Recheck~
[Easy]
00:14:676 (1,2,3) - It looks like the angle of the flow is a bit too sharp. I'd move this note to somewhat like 100|232 if I were you. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154599700:18:933 - Remove a whistle since the guitar doesn't go here unlike 00:18:122 - 00:18:527 - .00:22:581 - I'd remove this whistle to emphasize the finish which is added to the slider heard of 00:22:784 (1) - .00:28:764 (6) - Remove this note since this triplet doesn’t fit with the song.00:37:987 (3) - A 1/2 slider should be placed instead of this note since the piano goes to 00:38:190 - .00:41:027 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - It's kinda hard to aim this pattern due to the sharp angle of the flow.
I'd rearrange them like this if I were you. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1549027 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1549040
(This pattern is also against the flow, but should be better than the current idea.)01:25:014 (2,3,4) - I’d suggest rearranging this pattern for the same reason as above. e.g. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1551918
[Easy]
Remove unnecessary custom claps. ↓
(Send me a forum pm if you don't know how to remove a custom hitsound from a slider tick.)SPOILER- 00:10:217 -
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- 00:40:419 - Missing a finish.
- 00:41:027 - Missing a clap.
- 00:43:054 (2) - Change the Sampleset at the end to Normal. It kinda sounds empty around here.
- 00:51:973 - Add a whistle to make consistent with 01:04:946 (3) - .
- 01:09:406 (3) - Remove a whistle from the head and the end. It doesn't work with this custom clap well imo.
- 01:15:487 - Change the SampleSet to Normal. It should fit with the drum well.
- 01:15:892 (6) - Remove a clap and then ^.[Normal]
Remoe / add custom claps! ↓SPOILER[list:1337]
Remove- 00:10:217 -
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- 00:21:973 - Indeed this fits with your hitsound pattern, but not the melody.
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- 00:16:298 - What did you add a whistle here for? Maybe a mistake? Well remove plz!
- 00:22:784 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern doesn't look good to me. It'd be better to rearrange if possible.If I were youhttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1541186
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1541187
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220,272,24406,2,0,P|284:244|364:252,1,144
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484,312,26027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,376,26433,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,372,26636,2,0,P|312:360|272:328,1,96,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,288,27244,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,192,27649,6,0,P|320:176|344:136,1,96,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,140,28460,2,0,P|466:179|511:192,1,96,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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100,316,32109,2,0,L|112:368,1,48,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0: - 00:37:987 - Add a whistle to make consistent with 00:41:230 - .
- 00:42:852 (2,3) - A note or a slider head should be placed here to follow the vocal stress since the vocal is mainly followed in this difficulty.
- 00:43:865 (1) - You can move this spinner head to 00:43:663 - if you apply the above suggestion. I mean,
Plus, a drum hit normal sound doesn't fit well. Change the sampleset to Auto, reduce the volume only at the end to 15% or so. This way 00:46:298 (1) - can be emphasized. - 00:51:973 (1,2,3) - It sounds kinda empty to me. Try adding a whistle to the head of (1) and (2,3).
- 00:54:609 (1,2,3) - Another rhythm which is following the vocal stress at 00:55:419 (3) - should fit with the song better than the current one.
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408,296,55014,2,0,P|420:240|404:180,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,136,55825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,228,56230,1,0,0:0:0:0: - 01:01:703 (4,5,6,1) - It looks like the flow is kinda bad. I'd rearrange this pattern like this if I were you. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1545881
200,284,61703,2,0,P|240:332|296:352,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,344,62311,1,4,0:0:0:0:
428,252,62717,2,0,L|420:192,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0: - 01:15:487 (3,5) - How about adding a hitsound by changing the sampleset to Normal?
- 01:22:784 (2,3) - This pattern looks a bit too simple. I think you could do something with these sliders.
- 01:25:419 (3) - It will be more fun if you vary the movement of the cursor by moving this note to downward like this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1545904[Hard]
About custom claps ↓
- 00:09:811 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Remove all custom claps. I think drum-hits / whistles / finishes should be enough in this part.
00:14:676 (1,2,3) - It looks like the angle of the flow is a bit too sharp. I'd move this note to somewhat like 100|232 if I were you. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154599700:18:933 - Remove a whistle since the guitar doesn't go here unlike 00:18:122 - 00:18:527 - .00:22:581 - I'd remove this whistle to emphasize the finish which is added to the slider heard of 00:22:784 (1) - .00:28:764 (6) - Remove this note since this triplet doesn’t fit with the song.00:37:987 (3) - A 1/2 slider should be placed instead of this note since the piano goes to 00:38:190 - .00:41:027 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - It's kinda hard to aim this pattern due to the sharp angle of the flow.
I'd rearrange them like this if I were you. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1549027 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1549040
460,16,41027,2,0,L|440:80,1,64,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:00:55:014 (3,4,5,6) - It will be nicer if you follow strong sounds with slider heads or notes like you did at 01:02:919 (2,3,4,5,6) - .01:05:352 (3,4,5) - The angle of (4) is against the flow from (3). Try rearranging to fix it. e.g. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1551905
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299,260,41636,5,2,0:0:0:0:
268,268,41737,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,266,41838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
206,255,41940,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,232,42041,2,0,P|164:176|184:112,1,128,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,42649,1,8,0:0:0:0:
(This pattern is also against the flow, but should be better than the current idea.)01:25:014 (2,3,4) - I’d suggest rearranging this pattern for the same reason as above. e.g. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1551918
300,64,85014,2,0,P|240:112|164:88,1,160,6|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:no kds. Take your time~
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