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Aqo

2,710 posts

Joined April 2010

Aqo 2014-02-01T23:32:35+00:00

no posts yet?

beautiful map. gogo speedrank

sj03rs

3 posts

Joined January 2013

sj03rs 2014-03-10T12:16:46+00:00

What's up with hard? By the way, this should be submitted, only hard needs to be fixed. Thanks!

Tear

332 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

Tear 2014-03-10T12:35:15+00:00

It's still in progress .-. Making the standard Hard now, and hitsounding mania diffs

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

MirinH 2014-03-14T01:29:19+00:00

STD guest diff plz??

Kamikaze

2,898 posts

Joined November 2012

Kamikaze 2014-03-25T20:15:42+00:00

Let me help you a little with my star

Tear

332 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

Tear 2014-03-25T20:22:05+00:00

Aww, thank you

Secretpipe

3,316 posts

Joined December 2012

Secretpipe 2014-04-17T12:00:03+00:00

-Kamikaze- wrote:
Let me help you a little with my star

Just for say that I'll mod it when Hard will be added ! :p

Kamikaze

2,898 posts

Joined November 2012

Kamikaze 2014-05-16T17:58:21+00:00

Okay, since I've heard it's ready, lemme post some suggestions \:D/
These are just average player's suggestions so feel free to refuse them
I'd appreciate it if you'd tell me why you refused things tho, will help me in future

Columns are: 0|1|2|3|4|5|6|

[7K Expert]
00:17:853 - Add note at 3rd (feels like a bit stronger sound here)
00:39:110 (39110|3) - Move to 2nd
00:39:367 (39367|2) - Move to 4th
00:39:453 (39453|3) - Move to 2nd (more fun pattern imo)
00:58:996 to 01:00:367 - Maybe mix those holds placement a little?
01:29:167 (89167|4) - Remove
01:29:425 - Add notes on 2nd and 4th

[7K Insane]
00:01:053 (1053|3) - Change to hold to 00:01:396
00:26:253 - Make this pattern symmetric
00:45:967 (45967|5) to 00:46:310 (46310|1) - Move first note of that stair to 6th and make rest a reversed stair of earlier one (easier to read/play imo)
00:46:482 (46482|4) - If you accepted this^ move hold to 6th
01:16:310 (76310|5) - Move to 3rd

This map seems really begginer friendly and is so fun to play, I'm not touching lower diffs since I have no idea what I can find to fix there and I don't want to break your map too much ;w; Sorry if my mod is useless it's my 3rd or so xD Good luck with ranking! o/
29 favs before and mods, that's probably a record for o!m

Tear

332 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

Tear 2014-05-17T10:29:59+00:00

-Kamikaze- wrote:
Okay, since I've heard it's ready, lemme post some suggestions \:D/
These are just average player's suggestions so feel free to refuse them
I'd appreciate it if you'd tell me why you refused things tho, will help me in future
Columns are: 0|1|2|3|4|5|6|

[7K Expert]
00:17:853 - Add note at 3rd (feels like a bit stronger sound here) done
00:39:110 (39110|3) - Move to 2nd I changed up this pattern a bit differently, hope it's better
00:39:367 (39367|2) - Move to 4th ^
00:39:453 (39453|3) - Move to 2nd (more fun pattern imo) ^
00:58:996 to 01:00:367 - Maybe mix those holds placement a little? done, this is more fun
01:29:167 (89167|4) - Remove ok
01:29:425 - Add notes on 2nd and 4th added one, I have no idea why there was a missing note here

[7K Insane]
00:01:053 (1053|3) - Change to hold to 00:01:396 done
00:26:253 - Make this pattern symmetric I think it's fun to play as it is :/
00:45:967 (45967|5) to 00:46:310 (46310|1) - Move first note of that stair to 6th and make rest a reversed stair of earlier one (easier to read/play imo) but I like how it is now
00:46:482 (46482|4) - If you accepted this^ move hold to 6th
01:16:310 (76310|5) - Move to 3rd but there's a trill pattern there D:

This map seems really begginer friendly and is so fun to play, I'm not touching lower diffs since I have no idea what I can find to fix there and I don't want to break your map too much ;w; Sorry if my mod is useless it's my 3rd or so xD Good luck with ranking! o/ thank you, help is always nice
29 favs before and mods, that's probably a record for o!m yeah o_O

Shiro

Global Moderator

4,984 posts

Joined May 2009

Shiro 2014-05-20T21:23:30+00:00

http://puu.sh/8Un7F/535a1a6f6f.osu

17VA

1,007 posts

Joined September 2012

17VA 2014-05-23T20:40:06+00:00

[7K Expert]

according to Longnote's flow, 01:05:853 (65853|0) - this Ln should place on 3rd column,

http://puu.sh/8Yeh0.png Like this.

01:39:882 (99882|5,99967|1) - how about move this notes to 5,3? This is more ergonomically comfortable.

01:49:910 - hmm.. this stream, stream's direction should be change after 01:50:253 - this point, according to pitch.

[7K insane]

http://puu.sh/8YeLM.png 2,4,6 column looks empty. you should 00:10:996 (10996|0,11167|2,11339|4) - move this hold

to 2,4,6 and re-arrange 00:11:510 (11510|5) - ~ this streams. then it will be nicer.

00:26:253 (26253|2,26339|1,26425|2) - how about move this note to 3,2,3 ?

00:47:682 - add circle at 5th column.

Arzenvald

4,033 posts

Joined July 2013

Arzenvald 2014-05-24T13:08:30+00:00

from team mod.. ^^ offline mod
*note: i hope my mod doesn't change (or even add) the 'fun-factor' inside your map.. and sorry if i cant mod dat much, because your map is OP and awesome already, i enjoy playing this map as it is..... :3 teach me how to make an osm map.. =3=

7k = 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7

[general]
uninherited timing points conflict with taiko shiro's muzukashi ??
and... hmm... duration more longer on insane and expert (with 3 extra notes on opening, and longer ln on ending)... idk, need more duration consistency on each diffs imo..

[Beginner]
00:49:653 (49653|3) - add on 4?
00:53:167 add on 2
00:55:225 add on 5
01:18:196 add on 7
01:21:967 & 01:22:996 add on 5
01:22:139 (82139|3,82653|3) - move to 3

[Easy]
// O_O wow... flawless... haa~
01:04:825 and 01:05:510 add note on 4, or 2 6

[normal]
// O_O this one too... flawless... =w=)b
01:48:367 (108367|1) - move to 1?
01:49:225 (109225|5,109396|5) - move to 7?

