1. 01:21:611 (3) - slider as well? (2/4 beat). It is same at 01:22:758 (1) - .Or try ↓(not good)
   
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1. NP

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tellertheworld wrote:

IRCMOD for Insane

00:44 tellertheworld: hello~ Are you here now?
00:45 Akemi_Homura: Hi~
00:45 tellertheworld: hey~ Do you have a some time now~?
00:46 Akemi_Homura: okay~ what's the matter~? :3
00:46 tellertheworld: It is from my modding queues~
00:46 tellertheworld: I want to IRCMOD with you~
00:46 tellertheworld: For this map
00:46 *tellertheworld is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/401141 Hidamari Sketch Cast - Open Canvas (TV Size) [Insane]]
00:46 tellertheworld: Is it yours?
00:46 Akemi_Homura: ahh okay~ :3
00:47 tellertheworld: Thank~
00:47 Akemi_Homura: yeah
00:47 Akemi_Homura: okay~~ :3
00:47 *Akemi_Homura is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/401141 Hidamari Sketch Cast - Open Canvas (TV Size) [Insane]]
00:47 tellertheworld: checking~
00:48 tellertheworld: 00:31:611 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
00:49 tellertheworld: 00:31:611 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:31:939 (5,6,7,8) - is two group of the different vocal.
00:50 Akemi_Homura: hmm
00:50 tellertheworld: You can try the rebound slider
00:50 tellertheworld: 2rebound slider
00:51 tellertheworld: or try to other pattern
00:51 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/8xyKa.jpg I fixed this like your suggestion~! :3
00:51 tellertheworld: This is my suggestion
00:52 Akemi_Homura: okay~ :3 I'll try
00:53 tellertheworld: 00:45:217 - add note . IMO, I think it is not separate (the rhythm) here add~! :3
00:53 tellertheworld: It is same with 00:45:381 (3,4,5,6,7) -
00:53 tellertheworld: 00:45:381 (2,3,4,5,6) -
00:54 tellertheworld: 00:49:316 (3) - http://puu.sh/8xyX7.jpg Do you get a mistake in the location? Fixed~
00:54 Akemi_Homura: okay~
00:56 Akemi_Homura: oh.. fixed
00:56 tellertheworld: 00:56:201 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - your flow is clockwise here. IMO, It is too many too clockwise feel strange for me. (tips only) I change some arragement.
00:59 tellertheworld: 01:22:595 - add note . because you are add note at 01:19:972 - . It is same rhythm.
00:59 tellertheworld: Or try to http://puu.sh/8xzk0.jpg Fixed~
00:59 tellertheworld: 01:22:758 (1) - make a rebound for this slider
01:01 tellertheworld: You are apace 01:22:595 - and 01:23:086 - It is special in this part. It is close to space frequent. I know.. but I think It's not a big issue.. so no change for now..! sorry~ ><
01:03 Akemi_Homura: hmm..
01:03 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/8xzC4.jpg
01:04 tellertheworld: Do you know what I want to suggest?
01:05 tellertheworld: My English is not good.
01:05 Akemi_Homura: umm..
01:05 Akemi_Homura: I don't understand 'close to space frequent'
01:08 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/8xzYE.jpg
01:10 Akemi_Homura: okay~
01:10 Akemi_Homura: I understand o.o
01:13 tellertheworld: ... I am start talk about my feel for this map. ( You can see it but you can not change it)
01:14 tellertheworld: 00:00:054 - to 00:05:054 - this is the drum part. I feel you should not slider to map this map yeah.. there is drum part. but If I use just all note. It's too many note in start I think.
01:14 tellertheworld: 00:14:070 - and 00:14:398 - space here. The space is too close and make the rhythm look like slowly. Fixed~ but idk It's okay. =3=;
01:16 tellertheworld: 00:40:463 (4,5) - it is jump over for the refrain part (same at 00:35:709 (1,2,3,4,5) - / 00:38:660 (6,7) - / 00:42:595 (2,4) - ) Fixed~
01:17 tellertheworld: 00:52:267 (1) - I think it is more good flow if you Ctrl+G Fixed~
01:18 tellertheworld: that all for the Insane diff
01:18 Akemi_Homura: okay~ owo;;
01:18 Akemi_Homura: I'll checking them all..
01:19 tellertheworld: Can you tell me what you are change / fix later?
01:19 Akemi_Homura: okay~~ =3=
01:19 tellertheworld: Thank a lot~
01:19 Akemi_Homura: Can you upload this log~?
01:19 Akemi_Homura: to thread
01:19 tellertheworld: yea..
01:20 tellertheworld: But I am not mod the whole map
01:20 tellertheworld: The easy and normal diff
01:21 Akemi_Homura: hmm... then please upload your mod(All diff)... with this chat-log~ :3
01:22 tellertheworld: let me mod normal and easy now~
01:23 Akemi_Homura: I have to go out now~ orz
01:23 *tellertheworld is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/401178 Hidamari Sketch Cast - Open Canvas (TV Size) [Normal]]
01:24 tellertheworld: Oh I see. Let me mod it and post it in the map thread ,is it okay?
01:24 Akemi_Homura: yeah~ Thank you~
01:24 tellertheworld: welcome

