Mod asked by PM because i owe you one for a loooooooooooong time ago.
[General]
I don't know if it's important or not but i still have to point it out:
[Easy]
Rhythm
Rhythm
Rhythm
P.S. I also forget to say that i found that the diff gap between the easy and normal is way too low imo. But i guess that's too late to fix that....
[General]
I don't know if it's important or not but i still have to point it out:
[Easy]
Rhythm
- 02:09:146 - I think this beat is strong enough to be worth played. So, put a note here and strat the spinner at 02:09:560. It may seems short but autoplay still get 3000. Besdies you already have another long spinner so it's not that important if this one is short.
- 00:33:146 (1,2) - Flow here is meh comapred to the rest of your diff. Maybe use a wave shape instead:
- 00:38:112 (4) - Move the 2nd slider point to x=460 y=88 for better blanket. A lot of blanket are far from being perfect here but i only point out this one because this is the one that i noticed while playing.
- 00:46:388 (1) - This NC has no purpose whatsoever. Remove it? You don't even use a NC on the hard diff here. I know here you use a NC every 4 beats but usually combos with only one note is used to emphasized the note. For example you didn't put a NC at 01:32:732 (5).
- 01:02:939 (1) - ^
Rhythm
- 00:34:801 (3) - Why using a 1/2 slider with a reverse here? I'm not sure if you follow the vocals and the music but if you follow the vocals then there is nothing at 00:35:008 and if you follow the song, well, it's the same as 00:33:146 (1,2) where you used 1/1 slider so i would suggest to use a 1/1 slider here instead that you can place like this:
- 01:54:870 - Add a note? If i understood correctly what you are following here then you should add note here.
- 02:09:146 - Same as in the easy.
- 01:40:595 (3,4) - Why using a stack here? This is the only stack you use in your map. It makes the player stop here for 1 beat which doesn't fit with the erst of your map where the player moves at a constant speed. I don't mind stacks but seeing only one stack at the middle of a map feels weird while playing. ESpecially since it doesn't emphasize any strong beat whatsoever.
- 01:43:905 (2,3) - Move 2 to x=292 y=20 then move the first slider point of 3 one grid left. It makes the blanket of 2 way better.
- 01:47:629 (3) - Like in the easy there are a lot of blanket far from being perfect here but only two really disturb me while playing. The previous one and this one, that's why it's the only two i'll point out. So, move the 2nd slider point 2-3 grid up.
- 00:49:698 (1) - Finish on the head? Since we clearly here a cymbal in the song.
- 01:06:250 (1) - ^
- 01:12:870 (1) - ^ and 01:19:491 (1) and 01:26:112 (1) and 01:39:353 (1) etc.....
Rhythm
- 00:32:112 - There is clearly a note here. A little quieter than the other so maybe you can simply change 00:31:905 (2) into a 1/2 beat slider but there is no reason you should ignore it.
- 00:28:388 (5,6) - I remember someone who told me:
Well, your diff is oobviously different but when i saw this jump i remembered this. Because that's what you reproached me. Having huge jumps somewhere that doesn't fits with the song. And this is the same here. You have a constant DS of x1.1, this is a quiet part, there is no strong beat and BIM, 2.1x jump. That's not ok. - 01:06:663 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern seems really out of place. I mean, i don't have any problem whatsoever with it but this is not the kind of pattern that i expect to see in your map. You have a certain mapping style very easy to read but i expect to see this kind of pattern used by mappers that like playing with the difficulty to read their map (this pattern is even harder to read in ar8). I'm not sure if i'm clear enough but basically there is no problem with this pattern but i think it feels out of place in your map.
- 01:44:319 (5,6,7,8) - Since you blanketted 6 with 5 why not blanketting 7 with 6? But i think you can get a nicer pattern by changing a few things.
This is the same pattern as yours but 01:44:732 (6) is a copy of 01:44:319 (5) rotated by 30° and 01:45:146 (7) is a copy of 01:44:732 (6) rotated by 30°. The repetition of the same slider emphasize the repetition in the music (kinda like you did at 01:50:939 (5,6,7))
P.S. I also forget to say that i found that the diff gap between the easy and normal is way too low imo. But i guess that's too late to fix that....