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Ray - lull ~Soshite Bokura wa~ (TV Size)

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Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
updated alacat's diff :3
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare
from my modding queue

[Setup]
i think that it is awkward for the player that there are too many similar colors.

[Easy]
00:07:296 (4) - pref clap. drum's whistle is not fit to music.
00:10:905 (3) - not hit to music too. pref use sampleset-soft.
00:11:357 (4) - NC
00:12:710 (5,6) - try this pattern. http://puu.sh/8TUw3.jpg
01:28:499 (2) - remove whistle to head.

[Normal]
00:25:342 (6) - うーん、00:23:988 (4) - ここと角度合わせたほうが綺麗に見えるかなあ。
00:28:048 (5) - 終点のwhistleと00:28:725 (6) - finishは合ってないと思う。俺ならどっちもclapにする。(6)に関しては同じ音でfinishがなってて個人的には違和感ある。
00:41:357 (3,4,5,6) - こっちのほうが好きだけど配置直すのめんどくさそうだしまかせます。 http://puu.sh/8TVpP.jpg
00:45:642 (2) - 00:49:251 (3) - 2つの終点のclap消したほうが好き。
01:13:161 (4) - 01:14:063 (5) - 正直ここらへんfinishうるさいと思う。全部whistleにしたほうが好き。

[Sorda's Hard]
00:06:169 - 00:06:845 (7) - whistleはつけないんですか？
00:08:650 - note欲しいです
00:13:612 (2,5) - finish?
00:14:853 - ノート追加して連打の音拾いたいです
00:28:499 (1,2,3) - ここに連打じゃなくて00:28:387 - ここに連打いれたほうが音に合うと思います。
00:36:169 (2) - なぜ始点にwhistleを入れたんでしょう？ここでパターンから外れると違和感があるのでclapがいいと思います。
00:40:905 (3) - 1/2のほうがあってると思います。
00:41:808 (6) - と00:42:484 (2) - の終点にwhistleが欲しいです。
00:43:387 (4,1) - この音取りのほうがマッチしてません？ http://puu.sh/8TWWI.jpg
00:43:838 (1,2) - 00:45:642 (1,2) - ここの2か所finishで繋げてるので00:47:447 (1,2) -00:49:251 (4,6) - この2つもどっちもfinishにしてみてはどうでしょうか。

[Hard]
00:16:770 (1,2) - pref increase spacing a bit.
00:20:379 (1) - i want whistle.
00:49:702 (2,3) - switch to clap.
01:04:139 (2,3) - same as 00:16:770 (1,2) -
01:13:612 (4) - want whistle!!
01:15:868 (5,1) - same as 00:16:770 (1,2) -
01:23:988 (2,3) - same as above
01:28:499 (4) - pref switch to whistle head and end.

[Insane]
i don't like very much your diff. Because there is too much overmap, i point out only the pattern that i can't permit.
00:15:304 (2) - pref remove
00:43:161 (5,6,7,8,1) - try this http://puu.sh/8TXU6.jpg
00:51:958 (3,4,5) - use 1/2 pattern.
00:55:793 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - pref this http://puu.sh/8TZlF.jpg
01:12:033 (7,8,9) - same as 00:51:958 (3,4,5) -
01:17:221 (4,5,6,7,8) - remove (7)
01:21:281 (5,6,1) - same as 00:51:958 (3,4,5) -
01:22:184 (3,4,5,6,7) - same as above.
01:25:567 (2,3,4) - pref this http://puu.sh/8TZuJ.jpg

Sinch's Testplay
[alacat’s Normal] 00:25:342 (6) - 場所に違和感ある。

looks good.
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks for modding Rare :3

Fixed everything on my Easy and Hard diff owo
S o r d a
1,576 posts
Joined July 2009
S o r d a
fixed everything
http://puu.sh/8UFSE.osu thanks!
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat

Rare wrote:

[Normal]
00:25:342 (6) - うーん、00:23:988 (4) - ここと角度合わせたほうが綺麗に見えるかなあ。ok!
00:28:048 (5) - 終点のwhistleと00:28:725 (6) - finishは合ってないと思う。俺ならどっちもclapにする。(6)に関しては同じ音でfinishがなってて個人的には違和感ある。 (5) clapに変えて、(6)はちょっと違う音あるからwhistleにした！
00:41:357 (3,4,5,6) - こっちのほうが好きだけど配置直すのめんどくさそうだしまかせます。 http://puu.sh/8TVpP.jpg ここね～いろんな音合って悩みどころ。。。他の人の意見も聞いてみたいからこのままで。
00:45:642 (2) - 00:49:251 (3) - 2つの終点のclap消したほうが好き。つけすぎた ;o; removed
01:13:161 (4) - 01:14:063 (5) - 正直ここらへんfinishうるさいと思う。全部whistleにしたほうが好き。 連続してるところ消した！
ありがとう！ 8-)

http://puu.sh/8V0qm.osu
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
updated both diffs owo/
Trust
1,240 posts
Joined March 2012
Trust
manaka best girl ~☆

gogo
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks for your star Trust >w</
RandF
1,245 posts
Joined March 2013
RandF
From my queue~

[General]
  1. combocolors are too similar to distingish them. (especially, combocolor 1, 2, 3)
[Easy]
  1. 00:10:905 (3) - x:364 y:84 for good flow
  2. 00:18:575 (1) - blanket correctly
  3. 00:51:056 (1,2) - you can make better flow. how about moving 00:51:507 (2) - to x:180 y:31 ?
[Hard]
  1. how about this rhythm?
  2. 00:18:349 (4,2) - stack?
  3. 00:44:627 (3) - I prefer to delete
  4. 01:19:702 (7,1) - DS 1.0x is better, imo
[alacat's Normal]
  1. 00:41:357 (3) - 1/2rhythmのつながるところで少し慌ててしまうので、このsliderは右に傾けてflowを良くした方が良いかもしれません
    SPOILER
[S o r d a's Hard]
  1. 00:16:319 (4) - 長いsliderが多すぎる気もするので、このような音とりはどうでしょう？
  2. 00:28:951 (5,1) - 微妙に角度がついているように見えるのですが、一直線上に配置した方がきれいだと思います
  3. 00:49:251 (4,5) - ここも一直線にした方がgood flowになって良いかもです
    SPOILER
  4. 01:10:229 (5,6,7) - ５が01:09:101 (3) - とstackされてないのであまりきれいな配置に見えませんでした。いっそ01:09:101 (3) - とのoverlapを避けた方が良いかもしれません
  5. 01:26:244 (6,7) - きちんとblanket
[captin's Insane]
  1. 00:43:612 (7,8,1) - I prefer curved pattern
    SPOILER
  2. 01:19:702 (1) - upward slider is better, imo
nice flower skin!!! kawaii~ :)
suit to this song~☆
~Good Luck~
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
captin1

Rare wrote:

from my modding queue

[Insane]
01:17:221 (4,5,6,7,8) - remove (7) removing 5 is much better to play
the rest kept as is

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
[captin's Insane]
  1. 00:43:612 (7,8,1) - I prefer curved pattern nice!
    SPOILER
  2. 01:19:702 (1) - upward slider is better, imo i agree
nice flower skin!!! kawaii~ :)
suit to this song~☆
~Good Luck~
thanks!

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: lull.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59402
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:lull ~Soshite Bokura wa~ (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:lull ～そして僕らは～ (TV Size)
Artist:Ray
ArtistUnicode:Ray
Creator:Sekai-nyan
Version:captin's Insane
Source:凪のあすから
Tags:Nagi no Asukara opening Sekai captin1 alacat Sorda S_o_r_d_a
BeatmapID:424450
BeatmapSetID:176187

