for now
00:53:877 (4) - Move diagonally Left+Up one or two grid spaces to make the triple look better. Fixed
00:56:099 (4) - New combo since it starts Kiai. Gona keep it as it is for now
01:02:766 (2) - Is behind the slider and is possibly confusing for newer players. U can still see it though (keeping it as it is for now)
01:19:211 (1,2,3) - I would personally have this as one combo. Fixed (if u mean the last combo)

Didn't spot anything too jarring in Kenterz's Insane. I'm inexperienced so I apologise for that.

Thanks for moding

PuttyoU wrote:

Hello , from my modding queues!
My English is very poor, sorry
[Normal]

1. 00:08:099 (1,2) - I think this pattern is good. Fixed
   
   

   93,75,8099,6,0,P|176:28|260:75,1,200
   176,130,9433,2,0,P|168:170|108:198,1,100

2. 00:09:433 (2) - finish in tail Fixed
3. 00:13:433 (3) - finish Fixed
4. 00:20:544 (4) - rotate by 11° Fixed
5. 00:33:877 (2,3) - clap Fixed
6. 00:35:877 (6,7) - ^ Fixed
7. 00:37:433 (2,3) - ^ Fixed
8. 00:39:433 (6,7) - ^ Fixed
9. 00:41:877 (4) - finish in head Fixed
10. 00:54:322 (1) - ^ Fixed
    
    You add hidsound.

[Easy]

1. 00:11:655 (3) - NC Fixed
2. 00:27:655 (3) - finish Fixed
3. 00:56:099 (1) - finish in head Fixed
4. 01:10:322 (1) - clap in tail Fixed
5. 01:11:211 (2) - ^ Fixed
6. 01:12:099 (3) - ^ Fixed
7. 01:13:877 (1) - ^ Fixed
8. 01:15:211 (3) - clap Fixed
9. 01:15:655 (4) - clap in tail Fixed

I want original hitsound

I like this maps!!
I wait ranked.
Good luck

Thanks for your mod

PuttyoU wrote:

Hello , from my modding queues!
My English is very poor, sorry

[Kenterz's Insane]

1. 00:14:433 - rhythm suggestion It doesn't follow he song =/
   
2. 00:22:322 (1) - finish in head Fixed
3. 00:53:433 (1) - I think slider end 00:53:766 - the good Fixed
4. 00:55:655 (4) - NC Fixed
5. 01:04:877 (4) - there is not note but 1/8 slider I think it's better with a circle, because this will be the only moment where there's a 1/8 slider ._.
6. 01:09:099 (3) - this note 01:08:988 - the fit in song Fixed
7. 01:10:099 (6) - clap Fixed

I want original hitsound

I like this maps!!
I wait ranked.
Good luck

appleeaterx wrote:

Gex's Hard

* 00:14:322 (6,7) - I don't really like this overlap, and I strongly suggest to change this. But if you decide to do this, you'll have to space everything evenly again - you can use the code if you want. uguu~ nobody likes this overlap. Ok fixed.
* 00:20:544 (6,7,8) - Sudden change of rhythm here (blue-tick) - I recommend adding a NC to indicate this, but you can leave it as it is. Hmm not a bad idea. Fixed.
* 00:22:988 (2) - Distance Snap allows this to be a blanket, so I recommend making a good blanket here. Done
* 00:35:322 (4) - I'm not a big fan of sliders starting on the blue tick, but I guess the song allows it. The slider is just to replace to hitcircles.
* 00:40:766 (2) - Move this note to x116,y92, so it has the same spacing as * 00:41:655 (4,1) Has the same spacing already. What do you mean?
* 00:47:877 (1) - Do something more interesting here - maybe a SV change, or a more unique slider. Did both xD
* 00:57:877 (4) - Move to x0,y264 for a better blanket. Sure
* 01:01:433 (4) - Move to x276,y348 for a better blanket. Yup
* 01:20:988 (1) - End spinner on blue tick like the Insane diff. Okay

-Mo- wrote:

00:20:544 (6,7,8) - The polarity is difficult to follow when playing blind (http://youtu.be/53PkFLrK8Ws). Fixed in previous mod. Also I replaced the hitcircles with a slider.
00:27:655 (1,2,3) - Same as above. Yup, replaced with slider.

