居然挖出来了!
Legenda wrote:
→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
Alarido wrote:
Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND VILegenda wrote:
→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods* No complaints on General Things
[Scream]
* In general, SV (slider velocity) feels running a bit faster than it could be imo, but I seen BMP is a bit high, then it's OK since you provide an easier diff (it's up to you unless BATs rage on this)
00:12:263 (2,1,2) - This part is a bit confusing for newbies, since they can be tempted to land the cursor on 00:13:173 (2) instead on 00:12:991 (1) -- especially with Hidden mod -- because of the more natural gesture they more like will do. To fix this, I suggest: * first select 00:12:991 (1,2) and make Ctrl+G, then select only the slider and make Ctrl+G on it. Picture result will look >> http://puu.sh/3O7vn.jpg
00:42:082 (1,2,3) - Could you avoid the overlaps here? Probably, NO. But you can make a more newbie-friendly overlaps like these >> http://puu.sh/3O7JY.jpg
00:46:445 (3) - this overlapped head will be fully invisible with Hidden mod. Could be a bit better by making 00:46:445 (3,4) like >> http://puu.sh/3O7R5.jpg
01:48:627 (1,2,3,4) - They fits well to the song and flows well too, but remember that sliders with 2 our more repeats are a bit confusing for beginners, since they may expect one repeat and, if they might not see the other arrow, mighty they'll release the mouse/kbd key and lose combos ><
[Stream]
01:01:536 (2) - This slider can be a bit hard to see because of it under the previous stream.
♥ In general, I loved see the series of streams. I could call them "Bolshoy Streams" since they reminds me the acrobacies made by the Bolshoy's Ballet Crew (yeah, they are too PRO on what they do ^^ ♥)
That's it ^^
I SO loved the song ^^ Take a Star !!! And [Stream] diff is too high quality ♥ !!! Just take + a few mods and then call a BAT !
Att.
All fixed, thank you, Joon~Joon wrote:
hi
Hit sound modding
This map has now thinks that there is not enough Hit Sound.
Also u will need to use is the basic finish sound.
do not lead to my modding. This alone should solve a problem.
[Normal] some advice
00:21:718 (1) - 2st notes add whistle
00:23:173 (3) - ^
00:25:355 (2) - start notes add whistle
00:27:536 (1) - start notes change finish
00:28:264 (2) - 3st notes chang whistle
00:30:445 (1) - start notes change whistle
00:31:900 (3) - 1st notes change finish
good luck
Thank you soooooooooo much, Asuna~-[ Asuna ]- wrote:
Hi~
From my Queue[General]
Your mp3 is 320kbps ,for rankable mp3 must 192kbps or below No 192+ it's unrankable
add " 弦奏即興曲 " to tags since it's the album :3
fixed
and i think you need Easy (1 or 1.5 star) see Ranking_Ctiteria[Normal]
00:40:627 (3,1) - overlapped,how about stacking with the tail fixed
00:44:991 (1,3) - ^ nope, it will be more difficult to keep the distance
00:54:809 (2,3) - repaire this distance no enough space
01:21:354 (3,1) - ^ try to stack like it will overlap the reversearrow
01:54:445 (5) - ctrl+g and blanketing? not follow the distance[Hard]
Check Aimod plz
00:16:809 (3) - blanket can be improved fixed
00:19:900 (4) - blanket and stack like fixed
00:29:718 (2,3) - change (2) to 1/2 slider and (3) too for better imo the rhythm need to change
00:34:173 (4,5,6,7) -
00:36:264 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - etc, make more easier ato reduce distance of 00:37:173 (7,8) -
it is HARD diff, I think these jump is not too difficult for this level
01:10:627 (1) - remove NC
01:10:809 (7) - NC here
01:12:172 (1) - Remove Nc
01:12:264 (9) - NC here
01:16:990 (4) - NC
01:22:536 (5) - NC here
All fixed[/color]
add spinner ? from 01:54:991 - to 01:56:263 - and add unherited point ,reduce volume to 20% nope[Insane]
Check AiMod plz
00:05:718 (5) - move to right 1 grid for PF blanket :3 fixed
00:09:900 (3) - stack with slider fixed
00:21:355 (7) - 1/2 slider to fit the music add a note at 00:21:536
00:21:718 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - stack properly ? nope
00:22:809 (1) - remove NC
00:23:173 (10) - NC here and try to all part.. like 00:24:445 (1,2,3) - and 00:27:355 (1,2,3) -
I think nc is OK here
00:24:173 (6) - remove this note plz give one moment to consider it
00:31:355 (6,3) - stack properly ? and 00:32:809 (4) - move to (88,168) for 1.2x DS
00:50:082 (5) - blanket can be improved
00:52:991 (2) - stack with slider ?