[hard]
nyaa.... y u do dis... T-T almost flawless in each diffs!
01:26:425 (86425|6,87110|5) - 6 or 7? y no both same? move one of them to same column..
add stairs on 01:39:796 > 01:40:139 make it more entertaining.. ^^

[insane]
00:34:825 add on 7
00:37:567 add on 1
00:36:025 (36025|1) - move to 1
00:36:110 (36110|5) - move to 7
00:37:567 add on 4
01:48:367 - 01:48:882 - 01:49:396 - 01:49:910 add on 4 ~~(or 2 notes on 3 & 5.. xp)~~

[expert]
demn.. i love how those notes layering each other... *-*
....
00:29:853 (29853|5) - 00:32:596 (32596|2) - o_o too short? change to double circles instead or make it longer (until it attached to another longnote)
00:34:825 add on 5
00:35:339 add on 4
00:37:567 ^

did i miss anything rong? ._.

good luck! and i wish this ranked soon!

Tear

332 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

Tear 2014-05-25T09:31:43+00:00

17VA wrote:
[7K Expert]

according to Longnote's flow, 01:05:853 (65853|0) - this Ln should place on 3rd column,

http://puu.sh/8Yeh0.png Like this. great idea, done

01:39:882 (99882|5,99967|1) - how about move this notes to 5,3? This is more ergonomically comfortable. ok

01:49:910 - hmm.. this stream, stream's direction should be change after 01:50:253 - this point, according to pitch. huh? the pitch just goes up there

[7K insane]

http://puu.sh/8YeLM.png 2,4,6 column looks empty. you should 00:10:996 (10996|0,11167|2,11339|4) - move this hold

to 2,4,6 and re-arrange 00:11:510 (11510|5) - ~ this streams. then it will be nicer. done

00:26:253 (26253|2,26339|1,26425|2) - how about move this note to 3,2,3 ? I think it's more fun to play this way

00:47:682 - add circle at 5th column. I have no idea why there was no note there

Thanks a lot for the mod!

Tear

332 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

Tear 2014-05-25T09:55:04+00:00

ajeemaniz wrote:
from team mod.. ^^ offline mod
*note: i hope my mod doesn't change (or even add) the 'fun-factor' inside your map.. and sorry if i cant mod dat much, because your map is OP and awesome already, i enjoy playing this map as it is..... :3 teach me how to make an osm map.. =3=
7k = 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7
[general]
uninherited timing points conflict with taiko shiro's muzukashi ?? good catch, I changed the offset everywhere but here
and... hmm... duration more longer on insane and expert (with 3 extra notes on opening, and longer ln on ending)... idk, need more duration consistency on each diffs imo.. that's only a second or two, I think it doesn't matter much.. and for beginners it's harder to start with no intro

[Beginner]
00:49:653 (49653|3) - add on 4? that's too dense for Beginner D:
00:53:167 add on 2 ^
00:55:225 add on 5 ^
01:18:196 add on 7 ^
01:21:967 & 01:22:996 add on 5 ^
01:22:139 (82139|3,82653|3) - move to 3 but why o_O

[Easy]
// O_O wow... flawless... haa~
01:04:825 and 01:05:510 add note on 4, or 2 6 done

[normal]
// O_O this one too... flawless... =w=)b
01:48:367 (108367|1) - move to 1? okay, adds a little variety
01:49:225 (109225|5,109396|5) - move to 7? ^

[hard]
nyaa.... y u do dis... T-T almost flawless in each diffs!
01:26:425 (86425|6,87110|5) - 6 or 7? y no both same? move one of them to same column.. done
add stairs on 01:39:796 > 01:40:139 make it more entertaining.. ^^ done

[insane]
00:34:825 add on 7 I'd do that but it would look bad with the SV change
00:37:567 add on 1 ^
00:36:025 (36025|1) - move to 1 moving to 3 instead
00:36:110 (36110|5) - move to 7 ^ 5
00:37:567 add on 4 same as above
01:48:367 - 01:48:882 - 01:49:396 - 01:49:910 add on 4 ~~(or 2 notes on 3 & 5.. xp)~~ it's already hard enough, and earlier in the map there's 2-chords too

[expert]
demn.. i love how those notes layering each other... *-*
....
00:29:853 (29853|5) - 00:32:596 (32596|2) - o_o too short? change to double circles instead or make it longer (until it attached to another longnote) it plays ok though .-.I'll see if others complain
00:34:825 add on 5 can't, same reason as insane
00:35:339 add on 4 ^
00:37:567 ^ ^

did i miss anything rong? ._.

good luck! and i wish this ranked soon! thanks

Thank you for the mod ^_^

LordRaika

Elite Mapper

1,438 posts

Joined September 2013

LordRaika 2014-05-26T02:10:01+00:00

Request Mod from Lightning Speed Mania Modding

osuu~

Column |1-7|

Full Mod Inside

What??? am i supposed to mod this Mania??? XD
As far as i see, everything is good, i love a map tht has beautiful pattern and pitch relevancy

we even has similiar in mapping style of this kind of pattern. ^^
anyway, its jst great...

but here goes some SUGGESTION , not obligation
[7K Insane]
00:21:967 - recommended to have 1 more note at 4
00:23:167 (23167|6,23167|0,23339|1,23339|5) - CTRL+ G , then 00:22:996 (22996|5) - move to 5 , finally delete 00:22:996 (22996|1) - pitch relevancy and still chord , u might wnt to change their hitsound if u apply these.

00:32:767 (32767|4,32767|3) - switch their column? and connect the stairs pattern above and some notes if u do so

00:42:196 (42196|1,42196|4,42282|2,42367|3,42453|4,42539|5) - recommended, move all 1 column to the right

00:46:653 - delete 1? and move the 1 left on 4

00:49:653 (49653|3,49653|1,49653|5,49910|2,49910|3,49910|4) - CTRL+G, recommended
if u do so, its better for 00:49:396 (49396|5,49396|1,49396|2,49396|4) - to have the same 3 chord as a bit hammer too,
also same sound pitch.

01:21:796 (81796|3,81796|5,81967|6,81967|4) - Ctrl+G , 01:21:625 (81625|4) - to 4

01:36:282 (96282|1,96367|5,96367|2,96453|6,96539|5,96625|4,96710|3,96796|1,96882|0,96967|2,97053|4,97225|0,97225|5) - Ctrl+H?

01:55:053 (115053|6) - remove?

[7K Expert]
00:06:539 (6539|3) - move to 5

00:10:139 (10139|1,10139|3,10139|5,10653|4,10653|2,10653|3) - Ctrl+G and 00:10:310 (10310|6,10310|3,10310|0,10653|1,10653|3,10653|5) - Ctrl +G , because of the sound... but if u wnt to keep the current pattern? its fine too

00:46:482 (46482|4) - to 6?

