10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey, mod from queue

Insane

00:17:171 (1) - It'd look better if this could blanket 00:16:841 (7) - 's head instead. And you're probably going to have to curve 00:17:501 (2) - too. If you're trying to refrain from overusing the 1/2 curve sliders, you could make 00:16:841 (7) - a straight slider instead. no

Something like this:

& Don't worry about 00:17:171 (1) -, I test played it and it doesn't touch below the border of the screen.

00:27:720 (1,3) - Nazi suggestion (sorry!) please try to have 00:27:720 (1) - for ma better blanket around 00:28:380 (3) - 's tail, yes? fix

00:35:632 (1) - Finish on the head for emphasis to the next stanza? fix

00:40:907 (1) - Sounds really off here, mainly because it skips the vocals loud "ko" heard at 00:41:072. Try to map something here, where you will at least hear a hit at 00:41:072. no

02:48:160 (5) - This note needs to be removed. In the previous chorus, on the rhythmic cycle that corresponds to this one, you did not have a note on 02:37:610, 02:02:006, 01:51:457 and so on. hitsound
02:53:435 (5) - ^ Same suggestion as above. hitsound

Normal

01:38:599 (2) - Move to 01:38:270. In the previous stanza, that corresponds to this one, you have 00:46:841 (2) - placed a beat before the first slider. fix
01:41:236 (2) - Move to 01:40:907, same reason as above. fix

02:29:039 (1,2) - Nazi suggestion (sorry!) try to blanket these sliders better? fix

Good luck!

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey, mod from queue

Mei's Hard

00:35:632 (3) - Add a whistle?

00:39:753 (4,1,2) - These notes are obviously placed too closely together.

00:51:457 (4) - NC

01:05:632 (6) - Erm, try to make this slider blanket 01:05:138 (5) - 's tail instead?


01:32:336 (1) - Less curve on this slider please or move more to the top right, so that it won't overlap a part of 01:33:325 (4) - .

02:23:105 - Personally, I believe placing a 1/1 slider here may sound more appropriate to start the playing time. Mainly because vocals officially starts here.actually i followed the drum


Good luck!

waxman wrote:

QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ

[Insane]

00:39:918 - add circle? x:244 y:136 fixed in another way
00:58:380 (4,5) - far a bit. According to 01:14:039 (2,3,4,5,6,7). fix
01:08:270 - this green line would be moved to 01:08:270. because 01:08:105 (2) has Clap. It's not necessary for me. and you NC'd at 01:07:940 (1,2). so you can do. no
01:33:490 (4) - stack on end of 01:32:995 (3)? no
01:59:369 (1,2,3,4) - same as 01:08:270. no
02:55:248 (5) - Clap? no


GOOD LUCK!
(ﾉ≧∇≦)ﾉ

waxman wrote:

QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQwawaxman

[Mei's Hard]
00:14:533 (1) - Adding Clap is better.
00:17:171 (1,2) - This spacing is too close.
00:35:303 (1) - Delete NC. Because there is not intentional thing. like it's not different spacing.
00:39:259 (3,4) - too close
00:55:083 (5) - remove reverse? Your is not necessary for me. then place a circle on 00:55:163.
00:56:731 (1) - This end of spanner's sound is different from 01:21:786 (1).and this is no problem
01:35:632 (3) - delete Clap. I think
01:35:797 (4) - ^no clap there ;w;
01:48:160 (1) - same as 00:56:731 (1)same
02:11:896 (1,2,3,4,5) - This shape is not cool. 02:11:896 (1,3,5)'s spacing are not same one. 02:13:215 (5) - x:256 y:144?


GOOD LUCK!
(ﾉ≧∇≦)ﾉ

Leorda wrote:

Hi there, sorry for delay... because I was on national exam

[General]
* Your BG looks using a low quality image to put on. Maybe find a high quality one? ok i will change it later

[Normal]
01:24:753 - This break space looks short and probably useless (explain if you have a reason). Remove it or add note? the same as other diffs..
02:29:039 (1) - Jump in normal/easiest diff can hard to reach for beginner during gameplay. Consider to reverse it fix

[Insane]
00:56:731 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This jump pattern looks random because the pattern start with half-polygon shaped (00:56:731 (1,2,3,4)) but suddenly change to back and forth pattern (00:57:391 (5,6,7,8)) so it makes difficult to understand/read while gameplay. Consider to rearrange it to make it readable? no.. because 5678 has vocal but 1234 not..
01:42:061 (4) - Spacing is bit far from previous one. It is intentional? fix
02:35:632 (1,2,3) - This triplets is doesn't fit to match the vocal or something. If you want to use triplets for following the vocal, it supposed to place at 02:35:797... but it's up to you then fix
02:54:671 (3) - Remove this note is probably better because it doesn't following vocal in music... fix

