TheHowl wrote:

Piccola mod~

Generale

1. Metti il letterbox nella difficoltà di [ C r a c k ] oppure toglilo nella insane. L'opzione del letterbox è nel song setup sotto Design->Misc. toggles Questo probabilmente è dato dal fatto che nella mia diff avevo messo e poi tolto il BG, mentre la diff di Crack non ce l'ha mai avuto. Mettendo il BG ad entrambe dovrebbe tornare a posto. Altrimenti farò come hai detto tu ovviamente, perchè non piace neppure a me :3

Insane

1. 00:33:556 (5) - Lo sposterei tipo qui:
   Ad essere sincero ci avevo pensato pure io, ma poi il DS non viene rispettato e credo non si capisca. Se però qualcun'altro me lo dirà, lo cambiaerò di certo
2. 00:35:189 (5) - Dato che suppongo che hai usato la simmetria con il pattern sopra, se modifichi 00:33:556 (5) cambia la posizione anche di questo Come sopra ^
3. 00:40:087 (5) - Io farei qualcosa di più graficamente bello come questo In effetti mi sembrava un po' troppo curvato...ma pensavo andasse bene lo stesso. Cambiato
   
4. 00:45:291 (3) - Questo slider sembra un po' bruttino :S Non potrei essere più d'accordo. L'avevo lasciato da un precedente pattern e mi sembrava ancora bello, ma ora che me lo hai fatto notare non centra proprio niente xD
5. 01:31:005 (5) - Woah, un po' grande questo slider curvo. Io personalmente farei qualcos'altro perché è un po' grande :L Faceva schifo pure a me :3 Tolto e sostituito con un altro pattern
6. 01:32:842 (3) - Come per 00:45:291 (3) Messo a posto anche lui
7. 01:37:536 (2,3) - Invece che mettere un altro beat dopo farei uno slider reverse. Solo imho eh Poi mi rovina il pattern però... :/ Se qualcun'altro me lo dirà, cambierò però
8. 01:44:270 (4) - Prova a cambiarlo un po', è strano come slider :S Umh...in effetti era un po' strano. Ho diminuito la curvatura
9. 02:22:842 (1) - Slider strano. Avevo cercato di fare qualcossa di diverso xD. Cambiato
10. 02:24:066 (5) - ^ Come sopra
11. 02:27:536 (5) - ^ Questo mi sembra comunquea posto. Segue anche la voce... Vediamo se qualcun'altro me lo dice :3
12. 02:30:801 (2) - Ecco, questo slider potresti usarlo per sostituire gli altri simili che ho detto che erano strani. Diciamo che ho fatto un 50-50
13. 02:32:434 (7) - Slider strano, puoi sostituirlo con 02:30:801 (2) Ci sta davvero bene
14. 02:42:229 - Il timing point qui cambia la velocità da 0,80 a 1,50. È un cambiamento un po' troppo veloce imho In effetti era esagerato e io non me ne rendevo conto siccome sapevo dove andassero le note xD. Ho allargto le note prima dello spinner così da trovare una via di mezzo per il cambio di SV
15. 03:01:821 (3) - Slider strano. Sostituito con uno simile al tuo preferito
16. 03:03:454 (7) - NC? Sarà stato qualche errore mio di click o altro. Per gli hitsounds ho finito ora di metterli, quindi non ce ne sarebbero dovuti essere.
17. 03:05:699 (4) - WHATWHATWHAT lol xD Ho tolto il secondo anchor point
18. 03:14:270 (6,1) - è sull'orlo tra lo strano e il normale. Anche qui tolto un anchor point
19. 03:23:658 (8,9) - Qua ci starebbero bene entrambi gli elementi con New Combo Mettendo gli hitsounds l'avevo notato pure io. Ho meeso la new combo solo sul secondo, siccome il primo dei due sembra essere la fine della combo precedente
20. 03:56:311 (3) - w-what E dire che mi ero impegnato xD Sostituito con uno slider a 0.75 di SV. Magari lo metto a un po' di più...vediamo
21. 04:13:046 (1) - è un po' strano. Sistemato anche lui
22. 04:22:944 (2,3) - Elementi che se non sono spostati sono unrankabili. Fai in modo che l'inizio degli slider non sia in alcun modo sotto il corpo di un altro slider. Quell'oscenità volevo comunque cambiarla. Ora dovrebbero essere più visibili
23. 04:28:352 (7) - Un po' strano Questo non m isembrava strano. Per adesso l'ho lasciato così :3

La diff era molto bella anyway ~ Grazie Howl ^^

Shirayuki wrote:

MrSergio!!!

Idk if my modding skills are good enough, but here are my suggestions:

[Insane]
00:33:250 (4) - Change it into a slider of 1/2 beat length, like , why didn't you map this note xd I actually like this pattern. I was trying to keep the intro to be easy, but adding a slider is no big deal at all
00:33:862 (6) - Move this down imo, since the piano goes into a lower note When I mapped that piece of map I had two options: 30 degrees upward or 30 degrees downward, since waht matters here is direction change and not really "Where to" In the end I think it's the same. If someone else says the same I'll move it
00:34:883 (4) - Same as 00:33:250 (4) Same ^
00:35:495 (6) - Move this down but not as low as 00:33:862 (6) Same ^
00:35:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Changing the paterns so it fits the piano better, somethine like If you notice, at the end of the combo there's the grave part of piano starting to play: that's why I put the first notes stacked and the others in that patter. To give enforcement to that part
00:36:515 (4) - Same as 00:33:250 (4) Same
00:49:576 (1,2) - These should be sliders of 1/2 beat length too (the guitar, the guitar!!!) I was bothered by this part too, but I ended up following the vocals xD Changed
02:07:332 (4) - New combo! You know...I'm laughing hard right now xD Cause just before showing you this I was editing it and I had changed this part but in order to play it in the multi I returned to the previous version xD
02:24:066 (5) - Change from Clap to Finish hitsound (at the end of slider) What the...I forgot to put it xD But it was clap and finish
02:25:495 (5) - Add Finish hitsound (at the end of slider) From here the volume starts decreasing so I want to keep it quiet
02:28:760 (3) - Move it to the start of 02:29:168 (5) :O Nice catch
02:28:964 (4) - Move it to the end of 02:28:352 (2) Reading the previous comment I already knew this xD
Your second kiai starts off really weak, add moar Clap hitsounds! Really? O.O I think I'll think of it for a bit
02:55:291 - 2nd part of the 2nd kiai, add more hitsounds or change your style of doing hitsounds! I was actually a bit lazy here
03:31:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Change the paterns into a tornado jump is a better idea imo, something like It's not a bad idea, but I should reverse a lot of patterns before this to make the spacing reasonable, since that kind of pattern should start from the bottom of the screen
03:47:536 (1) - Maybe it's just me and the default skin, but Whistle hitsound sounds better than finish for me lol No, you're right xD I somehow misclicked that one xD

Also for some reasons the 3rd kiai, later half, sounds the best. Other kiais don't sound as good =\ Maybe you should increase the intensity of the hitsounds at the later half of the first and second kiai? Since I already said this: Yes, I was lazy and I'll redo more then half of the hitsounds >.<

04:03:862 - 2nd part of your 3rd kiai, consider using the same style of doing hitsounds as what you did from 04:09:372 to 04:19:985 I think that too
04:20:189 - Final part of 3rd kiai, consider using the same style of doing hitsounds as what you did from 04:31:413 to 04:35:291 Same ^

For hitsounds I also wasn't sure about them and I was planning on remake them anyway

(I put on my headset just so I can mod your insane diff ok)>/////< I'm honored

Overall this is so good ;w; I learned a lot from this lol. If you feel like I can mod your other difficulties, poke me ok! Sure You did a great job from my point of view. When I'll have the other difficulties ready I'll let you know

DJ Kim wrote:

In return for reply, i tried to play only 4k in your beatmap cause not good at standrard.
mania's pattern is very nice. i could immersed in song with pattern. but some change of speed was got in the way of immerse in the song to me. i think this isn't appropriate. you don't need to give many change of speed to players. maybe it disturb feel the song, so i recommand you delete except some part especially you need to modify 4:19:168 . of course, this I wrote are only suggestion so feel free to do nothing of what I said. it is up to you. the rest is perfect, i envy your skilll to arrang note, song was very fun.
and I was not complete my map , maybe my nice friend Ez2DJ_7144 sent msg to you. i appreciate you to reply first.
anyway when i complete i will send msg again.good luck

[ C r a c k ] wrote:

DJ Kim wrote:

In return for reply, i tried to play only 4k in your beatmap cause not good at standrard.
mania's pattern is very nice. i could immersed in song with pattern. but some change of speed was got in the way of immerse in the song to me. i think this isn't appropriate. you don't need to give many change of speed to players. maybe it disturb feel the song, so i recommand you delete except some part especially you need to modify 4:19:168 . of course, this I wrote are only suggestion so feel free to do nothing of what I said. it is up to you. the rest is perfect, i envy your skilll to arrang note, song was very fun.
and I was not complete my map , maybe my nice friend Ez2DJ_7144 sent msg to you. i appreciate you to reply first.
anyway when i complete i will send msg again.good luck

Thanks for your suggestion, now I will change the SV, but I don't understand what's the problem at 04:19:168 - & which difficulties. Anyway, thanks again for the suggestion.

1. Suzuki Konomi \w/, actually i'd like if i can make a GD here, but it's too long for me
2. Since in this mapset there's just 4K Mania diff set, so clear the "4K" on each mania diff

I'm sorry, for now i just can give you some advice, not mod >.<, the length is too long for me although this's my favourite song in this year

marcostudios wrote:

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ichia7x wrote:

hi [-MrSergio-]
Called from Modding Queue~ -w-

[General]

1. Suzuki Konomi \w/, actually i'd like if i can make a GD here, but it's too long for me
2. Since in this mapset there's just 4K Mania diff set, so clear the "4K" on each mania diff Yes yes yes...

[Crack's NM]

SPOILER

1. 01:25:189 (85189|2,85291|3) - move it into 01:24:883 - and change the end point of 01:23:862 (83862|0) to 01:25:087 - I've fixed them
2. from 01:25:495 - end, you mostly follow the singer's voice, please change it Move up the slider at 01:25:495 - (?)
   Sorry i can't mod this

Well, i know if the end point of a LN is a beat too, but you must cover it with a note in here, it'll become weird

[Crack's HD]

SPOILER

1. There's many unsounded (?) note on this diff, please hear it with 50% playback (imo) If you notice, where i've reduced the volume (for example at 02:01:413 - ), the song is quiet, I leave it as it is
2. You still follow the singer's voice here~ I did it where there are Kiai Time

[Crack's MX]

SPOILER

1. Too much 3-notes It isn't a Normal map; I think 2-notes are too much easy, 4-notes are orrible, so I think 3-note are the best
2. Please don't use many LN and note too much instead this can make you diff unrankable Hmm ... Probably, but for a map of 4 minutes, those sliders make the map more intuitive and less repetitive, I leave it is as it is. o!m BAT, pls don't kill me <.<
3. This song mostly just have 1/4 beat, not 1/6, but yes, there's some 1/6 but not too much I've changed someone of them

I'm sorry, for now i just can give you some advice, not mod >.<, the length is too long for me although this's my favourite song in this year

Good luck~ .w.)9