01:40:396 (100396|4,100482|2) - Ctrl + H
01:43:567 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1645139 change the pattern a bit? easier to follow like this...

01:48:025 (108025|1) - remove?

01:48:367 (108367|5,108367|1,108539|2,108539|4,108882|2,108882|4,108882|5,108882|1) - CTRL + G , recommended
if u do so, hitsound XD turn 'em back...

01:56:253 (116253|6,116425|5) - connect these stairs from previous one?

thts all, but perhaps u should try to reduce the chord

, loooots of 6 chord detected XD
the difficulty gap is a bit too far from 7K Hard

[7K Hard]
00:20:425 (20425|2) - move to 4?
00:58:310 (58310|2) - move to 4?

01:46:310 (106310|4) - Ctrl+H

01:59:339 - add 1 note to 4

02:01:567 (121567|1,121567|5) - convert this 2 into LN?

[7K Normal]
01:17:167 (77167|6,77510|4,77853|2) - isnt this better to 5 6 7?

01:37:396 (97396|0,97396|2,98425|2,98425|4) - convert this into LN ,yes only this
great balance , nice , thts all ^^

[7K Easy]
00:46:139 (46139|6) - removeee, sound is too low and its EASY XD
and its because there are previous beat came first, its okay if this mapped on red then the next is white...

00:52:139 (52139|3) - remove, or add whistle if u wnt to keep it
00:54:882 (54882|3) - ^
00:57:282 (57282|4,57625|1) - ^

01:07:739 (67739|5,68082|4,68425|3) - remove and isnt this better to mapped on white line with whistle note ? look at the next pattern 01:08:596 - white line notes pattern too.

[7K Beginner]
XD no comment on this one

Done , beautiful song ^^

Dainesl

898 posts

Joined May 2012

Dainesl 2014-05-27T13:42:40+00:00

Taiko mod 'cause I wanted to mod something and 'cause Tear wanted me to mod this ;w; win-win

General

AIMod says that kiai's toggled frequently in Zexous' Oni but it's being baka I assume ;_;
also make sure if it's necessary to put the mappers' names in the tags despite their names being shown in the GD names
other than that everything's fine

Muzukashii

hitsounds seem to be too loud; why not keep them to about 85% like the Oni does so that it doesn't sound out-of-place?
00:01:910 (3,4) - perhaps map the snares here; you mapped them at 00:03:110 (7,8,9) -
00:08:253 (24) - add a finisher here since there was one at 00:06:882 (20) - ?
00:22:996 (81,82) - these two notes sound quite similar; so perhaps show this with two kats instead
01:32:596 (341) - add a finisher here because there's one at 01:31:910 (337) - for consistency? they sound kinda similar
I really can't find much to say ;_;

Oni

word of warning: I FC'd this my first try so if there's something that I don't think plays well do consider it, even if only slightly
00:19:910 - Perhaps add some notes here; it feels a bit empty here imo...(and only imo)
00:24:025 (148,149,150,151) - to be fair I think that this would play better as a standard k ddk but it's fine as it is, just being biased towards doublets

00:25:396 - same as 00:19:910
01:15:967 (498) - maybe you should make this a k so as to map the snare correctly
again I can't say much what is wrong with me ;_;

good luck!!

yoshilove

yoshilove 2014-05-27T15:36:41+00:00

hi~~ from mania queue :3

column : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

mania modding

[7K Beginner]
01:40:139 - add note to 4 *

[7K Easy]
01:18:196 (78196|3) - move to 3
01:18:196 - add note to 5
01:40:139 - add note to 6 *

[7K Normal]
00:50:767 - add note to 6
00:59:682 - add note to 7??
01:21:967 - add note to 6
01:22:996 - add note to 1, 4
01:40:139 - add note to 4 *

01:41:167 - add one note (clap)
01:41:510 - remove one note

01:41:853 - add one note (clap)
01:42:196 - remove one note

01:42:539 - add one note (clap)

01:49:910 (109910|3) - LN end ~ 01:50:425

01:56:939 - add one note (clap)
01:57:282 - remove one note

01:57:625 - add one note (clap)

01:58:310 - add one note (clap)
01:58:653 - remove one note

01:58:996 - add one note (clap)

[7K Hard]
00:10:996 - add note to 7 (finish)
00:50:767 - add note to 6
01:02:253 - add note to 4
01:22:996 - add note to 1, 7

[7K Insane]
00:00:882 - add note to 2
01:22:996 - add note to 3, 5
01:28:825 - add note to 4

[7K Expert]
00:03:967 - add one note
00:10:996 - add note to 5
00:11:339 (11339|4) - move to 6
00:11:339 - add note to 2

00:27:882 (27882|1) - remove
00:27:967 - add note to 6

00:31:225 - add note to 1

00:33:796 - add note to 5

00:35:339 - add note to 4
00:38:082 - ^

00:40:825 - add note to 6
00:41:167 - add note to 3, 5

00:46:310 - add note to 3

01:02:767 - add note to 4

01:18:539 ~ 01:21:967 - clap sound 3 notes, drum only 2 notes
ex:

01:18:539 - 3 notes
01:18:882 - 2 notes

01:22:996 - add note to 3
01:40:139 - add note to 6

Tear

332 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

Tear 2014-05-27T19:59:37+00:00

lordraika wrote:
Thanks for the mod, as you said all of those are suggestions and I don't want to spam the thread so pasting only stuff I applied
[7K Hard]
01:59:339 - add 1 note to 4 done

[7K Normal]
01:17:167 (77167|6,77510|4,77853|2) - isnt this better to 5 6 7? done

[7K Easy]
00:46:139 (46139|6) - removeee, sound is too low and its EASY XD moved it to a different column

Tear

332 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

Tear 2014-05-27T20:04:48+00:00

Dainesl wrote:
also make sure if it's necessary to put the mappers' names in the tags despite their names being shown in the GD names thanks, done

Tear

332 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

Tear 2014-05-27T20:22:15+00:00

yoshilove wrote:
hi~~ from mania queue :3 There's no reasoning behind any suggestion so I don't feel compelled to explain why I didn't apply it either. Therefore I'm only pasting accepted ones

[7K Hard]
01:02:253 - add note to 4 done

[7K Insane]
01:28:825 - add note to 4 done

[7K Expert]
00:03:967 - add one note done
00:31:225 - add note to 1 done
00:33:796 - add note to 5 done
00:41:167 - add note to 3, 5 done
00:46:310 - add note to 3 done