Good luck~ (had laughed because that vibrate vocal)

OscaR CUBE wrote:

Hii,, from my queue

NORMAL

I think, don't make a two-beats slider straight. I mean like these : 00:27:720 (1) - , 00:59:369 (3) - , and 01:04:643 (3) - it's a bit un-beatiful.. make it a little curved or something else? no, use straight silder can let map clean
01:38:270 (2) - make a slider until the white tick? like this http://puu.sh/a6ogm/09eb0736f3.jpg fix
02:59:039 - add a hit circle here? no, it's unnecessary

Insane

00:32:995 (1) - ctrl + G? or put it a bit close with previous object? no
00:27:391 (5) - Delete this? and make this slider 00:27:061 (4) - longer until the white tick? no, becuz "shi" is end on 00:27:226
01:32:336 (1) - 01:32:995 (3) - remomve the finish sound? ._. no

Sorry if this don't help you so much..
Good luck!

Leorda wrote:

Hi there, sorry for delay... because I was on national exam


[Mei's Hard]
00:15:852 (5) - Forgot to put new combo here? Since you add new combo every white tick
00:17:665 (2) - Spacing is too close from previous one
00:19:808 (5) - Same suggestion 00:15:852 (5)
00:37:281 (3) - This slider shape can break the flow due to shape that makes have a opposite direction after 00:35:797 (1,2,3,4) is clicked. Use this slider shape to fix the broken flow and make a circular flow (?) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1586247
00:39:753 (4) - Spacing is too close from previous one
01:27:061 - Are you planning to map this part? Since the bookmark is marked here, and this part looks promising to map the part (lol)i copied the diff and cleaning all notes but leave the bookmarks there, so in fact those bookmarks didnot affect me
02:53:435 - Add note with clap here?followed the vocal so no

Good luck~ (had laughed because that vibrate vocal)

OscaR CUBE
00:55:577 (6) - Put this slider a little far from previous slider?fixed by swag NC
AR-1?

MisakiYuri wrote:

Normal:


Mei's Hard:

00:17:665 (2,4) - stack hitcircle two on the end of slider 4? Suggestion.
00:22:446 (1,3) - stack slider 3 with slider 1? ^will break the flow but i fixed in other ways
00:40:083 (1,2) - DS?

No more complaints.
This kind of hard - I love~

-APXH wrote:

[Hard]
Why does have a larger break than the other two difficulties?
01:34:314 (9,1) - Is this distance OK?it is fine there
02:10:577 (1,2,3,4) - I know I'm being picky, but 1 and 3 are not perpendicular to 2 and 4*shhh*
02:48:819 (1,3) - They look like a baozi...lol
02:59:369 & 02:59:389 - Remove these two points. A slider doesn't make a sound when it starts

[Insane & Hard]
00:51:951 - Add a circle herei dont want it too hard so delete the note

Nice choice of song~

lsahi wrote:

总而言之到这应该米剩啥大问题额了
以下请mapper酌情考虑

[Insane]

首先
00:16:017 (2) - 这个完完全全被滑条挡住了，建议右移一点，漏出一个边边就好。 唔 tset的时候看到是有分开一点的 应该没问题
00:17:995 (4) - 这后面貌似还有一个装饰音，建议照着之前一样做一个折返滑条。 这里有个跳 要改好像挺难的..
00:23:105 (3) - 这后面也是，可以考虑加个二连？ ^
00:40:083 (4) - 不知道为什么，要是我摆我会把这个滑条拆成两个单点，滑条起始作为④，终止作为⑤，柑橘这样打着呼比♂较♂爽 你书的有道理

然后
00:46:182 (1,2) -
00:48:819 (1,2) -
建议以上两组滑条之间各加一个note，仔细听音乐的话会发现两组滑条之间各落下了一个歌词的重音（反正就是这个意思辣说不明白嘤嘤嘤）这里好像是故意漏的orz

小问题
01:07:281 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
01:17:830 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
01:58:709 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
02:09:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
02:44:863 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
02:55:413 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
建议拆分连打的时候做个NC，这样看起来更清晰明朗 fix

lsahi wrote:

[AwakextrA]

首先呢
00:24:918 (6) - 这个note在这里听起来违和感好强，是不是摆错了，我觉得好像应该再往后个四分拍 怎么可能
01:18:572 (2) - 摆歪了，没开DS吧 故意的辣
02:34:231 (2,3) - 这两个note得坑死无数人，总之不要那么坑辣 我感觉还挺好的

跟Ins同样的小问题
02:09:918 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个有个急弯开NC不要紧

