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Ray - lull ~Soshite Bokura wa~ (TV Size)

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Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, April 8, 2015 at 6:45:21 AM

Artist: Ray
Title: lull ~Soshite Bokura wa~ (TV Size)
Source: 凪のあすから
Tags: Nagi no Asukara opening Sekai captin1 alacat Sorda S_o_r_d_a
BPM: 133
Filesize: 18811kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. alacat's Normal (1.68 stars, 124 notes)
  2. captin's Insane (3.65 stars, 294 notes)
  3. Easy (1.39 stars, 86 notes)
  4. Hard (2.73 stars, 237 notes)
  5. S o r d a's Hard (2.68 stars, 199 notes)
Download: Ray - lull ~Soshite Bokura wa~ (TV Size)
Download: Ray - lull ~Soshite Bokura wa~ (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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osu! needs more Nagi no Asukara <3
Thanks for kanpakyin, Lanttu & Umi for the skin o3o
Thanks for Shad0w1and for the awesome video <3
REDOWNLOAD IF YOU DOWNLOADED IT BEFORE MAY/20TH ADDED A SKIN!
DON'T USE ANY OF THESE BACKGROUNDS WITHOUT ASKING ME FIRST
Last edited by Suimya , edited 40 times in total.
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
captin1
wow finally
Giralda
1,008 posts
Joined August 2012
Giralda
:D
Luna-
811 posts
Joined June 2012
Luna-
yay Nagi no Asukara <3
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
can't wait :D
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
Blaze it and praise it

Insane:
00:01:206 (2) - Add whistle on end of slider?
00:07:296 (10) - aaaa this is almost a star but its not pls make it a star ;3;
00:17:672 (5,6,7) - Move this a LOT northwest so it's parallel to (4) and makes a nice arc pattern.
00:19:251 (3) - any way to avoid this overlap?
00:22:635 (3) - This is weird because most other patterns like this aren't spaced out ;w;. Consistency is fun~. Make this note for all other patterns like this
00:28:048 (3) - ^
00:40:905 (5) - This placement is weird and a little bit cramped.
00:46:883 (4) - This in particular is weird, since it's not really even flowing with the previous slider. I'm sort of picking up on the stylistic choice, but i read it best when it flows right into it, while I read this as being later
00:48:349 (4,5,6) - Add hitsounds to make this have more of a point.
00:50:605 (6,7) - Use soft hitsounds so this isn't so heavy?
00:52:635 (1) - spacing consistency! This is a pretty odd jump to read
01:07:748 (2) - Even out the spacing, since this is within the combo?

Hard:
00:08:199 (2) - Add whistle
01:20:154 (1) - This jump is a bit weird since there's no real big imapct, and it isn't a very jumpy map

Pretty cool stuff yay

Sordy:
00:08:875 (3) - This is weird because you have jumps, so I'm expecting (3) to follow suit, but I just get an awkward blank space before hitting (3)
00:16:319 (4) - This slider will look nicer if it's a copy-paste of (2)
00:17:898 (7) - Have this start below (6) for flow
00:16:996 (5) - spacing inconsistencyo h no
00:33:687 (3) - This curve is really lopsided and it's not kawaii ;3;
00:51:958 (3) - Add clap on end of slider
00:53:537 (6) - Curve is lopsided~
01:24:214 (1) - This jump is a bit unexpected since my arm doesn't naturally flow towards there

Normal:
00:23:086 (2) - Move this down to create an arc shape
01:27:146 (1,2,3,4) - This seems super cramped compared to the rest of the map

Easy:
mlg
Sharlo
667 posts
Joined May 2012
Sharlo
Hi, From my queue~

☆ Easy

  1. 00:54:214 (5) - Clap
  2. 01:10:905 (1) - Clap on the tail?
  3. 01:27:146 (1) - I consider to use SC2 whistle here on the head

    Nice~

☆ alacat's Normal

  1. 00:43:612 (7) - add a note here
  2. 01:04:815 (3) - ^ I think two 1/2 sliders are more suitable for the music here
  3. 01:25:342 (1) - Im confusing about this repeat slider. How about change a 1/1 slider?