blue : suggestion
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1. 01:21:611 (3) - slider as well? (2/4 beat). It is same at 01:22:758 (1) - .Or try ↓(not good) No change~ :3 When I changed that slider It's hard to follow for beginner I think..!
   
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yurunneram wrote:

Hi gomen for late ^^"

EASY

AR is pretty high hmm.. no fix now~! I think it's okay for beginner to play.

00:00:136 (1) - use same slider as (3)? Fix~!



00:29:480 (4) - Start at 00:29:316 for consistency. Right now the rhythm there is hard for beginners to hit Fix~!

00:40:791 (2,1) - Use same slider Fix~!

00:51:283 (1,3) - ^ Fix~!

01:00:299 (2) - NC for emphasis no change~ If I change this.. previous note is ambiguous.

01:12:267 (1,3) - Use same slider Fix~!

NORMAL

00:42:758 (2) - Lift tail. Blanket isn't perfect Fix~!

01:20:627 (2,3) - Found the rhythm here weird umm.. I think it's follow vocal..? anyway remained now~ :3

Can't mod further than that ^^"

Not bad. A star

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~

Natsu wrote:

Hard:

1. I'll like if you talk a bit with Akemi_Homura about the circle size for a better spread // Well you know spread of cs doesn't really matter.
2. Also try HP 6 for better spread with the insane diff // Indeed, but I feel 5 is enough.
3. 00:02:595 the hit here sound really not nice IMO, since there is nothing in the music, I have two suggestions for this case: 1 use a single circle is the best way IMO or 2 reduce the volume in the tail of the slider // I got caught x.x Reduced volume.
4. 00:08:168 (2,3,4) - this sliders doesn't sound nice with the song rhythm, mainly cuz you're starting them with a pretty low sound, also is not even consistent with your previous section in 00:06:693 (1,2,3,4) - and the music is almost the same at this point, try this instead: // You'll find it's kinda consistent with rather 00:05:381 (1,2,3,4). Also, I wanted to make 00:08:004 (1) as a note.
5. 00:22:595 missing NC I suppose, also will fit the vocals line pretty nice // idk.. I prefer my current combo.
6. 00:42:103 you was mainly following the vocals, that's why this 1/1 slider doesn't fit the music, try to don't ignore the vocal at 00:42:267 - try this: // You're true. But I want to keep this pattern for the slider blanket of 00:42:103 (1,4).. Also since this isn't at least a nonsense, hope you can understand.
7. 00:46:693 what are you following with the repeat of this slider? the vocal emphasis is in 00:46:857 -, try this better: // .......... I didn't knew it. Fixed
8. 00:48:496 (4) - <3
9. 01:17:184 (5) - stack this with 01:17:840 (2) - properly // Fixed

Irreversible wrote:

[Sonnyc's Hard]