01:07:940 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个不改 你没发现其实有两个弧度吗
01:36:951 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - fixed
和上面不一样，这一段既然没拆开也没变速还没有急转就不要开NC，这样看起来更明朗

Awaken wrote:

[Normal]

00:54:094 (1) - 01:40:248 (1) - 01:45:523 (1) - 02:02:665 (1) - 02:05:303 (1) - 02:38:270 (1) - 这些地方 头加个whistle呗 猴啊全改了

01:17:830 (2,1) - 为何不blanket？感觉flow也不错 我不皂这个是不是锐角转折啊 还是不改惹

[Insane]

00:19:149 (4,5,6,7) - 1/6感觉分一小点距离比stack好打 fix

00:36:621 (5) - 我建议这一段直接用这个头上的clap做24 no

01:55:413 (6) - 漏whistle fix

01:56:402 (3) - 我怎么看都觉得加个whistle好 爱还是算惹 这图我没有whistle和clap重叠

02:08:599 (3) - 这身子上怎么还有clap 替考

02:54:588 (2,3) - 这两个whistle换一下呗 感觉听起来更好 no

倒了 摸了半小时 这么快 不服

kamikin wrote:

I found this background: http://kyarril.files.wordpress.com/2013 ... -00089.png
Its more or less a better version of what you have got okay changed

Normal:
No problems

Insane:
Couldnt mod this as I cant get close to playing insanes

Sorry for the short mod! I didnt feel you needed to change it much, love the song as well

Awaken wrote:

[Normal]

[Mei's Hard]

02:33:160 (1) - 这转盘我觉得应该停蓝线 尤其你转盘尾巴还用了比较响的音效仔细听了一下还是白线._.

00:25:083 (1) - 把这个滑条改成circle和后面的滑条antijump感觉更好不想放跳了。。。因为当年年轻这节奏下的太密，不想再难了，能花条就滑条

00:44:863 (1,1) - stack好哇好

00:46:841 (5,6,1) - 我觉得这里stack比较破坏flow 前面五角星和两个滑条顺时针转结果在这里突然陡停改了点

00:50:138 (1,2,3) - 圆滑点呗 和现在的差不了太多了懒改._.

SPOILER

00:55:577 (1) - 爱 我觉得这里呢 要不就放远点 要不就补个note比较好 毕竟长白的重音很容易让人误读layuan

01:34:314 (9,1) - 实在太难读了 还是顺着摆好改了下

02:59:039 (4) - 01:21:457 (4) - 02:12:885 (4) - 这三个地方 我觉得如果用soft default的whistle的话效果会不错hitsound还是保持原样因为不是我下的._.

Silverkanade wrote:

[Mei's Hard]
00:22:281 - 漏音太难啦故意的
00:44:863 (1,1) - 叠好一点?
00:55:577 (1) - 放远一点? 现在太近略难读
01:02:830 - 这个音听明显的，跟一下?
01:34:314 (9) - 距离太远了..
01:58:050 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 连续单点好像有点多，建议放多点滑条?
02:41:566 (3) - 这跳太大了吧..?
02:53:435 - 放个note然后加上clap?
有些地方曲线滑条用太多感觉好乱orz..你说的对啊我想重做但是最近翻懒啊怎么办啊._.

kamikin wrote:

Hard:
00:43:544 (2) - Try to curve this or make it more excitingok
01:06:457 (3,4) - This is a bit confusing
01:07:610 (2,3) - Also a bit confusing

-APXH wrote:

Well, the background certainly looks a LOT better from the previous one~

zxhzxhz wrote:

太爽了太爽了太爽了太爽了太爽了太爽了太爽了太爽了太爽了太爽了
祝早日rank

1. Consider reducing the BG's size. Over 1 MB is still a pretty big one. Try to drop it to around 300 KBs if possible.

1. For a Normal diff at this intensity, HP3, AR3 and OD2 can be too easy. Increase the HP, AR, and OD to 4, 4 and 3 respectively? This corresponds pretty well with the diff itself. Don't worry; the Normal would still be easy enough to become the lowest diff here. Also, this will create a better difficulty spread looking at Mei's diff.
2. 00:15:028 - Consider adding a whistle here to follow the instrument in the music line. It's noticeable and feels empty if left unhitsounded. Moreover, a whistle actually fits pretty well with the instrument, so it'll definitely make your map better in terms of hitsounding and fittingness with the music. (Applies to 00:17:665, 00:20:303, 00:22:940, and essentially every other spot where the music is similar.)
3. 00:19:808 (1,2,3) - Try something like this if you want? I personally feel that curves like this fits the flow you've made from 00:17:171 (1,2,3,4) and to 00:22:446 (1,2). (Basically, it feels more comfortable to play and more natural). I also believe this goes along pretty well with how you mapped the diff itself.
4. 00:41:566 (1) - Might as well make it curved like this to make a better curve to 00:42:226 (2). A straight slider feels kinda random, honestly.
5. 00:46:182 (1) - Rotate by 17 degrees clockwise and then move to (161,226) for a better flow from 00:45:852 (4)? Feels more comfortable to play.
6. 00:49:479 (2) - Move to (152,178)? Makes a better flow and looks nicer. Remember to fix the inconsistent spacing if you did this.
7. 01:33:654 - Unused inherited timing point; remove please!
8. 01:37:281 - Might want to add a whistle too to emphasize that another instrument sound in the background.
9. 01:38:270 (2,3) - 1.08x spacing!
10. 01:43:544 (2) - Rotate 15 degrees anti-clockwise then move to (91,98) for a smoother flow at 01:42:885 (1,2,3)?
11. 02:09:258 (2) - Try to make it look more symmetrical if you want? The slider would look nicer!
12. 02:46:182 (1,2) - 1.07x? Also, this part can be made to look neater, like this.

1. 00:14:533 - 00:25:083 - I'm honestly really not sure with the overall flow of this section. Some parts feel quite forced, like 00:15:028 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1), 00:17:995 (3,4,5,6,7), and 00:20:797 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1) (...can I just say almost everything here already). I'm sure it's not just me, but try to ask for more opinions. I personally would like to see this section remapped with a better focus on flow and the comfortability in moving your cursor to hit the objects here while playing.
2. 00:29:369 (6,7) - Don't you think the blanket here can be better?
3. 00:30:193 (1,2) - Swap NC? Follows the music more correctly. Also consider moving (2) to the left like this for a better flow.
4. 00:35:632 (9,1) - Again, swap NC to follow the music's rhythm?
5. 00:40:083 (1,4) - ^, then remove the NC at 00:41:237 (1)? (I'm honestly not sure of what are you following for the combos... Mind to explain for a bit? Not gonna touch the NCs later in the diff, I guess.)
6. 00:58:709 (3) - Try this for a better flow?
7. 01:19:149 (1,2,3,4) - While they fit the song, these extended sliders are just... awkward to play. It feels like you're forced to stop hitting these sliders once they end. It doesn't feel natural. Consider changing them to two 1/1 sliders instead? (Applies to similar patterns.)
8. 01:32:995 - I'm very sure the finish here is not needed since it does not correspond with any instrument here.
9. 01:39:588 (3,4) - Why is the spacing inconsistent here? Might as well make them spaced by 1.3x too.
10. 02:01:676 (6) - Try moving this to (156,16) so 02:01:182 (4,5,6) will look neater? Shouldn't make this part too hard, so don't worry. Also move 02:02:171 (7) to (44,24) if you really did this, to fix the spacing.
11. 02:25:413 (4,5,6,1) - Again, might as well make the spacing consistent; it feels jarring to see the spacing uneven.
12. 02:46:141 - What's with the timing point here?
13. 02:46:182 - 02:49:973 - Honestly, I'm really not sure with this part. It feels like a few of these notes were... placed randomly (sorry for being blunt lol). I believe you've given some thoughts on the patterns here, at least, but I think this part can still be improved, especially in terms of flow and design.
14. 02:53:105 (6) - Make it curved like this to follow the curving flow that you've made from 02:51:457 (1,2,3,4,5)?

1. 00:28:380 (3,4) - Make the shaping here consistent (either make both of them straight or curved at the same time)? I believe it looks neater and will play better that way.
2. 00:48:819 (1,2) - I know what are you following here, but the vocal on the red tick in the middle of these two sliders can be confusing. Consider making the spacing larger, at least?
3. 00:56:402 (1) - Reduce the repeat by one? It feels more natural to play 00:56:402 (1,1) if the gap is 1/4 beats, just like 00:56:072 (1,1). Basically, make the gap consistent so this pattern will be more comfortable to play?
4. 01:33:490 (4,1) - Try unstacking them? 01:33:654 (1,2) should be more comfortable to play this way.
5. 01:47:830 (1) - Same as 00:56:402 (1).
6. 02:40:248 (5,6,7,8) - I usually let patterns like this pass, but this is just too weird because of the flow. Consider making the flow here more linear by reversing (Ctrl+G) (5) and (7) (something similar to 01:07:940 (1,2,3,4))? Or just do anything that can improve the flow.
7. 02:41:154 (2,3) - Move to (300,76) so 02:40:907 (1,2,3) would be nicer to play? It also looks jarring to see (2,3) above the tail of (1) instead of in the right side of it, following (1)'s curve. (Consider doing it at 02:46:182 (1,2,3) too.)