Lokovodo

463 posts

Joined December 2012

Lokovodo 2014-05-27T22:33:14+00:00

mod

got halfway through writing this and lost progress so yeah i am really mad but whatever

[7K Beginner]
01:00:367 add note 4?
01:00:710 add note 4?
[7K Easy]
00:10:996 move to 6 (suggestion)
00:11:682 move to 2 ^

00:26:767 move to 5 (suggestion)
00:27:110 move to 5 ^
00:27:453 move to 2 ^
00:27:796 move to 6 ^
00:28:139 move to 5 ^

[7K Normal]
not much to do here

[7K Hard]
00:33:282 (33282|0,33282|3,33367|1,33453|5,33539|6,33625|0) - feels awkward

00:33:367 move to 3 (suggestion)
00:33:453 move to 7 ^
00:33:539 move to 5 ^

[7K Insane]
I have only passed this difficulty just barely twice so i probably shouldn't mod lol same for 'Expert'

Zexous

713 posts

Joined July 2012

Zexous 2014-05-28T05:10:03+00:00

Dainesl wrote:
Oni
word of warning: I FC'd this my first try so if there's something that I don't think plays well do consider it, even if only slightly
00:19:910 - Perhaps add some notes here; it feels a bit empty here imo...(and only imo) I couldn't figure out what to add that would still sound nice and not awkward T_T
00:24:025 (148,149,150,151) - to be fair I think that this would play better as a standard k ddk but it's fine as it is, just being biased towards doublets Fixed
00:25:396 - same as 00:19:910 Same response
01:15:967 (498) - maybe you should make this a k so as to map the snare correctly Fixed and adjusted surrounding notes to fit what I wanted with the flow
again I can't say much what is wrong with me ;_;

also changed some of the early 1/6 parts to not be so anal

Thanks!

http://puu.sh/94pr2/0ab3f41bcd.osu

Shiro

Global Moderator

4,984 posts

Joined May 2009

Shiro 2014-05-28T07:34:30+00:00

Dainesl wrote:
hitsounds seem to be too loud; why not keep them to about 85% like the Oni does so that it doesn't sound out-of-place? I found the hitsounds in oni too quiet but k
00:01:910 (3,4) - perhaps map the snares here; you mapped them at 00:03:110 (7,8,9) - This is more a matter of structure than anything, but I started by following that kick sound, then used the same rhythm with snares >.<
00:08:253 (24) - add a finisher here since there was one at 00:06:882 (20) - ? I guess
00:22:996 (81,82) - these two notes sound quite similar; so perhaps show this with two kats instead okay
01:32:596 (341) - add a finisher here because there's one at 01:31:910 (337) - for consistency? they sound kinda similar I don't want to have D ddd too many times, it's not that easy to play, so I didn't add a finish here
I really can't find much to say ;_;

Thanks for the mod.
Tear: add Odaril to tags >.>

http://puu.sh/94vvJ/02b1535b03.osu

Tear

332 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

Tear 2014-05-30T21:50:04+00:00

Lokovodo wrote:
[7K Hard]
00:33:282 (33282|0,33282|3,33367|1,33453|5,33539|6,33625|0) - feels awkward

00:33:367 move to 3 (suggestion)
00:33:453 move to 7 ^
00:33:539 move to 5 ^ done all those

Thanks for the random mod o_o

Konpaku Sariel

778 posts

Joined October 2010

Konpaku Sariel 2014-06-02T11:46:27+00:00

Zexous' Oni

00:03:967 (12) - d

00:14:510 (77) - d

00:18:196 (106,107) - ctrl + G
00:20:939 (125,126) - ctrl + G
00:23:682 (146,147) - ctrl + G
00:26:767 (168,169,170,171) - kkdd

00:27:796 (175,176,177,178,179) - kkddk or kkdkk
00:28:653 (183) - d

00:33:225 (206,207) - ctrl + G

01:47:682 (755,756,757,758,759) - kkdkd

Zexous

713 posts

Joined July 2012

Zexous 2014-06-02T17:16:59+00:00

Konpaku Sariel wrote:
Zexous' Oni
00:03:967 (12) - d I feel that the sound suggests k k D instead of k d D

00:14:510 (77) - d ok

00:18:196 (106,107) - ctrl + G ok
00:20:939 (125,126) - ctrl + G ok
00:23:682 (146,147) - ctrl + G ok
00:26:767 (168,169,170,171) - kkdd ok

00:27:796 (175,176,177,178,179) - kkddk or kkdkk went with kkdkk
00:28:653 (183) - d I actually want to keep this k because I think it sounds and plays better

00:33:225 (206,207) - ctrl + G I actually had that before so I'll put what I had before back

01:47:682 (755,756,757,758,759) - kkdkd ok

Thanks!
http://puu.sh/9c3ic/3e05e76b4d.osu

mliencheng

460 posts

Joined November 2010

mliencheng 2014-06-11T12:41:19+00:00

Taiko Diff Mod ~

Shiro's Muzukashii

00:24:539(87,88) kd
00:38:253 k
01:05:853 k
01:25:396 k

Zexous' Oni

00:08:082 d
00:09:367 d
00:14:425 add d

00:19:739 k
00:19:910 add d
00:19:996 add d
00:20:082 k
00:20:167 k

00:25:225 k
00:25:396 add d
00:25:482 add d
00:25:567 k
00:25:653 k
00:28:396 delete note
00:28:739 add k
00:43:225 add k
01:35:510 k
01:58:482 k
02:01:910 k

Nice map

Charlotte

1,905 posts

Joined December 2013

Charlotte 2014-06-12T08:52:31+00:00

Hi from Charlotte's　Taiko Modding Queue

d
k
D(big d)
K(big k)

Shiro's Muzukashii

00:13:225 (40) - change d
00:14:082 (44) - change k
00:14:596 (46,47) - change d
00:22:657 - add d
00:26:939 (99) - change d
01:24:540 (307) - change d
01:25:397 (311) - change k
01:25:911 (313,314) - change d
01:36:556 - add d

Zexous' Oni

00:08:082 (32) - change d
00:22:396 (135) - change d
00:25:567 (159) - change k
00:37:567 (234) - change k
01:08:082 (437) - change k
01:58:480 (837) - change k
02:00:710 (853,854,855,856,857,858,859,860,861,862,863,864,865,866,867,868) - And think again

Good luck

lolcubes

osu! Alumni

4,437 posts

Joined November 2010

lolcubes 2014-06-17T01:36:15+00:00

[Zexous Oni]

Chatlog:

SPOILER

2014-06-17 02:19 lolcubes: 00:22:139 (134,135,136,137,138) - better flow as ddkkd
2014-06-17 02:19 lolcubes: but you can keep ddkkk
2014-06-17 02:19 lolcubes: its not bad to play and sounds nice
2014-06-17 02:19 lolcubes: up to you
2014-06-17 02:20 lolcubes: 00:39:453 (251,252,253,254) - i would go for kkddd perhaps, or kkddk maybe instead of thhe finishher and kkd
2014-06-17 02:20 lolcubes: still just a minor suggestion
2014-06-17 02:21 Zexous: for first one i'll take your suggestion
2014-06-17 02:22 Zexous: for the second one
2014-06-17 02:22 Zexous: what do you think of kdkkd
2014-06-17 02:23 lolcubes: i like kdkkd, but since you actually do incorporate a lot of melody into this map, kdkkd is actually doing it backwards
2014-06-17 02:24 lolcubes: dkddk would be better than kdkkd
2014-06-17 02:24 Zexous: ok
2014-06-17 02:24 lolcubes: dkddk is actually pretty badass here
2014-06-17 02:24 lolcubes: cause of 00:40:482 (258,259,260,261,262) - 
2014-06-17 02:24 lolcubes: whichh is a logical progression based on pitch
2014-06-17 02:25 Zexous: too much of my standard mapping leaks into taiko lol
2014-06-17 02:25 Zexous: but ok changed to dkddk
2014-06-17 02:26 Zexous: what do you think of 01:35:339 (654,655,656,657,658) - making this dkkkd
2014-06-17 02:26 lolcubes: 01:03:282 (405,406,407,408,409,410,411) - kkdkdkd is better
2014-06-17 02:26 Zexous: as opposed to dkdkd
2014-06-17 02:26 lolcubes: dkkkd hm
2014-06-17 02:26 lolcubes: well
2014-06-17 02:26 Zexous: that's what the modder said so
2014-06-17 02:26 lolcubes: i dont like to go spread my own style
2014-06-17 02:26 Zexous: i'm not sure what i want though
2014-06-17 02:26 lolcubes: but id probably use dkddk here as well
2014-06-17 02:27 lolcubes: instead oof dkdkd k d id map dkddk d k
2014-06-17 02:27 lolcubes: not thhere yet thhough
2014-06-17 02:27 lolcubes: sec
2014-06-17 02:28 lolcubes: 01:08:767 - adding a don here for gameplay reasons is a good idea
2014-06-17 02:28 lolcubes: 01:10:996 (467,468,469,470) - D kkk imo
2014-06-17 02:28 lolcubes: logical progression
2014-06-17 02:29 Zexous: changed to D kkk
2014-06-17 02:30 lolcubes: 01:11:510 (471,472,473,474,475,476,477) - id probably try to go with melody here
2014-06-17 02:30 lolcubes: since you're mapping it hhere mostly
2014-06-17 02:30 lolcubes: dkkdkkk K K
2014-06-17 02:30 lolcubes: 01:13:567 (486,487,488,489,490,491) - this doesnt work because its inconsistent and not really in the music
2014-06-17 02:31 lolcubes: can just go kkd kkd kkd imo
2014-06-17 02:32 Zexous: for first one what do you think of ddkkdkd
2014-06-17 02:33 lolcubes: that is ok too
2014-06-17 02:33 lolcubes: id probably use ddkkdkk instead then
2014-06-17 02:33 lolcubes: better flow and same pitch
2014-06-17 02:33 Zexous: ok i'll do that
2014-06-17 02:35 lolcubes: 01:26:425 (585) - 01:27:110 (590) -  id probably just remove finishhers
2014-06-17 02:35 lolcubes: sure thhere are crashes in the music but you dont hhave to map every single one
2014-06-17 02:36 Zexous: ok
2014-06-17 02:36 lolcubes: 01:29:339 - its actually good to add a note hhere, its in the music and creates variety compared to first kiai
2014-06-17 02:36 lolcubes: dkd
2014-06-17 02:36 lolcubes: 01:32:082 - same
2014-06-17 02:37 lolcubes: 01:33:282 (638,639,640,641,642,643,644,645,646,647) - doont be afraid to use oone stream here
2014-06-17 02:37 lolcubes: might even remove 01:33:367 (639) - 
2014-06-17 02:38 Zexous: don't be afraid as in i can do that or i should do that
2014-06-17 02:38 lolcubes: http://puu.sh/9wQt1/646565d7ee.jpg try this, the current position is at 01:33:282 - 
2014-06-17 02:39 lolcubes: 01:36:196 - actually a melody note in the music, don't miss it :p
2014-06-17 02:39 lolcubes: 01:38:425 (680,681,682,683) - dont foorget to use D kkk hhere
2014-06-17 02:39 Zexous: long stream one is ok'd
2014-06-17 02:40 lolcubes: 01:38:939 (684,685,686,687,688,689,690,691) - would proobably do the same as before like we discusses
2014-06-17 02:40 Zexous: melody note one, d or k to add?
2014-06-17 02:40 lolcubes: ddkkdkk K
2014-06-17 02:40 lolcubes: d
2014-06-17 02:40 Zexous: that's what i thought
2014-06-17 02:40 lolcubes: 01:58:139 (840,841,842,843,844,845) - this doesn't work, just use two triples instead
2014-06-17 02:41 lolcubes: no need to improvise here, thhe music is clear and dynamic
2014-06-17 02:41 Zexous: tbh
2014-06-17 02:41 Zexous: i'm looking at that and even i don't know why i put that there
2014-06-17 02:41 Zexous: shrug
2014-06-17 02:42 lolcubes: 02:01:739 (871,872,873,874) - thhis is incorrect, it should be 1/4 
2014-06-17 02:43 Zexous: well it sounded like 1/8 to me
2014-06-17 02:43 Zexous: and i didn't know what to do there and someone told me to use 1/6
2014-06-17 02:44 Zexous: that does sound silly now that i think about it
2014-06-17 02:44 lolcubes: nah at 25% melody is clearly 1/4 and the rhythm beats sound improvised rather thhan 1/6
2014-06-17 02:44 Zexous: i can't even tell
2014-06-17 02:44 Zexous: is that 4 beats i should put there
2014-06-17 02:44 Zexous: or 5
2014-06-17 02:44 lolcubes: try this http://puu.sh/9wQWB/f150d8fb47.jpg
2014-06-17 02:45 lolcubes: splitting them up else the stream pattern is really awkward
2014-06-17 02:45 lolcubes: thhat one melody note you will miss is actually almost inaudible
2014-06-17 02:45 lolcubes: can use ddkdkkkk as well instead of ddkdkkdk
2014-06-17 02:46 lolcubes: both work, kkkk is easier to end withh
2014-06-17 02:46 lolcubes: for those crazy doubletimers
2014-06-17 02:46 lolcubes: also ooone more thhing
2014-06-17 02:46 lolcubes: you should adjust your speedups
2014-06-17 02:46 Zexous: yea i know
2014-06-17 02:46 lolcubes: 0.05 increments are too big
2014-06-17 02:46 lolcubes: use 0.025
2014-06-17 02:46 Zexous: they're really choppy
2014-06-17 02:46 Zexous: i'm gonna get on that
2014-06-17 02:46 lolcubes: final kiai base speed is fine
2014-06-17 02:47 lolcubes: just less increments
2014-06-17 02:47 lolcubes: also
2014-06-17 02:47 lolcubes: 01:39:625 (691,692,693,694,695,696) - use same speed as previous speed
2014-06-17 02:47 lolcubes: so the final kiai is still faster but the notes aren't as shifted
2014-06-17 02:48 lolcubes: ohh and
2014-06-17 02:48 lolcubes: 01:41:682 (707,708,709,710,711,712,713,714,715,716,717) -  kkdkdkdkddk imo
2014-06-17 02:48 lolcubes: fits the melody the best and is a nice pattern to play
2014-06-17 02:48 lolcubes: or kkdkddkkddk