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.9
SliderTickRate:2

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Combo2 : 168,230,253
Combo3 : 71,186,248
Combo4 : 3,150,220
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52,380,38199,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,380,38311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,380,38424,6,0,P|92:324|97:300,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,112,38875,1,10,0:0:0:0:
144,136,39101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
4,232,39326,2,0,P|-16:300|56:360,1,142.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,340,39778,2,0,P|164:328|220:336,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,332,40229,5,0,0:0:0:0:
424,308,40342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,272,40454,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,244,40680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,308,40905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,308,41357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,296,41582,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,172,41808,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,300,42033,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,316,42146,2,0,L|172:332,1,47.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,368,42484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,208,42710,2,0,P|80:144|56:128,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,304,43161,2,0,L|100:284,1,47.5
172,336,43387,2,0,L|244:356,1,47.5
280,264,43612,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,244,43725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,43838,5,12,0:2:0:0:
228,148,44063,2,0,L|160:216,1,95,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,148,44514,2,0,P|288:116|412:144,1,190,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,312,45191,2,0,P|352:280|328:240,1,95,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,128,45642,6,0,L|156:188,2,47.5,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,56,46093,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,200,46319,2,0,B|264:240|264:240|336:276|396:212,1,190,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,248,46883,2,0,L|432:276,1,47.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,332,47221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,176,47447,5,2,0:0:0:0:
176,212,47672,2,0,L|72:216,1,95,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,208,48123,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,304,48349,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,296,48462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,284,48575,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,144,48800,2,0,P|328:92|328:48,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,24,49139,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,20,49251,5,2,0:0:0:0:
112,72,49477,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,56,49702,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,172,49928,2,0,P|152:236|192:312,1,142.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,308,50379,2,0,L|316:352,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,364,50605,2,0,L|436:344,3,23.75,10|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,300,50830,2,0,L|422:273,3,23.75,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,236,51056,6,0,P|372:196|380:144,1,95,12|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,32,51507,2,0,P|268:88|264:136,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,236,51958,2,0,L|164:284,1,47.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,284,52184,2,0,L|58:239,1,47.5
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248,276,52635,6,0,P|300:288|364:268,1,95,2|2,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,124,53086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,152,53311,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,200,53537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,68,53763,2,0,L|232:72,1,95,10|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,184,54214,2,0,L|228:136,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,200,54665,5,2,0:0:0:0:
276,296,54890,2,0,L|260:348,2,47.5,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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40,148,55905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,112,56018,2,0,L|60:68,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,96,56244,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,96,56357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,56469,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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344,316,57597,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,160,57823,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,260,58048,1,10,0:2:0:0:
400,268,58161,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,276,58274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,252,58499,5,2,0:0:0:0:
368,252,58725,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,304,59176,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,196,60529,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,332,60755,2,0,P|124:320|164:284,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,152,61206,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,336,61432,2,0,P|312:282|312:212,1,142.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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156,232,62334,2,0,P|142:187|112:152,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,72,62785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,72,62898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,72,63011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,232,63236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,200,63462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,100,63687,6,0,P|360:80|388:40,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,184,64139,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,72,64364,2,0,P|176:88|136:140,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,328,64815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,176,65041,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,304,65266,6,0,P|71:330|117:335,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,224,65717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,352,65943,2,0,L|496:376,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,192,66394,2,0,L|368:168,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,284,66845,1,10,0:0:0:0:
208,88,67071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,152,67296,6,0,P|408:200|396:256,1,95,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,256,67748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,150,67973,2,0,P|167:111|208:88,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,239,68424,2,0,P|250:259|204:256,1,95,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,128,68875,2,0,P|384:100|404:76,2,95,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,216,69552,2,0,P|170:253|155:297,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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488,188,70454,2,0,P|488:132|472:96,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,88,70905,5,2,0:0:0:0:
108,248,71131,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,192,71357,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,112,71582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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288,288,72259,2,0,L|316:328,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,284,72484,2,0,P|428:216|464:184,1,95,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,168,72936,5,8,0:0:0:0:
384,80,73161,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,192,73387,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,64,73612,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,256,73838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,88,74063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,352,74289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,100,74514,6,0,P|34:46|60:9,1,95,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,128,74966,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,298,75191,2,0,P|163:226|185:174,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,184,75642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,136,75868,2,0,P|120:96|112:24,1,142.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,40,76319,6,0,L|48:144,1,95,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,112,76770,1,10,0:0:0:0:
132,232,76996,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,348,77221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,304,77447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,276,77560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,244,77672,2,0,P|384:196|364:156,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,104,78123,6,0,P|136:120|96:112,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,108,78462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,80,78575,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,196,78800,2,0,P|228:240|236:292,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,356,79251,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,184,79477,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,332,79702,6,0,P|348:344|404:336,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,164,80154,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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208,132,81733,5,6,0:0:0:0:
416,112,81958,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,216,82184,2,0,P|200:232|160:216,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,200,82522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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396,240,83537,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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372,144,84439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Suimya
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Suimya
Fixed everything on your mod Random owo

