Nothing really.
Kinshara wrote:
From my Modding Queue. Sorry for late mod!
General
Too many combo colors. I think it's unnecessary. Try picking out 3 or 4 of the best ones. It's the colors from the runners rainbow
Beginner
I think SV 1.0 is high for easy...0.8 should be good but you'll have to remap :/ I think it's okay, however I'll ask other people
00:00:335 (1,2) - this breaks flow...try: http://puu.sh/9K9o4/7f370e9634.jpg That'd disregard DS from 1-2 (kinda badly) and 2-3 (really badly), which is unacceptable in a Beginner diff
00:05:210 (2,3) - you can blanket this better
00:32:585 - i feel like spinner should start here, you should map everything before That'd require to use 1/2, so no
AR to 3 and HP to 3 should be fine . Then it'd have harder settings than Easy lol
Normal
00:00:710 (2,3,4) - not a good idea to have a stack with 3 notes in normal I've had someone who's barely played before test it, they did fine
00:13:835 (1) - multiple reverses not recommended ^
00:05:585 (2) - this slider can blanket the previous one better It's 1 CTRL+G'd and rotated by 90°
00:31:085 (1) - you should map this out instead of putting a spinner That would be too complicated for a Normal :L
Hard
00:01:085 (4) - blanket better
00:24:147 (3) - fix blanket
Really nice map!
Nice mapset! Good luck! Thanks!
hmm i think its rankble,, there are many ranked easy maps who use 1/4 to start fuking girly spinersTimorisu wrote:
Kinshara wrote:
From my Modding Queue. Sorry for late mod!
00:32:585 - i feel like spinner should start here, you should map everything before That'd require to use 1/2, so no
Yeah, Easies, but not BeginnersRenzMichael wrote:
hmm i think its rankble,, there are many ranked easy maps who use 1/4 to start fuking girly spiners
use 1/2 thenTimorisu wrote:
Yeah, Easies, but not BeginnersRenzMichael wrote:
hmm i think its rankble,, there are many ranked easy maps who use 1/4 to start fuking girly spiners
I rather not use anything above 1/1RenzMichael wrote:
use 1/2 thenTimorisu wrote:
Yeah, Easies, but not Beginners
Vinc_Angel wrote:
Hi, I'm here for your request in Vinc_Angel's Modding Queue
[Easy]
HP = 3
AR = 3
OD = 3
Is this for Beginner? o-o
[Normal]
HP = 5 That'd be too hard :l
00:05:397 - Add circle Different instrument so no
00:13:835 (1) - add 1 more repeating
00:28:272 (3) - Seperate it into sliders and circle based on sound That'd require too much 1/2
00:31:085 (1) - I think change into sliders or circle may look best ^
[Hard]
00:00:335 until 00:04:835 - Make it into 0.5x speed or 0.75x speed What for
00:31:085 (1,2) - Make it into 1 repeated sliders only (not 2) There's an accent change present, so no
Good luck for your map !! Thanks :3
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cool suggestions!Vinc_Angel wrote:
[Irre's Extra]
The best of CS is 6 (or I can said that the circle is too small) hehe, no sorry :3
AR = 9 I guess this is too much AR.
OD = 7 It's an extra, so ist fine!
00:00:335 until 00:04:835 - Make it into 0.5x speed or 0.75x Speed Love this idea, cool!
00:08:397 (4) - Change into slider with 1/2 beat Dunno, I like how it is now
00:09:335 (4) - Make it into 1/2 beat slider (Ending in red line) yes
00:18:710 (3) - Make it into 1 repeater ?
00:20:210 (3) - Make it into 1/2 beat slider sorry, no
Good luck for your map
thanks, fixed all actually but in my own way, Kind of.Garven wrote:
[Extra]
I poop on your extended slider ends. MIMIMIMASDIFAMSDIFASLDJFQWÖERK fixed, good idea actually
00:13:085 (1,2,3) - Spacing error now it's better
00:20:022 (2,3) - This one I'm not sure if it was on purpose or not since you might be trying to slow things down? dunno what you mean but moved
Interesting attempt at mapping with smaller circle size, in any case.
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Thanks :3 No comment = fixedGarven wrote:
Use this for your timing.[TimingPoints]Thank
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[General]
All the kiai flashing is rather weird. I'd just get rid of 'em. I'd rather not. Can I keep the first two? QAQ
[Beginner]
00:04:835 (1) - Your new combo flow goes haywire here due to your use of longer sliders going over downbeats. You might want to rethink this section so that your combo flow can be more consistent.
Hm, seems overall it's pretty much everywhere due to the above reason. Try to at least make it a little more consistent length-wise. Right now you're ended up transitioning on rogue notes that don't really feel like changes in phrasing and it just feels weird. The reason I've skipped some of the downbeats is because imho they do not have a strong enough sound to really differ from the other normal white ticks and do not make a significant enough difference to be noticeable when playing, especially for a newcomer to the game. However please tell me about the other "rogue notes" that you mentioned
[Normal]
00:01:085 (4) - What's the end of this slider supposed to be snapped to? You tell me :^) http://puu.sh/9Pswx/1c9bd4b779.jpg
00:03:335 (4) - etc ^
00:19:835 (4,1) - I don't recommend that you have short repeat sliders that have different repeat values so close together at this level of difficulty.
[Hard]
Feels like you're going a bit overboard with the 1/4 use tbh. Remember, this is a Hard going up from a relatively easy Normal. Pretty much all of your triple 1/4 s used felt extraneous and unnecessary. That 5 hit stream could probably stand to be changed to a repeat slider so that it fits with the overall difficulty of the rest of the map. So basically cut down on the triples and make that stream a repeat slider, yes?
00:24:616 (4) - Is this really necessary? Not really
http://puu.sh/9WRpb.osuLeader wrote:
[Priti's Insane]
- 00:00:710 (2,3,4) - Jesus, what a bad flow. No really, the sudden change from curved flow to straight one along the increase of spacing make the pattern arguable to play properly Fixed this I guess
- 00:04:835 (1) - I highly doubt soft-finish would be the best hitsound to add here, what about whistle+finish as you did in similar circustances? This currently feels very unfitting fixed
- 00:11:584 (3) - I would replace this note with a 1/2 slider either move the whole pattern far away from the current placement in order to emphasize the 1/1 gap better Fixed
- 00:27:710 (4) - 2 notes would work better here, as the slider's tail feels stronger than head. You can also make a pretty stack with 00:28:272 (1) -, if you like Fixed