Привет, заинтересовался картой. Раньше делал такую-же. Так вот, я бы хотел добавить сюда свой нормал (есть заготовки с прошлых версий), и возможно пару сложностей Мании, если ты, конечно, не против. Также со временем буду находить ошибки или как-то помогать с модом. Жду ответа.
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Да, я ответил в ЛС.Shadren wrote:
Привет, заинтересовался картой. Раньше делал такую-же. Так вот, я бы хотел добавить сюда свой нормал (есть заготовки с прошлых версий), и возможно пару сложностей Мании, если ты, конечно, не против. Также со временем буду находить ошибки или как-то помогать с модом. Жду ответа.
[Normal]
Как видишь, некоторые объекты стоят не на сетке, это нужно исправить. Timing —> Resnap All Notes;
Также подправь Киай, он немного сбился
P.S File —> Open AiMod Иногда посматривай, может найдёт чего
Как видишь, некоторые объекты стоят не на сетке, это нужно исправить. Timing —> Resnap All Notes;
Также подправь Киай, он немного сбился
P.S File —> Open AiMod Иногда посматривай, может найдёт чего
Topic Starter
Shadren wrote:
[Normal]
Как видишь, некоторые объекты стоят не на сетке, это нужно исправить. Timing —> Resnap All Notes;- исправлено
Также подправь Киай, он немного сбился
Hi.
Please, check the timming, it's wrong !
Normal: CS-1 ?
Edit: Also, you have circles wrong placed [Formation], 00:41:116 (2) - it goes here 00:41:035 - .
Then some parts doesn't follow the music. Try following more at the drummer and guitar, it'd feel more natural.
00:57:971 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Try adding a slider on every third.
Please, check the timming, it's wrong !
Normal: CS-1 ?
Edit: Also, you have circles wrong placed [Formation], 00:41:116 (2) - it goes here 00:41:035 - .
Then some parts doesn't follow the music. Try following more at the drummer and guitar, it'd feel more natural.
00:57:971 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Try adding a slider on every third.
Topic Starter
AJeyB wrote:
Hi.
Please, check the timming, it's wrong ! - I think the timing is ok, if not, tell me what is needed?
Normal: CS-1 ? - No, 4
Edit: Also, you have circles wrong placed [Formation], 00:41:116 (2) - it goes here 00:41:035 - .- Notes follow the voice in this part.
Then some parts doesn't follow the music. Try following more at the drummer and guitar, it'd feel more natural.
00:57:971 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Try adding a slider on every third.- Listen to the song by 25%, the notes fall into drums.
here's the image bigger:NiceWolf4 wrote:
AJeyB wrote:
Hi.
Please, check the timming, it's wrong ! - I think the timing is ok, if not, tell me what is needed? Offset:10423 fits better, from where should the spinner start.
Normal: CS-1 ? - No, 4
Edit: Also, you have circles wrong placed [Formation], 00:41:116 (2) - it goes here 00:41:035 - .- Notes follow the voice in this part.
Then some parts doesn't follow the music. Try following more at the drummer and guitar, it'd feel more natural. This was an advice
00:57:971 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Try adding a slider on every third.- Listen to the song by 25%, the notes fall into drums. i meant this
[Extra]
- 00:18:615(1,2) - очень резкий прыжок (нужно уменьшить расстояние).
- 00:31:841(3) - думаю, лучше убрать эту ноту, если прислушаться к музыке; а там уже и спинер подогнать можно.
- 00:44:422(1,2,3; 1,2,3) - тут тоже большой прыжок.
- 01:07:486(1,2) - Ну тут, думаю, можно и оставить этот прыжок, но всё-же, смотри сам
- 01:22:325(1) - По-моему, этот слайдер неуместен (Попробуй как-нибудь заменить)
- 01:35:390(1) - начинай спинер от этого момента
- 02:35:873(1) - По-моему, этот слайдер неуместен
- 02:39:422(4) - Думаю, этот слайдер не стоит реверсировать
- 02:47:648(1) - Этот слайдер нужно немного продлить на 1 тик (1/4)
- 03:19:744(1) - По-моему, этот слайдер неуместен
Topic Starter
Shadren wrote:
[Extra]
- 00:18:615(1,2) - очень резкий прыжок (нужно уменьшить расстояние). - здесь прыжок даже меньше, чем тут 00:13:454 (1,2)
- 00:31:841(3) - думаю, лучше убрать эту ноту, если прислушаться к музыке; а там уже и спинер подогнать можно. - исправлено
- 00:44:422(1,2,3; 1,2,3) - тут тоже большой прыжок. - здесь прыжок такой же, как тут 00:13:454 (1,2)
- 01:22:325(1) - По-моему, этот слайдер неуместен (Попробуй как-нибудь заменить) - изменено(и остальные похожие)
- 01:35:390(1) - начинай спинер от этого момента - изменено
- 02:39:422(4) - Думаю, этот слайдер не стоит реверсировать - изменено
- 02:47:648(1) - Этот слайдер нужно немного продлить на 1 тик (1/4) - изменено
Hi, sorry for the late M4M.
[General]
- You don't need commas inbetween tags.
- I don't think "kagamine", "rin" or "formation" needs to be in tags because it's already in the song info
- Romanised title should be "Kuukan ⇔ Formation"
- Add "Shadren" to tags since he made a GD
[Insane]
I think I'll try to help you with hitsounding this mod. I'm not really good at hitsounding but it doesn't look like you have anything.