00:32:267 (3,4) - CTRL + G the rhythm so you don't ignore the downbeat // I'm not sure what you are meaning about that. Anyways, I wanted to keep a clap in one slider.
00:32:922 (1) - 1/2 slider + circle? To match the vocals better. // Since a hard 1/4 pattern appeared before, I ignored and made a 1/1 slider for a relax.
00:48:496 (4) - NC for slider art? ~ // I won't regard this as an art x.x Anyways, I simply think NC here won't fit the vocal.
01:26:366 (3,1) - Same reason as above (Ctrl + G because of the downbeat) // The suggested rhythm feel nice, but I can't measure whether the current one is better, or yours is better. I feel this is an area of personal preference, and I'll keep mine. Also to follow your rhythm, I have to ruin symmetry and I don't think it's a good idea since an organized form was consisting from 01:14:890.

The hitsounds in the kiai were.. really .. noisy.. I would make them more calm, like in the other diffs. Honestly, I didn't like them at all. // Assuming the normal sampleset was the main reason, replaced with soft.

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360,100,56693,1,2,0:2:0:0:
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Irreversible wrote:

#modreqs special round!

[Easy]

00:01:447 (3,4,1) - Try to get a better transition like this: http://puu.sh/8z1pG/43b4309135.jpg It will flow better.
00:04:070 (3) - Quite boring for what you have in the song (the rhythm), maybe you want to place some smaller sliders to fit it more?
00:31:611 (1) - Try to get it parallel with 00:30:299 (5) - ? http://puu.sh/8z1vJ/0b904639f6.jpg Like this.
01:09:644 - I wouldn't ignore this really heavy beat here (big white tick, also called Downbeat), you should make it a clickable action, with a slider start or a circle.
01:15:217 (1,2,3,4) - Try to get a square, it looks a bit cleaner and plays better imo. http://puu.sh/8z1C8/99169956dd.jpg Like this.
01:20:135 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I suggest reworking this part because the rhythm appears to be really messed up, it's not really well following the rhythm nor the vocals, try to stick for WHITE ticks especially because it's an easy diff!

[Normal]

00:24:726 (1) - Not enough recovery time. Probably it'd be better if you end it 00:25:709 - ?
00:57:840 (4) - Blanket
01:14:562 (5) - Blanket
01:20:135 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as in Easy. hmm.. I think It's follow vocal. and It's can be played by normal player imo..?but I'm not sure about this. anyway no change for now..! :3

Pretty okay, what I didn't like was the rhythm in the first part of the kiai (00:51:283 (1,2,3,4,1) - ) because it was rather boring.. it would be nice to see a bit of variation there!

[Insane]

00:00:791 (3) - For flow reasons; rotate by 28°? (selection centre)
00:01:447 (4) - don't forget to copy paste again.
00:02:267 (6) - Make it straight to the bottom to get a cleaner symmetry pattern?
00:03:414 (3,4) - Just something that randomly came to my mind, I think it'd get more interesting with it: http://puu.sh/8z2Kx/20ed87768d.jpg ? 4 is stacked with 1, and 2 is Circle 1 + ctrl + j
00:04:070 (1,2,3,4) - What about a square pattern instead? http://puu.sh/8z2On/7aa331ca0a.jpg
00:05:709 (2,3,4) - I see that you like those patterns of 3 sliders, but the overlaps look pretty unprofesionnal; let me help you a bit. If you have 3 sliders, you can make a really awesome pattern by rotating them by 120°! http://puu.sh/8z2W9/e1c4c71399.jpg For example like this. It flows awesome! Keep it in your mind.
00:07:349 (4,5) - Those sliders don't really flow well, you could use straight sliders instead, or try another pattern.
00:08:660 (3,4,1) - Use my idea from above.
00:08:496 (2) - Why the stack by the way? It kills the movement really much! Just normal spacing.
00:09:972 (4) - Watch the spacing.
00:10:955 (3,4,5) - Flows really bad, why not finishing the star pattern? According to what you placed it should be like : http://puu.sh/8z37H/170e9148d2.jpg
00:12:021 - Bad overmap, just delete it
00:13:742 (2) - Extend it to : 00:14:070 -
00:16:201 (2) - Spacing
00:17:676 (3) - Avoid the overlap, make a neat blanket with 1?
00:19:808 (1) - Weird flow again, you could stack it with 3, for maybe smth like http://puu.sh/8z3g2/3044d60e94.jpg ?
00:23:086 (3,4,5) - Make a better triangle, not touching 2 http://puu.sh/8z3iL/a2180e6ac0.jpg
00:24:398 (3) - Blanket
00:24:726 (4,1) - Sounds bad, don't use an extension here!
00:26:365 (1,2) - Bad following of the vocals, actually it's just triplets~
00:26:119 - Overmap, delete
00:28:660 (5) - Don't stack it, for movement reasons again
00:29:316 (2,3) - Keep the flow and also watch the spacing; try another placmeent.
00:29:972 (1,2,3,4) - Looks a bit weird again, if i remember correctly I pointed a pattern liks this up already. Maybe try a square slider pattern instead of those?
00:31:611 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Use a normal stream and don't move it in middle of it, it's not needed and a difficulty spike.. it doesn't really play well as well
00:36:529 (6,7,8,9,1) - Make a nicer curve?
00:38:168 (5) - Blanket
00:39:972 (2) - no stack
00:45:873 (4,5) - No extension
00:47:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Well.. I don't really like this part, I think it could be a bit more spectacular, what about a circle pattern with the sliders, and a stream instead of those? D: 00:48:660 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/8z3zK/d948a1ddc4.jpg like this? Look at the arrows haha
00:53:250 (4,5,6) - Those triplets aren't in the song, it doesn't really fit!
00:55:217 (1) - No exntesion
00:59:152 (1) - ^

