MMzz wrote:

[Insane]
00:33:355 (6,1) - Make the combo start on 6 instead. Follows the beat and vocal more directlyfixed
00:54:471 (4) - This short slider doesn't feel necessary. The whole map is very easy and has mostly basic patterns and jumps. This weird offbeat slider pattern doesn't fit with the difficulty or tone of the map and will throw a lot of players off guard while playing. You can just make a single note at 00:54:471 for a more direct feel towards the vocal. http://puu.sh/a5kGK/12dfce239d.jpg An example.fixed
01:00:355 (1) - You can remove this combo. There isn't anything in the song that signals the use of a short combo.fixed
01:34:509 (7) - This can be a new combo. Fits well with the song's current beat and your note placement.fixed

[Hard]
01:35:201 (3) - You can add a new combo here too, just like the Insane diff. They use the same beat placement, so it makes sense.
fixed
[Normal]
01:35:201 (4) - Same new combo suggestion.fixed

Pretty good mapset. Call me back once you've applied the mod.

MMzz wrote:

Bubbled!

LunarSakuya wrote:

hi~

General
- There is a video file in your folder but I think you forgot to put it in your difficulties xD (Likewise, if you're not using it, delete it)i met this problem several times ...now gonna fixing it again ;_;


Normal
00:42:586 (4,5,1) - Consider this rhythm instead:

SPOILER

The repeat slider fit the quickening pace of the percussion more imo and then the single note emphasizes the "i" ~!ok
01:12:586 (3) - Clapfixed
01:16:740 (5) - perhaps make a repeat slider like this to avoid leaving the 1/2 slider kinda hanging? might make a less awkward gap with the next noterepeat slider also sounds awkward for me so i change this to a long slider

SPOILER

01:26:894 (4,1) - something feels like it really needs to be here imo lol. Spinner may be a bit risky but maybe some long sliders...ok put a long slider there

Hard
00:16:740 (5) - NC? On that note, I suggest to double check your NC patterns since I've noticed similar inconsistencies. for example, you could go the classic every 4 white ticks, stanza, etc. (unique parts like 01:34:509 (1,2) - are fine ofc lol) Just a precautioni redo all NCs
00:23:548 - Add note to catch the vocals too maybeok
00:40:971 (1) - not a big deal but you could blanket this better over the pink (2)fixed
00:51:817 (5) - NC would be fitting imodone

Insane
00:01:971 (1,2) - consider pulling these out a little & unstacking from (5)'s tail. This could lessen rhythm/spacing confusion between (5,1) & (1,2) imo
00:03:817 (1,2) - ^
00:05:663 (1,2) - ^ok fixed these
00:50:432 (5) - try Ctrl + G, creates a nice pinwheel flow from the previous noteok
and again just in case, I'd quickly go over the NCs =v=woked on these..and done!!

Lovely map~! pls call anytime lol

LunarSakuya wrote:

doki doki~~

rinsukir wrote:

受喜神大人

CakiP wrote:

gratz!!!

Yasora wrote:

congrats xD

Pandiar wrote:

congrats　Mei chan~!

iMage-- wrote:

wow, your 1st rank? :3
おめでとう！！！

huafenshaonv wrote:

哇哈哈

Melt wrote:

gratz :3

KSHR wrote:

Graaaaaatz! (Btw I remember I checked the metadata for this map :p)

BeatofIke wrote:

Congrats!

Minakami Yuki wrote:

gratz for 1st rank

Kamio Misuzu wrote:

恭喜~（真的是好几个月了吧。。。

Pururut wrote:

一拳打爆mei妹

Fycho wrote:

来晚了gratz

SoG Tava wrote:

Big Gratz for your first rank ^^

Ethercastle wrote:

竟然rank 怀疑毁灭世界
迟来的Cong

No Dap wrote:

Gratz for first ranked!!

Sharlo wrote:

哇
祝贺>,<

kosiga wrote:

omedetou for first ranked

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