1. Extra (5.82 stars, 1099 notes)
2. Laurier's Insane (4.73 stars, 881 notes)
3. Normal (1.98 stars, 332 notes)
4. Silynn's Hard (3.49 stars, 724 notes)

Its a wonderful world~!

Silynn wrote:

why is everyone hating on this map it's really fun

Horo wrote:

I didn't mean to be a b-bully... I just really like your maps and don't know how to express it!

go make more wubs

1. Try use Romanised Artist. '新谷良子'
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2. Why 'hatsune miku' tag? not need imo. also. silynn is guest mapper? if no, remove it.
3. If you don't have SB, please remove Both check.
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1. Rhythm is good. but Actually, double reverse short slider is hard to read. sor, this diff rhythm is like hard diff.
2. HP+1 OD+1. because normal diff.
3. 00:29:534 (1,2) - add whistle slider end?
4. 00:30:310 (2) - add clap slider head.
5. 00:31:344 (3) - second reverse add clap.
6. 00:37:810 (4) - add whistle slider reverse. because vocal follow.
7. 00:44:792 (6) - ^
8. 01:25:914 (5) - overlaps here.
9. 01:31:623 - use this. feel really good.
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10. 01:49:187 (2) - add finish slider end.
11. 02:00:566 (1) - ad whistle slider head.
12. 02:08:842 (7,1) - switch NC? if not vocal follow NC.
13. 02:29:534 (4,7) - add NC both.
14. 02:37:581 (3) - add whistle slider reverse.
15. 03:50:221 (1) - add whistle slider end.
16. 03:52:031 (3) - ^ but, head.

1. 00:15:293 (1) - nothing mean NC imo. same sound.
2. 00:19:467 (1) - ^
3. 00:29:599 (1) - this spinner end is 00:31:474 - better imo. blue line end is some people angry.
4. 01:02:896 (1) - remove NC.
5. 01:04:189 (1) - ^
6. 01:04:965 (1) - ^
7. 01:31:623 (2) - long empty, so, add NC.
8. 02:12:463 (1) - remove NC.
9. 02:13:239 (1) - ^
10. 03:23:583 (1) - ^
11. 03:24:100 (1) - ^
12. 03:24:617 (1) - ^
13. 03:27:462 (2) - confused slider.
14. 03:39:876 (1,1,1,1,2) - wat.
15. 04:27:721 (1) - remove NC.

Laurier wrote:

join

Okoratu wrote:

I like the Extra though i kinda feel the need to comment on
03:27:462 (2) - as it does not really fit the current standard Ranking criteria we have there as it could mislead the player into thinking this one ends actually in or around 03:29:014 -
03:39:876 (1,1,1,1,2) - i hope you'll be allowed to keep this it's awesome
03:58:497 - yes, i like this

don't kd this post, i'll probably get around sometime to mod this fully, k

Z B i 7 wrote:

this map is great and so fun to play good job

1. 03:27:462 (1) - Typical HanzeR :3 (quite sure this is unrankable lel)
2. 03:39:876 (1,1,1,1,2) - ^
   
3. 03:41:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Wat is this NORMAL pattern, we don't want any of that here!

• 
  02:46:990 - 02:48:152 - i dont think these 2 red ticks are necessary. there is no downbeat change as you can tell since the drum pattern is the same.

• 
  im kinda scared to mod this lel

1. 00:06:245 (1) - use a similar rhythm to 00:03:177 (2,3) - just for the sake of consistency and hanzer style ?
2. 00:18:946 (1) - nc for consistency with 00:19:206 (1,1) - ?
3. 00:29:599 (1,1) - rip
4. 00:33:413 (1) - expose tail a bit more? just for asthetics
5. 01:23:974 (4,5) - overlap looks a bit weird >_<=
6. 02:53:712 (8,1) - u may want to unstack this as since from the NC, they are seperate musical patterns (blah cant explain)
7. 03:27:462 (1,1) - lol im sure you already know this but this is unrankable lel but gl maybe you can convince some bats to let you.
8. 03:39:876 (1,1,1,1,2) - well if they don't let you keep this, then you can always offset them a bit.
9. 04:01:600 - missing whistle?
10. just a thing about the beginning part. you may want to silence these slider ends :/ 00:00:978 - they sound kinda loud due to the soft music.
11. 03:52:823 (3) - unsnapped