For a normal clap I think this would sound nice: http://puu.sh/7JnyN.wav
- It's kind of strange to have AR8 Hard and Insane at 186BPM. Change Insane to AR9 maybe?
- 00:11:841 (2) - clap on head
- 00:12:164 (3) - ^
- 00:12:486 (5) - clap
- 00:12:809 (6) - clap on tail
- 00:13:131 (8) - clap
- 00:13:454 (9) - clap on tail
- 00:13:615 (10) - replace slider with a circle?
- 00:13:938 (1) - finish on head maybe?
- 00:14:422 (2,3) - clap on heads
- 00:15:067 (5) - clap
- 00:15:390 (6) - clap on tail
- 00:15:712 (8) - clap
- 00:15:873 (9,10) - replace with a stream? I hear something at 00:16:115 that you didn't have anything on so I feel like a stream would
fit better - 00:16:519 (1) - finish
- 00:17:002 (2,3) - clap on tails
- 00:18:777 (10) - replace slider with circle?
00:20:390 (5,6,7) - try this? - 00:32:486 (2) - replace with this?
- 00:36:357 (3) - replace slider with circle?
- 00:37:809 (5) - blanket with the tail of (4)?
- 00:39:260 (1,2) - replace with this?
- 00:40:551 (2) - finish
- 00:42:325 (3) - stack on two and reblanket (3)
- 00:44:422 (1,2) - replace with stream?
- 00:50:228 (3) - finish on head? I'd also suggest mapping the BGM instead of the vocals here but whatevs
- 00:52:002 (8) - bring closer to (1)?
- 00:56:680 (1) - move slider to 00:56:841, end at 00:57:325 and delete spinner? Then start mapping again when vocals start
- 01:25:873 - kind of weird to end kiai time here just to begin it again at 01:26:196. Delete this one and end kiai at 01:26:196 ?
- 01:28:454 (9) - replace with circle
- 01:30:712 (9,10) - replace with stream?
- 01:48:777 (5) - delete this? i don't hear anything underneath it
- 01:59:422 (2,3) - not too sure if you didn't stack the ends of these two perfectly on purpose or not.
- 02:04:260 (8,1) - blanket better?
02:10:228 - shorten the spinner and start mapping here? - 02:25:067 (2,3) - maybe space (3) a little away from (2) to make it more visible
- 02:41:680 (2) - make this a repeating slider like the others?
- 03:19:422 (5) - move to 03:19:583 ?
[Normal]
I think you should use more blankets in this difficulty. Makes normals look nice.
- 01:50:551 (3) - extend slider to 01:51:196 ?
- 02:56:196 - maybe delete this spinner and insert a break time instead?
- 03:01:841 (3) - remove NC?
- 03:03:131 - start NC here?
[Hard]
I'm not sure if you like my hitsounding or not so I stopped giving advice on that. If you did like it, PM me if you need any more help.
You shouldn't feel constricted to use DS as much as you would in a normal. Needs jumps.
- 00:59:583 (1) - move so it's not touching (4)
- 01:10:873 (1) - blanket to (4)?
- 01:24:906 (3) - blanket?
- 01:50:551 (3,4,5) - make it look nicer by doing this?
- 02:11:841 (1) - move so it's not touching (4)
- 02:25:067 (2) - ^
- 02:38:454 (3) - blanket better?
- 03:22:325 (3) - ^
Topic Starter
Knotts wrote:
Hi, sorry for the late M4M.[General]
- You don't need commas inbetween tags.
- I don't think "kagamine", "rin" or "formation" needs to be in tags because it's already in the song info - changed
- Romanised title should be "Kuukan ⇔ Formation" - changed
- Add "Shadren" to tags since he made a GD - changed
[Insane]
I think I'll try to help you with hitsounding this mod. I'm not really good at hitsounding but it doesn't look like you have anything.
For a normal clap I think this would sound nice: http://puu.sh/7JnyN.wav
- It's kind of strange to have AR8 Hard and Insane at 186BPM. Change Insane to AR9 maybe? - Because of difficulty made in pairs. Hard - Insane. Extra - Formation
- 00:13:615 (10) - replace slider with a circle? - changed
- 00:15:873 (9,10) - replace with a stream? I hear something at 00:16:115 that you didn't have anything on so I feel like a stream would
fit better - changed- 00:18:777 (10) - replace slider with circle? - changed
00:20:390 (5,6,7) - try this? - changed- 00:32:486 (2) - replace with this? - changed
- 00:36:357 (3) - replace slider with circle? - changed
- 00:37:809 (5) - blanket with the tail of (4)? - changed
- 00:39:260 (1,2) - replace with this? - not changed
- 00:42:325 (3) - stack on two and reblanket (3) - changed
- 00:44:422 (1,2) - replace with stream? - not changed
- 00:50:228 (3) - finish on head? I'd also suggest mapping the BGM instead of the vocals here but whatevs - not changed
- 00:52:002 (8) - bring closer to (1)? - changed
- 00:56:680 (1) - move slider to 00:56:841, end at 00:57:325 and delete spinner? Then start mapping again when vocals start - changed
- 01:25:873 - kind of weird to end kiai time here just to begin it again at 01:26:196. Delete this one and end kiai at 01:26:196 ?
- 01:28:454 (9) - replace with circle - changed
- 01:30:712 (9,10) - replace with stream? - changed
- 01:48:777 (5) - delete this? i don't hear anything underneath it - changed
- 01:59:422 (2,3) - not too sure if you didn't stack the ends of these two perfectly on purpose or not. - changed
- 02:04:260 (8,1) - blanket better? - changed
- 02:10:228 - shorten the spinner and start mapping here? - changed
- 02:25:067 (2,3) - maybe space (3) a little away from (2) to make it more visible - changed
- 02:41:680 (2) - make this a repeating slider like the others? - changed
- 03:19:422 (5) - move to 03:19:583 ? - changed
[Normal]
I think you should use more blankets in this difficulty. Makes normals look nice.