☆ S o r d a's Hard

  1. 00:06:845 (7) - Clap
  2. 00:08:199 (2) - Consider to reduce the spacing. There is no need to do a jump here. Moreover, 00:08:875 (3) - a normal space here will misdirect players.
  3. 00:09:101 (4,5,6,7) - The rhythm sounds bad, and it covers the drum sound here 00:10:003 -
  4. 00:10:905 (1,2,3) - I can't feel any proper with this triplet. Please remove 00:11:018 (2) -
  5. 00:14:063 (4,5,6) - ^ remove 00:14:176 (5) - please
  6. 00:15:417 (2) - Clap on the tail
  7. 00:16:319 (4) - ^
  8. 00:17:221 (6) - Clap both the head and the tail
    Lack of many Clap sound on the following notes.
  9. 00:26:920 (2,3,4,5) - Well I can't feel any association with the music here
  10. 00:30:981 (5,6) - Reduce some 1/2 sliders beginning at the red line please... it plays a bad feeling (1/1 slider is ok)
  11. 00:40:229 (1) - You should add a drum hit here like other diffs
  12. 00:55:342 (2) - Uh, a not proper jump

    Umm... There are many Messy and unreasonable hitsounds, triplets and jumps in this diff.
    I don't like that a bit.

☆ Hard

  1. 00:19:477 (3) - a nazi issue, move to 360,136, but I still feel a bit awkward with the flow
  2. 00:36:620 (1) - I think move a bit over will be better
  3. 00:40:680 (2) - Ctrl +G, since you make a jump here 00:42:033 (1,2) -
  4. 00:49:702 (2) - this slider is not fit. Clap should be 00:49:928 - here and you covered it. Consider to change another rhythm
  5. 01:01:432 (4) - Make a blanket?
  6. 01:10:905 (1) - 352,200 is better for the flow
  7. 01:15:417 (4) - change another trend
    SPOILER

☆ Captin's Insane

  1. Conflicting Title
    [Metadata]
    TitleUnicode:lull ～そして僕らは～ (TV Size)
  2. 00:13:387 (1,2,3) - space is a little large here
  3. 00:43:838 (1) - Oh... why use a Normal sampleset here! so Noisy lol
  4. 01:10:229 (8,9) - 2.47 is too much, consider about 2.10

    Funny diff, but I think too much jumps for this lively song.

That's all.
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
fixed everything on your mods owo/

Thanks for modding ww
S o r d a
1,576 posts
Joined July 2009
S o r d a
thank you
http://puu.sh/8SmGs.osu
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
updated! o3o/
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
captin1

CDFA wrote:

Blaze it and praise it

Insane:
00:01:206 (2) - Add whistle on end of slider? added a couple others instead
00:07:296 (10) - aaaa this is almost a star but its not pls make it a star ;3; it's not supposed to be a star
00:17:672 (5,6,7) - Move this a LOT northwest so it's parallel to (4) and makes a nice arc pattern.
00:19:251 (3) - any way to avoid this overlap?
00:22:635 (3) - This is weird because most other patterns like this aren't spaced out ;w;. Consistency is fun~. Make this note for all other patterns like this
00:28:048 (3) - ^ they're spaced out because they're 1/4 sliders, but i moved them a bit closer
00:40:905 (5) - This placement is weird and a little bit cramped. I really like the pattern here
00:46:883 (4) - This in particular is weird, since it's not really even flowing with the previous slider. I'm sort of picking up on the stylistic choice, but i read it best when it flows right into it, while I read this as being later hm moved in a bit
00:48:349 (4,5,6) - Add hitsounds to make this have more of a point.
00:50:605 (6,7) - Use soft hitsounds so this isn't so heavy? lowered volume
00:52:635 (1) - spacing consistency! This is a pretty odd jump to read I think it reads fine
01:07:748 (2) - Even out the spacing, since this is within the combo? didn't do exactly even but it's a bit closer

Sharlo wrote:

Hi, From my queue~

☆ Captin's Insane

  1. Conflicting Title
    [Metadata]
    TitleUnicode:lull ～そして僕らは～ (TV Size)
  2. 00:13:387 (1,2,3) - space is a little large here I think it's fine
  3. 00:43:838 (1) - Oh... why use a Normal sampleset here! so Noisy lol I like the heavier sounds
  4. 01:10:229 (8,9) - 2.47 is too much, consider about 2.10

    Funny diff, but I think too much jumps for this lively song. well as you just said, it's a lively song, so using more open spacing seems fine to me

That's all.
thanks!
SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: lull.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59402
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:lull ~Soshite Bokura wa~ (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:lull ～そして僕らは～ (TV Size)
Artist:Ray
ArtistUnicode:Ray
Creator:Sekai-nyan
Version:captin's Insane
Source:凪のあすから
Tags:Nagi no Asukara opening Sekai captin1 alacat Sorda S_o_r_d_a
BeatmapID:424450
BeatmapSetID:176187

