p3n wrote:

This map is a little different from the old version I had . juuuuuust a little


Some quick things I noticed:

02:09:748 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I'd love to see more of these transitional hitsound patterns throughout the map. ♥ I've only hitsounded to the song and sadly it's the only place where it does that. Unless you can show me otherwise.
02:14:350 (3) - reverse this slider to greatly improve cursor movement and flow. Yeah
02:23:725 (2) - ^same ok
00:29:691 (5) - missed normal sampleset switch here? yes
03:26:793 (3) - I'd prefer a more consistent gap here, like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1627077 this way the transitions for this one and the following combo feel more natural. I want to keep it the way it was
03:32:248 (4) - reversing this slider will improve the generall flow and the transition into the rectangle pattern 03:33:441 (5,6,7,8) - yeah
04:14:180 (2) - missed clap? yup

galvenize wrote:

Nothing to report on the SB I presume?

1. scale your 16:9 images to 960x540 (including your BG...because it is also used in the SB)
2. use 0.9x scaling in the .osb for everything as standard size (S,0,<time of first appearance of the sprite>,,0.9)
3. group your unnecessarily multiplicated sprites into one and use the key frames on the same image (fade to 0 if you don't use it for some time before ==> after
4. remove sprites from your .osb that are not longer in the folder ("HalfFlash")

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG1.jpg",320,240
 F,0,-3877,,1
 S,0,213,,0.9
 S,0,213,349303,0.9
 S,0,349303,354748,0.9
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"blackwhite.png",320,240
 F,0,-3877,,1
 S,0,-3877,,0.9
 F,0,87486,,0
 F,0,327475,349293,0,1
 F,0,349293,354748,1
 F,0,354749,,0
 F,0,174748,196566,0,1
 F,0,196566,,1
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Highlight2.png",320,240
 S,0,131112,,0.9
 F,0,131112,153612,1
 S,0,218384,262021,0.9
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Highlight.png",320,240
 S,0,152930,,0.9
 F,0,152930,153271,0,1
 F,0,153271,196566,1
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Half.png",320,240
 S,0,43839,,0.9
 F,0,43839,65657,0,0.5
 F,0,65657,87475,0.5
 F,0,87476,,0
 F,0,305657,327475,0,1
 F,0,327475,349293,1
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
 F,0,193839,196566,0,1
 F,0,196566,218384,1
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Panty1.png",320,240
 F,0,196566,,0
 M,0,196566,218384,306,295,258,285
 S,0,196566,,0.9
 F,0,197248,199634,0,0.4
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"black.png",320,240
 F,0,87144,87475,0,1
 F,0,87476,,0
 F,0,215316,215657,0,1
 F,0,215657,218384,1
 F,0,218384,218385,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"brightBG.png",320,240
 F,0,87475,87816,1,0
 S,0,87475,87816,0.9,1.2
 F,0,87817,,0
 S,0,87817,,0.9
 F,0,131112,131453,1,0
 S,0,131112,131453,0.9,1.2
 F,0,131454,,0
 S,0,131454,,0.9
 F,0,218384,218725,1,0
 S,0,218384,218725,0.9,1.2
 F,0,218726,,0
 S,0,218726,,0.9
 F,0,240203,240543,1,0
 S,0,240203,240543,0.9,1.2
 F,0,240544,,0
 S,0,240544,,0.9
 F,0,262021,262362,1,0
 S,0,262021,262362,0.9,1.2
//Storyboard Sound Samples

p3n wrote:

I know it is a lot of work but try to optimize your SB.......

....or use the fast optimized files here because I am a nice guy:
download scaled files here

and use this as your .osb

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG1.jpg",320,240
 F,0,-3877,,1
 S,0,213,,0.9
 S,0,213,349303,0.9
 S,0,349303,354748,0.9
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"blackwhite.png",320,240
 F,0,-3877,,1
 S,0,-3877,,0.9
 F,0,87486,,0
 F,0,327475,349293,0,1
 F,0,349293,354748,1
 F,0,354749,,0
 F,0,174748,196566,0,1
 F,0,196566,,1
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Highlight2.png",320,240
 S,0,131112,,0.9
 F,0,131112,153612,1
 S,0,218384,262021,0.9
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Highlight.png",320,240
 S,0,152930,,0.9
 F,0,152930,153271,0,1
 F,0,153271,196566,1
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Half.png",320,240
 S,0,43839,,0.9
 F,0,43839,65657,0,0.5
 F,0,65657,87475,0.5
 F,0,87476,,0
 F,0,305657,327475,0,1
 F,0,327475,349293,1
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
 F,0,193839,196566,0,1
 F,0,196566,218384,1
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Panty1.png",320,240
 F,0,196566,,0
 M,0,196566,218384,306,295,258,285
 S,0,196566,,0.9
 F,0,197248,199634,0,0.4
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"black.png",320,240
 F,0,87144,87475,0,1
 F,0,87476,,0
 F,0,215316,215657,0,1
 F,0,215657,218384,1
 F,0,218384,218385,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"brightBG.png",320,240
 F,0,87475,87816,1,0
 S,0,87475,87816,0.9,1.2
 F,0,87817,,0
 S,0,87817,,0.9
 F,0,131112,131453,1,0
 S,0,131112,131453,0.9,1.2
 F,0,131454,,0
 S,0,131454,,0.9
 F,0,218384,218725,1,0
 S,0,218384,218725,0.9,1.2
 F,0,218726,,0
 S,0,218726,,0.9
 F,0,240203,240543,1,0
 S,0,240203,240543,0.9,1.2
 F,0,240544,,0
 S,0,240544,,0.9
 F,0,262021,262362,1,0
 S,0,262021,262362,0.9,1.2
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Loctav wrote:

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