Hi hi
General
Insane
Hard
Normal and Easy are nice. Really good mapset and I was one of the first to test it :3
All suggestions of course. Please don't give up on the map... This is the one! Good luck~
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General
- yuikonnu <3
- Consider changing that brown combo colour to something brighter and easier to read ;w;
- You've silenced slider-slide like I mentioned via irc ^-^b
- What happened to [Vince's Garden]? Pls.
- yuikonnu <3 Oh, did I mention that already?
Insane
- 00:10:325 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think you can try neaten this up and form a nice star pattern:
This shouldn't change how it plays; it's just an aesthetic thing. - 00:12:211 (3,5) - This blanket, you're welcome
- 00:18:554 (2,3,4,5,6) - Probably should neaten this up a little as well!
- 00:25:068 (4,1) - Flow can be improved slightly:
I think you should decrease the spacing to (4) by using your normal distance snap (1.2x) and make sure 00:25:239 (1) is below the horizontal of it. The flow from (4) to that slider will be much more natural as you sort of drop into the slider! - 00:27:468 (4,5,6,1) - In my opinion, the rhythm here can be improved. It feels a bit strange to play, having to click on 00:27:811 (6) where the vocal carries over into the next measure. Try the following as it plays and looks much better! (yes, it currently looks like another mushed up star pattern ;w;)
Ok, well basically I just put (4) where (5) was and merged (5) and (6) into a slider. I placed the slider as shown (you can fix that blanket), which creates circular flow. The reason a slider may better here is because it'll follow the vocal hold at 00:27:639. Finally, I moved 00:27:982 (1) to stack on the new (5), with the slider end hidden over the 00:26:782 (2) slider head. Ahhh the flow is superrr~
If you decide to something like this, you probably need to move the following pattern at 00:28:668 (2,3) up a bit. - 00:37:411 (5,1) - zzz (= please blanket)
- 01:05:182 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I feel the notes in the triplet 01:05:525 (3,4,5) are too close! Either stack them or spaced them slightly more.
I aimed 01:05:182 (2) slightly more to the left and spaced the following triplet using 0.6x DS. This creates a nice easing into the slider (which is blanketed around 01:04:668 (1)). Adjust the following notes in the jump sequence accordingly. - 01:17:354 (2) - Might as well mention this now before someone else nazi mods it; but disable grid snap temporarily and make sure the slider end is properly over 01:17:011 (4).
- 01:18:896 (2,3) - Umm well... this plays a bit awkward for me. Unless it's like this for some particular reason, try go for some nice flow:
This pattern of sliders works well and utilises circular flow to anticipate 01:19:582 (4). - 01:57:982 (4,5) - Ctrl + G this rhythm? Follows the vocal and this beat 01:58:154 needs to be clicked!
- 02:08:611 (3,4,5) - Maybe stack them or space them like I mentioned before.
- 02:30:896 (5) - I think you should really make this a kick slider. There is definitely a beat on 02:31:068! Having the reverse will direct the player to 02:31:239 (6) anyway.
- 02:43:411 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I recommend you decrease the size of your spacing here. Large jumps don't fit particularly well in this slower section of the song. The circular flow makes the jumps easier, but maybe decrease them anyway for the sake of 02:44:782 (8,1).
03:10:839 (4) - Might as well stack the slider end on 03:09:639 (6) before someone else mentions it - Why didn't you map the rest?! ;w;
Hard
- 00:53:354 (3) - Split this into a slider and circle respectively, as to emphasise 00:53:696!
- 01:17:268 (7,1) - This was ok in insane, but I think if you made it a 3/4 slider from 01:17:011 - 01:17:268 instead it would be better especially in this diff. i.e. split this slider 01:16:839 (6).
- 02:17:696 (1,2) - e-eww T^T Maybe blanket or something? lol
- 03:03:811 (5,1) - zzz
Normal and Easy are nice. Really good mapset and I was one of the first to test it :3
All suggestions of course. Please don't give up on the map... This is the one! Good luck~
( ・ω・)ノ☆