This is really good, though her eyes are off. I think it's that one pupil is disproportionately larger than the other.pav4obg wrote:
Trying out a new style. :3
Thin line is a good move, though proportions on the face are off.spongypuppet wrote:
Wow! Thin lines do the trick! I finally managed to make a not-so cartoonish art. That might change when I color the whole thing though (fingers crossed, I hope it does not).
Something's off about this one. I can't quite put my finger on it.
Best drawing so far
Oh! Two drawings in a day. A miracle for me!
Oh my goodness! Those are... really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really good!Brian OA wrote:
Thin line is a good move, though proportions on the face are off.spongypuppet wrote:
Wow! Thin lines do the trick! I finally managed to make a not-so cartoonish art. That might change when I color the whole thing though (fingers crossed, I hope it does not).
Something's off about this one. I can't quite put my finger on it.
Best drawing so far
Oh! Two drawings in a day. A miracle for me!
The root of the ear lines up (vertically) with the lower jaw; push the ear further to the back of the head. The nostrils should line up horizontally with the bottom lobe of the ear; bring the eyes and nose down lower and the ear a bit higher. Alternatively, just bring his lower jaw up and adjust facial features accordingly.
Thank you very much! I've modified the sketch and it looks quite better now.
I've also managed to make the lineart of it.
During the linearting, I've also modified some things. Despite all of these changes, I think I'll study it a bit and modify it some more.
Mmh
yes because the eye is floating in front of the hairspongypuppet wrote:
EDIT:
I feels like I'm writing on an art diary now. Well, just wanted to post this and would like to ask for criticism.
It seems that my coloring style is the one making my drawings cartoonish. I was trying to make it look a bit like it came from an anime using cell shading. I failed though. Still cartoonish D:.
Umm, well, it looked weird when I put the eyes under the hair. I've made some modifications again. And I've also put some effects to try and make it look "anime-ish". It looks more like as if I've taken a screenshot from a VN OP with the ray effects and whatnot. Especially when I put a background to it.Jazz wrote:
yes because the eye is floating in front of the hairspongypuppet wrote:
EDIT:
I feels like I'm writing on an art diary now. Well, just wanted to post this and would like to ask for criticism.
It seems that my coloring style is the one making my drawings cartoonish. I was trying to make it look a bit like it came from an anime using cell shading. I failed though. Still cartoonish D:.
please don't do that
D'awh, she's so pretty~ <3Kyandiix96 wrote:
I drew this :p Feel free to crit it o3o http://purin-sama.deviantart.com/art/Night-Adoptable-OPEN-464945649
There were much more but i lost them somewhere in space (of my disk)cute~ kinda looks like a crossover between tamako and Yukinon :3ebugers wrote:
hi , it's my first post here.
this is just awesome, good work!CanadianPaws wrote:
randomly started drawing and came out with this!
(also, this character likes to be mismatched, that's why she's dressed like she is!)
Thank you so much Wolf~ /w\Wolf wrote:
this is just awesome, good work!CanadianPaws wrote:
randomly started drawing and came out with this!
(also, this character likes to be mismatched, that's why she's dressed like she is!)
Wow! That's really cool, Jazz!Jazz wrote:
did this years ago and posted it on the other thread when the Art subforum still didn't exist
