Miyuki Hashimoto - Glossy:MMM · forum

Dark Fang

1,981 posts

Joined February 2011

Dark Fang 2014-08-02T16:54:38+00:00

마작하으리. 마작은 으리 그 자체인기라

Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2014-08-03T02:21:22+00:00

xxdeathx

xxdeathx wrote:
[Normal]
00:04:170 (1) - i thought it's better to put a circle on the tick of the note and start the spinner after since the spinner start is too weak to map the note Nah, I prefer not to do note+spinner like that, just a personal preference.
00:36:056 - if you put circle here to map the vocal then there will be only 1 beat difference between it and 00:35:713 (4) so it's simpler I prefer to leave a larger space there for stronger emphasis of the next note. It's a more suitable rhythm pattern for the music imo.
00:51:656 (2) - consider making it a 1/2 repeating slider for the vocals I prefer to keep it. Flows better as it is, and the middle note is weak.
01:11:542 (3,4,5) - i'm confused by your choice of what to map here, since the white ticks are most significant. but if only mapping those is boring, mapping these ticks sounds better too http://puu.sh/azVAy/71e2d8f12d.png Following electric guitar in the background. I think this has the most interesting rhythm at this part, and it leads well into the next part, since (5) covers drum lead-in to the next phrase.
01:26:970 (1) - put a circle here and start spinner later so the player has the satisfaction of getting a keypress on the last strong note. I prefer not to.

fergas

fergas wrote:

Cloud's Normal
00:00:228 (1) - try to put 3rd dot a bit down for better transition I don't think so.
00:01:599 (1,2,1,2) - fro my perssonal view transition 00:00:913 (2,1) - isnt really good. Try all this combo rotate to 7 deg I think the current placement is fine.
00:13:256 (2) - same as before try to move a biiit down The drop-off flow is to convey the "bouncy" feeling I get in the music.
00:17:028 (2) - rotate to 3 def wo moving Fixed spacing.
00:26:113 (1) - try first dot on (145;192) for better triangle I don't really care about making equilateral triangles.
00:48:913 (3,4) - ;s for better visual move this to x:1 I don't know what you mean...
01:04:685 (1) - try on (282;288) It doesn't make a difference.
01:09:142 (1) - try on (66;274) No.
Oh my dear. Love you for no blanket normals!! Awesome flow. Awesome! Thanks.

Thanks for modding.

Cloud's Normal

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: GlossyMMM.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 53370
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Glossy : MMM
TitleUnicode:Glossy : MMM
Artist:Hashimoto Miyuki
ArtistUnicode:橋本みゆき
Creator:Neta
Version:Cloud's Normal
Source:咲-Saki-
Tags:CloudSplash16 HabiHolic No Dap WhiteAries rinshankaihou haiteiraoyue haramura_nodoka takei_hisa amae_koromo opening
BeatmapID:455550
BeatmapSetID:189095

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2014-08-03T05:05:58+00:00

Dark Fang wrote:
마작하으리. 마작은 으리 그 자체인기라

토키가 짱짱껄

Neta

536 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Neta 2014-08-03T09:08:35+00:00

Thank you all for modding

i read it all and fixed some of them and i need more time about fixing hitsound..

sorry about no review (too many moddings, so i can't remember what i fixed T_T)

please PM to me if you have questions about mod

-Nanaka-

815 posts

Joined July 2013

-Nanaka- 2014-08-03T17:35:04+00:00

hi ねたちゃん＆guest’ｓ

[General]
Easyだけワイドスクリーンのチェック入ってました

[Easy]

Easyなのに音が多いです
目安は１.５なのでそれくらいまで下げる、簡単にする必要がありそうです
HP-1
00:11:199 (1,2,3,4) - 消してスライダー１個で良いと思います
00:15:313 (1) - 音取りの提案　
SPOILER
00:19:428 (1,2) - こうゆうのも一つにまとめた方がいいです
SPOILER
00:23:028 (2) - Remove
00:30:399 (1,2) - リバースだけで良いかと
00:33:999 (2) - Removeして
SPOILER
00:37:256 (1,2) - ここも削除して
SPOILER
00:41:370 (1,2,1,2,1) - 音取りの提案
SPOILER
00:42:570 - ここと00:43:942 - にFinish
00:55:085 (1,2) - ここは区切らないほうがいいです
00:56:456 (1,2,3) - 音取りの提案
SPOILER
01:01:256 (1,2) - ここもリバース
SPOILER
01:01:942 (2,3) - ここも区切らないほうがいいです
01:06:056 (1,2,3,4) - 音取りの提案　01:06:570 - ここにFinish
SPOILER
01:07:428 (1,2) - 音取りの提案　01:07:942 - と01:08:628 - にFinish
SPOILER
01:10:170 (1,2,1,2,3) - 音取りの提案
SPOILER
01:18:399 (2,3) -　音取りの提案
SPOILER
01:14:970 - KiaiTimeをここで区切るのは不自然

再配置大変だと思うけど頑張って

[Cloud's Normal]

01:11:542 (3,4) - Esoteric rhythm
SPOILER

Great

[No Dap's Hard]

00:06:399 (1) - add finish head&tail
00:18:056 - 00:39:999 - very strong Normal Hitsound Vol10%Dawn
00:28:170 (1) - This speed is not suitable to hard 00:17:028 (1) - I feel persistently because it uses Again
00:43:942 (1) - remove whistle Add Finish
01:14:970 - The delimit KiaiTime here it is unnatural
00:48:913 (3) - very strong..... Additions Auto Remove 2Clap
00:52:170 (1,2,3) - Sampleset Normal here
01:18:399 (1) - Remove Clap add Finish
01:25:770 (3) - add SliderBody whistle 01:25:856 - add green line vol50%

Normal Hitsound very very strong......

[Habi's Insane]
OD+1 Gap between hard

00:19:256 (4) - x356y373 Has met with the melody also jump to 1 this much eye distance of 3
00:38:113 (4) - x32y256 is better
00:40:856 (2,3,4) - Bad flow
SPOILER
00:58:513 (8) - It does not inherit Pattern?
SPOILER
01:14:970 - The delimit KiaiTime here it is unnatural

Nice Map

[Saki]

00:02:113 (4) - ここはギザギザの斜めの流れを入れてあげた方がフィットします
SPOILER
00:09:656 (1) - ここも斜めのFlowが合うかと　
SPOILER
00:10:685 (2,3) - 流れ悪くないですか？
SPOILER
00:10:170 (3,1) - をx222y248
00:10:685 (2) - x309y161
00:10:856 (3) - x356y312
00:19:342 - add cicleで３連に
00:21:485 (3,4,5,6,1) - 形整えませんか？
SPOILER
00:21:485 (3) - x316y368
00:21:656 (4) - x292y172
00:21:828 (5) - x196y344
00:21:999 (6) - x375y260
00:22:170 (1) - x180y222
00:36:228 (2) - この変速はやめた方がいいです減速Patternは使い古されてしつこいですし
00:37:085 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - ここのリズムが取りにくくなります
変速使いたいのなら00:36:228 - 00:36:399 - まで加速を使うのは良いと思います
00:59:799 - add cicleで３連に
01:01:942 (1,2) - この音取りはやめた方がいいです
01:06:570 (1) - Finish
01:12:742 (2,3,4,5,6) - 形整えたい
01:12:742 (2) - x220y172
01:12:913 (3) - x319y127
01:13:085 (4) - x393y209
01:13:256 (5) - x337y301
01:13:428 (6) - x232y278
01:14:113 (2) - これも汚く見えるのでこんな感じ？
SPOILER
01:15:656 (1) - 頭にFinish
01:16:342 (3,1,1) - whistle欲しい
01:18:056 (2) - Finish
01:14:970 - KiaiTimeをここで区切るのは不自然

頑張って☆

mod time: 6.5 hours

Neta

536 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Neta 2014-08-03T19:18:17+00:00

-Nanaka- wrote:
hi ねたちゃん＆guest’ｓ こんばんわ！

[General]
Easyだけワイドスクリーンのチェック入ってました FIXED~

[Easy]
Easyなのに音が多いです　
目安は１.５なのでそれくらいまで下げる、簡単にする必要がありそうです　難易度配置いいと思ったのに! ｗｗｗ
HP-1 FIXED
00:11:199 (1,2,3,4) - 消してスライダー１個で良いと思います　00:11:885 (3,4) - をsliderに変更
00:15:313 (1) - 音取りの提案　FIXED
SPOILER
00:19:428 (1,2) - こうゆうのも一つにまとめた方がいいですここはDrumあるのでこもままでも良いと思います
SPOILER
00:23:028 (2) - Remove　FIXED
00:30:399 (1,2) - リバースだけで良いかと　ここもDrumあるので！
00:33:999 (2) - Removeして　Remove しました
SPOILER
00:37:256 (1,2) - ここも削除して　意見もう少し必要★
SPOILER
00:41:370 (1,2,1,2,1) - 音取りの提案うむ。。このままでも良いんじゃないかな。。
SPOILER
00:42:570 - ここと00:43:942 - にFinish
00:55:085 (1,2) - ここは区切らないほうがいいです　FIXED!
00:56:456 (1,2,3) - 音取りの提案ここInstrumentあるのでこのままでも良いと思います
SPOILER
01:01:256 (1,2) - ここもリバースここもこのままで～
SPOILER
01:01:942 (2,3) - ここも区切らないほうがいいです　FIXED~
01:06:056 (1,2,3,4) - 音取りの提案　01:06:570 - ここにFinish　Vocalをたどってけば、こちのほうがいいですが、Instrumentを追いかけたいので
SPOILER

01:07:428 (1,2) - 音取りの提案　01:07:942 - と01:08:628 - にFinish　^
SPOILER
01:10:170 (1,2,1,2,3) - 音取りの提案 ^
SPOILER
01:18:399 (2,3) -　音取りの提案 ^
SPOILER
01:14:970 - KiaiTimeをここで区切るのは不自然ここは 01:04:685 ここみたいにクライマックスの感じで再びKiaiが良いと思いました