- 01:50:551 (3) - extend slider to 01:51:196 ? - changed
- 02:56:196 - maybe delete this spinner and insert a break time instead? - changed
- 03:01:841 (3) - remove NC? - changed
- 03:03:131 - start NC here? - changed
[Hard]I'm not sure if you like my hitsounding or not so I stopped giving advice on that. If you did like it, PM me if you need any more help.
You shouldn't feel constricted to use DS as much as you would in a normal. Needs jumps.
- 00:59:583 (1) - move so it's not touching (4) - changed
- 01:10:873 (1) - blanket to (4)? - changed
- 01:24:906 (3) - blanket? - changed
- 01:50:551 (3,4,5) - make it look nicer by doing this? - changed
- 02:11:841 (1) - move so it's not touching (4) - changed
- 02:25:067 (2) - ^
- 02:38:454 (3) - blanket better? - changed
- 03:22:325 (3) - ^
Topic Starter
Я видел некоторые карты без Easy. Даже если она необходима, моя фантазия иссякла. Я не могу представить эту карту еще легче, чем Normal -_--Bakari- wrote:
Привет, тебе бы изи сделать. У тебя сейчас получается неранкабильный мапсет, т.к. нету сложности достаточно легкой для новичков.
Easy:
00:13:454 (2,1) - DS not 0.9
1 accidental KIAI
Normal:
4 accidental KIAIs
Hard:
Quite a lot of objects not snapped
01:59:745 (1,2) - even distance prefered... compare to the ones on above it
03:13:131 (4) - break time
Insane:
6 KIAI
01:16:680 (2) - shift it to the left a bit
01:52:486 (2,3) - shift forward to blue line
01:53:454 (2,3) - ^^
Extra&Formation
4 KIAI
In general: rhythm right, but please make all difficulty KIAI time constant
00:13:454 (2,1) - DS not 0.9
1 accidental KIAI
Normal:
4 accidental KIAIs
Hard:
Quite a lot of objects not snapped
01:59:745 (1,2) - even distance prefered... compare to the ones on above it
03:13:131 (4) - break time
Insane:
6 KIAI
01:16:680 (2) - shift it to the left a bit
01:52:486 (2,3) - shift forward to blue line
01:53:454 (2,3) - ^^
Extra&Formation
4 KIAI
In general: rhythm right, but please make all difficulty KIAI time constant
Topic Starter
Faan wrote:
Easy:
00:13:454 (2,1) - DS not 0.9 - No, 0.9
1 accidental KIAI - there is a pause in this place
Normal:
4 accidental KIAIs
Hard:
Quite a lot of objects not snapped - changed
01:59:745 (1,2) - even distance prefered... compare to the ones on above it - changed
03:13:131 (4) - break time - BT is not made specifically
Insane:
6 KIAI
01:16:680 (2) - shift it to the left a bit - changed
01:52:486 (2,3) - shift forward to blue line - not changed
01:53:454 (2,3) - ^^
Extra&Formation
4 KIAI
In general: rhythm right, but please make all difficulty KIAI time constant
[Formation]
Based on what do you start new combos?
Ex.: something like
might look really messy..?
Why is the BG of this song RIN if it's GUMI that is singing?!
Based on what do you start new combos?
Ex.: something like
might look really messy..?
Why is the BG of this song RIN if it's GUMI that is singing?!
- 00:39:906 (1,2) - this 3/4 stack is kinda hard to get correctly the first time anyone plays this thanks to your low stack leniency
- 00:40:874 (1,2) - ^ I would consider spacing them (3/4 beats are awesome for triangles~)
- 00:44:664 - + 00:44:986 - undermapped stream D: That's supposed to be an extra diff and the longest stream there is 5 circles ? D:
- 00:56:681 (1) - firstly: if this slider is supposed to be regular, then move the 2nd anchor that is up one gird unit to the left:
- Secondly you're ignoring the stronger guitar sounds in 00:56:841 - and 00:57:002 - as well as 00:57:325 - by using such a slider.
Personally i'd go with something like this on that part:SPOILER
in that case the previous suggestino about that slider is obsolete - 00:57:971 (1,2,3) - I have no clue why you're placing them this way..?? The vocal is much stronger than the other part IMO so I'd move all these 3x 1/2 things to the RED tick in order to have the vocal mapped ?SPOILER
Before you turn this one down saying that you want to map the strong sounds on the white ticks aswell: you can also now replace every 00:58:131 (3) - with an 1/2 slider to have those mapped aswell (which even fits the vocals)
If you decide to implement this mod you'll need another circle for the vocal here though: 01:01:680 - - 01:02:810 (5) - these 4 sliders map vocals and yet you're ignoring the vocal at 01:02:970 - ??
- 01:03:777 (1,2,3) - same suggestion as 00:57:971 (1,2,3) - applies here aswell (and in all of the other copies ofc)
- 01:09:502 - undermapped ? D:
- 01:11:760 - ^
- 01:12:890 - ^
- 01:14:664 - ^
- 01:18:212 - ^ (this stream should actually end in 01:18:615 -)
- 01:22:487 (1) - this blanket could be way better
- 01:26:519 - why are you ignoring this vocal?