PuttyoU wrote:

[Gex's Hard]

1. 00:27:988 - ignore note and add reverse slider here 00:27:877 - Did it while fixing previous mod
2. 01:05:877 (7,8) - place suggestion hhmm nope. Is making a weird blanket with 01:04:988 (5,7)
3. 01:09:877 (8) - clap in head and tail Made something different
4. 01:13:655 (9) - clap in head Yup, feels better
5. 01:24:433 - spinner end here Fixed in previous mod

1. 00:08:099 - I dont understand why youre using normal sample set, it should be at least soft sampleset to keep consistency with this part 00:41:655 (and using soft sample set also sounds better for this first part)
2. 00:13:433 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm is wrong and plays bad imo, doesnt flow well with the music, it should be something more like this: 00:13:433 (1,2,3,4) -
3. 00:16:766 (1) - Because youre using a slider, im going to supposed that you started to follow the vocals, on which case, its wrong, the singer starts to hold his note at 00:16:988 - so slider should start there
4. 00:21:322 (3) - If youre trying to follow the guitars, you should hitsound it to make it more obvious, else it looks random imo.
5. 00:24:988 (4) - Inconsistent with what you did above, you should also add a note at 00:25:099 - to keep it consistent, or delete the note at 1/4 from 00:21:322 (3) -
6. 00:26:433 - Its missing a note, but you should not just add an circle in here, I recommend you something more like this: http://puu.sh/bhE3E/c4189f2548.jpg
7. 00:32:174 (1,1,1,1) - Absolutely no need for NC spam here, take them out, there are other ways to highlight the fact that they are in 1/6, and spamming NC is not one of them. One of them would depend on how you mapped it, but it failed since its pretty much the same as the rest of the map, so you have the option to remap it so its very clear its 1/6, or just replace them with a slider with repeats (the easiest way)
8. 00:38:211 (6,1) - Maaaybe increase the spacing between these two object to make it more obvious that both of them are part of different parts. In fact, Id remap it to make it more differentt, but up to you, its just mere personal taste.
9. 00:45:211 - Vocals pretty strong here, it shouldnt be mapped by a slider end here.
10. 00:53:877 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Again with the NC spam.
11. 01:20:322 - Plays better if a slider started here instead, as in do something like this: http://puu.sh/bhF7L/41a74d9468.jpg
    
    There were some good parts in the map, I wont deny it (00:48:988 - ) and hitsounds could be better if you were to replace some of your clap hitsounds with a whistle.

1. 00:26:766 (3,4) - Maybe give them a different pattern to make it go along with the fact that it sounds 'different' (higher volume)
2. 00:34:988 (3) - Well, slider, technically should start at 00:35:099 - and then end 00:35:322 -
3. 00:36:766 (3) - Same as above, this one too 00:33:211 (2) -
4. 00:38:544 (3) - Same as above, etc etc
   
5. 00:57:877 (4,5,6) - If I were you, Id put these three objects in a slider with repeat (like 00:56:988 (3) - )The way you mapped this its not very clear that (5) lands in a blue tick
6. 01:04:433 (3) - Same as above
   
   [Normal]
   
   Diff in general is quite lacking hitsounds, remember that hitsounds job is not only to make the map sound good, but also helps players to keep the rhythm, at least add the usual clap every second and fourth white tick in the kiai (although whole map is recommended)
   
7. 00:14:766 - Maybe add a circle here, sounds good.
   
   [Easy]
   
8. 00:14:766 - Maybe add a circle here, sounds good.
9. 01:09:433 - And another circle here too

Fluttershy03 wrote:

[Gex's Hard]

00:20:544 (1) - There's no need for the NC here, it will be more consistent if you removed it. With the NC I wanted to indicate the rhythm change, but later I added more sliders so I guess this NC can be removed now.

00:36:544 (1) - Add a soft finish here? It'll make the other two finishes on the starts of 00:35:655 (5,7) - sound stronger since 3 is more memorable than 2. Okok. Added.