再配置大変だと思うけど頑張って 大変でしたＴ＾Ｔ

[Saki]
00:02:113 (4) - ここはギザギザの斜めの流れを入れてあげた方がフィットします　このままにしたいです～
SPOILER
00:09:656 (1) - ここも斜めのFlowが合うかと　これはこのままでしたいです
SPOILER
00:10:685 (2,3) - 流れ悪くないですか？ FIXED
SPOILER
00:10:170 (3,1) - をx222y248
00:10:685 (2) - x309y161
00:10:856 (3) - x356y312
00:19:342 - add cicleで３連に FIXED
00:21:485 (3,4,5,6,1) - 形整えませんか？いいですね！
SPOILER
00:21:485 (3) - x316y368
00:21:656 (4) - x292y172
00:21:828 (5) - x196y344
00:21:999 (6) - x375y260
00:22:170 (1) - x180y222

00:36:228 (2) - この変速はやめた方がいいです減速Patternは使い古されてしつこいですし
00:37:085 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - ここのリズムが取りにくくなります
変速使いたいのなら00:36:228 - 00:36:399 - まで加速を使うのは良いと思います　ここはplayに問題ないと思っていましたが... 意見がもっと必要です!
00:59:799 - add cicleで３連に　FIXED
01:01:942 (1,2) - この音取りはやめた方がいいです　Volume Downしました
01:06:570 (1) - Finish　FIXED
01:12:742 (2,3,4,5,6) - 形整えたい　FIXED
01:12:742 (2) - x220y172
01:12:913 (3) - x319y127
01:13:085 (4) - x393y209
01:13:256 (5) - x337y301
01:13:428 (6) - x232y278

01:14:113 (2) - これも汚く見えるのでこんな感じ？　ここのSliderは考えて見ます
SPOILER
01:15:656 (1) - 頭にFinish　FIXED
01:16:342 (3,1,1) - whistle欲しい　FIXED
01:18:056 (2) - Finish　ここはFinishよりClap。。
01:14:970 - KiaiTimeをここで区切るのは不自然　Easy ^
頑張って☆ 　星ありがとうございます~
mod time: 6.5 hours

Modding　ありです！

SkinnyJommy

788 posts

Joined January 2014

SkinnyJommy 2014-08-04T06:21:08+00:00

Hello, here's the mod from my queue!

[Saki]

00:08:628 (2,3) - ctrl G would be good here
00:29:028 (1) - add finish here, you could even lower the volume here for the finish, it would sound good
00:31:599 (6) - consider mocing this to 76, 288
00:39:999 (1) - add finish here
00:41:199 (6) - move this too 148, 76

[Habi's Insane]

00:10:856 (6) - move this to 424, 264
00:58:856 (9) - maybe move this to 128, 264 for better flow

thats it for my mod! both really great maps, not much to mod

GL getting this ranked!

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2014-08-04T09:09:30+00:00

Fixed~

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: GlossyMMM.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 53370
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Glossy : MMM
TitleUnicode:Glossy : MMM
Artist:Hashimoto Miyuki
ArtistUnicode:橋本みゆき
Creator:Neta
Version:Habi's Insane
Source:咲-Saki-
Tags:CloudSplash16 HabiHolic No Dap WhiteAries rinshankaihou haiteiraoyue haramura_nodoka takei_hisa amae_koromo opening
BeatmapID:453578
BeatmapSetID:189095

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8.5
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Saki.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"Saki op.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
228,342.857142857143,4,2,0,75,1,0
3313,-100,4,2,8,75,0,0
53713,-100,4,2,8,75,0,1
63999,-100,4,2,8,75,0,0
64685,-100,4,2,8,75,0,1
74970,-100,4,2,8,75,0,0
75656,-100,4,2,8,75,0,1
83885,-125,4,2,8,75,0,0
89028,-125,4,2,8,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,192
Combo2 : 255,128,255
Combo3 : 128,64,64

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Neta

536 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Neta 2014-08-08T15:53:00+00:00

skinnyjimmy wrote:
Hello, here's the mod from my queue!

[Saki]

00:08:628 (2,3) - ctrl G would be good here i want to keep here..
00:29:028 (1) - add finish here, you could even lower the volume here for the finish, it would sound good hmm... consider about this
00:31:599 (6) - consider mocing this to 76, 288 i think it's fine now
00:39:999 (1) - add finish here it doesn't fit i think
00:41:199 (6) - move this too 148, 76 i want to keep this

Thanks for mod!

Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2014-08-09T20:45:31+00:00

-Nanaka- wrote:
[No Dap's Hard]
00:06:399 (1) - add finish head&tail not a good place imo
00:18:056 - 00:39:999 - very strong Normal Hitsound Vol10%Dawn I don't think it's loud
00:28:170 (1) - This speed is not suitable to hard 00:17:028 (1) - I feel persistently because it uses Again I think it plays ok.
00:43:942 (1) - remove whistle Add Finish not a good place imo
01:14:970 - The delimit KiaiTime here it is unnatural ok
00:48:913 (3) - very strong..... Additions Auto Remove 2Clap not a good place imo
00:52:170 (1,2,3) - Sampleset Normal here not a good place imo
01:18:399 (1) - Remove Clap add Finish not a good place imo
01:25:770 (3) - add SliderBody whistle 01:25:856 - add green line vol50% I like it without it

Normal Hitsound very very strong...... I think they are fine

Thanks for mod!

SPOILER

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IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-08-11T14:59:28+00:00

Hi, from my queue here.

General

I believe the title of this song doesn't need spaces between the colon and other words.
```
Glossy:MMM
```
Reference:
You may need to add an audio-leadin manually coz current one is in a rush.
The underscores in the tags of "haramura_nodoka", "takei_hisa" and "amae_koromo" should be deleted because I can't find ur map when I type just nodoka when searching.

Saki

00:10:856 (3) - Clap missing?
00:14:628 (1,2,3,4,5) - It would be more aesthetic if u can arrange them with even spacing like this:
SPOILER
00:14:799 (2) - Clap misplaced? I think it should be added on 00:14:970 (3) instead lol
00:23:370 (1) - How about a triplet here for the obvious drums?
00:24:056 (3,4,3,4) - These consecutive finishes seem a bit too loud for me, consider lowering the volume by 11%? Same for 00:35:028 (4,5).
00:28:170 (1) - Since the instrument is prolonging till 00:29:028 instead of halting at 00:28:685, I would recommend you extend the slider like this:
SPOILER
00:29:028 (1) - Soft finish?
01:26:970 (1) - Placing a circle at 01:26:970 and moving the spinner to the blue tick sounds good too imo.
Well, I saw ur overmapping of quite a number of triplets and streams as ur style but I can hear some drums are undermapped as well, for example, 00:15:228 - 00:23:456 - 00:44:885 - 00:59:113 - 01:10:085 - 01:12:828 - 01:21:056 -

Habi's Insane

Not much to say, but would u mind reducing the overall volume by 10~15%? The whistle itself has a quite high volume. When there are streams, it sounds like a AK-47 shooting, for example, 00:11:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8).
01:06:570 (6) - Finish on head.
01:13:770 (8) - Remove the finish on head, which sounds too much when there are 3 consecutive finishes.

No Dap's Hard

00:16:685 (1,1) - As a mainly Hard player, I mistake this spacing as a 1/2 instead of 1/4 even u got a NC there. It would be nice if you keep a consistent DS as 00:16:342 (3,4,1). Yeah, 01:21:656 (3,1,2,1) would be perfect to read.
00:18:056 (1) - Stack this perfectly with previous slider.
00:29:028 (1) - The clap here sounds a bit noisy to me. Remove it?
00:35:713 (1) - Maybe whistle on head.
00:49:256 (4) - Remove whistle on tail. Consecutive two whistles lower the effect imo.
Hard to figure out your hitsound pattern .-. Stop exploring here lol

Cloud's Normal

00:16:685 (1) - What's the intention of this NC?
00:53:370 (1) - This single NC doesn't really matter imo, just a note which revives after a slight break. Remove it?
01:17:542 (4) - Rhythm of this slider sounds quite weird, where no vocals lying on the head and electronic instruments are on white ticks 01:17:370 and 01:17:713, so I would suggest placing a note at 01:17:713 only.

Easy

00:10:513 (3) - Missing a clap on tail.
00:14:970 (2) - Clap missing?
00:24:056 (2,3,2) - Same in Saki and applies on 00:34:342 (1,2) too.
00:43:770 (1) - Finish on tail is redundant as you don't put it in Saki.
00:46:685 (2) - You need a NC for consistency.
01:00:570 (3,1) - Swap NC.
01:01:942 (3,4,1) - Rhythm is not following drums nor vocals.
SPOILER
01:01:942 (3) - NC Similar for this stanza: 01:15:656 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3).
01:06:056 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think consecutive four circles should be found in Easy, it's more likely to be mapped in Normal. Well, the difficulty of this Easy is a little bit too high imo. Nah.. Use more long sliders next time when mapping an Easy please.

I hope some of these help! Good luck!