1. Drop the AR down to 9.2? I personally feel that this diff is way more intuitive and comfortable to play with that. AR9.4 makes playing this diff a little weird. I just feel... forced to move my cursor to hit the objects. Try it.
2. 01:07:281 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I am really unsure with the jumps here. It's almost impossible to sightread, and can still be very awkward to play even if you know when to hit them due to the movement you need. Consider changing the (3,4)s to a 1/4 slider to make a slider-circle jump instead. That'll be way more intuitive. (Applies to similar streams.)
3. 01:13:544 (1) - Change this to two 1/4 sliders like 01:13:215 (1,2)? I can't see why is such a slow 3/4 slider necessary. It doesn't fit with the song and the intensity of the map itself.
4. 01:19:149 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - They can confuse players a lot, and can still feel a little confused after they know how to play these sliders (time the hitting correctly to be precise), since the length of these 3/4 sliders are exactly the same as 1/2 sliders due to the SV multiplier change. (Applies to similar patterns.)
5. 01:32:501 (2,4) - There's nothing to follow on the end of these sliders, and since the tick is invisible while playing, this can really make players feel confused (again). Might as well change them into 1/1 sliders instead. That'll also make them follow the vocal, which is better than following nothing at all.
6. 01:35:138 (2) - What about splitting this into a 1/1 slider followed by a circle 1/2 beats after the slider? This is to follow the vocal at 01:35:468. I personally feel that it's very awkward to ignore the vocal there since it's pretty noticeable. That will make this part more comfortable to play, too.
7. 01:36:292 (7,8) - I don't think there needs to be a SV multiplier change yet since the music's strength doesn't really change that much...
8. 01:36:951 - Add a timing point with 50% volume here? I know you're following the faint 1/4 notes in the music, but 80% volume is too loud. 50% would be a better choice. If you did this, add another timing point with 80% volume at 01:37:610.
9. 01:48:490 (3,4) - Uh, I'm sure a big jump like this is not necessary. The music here is still pretty weak, and this jump becomes a forced one because of that. This applies to 01:48:984 (6,7) too. 01:49:314 (8,1) should be the place where there is a big jump like these two jumps that you have right now because of the strong instrument sound.
10. 02:04:231 - What's with the whistle here? This doesn't follow the song at all and... just doesn't blend well with the song.
11. 02:15:852 - 02:23:105 - ...0.25x? What? Oh, and this part is really strange to play since you missed a lot of instruments and vocals to map. It feels like you're only randomly mapping the instruments you want to map, making this section feel really unorganized. Highly consider mapping more on this part so there will be some sort of rhythm consistency here. Also, use at least 0.5x multiplier. 0.25x is highly questionable even for such a slow part and I'm pretty sure it's unrankable to begin with.
12. 02:34:231 (2,3) - Why are these circles here? They don't follow anything in the song at all and has a very massive distance from 02:33:984 (1). Remove them please.
13. 03:02:337 (2,3) - Make a jump between these circles to keep the intensity you've made so far in the diff? It feels weird to see objects spaced this small all of a sudden.

Hinsvar wrote:

Yo; modding here!

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>General

1. Consider reducing the BG's size. Over 1 MB is still a pretty big one. Try to drop it to around 300 KBs if possible. fix

>Normal

1. For a Normal diff at this intensity, HP3, AR3 and OD2 can be too easy. Increase the HP, AR, and OD to 4, 4 and 3 respectively? This corresponds pretty well with the diff itself. Don't worry; the Normal would still be easy enough to become the lowest diff here. Also, this will create a better difficulty spread looking at Mei's diff. fix
2. 00:15:028 - Consider adding a whistle here to follow the instrument in the music line. It's noticeable and feels empty if left unhitsounded. Moreover, a whistle actually fits pretty well with the instrument, so it'll definitely make your map better in terms of hitsounding and fittingness with the music. (Applies to 00:17:665, 00:20:303, 00:22:940, and essentially every other spot where the music is similar.) fix
3. 00:19:808 (1,2,3) - Try something like this if you want? I personally feel that curves like this fits the flow you've made from 00:17:171 (1,2,3,4) and to 00:22:446 (1,2). (Basically, it feels more comfortable to play and more natural). I also believe this goes along pretty well with how you mapped the diff itself. fix
4. 00:41:566 (1) - Might as well make it curved like this to make a better curve to 00:42:226 (2). A straight slider feels kinda random, honestly. fix
5. 00:46:182 (1) - Rotate by 17 degrees clockwise and then move to (161,226) for a better flow from 00:45:852 (4)? Feels more comfortable to play. fix
6. 00:49:479 (2) - Move to (152,178)? Makes a better flow and looks nicer. Remember to fix the inconsistent spacing if you did this. fix
7. 01:33:654 - Unused inherited timing point; remove please! fix
8. 01:37:281 - Might want to add a whistle too to emphasize that another instrument sound in the background. no
9. 01:38:270 (2,3) - 1.08x spacing! fix
10. 01:43:544 (2) - Rotate 15 degrees anti-clockwise then move to (91,98) for a smoother flow at 01:42:885 (1,2,3)? fix
11. 02:09:258 (2) - Try to make it look more symmetrical if you want? The slider would look nicer! maybe fixed
12. 02:46:182 (1,2) - 1.07x? Also, this part can be made to look neater, like this. fix