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.9
SliderTickRate:2

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308,104,37071,2,0,P|260:116|212:108,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,200,37522,2,0,P|68:188|144:232,1,142.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,292,37973,1,10,0:0:0:0:
52,380,38199,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,380,38311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,380,38424,6,0,P|92:324|97:300,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,112,38875,1,10,0:0:0:0:
144,136,39101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
4,232,39326,2,0,P|-16:300|56:360,1,142.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,340,39778,2,0,P|164:328|220:336,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,332,40229,5,0,0:0:0:0:
424,308,40342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,272,40454,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,244,40680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,308,40905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,308,41357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,296,41582,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,172,41808,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,300,42033,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,316,42146,2,0,L|172:332,1,47.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,368,42484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,208,42710,2,0,P|80:144|56:128,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,304,43161,2,0,L|100:284,1,47.5
172,336,43387,2,0,L|244:356,1,47.5
280,264,43612,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,240,43725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,220,43838,5,12,0:2:0:0:
228,148,44063,2,0,L|160:216,1,95,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,148,44514,2,0,P|288:116|412:144,1,190,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,312,45191,2,0,P|352:280|328:240,1,95,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,128,45642,6,0,L|156:188,2,47.5,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,56,46093,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,200,46319,2,0,B|264:240|264:240|336:276|396:212,1,190,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,248,46883,2,0,L|432:276,1,47.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,332,47221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,176,47447,5,2,0:0:0:0:
176,212,47672,2,0,L|72:216,1,95,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,208,48123,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,304,48349,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,296,48462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,284,48575,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,144,48800,2,0,P|328:92|328:48,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,24,49139,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,20,49251,5,2,0:0:0:0:
112,72,49477,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,56,49702,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,172,49928,2,0,P|152:236|192:312,1,142.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,308,50379,2,0,L|316:352,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,364,50605,2,0,L|436:344,3,23.75,10|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,300,50830,2,0,L|422:273,3,23.75,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,236,51056,6,0,P|372:196|380:144,1,95,12|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,32,51507,2,0,P|268:88|264:136,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,236,51958,2,0,L|164:284,1,47.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,284,52184,2,0,L|58:239,1,47.5
96,176,52409,2,0,L|149:172,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,276,52635,6,0,P|300:288|364:268,1,95,2|2,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,124,53086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,152,53311,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,200,53537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,68,53763,2,0,L|232:72,1,95,10|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,184,54214,2,0,L|228:136,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,200,54665,5,2,0:0:0:0:
276,296,54890,2,0,L|260:348,2,47.5,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,296,55342,2,0,L|100:337,2,47.5
56,184,55793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,148,55905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,112,56018,2,0,L|60:68,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,96,56244,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,96,56357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,56469,5,2,0:0:0:0:
184,256,56695,2,0,L|156:300,2,47.5,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,232,57146,2,0,P|428:208|500:212,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,316,57597,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,160,57823,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,260,58048,1,10,0:2:0:0:
400,268,58161,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,276,58274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,252,58499,5,2,0:0:0:0:
368,252,58725,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,104,58951,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,304,59176,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,128,59627,6,0,L|440:108,11,15.8333333333333
452,160,60078,6,0,P|452:220|432:264,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,196,60529,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,332,60755,2,0,P|124:320|164:284,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,152,61206,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,336,61432,2,0,P|312:282|312:212,1,142.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,220,61883,6,0,L|393:314,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,232,62334,2,0,P|142:187|112:152,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,72,62785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,72,62898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,72,63011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,232,63236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,200,63462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,100,63687,6,0,P|360:80|388:40,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,184,64139,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,72,64364,2,0,P|176:88|136:140,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,328,64815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,176,65041,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,304,65266,6,0,P|71:330|117:335,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,224,65717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,352,65943,2,0,L|496:376,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,192,66394,2,0,L|368:168,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,284,66845,1,10,0:0:0:0:
208,88,67071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,152,67296,6,0,P|408:200|396:256,1,95,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,256,67748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,150,67973,2,0,P|167:111|208:88,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,239,68424,2,0,P|250:259|204:256,1,95,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,128,68875,2,0,P|384:100|404:76,2,95,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,216,69552,2,0,P|170:253|155:297,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,356,70003,2,0,L|328:340,1,47.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,248,70229,2,0,L|392:200,1,47.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,188,70454,2,0,P|488:132|472:96,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,88,70905,5,2,0:0:0:0:
108,248,71131,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,192,71357,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,112,71582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,80,71695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,40,71808,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,204,72033,2,0,L|192:260,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,288,72259,2,0,L|316:328,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,284,72484,2,0,P|428:216|464:184,1,95,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,168,72936,5,8,0:0:0:0:
384,80,73161,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,192,73387,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,64,73612,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,256,73838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,88,74063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,352,74289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,100,74514,6,0,P|34:46|60:9,1,95,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,128,74966,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,298,75191,2,0,P|163:226|185:174,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,184,75642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,136,75868,2,0,P|120:96|112:24,1,142.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,40,76319,6,0,L|48:144,1,95,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,112,76770,1,10,0:0:0:0:
132,232,76996,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,328,77221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,320,77334,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,304,77447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,276,77560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,244,77672,2,0,P|384:196|364:156,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,104,78123,6,0,P|136:120|96:112,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,108,78462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,80,78575,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,196,78800,2,0,P|228:240|236:292,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,356,79251,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,184,79477,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,332,79702,6,0,P|376:344|396:352,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,164,80154,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,88,80379,2,0,P|416:64|448:24,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,260,80830,2,0,P|204:240|180:208,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,80,81281,2,0,L|288:24,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,164,81507,2,0,L|352:252,1,47.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,132,81733,5,6,0:0:0:0:
416,112,81958,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,216,82184,2,0,P|200:232|160:216,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,200,82522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,164,82635,2,0,L|112:108,1,47.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,216,82860,2,0,L|45:262,1,47.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,344,83086,2,0,P|240:320|292:328,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,240,83537,5,0,0:0:0:0:
276,136,83763,2,0,L|260:84,2,47.5,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,296,84214,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,144,84439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,228,84665,2,0,P|168:232|116:216,1,95,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,64,85116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,148,85342,5,4,0:0:0:0:
228,320,85567,2,0,L|216:372,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,312,85793,2,0,L|351:361,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,248,86018,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,88,86244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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300,44,86920,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,232,87146,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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Suimya
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Suimya
updated o3o/
alacat
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alacat