The Insane could definitely need some work, talking of the flow and about how you did the patterns. But you're on the right way, I hope you can get some ideas! Good luck.

Fycho wrote:

Hello, mod requst from popner's modding team

[Mod Info]

1. Black: Suggestions
2. Bold: Important. You should consider
3. Red: Unrankable issues. You Must Fix

[General]

1. Clear

[Insane]

1. 00:03:414 (3) –try removing clap at sliderend please, maybe you can listen to the music closely,
   00:03:578 –and 00:03:414 -00:00:955 -00:00:791 –are just the same in the music, they are all kick-drums.
2. 00:04:070 (5,7) –remove clap please, 00:04:070 (5,6,7,8) –this two circles are the same beat in the music. Same hitsounds can express them better.
3. 00:05:709 (2,4) –Why not add clap at these sliders’ head? They are at 2,4 white-tick and require a clap hitsounds. But you could remove clap at00:06:037 (3) –since there is no snare-drum at 3rd white tick. 00:07:676 (5) –This is the same, please add clap, 00:07:676 -00:07:349 -00:07:021 –these three are the same
4. 00:09:972 (4) –add clap at sliderhead like00:07:349 (4) -,you missed it.
5. The spacing between 00:08:004 (1,2) –and 00:08:496 (2,3) –are quite big, which casue a bad flow. I’d suggest you move 00:08:496 (2) –to (236,188) for better flow
6. 00:09:972 (4,1) –avoidng meaningless overlap here, you can move00:09:972 (4) – to(184,160)
7. 00:11:283 (5,6) –The two sliders curve at the same direction, which makes a bad flow too, how about this?
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   , you can adjust00:11:939 (1,2,3,4) –after this changing.
8. 00:14:562 (4) –Add a finish to express the stress in music.
9. From00:15:873 - to00:23:742 -, please notice that there are two snare-drum at 00:16:693 -00:16:529 (4) -00:18:004 -00:18:168 -00:19:316 -00:19:480 –etc, so you should add whistle(your snare drum hitsound) at each of them like you added at00:20:627 -. Please listen to the music carefully to add hitsound.
10. 00:17:185 (1,2) –The spacing here seems a little small comparing with00:16:201 (2,3,4) -. I’d suggest you choose a decent spacing as regular spacing, and you can change the spacing when putting jumps. I'd suggest you move 00:17:513 (2) - to (280,36)to make the flow more natural
11. 00:21:119 (1) –why do you add clap at sliderend? It will be nice if you use whistle here instead, like the snare-drums at00:22:103 –
12. 00:24:398 (3,4) –For this two sliders, I’d say that the beats at00:24:398 -00:24:726 –are quite different from the beats at00:23:742 -00:24:070 -, so if you choose a different rhythm it will be much better imo. I will give you three kinds of suggestions.
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    ,
    SPOILER

