Irreversible
Irreversible wrote:
#modreqs special round!
[Easy]
00:01:447 (3,4,1) - Try to get a better transition like this: http://puu.sh/8z1pG/43b4309135.jpg It will flow better.
00:04:070 (3) - Quite boring for what you have in the song (the rhythm), maybe you want to place some smaller sliders to fit it more?
00:31:611 (1) - Try to get it parallel with 00:30:299 (5) - ? http://puu.sh/8z1vJ/0b904639f6.jpg Like this.
01:09:644 - I wouldn't ignore this really heavy beat here (big white tick, also called Downbeat), you should make it a clickable action, with a slider start or a circle.
01:15:217 (1,2,3,4) - Try to get a square, it looks a bit cleaner and plays better imo. http://puu.sh/8z1C8/99169956dd.jpg Like this.
01:20:135 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I suggest reworking this part because the rhythm appears to be really messed up, it's not really well following the rhythm nor the vocals, try to stick for WHITE ticks especially because it's an easy diff!
[Normal]
00:24:726 (1) - Not enough recovery time. Probably it'd be better if you end it 00:25:709 - ?
00:57:840 (4) - Blanket
01:14:562 (5) - Blanket
01:20:135 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as in Easy. hmm.. I think It's follow vocal. and It's can be played by normal player imo..?but I'm not sure about this. anyway no change for now..! :3
Pretty okay, what I didn't like was the rhythm in the first part of the kiai (00:51:283 (1,2,3,4,1) - ) because it was rather boring.. it would be nice to see a bit of variation there!
[Insane]
00:00:791 (3) - For flow reasons; rotate by 28°? (selection centre)
00:01:447 (4) - don't forget to copy paste again.
00:02:267 (6) - Make it straight to the bottom to get a cleaner symmetry pattern?
00:03:414 (3,4) - Just something that randomly came to my mind, I think it'd get more interesting with it: http://puu.sh/8z2Kx/20ed87768d.jpg ? 4 is stacked with 1, and 2 is Circle 1 + ctrl + j
00:04:070 (1,2,3,4) - What about a square pattern instead? http://puu.sh/8z2On/7aa331ca0a.jpg
00:05:709 (2,3,4) - I see that you like those patterns of 3 sliders, but the overlaps look pretty unprofesionnal; let me help you a bit. If you have 3 sliders, you can make a really awesome pattern by rotating them by 120°! http://puu.sh/8z2W9/e1c4c71399.jpg For example like this. It flows awesome! Keep it in your mind.
00:07:349 (4,5) - Those sliders don't really flow well, you could use straight sliders instead, or try another pattern.
00:08:660 (3,4,1) - Use my idea from above.
00:08:496 (2) - Why the stack by the way? It kills the movement really much! Just normal spacing.
00:09:972 (4) - Watch the spacing.
00:10:955 (3,4,5) - Flows really bad, why not finishing the star pattern? According to what you placed it should be like : http://puu.sh/8z37H/170e9148d2.jpg
00:12:021 - Bad overmap, just delete it
00:13:742 (2) - Extend it to : 00:14:070 -
00:16:201 (2) - Spacing
00:17:676 (3) - Avoid the overlap, make a neat blanket with 1?
00:19:808 (1) - Weird flow again, you could stack it with 3, for maybe smth like http://puu.sh/8z3g2/3044d60e94.jpg ?
00:23:086 (3,4,5) - Make a better triangle, not touching 2 http://puu.sh/8z3iL/a2180e6ac0.jpg
00:24:398 (3) - Blanket
00:24:726 (4,1) - Sounds bad, don't use an extension here!
00:26:365 (1,2) - Bad following of the vocals, actually it's just triplets~
00:26:119 - Overmap, delete
00:28:660 (5) - Don't stack it, for movement reasons again
00:29:316 (2,3) - Keep the flow and also watch the spacing; try another placmeent.
00:29:972 (1,2,3,4) - Looks a bit weird again, if i remember correctly I pointed a pattern liks this up already. Maybe try a square slider pattern instead of those?
00:31:611 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Use a normal stream and don't move it in middle of it, it's not needed and a difficulty spike.. it doesn't really play well as well
00:36:529 (6,7,8,9,1) - Make a nicer curve?
00:38:168 (5) - Blanket
00:39:972 (2) - no stack
00:45:873 (4,5) - No extension
00:47:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Well.. I don't really like this part, I think it could be a bit more spectacular, what about a circle pattern with the sliders, and a stream instead of those? D: 00:48:660 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/8z3zK/d948a1ddc4.jpg like this? Look at the arrows haha
00:53:250 (4,5,6) - Those triplets aren't in the song, it doesn't really fit!
00:55:217 (1) - No exntesion
00:59:152 (1) - ^
The Insane could definitely need some work, talking of the flow and about how you did the patterns. But you're on the right way, I hope you can get some ideas! Good luck.
I fixed them all except normal's one.
Thank you~!!! :3