CelsiusLK wrote:

Hi
Coming from my maps to mod your map awesome :3

[General]
Uncheck widescreen support because you didn't do SB i thought about adding the video, might do that
Suggest Kiai time 00:50:406 - to 00:56:685 - and 01:01:569 - to 01:07:150 - i talked to samah, we'll keep the kiai as it is now

[Easy]
00:26:685 - Suggest add spinner 00:26:685 - to 00:27:732 -
00:37:848 (2) - Suggest move to x=80 y=220 the way it is mapped right is so that it flows into 2 more. i'll think about a change though
00:39:941 - Suggest rhythm http://puu.sh/9bQSn/c21641aa26.jpg i want to avoid 1/2 hits on easy
01:04:360 - Suggest rhythm http://puu.sh/9bQCJ/af88114cb5.jpg changed
01:05:755 - Suggest https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1669806 fine imo

[Normal]
00:05:755 (1) - Head remove finish add clap ( This is first time I mod hitsounds my hitsounds opinion might not useful) the finish is there because there's a loud sound that fits the finish more than it would fit the clap. (finish is less audible/silent = match)
00:49:011 - Change 00:49:011 (1) - to one repeat slider remove 00:49:708 (2) - having it like this is fine imo

[Samah's Hard]
00:17:964 (5) - Ctrl+H better flow
00:22:848 - Suggest rhythm http://puu.sh/9bS5I/bd08ea788d.jpg

[Insane]
00:14:127 (1,2) - Overlap looks bad i like it though
00:25:987 - end of 00:25:987 (3) - stack end of 00:26:336 (4) - I really like those half overlapping patterns so I'd prefer to keep it
00:34:011 (2,3) - Blanket blanketing this would create a weird flow (even more than it was). changed 00:34:534 (4) - though

Good luck
EGOIST <3 :3

Pandiar wrote:

Hi ~ from my Q

[General]

1. uncheck the widescreen sup in Easy,Normal and Hard

[Insane]
AR+1 I like to have this AR8 for DTability
00:10:813 (4) - x292 y20 changed
00:19:360 (3) - how about x384 y348? yup
00:23:197 (3,4) - more jump example:x308 y344 and x248 y292
00:26:336 (4) - overlap is not beautiful I had to explain it to others too, i really like this kind of overlaps (there are more of these (as the next few points indicate) no change to them
00:33:313 (5) - ^
00:34:534 (4) - ^
00:39:767 (3) - ^
01:07:848 (1,2,3,4) - how about this? yup

(2) - x404 y132
(3)(4) is copy of 01:07:848 (1,2)

01:09:243 (3) - x208 y56? I think that one's fine, as it's supposed to have about the same spacing as the square before it


[Normal]
00:35:057 (3) - add whistle
01:12:732 (1) - ^
00:54:592 (3) - add whistle to start and end points
00:58:080 (3) - add whistle start point
01:01:569 (1) - ^ changed all


[Easy]
00:10:639 (3) - remove whistle from end point i like to have one there as there's a beat that should have a whistle there (for me)
00:22:499 (1) - add whistle to start point changed
01:00:871 (3) - ^ changed
01:14:127 (2) - ^ changed


good luck ! >3<
thanks :3

FuFuLu wrote:

Hi~ Here's my modding!

[Easy]

Imo, it's perfect.
01:19:360 - suggestion: add a circle here and add "clap" I kinda want to keep it like this to support song's loud .. what is that even? piano? D:

[Normal]

Perfect. :3

[Insane]

00:26:685 (1) - cancel reverse, slider ends at 00:27:208 This is supposed to fit to the vocals as well as that building/raising sound
00:38:894 (4) - add "clap" oops, fixed
00:49:708 (2) - change the slider into two circles I think its fine like this

Imo, your map is nearly perfect. Hope my modding can help you. thanks :3

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

[Easy]
so tired.. just open aimod..
01:23:196 (4) - unsnap :3 fixed

[Normal]
00:08:546 - make this slider more curved, so you can makes 00:10:290 (2) - blanket changed
00:34:708 (2,3) - blanket ?