Zexous

713 posts

Joined July 2012

Zexous 2014-06-17T01:59:50+00:00

mliencheng wrote:
[Zexous' Oni]00:08:082 d Ok I guess..
00:09:367 d Ok
00:14:425 add d There's beats in the background I emphasized with that setup so no to this

00:19:739 k No beacuse that part of the song feels really wrong on ddkkk
00:19:910 add d Ok
00:19:996 add d ^
00:20:082 k ^
00:20:167 k I actually like ddkkd ddkdk more than ddkkd ddkkk so no but I yes'd the other ones

00:25:225 k Same configuration as suggestion set before
00:25:396 add d Same configuration as suggestion set before
00:25:482 add d Same configuration as suggestion set before
00:25:567 k Same configuration as suggestion set before
00:25:653 k Same configuration as suggestion set before
00:28:396 delete note Note is actually there in music so I'll keep it
00:28:739 add k Looks like an awful idea to have dkkkkD, to make sure I took it up with lolcubes the great and he agreed with me
00:43:225 add k Well I mean I ended up adding a d
01:35:510 k ~~Kinda like it, kinda don't, will get more input on that, for now keeping.~~ Mod directly below said same thing so approved
01:58:482 k Changed from cubes' mod, so yeah
02:01:910 k Changed this completely from cubes' mod so uh

Nice map

Charlotte wrote:
Zexous' Oni

00:08:082 (32) - change d Already d, don't know whose mod I changed that from but yeah on my end already d
00:22:396 (135) - change d I'm actually wanting to keep this
00:25:567 (159) - change k Changed from mlien's mod, yeah
00:37:567 (234) - change k To match music and keep consistency, I'm not changing this
01:08:082 (437) - change k Hmm...mlien suggested this too so I guess I'll do it
01:58:480 (837) - change k Already k from cubes' mod
02:00:710 (853,854,855,856,857,858,859,860,861,862,863,864,865,866,867,868) - And think again Haha...changed from cubes' mod

Thanks mlien, Charlotte, and lolcubes!

(Sorry for the delay, Tear) http://puu.sh/9wVPB/a0cd27d857.osu

cheesiest

721 posts

Joined September 2009

cheesiest 2014-06-18T20:26:22+00:00

nice mapset u got there

69653863

1,818 posts

Joined January 2012

69653863 2014-06-24T08:31:33+00:00

Mod request from my queue

Guide

Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

Additional notes:
I cannot mod another game modes.
Please reply to my mods, I always looking forward to the replies so I could improve better.
If you think one or more points on my mod is unclear, feel free to ask about it.

Some useful links for mapping:
Analyzing flow in beatmaps
Mapping polarity
How to make beautiful sliders
How to make beautiful sliders (advanced)
Difficulty naming
Advanced Timing

ok

bu,per

00:26:082 (1,2) - Notice how the spacing is aesthetically too short. I recommend to put it this way http://puu.sh/9HLXf/fa833f0ab5.jpg so spacing looks way aesthetically neater. Diagram about aesthetic spacing if you don't get things. This little distance didn't hurt much as it's not that noticeable anyway (just a 0.19x increase)
00:28:825 (1,2,3,4) - If possible maybe you could unify the spacing? Like http://puu.sh/9HMdA/ab6300846c.jpg
00:48:710 (3,4) - Aesthetic spacing pls?
01:16:825 (3) - Yoeri™
01:23:682 (1) - Maybe use curve instead? You're going to use straight sliders three times in a row in the next pattern, so I guess a bit of variation should be nice.
01:55:910 (4,1) - Aesthetic spacing?

zexius

00:13:739 (1,2,3) - Why stack three of them? Why don't you just place like 00:12:367 (1,2,3) - ?
00:40:310 (2,3,5) - Different blanket spacing.
00:42:196 (4,1) - Perfect overlap pls http://puu.sh/9HMtZ/849328e8df.jpg
01:22:139 (1,2) - Kinda... too far away. I suggest this: http://puu.sh/9HMyw/2817e0dbcb.jpg Might not be that aesthetically pleasing but eh yeah.
01:35:339 (3,1) - Blanket spacing too close.
02:01:567 (2) - This curve is ;________; maybe try something like this and facing this way? http://puu.sh/9HMFz/3d774572dd.jpg
01:02:453 (3) - remove 1 repeat and add note at white tick <- MOD BY CHEESIEST

2 free mod for zexius in 1 day
i am truly generous

insane & extra are both ok

GL mang

Yoeri

433 posts

Joined March 2012

Yoeri 2014-06-24T23:35:39+00:00

inverness wrote:
bu,per
00:26:082 (1,2) - Notice how the spacing is aesthetically too short. I recommend to put it this way http://puu.sh/9HLXf/fa833f0ab5.jpg so spacing looks way aesthetically neater. Diagram about aesthetic spacing if you don't get things. This little distance didn't hurt much as it's not that noticeable anyway (just a 0.19x increase) Uhh with 3/2 all over the map that 0.19 is definitely going to hurt, especially since this is the lowest diff.
00:28:825 (1,2,3,4) - If possible maybe you could unify the spacing? Like http://puu.sh/9HMdA/ab6300846c.jpg I cannot.
00:48:710 (3,4) - Aesthetic spacing pls? no ):
01:16:825 (3) - Yoeri™ Shame I didn't use many slider shapes in this map.
01:23:682 (1) - Maybe use curve instead? You're going to use straight sliders three times in a row in the next pattern, so I guess a bit of variation should be nice. Done.
01:55:910 (4,1) - Aesthetic spacing? sry

