[mAp]
00:01:129 (5,6) - Make these a slider, it's very strange right now. It's not just the jump, it's the notes following as well.
00:01:463 (1,2) - If you're feeling kind make these a slider too but I think the first slider will help with this a lot already.
00:02:463 (5,6) - I would personally like to see another slider here with the same reason as the first one because it still feels very awkward.
00:02:629 (6,1) - Same sort of thing again.
00:03:296 (3,1) - And again...
Alternatively for all of this use spacing that isn't totally counter intuitive. Currently the longer the time between notes the shorter the jumps? This makes no sense and just confuses the player. Normally it's acceptable with standard beats BUT this rhythm isn't standard PLUS it's the start of the map and people don't have a rhythm already in their heads.
00:35:296 (3,4) - Make this jump smaller.
00:49:129 (1,2,3,4,1) - This stream is NOT nice to go into and it's shaped in a way that is just wrong as to where the player would want it to be. If you really must have a spaced stream there I recommend you make it VERY intuitive to the player because it seems random as fuck right now. It can be as spaced as you like as long as the start of the stream is obvious. At the moment it seems very random and unexpected and because of this it makes it insanely hard for the player to judge whether it's 1/4 or 1/3 and also makes it incredibly hard to hit without knowing it prior and memorizing it.
01:04:379 (4,5) - This jump seems a tad over done compared to the other 1/4 jumps. Possibly make it smaller.
01:13:463 (5) - The indent between 01:13:963 and 01:14:213 is really awkward to follow, I'd recommend making it flatter or something along those lines (potentially make it go further down and not backwards so much, the issue is mainly that the slider tick is at the bottom of the curve right now so either make the player follow it down or move the tick to somewhere the player would prefer to go). Cool slider though apart from that kink.
01:36:129 (1) - SV here shouldn't be this high it's unexpected as fuck. I don't think it should be increased like that until the actual speed up at 01:37:463
01:45:129 (1,2,3,4,1) - This stream NEVER seems to work, all the other ones seem to work once in a while but this one is broken. I'd recommend fully changing it AND changing these into 2 slider 01:45:463 (1,2,3,4) . By making them slider the stream should in itself be more readable because players can concentrate on it rather than the jumps after.
01:47:463 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Same as previous stream but I think this could be fixed by turning those doubled after it into 1/4 sliders. If I were to be honest here I would want to leave these streams with as much comfort as possible and one way to achieve that is to make 01:48:129 (1,2) a slider and then possibly use more of those sliders for the first set of doubles. If you do however want to keep the doubles because you want us to suffer then make them go in the other direction (anti clockwise order, not clockwise) because right now the overlap is killer.
01:53:129 (1,2,1) - Space this stack out, it's pretty insane to read at the moment and you could make some cool jumps out of it.
This map could be nice but there are a lot of issues with the map. I really would recommend helping the player read your map a little easier, making a map that's hard to play is fun; making a map that's annoying to play just takes away from the experience imo. This is a rather modest mod because I'm aware you don't want to change the map too much, please take that into account.
[Another]
00:00:130 (1,2) - Make these into a slider, HD players will hate you for this and this difficulty shouldn't be as harsh on the player. Not only that but again it's a weird rhythm with no prior beats to be judged on, give the player a little something to start off with. If you won't add a slider, make 00:00:130 (1,2,3) a lot more spaced.
00:01:463 (1,2,3) - ^
00:15:463 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I would personally like to see this flipped horizontally. It currently seems like it could be a 1/4 jump because it's close to a slider end plus that would seem easier to go into but this is a nit pick point.
00:34:629 (4,1) - If you could make this a 1/2 slider that would be just dandy, it'd make the rhythm known for 00:35:963 (5,1) too and sort any reading issues.
00:49:463 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe make this pattern bigger and grander (especially 00:49:463 (1,2) it's easy to mistake as a 1/2 ).
01:36:129 (1) - Same SV issue as mAp. It's unexpected, use a lower SV for this slider.
I really like how the 1/4 stream jumps are handled in this diffi, seems to work perfectly.