• 
  something more normal to mod yay

1. 00:12:485 (1,2) - blah nazi blanket thing.
2. 01:19:319 (2) - overmapped? (its actually an unrankable thing now =w= overmapping that is)
   actually you have alot of these .-. i will leave it up to you wether you want to fix or not o-o have a read at this t/125409
3. 01:31:623 - err adding a break in kiai? why not just remove kiai lol.
4. 02:08:066 - missing clap
5. 02:46:860 - ^
6. 02:34:706 (1,2) - i think a rhythm like this gives better buildup o-o or at least make it like 03:40:910 (1,2) -
   
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7. 03:41:945 - there should be kiai here? as it's the chorus
8. 04:12:123 (5) - unsnapped

• 
  mah gawd the double repeat sliders Q_Q

1. 00:02:659 (3,1) - pls make parallel owo
2. 00:03:435 - i don't understand what sound this reverse is suppose to map lol. the strong beats are at 00:03:177 - and 00:03:694 -
3. 00:11:709 - ^
4. 03:58:497 - delete kiai here cuz of break?
   
   no it does not NEED to be consistent. and tbh, i think for your situation, it might be better to remove. cuz.. break in kiai is just weird. kiai is suppose to emphasize a certain part of the song.. then you have a break. lol
5. 04:10:910 - ^ maybe delete this kiai too
6. 02:03:411 (6) - such a hanzer slider . idk newbs may get confused since the slider path is slightly unclear idk tho. probably fine
7. 03:25:458 (1,1) - for spinners, the emphasis is more at the end so you should end 03:25:458 (1) - on the white tick and start 03:27:462 (1) - on the next blue or red (i would recommend red since it may get confusing to see another spinner appearing before the previous one ends) tick and same goes for 03:27:462 (1,1) - that way u can also add finishes on them
8. 04:26:945 (6) - err how bout delete and have a 1/1 slider starting from 04:26:686 - like you did here 04:24:617 (3) -

Yauxo wrote:

Actually, somehow I cant post from my open window, it just .. did nothing ... so if I triplepost ... thats why.

Holy sht, pressed cancel instread of post. Iam a genius (glad the forum saves it when you go back though)

Hi there, coming from your request in my Modding Q (sorry for being late, had other stuff to do)
4 min Hanzer, lets see if I can find stuff .. I guess?

[General]

[Normal]

1. 00:00:591 (1,2) - Curve these less i like curvy :>
2. 00:08:865 (1) - doesnt blanket anything, so I'd assume that it wouldnt hurt if you move it down a little bit for better flow into 2 ok
3. 00:22:293 (2) - feels kinda weird to me having a 8 tick repeatable, how about 2x4? maybe
4. 00:31:086 (3) - tail blanket 2? ok
5. 00:40:913 (2) - this blanket looks rather weird as the head's Blanket itself is off
6. 00:43:758 (5) - NC? ok
7. 00:54:361 (4) - I'd move this further away from 3, but that might bring some position issues, as you'd have to move it out of the screen hmm idk if i really can
8. 00:55:396 (6) - repeat?
9. 01:29:554 (3) - -ish? cool
   
   hue

   
   
   
10. Move the break to 01:31:623 -
    
11. 01:41:967 (1,2) - These claps seem rather random, assuming you want to keep them, lower their volume a bit? haha how did that happen
12. 01:55:394 (6) - 2x4? Would actually fit more as the pitch lowers on the second
13. 02:03:411 (6) - personal opinion, sliders like this look bad in normals i like the effect :>
14. 02:25:396 (1,2) - These surely are weird to play as the player has to move back to hit 2 hmm but the overlap looks cool and its spaced right ><
15. 02:56:427 (3) - NC, actually, the NCs after this look weird. I'd NC these very long repeatables but .. meh
16. 03:14:014 (2,3) - blanket should be improved improved
    
17. After 03:57:010 (1) - , break in the kiai? :s has to be consistent with the other diffs

[Hard]

1. Nothing yet I guess
   
   

[Insane]

1. This feels like a good spot-the-difference game
   
2. 02:12:204 (3) - NC these?
   