Thanks for modding and updated captin's diff!
S o r d a
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S o r d a
http://puu.sh/8Y3VM.osu
some fixed ~ ty!
Suimya
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Suimya
updated!
Delis
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Delis

Trust wrote:

manaka best girl ~☆

gogo
yeah
kaname best chara though
Suimya
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Suimya
Thanks Delis for your star www
[ Raphael ]
[ Raphael ]
Hi~! from my queue!

  • General

    Try to change Combo colour 4. It seems to be similar to the color of the background.


    • Easy

      00:07:296 (4,1) - blanket?
      00:12:710 (2,3) - I think this rhythm is hard for beginners.
      00:33:011 (1,3) - blanket better
      00:58:274 (4,1) - ^
      01:25:342 (1,1) - ^
      01:16:770 (3,1) - try blanket
      01:28:499 (2) - move to (248,212)
      ┖ move the square on the tail to (288,260)


      • alacat's Normal

        00:13:838 (5,6) - ctrl + G. maybe this rhythm is easy for beginners.
        00:42:710 (5,6) - ^
        00:48:575 (2) - end on 00:49:026 -


        • S o r d a's Hard

          00:05:717 (4) - reduce slightly that it bent.
          00:16:319 (4,5) - try blanket
          00:28:951 (5,1) - avoid overlap
          ┖ same as 00:50:605 (7,1)
          00:52:635 (4,6) - make to same shape

          • Hard

            00:00:530 (1,2,3) - blanket better
            00:20:830 (4,5,6) - place in the same distance.
            00:28:951 (6) - move the square on the tail to (440,172)
            00:44:627 (3,4) - not good flow. move to (148,56)
            01:04:590 (3,4) - blanket better

            Sorry, I suck at modding on Insane ;w;
S o r d a
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S o r d a
thanks mod!
http://puu.sh/93Gne.osu
Suimya
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Suimya
Thanks for modding [ Raphael ] fixed everything and updated Sorda's diff =w=b
Shurelia
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Shurelia
おっす!やったよ!
すごくいいの歌！
from my queue (Sorry, for the lateness i was sick a few days ago~)
[General]
If this song comes from an anime add "Anime" to the tag then~
[Easy]
  1. 01:05:943 (3) - Move this to x:156 ,y:124, and adjust 01:04:590 (2) - a little to make a perfect blanke but not make the distance broken
  2. 01:14:966 (1) - ^^^ to x:164 , y:100 ~
  3. 01:28:499 (2) - How about to use 10% sound at this timing point? Sounds better in my opinion

[alacat's Normal]
  1. 00:46:319 (3) - Shorten this slider so it'll be a 1/3 and a circle at 00:46:996 (4) - it fit the song better~ , should be looks like this :
  2. 00:56:018 (3) - Make this a repeat slider , and move it back at the timeline a bit, should be looks like this

[S o r d a's Hard]
  1. 00:45:191 (3) - How about to move this to x:236 , y:220 for making a good blanket? w
  2. 00:50:605 (7) - Anti Jump ? , how about move this to x:424 , y:284, to fix the distance (and to looks prettier w)

[Hard]
  1. Already good!

[captin's Insane]
  1. 01:28:499 (4,5) - Stack this?