Avena

2,158 posts

Joined December 2012

Avena 2014-06-26T16:49:05+00:00

SUPRISE, ~~BUTTSEX~~ MOD

General

Add to tags: Shiro Odaril Zexous Yoeri cheesiest Oriental Core
Ew these combo colors
The rules now say that the lowest diff needs to be 2 Stars while Yoeri's Normal is 2.04, This is probably fine, but ask a BATman ~~dundundunnnn~~ about it to be sure.

cheesiest's Expert

OD +1 plsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplspls
00:00:367 (1) - Maybe change this into a drum with a finish ontop? Sounds really nice imo
00:08:082 (1,5) - ok bby wtf is this the cymbal is on the big white tick y u do dis iz 2strange4u pls.
00:08:939 (5) - Add a finish? There's a cymbal here.
00:11:339 (4) - Is this finish actually needed? it sounds overly loud and covers the whistle, And there also isn't anything that is emphasising it.
00:30:025 (1) - 00:32:768 (1) - 00:35:510 (1) - 00:38:253 (1) - Maybe add a clap on these? There's a strong sound that you emphasised by the finish but it honestly isn't enough considering how loosely you have been using finishes on this diff.
00:39:796 - Maybe add a drum finish every other white tick on this part? There are strong snares and I feel like the drum whistle will fit this really well.
00:51:453 - 00:52:825 - 00:54:196 - 00:55:567 - Maybe add a normal clap on these? It fits the music pretty well and it fills the missing impact you have here with the hitsounding.
00:55:567 - This rhythm gap is a bit odd in my opinion, maybe do something like this to fill it in?
01:00:110 - Why does the spinner end here? It doesn't really make sense imo.
01:00:539 - The 1/8 starts here, Maybe change it accordingly, Maybe like this? Also, the 1/8 is REALLY loud, consider using drum instead for it.
01:40:825 (1) - Is this NC really needed? There's already a new combo on the previous note which is on the big white tick, It's a bit strange that you're NC spamming here and not on the streamjumps EHMEHMEHM
01:56:596 (1) - Add a finish? Fits the music pretty well considering there's a cymbal sound there.
01:57:796 (1) - Why does this end on a big white tick? Also, a finish will fit that white tick pretty well.
01:59:339 (1) - Add a finish here too? There's the same cymbal sound here too.

Yoeri's Insane

00:10:310 (5) - Add a new combo for better readability of the star? At the moment it's a bit confusing since it's different spacing but same combo.
00:18:882 (6) - As far as I know, stacking sliders like this at such beat gap isn't allowed, Consider moving it a bit so it's still overlapping the previous slider but isn't completely stacked.
00:21:625 (6) - Same as above.
00:27:110 (6) - Same as above.
00:55:396 (3,4,5) - This isn't properly spaced due to stack leniency, consider doing a manual unstack for the stream so you can properly space it afterwards.
02:00:025 (5) - Same as previously stated, Consider adding a new combo to make it nicer to read.
02:01:567 (4) - Make this end 1/4 earlier? The 1/4 sound ends at 02:01:996 - So I guess it will make sense.

The only form of Yuri I like

Zexous' Hard

00:23:339 (1,2,3) - This doesn't really flow well visually, It doesn't change anything when playing but it looks a bit bad.
00:50:253 (2) - Add a whistle on both head and body? Fits the song pretty well in my opinion.
01:13:910 (5) - Even though it will make the spacing imperfect, I think Ctrl + G will make this much nicer to play.
02:01:567 (2) - Maybe make this end 1/4 earlier since the 1/4 sound ends at 02:01:996 - ?

Zezus 2pro

Yoeri's Normal

Use Tickrate 2 to be consistent with the other diffs.

STOP BEING SO PRO

I'll mod da takos on IRC if the mappers want I guess.

cheesiest

721 posts

Joined September 2009

cheesiest 2014-06-26T17:03:22+00:00

Priti wrote:
cheesiest's Expert
OD +1 plsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplspls
00:00:367 (1) - Maybe change this into a drum with a finish ontop? Sounds really nice imo k
00:08:082 (1,5) - ok bby wtf is this the cymbal is on the big white tick y u do dis iz 2strange4u pls. no
00:08:939 (5) - Add a finish? There's a cymbal here. ok
00:11:339 (4) - Is this finish actually needed? it sounds overly loud and covers the whistle, And there also isn't anything that is emphasising it. ok
00:30:025 (1) - 00:32:768 (1) - 00:35:510 (1) - 00:38:253 (1) - Maybe add a clap on these? There's a strong sound that you emphasised by the finish but it honestly isn't enough considering how loosely you have been using finishes on this diff. ok
00:39:796 - Maybe add a drum finish every other white tick on this part? There are strong snares and I feel like the drum whistle will fit this really well. not feeling it idgi
00:51:453 - 00:52:825 - 00:54:196 - 00:55:567 - Maybe add a normal clap on these? It fits the music pretty well and it fills the missing impact you have here with the hitsounding. ok
00:55:567 - This rhythm gap is a bit odd in my opinion, maybe do something like this to fill it in? ok
01:00:110 - Why does the spinner end here? It doesn't really make sense imo. idk
01:00:539 - The 1/8 starts here, Maybe change it accordingly, Maybe like this? Also, the 1/8 is REALLY loud, consider using drum instead for it. that's the 1/6, i am mapping the 1/8
01:40:825 (1) - Is this NC really needed? There's already a new combo on the previous note which is on the big white tick, It's a bit strange that you're NC spamming here and not on the streamjumps EHMEHMEHM removed nc
01:56:596 (1) - Add a finish? Fits the music pretty well considering there's a cymbal sound there. ok
01:57:796 (1) - Why does this end on a big white tick? Also, a finish will fit that white tick pretty well. no, it ends on a big white tick beucase IT fITS the SONG pelase
01:59:339 (1) - Add a finish here too? There's the same cymbal sound here too. ok

code

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TitleUnicode:China Dress
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Version:cheesiest's Expert
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AncuL

1,114 posts

Joined March 2013

AncuL 2014-07-02T02:55:42+00:00

plsplspls
this is awsum

[Shi-Ra]