Neta

536 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Neta 2014-08-13T08:31:33+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
Hi, from my queue here.
General
I believe the title of this song doesn't need spaces between the colon and other words.
Glossy:MMM
Reference: i just added space because it looks better for me... but fixed lol
You may need to add an audio-leadin manually coz current one is in a rush. gave 1500
The underscores in the tags of "haramura_nodoka", "takei_hisa" and "amae_koromo" should be deleted because I can't find ur map when I type just nodoka when searching. FIXED
Saki
00:10:856 (3) - Clap missing? FIXED
00:14:628 (1,2,3,4,5) - It would be more aesthetic if u can arrange them with even spacing like this: i think it's fine now i want to give some large placment here
SPOILER
00:14:799 (2) - Clap misplaced? I think it should be added on 00:14:970 (3) instead lol nice
00:23:370 (1) - How about a triplet here for the obvious drums? that's nice but i want to keep here
00:24:056 (3,4,3,4) - These consecutive finishes seem a bit too loud for me, consider lowering the volume by 11%? Same for 00:35:028 (4,5). FIXED to 55%
00:28:170 (1) - Since the instrument is prolonging till 00:29:028 instead of halting at 00:28:685, I would recommend you extend the slider like this: yes that's right but it's 0.5x slider so it'll be hard to hit next note when i make slider like this so i did same thing with here 00:17:028 (1) -
SPOILER
00:29:028 (1) - Soft finish? sorry it doesn't sounds good to me
01:26:970 (1) - Placing a circle at 01:26:970 and moving the spinner to the blue tick sounds good too imo. I'll fix if there's more opinion about this
Well, I saw ur overmapping of quite a number of triplets and streams as ur style but I can hear some drums are undermapped as well, for example, 00:15:228 - 00:23:456 - 00:44:885 - 00:59:113 - 01:10:085 - 01:12:828 - 01:21:056 - nice pointing out about drums i'll change this if i found nice idea about changing patterns thank you

Easy
00:10:513 (3) - Missing a clap on tail. FIXED
00:14:970 (2) - Clap missing? FIXED
00:24:056 (2,3,2) - Same in Saki and applies on 00:34:342 (1,2) too. FIXED same with Saki
00:43:770 (1) - Finish on tail is redundant as you don't put it in Saki. ok
00:46:685 (2) - You need a NC for consistency. FIXED
01:00:570 (3,1) - Swap NC. i think my way is right
01:01:942 (3,4,1) - Rhythm is not following drums nor vocals. Changed to long slider
SPOILER
01:01:942 (3) - NC Similar for this stanza: 01:15:656 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3). Added
01:06:056 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think consecutive four circles should be found in Easy, it's more likely to be mapped in Normal. Well, the difficulty of this Easy is a little bit too high imo. Nah.. Use more long sliders next time when mapping an Easy please. yes i'm poor mapper T_T change 2circles to slider
I hope some of these help! Good luck! << Cute

Thanks for mod!!

Ryuuka Toki

72 posts

Joined July 2012

Ryuuka Toki 2014-08-19T15:08:02+00:00

I'm so sorry for my delay ORZ
[Easy]
01:15:999 - May be try this

01:03:313 (1) - add a finish?
01:22:856 (1) - ^

[Normal]
00:39:999 (1) - I prefer rhythm like that

00:53:713 (1) - Remove NC? It looks strange.

[Hard]
00:34:770 (2) - that flow is strange to me.It looks like an anti-jump
00:17:028 (1) - remove nc
01:14:113 (1) - move to 376,360
01:22:513 (1) - Why you make that NC?It confuses me to play

[Habi'Insane]
I think it will sounds better if you remove your whistle on blue line notes.Currently it sounds kinda noisy.Which reminds me of the guitar in dragon force's songs.
00:27:828 (2) - why note stack with?It will looks more clearl 00:27:313 (8) -
00:31:599 - ^ there are some more places same like it.I personally suggest you stack them as much as possible.The clear style makes play easier.
00:41:370 (5) - Use that I think you can have a better flow

01:01:256 (11) - add clap?
00:45:142 (11) - move to 100,216 or some place like it.
01:18:399 (6) - ctrl+g for better flow imo.

[Insane]
01:01:942 (1) - that two sliders are weird you may try this

01:12:570 (1) - Change order like this

About the jumps in your map,I feel kinda hard to catch.I can fc it without difficult.But,the jumps are not so friendly to me.
But this the hardest diff in the mapset.I can't say it is bad.But I think it can be better adjusted.

Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2014-08-19T17:03:51+00:00

-Nanaka-

-Nanaka- wrote:
[Cloud's Normal]

01:11:542 (3,4) - Esoteric rhythm It follows electric guitar, and I don't think it's hard to play.
SPOILER

Great

IamKwaN

IamKwaN wrote:
Cloud's Normal
00:16:685 (1) - What's the intention of this NC? Sound here is distinctly different, so I want to show emphasis on it.
00:53:370 (1) - This single NC doesn't really matter imo, just a note which revives after a slight break. Remove it? It's important because I don't want follow point there.
01:17:542 (4) - Rhythm of this slider sounds quite weird, where no vocals lying on the head and electronic instruments are on white ticks 01:17:370 and 01:17:713, so I would suggest placing a note at 01:17:713 only. It's following the electric bass and drum.

Ryuuka Toki

Ryuuka Toki wrote:
[Normal]
00:39:999 (1) - I prefer rhythm like that I prefer my current rhythm.
00:53:713 (1) - Remove NC? It looks strange. It's there to match the music phrasing, starting on downbeat.

Thanks, no change to my diff.

Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2014-08-20T03:19:48+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
No Dap's Hard
00:16:685 (1,1) - As a mainly Hard player, I mistake this spacing as a 1/2 instead of 1/4 even u got a NC there. It would be nice if you keep a consistent DS as 00:16:342 (3,4,1). Yeah, 01:21:656 (3,1,2,1) would be perfect to read. they play fine and are readable imo
00:18:056 (1) - Stack this perfectly with previous slider. I'm not going to fix this anymore if editor glitches like this every time I fix it.
00:29:028 (1) - The clap here sounds a bit noisy to me. Remove it? I think it fits
00:35:713 (1) - Maybe whistle on head. I want to emphasize the silence here by not having any hitsound
00:49:256 (4) - Remove whistle on tail. Consecutive two whistles lower the effect imo. I find it fitting
Hard to figure out your hitsound pattern .-. Stop exploring here lol

Ryuuka Toki wrote:
[Hard]
00:34:770 (2) - that flow is strange to me.It looks like an anti-jump I don't know what you mean
00:17:028 (1) - remove nc no
01:14:113 (1) - move to 376,360 no
01:22:513 (1) - Why you make that NC?It confuses me to play SV change

SPOILER

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144,332,38970,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,260,39142,2,0,P|68:200|48:112,1,123.75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,88,39485,2,0,P|127:116|200:83,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,83,39913,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,83,39999,5,4,0:0:0:0:
400,40,40342,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,224,40685,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,223,40856,2,0,P|436:244|392:252,1,82.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,220,41199,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,172,41370,6,0,P|128:208|120:288,1,165,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,323,41885,2,0,P|232:306|273:303,1,82.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,364,42228,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,320,42399,1,10,0:0:0:0:
368,244,42570,6,0,B|360:184|344:80,1,165,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,136,43085,2,0,P|200:140|144:124,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,80,43428,1,10,0:0:0:0:
92,80,43599,1,2,0:0:0:0:
36,144,43770,1,10,0:0:0:0:
36,144,43942,6,0,L|53:313,1,165,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,356,44456,2,0,L|220:348,1,82.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,316,44799,1,8,0:0:0:0:
153,247,44970,2,0,L|236:252,1,82.5,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,248,45313,6,0,P|408:200|328:128,1,165,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,148,45828,2,0,P|220:147|172:136,1,82.5,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,84,46170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,164,46342,2,0,P|40:208|50:244,1,82.5,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,364,46685,6,0,P|139:281|130:199,1,165,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,84,47199,2,0,P|136:79|175:64,1,82.5,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,52,47542,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,128,47713,2,0,P|351:133|312:148,1,82.5,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,236,48056,6,0,P|181:304|259:322,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
332,256,48570,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,264,48913,2,0,L|344:152,1,82.5,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
253,53,49256,2,0,L|256:136,1,82.5,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,220,49599,5,12,0:1:0:0:
256,192,49685,12,4,50970,0:0:0:0:
256,80,52170,6,0,L|256:252,1,165,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,328,52685,1,4,0:0:0:0:
108,224,53370,5,0,0:0:0:0:
108,224,53713,6,0,P|176:216|212:188,1,82.5,12|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,280,54056,2,0,P|291:260|317:228,1,82.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,248,54399,2,0,P|437:212|443:172,1,82.5,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
420,76,54742,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,120,54913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,60,55085,6,0,L|152:52,1,82.5,10|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,44,55428,1,10,0:0:0:0:
128,152,55599,2,0,P|142:230|95:295,1,165,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
44,208,56113,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,100,56456,5,10,0:1:0:0:
212,100,56628,2,0,L|293:89,1,82.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,108,56970,2,0,P|314:88|273:19,1,165,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
375,7,57485,1,10,0:0:0:0:
467,40,57656,6,0,P|493:117|454:187,1,165,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,212,58170,1,10,0:0:0:0:
360,212,58342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,164,58513,2,0,L|256:80,1,82.5,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,212,58856,2,0,L|344:293,1,82.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,372,59199,6,0,P|210:320|130:330,1,165,12|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,368,59713,1,2,0:0:0:0:
8,272,59885,2,0,L|16:176,1,82.5,10|10,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
60,104,60228,2,0,B|80:96|80:96|160:100,1,82.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,168,60570,6,0,L|300:144,1,82.5,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,72,60913,1,10,0:0:0:0:
432,100,61085,1,0,0:1:0:0:
440,188,61256,2,0,L|464:296,1,82.5,10|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,344,61599,1,10,0:0:0:0:
368,296,61770,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,296,61856,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,296,61942,6,0,P|286:283|205:297,1,165,12|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,360,62456,2,0,P|70:287|70:205,1,165,12|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,124,62970,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,188,63142,6,0,L|362:160,1,165,12|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,212,63656,2,0,B|460:232|460:232|464:304,1,82.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,348,63999,2,0,P|341:362|300:365,1,82.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,296,64342,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,176,64513,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,176,64599,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,176,64685,6,0,P|330:144|407:168,2,165,12|8|10,0:1|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
180,236,65542,1,8,0:1:0:0:
120,164,65713,2,0,L|110:82,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,236,66056,5,10,0:1:0:0:
68,292,66228,2,0,P|103:312|136:337,1,82.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,344,66570,2,0,P|320:340|424:356,1,165,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
486,255,67085,2,0,P|445:252|408:236,1,82.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,148,67428,5,10,0:1:0:0:
440,84,67599,2,0,P|459:126|460:165,1,82.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,147,67942,2,0,P|281:152|200:120,1,165,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
144,64,68456,1,10,0:0:0:0:
48,120,68628,6,0,P|100:172|132:264,1,165,12|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,328,69142,2,0,L|286:320,1,82.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,364,69485,2,0,L|45:356,2,82.5,10|8|8,0:1|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,332,69999,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,336,70085,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,340,70170,6,0,P|292:336|380:344,1,165,12|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,372,70685,1,10,0:1:0:0:
507,280,70856,2,0,P|424:260|345:256,1,165,10|10,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,184,71370,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,96,71542,6,0,L|406:88,1,82.5,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,44,71885,1,10,0:0:0:0:
140,52,72056,2,0,B|140:76|152:104|172:128|208:140|208:140|204:168|188:182,1,165,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
136,248,72570,1,10,0:0:0:0:
220,296,72742,1,10,0:0:0:0:
220,296,72828,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,296,72913,6,0,L|317:304,1,82.5,12|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,360,73256,1,8,0:0:0:0:
471,237,73428,2,0,L|468:320,1,82.5,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,160,73770,2,0,L|382:242,1,82.5,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,368,74113,6,0,P|316:356|192:360,1,165,12|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,372,74628,2,0,P|108:328|107:290,1,82.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
167,200,74970,2,0,P|127:193|92:172,1,82.5,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,96,75313,1,10,0:0:0:0:
128,40,75485,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,40,75570,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,40,75656,6,0,L|312:52,1,165,12|10,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,36,76170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,120,76342,2,0,P|425:195|348:212,1,165,10|10,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,176,76856,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,260,77028,6,0,L|160:337,1,82.5,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,260,77370,2,0,L|351:337,1,82.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,176,77713,2,0,L|84:168,1,82.5,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,176,78056,2,0,L|428:168,1,82.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,288,78399,6,0,B|444:328|392:304|392:304|404:260,1,165,10|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,120,78913,2,0,B|500:76|500:76|448:52|388:92,1,165,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
336,176,79428,1,10,0:0:0:0:
276,296,79599,6,0,L|256:132,1,165,12|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,64,80113,2,0,L|72:80,1,82.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,64,80456,2,0,L|440:80,1,82.5,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,156,80799,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,240,80970,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,244,81056,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,248,81142,6,0,P|408:289|416:329,1,82.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,280,81485,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,156,81656,2,0,B|437:137|437:137|385:157|351:150,1,123.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,150,81999,6,0,P|277:96|253:185,1,214.49999018097,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,189,82428,1,8,0:0:0:0:
261,193,82513,6,0,L|143:199,1,115.49999647522,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,232,83199,6,0,B|276:224|276:224|320:252,1,165,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,312,83713,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,240,83885,6,0,P|480:160|488:64,1,165,12|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,32,84399,2,0,P|372:116|384:196,1,165,12|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,292,84913,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,352,85085,6,0,P|252:324|268:184,1,165,12|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,140,85599,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,104,85770,2,0,B|156:144|168:168|168:168|184:184|188:216|188:216|248:192|280:236|280:236|320:216|336:248|336:248|372:264|392:248|392:248|416:240|416:240|432:220|460:232,1,412.5,12|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,228,86970,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87056,12,0,88342,0:0:0:0:

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Gamu 2014-08-24T19:07:42+00:00

hello~ Request from Gamu's Standard Modding Queue

[

Easy]

00:02:970 (1) - 終点にwhistleを追加。
00:03:656 (2) - これには始点、終点にwhistleを追加。
00:11:885 (3) - 始点、終点のwhistleがいらないと思います。
00:18:399 (2) - 曲げるよりも真っ直ぐにしたほうが流れが良いです。
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00:23:370 (1,2,3) - リズムが難しいので、これを試してみてください。{00:24:742 (1,2)と同じリズムが良いです。}
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00:23:370 (1) - 始点のwhistleをfinishに変更。
00:29:028 (1) - whistleまたはfinishを追加。どっちでもいいと思いますよ。
00:30:399 (1) - 始点にwhistle!
00:31:770 (1) - ^
00:33:142 (1) - ^ さらに、finishを終点に追加。
00:36:570 (2,1) - 違和感があるので、サークルを消してスライダーを00:37:085まで伸ばすと良いと思います。あと、終点にfinishを入れるのを忘れないように。
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00:37:942 (2) - 終点にwhistle入れるといいかも。
00:39:999 (2,1) - new combo入れ替えてください。
00:39:999 (1) - finish入れるいいかも。
00:42:742 (1) - 開始を00:42:570にして、終わりを00:43:085にすると良いです。 finishにも合いますよ。
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00:48:056 (1) - ボーカルに合わせて00:49:599に縮めるのはどうでしょう。あとfinishも入れて。
01:03:313 (1,2) - リズム提案です。
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01:06:742 (3) - 流れが悪いので、x:268 y:348に移動させてみてください。
01:14:113 (1) - 終点にfinish入れてみてください。
01:17:028 (3) - ここにnew combo!
01:18:056 (1,2) - new combo入れ替えてください
01:21:142 (1) - 終点のfinishはいらないかな。
01:21:999 (2) - ここの終点にfinishがいる。
01:22:856 (1) - finish~

[

Cloud's Normal]

00:28:170 (5,6) - I would like to suggest this placement. How do you like that?
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[

No Dap's Hard]

00:16:342 (3) - Add a clap at the start point. I think it is missing.
00:17:028 (1) - I want the sound of something at the end point. hmm...I think clap is good~
00:26:970 (3) - Rather than the whistle, clap is suitable.
00:27:656 (5) - ^ at the start point. And,finish is better than the whistle at the end point.
00:28:170 (1,2) - I feel strange this rhythm. try this?
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00:32:799 (4) - Do you want to create a parallel slider with 00:33:142 (1)? flow and looks is good~
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00:34:770 (2) - It looks like there is no sound. Remove this?
00:35:713 (1) - Add a finish at the start point because vocal emphasizes.
00:36:570 (3) - Add a clap?
00:39:999 (1,2) - Swap these new combos.
00:49:256 (4) - Unnecessary whistle.
01:00:228 (4) - Why are you using a shape like this? I suggest shaped like this.
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01:03:656 (2) - ^
01:03:999 (3,4,5) - Do you want to unify the spacing?
01:06:056 (1) - This flow is bad...move to x:20 y:200.
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01:13:770 (4) - Add a clap at the start point?
01:25:770 (3) - Remove a whistle at the end point.It's probably unnecessary.
01:27:056 (1) - this spinner..Why do not the same as the other diff? I think other diff are better.

[

Habi's Insane ]

00:00:913 (3) - Add a whistle! I think it is missing.
00:44:799 (8,9,10) - Same hitsound is suitable. I suggest the clap.
01:01:170 (10) - Unnecessary clap.
01:01:770 (3) - Rather than the whistle, clap is suitable.
01:09:999 (7,1) - Swap these new combos.
01:13:428 (7) - Remove a clap at the end point. It's probably unnecessary.
01:14:113 (9,1) - Swap these new combos.
01:15:656 (8) - Add a new combo.
01:17:028 (1) - Remove a new combo.
01:18:399 (10,1) - Swap these new combos.
01:26:970 (1) - Move to x:132 y:72 in order to draw a beautiful triangle.
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[

Saki]

00:02:628 (5) - 始点にwhistleを入れてみてはどうですか？
00:03:313 (3,5) - この二つにwhistle。
00:07:942 (2) - 完全にstackされていないのでさせたほうがいいです。
00:12:228 (1) - 不要なnew comboです。
00:15:313 (5,1) - new comboを入れ替えてください。
00:18:056 (2) - 音量を50%くらいにしてfinishを入れると良いです。
00:19:428 (3) - 始点にwhistle!
00:20:799 (1) - ^
00:22:170 (1) - ^
00:23:370 (1) - 始点のwhistleは不要です。
00:23:370 (1) - せっかく、音がありますので３連打に変えてみてはどうでしょうか？
00:27:656 (3) - clap欲しいです。
00:29:028 (1) - finish~
00:30:399 (1) - 始点にwhistle!
00:31:770 (1) - ^
00:33:142 (1) - ^
00:33:656 (2) - ^
00:37:085 (3) - finish!
00:37:942 (1) - clap.
00:38:456 (4) - 始点にclapかな。
00:39:999 (1) - 00:18:056と同じで音量を50%くらいにしてfinishを入れると良いです。
01:14:628 (3,5) - この二つにclap
01:15:399 (x) and 01:15:570 (x) - にサークルを入れて、連打にしてもいいと思いますよ。
01:21:485 (3) - clap~
01:21:656 (4) - finishは不要です。
01:22:513 (7) - finishはここではなくて、01:22:856 (1)だと思います。
00:53:713~01:15:656 - whistleをもっとたくさんつけても良いと思います。

わからない日本語などありましたら、私に聞いてくださいね。

Neta

536 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Neta 2014-08-27T05:54:38+00:00

Gamu wrote:
hello~ Request from Gamu's Standard Modding Queue

[ Easy]
00:02:970 (1) - 終点にwhistleを追加。ok~
00:03:656 (2) - これには始点、終点にwhistleを追加。FIXED
00:11:885 (3) - 始点、終点のwhistleがいらないと思います。 FIXED
00:18:399 (2) - 曲げるよりも真っ直ぐにしたほうが流れが良いです。ここはこのままでも良いと思います！
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00:23:370 (1,2,3) - リズムが難しいので、これを試してみてください。{00:24:742 (1,2)と同じリズムが良いです。}　FIXED
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00:23:370 (1) - 始点のwhistleをfinishに変更。　FIXED
00:29:028 (1) - whistleまたはfinishを追加。どっちでもいいと思いますよ。
00:30:399 (1) - 始点にwhistle!　FIXED
00:31:770 (1) - ^　FIXED　
00:33:142 (1) - ^ さらに、finishを終点に追加。　FIXED
00:36:570 (2,1) - 違和感があるので、サークルを消してスライダーを00:37:085まで伸ばすと良いと思います。あと、終点にfinishを入れるのを忘れないように。　いいですよね！FIXED
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00:37:942 (2) - 終点にwhistle入れるといいかも。ここはこのままでしたい
00:39:999 (2,1) - new combo入れ替えてください。FIXED
00:39:999 (1) - finish入れるいいかも。FIXED
00:42:742 (1) - 開始を00:42:570にして、終わりを00:43:085にすると良いです。 finishにも合いますよ。FIXED~
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00:48:056 (1) - ボーカルに合わせて00:49:599に縮めるのはどうでしょう。あとfinishも入れて。 00:50:285までするのがもっと聞きやすいと思います
01:03:313 (1,2) - リズム提案です。ここもこのままで
image
01:06:742 (3) - 流れが悪いので、x:268 y:348に移動させてみてください。FIXED
01:14:113 (1) - 終点にfinish入れてみてください。FIXED
01:17:028 (3) - ここにnew combo!　FIXED
01:18:056 (1,2) - new combo入れ替えてください　FIXED
01:21:142 (1) - 終点のfinishはいらないかな。　FIXED
01:21:999 (2) - ここの終点にfinishがいる。FIXED
01:22:856 (1) - finish~
　FIXED