- 01:30:954 - undermapped ? D:
- 01:35:229 (4) - a triplet might go here?
- 01:48:616 (8) - blanket could be somehow nicer (use the approachcirle of 01:48:455 (7) - in order to make sth like this:
- 01:54:745 (3) - moving the anchors so that it actually forms a more regular shape might look nicer:
- 01:59:744 - ?? the sound is clearly audieble or do you only want to map these if gumi is also singing
- 02:01:681 (1) - why isn't this a triplet like all the others ? ;o
- 02:08:939 (1) - copy pasta and now there are even vocals on the lines i previously pointed out...
- 02:10:229 (1) - see above about these
- 02:15:551 - starting here you got loud banging sounds on every 1/2 tick...
- 02:20:470 - undermapped.
- 02:21:197 (1,2,3) - this is an 1/6 stream from 02:21:088 - until 02:21:196 - and 02:21:357 - until 02:21:519 (1) - in the music:
- 02:23:051 - undermapping D:
- 02:25:309 - ^
- 02:28:212 - ^
- 02:31:760 - ^
- 02:32:083 - ^
- 02:36:035 (1) - this blanket could be better ;o (i mentioned and screened one above so i won't do that here)
- 02:40:551 (3) - might replace the end of teach triplet here with an 1/4 slider, so the distance between each object is 1/2 (it's more playable and the sound for that is there):
- 02:46:681 (3) - this is supposedly one stream up until 02:47:648 (2) - in the music, so you might aswell map it as such?
- 02:50:470 - undermapped D:
- 02:50:631 - ^
- 02:56:035 (1,2,3,4,5) - might move it a bit so it stacks with 02:55:229 (1) - ?
- 03:02:326 (4) - inconsistent spacing (antijump after 1/4 jumps)
- 03:02:567 - undermapped D:
- 03:02:728 - ^
- 03:03:051 - ^
- 03:03:696 - here's 1/6 again, as well as 03:04:019 - (i explained a similar pattern above.)
I'll edit in a mod for the Extra later.
Edit: here
[Extra]
Might consider highering the stack leniency if you're having it the lowest on the Formation diff...
Might consider highering the stack leniency if you're having it the lowest on the Formation diff...
- 00:13:615 (2) - at first i thought that this is intentional, but because you do this nowhere else, I have to assume this is an accident and therefore it should be stacked properly with 00:13:938 (1) -
- 00:17:567 (4,5) - stack them properly :<
- 00:20:148 (4,5) - stack them properly maybe
- 00:20:793 (7,8) - ^
- 00:39:502 - undermapped D:
- 00:39:825 - ^
- 00:39:906 (1,2,3) - maybe use a higher spacing for these triangles because the fact that this are 3/4 notes is not really that easy to see the way they are now?
- 00:41:841 (1) - I think the vocal is on the white tick here: 00:42:164 -
- 00:58:615 (1) - I'd map the vocals in this part again, because they are so dominant D:
- 01:07:244 (4,1) - Spacing between those 2 should be bigger IMO
- 01:09:260 (5,6,7,8,1) -
- Stack this stream correctly with the slider if you're gonna keep it
- you could also add some distance in there, because the way it is now is hella cramped D:SPOILER
Something like that wouldn't be that bad either, would it ?
- 01:14:099 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^ this is basically the same thing
- 01:16:035 (2) - the vocal is on the white tick here...
- 01:17:002 (2) - ...^
- 01:17:970 (2) - In this case the return arrow is not really visible until 01:17:728 - (the slider 01:17:002 (2) - disappears), you should consider making this readable
- 01:18:615 (1) - this one could also end on the blue tick for the vocal (lol.)
- 01:19:906 (1) - ^ (might look at 02:02:486 (5) - for something similar)
- 01:21:196 (1) - ^ and repeat until the red tick and have a circle added in 01:21:841 -:
- 01:22:970 - might consider adding a circle here for the vocal?
- 02:10:873 (1) - Same suggestion as for the Formation diff
- 02:22:486 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - i think i already said something about a pattern like this
- 02:27:648 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^
- 02:29:583 (2) - from here on it's copy pasta so I won't go into detail about those anymore.
- 02:47:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - might be more creative to actually make this a stream that moves instead of a giant stack?
- 03:16:035 (1) - Could be shorter by one tick again
- 03:17:325 (1) - ^
Great map! I'd star it if I could.
Oh btw, just one thing.. why does this : 01:01:357 (3) - have different distance snap? change it to 0,3x
Oh btw, just one thing.. why does this : 01:01:357 (3) - have different distance snap? change it to 0,3x
Topic Starter
Thank you, but I don't understand, in what diffucult you've noticed wrong DS?AndreasHD wrote:
Great map! I'd star it if I could.
Oh btw, just one thing.. why does this : 01:01:357 (3) - have different distance snap? change it to 0,3x
Oh lol, so sorry! I ment in the 'extra' difficulty.NiceWolf4 wrote:
Thank you, but I don't understand, in what diffucult you've noticed wrong DS?AndreasHD wrote:
Great map! I'd star it if I could.
Oh btw, just one thing.. why does this : 01:01:357 (3) - have different distance snap? change it to 0,3x
Topic Starter
Thanks for your mod. ChangedAndreasHD wrote:
Oh lol, so sorry! I ment in the 'extra' difficulty.
Please read the guidelines to what warrants kudosu and what not: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Kudosu
Hi~~
found your map on beatmap listing-mod request
good song, so im gonna drop in a short mod..
