OK Here I am
From BMT.
I will mainly concentrate on pattern and rhythm (for kamisamaaa had mod the sound).
[Insane]
First check all life-bar-touching sliders and circles
00:02:268 (1,2,3,1) - make those four notes a parallelogram to make this part much clearer. Move 00:03:296 (1) - to (344,320) can do it
00:10:325 (1,2,3,4,5) - the end of 1 and 2 3 4 5 should form a star. But now apparently 00:11:011 (4,5) - and 00:10:325 (1,3) - is not parallel. You should realign these notes to keep beauty.
00:14:096 (4) - This could be the most weird part among the whole song because that where a downbeat sits (00:14:268 -) is completely hidden in the slider.
I know you are trying to follow the vocal, but 00:12:039 (2) - like the note here still exists. So this will only lead to confuse players because of they don't know when to follow the vocal and when to follow the drums
I highly recommend you change the rhythm here to↓
And if I were you, I would use pattern
to stress 00:14:268 (5) - . And stack 00:14:268 (5,3) - for beauty. And of course this will avoid ruining the DS of 1.60
00:23:182 (2,3,4) - The distance gap makes this whole pattern looks ugly.
And whats more, the sudden DS change at 00:24:039 (1,2,3,4) - is just so sharp.You don't do this in the other part of the song. Get the 1.60 back will be better.
00:49:925 (1,3) - Rotate this one to get 00:49:754 (6,3) -
01:14:954 (2,3,4) - inconsistent DS here. Move 01:15:468 (3) - down to keep the DS without breaking the blanket
03:12:039 (4,5,2) - stack
I think this one need some work on pattern more
It is not considerate to scatter notes here and there. They should create a system
Some stack does not fit the flow, maybe you can try throw away those stack and make a new flow at those place
Most DS-keeping is not necessary for the Insane diff. You don't need to hold DS so tightly
like this 01:54:382 (1,6) - You can easily stack them by moving 01:55:582 (6) -
That's all my suggestions. Hope this could get ranked