[ Saki]
00:02:628 (5) - 始点にwhistleを入れてみてはどうですか？　FIXED
00:03:313 (3,5) - この二つにwhistle。 FIXED
00:07:942 (2) - 完全にstackされていないのでさせたほうがいいです。 FIXED
00:12:228 (1) - 不要なnew comboです。え、それはそうだけどなんかここにNCしたいって感じ
00:15:313 (5,1) - new comboを入れ替えてください。FIXED
00:18:056 (2) - 音量を50%くらいにしてfinishを入れると良いです。FIXED
00:19:428 (3) - 始点にwhistle! FIXED
00:20:799 (1) - ^ FIXED
00:22:170 (1) - ^ FIXED
00:23:370 (1) - 始点のwhistleは不要です。 FIXED
00:23:370 (1) - せっかく、音がありますので３連打に変えてみてはどうでしょうか？　このままでしたいです！
00:27:656 (3) - clap欲しいです。FIXED
00:29:028 (1) - finish~ FIXED
00:30:399 (1) - 始点にwhistle! FIXED
00:31:770 (1) - ^ ^
00:33:142 (1) - ^ ^
00:33:656 (2) - ^ ^
00:37:085 (3) - finish! FIXED
00:37:942 (1) - clap. FIXED
00:38:456 (4) - 始点にclapかな。いない方が良いっと思います～
00:39:999 (1) - 00:18:056と同じで音量を50%くらいにしてfinishを入れると良いです。FIXED
01:14:628 (3,5) - この二つにclap　FIXED
01:15:399 (x) and 01:15:570 (x) - にサークルを入れて、連打にしてもいいと思いますよ。考えて見ます~
01:21:485 (3) - clap~　FIXED
01:21:656 (4) - finishは不要です。　FIXED
01:22:513 (7) - finishはここではなくて、01:22:856 (1)だと思います。FIXED
00:53:713~01:15:656 - whistleをもっとたくさんつけても良いと思います。おｋ～

わからない日本語などありましたら、私に聞いてくださいね。

Moddingありがとう!

imariL

370 posts

Joined February 2011

imariL 2014-08-28T02:33:59+00:00

Column 0 1 2 3 4 5 6

[General]

전체적으로 두 난이도 모두 새로 다듬어 주었으면 함. 또한 두 난이도 모두 전체적으로 노트 비중이 0번 키가 스크래치인 마냥 너무 오른손에 치중되있음, 이점 신경써서 리맵을 하는게 좋지 않을까 싶음.

[WhiteAries' 7K NM]

00:03:656 (3656|0,3742|1,3828|2) - 왼손 혼자 스트림을 부담하게 하는것 보단 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1974734 양손에 분산시켜주는것도 고려해보았으면 함

00:11:028 (11028|4,11028|2) - 롱노트의 끝이 00:11:542 가 되어야함, 앞의 00:08:285 (8285|1,8285|4) ㅣ 00:09:656 (9656|2,9656|4) 과 동일한 리듬이므로 통일

00:23:370 (23370|6,23370|4) - 이 부분 리맵, 롱노트의 시작은 00:23:542 에 시작해야함, 예시: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1974747

00:26:285 (26285|0) - 크게 의미가 있는 롱노트 같지 않은데 일반 서클노트로 바꾸는게 낫다고 봄

00:26:970 (26970|3,26970|4,27142|0,27313|2,27313|1,27485|4,27485|3) - 개인적으로 성의 없은 패턴 중 하나라고 생각함, 흡사 스탠다드 오토컨버팅 한 맵을 보는 느낌이 듬

00:45:313 (45313|6,45313|3) - 이런 노트에 롱노트를 주기 보단 오히려 00:45:999 (45999|0,45999|1) 와 00:47:370 (47370|0,47370|2) 이러한 부분에 롱노트 효과를 주는것이 더 적절하지 않나 싶음

00:52:685 - 00:53:028 부터 시작된 스트림이 지적한 52초부분부터 시작되어야함, 또한 스트림 모양도 바꾸는걸 추천함.

00:55:599 (55599|6,55599|1) - 롱노트의 끝이 00:55:942 에 되어야함

00:59:028 (59028|0,59028|1) - 이러한 동시치기는 정말 불가피한 상황 아니면 지양하는것을 추천함, 예시: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1974772

01:03:999 ~ 01:04:685 - 리맵

01:12:399 (72399|3,72485|4,72570|5,72570|6) - 패턴 재배치, 59초와 같은 이유

01:23:885 ~ 01:26:456 - 음악과 싱크로가 맞지 않게 롱노트 끝을 표현할 바엔 오히려 서클노트로 바꿔서 패턴 재배치를 하는게 더욱 낫다고 생각됨

[WhiteAries' 7K HD]

전체적으로 롱노트 3개씩 동시치기로 쓴 부분, 정말 롱노트가 3개씩 필요한 부분인지 생각해보고 고쳐야 할 부분은 수정을 추천함

00:03:485 (3485|1) - 0번으로 이동

00:04:170 ~ 00:06:399 - 이러한 경우 롱노트를 0번이나 6번쪽에 배치하고 나머지 스트림을 배치하는게 가장 이상적임, 또한 스트림이 00:04:513 부터 시작됬는데 여기가 아닌 00:04:170 부터 시작 되어야함. 이 부분 리맵.

00:08:799 ~ 00:09:656 - 이러한 부분이 오른손에 치우친 패턴

00:11:370 ~ 00:12:570 - 스트림이 00:11:370 부터 시작되어야 하므로 앞의 짧은 롱노트 00:11:370 (11370|6,11370|4,11370|2) 를 삭제하고 스트림을 재배치하는걸 추천함, 또한 00:12:570 마지막 끝나는 부분에 노트 하나쯤 더 추가해주는게 어떨까 싶음

00:12:913 ~ 00:13:942 - 이렇게 맵핑한 의도는 알겠으나 더욱더 좋고 이와 같이 알기 쉬운 다른 패턴을 고려해보는걸 추천

00:18:056 ~ 00:23:542 - 전체적으로 노트의 양쪽 균형을 맞춰주도록 수정

00:29:028 ~ 00:52:170 - ^

00:33:142 (33142|1,33142|5,33142|4,33485|2,33485|3) - 깔끔하지 않은모양, 또한 위에서 지적한 것 처럼 롱노트가 3개씩이나 필요할까 싶음. 2개만 쓰고(2개도 많은것 같지만 굳이 쓴다면) 하나는 일반 써클 노트로 써도 괜찮을거같음, 다른 패턴 고민해보는걸 추천

00:33:656 (33656|2,33656|5,33656|6,33999|3,33999|4) - ^

00:38:799 (38799|3,38885|2,38970|3,39056|2) - 추천하는 트릴이 아님, 전후 롱노트 배치를 수정하여 트릴도 같이 수정하는걸 추천

00:50:970 ~ 00:51:656 - 치기 썩 좋지 않은 패턴, 롱노트로 보컬을 표현하지 말고 00:50:970 ~ 00:51:828 - 까지 연주되는 뒤의 현악기 소리를 하나의 롱노트로 표현하고 나머지 음들을 써클 노트로 표현하는것을 추천, 예시: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1974830

00:52:685 ~ 00:53:713 - 스트림이 00:53:028 여기가 아닌 00:52:685 여기서 부터 시작되어야함, Playback Rate 25퍼센트로 들어보는걸 추천

01:02:456 ~ 01:04:685 - 정말 싫어하는 패턴 종합 선물 셋트를 보는 느낌, 디자이너한테 디자인으로 괴롭히기 짤 보는 느낌이 듬. 리맵을 하게 된다면 그 스타일에 맞춰서 예시를 보여 줄 수도있겠지만 지금 스타일에서 비슷한 스타일로 예시를 깔끔하게 보여주려니 이것도 힘듬. 전체적으로 롱노트를 3개씩 동시치기로 쓰다 보니 이게 엉켜서 나타난 결과물이 아닐까 싶음. 또한 01:03:656 (63656|2) 이런 롱노트를 중간에 넣어서 표현하기 보다는 오히려 서클 노트로 스트림을 01:03:656 부터 표현하는게 더욱 좋다고 생각됨. 마지막으로 이 01:03:999 (63999|6,63999|5) 롱노트 2개가 무엇을 표현하려고 하는지 조금 감이 안잡히는데 아무래도 스트림이 표현하는 음과 저 롱노트 2개의 음과 서로 중복이 됬다고 밖엔 생각이 안듬. 지적한 롱노트 2개를 삭제하고 스트림을 더 깔끔하게 표현, 또한 01:03:142 부터 표현한 보컬 롱노트를 차라리 원래 끝나는 부분인 01:03:999 로 수정하여 응용하여 맵핑하는게 지금 상황보단 훨씬 좋다고 생각됨.

01:09:142 ~ 01:10:513 - 롱노트를 3개씩 써야할지 고려 해보는게 좋다고 생각함. 만약 3개씩이나 써서 보컬을 그렇게 강조할거면 오히려 01:09:313 (69313|4,69656|2,69999|2,70342|2) - 이 노트 4개를 삭제하는게 옳다고 생각됨.

01:14:628 ~ 01:15:999 - 국수 좋아하세요?

01:23:885 ~ 01:26:628 - 여기도 롱노트를 3개씩이나 써야되나 싶음. 사실 맵의 거의 모든 부분이 롱노트 1~2개로 충분하다고 개인적으로 생각됨, 마지막으로 01:25:770 이부분을 굳이 롱노트 3개로 표현할려면 뒷부분 음들은 과감하게 생략하고 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1974871 이렇게 표현하는게 더욱 좋다고 생각됨.