    
    ,
    SPOILER

    
    . And don’t forget to add finish at00:24:398 -00:24:726 -
13. 00:25:054 (1) –There is no beat at this big white tick, you used too many rhythm like this so there are too many 1/2 spam rhythms, which make the diff feel very boring. Try this rhythm please,
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    , you can refer to the last suggestion as well
14. 00:26:037 (5) –I’d suggest you change this to a triplet, since there are three drums in music, following more drums makes insane diff’s rhythm more variously and intetesting.
15. 00:28:168 (4,5,6,1) –This pattern is almost a line, which is hard to hit. I’d suggest you move00:28:824 (6) –to(241,147)for better flow
16. 00:30:955 (4) –According to the drums in music, I’d like you change this into three circle to express the drums better, here is an example,
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17. 00:31:939 (1) –maybe remove new combo to keep the consitency with00:26:693 (4) –?
18. 00:35:054 –There is no beat at here, so reverse slider00:34:890 (3) – is overmapped ,This makes here a kind of 1/2spam like I said above. This plays very weird since you put strong beat at sliderend, I’d suggest you try this,
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    , Also you can make jump at00:34:890 (3,4) –
19. 00:38:824 (7) –again there is no vocal/drum at here, so please don’t use something like 1/2spam.Try this please,
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20. 00:39:480 (1,3) –They are too close in placement, try avoiding this by moving 00:40:135 (3) to(197,211). Don’t forget to move 00:40:463 (4,5,6) –as well
21. 00:39:480 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) –weird 1/2 spam can’t express music well…you can follow drums to use 1/1slider and triplet,
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22. 00:43:906 (2,3) –How about CTRL+G to follow the obvious 00:42:595 (2) –here? If I change this.. 00:44:234 this moe vocal is ignored.. orz
23. 00:45:873 (4) –Finish at sliderhead doesn’t follow anything in music imo, there is no cymbal or stress vocal in music, please remove it and add at00:46:037 -
24. 00:47:185 (8) –this spacing doesn’t fit the music well, I’d recommend you move 00:47:185 (8) –to(29,157)because 00:47:185 –is weak, and00:47:349 –is strong, 00:47:185 (8,1) –with large spacing plays more smooth.
25. 00:52:267 (1) –why do you add finish at sliderend…. This doesn’t follow anything
26. 00:52:267 (1,2) –00:53:578 (1,2) - exchange new combo for consistency I suggest you add nc ad big white tick
27. 00:53:906 (2) –If you want to keep the finish at sliderhead, please add finish at00:52:595 -00:55:217 –for constancy.
28. 01:00:955 (3,4) –I’d recommend you move01:01:447 (4) – to(168,20), a small jump plays better since the two drums at01:01:283 -01:01:447 –need to be emphasized
29. 01:06:857 (1) –please notice that there is a cymbal in music at01:07:021 -, so I suggest you use this rhythm to emphasize that, and 01:07:513 (3) – change to 1/1 slider since there is no beat at01:07:676 - , don’t 1/2 spam again.
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    , don’t forget to add finish at01:07:021 –and 01:07:513 –
30. 01:12:758 (2) –01:13:906 (2) - Adding a finish at sliderhead will be better like01:12:267 (1,3) –
31. 01:19:808 (4) –how about this rhythm?
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    , There is drum at01:20:054 –.
32. 01:22:758 (1) –Try this rhythm to follow drum like01:20:135 (1)
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[Normal]

