Chewin wrote:

Much better now! But I still didn't get two points in the dancing diff:

02:51:262 (1) - why is there new combo here? not really necessary
01:32:570 (5) - New combo here? this long combo (12 elements) is so.. weird

Call me back <3

1. Maybe considers add "k-pop" to the tags.
2. 03:30:493 - Imo the kiai should end here. I feel the track marks the chorus (not the voice) and here marks the end, the voice continues but feels better here.

1. 01:13:416 (1) - The transition between this slider and the next could be kinda hard to read (rookie players) since this don't follows the polarity (red tick-white tick) I think, although this slider fits with the voice, you need to lengthen this one by 1/2. Really considers this point.
2. 03:21:723 (1) - This is too nazi but, how about move up this slider a bit to avoid the overlap? Plus: Maybe remove the new combo to be consistent with the next combo: 03:29:108 (3) if you add then add new combo to 03:22:647 (4). http://puu.sh/9EFxv/a19dd0dbd1.jpg

1. 00:39:262 (1,2,3,4) - I find these stacks kinda confusing during the gameplay, feels like you wait another circle on the first stack and then you react (my experience in the first play) Perhaps the blame is the voice since "do you love me" correspond to: one word to one beat, and you expect press more circles in the same place. (I hope you understand my point). So maybe add a 1/2 slider instead 00:39:723 (3,4) and stack the slider head to the previous circle: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1741019
2. 01:36:954 (3,4) - Something similar happens here, maybe here because the slider should start on the white tick if you want follow properly the voice 01:36:954. Then here's my suggestion: 01:36:954 (3) - Remove this circle and move the slider to this timeline and stack with the previous circle, then go and add another circle on 01:37:647. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1741048 Imo this way works better.
3. 01:44:339 (2,3) - Same as before.
4. 02:04:647 (3,4) - This isn't a big issue but, maybe move up these sliders to avoid the bottom of the screen?

1. 02:03:262 (1) - Considers Ctrl+Ging this slider.
2. 03:24:493 (7) - Add new combo due the change of the sv.

Kenezz wrote:

Liz & Liss= Pure Love <3

[General]

1. Maybe considers add "k-pop" to the tags.
2. 03:30:493 - Imo the kiai should end here. I feel the track marks the chorus (not the voice) and here marks the end, the voice continues but feels better here.

[Sleeping]

1. 01:13:416 (1) - The transition between this slider and the next could be kinda hard to read (rookie players) since this don't follows the polarity (red tick-white tick) I think, although this slider fits with the voice, you need to lengthen this one by 1/2. Really considers this point.
2. 03:21:723 (1) - This is too nazi but, how about move up this slider a bit to avoid the overlap? Plus: Maybe remove the new combo to be consistent with the next combo: 03:29:108 (3) if you add then add new combo to 03:22:647 (4). http://puu.sh/9EFxv/a19dd0dbd1.jpg

fixed the overlap, but we prefer the combos as they are >~<

[Walking]

1. 00:39:262 (1,2,3,4) - I find these stacks kinda confusing during the gameplay, feels like you wait another circle on the first stack and then you react (my experience in the first play) Perhaps the blame is the voice since "do you love me" correspond to: one word to one beat, and you expect press more circles in the same place. (I hope you understand my point). So maybe add a 1/2 slider instead 00:39:723 (3,4) and stack the slider head to the previous circle: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1741019
2. 01:36:954 (3,4) - Something similar happens here, maybe here because the slider should start on the white tick if you want follow properly the voice 01:36:954. Then here's my suggestion: 01:36:954 (3) - Remove this circle and move the slider to this timeline and stack with the previous circle, then go and add another circle on 01:37:647. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1741048 Imo this way works better. Hmm thing is, here we re mainly following the music instead of the vocals, so we re keeping it as it is
3. 01:44:339 (2,3) - Same as before.
4. 02:04:647 (3,4) - This isn't a big issue but, maybe move up these sliders to avoid the bottom of the screen?

[Dancing]

1. 02:03:262 (1) - Considers Ctrl+Ging this slider. The jump will be too big and the transition to the next slider we find it awkward so we keep it as it is
2. 03:24:493 (7) - Add new combo due the change of the sv. there s many more in the map and we think will be very combo spammy if we do it like this, seems very readable as it is >~<!

That's all I think, very nice mapset <3
Call me back when you have applied the changes.

Sonnyc wrote:

Good job!