00:59:173 (1) - blanket can be improved
not change
01:54:991 - same as hard , add spinner ?nope
okay i'm still nub at modding Std but
still hope this helped
please reply my mod , make my mod be better futher
Good luck with your map~ Sorry for double post >w<)c
非常感谢呀~~~Rush_FTK wrote:
来拜见大触作图了=w=
新手试玩感受:
[General]
- 无关紧要的问题:第一个Kiai时间可以从00:01:065开始吗?刚开图啥都没有就冒星星有点233(在00:00:000插一个时间点。)
没问题
[Normal]
-00:21:065 这个滑条容易在第一次游戏时读图出现误解。(也许我反应力不够XD) 我觉得还好啊,尾端重叠应该不太影响的
-00:22:883 这个点击可以距离临近的两个滑条近一点?这个是标准距离呀
-01:30:156 这里有个重音,可以考虑加一个Circle。我会考虑,但是要重现排版了,我觉得改动的意义不大
-01:36:156 同上。^
===
-00:54:883 玩着有点不舒服
-01:41:428 有点措手不及(
[Hard]
-精彩绝伦。谢谢
[Insame]
-01:03:883/01:05:337 可以加一个Circle
===
-00:02:883 不喜欢遮挡住上一个的梗……
-00:21:065 眼睛花了,看不清几个连打 ><(4连打还是勉强能看清的)
我觉得目前还都挺好的,于是就没有改
很不错的歌曲~很不错的betamap~我就收下学习了!
谢谢~~Number5 wrote:
From Queue~
[Normal]
01:31:247 (1,2,3,4) - 有点难了...
[Hard]
打起来像Insane...
00:07:247 (6) - 有点难读
00:09:610 (1) - 最好可以放远点
00:35:247 (2,3,4) - 卡手
[Insane]
没有发现有问题……就是难度名改Extra比较好……
Thank you, xxdeathx~xxdeathx wrote:
lol i realized you're the same guy who mapped Sis Puella Magica!
:3
[Normal][Hard]
- lower your slider speed, 1.40 is hard-level it's OK
- 01:48:246 (5,6,1,2,3) - end sliders on white ticks to fit music no problem, fixed
[Insane]
- WHOA THERE CALM DOWN WITH ALL THE 1/4 SLIDERS IN HARD, I CAN'T EVEN READ THEM THAT FAST
- 00:33:610 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - alright the first batch: (1, 2, 3) is barely acceptable but putting a circle in front of (4,5,6) makes it harder than it already is fixed, change (4,5,6,7) to 4 sliders
- 00:36:338 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - also the way you overlap circles on the slider heads but not completely stack them. you should completely stack them so it's more clean and easier to read because the way you're doing it now it's hard to tell if there is 1 or 2 circles. the distance between the note and slider is closed enough
- 00:43:701 (1,2,3) - this kind of spacing with 1/4 sliders should be for insane I know, but you can see the [Insane] is more difficult than [Hard]
- 00:57:065 (6,7) - the music is a lot bouncier here so you can map it more interesting I will consider it
- 01:22:610 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - space these out further apart so you can see them more clearly it's OK
- 01:27:792 (1,2,3,4) - space these apart too, i thought it was a 1/4 stream at first it's OK
- 01:48:246 (5,6,1,2,3) - again, stack the circles exactly on the slider head so it's easier to read because it's too hard to tell that the first slider has one circle and the second slider has two on top of it I will consider to change the rhythm
good luck!