   Literally cant find anything here besides stylerelated things. Gj on this diff

[Extra]

1. 00:15:033 (1,1,1,1) - I really dislike the NC spam here, just one NC would do the job for 2 sliders
2. 01:02:637 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^ more colors == more pretty :D
3. 01:08:864 (4) - I'd suggest a smooth loop here instead of a crumply one? Or in general, no loop at all ok
4. 01:14:018 (5) - NC here? drums become louder, sliders are spread and out of combo with the other 4 sure
5. 01:29:683 (1,1,1) - remove NCs?
6. 02:10:911 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
7. 03:23:324 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^ ^^^
8. 03:27:462 (1) - I'd assume that this is unrankable? You have no clue where the trail actually goes, so .. uhm .. yea? D:
9. 03:39:876 (1,1,1,1,2) - ^ maybe lol
10. 04:11:428 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - NC MANIAAAAA
11. 04:27:462 (1,1) - PRETTY COLORS

Wurstbrot.
Hth? D:

truonant wrote:

Hello~ from my Mod Queue

General
You have an epilepsy warning displayed on your normal difficulty only oops
I only modded normal since hard is WIP and I can’t do insane and extra

Normal
00:02:659 (3,4) – I think this fits more: http://puu.sh/9Ed9f/1e0454f7e1.jpg
00:10:933 (3,4) - ^ same i think i want to keep the intro slower

Combo Placement

SPOILER

Combos are getting a bit long within kiai and it’s a bit inconsistent
01:21:517 (4) – NC - keep consistency with middle kiai section ok
01:50:221 – NC and remove NC from 01:50:739 (and move this here: http://puu.sh/9EiUh/5605624d03.jpg&#41; ok
01:52:290 – NC and remove from 01:53:196
01:54:618 (5) – NC
02:39:877 (6) – NC - keep consistency with beginning and end kiai section
03:48:410 (5) – NC - keep consistency with middle kiai section
03:54:359 (6) – ^

Aesthetics

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00:40:913 (2) – better blanket - http://puu.sh/9Ee8S/dd9e2bb954.jpg fixed
00:44:792 (6) – ^ http://puu.sh/9EeiV/5b0ced7a82.jpg
00:50:224 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/9EenQ/7d0bf7a7f5.jpg
00:58:499 (4) - ^ http://puu.sh/9Eetg/4468fcefd2.jpg
01:00:568 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/9EeM8/97f1ec0114.jpg
01:22:293 (6) - ^ http://puu.sh/9EfG4/ea0469fcb1.jpg
02:30:310 (5) - ^ how about this? http://puu.sh/9Egcg/dccec856ce.jpg
02:41:429 (6) – ^ http://puu.sh/9EghP/dfedb95796.jpg
03:14:014 (2,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/9EgFQ/d44a0d92b7.jpg
03:54:359 (6) - ^ http://puu.sh/9EgQD/582d9626e8.jpg
04:23:324 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/9Eh12/7d61a579fc.jpg fixed all of them ^

Good luck with your map! Let me know if this mod was helpful or not.