1. Raise CS by1 please, We usually use CS3 as normal diff. and your hard is cs4, so it’s good to keep a balance with normal diff and hard diff.
2. 00:00:791 (2,3,4) –This pattern looks a mess, try to avoid so many overlapping objects,
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3. 00:04:070 (3,4) –This rhythm is a little hard for normal diff. How about this?
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4. 00:33:742 (1,2) –Please swap new combo, keep the consitency with00:28:496 (5) –
5. 00:34:234 (2) –add finish at sliderhead /reverse arrow/end to express the cymbal in music
6. 00:35:709 (1,2) –This rhythm maybe hard for normal diff, if you emphasize the drum at white tick 00:35:873 - ,it will be better imo,
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7. 00:56:201 (1,2) –swap nc because 00:56:529 –is big white tick
8. 00:59:152 (5) –add nc here, and remove nc at01:00:135 (1) –for consistency ….orz
9. 01:04:398 (1) –why not add finish here? You added at sliderhead00:53:906 (1) –

[Easy]

1. 00:31:530 (1)- I am pretty sure that you make an incorrect rhythm here, why does this slider start at blue tick ? wrongly snapped. Start at00:31:611 –please
2. 00:30:299 (5) –Try this rhythm to keep a consitency with00:27:676 (2) -, since 00:30:955 –there is no drum ,
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:34:234 (1,2) –add finishes at these objects to emphasize cymbal in music
4. 01:10:627 (5) –maybe you missed finish at sliderend.
5. 01:24:070 (3) –This is a inaccuracy rhythm imo, please listen to music closely, the strong beat is at01:24:562 –so you’d better end this silderend at01:24:562 -not01:24:726 -. You did this at01:21:447 (3) –,right? Also don’t forget to add finish at sliderend.

Good luck.

Laurier wrote:

from my queue

Easy
00:18:496 (3) - add new combo from your patterns.
00:28:988 (3) - same as adove
00:29:316 (4,5,6) - try this rhythm. it will be more easier rhythm for beginners. http://puu.sh/8DYAv.jpg
00:35:217 - it is better to follow vocal with long slider. http://puu.sh/8DYEX.jpg
00:53:906 (1,2,3) - move to center this symmetry pattern. http://puu.sh/8DYKi.jpg
01:00:955 (3) - add finish on end of slider ?
01:01:775 (1,2,3) - 01:00:955 (3) - down to this sliders end. and use symmentry pattern again ? http://puu.sh/8DYYp.jpg
01:09:644 (3) - NC
01:17:840 (1) - why disobey with flow ? http://puu.sh/8DZ9z.jpg

Nromal
00:00:791 (2,3,4) - how about this flow ? http://puu.sh/8DZjt.jpg
00:03:414 (2,3,4) - same as adove http://puu.sh/8DZmx.jpg
00:44:234 (5,6) - change to slider ? this stack notes is looks not good imo
01:21:447 - you should add note with follow vocal. umm.. I think It's okay.. 01:21:447's vocal is too silent so It's no matter to follow I think.
hard
looks good for me

Insane
00:04:890 (9) - stack this properly
00:17:676 (3) - too close this blanket. please makes better one http://puu.sh/8E0xQ.jpg
00:55:217 (1) - stack was good. but you can make blanket and stack. i thought it is great. http://puu.sh/8E0Kz.jpg

Leorda wrote:

Hi there.... sorry long delay

[Easy]
00:44:726 (1) - Whistle+finish at tail slider can disturb player's ear because it's too noise for them. Consider to remove whistle to avoid this Fixed~!
00:46:037 (2) - ^ Fixed~!
01:00:955 (3) - ^ (applied for head slider) Fixed~!
01:13:086 (2) - ^ Fixed~!

[Normal]
00:28:496 (5) - Forgot to put whistle at head slider? Fixed~!
01:20:627 (2) - How about snap the repeating slider to previous white tick to match the vocal at music itself? Since the previous slider is match the vocal hmm... I think my slider fit to vocal (first is 'su', reverse is 'su' and tail is 'yo'.) So no change for now~ :3
01:21:611 (3) - Maybe placing at 01:21:447 with finish hitsound would be good for emphasing stuff... but that just my opinion... If I changed this, It's hard to play for beginner..I think..

That's all I got...

Tsukuyomi wrote:

General
the sound of sliderbody is noisy, silence it.