[General]
bad combo colors
try this
Combo1 : 192,179,154
Combo2 : 128,128,128
Combo3 : 225,225,225
Combo4 : 158,189,205
or if you want to make your own, just make it close to gray.
[Formation]
00:42:164 (2) - should end on red tick i think..
00:45:067 - to 00:50:067 - you didnt use sliders? the part has lots of 1/4 and circles..
01:03:131 - to 01:06:196 - make other slider here curve,, so not too repetitive
01:08:293 (1,2,3) - i think you need to familiarize the player here with this kind of rhythm, by using reverse sliders, not just throw it to their face by using circles, or else theyll lose combo.
01:48:615 (8) - if i were you, i wouldnt use 4 gray points,,
01:52:164 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - too slow section to use these, maybe convert to reverse sliders?
02:10:067 - to 02:13:938 - use curve slider again..
02:57:970 - to 03:01:035 - ^
03:07:002 (2) - NC?
nice beatmap i hope this gets ranked soon, and sorry for my short mod..
found your map on beatmap listing-mod request
good song, so im gonna drop in a short mod..
[General]
bad combo colors
try this
Combo1 : 192,179,154
Combo2 : 128,128,128
Combo3 : 225,225,225
Combo4 : 158,189,205
or if you want to make your own, just make it close to gray.
[Formation]
00:42:164 (2) - should end on red tick i think..
00:45:067 - to 00:50:067 - you didnt use sliders? the part has lots of 1/4 and circles..
01:03:131 - to 01:06:196 - make other slider here curve,, so not too repetitive
01:08:293 (1,2,3) - i think you need to familiarize the player here with this kind of rhythm, by using reverse sliders, not just throw it to their face by using circles, or else theyll lose combo.
01:48:615 (8) - if i were you, i wouldnt use 4 gray points,,
01:52:164 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - too slow section to use these, maybe convert to reverse sliders?
02:10:067 - to 02:13:938 - use curve slider again..
02:57:970 - to 03:01:035 - ^
03:07:002 (2) - NC?
nice beatmap i hope this gets ranked soon, and sorry for my short mod..
Topic Starter
Thanks for your mod, You really helped me with combo colors. I hope too that the beatmap gets rankedRenzMichael wrote:
Hi~~
found your map on beatmap listing-mod request
good song, so im gonna drop in a short mod..
[General]
bad combo colors
try this
Combo1 : 192,179,154
Combo2 : 128,128,128
Combo3 : 225,225,225
Combo4 : 158,189,205
or if you want to make your own, just make it close to gray. - hmm, thanks, I could not find suitable colors
[Formation]
00:42:164 (2) - should end on red tick i think.. - there isn't beat
00:45:067 - to 00:50:067 - you didnt use sliders? the part has lots of 1/4 and circles..- not changed
01:03:131 - to 01:06:196 - make other slider here curve,, so not too repetitive - changed
01:08:293 (1,2,3) - i think you need to familiarize the player here with this kind of rhythm, by using reverse sliders, not just throw it to their face by using circles, or else theyll lose combo. - changed
01:48:615 (8) - if i were you, i wouldnt use 4 gray points,, - changed at my discretion
01:52:164 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - too slow section to use these, maybe convert to reverse sliders? - changed
02:10:067 - to 02:13:938 - use curve slider again.. - changed
02:57:970 - to 03:01:035 - ^ - changed
03:07:002 (2) - NC? - not changed
nice beatmap i hope this gets ranked soon, and sorry for my short mod..
couldn't help but notice that in your Formation difficulty there's a DS issue 01:09:260 (3,4,5,6,1) - the stream is slightly to the right of the slider instead of being with the stream.
Still in Formation difficulty, 02:10:067 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - try to change certain patterns because 6 times the same pattern on an Extra is very repetitive
02:15:873 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - again same pattern over and over
02:58:454 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
Sorry for bringing you back at the start 01:03:615 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - but same as earlier try to create different jump patterns
>///< still learning to mod so didn't find much else
Still in Formation difficulty, 02:10:067 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - try to change certain patterns because 6 times the same pattern on an Extra is very repetitive
02:15:873 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - again same pattern over and over
02:58:454 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
Sorry for bringing you back at the start 01:03:615 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - but same as earlier try to create different jump patterns
>///< still learning to mod so didn't find much else
Topic Starter
Thanks you for mod!EmiyaShirou wrote:
couldn't help but notice that in your Formation difficulty there's a DS issue 01:09:260 (3,4,5,6,1) - the stream is slightly to the right of the slider instead of being with the stream. - changed
Still in Formation difficulty, 02:10:067 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - try to change certain patterns because 6 times the same pattern on an Extra is very repetitive
02:15:873 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - again same pattern over and over
02:58:454 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
Sorry for bringing you back at the start 01:03:615 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - but same as earlier try to create different jump patterns
>///< still learning to mod so didn't find much else
(Everything else is pending)
Mod here~
Any questions about my mod post then feel free to pm me ingame.
[General]
Only "Normal" and "Formation" begin with a spinner. This isn't consistent, so I would suggest either getting rid of the spinner in both diffs, or adding a spinner on the other diffs.
[Easy]
00:20:873 (3) - This slider feels very weird and out of place since it repeats on a blue tick. I recommend you make the slider longer so it repeats on a red tick or make it not repeat at all.
00:38:615 (2) - Add a note here? I think it would be better because it will be more consistent and keep a steady beat within the beatmap.
00:42:486 (1,2) - This blanket isn't great. You should try moving (2) to x:308 y:256 so the blanket becomes better.
00:55:390 (2) - Add a clap at the end of this slider? I think it would be more consistent since other downbeats in the map have claps as well.
