hi there!
mod from my queue.sorry, a bit late. ><
[Easy]
and good luck. *squee* ^__^/
mod from my queue.
[Easy]
- 00:04:963 - add a note here? imo it's too hard to read, cause of the white/red tick change
I know there is no sound, but just from the distance from 00:03:308 (1,2) - beginner players will assume it's the same rhythm here - 00:11:998 (2,3,1) - overlap of 2 and 1 doesn't look nice, place 2 differently?
- 00:16:549 (4,1) - red/white tick change again, might be confusing
since there is a beat at 00:17:377 - you might want to add a note there - 00:21:308 (2,3) - blanket could be better here
- 00:22:135 (3,4) - basically same as 00:16:549 (4,1) -
- 00:26:480 (4) - move to 284|252 for triangle pattern? :3
-triangle pattern hug- so beautiful QwQ - 00:28:549 (3) - move middle anchor a bit further from 00:29:791 (4) - for better blanket
- 00:31:032 (1,2) - movement here isn't great, place 2 differently maybe?
- 00:36:825 (1,2,3) - blankets could be better ><
- 00:52:963 (3,4,1) - change up so 3 and 1 don't overlap?
- 00:58:342 (5,6,7) - try to shape/place them a little more accurate? maybe it was intentional, Idk. xD
- 00:26:894 (1,2,3) - blanket could be a tiny bit better, just move last anchors a grid closer to 3
- 00:39:308 (2,3) - ^, but middle anchor further away
- 00:44:273 (2) - I'd prefer a flipped version of 00:43:446 (1) - here
- 00:53:998 (2) - stack below 00:51:722 (1) - maybe and adjust 00:53:377 (1,3) - to it?
why? .. just personal preferance. >3 - 01:10:963 (3) - rotate by ~35° (sel centre)? improves the movement to 01:11:791 (1) -
- 00:06:618- I don't really get why youchange SV to 1.5 here. o.o
I see the change fitting for 00:16:963 (1) - .. but why 00:06:618 (1) - ? - 00:18:825 (4,7) - stack correctly?
- 00:39:308 (5,2) - ^
- 00:59:584 (4) - use the same shape as for the others? that'd look better imo
- same about SV changes here as in Hard
- 00:03:722 (1) - could blanket 00:02:480 (1) - better
- 00:20:273 (1,2) - use more similar shape for them? 2 looks ugly to me (sorry ><)
- 00:31:446 (5,1) - stack correctly
- 00:49:860 (5,1) - the blanket.. >:
- 01:25:446 (2,4) - they don't overlap, but just barely, increase distance between them a bit?
and good luck. *squee* ^__^/