This mapset is really good! I hope this will got ranked soon :3

Huup! *Throw Star*
Suimya
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Suimya
Thanks Shurelia for your mod and star :3

fixed almost everything in it owo/
Arlecchino
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Arlecchino
Hi!
From my Queue

[General]
add "risou maeda" , "anko chatou" , "mari okada" , "and a lull in the sea" to tag coloum.. :3


[captin's Insane]
00:19:928 (5,6) - wanna some cookie..??
Cookie for You.. :3
00:23:086 (4,5,6) - follow the flow.. to get more cookie.. :3 and make them keep 1.0x ds
flow
00:26:244 (3,4) - more cookie for you..
second cookie
00:47:672 (2) - ctrl + g ?
01:04:139 (2,3) - i dunno if it's better blanket or not.. but how about this..,also you can make them more blanket..
:3
01:27:372 (2,3) - for hold the sound in 01:27:597 - i likes.. circle>slider>circle :3
last cookie

[Hard]
00:01:883 (3,4) - sekai.. want cookie too ?
Gives
00:31:432 (1) - blanket ?
00:31:657 (2,3,4) - follow the flow and i'll give more cookie
:3
01:26:920 (4) - change to 1/2 slider... and remove the circle.. at 01:27:146

[Sorda's hard]
like i say in my Queue.. i just mod one diff.. if you have two diff with same difficulty..
and i choose hard by owner.. :3 sorda you can sleep now.. :3

[Normal]
looks already good.. :3
just suggest for normal : slider tick rate 2 ?

[Easy]
Lazy to mod easy :3
01:19:928 (2) - move it 2 grid to down.. for keep the ds :3

soko made de..
de wa arigatou gozaimasu..
hope this.. helped.. sry if my mod not helped
and please write.. Fix,change.or add
so i can more learning about modding from that.. :D

Good luck with.. your Raaayyy.... Map..
and -_-)9 take my star...

EDIT : Noticed the Mod..
Suimya
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Suimya

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

Hi!
From my Queue

[Hard]
00:01:883 (3,4) - sekai.. want cookie too ? I don't think i will change this, since i followed the melody here so i think 1/1 slider fits here so much o.o
Gives
00:31:432 (1) - blanket ? I think it's fine, i didn't plan to make a blanket here =3=
00:31:657 (2,3,4) - follow the flow and i'll give more cookie well it looks great but i wanted to make some symmetric rhythm here, so no i'll keep this as it is for now o3o
:3
01:26:920 (4) - change to 1/2 slider... and remove the circle.. at 01:27:146 I think the 2 notes fits much better here then 1/2 slider imo, and they follow the music here. And i don't feel like adding 1/2 slider here, so yeah no changes orz


[Easy]
Lazy to mod easy :3 lol
01:19:928 (2) - move it 2 grid to down.. for keep the ds :3 ok
Thanks for mod and star Asuna :3
S o r d a
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S o r d a
all fixed for Shurelia's mod thanks!
http://puu.sh/95SNf/4054987610.osu
Suimya
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Suimya
updated :3
captin1
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captin1

Shurelia wrote:

[captin's Insane]
  1. 01:28:499 (4,5) - Stack this? I think it's fine

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

[captin's Insane]
00:19:928 (5,6) - wanna some cookie..?? I prefer mine, since I follow the vocal echo with the long slider
Cookie for You.. :3
00:23:086 (4,5,6) - follow the flow.. to get more cookie.. :3 and make them keep 1.0x ds that has 4 too close
flow
00:26:244 (3,4) - more cookie for you.. same as before
second cookie
00:47:672 (2) - ctrl + g ? this feels better as is
01:04:139 (2,3) - i dunno if it's better blanket or not.. but how about this..,also you can make them more blanket.. that would make a bad motion to 4, so no thanks
:3
01:27:372 (2,3) - for hold the sound in 01:27:597 - i likes.. circle>slider>circle :3 I prefer my rhythm
last cookie
no changes from mods but fixed a few things on my own

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Title:lull ~Soshite Bokura wa~ (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:lull ～そして僕らは～ (TV Size)
Artist:Ray
ArtistUnicode:Ray
Creator:Sekai-nyan
Version:captin's Insane
Source:凪のあすから
Tags:Nagi no Asukara opening Sekai captin1 alacat Sorda S_o_r_d_a
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alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
Thanks modding ~ fixed whistle patterns :3

http://puu.sh/9a4rN/3125e4b121.osu
Mortem
690 posts
Joined July 2013
Mortem
Hi.
Sorry for late mod, I had final exams.
You don't have to take my mod seriously.

alacat's Normal
00:37:071 (2,4) - This is for Normal player confusing.
01:28:951 - Add short slider here.