- 00:25:429 (5,6,7,8) - i'd use repeating slider for 1/6 beats because it's hard for players to read the rhythm like this
- 00:29:429 (2,3,4,5) - ^ also the spacing is different
- 00:44:337 (1,2,3) - ^
it is the hardest diff of this beatmap, so they are reasonable- 01:48:610 (14,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - separating every set of 4 notes gives the impression that there's a 1/2 beat between them I will consider it
390,93,105792,6,0,B|458:119|479:205|428:265,1,200,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Thank you, Niva~Niva wrote:
Modding Insane diff by request (:
[General]
-> The metronome's reset actually occurs first on 00:59:247 (1), not on 01:02:156 (1)... So, yep, add a timing section (4/4) on 00:59:247, but would be best if the timing section on 01:02:156 is kept as well to let the metronome sound correctly on Nightcore mode xD
[Insane]
-> Not sure whether the 0% volume on 00:08:701 is allowed (the map still automatically produces a sound here though) - if you really need a quiet sound you can try using a quiet (but not silent) sound sample there though (:Well, yep... That's it... Feels weird doing this again after months of modding inactivity o.o
- 00:01:429 (2) - Use Sampleset : Normal // Addition : Soft here to emphasize the song's big drum? fixed
- 00:07:247 (3) - The song actually continues here, so perhaps add another circle (with finish, probably) here and move the spinner 1/4 backwards? fixed
- 00:21:065 (3,4,5,6,7) - I'd recommend a gradual volume increase here (starting from ~15% perhaps) to accompany the transition between sections here (: starting from 30%, and add 5% every note
- 00:22:883 (1,2,3,4) - The music actually goes 1/3 here instead of 1/4 - if you decided to alter this I highly recommend the usage of a slider though (as 1/3 circles are counter-intuitive here), not sure about the pattern here personally but this might work : 1/3 notes
- 00:29:065 (1) - Consider CTRL+G here for a circular movement fixed
- 00:44:337 (1,2,3) - The song goes quite strong here - increase the volume on these three perhaps? fixed
- 00:45:065 (4,5,6) - Personally I think a slider jump would do cool here (and comfortable to play as well) xD fixed
- 00:46:519 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - As I said in-game earlier, currently you're using a circle-slider-circle-slider-slider-slider-slider combination, while to follow the instrument perfectly the order should be slider-circle-slider-circle-slider-slider-slider (should be very easy to alter in your current stack pattern, though :3) fixed
- 00:50:156 (5) - CTRL+G? Would do good here imo because you've done the same thing previously on 00:48:883 (5) fixed
- 00:50:792 (9) - Consider altering this into a 1/8 slider here (as the piano goes by it? nope, 3 1/4 notes and a 1/8 slider is a little hard to set
- 00:55:610 (3) - Convert this into a 1/2 slider? Umm... I can't deny that the 1/1 silence here feels awkward and a note within it would play good there (there's a piano sound there as well!) - about the patterning, perhaps this would do : fixed
- 00:59:974 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Again, a section where a gradual volume section would do beautifully here (if not overdone~) fixed
- 01:05:792 (1,2) - A minor suggestion here - add a slight curve (leftward for (1), rightward for (2)) for aesthetics? fixed
- 01:06:701 (5) - New combo this? Well, I know it seems weird placing a new combo on such place but (5,6,7,8) seems VERY similar to (1,2,3,4) although they are not (one is 1/4, one is 1/6) - yep, I didn't miss here when you spectated me because I already know the song beforehand, but this would be the ultimate trap to the people who are unwary of the song ._. fixed
- 01:10:610 (6) - Tested this myself, this shape plays fabulously with your (1,2,3,4,...) rather your current shape which is quite rigid : fixed
- 01:18:338 (5) - Same as 01:06:701 fixed
- 01:24:429 (1) - Again about the 0% volume section here :3 fixed
- 01:28:338 (4) - Is the whistle on the slider's repeat here intentional? It breaks your hitsound consistency ._. fixed
- 01:39:610 (11,12) - Suggestion here, alter these into a 1/2 slider? Considering your next (1) is the beginning of the 2nd kiai part, this jump will greatly emphasize the feeling of that part : nope, the slider is a litter ugly
- 01:45:792 (1) - Just a minor tweak here (or you can just copy-paste (5) and alter it, though - your (5) is noticeably more perfect rather than your (1))
390,93,105792,6,0,B|458:119|479:205|428:265,1,200,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:- 01:48:701 (1) - No whistle here? I can hear a bell sound coming from the song :3
I can only say that I'm hoping that this mod post is helpful though~
Good luck cmn_891127!