Easy
00:04:070 (3) - miss finish on head
00:05:054 (4) - suggest you to use a 1/2 slider to replace it, than you can add finish at 00:05:381 instead of missing it
00:10:627 add a note here, same reason as above
00:47:349 (3) - a bit tricky, i will miss the slider's end when i hear the sound at 00:48:004, so i suggest you to shorten it to 00:48:004 and add a note at 00:48:332
01:08:004 (1) - tricky too, don't know when it ends,i suugest you delete it, add a note at 01:08:004, than put a 3/2 slider at 01:08:332

Normal
00:08:004 (1) - personally hate this kind of blanket, ugly. plz take care about the spacing between circle and circle

SPOILER

00:13:742 (2) - finish on head and 00:14:234 (3) - add finish, sounds nice
00:56:201 (5) - this 3/2 gap is a bit wired,since it is a circle,not a slider, i suggest you to delete it and put a 1/2 slider at 00:56:037 to keep the rhythm consistant
01:21:611 (3) - i feel confused when hear the sound at 01:21:447, suggest you to delete it and put a 1/2 slider at 01:21:447

Insane
triplets all start at white line, this is terrible
00:04:070 (5) - wrong spacing,00:03:414 (3,4) - 1/2 jump, 00:03:742 (4,5) - 1/1 gap but same spacing, it may be misread.at least NC 00:04:070 (5) -
00:25:709 (4) - i think this is not a good flow, flow like this is better

SPOILER

00:26:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - wrong rhythm, if you don't know why it is wrong, 25% and listen

SPOILER

00:48:988 (5,6) - even repeat, notice this, you'd better use pattern like this, easier for players to deal with

SPOILER

01:18:824 (1,2,3,4) - all ctrl g. for same reason above

SPOILER

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sammy711 wrote:

i will mod this one
From BMT

1st PC

[General]
The romanised title should be "Open*Canvas (TV Size)" for every symbol in the song title should be marked as "*".
Give an example:
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/338593

Look

[Easy]
00:05:049 (4) - You should add a clap on the head of this slider for every note before 00:05:376 - should follow the same system. So this one should keep consistent with 00:03:737 (2) - .
00:35:212 (3) - A life-bar-touching slider here. Avoid it by move down 00:34:557 (1,2,3,1) - together without ruin that blanket
01:24:557 - downbeat here and no specific sound 01:24:721 - here. So using the very same rhythm with 01:21:442 (3) - is a better choice here. In a word, shorten that 01:24:065 (3) - to the red line 01:24:557 - I used that before.. but I think It's too hard for beginners. so just make 1/1 rhythm. :3
[Normal]
Not much to say. Just want to complain that this normal is a little bit overdifficult.
01:12:753 (2,3) - better blanket can be done

01:26:032 (2) - weird rhythm here.It is following the vocal that 01:23:245 (2,3) - set. However if players follow the way they did here, they must think that there is a note on 01:25:868 - .
I highly suggest that you change the rhythm to ↓

Look

[Insane]
00:35:704 (1,2,3,4,5) - you can try follow the tune to make this pattern
00:35:704 (1) - do here and 00:35:868 (2) - rai here 00:36:032 (3) - mi here 00:36:196 (4) - fa here……
In a word, 00:35:704 (1,2,3,4,5) - tend to become higher one by one, so pattern like

Look

fits better instead of the former one.
00:47:344 (1,3) -Actually the voice is the same and there is no reason to use different samples. So instead of this whistle, maybe a finish is better here 00:47:671 (3) -
00:59:803 (4) - Almost touch the bar... Better avoid it
01:19:393 (8,1) - Don't stack it here because the auto stacking system will automatically move the note 01:19:393 (8) - to the left-right way. And what this results in is that the stream looks like breaking into two part from 01:19:311 (7,8) - here. And placement like

Look

should be enough
01:15:540 (3,4,5) - should have the same disance to 01:15:212 (2,6) - these two sliders. (310,105) should be OK
01:16:852 (3,4,5) - ^
That's all

chose this one because I love this song so much
Hope you can get this one ranked!