>Insane

1. 00:28:380 (3,4) - Make the shaping here consistent (either make both of them straight or curved at the same time)? I believe it looks neater and will play better that way. no, 00:27:720 (1,2,3) is a part, 00:28:709 (4,1) is a part, not 00:28:380 (3,4) is a part(?
2. 00:48:819 (1,2) - I know what are you following here, but the vocal on the red tick in the middle of these two sliders can be confusing. Consider making the spacing larger, at least? no, i did it on purpose
3. 00:56:402 (1) - Reduce the repeat by one? It feels more natural to play 00:56:402 (1,1) if the gap is 1/4 beats, just like 00:56:072 (1,1). Basically, make the gap consistent so this pattern will be more comfortable to play? fix
4. 01:33:490 (4,1) - Try unstacking them? 01:33:654 (1,2) should be more comfortable to play this way. no
5. 01:47:830 (1) - Same as 00:56:402 (1). fix
6. 02:40:248 (5,6,7,8) - I usually let patterns like this pass, but this is just too weird because of the flow. Consider making the flow here more linear by reversing (Ctrl+G) (5) and (7) (something similar to 01:07:940 (1,2,3,4))? Or just do anything that can improve the flow. fix
7. 02:41:154 (2,3) - Move to (300,76) so 02:40:907 (1,2,3) would be nicer to play? It also looks jarring to see (2,3) above the tail of (1) instead of in the right side of it, following (1)'s curve. (Consider doing it at 02:46:182 (1,2,3) too.) no, i prefer mine

Well that's it!

This mapset is overall pretty good, but there are a few major issues that have to be fixed. Still a good job though!

Good luck on the way

Hinsvar wrote:

>AwakextrA

1. Drop the AR down to 9.2? I personally feel that this diff is way more intuitive and comfortable to play with that. AR9.4 makes playing this diff a little weird. I just feel... forced to move my cursor to hit the objects. Try it. ok chanegd
2. 01:07:281 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I am really unsure with the jumps here. It's almost impossible to sightread, and can still be very awkward to play even if you know when to hit them due to the movement you need. Consider changing the (3,4)s to a 1/4 slider to make a slider-circle jump instead. That'll be way more intuitive. (Applies to similar streams.) I've already found some players to try this, and they can almost pass it
3. 01:13:544 (1) - Change this to two 1/4 sliders like 01:13:215 (1,2)? I can't see why is such a slow 3/4 slider necessary. It doesn't fit with the song and the intensity of the map itself. changed
4. 01:19:149 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - They can confuse players a lot, and can still feel a little confused after they know how to play these sliders (time the hitting correctly to be precise), since the length of these 3/4 sliders are exactly the same as 1/2 sliders due to the SV multiplier change. (Applies to similar patterns.) changed to 1/2 sliders
5. 01:32:501 (2,4) - There's nothing to follow on the end of these sliders, and since the tick is invisible while playing, this can really make players feel confused (again). Might as well change them into 1/1 sliders instead. That'll also make them follow the vocal, which is better than following nothing at all. changed with another way, maybe looks better
6. 01:35:138 (2) - What about splitting this into a 1/1 slider followed by a circle 1/2 beats after the slider? This is to follow the vocal at 01:35:468. I personally feel that it's very awkward to ignore the vocal there since it's pretty noticeable. That will make this part more comfortable to play, too. ok changed
7. 01:36:292 (7,8) - I don't think there needs to be a SV multiplier change yet since the music's strength doesn't really change that much... changed
8. 01:36:951 - Add a timing point with 50% volume here? I know you're following the faint 1/4 notes in the music, but 80% volume is too loud. 50% would be a better choice. If you did this, add another timing point with 80% volume at 01:37:610. changed to 60%
9. 01:48:490 (3,4) - Uh, I'm sure a big jump like this is not necessary. The music here is still pretty weak, and this jump becomes a forced one because of that. This applies to 01:48:984 (6,7) too. 01:49:314 (8,1) should be the place where there is a big jump like these two jumps that you have right now because of the strong instrument sound. changed
10. 02:04:231 - What's with the whistle here? This doesn't follow the song at all and... just doesn't blend well with the song. removed
11. 02:15:852 - 02:23:105 - ...0.25x? What? Oh, and this part is really strange to play since you missed a lot of instruments and vocals to map. It feels like you're only randomly mapping the instruments you want to map, making this section feel really unorganized. Highly consider mapping more on this part so there will be some sort of rhythm consistency here. Also, use at least 0.5x multiplier. 0.25x is highly questionable even for such a slow part and I'm pretty sure it's unrankable to begin with. changed to 0.5x
12. 02:34:231 (2,3) - Why are these circles here? They don't follow anything in the song at all and has a very massive distance from 02:33:984 (1). Remove them please. deleted
13. 03:02:337 (2,3) - Make a jump between these circles to keep the intensity you've made so far in the diff? It feels weird to see objects spaced this small all of a sudden.