458 posts

Joined October 2012

[Shi-Ra] 2014-07-02T10:01:49+00:00

Hello, there are mods for your mania chart ^w^

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 for 7K diffs)
7K Hard

Inside :3

00:08:767 (8767|2) - I recommend you to move this note to 4th column, you can perform more suitable stair transition here with that position, now it's uncomfortable a little, check that

00:11:510 (11510|2) - you may start your next going pattern from 4th column here, with such position you could avoid ruining alternate pattern and make it little harder

00:21:967 (21967|3) - I suggest you to use open chord here by moving this note to 6th column, it goes well with your current note position

00:22:482 (22482|5,22567|6) - switch the places for these notes by 6th and 5th columns accordingly, it'll be more balanced with your previous and next going triplets here

00:26:253 (26253|5,26339|4,26425|3) - move these notes right by one column, make some balance by leaving centre column empty

00:39:796 (39796|3) - I recommend you to use opened chord again by moving this note to 2nd column, it'll be more suitable pattern for this part

00:54:367 (54367|2) - move to 0 column, it follows your previous pattern more correctly here

01:28:567 - I think you can add here one more note to 5th column to follow all sounds correctly, it won't be so hard

7K Insane

Inside :3

00:04:310 (4310|2) - I suggest you to move this note to 4th column here and continue your stair pattern, don't ruin it here, it's awesome

00:10:825 - if you're following long sounds here, yoiu need to add here one more LN to 1st or 3rd column for example and end it here 00:10:996 - according to this sound, don't miss it

00:17:167 (17167|1,17167|5,17253|4,17339|3,17425|2,17510|1) - move all of them to left by one column, it'll be not so monotonous and more suitable with the sounds

00:19:910 (19910|2) - and this one I recommend you to move to 3rd column, it's uncomfortable to catch stream note after previous chord note in the same column, avoid double noting please

00:22:482 (22482|5,22567|0) - move these notes to 3rd and 5th columns accordingly, this pattern will be much comfortable to play here

00:41:853 (41853|1) - this LN should ends at 00:42:196 - check LN placement with lower playback

00:44:596 (44596|5) - and this LN should ends here 00:44:939 - according to the sound correctly, check that

01:07:910 (67910|4) - I recommend you to move this note to 0 column, it'll be more comfortable to play here

01:17:853 - make some alternating? it's well suitable here / example

01:22:139 (82139|4,82139|1) - move these notes to 0 and 3rd columns accordingly, it'll be more suitable bracket here

01:22:996 - add here at least one chord with two notes to accent strong beat

01:40:396 (100396|2) - and this note I suggest you to move to 6th column, keep balance

7K Expert

Inside :3

Wow, I can't update this diff and check it afterall o.o
All what I've got it's the ded screen x.x
Moreover when it was finally opened (after 1-2 mins) I've checked AiMod and ohmydog there are 23 warnings
Please fix all of them~

No problems for other diffs owo
Good luck :3/

Yoeri

433 posts

Joined March 2012

Yoeri 2014-07-02T14:59:26+00:00

Priti wrote:
Yoeri's Insane
00:10:310 (5) - Add a new combo for better readability of the star? At the moment it's a bit confusing since it's different spacing but same combo. Nay
00:18:882 (6) - As far as I know, stacking sliders like this at such beat gap isn't allowed, Consider moving it a bit so it's still overlapping the previous slider but isn't completely stacked. Oh shit okay
00:21:625 (6) - Same as above. ^
00:27:110 (6) - Same as above. ^
00:55:396 (3,4,5) - This isn't properly spaced due to stack leniency, consider doing a manual unstack for the stream so you can properly space it afterwards. Fixed
02:00:025 (5) - Same as previously stated, Consider adding a new combo to make it nicer to read. Nah
02:01:567 (4) - Make this end 1/4 earlier? The 1/4 sound ends at 02:01:996 - So I guess it will make sense. It's mapped to the bass.
The only form of Yuri I like
Yoeri's Normal
Use Tickrate 2 to be consistent with the other diffs. Wait, is tickrate consistency a thing?
STOP BEING SO PRO

PROGUY

osu! Alumni

936 posts

Joined October 2010

PROGUY 2014-07-09T13:31:23+00:00

Hi Tear.

Here's my check as requested.

[General]
- You MUST add the tags of the name of guest difficulties' creators in the set.

[7K Easy]
00:16:482 I recommend moving the notes like THIS for an Easy. The current pattern is suitable for Normal and above.
00:28:482 ^
01:12:025 ^
01:39:453 (99453|3) Move to 3rd column.
01:50:767 (110767|3) Move to 4th column.

[7K Normal]
HP Drain + 1 or 1.4

[7K Expert]
- Loading this specific difficulty in the Editor freezes my client. Please resubmit this.

Zexous

713 posts

Joined July 2012

Zexous 2014-07-10T00:22:22+00:00

Sorry for delay Tear

inverness wrote:
zexius
00:13:739 (1,2,3) - Why stack three of them? Why don't you just place like 00:12:367 (1,2,3) - ? O-okay...
00:40:310 (2,3,5) - Different blanket spacing. oh whatever it's to keep consistent spacing from 1 to 2 and from 2 to 3 fuck you inverness
00:42:196 (4,1) - Perfect overlap pls http://puu.sh/9HMtZ/849328e8df.jpg ok
01:22:139 (1,2) - Kinda... too far away. I suggest this: http://puu.sh/9HMyw/2817e0dbcb.jpg Might not be that aesthetically pleasing but eh yeah. ew. I'll get more feedback on that but das nasty so I'll keep for now
01:35:339 (3,1) - Blanket spacing too close. O-okay...
02:01:567 (2) - This curve is ;________; maybe try something like this and facing this way? http://puu.sh/9HMFz/3d774572dd.jpg O-okay...
01:02:453 (3) - remove 1 repeat and add note at white tick <- MOD BY CHEESIEST no
2 free mod for zexius in 1 day
i am truly generous truly

Priti wrote:
Zexous' Hard
00:23:339 (1,2,3) - This doesn't really flow well visually, It doesn't change anything when playing but it looks a bit bad. I like how it looks
00:50:253 (2) - Add a whistle on both head and body? Fits the song pretty well in my opinion. Very nice
01:13:910 (5) - Even though it will make the spacing imperfect, I think Ctrl + G will make this much nicer to play. no
02:01:567 (2) - Maybe make this end 1/4 earlier since the 1/4 sound ends at 02:01:996 - ? I...I don't know...cheese's ends there but Yoeri's ends where mine does, I...I don't know...

Zezus 2pro

http://puu.sh/a4oXX/5144824c55.osu

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