S o r d a's Hard
00:54:665 (1,2) - This is big jump even for Hard diff. Put them little bit closer to each other.

Everything else seems fine to me.
Jest to dobry mapset. Wiele szczęścia. :D
Hope that'll helps
If not then sorry.
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks for checking Pjecoo :3

and updated alacat's and captin's diffs o3o/
Minao
219 posts
Joined November 2013
Minao
Congrats! You won my Lottery mod from modding queue! :) Here is your ticket.

[General]
My ears and my eyes are sooo thankful for this peaceful moment I had playing this map :)
It's very well mapped. I have to use my "nazi-curve mode on" to say something.
/!\ About the skin: In Alacat's Normal at 00:56:469 (1) there is a spinner, but with the recent Peppy's changes with skins, the spinner background doesn't appear well in my computer: http://puu.sh/9oJqO/577e8c942e.jpg (I have a 1920*1080 resolution)

[Easy]
These sliders can be curved better (the pictures show it by using approach circle):
00:14:740 (1) - http://puu.sh/9oId0/0034297f04.jpg and the head can fit better with (4): http://puu.sh/9oIgY/c98aba63f1.jpg
00:17:898 (1) - http://puu.sh/9oIoC/f666bbdde3.jpg
00:24:552 (4) - http://puu.sh/9oIsH/6f90fb109c.jpg
00:43:612 (1) - http://puu.sh/9oIvY/f345eec5cf.jpg
00:47:898 (2) - http://puu.sh/9oIyu/88208405e7.jpg
00:53:311 (4) - http://puu.sh/9oIAl/fa717dea50.jpg
00:54:665 (1) - http://puu.sh/9oIB1/51a51c2053.jpg
01:02:785 (4) - http://puu.sh/9oIDb/df5a5aa5f0.jpg
01:13:161 (3) - http://puu.sh/9oIFV/843fc85281.jpg
01:15:417 (2) - http://puu.sh/9oIH1/12f3167d24.jpg
01:15:868 (3) - http://puu.sh/9oIIX/96f6af58fc.jpg
01:21:733 (1) - http://puu.sh/9oIKH/469e97c8a5.jpg
01:27:146 (1) - http://puu.sh/9oIMW/319684ff93.jpg
... Yup I'm very boring :3

01:28:499 (2) - I would put this at x: 240 | y: 220 and place the end point at x :296 | y: 244. It's only a personnal preference.

[Alacat's Normal]
00:40:905 (2) - Maybe put this at x: 404 | y: 140 so it seems to be better aligned with (1) end.
:cry: I have nothing else to say because there is no imbricated objects in curves :cry: I feel a little useless ~ :?

[Hard]
These sliders can be curved better (the pictures show it by using approach circle):
00:01:883 (3) - For this one I'm sure you can improve the curve to fit better with (2)'s curve by removing Grid snap a rework it a little. I made this: http://puu.sh/9oJKD/03656dfc48.jpg for exemple.
00:08:199 (2) - http://puu.sh/9oJRb/f9d70d6bc4.jpg
00:09:101 (4) - http://puu.sh/9oJSD/3e820538d3.jpg
00:12:936 (4) - http://puu.sh/9oJUw/617523bbae.jpg
00:17:221 (2) - http://puu.sh/9oJVo/0b9cedb7ad.jpg
00:23:537 (4) - http://puu.sh/9oJWT/8bc7a7430f.jpg
00:24:890 (4) - http://puu.sh/9oJYl/0790c38f97.jpg
00:33:687 (4) - http://puu.sh/9oK0U/9e05db5170.jpg ( a little )
00:38:875 (4) - http://puu.sh/9oK44/e9e8ea2da7.jpg
00:54:665 (1) - http://puu.sh/9oK7x/e8906553fb.jpg
00:57:372 (3) - http://puu.sh/9oK98/4ddbdeca9f.jpg
01:05:041 (4) - http://puu.sh/9oKb1/4d2329e298.jpg
01:20:830 (3) - http://puu.sh/9oKe8/14a78eb1f4.jpg
01:25:567 (2) - http://puu.sh/9oKf5/cadbea5c6c.jpg

01:28:048 (3) - Personnal preference but I would do this: Timeline | http://puu.sh/9oKA9/806a79cfb5.jpg . I place (4) to make a triangle.