01:06:357 (3) - This slider goes a way to close to the border of the screen. I think it would be more comfortable to play if it was a little closer to the center.
01:11:196 (1) - Add a clap at the end of this slider? It would be more consistent imo and sound better.
01:24:906 (1,1) - This blanket isn't great either, try moving 01:26:196 (1) - to x:347 y:190 so the blanket becomes nicer and more sophisticated.
01:35:712 (3) - This slider sounds unfitting, refer to my first suggestion because this is pretty much the same issue.
02:21:841 (1) - This kiai section seems to be a rotated copypaste from the first kiai. I don't see anything wrong with that, however doing this means that the hitsounds should also be the same. But I noticed that the hitsounds are different, so I suggest you go over the hitsounds in this section and add/remove what is appropriate.
03:08:293 (3,2) - The repeat arrow on (2) might be a little unclear on certain skins due to the hitburst blocking it. So I suggest you rearrange the notes so that this isn't an issue.
[Normal]
00:20:873 (5,6) - This blanket is slightly off. I suggest moving (5) to x:190 y:155 so the blanket looks better.
01:12:648 (4) - Add a clap at the end of this slider? I think it would be more consistent.
01:21:841 (2) - See my above suggestion, add a clap to improve consistency.
02:28:938 (4) - Again, see my above suggestion. This is even more important because 02:27:648 (2) - has two claps, so why not this one?
02:39:422 (5) - The reverse arrow on this slider may be a little hard to see on some skins due to 02:37:970 (3) - blocking it.
03:16:680 (2) - Add a clap here? For reasons that I've already stated in this mod, it'll become consistent with the map's future claps.
[Hard]
00:42:970 (4,5) - This blanket doesn't look too good. Try moving (5) to x:399 y:313 to make the blanket look nicer. Bear in mind though that doing this would require you to readjust the following notes to avoid spacing errors.
00:49:422 (1,3) - I suggest that you get rid of the clap at the end of (1) and instead add a clap at (3). Doing this would make it way more consistent with the song and the other claps.
01:49:583 (1,2) - This blanket doesn't look nice, try moving (2) to x:216 y:152 so that the blanket looks nicer.
01:51:519 (6,1) - Here we have another bad blanket. Try moving (1) to x:201 y:144 so it looks nicer
02:51:357 (3) - I suggest shortening this slider so it ends on the white tick. I think this is better because it'll be consistent with how the other break times start and of course, go with the music better.
[Insane]
00:36:196 (6) - This slider is likely going to confuse people into hitting it too early since the last few notes were 1/2 apart.
00:39:906 (1,2,1,2) - This is really confusing to read because the reverse arrow under (2) is obscured and the two slider tracks overlap each other, so please fix this.
00:56:841 (3) - This slider was also confusing since I wasn't expecting the slideball to stop moving like that. This is unrankable, so I highly suggest fixing this.
01:17:002 (3) - Add a clap at the start of this slider for consistency.
01:54:099 (1) - This sv change is unnecessary and unreadable. Why is it unreadable? Well, first the slider has no ticks to indicate an sv change, and secondly the change is just so sudden and doesn't go with the music..
02:04:099 (7,8,1) - Remove the NC at (1) and add an NC at (7) instead. This is for both, consistency and so that the stack at 02:04:260 (8,1) - isn't in two colours.
02:36:035 (1) - Add one last clap here? Doing this would better because the clap pattern would end on a nice downbeat.
02:39:583 (7) - This is another sv change is unnecessary and unreadable. Why is it unreadable? Well, first the slider has no ticks to indicate an sv change, and secondly the change is just so sudden and doesn't go with the music.
[Extra]
00:20:390 (6) - Add a clap at the start of this slider? I think it would be more consistent and end the clap pattern nicely.
00:32:002 (1) - Map out this spinner? I think this should be done because this part of the map is mapped out on the insane diff, so why not on extra? The diff that's suppose to be harder. This can be easily mapped anyway since it's an extra.
00:40:551 (4) - I suggest you add a note here, because at this point in time there is a clear audible note, so it would be strange and unfitting not to have a note here.
00:56:841 (1) - Map out this spinner as well. I think this should be done because this part of the map is mapped out on the insane diff, so why not on extra? The diff that's suppose to be harder. This can be easily mapped anyway since it's an extra.
01:17:002 (2) - I suggest adding a clap at the start of this slider so it is more consistent with the previous claps.
01:17:648 (1) - Map out this spinner as well. I think this should be done because this part of the map is mapped out on the insane diff, so why not on extra? The diff that's suppose to be harder. This can be easily mapped anyway since it's an extra.
01:26:196 (1) -Map this break out, it is an extra and this break clearly has notes that can potentially be mapped.
02:31:196 (1) - Map out this spinner as well. I think this should be done because this part of the map is mapped out on the insane diff, so why not on extra? The diff that's suppose to be harder. This can be easily mapped anyway since it's an extra.
02:39:422 (4) - Map out this break too. It was mapped out in insane, just like the spinners I suggested and this can really be mapped in an extra diff...
03:13:454 (5) - Add a note here and give it a clap, I think it would be better because it fits with the music and you'll be able to complete the clap pattern.
For the most part it's a pretty solid diff, but remember which is harder, insane or extra? It's only natural for parts in the easier insane difficulty to be mapped in extra as well, else it just doesn't make sense. Please consider these suggestions.
[Formation]
00:20:873 (2,6,10) - I suggest you add claps on these notes. It'll continue the clap pattern, keeping consistency. I think it'll sound much better.