I also do some changes for AestheticsAleks719 wrote:
Insane
01:08:338 (6) - end of slider should be on white tick, idk why it's on blue. bug maybe ture, it's a bug, and I also fixed the other same sliders
01:06:247 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 1/4 and 1/6 looks same and goes in a row, are you sure it's pretty readable?
01:17:884 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
abouth these two 1/6 streams, it's OK for me, since I have already added NC here.
It is very clear to notice there are 4 notes, so it would be easy to be considered to 1/6 streams.
HP8 and so many streams, poor players x) HP7 now
Normal
Stats are too high. OD and HP 4 please, AR 5.
fixed
that's it.
where did that qualified maps same song rule come from? it also happened with my skyreach map.Aleks719 wrote:
(/ovo)/
sorry, i'm so douchebag, even didn't check qualified maps, cuz thought it's impossible to get same map there.
will come later to rank orz
because of anime op/ed speedrankers.xxdeathx wrote:
where did that qualified maps same song rule come from? it also happened with my skyreach map.Aleks719 wrote:
(/ovo)/
sorry, i'm so douchebag, even didn't check qualified maps, cuz thought it's impossible to get same map there.
will come later to rank orz
I am sorry to say that I did not increase the Normal diff to 1.89.Zare wrote:
I'm sure this difficulty spread is completely fine and doesnt have any gaps :^)
yes, sarcasm
just judging from star rating, haven't looked at the diffs
You too~ Have a nice play!apaffy wrote:
Congratulations cmn~!
It's still before the 7 day threshold. Bug someone.fartownik wrote:
01:51:156 (4,4,4,4,4,4,4,4) - Has no one noticed how broken these hitsounds are? Really, NO ONE? Adding the silly spaced streams and there you go, plays horribly.
Also the fact that the 1/6s are almost identically spaced as the 1/4s makes them really hard to read.
I am really sorry about that...Autumn wrote:
RIP My first #1
KSHR wrote:
Unrank due to the mixed artist and some concerns. (mainly by captin1, p3n, Shiro, Garven and me)
Metadata
- Artist unicode: MiddleIsland
- Romanized Artist: MiddleIsland
中島岬 (Nakajima Misaki) is a composer, but not a circle name. Here is a source.
http://puu.sh/b5tF8/50695db60e.png / http://www.middleisland.net/index.htm
Also move the current artist unicode "中島岬" and its romanized one "Nakajima Misaki" into Tags.
The rule about the translated title has not been stated into the RankingCriteria, so that can't be a reason to unrank. However at least its romanized words "kyousoukyoku dai ichiban himei" should be added into Tags as well.
fixed
Hard
- 00:44:338 (4) - This slider is snapped completely wrong.
fixed
Insane
- 01:06:247 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This change from 1/4 to 1/6 is not visible. not changed
- 01:08:338 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ^ not changed
- 01:17:672 (2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ not changed
- 01:50:883 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why is a clap added to each (4)?
fixed- 01:53:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This very spaced 1/3 will catch players off-guard. not changed