[Insane]
00:26:685 (1) - remove reverse ? and add 1/2 slider 00:27:208 ? its like this to support the buildup and the second slider is to help the slightly differently pitched buildup (if you know what i mean with that)

00:26:685 (1,2,3,4) - suggest use 1.2x DS here.. but 1.0x it's not bad.. :3 1.0 to be more consistent

00:29:825 (1,2) - how about blanketing.. :3 and 00:30:522 (3) - move to (232|240) ? nice idea, but this map was mapped to have such sliders like this (00:32:964 (4,5,1) - for example)


Hope this helped..

good luck with your map!~

zinsser wrote:

M4M from #modreqs!
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/199977

seems that I can't give a lot of mods since the map itself is pretty good now.


To be honest, I don't think Easy & Normal are different xD look almost the same. Nvm

[Easy]

1. 01:01:569 (1) - overlap with HP bar. Try to solve the problem by changing the blanketing...if i were you, I might remap this part... changed
2. 01:07:150 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - I might put them like this (just refer to the position in the screenshot) chorus changes at 01:09:941 - so give the flow an angle here will be good. changed as well
   
3. 01:26:816 - the very last spinner should ends here dont think so, theres a bright sound just where it end

[Normal]

1. 00:28:080 (1,3) - shapes are not seemed that good looking to me. maybe change to something like this i think theyre fine as they function as a blanket and as a .. how would I call that .. throw to the next circle?
   
2. 01:26:816 - the very last spinner should ends here

[Hard]
Idk whether you intentionally mute some hitsounds, but it's kind of confusing to me when playing, because I often decide whether I miss click a note by listening to the sound.

1. 00:00:174 (1) - curvy in the other way
2. 00:20:929 (4,5) - this really kills the consistency and flow. To solve it, at least 5 NC.
3. 00:27:732 (7) - delete this note
4. 00:47:615 (1,2,3) - reduce DS to 0.8. I don't really like triples with high DS (should be lower than the DS through the map which is 1.2 here) 00:48:313 - same here and in Insane diff.
5. 01:07:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I love it!

[Insane]
AR+1 (though you reject previous mod, but I agree that AR should be 9) ar8 for lightinsane and dtability, so iam still not intending to change this

Reduce Triples' DS

1. 00:11:162 -
2. 00:11:860 -
3. 00:12:557 -
4. 00:13:255 -
5. 00:13:953 -
6. 00:27:906 - this one should be changed. Presently the shapes are messy shape is fine for me http://puu.sh/9jvMr/f38c3ceb77.jpg
7. 00:39:069 -
8. 00:57:911 -

Other things to mention

1. 00:19:011 (1,2,3,4) - kind of confusing now. 1-2 should be parallel to 3-4. For example: no change here, stylerelated (same goes for below)
   
2. 00:50:057 - this stream is quite confusing. I'll just change 2 to the same length of 1 to follow vocal
3. 01:11:336 (1) - rotate clockwise 21°
4. 01:26:816 - the very last spinner should ends here

Timorisu wrote:

'Allo

[Easy]

00:05:755 (1) - Snap to grid (for better overlay with 00:08:546 (1) - ) changed

00:25:290 (1) - I don't think anti jumps in Easies are too good, they might confuse a new player (they could see the slider underneath and click immediately) true. Couldnt cope up with a "new" fix, so I copy pasted 00:22:499 (1) -

[Normal]

00:11:336 (1) - Snap to grid (for better overlay with 00:12:732 (3) - ) changed

00:21:801 (3) - Really nazi but this blanket is off (the end of it) changed

00:26:947 (1) - ^

00:39:243 (1) - ^ changed

00:41:336 (4) - ^ changed

00:50:406 (1) - ^ changed

01:04:360 (1) - ^ changed (i think)