힘들었습니다 챠슈동 사주세요

aigoh

398 posts

Joined February 2014

aigoh 2014-08-30T04:53:42+00:00

M4M!
저도 모딩 아마추어예요 ㅠㅠ 최선을 다할게요~

[General]
잘만든거같으니까 별 쏩니다 ㅋㅋ
This map's good, so I'll shoot a star

[Habi's Insane]
00:49:428 (3) - 지우세요

[Hard]
00:27:656 (5) - 슬라이더보다는 00:27:828 에 싱글로 바꾸는게 나을듯.
01:25:770 (3) - 귀여운 노래에 해삼이?? 깔끔하게 만드는건 어떨까요? 포인트들 몇개 지우고 다듬으면 이렇게 됩니다.

jtd1

195 posts

Joined June 2012

jtd1 2014-08-30T10:19:00+00:00

M4M

General

Nice mapset, BATs / QATs will like this for certain.
~~Can't mod osu!mania though, 7K is far too hard~~

Easy

00:18:056 (1) - Move this to the same position as 00:16:685 (1) ? The overlap here won't throw off newbie players imo.
00:23:370 (1,2,1,2) - This confuses me, and no doubt would confuse other players as well. I would use circles instead of sliders for these 4 notes.
00:42:056 (2) - I think this slider should be reduced from 3/2 to 1/2.
01:12:228 (3) - Nazi - move the end point of this slider from

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to here

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Cloud's Normal

00:23:028 (6) - Change to circle on red tick?
00:44:799 - Add circle?
01:11:542 (3,4) - Not sure about these - maybe change this into one big slider?

No Dap's Hard

00:25:770 (4,1) - Ooh my, that overlap. Move (1) please?
00:26:970 (3,4) - Move (3) onto the starting point of (4) ?
00:44:970 (4) - This jump feels a bit weird after (1,2,3) - Consider moving this slider - Maybe Ctrl+G?
01:18:399 (1) - Consider moving this to x:256 y:96 to create a star pattern?
01:22:513 (1,1) - Move one of these sliders so they don't overlap?

For the next 2 difficulties, I can't guarantee a decent mod - ~~can't mod insanes~~ ;_;

Habi's Insane

00:01:256 (4,6) - Move (4) to overlap the start of (6) completely?
00:51:999 (6) - Move to place of (2,3,4) ?
00:56:456 (1,3) - Move (3) to place of (1)

~~can't mod insane~~

Saki

00:14:628 (1,2,3,4) - Change pattern?
00:30:913 (3,4) - Ctrl+G?
00:40:856 (4,5) - ^
00:41:885 (3,4) - ^
00:58:342 (2,3) - ^
01:09:313 (2,3) - ^
01:14:799 (4,5) - ^
01:14:799 (7) - Move somewhere else if you follow ^ ?

~~Can't mod insane~~

Well, that's it from me. Nice map, it won't be long before it gets ranked.
Good luck

Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2014-08-30T20:09:21+00:00

Gamu

Gamu wrote:
[ Cloud's Normal]
00:28:170 (5,6) - I would like to suggest this placement. How do you like that? Seems okay, but it's hard for me to keep the spacing/flow after if I change it, so I'll leave it the way it is.

jtd1

jtd1 wrote:
Cloud's Normal

00:23:028 (6) - Change to circle on red tick? Prefer slider here.
00:44:799 - Add circle? Makes the rhythm too hard.
01:11:542 (3,4) - Not sure about these - maybe change this into one big slider? It's fine.

Thanks. No change to my diff.

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-09-05T16:45:31+00:00

~~Placeholder!~~
Unless you prefer a non-BAT mod!

Last edited by BeatofIke 2014-09-11T14:13:33+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2014-09-05T17:21:28+00:00

Gamu wrote:
[ No Dap's Hard]
00:16:342 (3) - Add a clap at the start point. I think it is missing. ok
00:17:028 (1) - I want the sound of something at the end point. hmm...I think clap is good~ I think no sound would go better with music :3
00:26:970 (3) - Rather than the whistle, clap is suitable. I think whistle is ok
00:27:656 (5) - ^ at the start point. And,finish is better than the whistle at the end point. swapped whistles with finish
00:28:170 (1,2) - I feel strange this rhythm. try this? I think mine is better
image
00:32:799 (4) - Do you want to create a parallel slider with 00:33:142 (1)? flow and looks is good~ I think mine looks ok
image
00:34:770 (2) - It looks like there is no sound. Remove this? I just find this rhythm more intuitive myself.
00:35:713 (1) - Add a finish at the start point because vocal emphasizes. this is where the instruments pause, so i don't want to add hitsound :3
00:36:570 (3) - Add a clap? ok
00:39:999 (1,2) - Swap these new combos. ok
00:49:256 (4) - Unnecessary whistle. ok
01:00:228 (4) - Why are you using a shape like this? I suggest shaped like this. lol ok
image
01:03:656 (2) - ^ ok
01:03:999 (3,4,5) - Do you want to unify the spacing? ok
01:06:056 (1) - This flow is bad...move to x:20 y:200. ok
image
01:13:770 (4) - Add a clap at the start point? hmm not sure but ok
01:25:770 (3) - Remove a whistle at the end point.It's probably unnecessary. yes
01:27:056 (1) - this spinner..Why do not the same as the other diff? I think other diff are better. I think my spinner is better !!

mangocurry wrote:
[Hard]
00:27:656 (5) - 슬라이더보다는 00:27:828 에 싱글로 바꾸는게 나을듯. disagree
01:25:770 (3) - 귀여운 노래에 해삼이?? 깔끔하게 만드는건 어떨까요? 포인트들 몇개 지우고 다듬으면 이렇게 됩니다. no need to fix my current slider shape imo

jtd1 wrote:
No Dap's Hard
00:25:770 (4,1) - Ooh my, that overlap. Move (1) please? intended
00:26:970 (3,4) - Move (3) onto the starting point of (4) ? intended
00:44:970 (4) - This jump feels a bit weird after (1,2,3) - Consider moving this slider - Maybe Ctrl+G? good idea, fixed
01:18:399 (1) - Consider moving this to x:256 y:96 to create a star pattern? I think my current pattern is fine
01:22:513 (1,1) - Move one of these sliders so they don't overlap? intended

Thank you all for modding

SPOILER

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188,216,228,6,0,P|180:148|164:72,2,132,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,336,1256,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,216,1599,5,4,0:0:0:0:
396,216,1770,2,0,L|384:120,1,66,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,80,2113,2,0,P|376:112|288:92,1,132,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,56,2628,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,44,2970,6,0,P|92:112|100:204,1,132,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,312,3656,2,0,L|188:228,1,66,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,72,4170,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,4256,12,0,6056,0:0:0:0:
200,264,6399,6,0,P|125:285|52:244,1,165,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,120,7085,2,0,P|292:112|388:108,1,165,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,280,7770,5,2,0:0:0:0:
412,280,7942,2,0,P|370:280|328:288,1,82.5,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,324,8285,2,0,P|176:336|92:296,1,165,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,224,8799,1,10,0:0:0:0:
184,68,9142,5,2,0:0:0:0:
264,116,9313,2,0,P|308:116|356:108,1,82.5,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,56,9656,2,0,P|448:133|411:204,1,165,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,244,10170,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2014-10-04T03:39:03+00:00

~~Graved ;_;~~
I hope this gets ranked soon

Scorpiour

2,633 posts

Joined May 2011

Scorpiour 2014-10-22T11:26:39+00:00

really sorry for your long wait

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[Saki]

00:03:828 (6) - i might put a slider here
00:19:770 (4,5) - flow is weird a little around here, i may choose this :
SPOILER
00:27:313 (2) - similar to the case above, since you chose to use a lot of jumps, the spacing between sliders could be higher for better sense
SPOILER
00:33:656 (2) - also.. higher spacing could make better feeling of jump..blabla.. i don't wanna repeat that more but i think you may try it by yourself
00:36:056 - here could be something i suppose
00:55:599 (5) - hmm.. it's supposed to be another direction like this, and also swap 00:56:113 (6,7) -
SPOILER
00:58:342 - since you made a blank at 00:57:828 - , i suppose the note here could be removed as well. However, i personally perfer this beat
01:01:942 (1,2) - reason of these two kick sliders?
01:05:370 (3) - two notes might be better
01:17:713 (1,2) - try this?
SPOILER
01:20:113 (3,4) - swap them on timeline?

Not a bad map, but could be better~also, the overall hitsounding is heard weak more or less, you may take a look at Habi's diff as reference.

[Habi's Insane]

00:02:970 (1,2,3,4) - heard unnecessary i suppose
00:20:799 (5) - compared with a repeat, two notes are better:
00:33:142 (5,6) - slider first and then note?
00:50:285 (4,5,6) - supposed to be 2 sliders but not note->slider->note
00:53:713 (1) - Repeat circle touches the HP bar

[No Daps' Hard]

00:40:685 (2,3,4) - two sliders here is better than note->slider->note i think
00:51:313 - i think you can put something from here to 00:51:999 -

Solid

[Cloud's Normal]

00:21:313 (2) - could be remove
00:32:285 (2) - ^
00:57:656 (4) - could be a note
01:25:599 (2) - could be removed

[Easy]

00:58:170 (1,2,3) - i recommend to avoid this kinda continuous notes in Easy diff
01:20:113 (1,2,3) - ^

That's all, not bad. Try to find several more mod for your Saki diff especially for the hitsounding, then call me back to recheck~

Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2014-10-22T14:08:53+00:00

Scorpiour wrote:
[Cloud's Normal]
00:21:313 (2) - could be remove
00:32:285 (2) - ^
00:57:656 (4) - could be a note I prefer slider.
01:25:599 (2) - could be removed

No comment = fixed.
Thanks.

