[General]
Diffnames should show their difficulty(excepting hardest diff), you should know that. How about making something like EvilHard and IrreHard?
And why do you call diffs like the song from some bemani game? That's not forbidden, but looks pretty strange.
AiMod says something about missing files, i don't know what is it, but look at them.
And set the preview point
[Beginner]
00:12:827 - move break to this point like you did on hyper and kiiwa
00:20:827 - and here too
00:40:827 (1) - delete NC because 00:48:827 (2) - there's no NC
01:19:827 (2) - change rhythm to 1/1 slider and note 01:20:827 - here, because this beat is strong, and with finish, thats bad to finish sliders on strong beats
[Standard]
00:12:827 - same about break as in beginner
00:20:827 - same too
00:27:327 (1) - 00:31:327 (1) - 00:35:327 (1) - are you sure about this NC spam?
00:40:327 (1) - and about this too
00:41:827 (2,3) - they're touches, how about moving (3) for 1 grid right?
00:48:327 (1) - again, for me this NC is unnecessary
00:53:827 (1,1) - and again
01:08:327 (4) -
01:23:327 (1,2,3) - this can be pretty hard to read for newbies
[Hyper]
00:43:327 (1,2) - move (2) closer or further, because now overlap looks pretty ugly
00:48:827 - don't finish sliders on strong beats please, better to make slider 2/3 and add note here
00:55:827 (1,1) - how about stacking? would look better
01:11:827 (1) - this touches hpbar, how about moving pattern lower?
01:23:827 (1) - move upper please, on 16:9 screens it looks offscreen
[EvilElvis]
Добавь японские названия артиста и песни в юникодные тайтл и артист.
00:09:993 - я бы здесь поставил нота-слайдер, а не слайдер-нота, по-моему лучше звучит
00:10:660 (1) - я бы анстакнул
00:11:827 (4,5) - и это бы тоже подвинул, и пятёрку комбой выделил
00:18:160 - вот, а здесь ты поставил нота-слайдер. да ещё и 00:18:660 (6) - это добавил. может, в первой части тоже добавишь тогда? или наоборот, эту удалишь
00:20:327 (4) - либо слайдер поставь, либо начало брейка подвинь на 00:20:827 -
00:24:827 (1) - выглядит как червь в конвульсиях, честно. попробуй сделать более гладким
00:28:327 (4) - что-то этот звук как-то вообще не в тему звучит
00:32:326 (4) - как и этот
00:34:660 (5,1) - я б оверлапнул типа такого 00:36:327 (5) - да откуда ты их взял D:
00:42:493 (3) - удалить его? под вокал совсем не звучит
00:50:493 (3) - и этот
00:58:827 - что у тебя за извращения с хитсаундами на этой мапе
как и позже тоже
01:06:827 (1,2) - бланкет кривой
01:09:327 (2,3,4) - спейсинг поровнее сделай
01:17:660 (3) - этот джамп какой-то совсем не в тему, не подходит ни под трек, ни под течение остальных паттернов
[Irreversible]
00:08:118 (1,2) - really unnecessary, maybe delete them and start map from 00:08:827 - ?
00:09:827 (3,4) - bad blanket
00:16:327 - i would add here note and keep other space unmapped till 00:16:827 - , this pause would look really better
00:24:493 (2) - delete for better rhythm?
00:28:493 (5) - looks unnecessary too. 00:32:493 - like here
00:56:160 (2,3) - there's no sound, why did you add them?
01:04:826 - looks like you forgot to make volume 70% from this part
01:14:827 (1,2) - add normal finishes like you did in 1st part?
01:16:493 (2) - delete?
[Kiiwa]
00:28:493 (6) - rhythm sounds better without this note for me
00:32:493 (5) - and without this too
Didn't find more problems.
Good luck!
Diffnames should show their difficulty(excepting hardest diff), you should know that. How about making something like EvilHard and IrreHard?
And why do you call diffs like the song from some bemani game? That's not forbidden, but looks pretty strange.
AiMod says something about missing files, i don't know what is it, but look at them.
And set the preview point
[Beginner]
00:12:827 - move break to this point like you did on hyper and kiiwa
00:20:827 - and here too
00:40:827 (1) - delete NC because 00:48:827 (2) - there's no NC
01:19:827 (2) - change rhythm to 1/1 slider and note 01:20:827 - here, because this beat is strong, and with finish, thats bad to finish sliders on strong beats
[Standard]
00:12:827 - same about break as in beginner
00:20:827 - same too
00:27:327 (1) - 00:31:327 (1) - 00:35:327 (1) - are you sure about this NC spam?
00:40:327 (1) - and about this too
00:41:827 (2,3) - they're touches, how about moving (3) for 1 grid right?
00:48:327 (1) - again, for me this NC is unnecessary
00:53:827 (1,1) - and again
01:08:327 (4) -
01:23:327 (1,2,3) - this can be pretty hard to read for newbies
[Hyper]
00:43:327 (1,2) - move (2) closer or further, because now overlap looks pretty ugly
00:48:827 - don't finish sliders on strong beats please, better to make slider 2/3 and add note here
00:55:827 (1,1) - how about stacking? would look better
01:11:827 (1) - this touches hpbar, how about moving pattern lower?
01:23:827 (1) - move upper please, on 16:9 screens it looks offscreen
[EvilElvis]
Добавь японские названия артиста и песни в юникодные тайтл и артист.
00:09:993 - я бы здесь поставил нота-слайдер, а не слайдер-нота, по-моему лучше звучит
00:10:660 (1) - я бы анстакнул
00:11:827 (4,5) - и это бы тоже подвинул, и пятёрку комбой выделил
00:18:160 - вот, а здесь ты поставил нота-слайдер. да ещё и 00:18:660 (6) - это добавил. может, в первой части тоже добавишь тогда? или наоборот, эту удалишь
00:20:327 (4) - либо слайдер поставь, либо начало брейка подвинь на 00:20:827 -
00:24:827 (1) - выглядит как червь в конвульсиях, честно. попробуй сделать более гладким
00:28:327 (4) - что-то этот звук как-то вообще не в тему звучит
00:32:326 (4) - как и этот
00:34:660 (5,1) - я б оверлапнул типа такого 00:36:327 (5) - да откуда ты их взял D:
00:42:493 (3) - удалить его? под вокал совсем не звучит
00:50:493 (3) - и этот
00:58:827 - что у тебя за извращения с хитсаундами на этой мапе
как и позже тоже
01:06:827 (1,2) - бланкет кривой
01:09:327 (2,3,4) - спейсинг поровнее сделай
01:17:660 (3) - этот джамп какой-то совсем не в тему, не подходит ни под трек, ни под течение остальных паттернов
[Irreversible]
00:08:118 (1,2) - really unnecessary, maybe delete them and start map from 00:08:827 - ?
00:09:827 (3,4) - bad blanket
00:16:327 - i would add here note and keep other space unmapped till 00:16:827 - , this pause would look really better
00:24:493 (2) - delete for better rhythm?
00:28:493 (5) - looks unnecessary too. 00:32:493 - like here
00:56:160 (2,3) - there's no sound, why did you add them?
01:04:826 - looks like you forgot to make volume 70% from this part
01:14:827 (1,2) - add normal finishes like you did in 1st part?
01:16:493 (2) - delete?
[Kiiwa]
00:28:493 (6) - rhythm sounds better without this note for me
00:32:493 (5) - and without this too
Didn't find more problems.
Good luck!