from my modding queue~
[Hard]
will mod other diffs tomorrow or the day after tomorrow :/
[Hard]
SPOILER
- 00:00:690 (3,4,5) - It sounds a bit too empty to me. Try adding more whistles. For example, the end of (3) and the start of (4,5)
- 00:05:149 (4) - Consider adding a whistle here for the same reason as above.
- 00:05:757 (1) - This's just my taste, but a whistle should be added here not (2) considering one is already added at 00:06:568 (3) - . I mean, how about adding a whistle to the start instead of removing one from 00:06:163 (2) - ?
- 00:06:973 - Since the piano sound is still sustaining, this whistle doesn't fit with the song well. Consider removing it. Same for 00:08:595 - .
- 00:16:298 (6) - Remove a custom clap from the end. It's breaking your hitsounds pattern. Same for 00:19:541 (1) - 00:31:703 (3) - 00:34:946 (2) - .
- 00:21:973 (2) - As far as I listened the song, a whistle is more fitting. If you apply this, remove one from 00:22:176 - .
- 00:22:176 (3) - Remove a custom clap and change the Sampleset to Normal for consistency with 00:21:568 - .
- 00:27:852 (5,6,7,8) - It looks like these stacks are making the flow worse to me. Also it'd be better to follow the accentuated sound with the end of the 1/2 slider like this considering you did that at 00:27:446 (4) - . That way you can make consistent of the rhythm, right? ;3
- 00:28:663 (1,2,3) - This rhythm currently sounds overmapping considering how quiet this part is. It'd be better to remove (2).
- 00:35:757 (4) - A new combo should be added considering the vocal line.
- 00:41:027 (5) - Missing a clap at the start.
- 00:44:473 (3) - I can hear the drum cymbal here. How about following it by adding a finish to this note?
- 00:49:136 (5) - It sounds like this whistle doesn't work well because of a custom clap. I'd remove a whistle from here and add one to the end instead if I were you.
- 01:00:690 (2) - The vocal sustains from here unlike 00:59:068 (2) - , so I prefer a 1/2 slider not a stack.
- 01:02:919 (1,2,3,4) - The current rhythm of these sliders are conflicting with the vocal line. This one should be more fitting with yours considering starts of (1,2) are following accentuated sounds.
- 01:11:027 (6) - The angle of this slider is against the flow. I'd rearrange some patterns around this slider like this if I were you. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1352778
488,116,70217,5,8,0:0:0:0:
464,232,70419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,232,70521,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,232,70622,2,0,P|432:256|384:264,1,80
288,320,71027,2,0,P|256:292|240:256,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,216,71433,6,0,P|172:160|256:140,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,112,72041,2,0,P|316:48|236:36,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0: - 01:21:163 (1) - About 70% of this note is hidden by the slider. It's kinda hard to read considering this's Hard difficulty with AR7. I'd strongly recommend moving this note somewhere.
- 01:22:379 (8,1) - It looks like this narrow spacing is making the flow worse. Also it'd be better to change (4,5) to the 1/2 slider because the vocal and the guitar sustain from 01:21:771 - . I'd suggest the rhythm and pattern like this anyway. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1352805
Sorry, *I forgot to add a finish to 01:22:379 - maybe..244,352,81771,2,0,P|284:360|328:360,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,252,82176,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,252,82277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,252,82379,2,0,P|392:260|348:260,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
will mod other diffs tomorrow or the day after tomorrow :/