00:40:873 (1) - Add a finish here, it'll keep consistency since 00:39:906 (1) - has a finish.
00:52:809 (1) - Map this spinner out, the two easier diffs have this spinner mapped out and it's easy to map when the difficulty is extra+
01:15:712 (1) - This sv change doesn't fit the music so players will probably miss or taildrop here since it's unreadable. Why is it unreadable? Well the reason is that there's no sliderticks to let the player know the slider has sped up, like I previously mentioned in this mod. I suggest getting rid of the sv change.
01:36:519 (9) - Map this break out. It is very easy to map in extra+ and the normal extra has it mapped out, so why not here? In the harder diff?
01:51:519 (9) - 01:51:841 (10) - I suggest you add notes in these places because this gap feels awkward, leaving the player waiting. It would also keep consistency because 01:48:938 (8,9) - has been mapped in a similar way. If you were mapping to the piano there, then you could disregard my suggestion and add a stream here instead. Don't just leave this empty.
02:05:067 (1) - Map this spinner out. Why do the two easier difficulties have it mapped and not this? It doesn't make sense imo.
03:00:067 (3,1,2,3) - So that it is more consistent, I recommend that you add a clap at the end of the first (3) and remove both claps at the end of the second (3)
03:13:454 (3) - Like in extra, I suggest that you add a note here and give it a clap so that the clap pattern is able to complete and so that it can go with the music.
Well, guess that's it from me. Overall, it was an enjoyable map, but the diffs (the three harder ones especially) have consistency issues that don't make much sense :/ Good luck on that rank!
Any questions about my mod post then feel free to pm me ingame.
[General]
Only "Normal" and "Formation" begin with a spinner. This isn't consistent, so I would suggest either getting rid of the spinner in both diffs, or adding a spinner on the other diffs.
[Easy]
00:20:873 (3) - This slider feels very weird and out of place since it repeats on a blue tick. I recommend you make the slider longer so it repeats on a red tick or make it not repeat at all.
00:38:615 (2) - Add a note here? I think it would be better because it will be more consistent and keep a steady beat within the beatmap.
00:42:486 (1,2) - This blanket isn't great. You should try moving (2) to x:308 y:256 so the blanket becomes better.
00:55:390 (2) - Add a clap at the end of this slider? I think it would be more consistent since other downbeats in the map have claps as well.
01:06:357 (3) - This slider goes a way to close to the border of the screen. I think it would be more comfortable to play if it was a little closer to the center.
01:11:196 (1) - Add a clap at the end of this slider? It would be more consistent imo and sound better.
01:24:906 (1,1) - This blanket isn't great either, try moving 01:26:196 (1) - to x:347 y:190 so the blanket becomes nicer and more sophisticated.
01:35:712 (3) - This slider sounds unfitting, refer to my first suggestion because this is pretty much the same issue.
02:21:841 (1) - This kiai section seems to be a rotated copypaste from the first kiai. I don't see anything wrong with that, however doing this means that the hitsounds should also be the same. But I noticed that the hitsounds are different, so I suggest you go over the hitsounds in this section and add/remove what is appropriate.
03:08:293 (3,2) - The repeat arrow on (2) might be a little unclear on certain skins due to the hitburst blocking it. So I suggest you rearrange the notes so that this isn't an issue.
[Normal]
00:20:873 (5,6) - This blanket is slightly off. I suggest moving (5) to x:190 y:155 so the blanket looks better.
01:12:648 (4) - Add a clap at the end of this slider? I think it would be more consistent.
01:21:841 (2) - See my above suggestion, add a clap to improve consistency.
02:28:938 (4) - Again, see my above suggestion. This is even more important because 02:27:648 (2) - has two claps, so why not this one?
02:39:422 (5) - The reverse arrow on this slider may be a little hard to see on some skins due to 02:37:970 (3) - blocking it.
03:16:680 (2) - Add a clap here? For reasons that I've already stated in this mod, it'll become consistent with the map's future claps.
[Hard]
00:42:970 (4,5) - This blanket doesn't look too good. Try moving (5) to x:399 y:313 to make the blanket look nicer. Bear in mind though that doing this would require you to readjust the following notes to avoid spacing errors.
00:49:422 (1,3) - I suggest that you get rid of the clap at the end of (1) and instead add a clap at (3). Doing this would make it way more consistent with the song and the other claps.
01:49:583 (1,2) - This blanket doesn't look nice, try moving (2) to x:216 y:152 so that the blanket looks nicer.
01:51:519 (6,1) - Here we have another bad blanket. Try moving (1) to x:201 y:144 so it looks nicer
02:51:357 (3) - I suggest shortening this slider so it ends on the white tick. I think this is better because it'll be consistent with how the other break times start and of course, go with the music better.
[Insane]
00:36:196 (6) - This slider is likely going to confuse people into hitting it too early since the last few notes were 1/2 apart.
00:39:906 (1,2,1,2) - This is really confusing to read because the reverse arrow under (2) is obscured and the two slider tracks overlap each other, so please fix this.
00:56:841 (3) - This slider was also confusing since I wasn't expecting the slideball to stop moving like that. This is unrankable, so I highly suggest fixing this.
01:17:002 (3) - Add a clap at the start of this slider for consistency.
01:54:099 (1) - This sv change is unnecessary and unreadable. Why is it unreadable? Well, first the slider has no ticks to indicate an sv change, and secondly the change is just so sudden and doesn't go with the music..