01:08:546 (3,4,1) - I'm just gonna guess you went for a straight line, but it's kinda really not one lol. I'd make a new slider, start it at the end of 3, drag it all the way through the start of 1 to the end of the grid (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1710313), and then readjust 4 and 1's sliderbody (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1710317). Don't forget to adjust the following sliders! I wasnt actually going for a straight line. Sometimes I like to use straight slider combos out of a curved singletap combo. This is probably supposed to be one, but it's messed up, so I'll give you that one. I'll think about fixing it/redoing this part, but I assume that I wont

01:20:406 (3) - Stupid personal opinion, but maybe rotate this by like 10 degrees? changed

[Insane]

I suggest you to read up on active/passive sliders and hitsounding (although I'm still doing this myself I'd like to advise this to you . _.) Ikr, it just happened I've adjusted most of it from the first finalized map and I actually think thats its fine atm

00:08:546 (1) - End is off, blanket-wise changed

00:09:069 (2) - Middle part is currently further away than the beginning changed

00:10:115 (2) - CTRL+G, place on 1's head, CTRL+G again changed

00:11:336 (1) - ^ changed

00:21:627 (1,2,3,4) - If you're going for a square and not a diamond you should re-position 2 and 3 further to the right

00:39:767 (3) - Unneeded and kinda ugly overlap with 1 . _. I basically build this diff with these in mind, so I'll keep these (I like them)

00:40:115 (4) - Blanket is off changed

00:46:918 (3) - ^

00:53:546 (2) - Unneeded overlap again

01:02:964 (1,2,3,4) - ^ This is an Insane, spacing them a bit further won't hurt anyone a tiny bit .. I guess D:

01:06:278 (3) - Blanket is off changed

No_Gu wrote:

M4M from my queue
sry for the delay
I prefer GUILTY CROWN as source as logo shows I kinda dislike the all-capsiness and google search also tells me that it has a normal capitalization, so I'll keep it that way
no video? IVe thought about it for a while and Iam still not sure. I might do it?

[Easy]
00:27:383 (2) - add a whistle changed
fine

[Normal]
00:00:174 (1,3,1,3) - I don't think claps fit here true. I tried to give them somewhat similar claps as in Insane, but that just wont work. removed
00:26:685 (3,4) - add whistle changed
00:54:592 (3,4,1) - why not symmetry them? I think they are? I assume you mean so that it's in the middle of the playfield - I dont think thats that important
hmm...it's more like a harder easy than normal. probably

[Insane]
00:27:034 - no sound here silenced it a little
00:48:662 (2) - it should be a slider like 1 I think its fine
00:55:377 (3) - wired..aha changed this one (finally)
it will be better if you put some jumps since this is an insane diff..but aha,still ok

hmm...I think it will be better if you can make Normal a little harder like a normal diff
The mapset itself is very easy, i know about that, but I just wanted to give this kind of map a try ,, so, yea. Easy mapset it is

Haneure wrote:

From my modding queue~

Everything I say are all suggestions, please keep that in mind!

Also the map was updated as I was modding q_q I'm sorry if anything overlaps/conflicts with the update...

Insane

• 
  
  00:07:848 (3) - I would suggest separating this slider into individual notes with a whistle on each of them; I believe that it'd put a nice touch on the map in the same sense that the piano does for the song here.
  
  
  Suggestion for placement?

  
  Maybe the jump is a little big to match the rest of the intro but... Again, just a suggestion like everything else~
  00:10:813 (4) - Same idea as ^, I would separate this slider into two notes and give them both a whistle. changed both, i like the idea
  
  00:32:964 (4) - Add whistle :3
  
  00:33:313 (5) - ^ added them, but also made them rather silent
  
  00:36:365 - Add a note here as a triplet from 00:36:278 (6) leading into the slider to go with the violin? Or make it a stream starting from 00:36:104 (5) into the next slider? added a full stream
  
  00:49:011 (1) - Dampen the sound of the start of this slider and add a whistle changed
  
  00:53:546 (2) - Consider moving this up slightly so that the slider tail doesn't overlap with the end of 00:53:197 (1)? I think it might look a bit cleaner... I've had this alot, but this is intended
  
  
  Like so

  ...with the slider one nazi spot to the right.