[S o r d a's Hard]
These sliders can be curved better (the pictures show it by using approach circle):
00:14:966 (1) - http://puu.sh/9oKSf/1ae49e6f02.jpg
00:16:319 (4) - http://puu.sh/9oKTm/b87931c9e0.jpg
00:30:078 (3) - http://puu.sh/9oKZ0/11bd076792.jpg
00:44:514 (2) - http://puu.sh/9oL12/e8f782ca5d.jpg
00:55:003 (2) - http://puu.sh/9oL4b/adb10d0beb.jpg
01:09:552 (4) - http://puu.sh/9oL70/dfcfc1890b.jpg
01:26:244 (6) - http://puu.sh/9oL9a/01060d1fb5.jpg

00:13:838 (3) - I would not put this circle too close to (1) end. A good way to avoid this is to make triangles between objects at least with (2), (3), and (4). It makes something like this: http://puu.sh/9oKP8/0d6429cd28.jpg
00:26:920 (2) - Maybe put this to x: 243 | y: 90 so it makes like a line with (1) end.

[captin's Insane]
00:05:717 (4) - Maybe make it fit with (3) like this? (5 is 3) http://puu.sh/9oLgH/964321114b.jpg
I'm not going to suggest other "make it fit" things because I feel it's not a part of your modding style. And because I'm particulary bad at modding insanes.

That's all! A mod mostly about details and curves but I hope it was a little helpful. Then take my star!
Good luck for ranking (but it shouldn't be that difficult :D )
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks Minao for your mod and star :3

fixed everything in easy but nothing on hard since it's all nazi xD

and i think it's fine as it :3
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Modding this map soon.
PS: On Easy, you have inconsistent spacing at 01:02:334 (3) *runs*
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya

BeatofIke wrote:

Modding this map soon.
PS: On Easy, you have inconsistent spacing at 01:02:334 (3) *runs*
lol i didn't notice it, oh well fixed it now =w=/
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
The mapset seems fine overall. I just have a few suggestions in captin's insane!
[captin's Insane]
  1. 00:40:680 (4) - I would probably move this circle at 352|252.
  2. 00:40:905 (5) - Seem more readable if you stack this note with 00:40:229 (1) instead. :/
  3. 00:41:582 (7) - Try stacking 00:41:582 (7) with 00:42:033 (1)?
Xiaolin
1,857 posts
Joined April 2013
Xiaolin
osu! needs more Nagi no Asukara <333 yeahh

R.I.P Nagi no Asukara ;_;

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
captin1
sorry, was at work

BeatofIke wrote:

The mapset seems fine overall. I just have a few suggestions in captin's insane!
[captin's Insane]
  1. 00:40:680 (4) - I would probably move this circle at 352|252. looks nice
  2. 00:40:905 (5) - Seem more readable if you stack this note with 00:40:229 (1) instead. :/ I think it's fine, plus this would mess up the 00:41:357 (6,7,8) - triangle pattern i have right now
  3. 00:41:582 (7) - Try stacking 00:41:582 (7) with 00:42:033 (1)? it is stacked, just manually, but suppose it doesn't matter so moved 00:42:033 (1,2) - upwards to stack instead
thanks!
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Suimya
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Suimya
Thanks Ike for your check :3

Updated captin's Insane owo/
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
Bubbled!
Suimya
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Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks Ike :3
Pappy
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Joined August 2013
Pappy
Mother of god GO! XD

But I think it will be last mapset from Nagi no Asukara, osu! is full of this o3o
Trust
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Joined March 2012
Trust
Popping for some incorrect and unnecessary snapping as well as for some peculiar rhythms in the Hard difficulties.

Please fix anything in highlighted in blue.