02:04:099 (7,8,1) - Remove the NC at (1) and add an NC at (7) instead. This is for both, consistency and so that the stack at 02:04:260 (8,1) - isn't in two colours.
02:36:035 (1) - Add one last clap here? Doing this would better because the clap pattern would end on a nice downbeat.
02:39:583 (7) - This is another sv change is unnecessary and unreadable. Why is it unreadable? Well, first the slider has no ticks to indicate an sv change, and secondly the change is just so sudden and doesn't go with the music.
[Extra]
00:20:390 (6) - Add a clap at the start of this slider? I think it would be more consistent and end the clap pattern nicely.
00:32:002 (1) - Map out this spinner? I think this should be done because this part of the map is mapped out on the insane diff, so why not on extra? The diff that's suppose to be harder. This can be easily mapped anyway since it's an extra.
00:40:551 (4) - I suggest you add a note here, because at this point in time there is a clear audible note, so it would be strange and unfitting not to have a note here.
00:56:841 (1) - Map out this spinner as well. I think this should be done because this part of the map is mapped out on the insane diff, so why not on extra? The diff that's suppose to be harder. This can be easily mapped anyway since it's an extra.
01:17:002 (2) - I suggest adding a clap at the start of this slider so it is more consistent with the previous claps.
01:17:648 (1) - Map out this spinner as well. I think this should be done because this part of the map is mapped out on the insane diff, so why not on extra? The diff that's suppose to be harder. This can be easily mapped anyway since it's an extra.
01:26:196 (1) -Map this break out, it is an extra and this break clearly has notes that can potentially be mapped.
02:31:196 (1) - Map out this spinner as well. I think this should be done because this part of the map is mapped out on the insane diff, so why not on extra? The diff that's suppose to be harder. This can be easily mapped anyway since it's an extra.
02:39:422 (4) - Map out this break too. It was mapped out in insane, just like the spinners I suggested and this can really be mapped in an extra diff...
03:13:454 (5) - Add a note here and give it a clap, I think it would be better because it fits with the music and you'll be able to complete the clap pattern.
For the most part it's a pretty solid diff, but remember which is harder, insane or extra? It's only natural for parts in the easier insane difficulty to be mapped in extra as well, else it just doesn't make sense. Please consider these suggestions.
[Formation]
00:20:873 (2,6,10) - I suggest you add claps on these notes. It'll continue the clap pattern, keeping consistency. I think it'll sound much better.
00:40:873 (1) - Add a finish here, it'll keep consistency since 00:39:906 (1) - has a finish.
00:52:809 (1) - Map this spinner out, the two easier diffs have this spinner mapped out and it's easy to map when the difficulty is extra+
01:15:712 (1) - This sv change doesn't fit the music so players will probably miss or taildrop here since it's unreadable. Why is it unreadable? Well the reason is that there's no sliderticks to let the player know the slider has sped up, like I previously mentioned in this mod. I suggest getting rid of the sv change.
01:36:519 (9) - Map this break out. It is very easy to map in extra+ and the normal extra has it mapped out, so why not here? In the harder diff?
01:51:519 (9) - 01:51:841 (10) - I suggest you add notes in these places because this gap feels awkward, leaving the player waiting. It would also keep consistency because 01:48:938 (8,9) - has been mapped in a similar way. If you were mapping to the piano there, then you could disregard my suggestion and add a stream here instead. Don't just leave this empty.
02:05:067 (1) - Map this spinner out. Why do the two easier difficulties have it mapped and not this? It doesn't make sense imo.
03:00:067 (3,1,2,3) - So that it is more consistent, I recommend that you add a clap at the end of the first (3) and remove both claps at the end of the second (3)
03:13:454 (3) - Like in extra, I suggest that you add a note here and give it a clap so that the clap pattern is able to complete and so that it can go with the music.
Well, guess that's it from me. Overall, it was an enjoyable map, but the diffs (the three harder ones especially) have consistency issues that don't make much sense :/ Good luck on that rank!
This beatmap is awesome and i love the song too. WHY ISN'T IT RANKED YET?!?!?! Like oh my goodness its awesome
Хорошая мапа, жаль что не ранкнули ее 
Just some little correction ... ( if they're useless ... just ignore them ..)
Hard , Extra , Insane and Information:
03:13:278 add break
Insane:
01:26:841 (3) XY change to -> X:72 Y:200
(4) XY change to -> X:56 Y:184
01:29:683 (4) XY change to -> x:376 Y:112
(5) XY change to -> x:400 Y:88
(changed x-axis and y-axis of these because It's will be hard to click these beat since you had stack it under the slider , player may not see them clearly (also miss them , I tested) and miss them)
and ... The background picture (image_560407121615504978701) shall you make it ...cover the whole background?
(or make image_560407121615504978700 square)
It will have a better look
and ... Good beatmap I like that song a lot hope this will be ranked soon
yep , that's all ...(Sorry for the bad grammar)
Hard , Extra , Insane and Information:
03:13:278 add break
Insane:
01:26:841 (3) XY change to -> X:72 Y:200
(4) XY change to -> X:56 Y:184
01:29:683 (4) XY change to -> x:376 Y:112
(5) XY change to -> x:400 Y:88
(changed x-axis and y-axis of these because It's will be hard to click these beat since you had stack it under the slider , player may not see them clearly (also miss them , I tested) and miss them)
and ... The background picture (image_560407121615504978701) shall you make it ...cover the whole background?
(or make image_560407121615504978700 square)
It will have a better look
and ... Good beatmap I like that song a lot hope this will be ranked soon
yep , that's all ...(Sorry for the bad grammar)
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