Normal

• 
  00:49:011 (1,2) - Lower the slider speed of these two? To give a little more buildup into the next phrasing The idea itself is nice, but I'd prefer not to use any SV change in normals
  
  00:07:150 (3,4) - Consider breaking these up into separate notes and putting whistles on all four, same idea as with the Insane... Some more accent on the piano Changed the second slider into 2 circles, whistle'd
  
  00:26:685 (3) - Make this a repeat slider? I like it this way more
  
  00:35:057 (3) - Move this slider like one tiny pixel down? changed i guess

Holy crap, this song is absolutely beautiful ;__; EGOIST giving me goosebumps as usual. Good luck with this map, it's quite lovely!

Don wrote:

Beautiful hitsounding.

Easy
00:16:918 (1) - Move up a little changed
00:25:290 (1,2) - Flow is weird. Don't really have any suggestions, but for an easy, it just feels weird
00:30:871 (1) - Move down a little i think this one's fine
00:54:592 (3,1) - Feels weird... same for 25s
01:07:150 (1,2,3,4,1) - http://puu.sh/9ym4Y/fa367461c1.jpg puush is broken right now, will see later
01:12:732 (1,2) - Blanket
01:14:127 (2,1) - ^ I prefer the non blanketed way
01:23:894 (1) - Spinner doesn't fit... try either lowering the hitsounds every white/red tick or plainly removing the spinner I think its fine, using the same spinner in every other diff as well

Normal
00:01:569 (3,1) - Nitpick this blanket
00:11:336 (1,3) - Reconsider this overlap, it looks weird on a low AR looks just fine on playtesting
00:14:127 (1,2) - Blanket modified slightly
00:43:778 (2) - Avoid 2>3 or 4>1 sliders (same for red>white sliders, doesnt feel satisfying) I see no problem with this one actually
00:58:778 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/9ymxj/828cbc8bfc.jpg changed

Insane
00:09:767 (1,2,3) - Red>White sliders are very unsatisfying. Won't mention this again, but consider changing this. You can read more at http://osu.ppy.sh/u/Jenny I dont mind using them if they match the music or vocals (here: ra/la and the vocal after it (a ri?)
00:14:127 (1,3) - Making this go till the blue tick doesn't feel fitting with the music first sliders end ends when the violin ends, second slider starts where the bass starts/violin changes its sound
00:22:848 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing changes here seem unnecessary
00:39:592 (2,3) - This stack breaks the flow both completely fine imo

TaMul wrote:

Sorry for late! Finally test is over!

[Easy]

1. 00:22:499 (1) - whistle on arrow of slider changed

[Normal]

1. 01:27:034 - remove this changed, didnt notice that leftover

nothing to check overall! nice map! Thanks :3
Good luck!

Okoratu wrote:

Yauxo wrote:

NM
Modder: Okonub :<

COULD YOU NOT..?!?!

Insane

• 
  

1. Wie ich sehe hast du AR 9 immer abgelehnt, wie waers mit AR 8.5? ich finds super mit AR 8.5 [color=#0080FF]stimmt schon o:[/color]
2. 00:08:371 (6) - wieso so laut, diese anderen circles sind auch 10% leiser: 00:10:813 (5,6) - (und 00:11:162 (7,8) - sind andere sounds imo) faellt nen bisschen stark auf wie laut der ist..? wurde durch ne mod geändert, hab vergessen den green point zu verschieben. fixed
3. 00:20:232 (3) - keine ahnung das spielte sich komisch, vlt ist diese idee besser: CRTL+H => Um -11 Grad drehen und nach (32|176) verschieben, oder vielleicht auf eine aehnliche Art und weise reformen... vielleicht klappt das besser? der soll sich genau so spielen, map baut viel auf overlaps auf, dies ist einer davon o: Ich behalts jedoch im hinterkopf
   
   ????