changed

Well that's it!

This mapset is overall pretty good, but there are a few major issues that have to be fixed. Still a good job though!

Good luck on the way

Hinsvar wrote:

Yo; modding here!

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.


>Mei's Hard

1. 00:14:533 - 00:25:083 - I'm honestly really not sure with the overall flow of this section. Some parts feel quite forced, like 00:15:028 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1), 00:17:995 (3,4,5,6,7), and 00:20:797 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1) (...can I just say almost everything here already). I'm sure it's not just me, but try to ask for more opinions. I personally would like to see this section remapped with a better focus on flow and the comfortability in moving your cursor to hit the objects here while playing.
2. 00:29:369 (6,7) - Don't you think the blanket here can be better?
3. 00:30:193 (1,2) - Swap NC? Follows the music more correctly. Also consider moving (2) to the left like this for a better flow.
4. 00:35:632 (9,1) - Again, swap NC to follow the music's rhythm?
5. 00:40:083 (1,4) - ^, then remove the NC at 00:41:237 (1)? (I'm honestly not sure of what are you following for the combos... Mind to explain for a bit? Not gonna touch the NCs later in the diff, I guess.)
6. 00:58:709 (3) - Try this for a better flow?
7. 01:19:149 (1,2,3,4) - While they fit the song, these extended sliders are just... awkward to play. It feels like you're forced to stop hitting these sliders once they end. It doesn't feel natural. Consider changing them to two 1/1 sliders instead? (Applies to similar patterns.)imo these sliders really catch the vocals and plays very well as well. as a hard this trick is totally acceptable. so in order to make this map interesting i choose to keep these sliders yea
8. 01:32:995 - I'm very sure the finish here is not needed since it does not correspond with any instrument here.
9. 01:39:588 (3,4) - Why is the spacing inconsistent here? Might as well make them spaced by 1.3x too.
10. 02:01:676 (6) - Try moving this to (156,16) so 02:01:182 (4,5,6) will look neater? Shouldn't make this part too hard, so don't worry. Also move 02:02:171 (7) to (44,24) if you really did this, to fix the spacing.
11. 02:25:413 (4,5,6,1) - Again, might as well make the spacing consistent; it feels jarring to see the spacing uneven.
12. 02:46:141 - What's with the timing point here?
13. 02:46:182 - 02:49:973 - Honestly, I'm really not sure with this part. It feels like a few of these notes were... placed randomly (sorry for being blunt lol). I believe you've given some thoughts on the patterns here, at least, but I think this part can still be improved, especially in terms of flow and design.
14. 02:53:105 (6) - Make it curved like this to follow the curving flow that you've made from 02:51:457 (1,2,3,4,5)?

Zare wrote:

don't change the streamjumps what the fuck ok i feel that this was partially aimed at me too

1. 00:51:457 (1,2) - Make them into something like this for a better flow and so they'll look nicer?
2. 02:25:083 (3) - Move this to (427,171) or something like that? Same reason as the suggestion above. (Oh, and remember to fix the spacing ofc.)
3. 02:46:841 (2) - Move to (508,240)? This is related to the suggestion I made on my previous mod post at 02:46:182 (1,2).

1. 00:16:676 (8,1) - Is this spacing inconsistency intentional? Not noticeable, but I thought it'd be better to mention.
2. 00:20:797 (4) - Might as well make this curved to keep the curving flow from 00:19:808 (1).
3. 01:18:490 (3,4,1) - Any reason why is the spacing here inconsistent? I think it's better to make them spaced the same.
4. 02:37:940 (8) - Ctrl+J for a better flow?
5. 02:41:402 (2,3) - Try something like this for, again, a better flow?