[General]
  1. The skin file approachcircle.png is missing and needs to be included to complete your Hit circle set.
  2. Widescreen Support can be disabled on all difficulties.
  3. The only difficulty with a spinner is alacat's Normal. It would be nice if you could make room for one in Easy so new players can be introduced to spinners before reaching Normal. If you can find a way to include them in your higher level difficulties, score variation is always a good thing.
[Easy]
  1. Looks mostly fine, I'll have a closer look at a later time to point out some minor things as I would like to focus on the Hard difficulties for now. In the meantime I suggest lowering OD and HP-1 (2 and 2) for a better balance of difficulty settings.
[Hard]
  1. 00:27:597 (1,2,3,4) - Kind of a strange rhythm here. Listening to the background music, the blue tick that should get emphasized is on 00:28:387 which is currently skipped over while (3) doesn't appear to cover anything in the music. I would delete (3) and change (4) to a 1/4 slider with a repeat:

  2. 00:40:229 (1,2) - I found this rhythm uninteresting to play through and you could definitely reflect the drum action here for more interesting gameplay. Try changing (1) to a triplet or 1/4 repeat slider and remove the repeat on (2) to leave the white tick empty to reflect a pause in the percussion:

  3. 00:43:612 (6) - A repeating 1/4 slider is most appropriate, there is nothing in the music to warrant 1/8 snapping.
  4. 00:44:627 (3,4) - This doesn't sound like it's following anything and actually caught me off guard while playing. You can simply remove these two notes and leave a pause in the rhythm to emphasize the vocal hold or try something below if you would prefer a continuous rhythm:

  5. 00:58:274 (1,2) - This felt a bit strange to play too, as well, there doesn't seem to be anything in the music that warrants these repeats, in fact just a 1/2 rhythm for these sounds most appropriate. Meanwhile a note can be added on 00:58:161. Refer to how S o r d a and captin1 follow this part as an example. Here's a rhythm you can try: (you can do 3 & 4 as a 1/2 slider in this example)
  6. 01:05:041 (4,1) - Try Ctrl-G on this rhythm to follow the hold in the vocal more nicely.
  7. 01:13:161 (3) - Same as 00:43:612 (6).
  8. 01:14:063 (6) - As above.
  9. 01:25:567 (2) - To compliment the cymbal, remove the drum sample and use a finish instead. Also swap the finish on 01:25:342 (1) with a whistle.
[S o r d a's Hard]
  1. 00:05:492 (3) - Space this evenly between 00:04:815 (2,4).
  2. 00:07:296 (8) - This should be snapped in 1/8 to correctly follow the music.
  3. 00:07:748 - For the section from here until 00:14:966, S:C2 claps are much more fitting.
  4. 00:07:748 (1,2) - Why such a massive jump between these two? This is way too strenuous for a Hard difficulty.
  5. 00:09:101 (5,6) - Not an ideal rhythm. In fact i'm confused with what you've decided to follow here. I definitely feel that the strong beat warrants mapping. Please try this rhythm. It feels intuitive as it's more fitting with the rhythm you've been following up to this point, and as I can see it was already suggested by Sharlo:
  6. 00:10:680 - I don't feel the need to leave this tick empty since it's not highlighting any pause or hold in the track. A continuous rhythm at this part feels better too, try changing 00:10:454 (7) to a 1/2 slider to cover the beat here.
  7. 00:11:018 (2) - This circle isn't following a discernible sound in the music. I would remove it.
  8. 00:28:951 (5) - This as well needs to be snapped in 1/8 to follow the music appropriately.
  9. 00:43:161 (2) - Sounds like a finish is missing here.
  10. 00:43:387 (3) - Missed a clap?
  11. 00:50:605 (7) - Again, this should be snapped in 1/8.
  12. 01:12:484 (1) - Try a finish on the head instead of whistle to accentuate the cymbal.
  13. 01:25:567 (3) - Missed a finish.
  14. 01:28:048 (2) - I would use more normal spacing here. The music is silent and we're just hearing vocals at this part, a big jump did not feel natural to play.
Let me know and I'll have another check with more attention to Easy, alacat's Normal, and captin's Insane. At a first glance they were pretty good. While these are mostly suggestions, I highly recommend you take a lot of them into consideration.
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