   
4. 00:26:685 (1) - Whistle on head? kann sein das ich das schonmal weggenommen habe, jedoch hat die normal diff da auch whistles, also fixed
5. 00:38:371 (2,3) - dass der etwas schief liegt faellt sogar ingame auf (1x, keine ahnung ob sich das fixen laesst x.x)
6. 00:46:918 - wieso hoeren die claps auf diesem downbeat auf? (vlt den Stream dann etwas leiser machen und claps auf jeden downbeat placen?) changed

Samah's Hard

• 
  

1. big circles are bit too big imo, i mean they're the same size than the circles in the normal, you could probably go with something like 3.5~3.7 to have something which is in the middle of the normal and the Insane's CS?
2. 00:14:127 (1,2,3) - this sliderbow is being destroyed by the stack lenience of 00:14:650 (2,3) - , so you would probably want to go for a custom stack here to pull this off exactly how you want it to be
3. 00:38:546 (1,2,3) - these are especially weird to play because 00:39:069 - is a strong vocal and your sliders mostly also align with some kind of vocal at least, so this way of placing objects may end up frustrating for the player
4. 00:42:034 (1,2) - this sliderbow could be prettier imo
5. 01:18:313 (1,2,3) - this sliderbow could be a bit prettier to look at ingame again, because the stack leniency makes the circle be unevenly near to this slider
   
   That's how this pattern looks ingame atm

   
6. 01:20:232 (6,7) - this is kinda similar to the case directly above
   
   ingame example

   
7. same prolly applies in other cases aswell, i'd advise you to experiment with this a bit

Normal

• 
  

1. how2 mod normals o-o
2. Ich nehme mal an die hitsounds sind am anfang absichtlich weggelassen oder lazy? (kannst ja immer noch sliderticks hitsounden, hehhehehehhe)
3. ich find die diff soweit eigentlich in ordnung, nur find ich's irgendwie seltsam dass 00:29:476 (3) - der einzige slider in der ganzen diff ist, der mehr als 3 anchors hat, koenntest nen bisschen mehr variieren, da man die wiederholungen auf einer Normal schon ziemlich stark sieht ?_? ausserdem versteh ich dein Slidertick gehitsounde nicht wirklich vor allem weils ab dem chorus aufhoert Iam a retard. Fixed all the hitsounds

Easy

• 
  

1. diese diff ist jetzt die einzige die nicht in 00:00:174 - anfaengt... wieso nicht, das sind in ner easy like 5 objects max lol
2. lol selbst diese diff hat kreativere slider als die normal :'D Teh strugglez of normal mapping

Keine ahnung, sag mir bitte was von den unteren diffs alles an schwachsinn dabei war, k

Indeed wrote:

Hello, from my M4M Queue~ (don't worry, I understand you can't do the M4M right away, take your time!) I will probably do it tomorrow or the day after. Feel free to remind me ingame!

[General]

In Samah's Hard, their Kiai times are off by thiiiis much, make sure to tell them where your Kiai times are, as Kiai time should be consistent throughout all difficulties. I dont think its thaaaat much of a problem right now, but .. meh :/

[Easy]

• 00:10:639 (3,1) - could blanket these
  00:16:918 (1,2) - blanket
  00:28:080 (1,2) - blanket all of them seems fine for me, blankets a nice thing, I agree, but I didnt want to make a pure blanket diff
  00:30:174 (3) - I suggest turning this slider around, the way you have it now sorta disrupts the flow of the map. Here's how I changed it. I also moved the following slider up for a nice blanket, by doing so the circle and sliders following it need to be readjusted, so I'm not sure you would like to implement this change. My thought behind this is more that I really like these turning-away-from-each-other sliders. They add something to a combo imo, the thing is that not everyone likes them (similar to the overlaps I have on insane)
  00:46:220 (3) - move to x:48 y:116 changed
  00:47:267 (4) - x:256 y:212 for symmetry 8^) heck yeah symmetry changed
  01:04:360 (1,2) - blanket
  01:17:615 (3,1) - blanket
  01:20:755 (3) - move to x:440 y:204 for better flow, your slider following it will only have to be adjusted a tiny bit okay, changed