Cloud's Normal

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ArtistUnicode:橋本みゆき
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Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

3,379 posts

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Ozato Fumika 2014-10-24T17:13:09+00:00

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448,120,76342,2,0,P|425:195|348:212,1,165,10|10,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,176,76856,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,260,77028,6,0,L|160:337,1,82.5,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,260,77370,2,0,L|351:337,1,82.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,176,77713,2,0,L|84:168,1,82.5,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,176,78056,2,0,L|428:168,1,82.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,288,78399,6,0,B|444:328|392:304|392:304|404:260,1,165,10|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,120,78913,2,0,B|500:76|500:76|448:52|388:92,1,165,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
336,176,79428,1,10,0:0:0:0:
276,296,79599,6,0,L|256:132,1,165,12|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,64,80113,2,0,L|72:80,1,82.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,64,80456,2,0,L|440:80,1,82.5,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,156,80799,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,240,80970,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,244,81056,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,248,81142,6,0,P|408:289|416:329,1,82.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,280,81485,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,156,81656,2,0,B|437:137|437:137|385:157|351:150,1,123.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,150,81999,6,0,P|277:96|253:185,1,214.49999018097,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,189,82428,1,8,0:0:0:0:
261,193,82513,6,0,L|143:199,1,115.49999647522,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,232,83199,6,0,B|276:224|276:224|320:252,1,165,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,312,83713,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,240,83885,6,0,P|488:160|488:64,1,165,12|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,32,84399,2,0,P|372:116|384:196,1,165,12|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,292,84913,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,352,85085,6,0,P|252:324|268:184,1,165,12|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,140,85599,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,104,85770,2,0,B|156:144|168:168|168:168|184:184|188:216|188:216|248:192|280:236|280:236|320:216|336:248|336:248|372:264|392:248|392:248|416:240|416:240|432:220|460:232,1,412.5,12|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,228,86970,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87056,12,0,88342,0:0:0:0:

Neta

536 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Neta 2014-10-24T19:22:44+00:00

Scorpiour wrote:
really sorry for your long wait

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[Saki]
00:03:828 (6) - i might put a slider here cool fixed
00:19:770 (4,5) - flow is weird a little around here, i may choose this : yes you're right
SPOILER
00:27:313 (2) - similar to the case above, since you chose to use a lot of jumps, the spacing between sliders could be higher for better sense FIXED
SPOILER
00:33:656 (2) - also.. higher spacing could make better feeling of jump..blabla.. i don't wanna repeat that more but i think you may try it by yourself make high spacing looks better
00:36:056 - here could be something i suppose added triplet
00:55:599 (5) - hmm.. it's supposed to be another direction like this, and also swap 00:56:113 (6,7) - fixed other way
SPOILER
00:58:342 - since you made a blank at 00:57:828 - , i suppose the note here could be removed as well. However, i personally perfer this beat fixed i like this beat thx
01:01:942 (1,2) - reason of these two kick sliders? i just followed background sound and idk it works well.. so maybe i'll fix this if there's nice way
01:05:370 (3) - two notes might be better remaked some jump parts
01:17:713 (1,2) - try this? consider about this
SPOILER
01:20:113 (3,4) - swap them on timeline? i want keep here
Not a bad map, but could be better~also, the overall hitsounding is heard weak more or less, you may take a look at Habi's diff as reference.

[Easy]
00:58:170 (1,2,3) - i recommend to avoid this kinda continuous notes in Easy diff
01:20:113 (1,2,3) - ^
All Fixed

That's all, not bad. Try to find several more mod for your Saki diff especially for the hitsounding, then call me back to recheck~

Thanks for mod!! it was really helpful

Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2014-10-24T20:31:15+00:00

[Saki]

00:09:313 (2,3,1) - Flow here is awkward imo. Here is my suggestion: http://puu.sh/cp14h/a7020b1ef4.jpg
00:15:313 (1,2) - This feels too close, and isn't smooth to play. Here are two possible ways that I would change to fix it: http://puu.sh/cp1kA/6e69af2793.jpg or http://puu.sh/cp1fR/646395f4a0.jpg
00:19:770 (4,5) - Flow here is awkward. Try this: http://puu.sh/cp1sX/3a666c0be2.jpg (reverse (5))
00:30:913 (2,3,4,5,6) - This jump pattern doesn't feel very good for me. The spacing is a bit weird, especially (5,6,1) feels unnatural. Here is my suggested jump pattern: http://puu.sh/cp1FW/8af1770771.jpg
00:32:285 (2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest changing it like this to flow better into (1): http://puu.sh/cp22I/2d2381eb1b.jpg
00:38:113 (2,3,4) - Flow here feels awkward too. Try this: http://puu.sh/cp26o/a83995f559.jpg It will also make (4,1) farther so that (1) feels stronger, which is good imo.
00:56:799 (3) - I suggest moving this up to flow better into (4): http://puu.sh/cp2fc/ce018c7e44.jpg
01:25:085 (1,1) - I suggest changing the rhythm like this: http://puu.sh/cp2pD/c442f41a12.jpg It will match the music well and you can make jumps between (2,1) and (2,3).
00:03:313 (3,5,6) - I recommend using drum additions clap on (3,5) and finish on head of (6).
00:07:085 to 00:11:199 - In this section I suggest using a common hitsound pattern, like http://puu.sh/cp42G/ff93ad1480.png (W=Whistle, E=Finish, R=Clap) which matches the music well.
00:16:685 (6,1) - SC:77 finish sounds much better here.
00:45:999 (6) - ^
00:47:370 (1) - ^
00:55:599 (5) - Whistle on head?
00:56:970 (4) - ^
00:59:199 (1) - Clap on end.
01:02:970 (3) - Clap.
01:18:399 (1) - Whistle.
01:23:885 (1,1,1,1) - SC:77 finish is better.
00:37:085 (5) - Do you want to add a new combo here to match the rest of the map?

Neta

536 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Neta 2014-10-25T06:13:23+00:00

CloudSplash16 wrote:
[Saki]
00:09:313 (2,3,1) - Flow here is awkward imo. Here is my suggestion: http://puu.sh/cp14h/a7020b1ef4.jpg
00:15:313 (1,2) - This feels too close, and isn't smooth to play. Here are two possible ways that I would change to fix it: http://puu.sh/cp1kA/6e69af2793.jpg or http://puu.sh/cp1fR/646395f4a0.jpg
00:19:770 (4,5) - Flow here is awkward. Try this: http://puu.sh/cp1sX/3a666c0be2.jpg (reverse (5))
00:30:913 (2,3,4,5,6) - This jump pattern doesn't feel very good for me. The spacing is a bit weird, especially (5,6,1) feels unnatural. Here is my suggested jump pattern: http://puu.sh/cp1FW/8af1770771.jpg
00:32:285 (2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest changing it like this to flow better into (1): http://puu.sh/cp22I/2d2381eb1b.jpg
00:38:113 (2,3,4) - Flow here feels awkward too. Try this: http://puu.sh/cp26o/a83995f559.jpg It will also make (4,1) farther so that (1) feels stronger, which is good imo. Fixed other way with keeping (4)
00:56:799 (3) - I suggest moving this up to flow better into (4): http://puu.sh/cp2fc/ce018c7e44.jpg I think it's fine now because flow looks fine to me and if i move circle up, i think patterns are too up on that part so i feel weird (just my opinion)
01:25:085 (1,1) - I suggest changing the rhythm like this: http://puu.sh/cp2pD/c442f41a12.jpg It will match the music well and you can make jumps between (2,1) and (2,3). maybe i found some other way with keeping this way so i'll fix this later with changing hitsound

No comment = All Agreed and Fixed

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00:03:313 (3,5,6) - I recommend using drum additions clap on (3,5) and finish on head of (6).
00:07:085 to 00:11:199 - In this section I suggest using a common hitsound pattern, like http://puu.sh/cp42G/ff93ad1480.png (W=Whistle, E=Finish, R=Clap) which matches the music well.
00:16:685 (6,1) - SC:77 finish sounds much better here.
00:45:999 (6) - ^
00:47:370 (1) - ^
00:55:599 (5) - Whistle on head?
00:56:970 (4) - ^
00:59:199 (1) - Clap on end.
01:02:970 (3) - Clap.
01:18:399 (1) - Whistle.
01:23:885 (1,1,1,1) - SC:77 finish is better.
00:37:085 (5) - Do you want to add a new combo here to match the rest of the map?

~~CS16 Best Modder~~

Thanks for mod!!

I need some time to think about hitsound so i'll review later or change up all hitsounds

WhiteAries

87 posts

Joined April 2013

WhiteAries 2014-10-26T07:56:26+00:00

Chocoliti wrote:
Column 0 1 2 3 4 5 6

[General]

전체적으로 두 난이도 모두 새로 다듬어 주었으면 함. 또한 두 난이도 모두 전체적으로 노트 비중이 0번 키가 스크래치인 마냥 너무 오른손에 치중되있음, 이점 신경써서 리맵을 하는게 좋지 않을까 싶음.

[WhiteAries' 7K NM]

00:03:656 (3656|0,3742|1,3828|2) - 왼손 혼자 스트림을 부담하게 하는것 보단 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1974734 양손에 분산시켜주는것도 고려해보았으면 함

00:11:028 (11028|4,11028|2) - 롱노트의 끝이 00:11:542 가 되어야함, 앞의 00:08:285 (8285|1,8285|4) ㅣ 00:09:656 (9656|2,9656|4) 과 동일한 리듬이므로 통일

00:23:370 (23370|6,23370|4) - 이 부분 리맵, 롱노트의 시작은 00:23:542 에 시작해야함, 예시: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1974747

00:26:285 (26285|0) - 크게 의미가 있는 롱노트 같지 않은데 일반 서클노트로 바꾸는게 낫다고 봄

00:26:970 (26970|3,26970|4,27142|0,27313|2,27313|1,27485|4,27485|3) - 개인적으로 성의 없은 패턴 중 하나라고 생각함, 흡사 스탠다드 오토컨버팅 한 맵을 보는 느낌이 듬

00:45:313 (45313|6,45313|3) - 이런 노트에 롱노트를 주기 보단 오히려 00:45:999 (45999|0,45999|1) 와 00:47:370 (47370|0,47370|2) 이러한 부분에 롱노트 효과를 주는것이 더 적절하지 않나 싶음

00:52:685 - 00:53:028 부터 시작된 스트림이 지적한 52초부분부터 시작되어야함, 또한 스트림 모양도 바꾸는걸 추천함.