00:40:099 (1) -Might want to add a soft finish here as well to keep consistency if you accepted my suggestion above. Yup

00:56:988 (3) - Curve this a bit more so that the blanket over 00:57:877 (4) - becomes a lot clearer and noticeable. It'll look better imo. idk how to curve it without messing it up the previous hitcircles and stuff. Instead I tried another shape.

01:00:544 (3) - Like my above suggestion, this will look better curved. Same as above.

01:10:322 (1) - Add a clap here for similar reasons as my first two suggestions for this diff, 3 is more memorable than 2. No, because there are different sounds

Fluttershy03 wrote:

Hi, mod here~ any questions about my mod post then pm me ingame.

[Kenterz's Insane]

00:11:655 (7) - You should add an NC here to split up the 2 measure long combo since it would be more consistent. Feels odd that most of the combos in this peaceful part of the map are 1 measure long and this one is 2.

00:56:099 (1,2) - These two sliders are touching eachother. I know this is very minor but could you fix this? I think it'll look nicer.

01:17:433 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This pattern feels a little out of place, since it's the only one of it's kind throughout the entire mapset. You should replace it with something else. I think any jump pattern will be out of place =/


Well that's it from me! Good luck on rank!

Xanandra wrote:

Hello

[Insane]

1. 00:08:099 - I dont understand why youre using normal sample set, it should be at least soft sampleset to keep consistency with this part 00:41:655 (and using soft sample set also sounds better for this first part)
2. 00:13:433 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm is wrong and plays bad imo, doesnt flow well with the music, it should be something more like this: 00:13:433 (1,2,3,4) - I can't see your exemple
3. 00:16:766 (1) - Because youre using a slider, im going to supposed that you started to follow the vocals, on which case, its wrong, the singer starts to hold his note at 00:16:988 - so slider should start there
4. 00:21:322 (3) - If youre trying to follow the guitars, you should hitsound it to make it more obvious, else it looks random imo.
5. 00:24:988 (4) - Inconsistent with what you did above, you should also add a note at 00:25:099 - to keep it consistent, or delete the note at 1/4 from 00:21:322 (3) -
6. 00:26:433 - Its missing a note, but you should not just add an circle in here, I recommend you something more like this: http://puu.sh/bhE3E/c4189f2548.jpg
7. 00:32:174 (1,1,1,1) - Absolutely no need for NC spam here, take them out, there are other ways to highlight the fact that they are in 1/6, and spamming NC is not one of them. One of them would depend on how you mapped it, but it failed since its pretty much the same as the rest of the map, so you have the option to remap it so its very clear its 1/6, or just replace them with a slider with repeats (the easiest way)
8. 00:38:211 (6,1) - Maaaybe increase the spacing between these two object to make it more obvious that both of them are part of different parts. In fact, Id remap it to make it more differentt, but up to you, its just mere personal taste.
9. 00:45:211 - Vocals pretty strong here, it shouldnt be mapped by a slider end here.
10. 00:53:877 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Again with the NC spam.
11. 01:20:322 - Plays better if a slider started here instead, as in do something like this: http://puu.sh/bhF7L/41a74d9468.jpg
    
    There were some good parts in the map, I wont deny it (00:48:988 - ) and hitsounds could be better if you were to replace some of your clap hitsounds with a whistle.

Also, gonna mod it until here, gotta do some stuff, will come back later!

Fluttershy03 wrote:

Hi, mod here~ any questions about my mod post then pm me ingame.

[Easy]

00:11:655 (1) - I recommend removing the clap you put here to stay consistent with the head of 00:08:099 (1) - and 00:15:211 (1) - Fixed

00:20:988 (3,4,5) - Rearrange these into an equilateral; triangle so that it will look nicer and less scruffy. Make sure to keep (5) blanketted though.
Fixed

00:43:655 (3) - Move this to x:264 y:205 to it blankets the head of 00:41:877 (2) - in a nicer fashion.
Fixed

00:50:767 (4,5,6) - I don't like this pattern for 2 reasons; first I find that (5,6) are too curved for it to look nice, and the repeat arrow of (6) is partially overlapped, making it hard to read. I'd consider changing the position of the notes a bit so that they can easily be read.
Fixed

00:52:544 (6) - Add a NC here? I think it'll be better so it would be more consistent with the main NC pattern you've been doing for most of the map.
Fixed

01:13:433 (5) - Add a clap here to keep this a more consistent clap pattern, making it sound more pleasing to the ears.
Fixed

01:16:544 (5,1,3) - Add claps on the sliderends and the circle I mentioned to keep the clap pattern going. I think it makes more sense, I don't know why it suddenly stops :/
Fixed

[Normal]

I feel that you need to add a larger variety of hitsounds. Right now a can't really hear them that much. There are also combo inconsistencies, so be sure to sort that out.