[Normal]

• 00:14:127 (1,2) - could blanket these better changed
  00:18:313 (3) - I suggest turn this slider to go the other direction, the way it is now makes for bad flow. Here's what I did changed
  00:19:011 (4) - I also moved this one, as you can see in the link above^ Just makes for better flow
  00:33:662 (1,3) - could blanket thesechanged to something different actually
  00:37:848 (3,4) - blanket sounds like a plan
  00:46:918 (3) - the direction this slider in right now is a little awkward, maybe you could make it into a Z slider? or some other shape to fit in with the sliders around it Its fine imo
  01:00:174 (3,4) - blanket these I feel like keeping these
  01:21:801 (2) - I don't think this should be a reverse slider, it sounds better like this for me. changed

[Insane]

• This difficulty feels a little too easy to fc for me, I suggest spacing out some of you sliders and circles more during Kiai time, and maybe you could also increase sv during Kiai as well. Not a major change, but maybe to something like 1.2? Ive had this alot here, but I dont think that every Insane has to be jumpy or whatnot. Ive mapped this as a lighter Insane and that's how it'll stay :3
  00:23:197 (3,4) - I would make these a 1,2 and space them farther away, maybe like this? thinking about it
  00:26:336 (4) - move to x:264 y:40 I like to have these overlaps, so no change here
  00:38:371 (2) - move to x:268 y:228 for a nice little jump! changed and also adjusted 3 to fit in with it
  00:39:592 (2,3) - move these up and to the left a bit same overlap thing
  00:53:546 (2) - move up, space it out more!
  01:01:569 (1) - move this down just a little bit for even spacing with the stream +1y would make it go from .72 to .69. I'd say I'll keep it
  01:02:964 (1,2,3,4) - I moved these around a bit, 1,2 changed, also changed 4 for more flow into 1
  01:17:790 - a triple would fit here keeping it simple here
  01:22:848 (2) - move this to the right a bit to space it out well, okay I guess

Nice mapset! Good luck on ranking!

RandomEffect wrote:

thanks for M4M!

[Easy]

1. 01:19:360- add a note probably a good idea
2. 01:21:104 (1,2,3,4) - hmm... a little boring, imo. avoid making parallel all sliders? I think they are fine as they fit to the music

[Normal]

1. 00:15:522 (3,4) - not good flow
2. 00:16:918 (1,2) - ^ I think they are just fine, but lets see, I'll probably move them a little bit

almost good!
fine mapset~☆
~Good Luck~

Estellia- wrote:

Ok GO!

Easy

00:14:127 (1,3) - Make them the same? changed
00:16:918 (1) - Blanket? ah well, okay
00:42:034 (1) - Don't find a need for weird slider I tried and I think its fine
01:04:360 (1) - Curve more? made a blanket

Rather weird flow, and if you can, cut down on long sliders

Normal

00:19:708 (1) - Curve this more This one's fine imo
00:22:499 (1) - Same^ ^
00:46:918 (3) - Blanket the note before instead okay
01:20:406 (3) - Consider making this note the same as note 1, but smaller I like it this way more (kinda moving away from the mirrored stuff) as it flows into 1 nicely

Simplistic Normal, much better than Easy diff. I like~

Insane

00:00:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Flow is very counter-intuitive True, but thats how it's supposed to be
00:36:104 (5,6,7,8,1) - Consider making this stream a straight one, to lead into the next slider Map's curvy, stream's curvy :3
00:43:080 (4) - You should straighten this slider more nope, flowreasons

Nice slider art there. I see an improvement of style, nice patterns as well. Not many issues other than prolly flow problems?

Not bad mapset overall. Was an ease modding.