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Your hitsound are not placed inside note instead placed to sample hitsound http://puu.sh/9k7Cu/7f3c573553.png , sample hitsound used for separated BGM (usually BMS song) and this are unrankable because it's not affected to any note and only making another sound. so please remove them from sample list and add hitsound to notesuggested to increase volume to 30%[NM+]
Re-snap all note for avoiding these kind unsnapped beat. http://puu.sh/9k7iE/1f1fcef4d6.png00:06:509 (6509|3) - 00:11:842 (11842|3) - move to 2nd column, well it may better if not making repeater note
00:22:341 - set speed change to x0.75 . in this part you're only using hold note.
00:17:175 (17175|0) - same like above, but move to 3rd column
00:19:842 (19842|3,20509|0) - Ctrl + J, same reason like above
00:38:341 (38341|0,39008|1,39674|3,40341|2) - it may better if you remove this hold note and only focus drum sound in this part. also it make more suitable for finger playing
00:41:008 (41008|3,41174|2,41341|1,41508|0) - the vocal are only single long sound, making them as 1/4 stream it will be hard. so i may suggest you to remove highlighted hold note and add hold note to 4th column From 00:41:008 - until 0:42:008 -
00:42:341 (42341|3,42674|3,43008|3) - make this as 1/2 hold note
00:43:341 (43341|2,43341|1,43508|1,43508|2) - this beat are 1/8 drum, i suggest to start hold note (2nd - 3rd column) From 00:43:341 - Until 00:43:674 -
01:15:341 (75341|2) - move to 1st column
01:25:508 (85508|3,85841|3,86008|0,86174|3) - this hold note aren't enough to follow 1/4 vocal beat, i suggest to change them to normal note.
i see same things in other part. so it may better if you fix it by your ownplease don't make 1/4 LN's for non-sense pattern. Put note if there's a note such like 01:48:341 (108341|0,108508|1,108674|0,108841|1) - i understand you trying to follow synth beat. but it doesn't fit and even looks not following that beat. so change some 1/4 hold note to normal note if doesn't have short synth. nah you should do short hold note like this 01:52:008 (112008|2,112174|2) -
02:09:341 - i suggest you to add 1/1 note for follow main beat. normal player not enough have experience to tracking beat
02:46:341 (166341|0,167008|1,167674|3,168341|2) - it may better if you remove this hold note and only focus drum sound in this part. also it make more suitable for finger playing
03:34:508 (214508|0) - 03:39:841 (219841|0) - 03:45:174 (225174|0) - 03:50:508 (230508|0) - move to 3rd. repeating note isn't good in this part
03:55:674 (235674|0,235758|1,235924|3,236008|1) - delete this, it doesn't have any beat to add note
im only mod this diff because im not sure other diff needed mod instead do rearrange.
this pattern really hard from the song itself