00:13:433 (3) - I suggest adding a finish here so it is more consistent, since the end of 00:09:433 (2) - has a finish as well.
Fixed

00:28:544 (5,2) - I suggest moving these two a bit so that they are on the same x:y as each other. I think this'll look neater this way.
Fixed

00:37:433 (2) - This could be blanketted better, try moving this circle to x:322 y:178 to improve this.
Fixed

00:47:211 (4) - This slider is a little too curved, try curving it less so it is identical to 00:45:433 (1) - , helping keep consistency with sliders.
Fixed (I think)
01:01:433 (6,1,2,3) - To be honest, this doesn't play or look well since (2,3) is hidden beneath (6). The best advice I could give you is to redo the pattern.
Remade pattern

01:09:433 (2,2) - Not fond of how these two sliderends are overlapping eachother in a way that they are only partially visible. Fix this by either making it a perfect stack or by not overlapping them at all.
Fixed

Well that's it from me! Good luck on rank!

Kiiwa wrote:

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[Kenterz's Insane]

1. 00:30:766 - Remove this finish sounds better. Fixed
2. 00:41:655 (1) - Whistle sounds good. Fixed
3. 00:42:766 (4) - I think you should delete this note. Fixed
4. 00:52:211 (3) - Move this to 00:52:099 - for proper rhythm. Fixed
5. 00:54:248 - Remove finish from here, if you listen at 25% you'll hear its meant to be later... Fixed

Kiiwa wrote:

~

[General]

1. Artist: "Ling Tosite Sigure" or at least that's how my ranked map is named lol Gona wait for a bat to check
2. Move the preview time to 00:54:988 - instead, so he's not mid-lyric. Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:42:766 (5) - This doesn't align with anything in the music. Move it to 00:42:544 - instead. Fixed
2. 00:44:099 (2) - Move this to 00:44:322 - and delete 00:44:544 (3) -Fixed
3. 00:46:322 (2) - Move this to 00:46:099 - Fixed
4. 00:47:211 (3) - Better to have this as just one note at 00:47:211 - since there is no sounds thereafter. Fixed
5. 00:54:322 (1) - ^Fixed
6. 00:56:099 (4) - New combo for Kiai.Fixed
7. Where are the hit-claps in the Kiai?Working on it
8. 01:21:433 (1) - Copy the hitsounds from the Insane for this spinner. Fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:44:544 (4) - Delete this, it's on nothing.Fixed
2. 00:43:655 (3) - Extend this until 00:44:322 - Fixed

Thanks for your mod

Xanandra wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:26:766 (3,4) - Maybe give them a different pattern to make it go along with the fact that it sounds 'different' (higher volume) Changed.
2. 00:34:988 (3) - Well, slider, technically should start at 00:35:099 - and then end 00:35:322 - Sounds really bad, and actually ignores the white tick :/
3. 00:36:766 (3) - Same as above, this one too 00:33:211 (2) - ^^^
4. 00:38:544 (3) - Same as above, etc etc ^^^
   
5. 00:57:877 (4,5,6) - If I were you, Id put these three objects in a slider with repeat (like 00:56:988 (3) - )The way you mapped this its not very clear that (5) lands in a blue tick I guess the DS change should be a hint for the player, right?
6. 01:04:433 (3) - Same as above ^^^

Kiiwa wrote:

[Gex's Hard]

1. 00:33:099 (1) - Really awkward to start this on a blue tick, should really start on a white tick if possible. Well... actually it starts on the white tick, with the end of the previous slider.
2. 00:53:877 - Don't see the point of a speed up here honestly. Is just to emphasize the drums, but now that I look at it again 1.5x looks very high, so I decreased it to 1.3x