00:55:599 (55599|6,55599|1) - 롱노트의 끝이 00:55:942 에 되어야함

00:59:028 (59028|0,59028|1) - 이러한 동시치기는 정말 불가피한 상황 아니면 지양하는것을 추천함, 예시: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1974772

01:03:999 ~ 01:04:685 - 리맵

01:12:399 (72399|3,72485|4,72570|5,72570|6) - 패턴 재배치, 59초와 같은 이유

01:23:885 ~ 01:26:456 - 음악과 싱크로가 맞지 않게 롱노트 끝을 표현할 바엔 오히려 서클노트로 바꿔서 패턴 재배치를 하는게 더욱 낫다고 생각됨

[WhiteAries' 7K HD]

전체적으로 롱노트 3개씩 동시치기로 쓴 부분, 정말 롱노트가 3개씩 필요한 부분인지 생각해보고 고쳐야 할 부분은 수정을 추천함

00:03:485 (3485|1) - 0번으로 이동

00:04:170 ~ 00:06:399 - 이러한 경우 롱노트를 0번이나 6번쪽에 배치하고 나머지 스트림을 배치하는게 가장 이상적임, 또한 스트림이 00:04:513 부터 시작됬는데 여기가 아닌 00:04:170 부터 시작 되어야함. 이 부분 리맵.

00:08:799 ~ 00:09:656 - 이러한 부분이 오른손에 치우친 패턴

00:11:370 ~ 00:12:570 - 스트림이 00:11:370 부터 시작되어야 하므로 앞의 짧은 롱노트 00:11:370 (11370|6,11370|4,11370|2) 를 삭제하고 스트림을 재배치하는걸 추천함, 또한 00:12:570 마지막 끝나는 부분에 노트 하나쯤 더 추가해주는게 어떨까 싶음

00:12:913 ~ 00:13:942 - 이렇게 맵핑한 의도는 알겠으나 더욱더 좋고 이와 같이 알기 쉬운 다른 패턴을 고려해보는걸 추천

00:18:056 ~ 00:23:542 - 전체적으로 노트의 양쪽 균형을 맞춰주도록 수정

00:29:028 ~ 00:52:170 - ^

00:33:142 (33142|1,33142|5,33142|4,33485|2,33485|3) - 깔끔하지 않은모양, 또한 위에서 지적한 것 처럼 롱노트가 3개씩이나 필요할까 싶음. 2개만 쓰고(2개도 많은것 같지만 굳이 쓴다면) 하나는 일반 써클 노트로 써도 괜찮을거같음, 다른 패턴 고민해보는걸 추천

00:33:656 (33656|2,33656|5,33656|6,33999|3,33999|4) - ^

00:38:799 (38799|3,38885|2,38970|3,39056|2) - 추천하는 트릴이 아님, 전후 롱노트 배치를 수정하여 트릴도 같이 수정하는걸 추천

00:50:970 ~ 00:51:656 - 치기 썩 좋지 않은 패턴, 롱노트로 보컬을 표현하지 말고 00:50:970 ~ 00:51:828 - 까지 연주되는 뒤의 현악기 소리를 하나의 롱노트로 표현하고 나머지 음들을 써클 노트로 표현하는것을 추천, 예시: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1974830

00:52:685 ~ 00:53:713 - 스트림이 00:53:028 여기가 아닌 00:52:685 여기서 부터 시작되어야함, Playback Rate 25퍼센트로 들어보는걸 추천

01:02:456 ~ 01:04:685 - 정말 싫어하는 패턴 종합 선물 셋트를 보는 느낌, 디자이너한테 디자인으로 괴롭히기 짤 보는 느낌이 듬. 리맵을 하게 된다면 그 스타일에 맞춰서 예시를 보여 줄 수도있겠지만 지금 스타일에서 비슷한 스타일로 예시를 깔끔하게 보여주려니 이것도 힘듬. 전체적으로 롱노트를 3개씩 동시치기로 쓰다 보니 이게 엉켜서 나타난 결과물이 아닐까 싶음. 또한 01:03:656 (63656|2) 이런 롱노트를 중간에 넣어서 표현하기 보다는 오히려 서클 노트로 스트림을 01:03:656 부터 표현하는게 더욱 좋다고 생각됨. 마지막으로 이 01:03:999 (63999|6,63999|5) 롱노트 2개가 무엇을 표현하려고 하는지 조금 감이 안잡히는데 아무래도 스트림이 표현하는 음과 저 롱노트 2개의 음과 서로 중복이 됬다고 밖엔 생각이 안듬. 지적한 롱노트 2개를 삭제하고 스트림을 더 깔끔하게 표현, 또한 01:03:142 부터 표현한 보컬 롱노트를 차라리 원래 끝나는 부분인 01:03:999 로 수정하여 응용하여 맵핑하는게 지금 상황보단 훨씬 좋다고 생각됨.

01:09:142 ~ 01:10:513 - 롱노트를 3개씩 써야할지 고려 해보는게 좋다고 생각함. 만약 3개씩이나 써서 보컬을 그렇게 강조할거면 오히려 01:09:313 (69313|4,69656|2,69999|2,70342|2) - 이 노트 4개를 삭제하는게 옳다고 생각됨.

01:14:628 ~ 01:15:999 - 국수 좋아하세요?

01:23:885 ~ 01:26:628 - 여기도 롱노트를 3개씩이나 써야되나 싶음. 사실 맵의 거의 모든 부분이 롱노트 1~2개로 충분하다고 개인적으로 생각됨, 마지막으로 01:25:770 이부분을 굳이 롱노트 3개로 표현할려면 뒷부분 음들은 과감하게 생략하고 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1974871 이렇게 표현하는게 더욱 좋다고 생각됨.

힘들었습니다 챠슈동 사주세요

일단있는건 대부분 수정함. 01:14:628 ~ 01:15:999 이부분은 쳐봤을때 크게 문제가없었기때문에 다음에 다시 지적들어오면 고침

https://www.dropbox.com/s/3n06wjk22dngr ... 9.zip?dl=0

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2014-10-26T08:20:04+00:00

Saki! <3

Neta

536 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Neta 2014-10-26T09:52:16+00:00

Thanks for star!

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2014-10-26T09:55:51+00:00

Scorpiour wrote:
really sorry for your long wait

[Habi's Insane]
00:02:970 (1,2,3,4) - heard unnecessary i suppose / Patten is Fixed
00:20:799 (5) - compared with a repeat, two notes are better: / no. not sure that me
00:33:142 (5,6) - slider first and then note? v/ sure
00:50:285 (4,5,6) - supposed to be 2 sliders but not note->slider->note / no. I'm now is batter
00:53:713 (1) - Repeat circle touches the HP bar / Fixed
That's all, not bad. Try to find several more mod for your Saki diff especially for the hitsounding, then call me back to recheck~

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Artist:Hashimoto Miyuki
ArtistUnicode:橋本みゆき
Creator:Neta
Version:Habi's Insane
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334,181,64598,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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104,52,67770,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,24,67942,2,0,P|364:72|328:176,1,170,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,208,68456,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,192,68628,2,0,B|116:132|116:132|92:104|92:104|72:32,1,170,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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264,320,70685,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,144,70856,2,0,P|288:100|284:56,1,85,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,4,71199,1,8,0:0:0:0:
28,128,71370,2,0,P|80:148|176:92,1,170,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,60,71885,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,228,72056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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268,44,73256,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,120,73428,2,0,P|156:128|112:120,1,85,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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40,319,74113,2,0,P|76:245|155:221,1,170,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,320,74628,2,0,L|176:312,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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392,356,75570,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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200,376,78228,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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452,200,79428,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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100,280,80285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Neta

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Neta 2014-10-26T10:28:05+00:00

All diffs updated

and fixed Saki diff's hitsound stuff with some mappers

Scorpiour

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Scorpiour 2014-10-26T22:15:41+00:00

You need a mania BAT for bubble ~

Neta

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Topic Starter

Neta 2014-10-27T13:05:11+00:00

yay thanks Scorpiour

Harbyter

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Harbyter 2014-10-27T19:03:53+00:00

hi~here the mod from the request

[MOD]

Column -1-2-3-4-5-6-7-

WhiteAries's 7K MX

00:03:399 (3399|5,3399|3,3399|1) - wrong line ,move here 00:03:313 -
00:03:485 - add note 4
00:03:742 (3742|5,3828|4) - delete
00:03:999 - add note 5 7
00:09:828 - don't let those part empty , do the same thing like the previous pattern so.. >
00:09:656 (9656|6,9656|5) - turn in LN and ends here 00:09:999 - then delete those 2 notes 00:09:999 (9999|4,9999|5) -
00:10:342 (10342|3) - delete,previous pattern only 1 note here

00:10:856 - add note like the previous pattern
00:11:028 (11028|4,11028|2) - same here,turn in LN till here 00:11:370 -
00:14:628 (14628|4) - delete
00:14:799 (14799|4) - move in col 4
00:14:885 (14885|3) - delete
00:16:856 (16856|2) - ??delete
01:18:399 - missing 2 notes

01:24:313 (84313|2) - delet,nothing here
01:24:999 (84999|3) - this too,delete
01:25:513 (85513|4,85685|2) - those 2 too

01:26:113 (86113|4,86199|3,86370|1,86542|1,86542|3,86542|5) - delete
01:25:770 (85770|5,85770|3,85770|1) - those LN should end here 01:26:970 -

anyway you should nerf the WhiteAries's 7K Normal ,NM above 2.00 stars are unrankable,when i played it it was like a HD xD

that's all,hope my little mod will be helpfull

and good luck!

WhiteAries

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WhiteAries 2014-10-28T05:41:48+00:00

diff change

MX->HD https://www.dropbox.com/s/r5mebut23rh1i ... D.osu?dl=0

NM->star rate to 1.96 https://www.dropbox.com/s/05ilabix8otn4 ... D.osu?dl=0

i'll check mod later tnx

Neta

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Neta 2014-10-28T07:51:44+00:00

Updated~

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xxdeathx wrote:

fergas wrote:

Dark Fang wrote:

-Nanaka- wrote:

skinnyjimmy wrote:

-Nanaka- wrote:

General

Saki

Habi's Insane

No Dap's Hard

Cloud's Normal

Easy

IamKwaN wrote:

General

Saki

Easy

-Nanaka- wrote:

IamKwaN wrote:

Cloud's Normal

Ryuuka Toki wrote:

IamKwaN wrote:

No Dap's Hard

Ryuuka Toki wrote:

Gamu wrote:

Gamu wrote:

jtd1 wrote:

Gamu wrote:

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jtd1 wrote:

Scorpiour wrote:

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