-Chata- wrote:

Hi. From -Chata- & K.P's Modding Queue

[General]

Clear

[Easy]

00:09:639 (3,4,1) - 디스탠스 상으론 맞지만.. 육안으로 보기에도 부자연 스럽습니다. (4)번을 왼쪽위로 한칸 올려주세요00:47:344 (3) - NC00:51:278 (1,2,3) - ^^과 마찬가지로00:58:819 - 박자를 하나 추가하는게 좋을것같습니다01:09:311 (3,1) - Swap NC01:26:688 (3) - NC?

[Normal]

01:18:163 (2,3,5,6) - 노말유저에겐 상당히 독이되는 난패턴입니다. 리턴슬라이더를 고려 해보심이..

I'm sorry. I can not found any problems *-*

[Insane]

00:32:262 (1) - remove NC00:35:704 (1) - (4)와 너무 먼게 아닐까요. 아무리 인세인이라도 이정도로 구석에 있으면 알고있지 않는이상 반응하기 힘듭니다.00:37:835 (4) - NC00:40:130 (1,2) - swap NC00:45:868 (4) - NC00:58:819 (4,1) - swap NC01:00:622 (2) - Ctrl + G를 해줘도 괜찮을거같습니다. 흐름적으로.01:26:360 (1,3) - swap NC

It's over. 늦어서 죄송합니다 'ㅅ'.

sammy711 wrote:

[Sonnyc's Hard]
AR+1.
The first impression made when I play this map is that AR7 on such a high-BPM song is hell. Statistically, Almost all Hard with AR7 and 180-over BPM are awful when read. // I think you should practice more reading skills lol AR8 for Hard is tooooo stressful.
extremely recommend you shifting AR to 8
00:48:491 (4) - I am not sure whether this one is passable or not. You should ask a BAT about this slider for further advice // I'm sure for this.
01:01:606 - The kiai time section should better be the same with other mappers. Although this is a guideline, you may get many problems on this one when bubbled. // I prefer a fountain there.

-Chata- wrote:

[Sonnyc's Hard]

• AR을 8로해도 될정도네요 *ㅅ*

1. 00:06:688 (1,2,3,4) - 흐름에 상당히 위화감이 느껴지는데 http://puu.sh/9k6c3/2b2fa066f4.jpg 이런식의 배치는 어떠신지 // 음 비슷하게 수정해봤습니다.
2. 00:11:934 (1) - 휘슬이 조금 안어울립니다. 드럼 피니쉬를 추천드립니다. 00:11:278 (3) - 여기와같이 // 사실은 00:12:098에 휘슬이 있어야 정상인데 드럼휘슬이 이미 있어서 어쩔수 없이 머리에 대신 넣은 것입니다 이해 부탁해요~~
3. 00:52:753 - 이부분 애디션을 노말로 바꿔주세요 // 클랩이 나은거 같아요~~
4. 00:56:688 (2) - 00:57:344 - 00:57:671 -^마찬가지 노말로 바꿔주세요. 노말 휘슬의 시도는 좋았습니다. 하지만 사용한다면 약간의 일관성은 필요할거같습니다. 그 일관성이 필요한 부분이 예를들테면 묶어서 구간을 보는거지요. 00:51:278 ~ 00:53:573 의 하이라이트 초반부에서는 잘 휘슬을 사용하셨는데 00:53:737 ~ 01:01:442 의 일반 하이라이트 구간에선 구간통일이 안되있습니다. // 만들 당시 00:56:524 등의 피니시를 기점으로 힛사 패턴을 바꿉니다. 휘슬은 클랩과 달리 가사에 따르는 일관성이 떨어질수 있는 힛사라고 저는 생각합니다. 물론 규칙적이면 듣기 편하겠지만 음 따라 놓는것을 저는 선호합니다.

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Open_Canvas.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 51283
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 5383,15875,26367,35711,44728,51285,61777
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.300001

[Metadata]
Title:Open*Canvas (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:おーぷん☆きゃんばす (TV Size)
Artist:Hidamari Sketch Cast
ArtistUnicode:ひだまりスケッチキャスト
Creator:Akemi_Homura
Version:Sonnyc's Hard
Source:ひだまりスケッチ×ハニカム
Tags:Hidamari Sketch x honeycomb opening Sonnyc
BeatmapID:402922
BeatmapSetID:164824

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
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SliderTickRate:1

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