1. 01:19:149 - Use the default hitnormal for this timing point? It feels weird to listen to the custom hitnormal here because there actually aren't anything that sound like the custom hitsound in this section (sorry for not mentioning this in my previous mod lol). You can keep the current custom hitsounds, just not the hitnormal, and only for this section. (Applies to similar parts.)
2. 01:29:286 - Try to add a note here to make a triplet? The transition at 01:29:039 (5,6) feels unnatural, and adding a note here somehow helps fixing it. It also seems to fit with the instruments nicely so yeah.
3. 01:32:501 (2,4) - I still recommend to shorten the slider to a 1/1 one so it'll follow the song more accurately. It honestly feels random to end this on a tick with no existing sounds.
4. 01:34:314 (5,6) - Nope, they're supposed to be snapped to 1/4 ticks, not 1/3s. The wrong snapping is very noticeable and can make players feel very awkward while playing due to the unfittingness.
5. 02:23:764 - 02:28:957 - Are you really sure the 3/4 sliders here won't be confusing, especially with how you space them?
6. 02:33:984 (1) - Make the slider's tail closer to the head? The speed-up here fits the song, but the way you shape this slider combined with the speed-up can greatly confuse players since they don't know they have to move very fast from the head to the tail.
7. 03:11:566 (2,3) - I'm pretty sure the tails of these sliders don't match the song's pace at all. Try combining them into a 1/2 slider instead; feels more natural and goes along better with the song.

Hinsvar wrote:

Zare wrote:

don't change the streamjumps what the fuck ok i feel that this was partially aimed at me too

Rechecking soon; probably in 1-2 hours.

Make that in 24 hours; got too many things to take care of all of a sudden.

About the tags, remove "vocaloid" since it's redundant? There is already "vocaloid2", so these two words are... conflicting, I guess? Also, uncheck the widescreen support and letterbox options in the song setup for all diffs (I think you should already know why)! fix

>Normal

1. 00:51:457 (1,2) - Make them into something like this for a better flow and so they'll look nicer? fix
2. 02:25:083 (3) - Move this to (427,171) or something like that? Same reason as the suggestion above. (Oh, and remember to fix the spacing ofc.) fix
3. 02:46:841 (2) - Move to (508,240)? This is related to the suggestion I made on my previous mod post at 02:46:182 (1,2). fix

Yeah.

Hinsvar wrote:

>Extrawaken

1. 01:19:149 - Use the default hitnormal for this timing point? It feels weird to listen to the custom hitnormal here because there actually aren't anything that sound like the custom hitsound in this section (sorry for not mentioning this in my previous mod lol). You can keep the current custom hitsounds, just not the hitnormal, and only for this section. (Applies to similar parts.) ok but I use N:C1, maybe that would sound better
2. 01:29:286 - Try to add a note here to make a triplet? The transition at 01:29:039 (5,6) feels unnatural, and adding a note here somehow helps fixing it. It also seems to fit with the instruments nicely so yeah. changed the rhythm here
3. 01:32:501 (2,4) - I still recommend to shorten the slider to a 1/1 one so it'll follow the song more accurately. It honestly feels random to end this on a tick with no existing sounds. ok 1/1s are good
4. 01:34:314 (5,6) - Nope, they're supposed to be snapped to 1/4 ticks, not 1/3s. The wrong snapping is very noticeable and can make players feel very awkward while playing due to the unfittingness. changed
5. 02:23:764 - 02:28:957 - Are you really sure the 3/4 sliders here won't be confusing, especially with how you space them? yes I think music here need the pulling feel
6. 02:33:984 (1) - Make the slider's tail closer to the head? The speed-up here fits the song, but the way you shape this slider combined with the speed-up can greatly confuse players since they don't know they have to move very fast from the head to the tail. changed a pattern, hope it would help a little...
7. 03:11:566 (2,3) - I'm pretty sure the tails of these sliders don't match the song's pace at all. Try combining them into a 1/2 slider instead; feels more natural and goes along better with the song. changed with another way

Hinsvar wrote:

>Mei's Hard

1. 00:16:676 (8,1) - Is this spacing inconsistency intentional? Not noticeable, but I thought it'd be better to mention.
2. 00:20:797 (4) - Might as well make this curved to keep the curving flow from 00:19:808 (1).umm not changed since i think this is already good flowed and if i changeed this part will not be as neat as before tho
3. 01:18:490 (3,4,1) - Any reason why is the spacing here inconsistent? I think it's better to make them spaced the same.
4. 02:37:940 (8) - Ctrl+J for a better flow?
5. 02:41:402 (2,3) - Try something like this for, again, a better flow?

Yeah.

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Hinsvar wrote:

Yup, this should be sufficient.

Xinely wrote:

Hinsvar has been leave his virginity /runs

edit : oh 2200th posts!