_Stan wrote:

from my q

[normal]
00:02:659 (3,1) - parallel?
00:13:002 (4,5) - ^
00:32:637 (2,3) - blanket
00:35:741 (1,3) - overlap?
00:57:465 (3,4) - blanket
01:53:196 (1,2,3) - not a straight line
02:50:608 (2,3) - hard for normal
03:58:497 - to 04:10:910 - cancel the kiai it's a break
04:20:479 (3,4) - parallel?
04:23:324 (1,2) - blanket
fix all these ^
[extra]
00:40:396 (3,5,6) - make the 3 5 6 into a triangle? m i like it how it is
01:10:933 (1,2) - blanket fixed
01:55:394 (3,2) - overlap its ok hehe
02:12:980 (1) - re selection will be more exciting
02:13:239 (1) - ^
03:13:497 (3,4,5,6) - blanket fixed
03:25:393 (1) - confusing yup ^^
04:05:415 (6,6) - overlap

ex is great, I like it

it‘s a really good map, GOOD LUCK

CrazyErrorMan wrote:

This should be in Work in Progress.
The Hard diff is not finished yet.
From my Mod Que.
All I could think of.

Kibbleru wrote:

no dap is best mom mod!

[General]

• 
  02:46:990 - 02:48:152 - i dont think these 2 red ticks are necessary. there is no downbeat change as you can tell since the drum pattern is the same. iunno about this

[Extra]

• 
  im kinda scared to mod this lel

1. 00:06:245 (1) - use a similar rhythm to 00:03:177 (2,3) - just for the sake of consistency and hanzer style ?
2. 00:18:946 (1) - nc for consistency with 00:19:206 (1,1) - ? id rather just combo the pattern
3. 00:29:599 (1,1) - rip x_x changed a bit
4. 00:33:413 (1) - expose tail a bit more? just for asthetics changed it a little bit
5. 01:23:974 (4,5) - overlap looks a bit weird >_<= hmm maybe
6. 02:53:712 (8,1) - u may want to unstack this as since from the NC, they are seperate musical patterns (blah cant explain) changed
7. 03:27:462 (1,1) - lol im sure you already know this but this is unrankable lel but gl maybe you can convince some bats to let you. :x
8. 03:39:876 (1,1,1,1,2) - well if they don't let you keep this, then you can always offset them a bit.
9. 04:01:600 - missing whistle? oops
10. just a thing about the beginning part. you may want to silence these slider ends :/ 00:00:978 - they sound kinda loud due to the soft music. done
11. 03:52:823 (3) - unsnapped weird

[Insane]

• 
  something more normal to mod yay

1. 00:12:485 (1,2) - blah nazi blanket thing.
2. 01:19:319 (2) - overmapped? (its actually an unrankable thing now =w= overmapping that is)
   actually you have alot of these .-. i will leave it up to you wether you want to fix or not o-o have a read at this t/125409
3. 01:31:623 - err adding a break in kiai? why not just remove kiai lol.
4. 02:08:066 - missing clap
5. 02:46:860 - ^
6. 02:34:706 (1,2) - i think a rhythm like this gives better buildup o-o or at least make it like 03:40:910 (1,2) -
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 03:41:945 - there should be kiai here? as it's the chorus
8. 04:12:123 (5) - unsnapped

[Normal]

• 
  mah gawd the double repeat sliders Q_Q

1. 00:02:659 (3,1) - pls make parallel owo fxt
2. 00:03:435 - i don't understand what sound this reverse is suppose to map lol. the strong beats are at 00:03:177 - and 00:03:694 -
3. 00:11:709 - ^ fun
4. 03:58:497 - delete kiai here cuz of break?
5. 04:10:910 - ^ maybe delete this kiai too would be inconsistent
6. 02:03:411 (6) - such a hanzer slider . idk newbs may get confused since the slider path is slightly unclear idk tho. probably fine i like the effect i hope i can keep it x-x
7. 03:25:458 (1,1) - for spinners, the emphasis is more at the end so you should end 03:25:458 (1) - on the white tick and start 03:27:462 (1) - on the next blue or red (i would recommend red since it may get confusing to see another spinner appearing before the previous one ends) tick and same goes for 03:27:462 (1,1) - that way u can also add finishes on them hmm maybe
8. 04:26:945 (6) - err how bout delete and have a 1/1 slider starting from 04:26:686 - like you did here 04:24:617 (3) - i wanna keep the symmetry xD

blah sry head hurts 2 mod hard @_@ edit: oh wtf its not even done yet

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