CDFA wrote:

Normal:
00:23:086 (2) - Move this down to create an arc shape okey
01:27:146 (1,2,3,4) - This seems super cramped compared to the rest of the map yes ... fixed it.

Sharlo wrote:

☆ alacat's Normal

  1. 00:43:612 (7) - add a note here It's better to use 1/1 rhythm for beginners here
  2. 01:04:815 (3) - ^ I think two 1/2 sliders are more suitable for the music here Same.
  3. 01:25:342 (1) - Im confusing about this repeat slider. How about change a 1/1 slider? prefer to use 1/2 slider to follow this sound 01:25:567 - well, I don't think the players are confusing here.
Thanks ~

http://puu.sh/8TFXH.osu
Suimya
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Suimya
updated alacat's diff :3
Rare
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Rare
from my modding queue

[Setup]
i think that it is awkward for the player that there are too many similar colors.

[Easy]
00:07:296 (4) - pref clap. drum's whistle is not fit to music.
00:10:905 (3) - not hit to music too. pref use sampleset-soft.
00:11:357 (4) - NC
00:12:710 (5,6) - try this pattern. http://puu.sh/8TUw3.jpg
01:28:499 (2) - remove whistle to head.

[Normal]
00:25:342 (6) - うーん、00:23:988 (4) - ここと角度合わせたほうが綺麗に見えるかなあ。
00:28:048 (5) - 終点のwhistleと00:28:725 (6) - finishは合ってないと思う。俺ならどっちもclapにする。(6)に関しては同じ音でfinishがなってて個人的には違和感ある。
00:41:357 (3,4,5,6) - こっちのほうが好きだけど配置直すのめんどくさそうだしまかせます。 http://puu.sh/8TVpP.jpg
00:45:642 (2) - 00:49:251 (3) - 2つの終点のclap消したほうが好き。
01:13:161 (4) - 01:14:063 (5) - 正直ここらへんfinishうるさいと思う。全部whistleにしたほうが好き。

[Sorda's Hard]
00:06:169 - 00:06:845 (7) - whistleはつけないんですか？
00:08:650 - note欲しいです
00:13:612 (2,5) - finish?
00:14:853 - ノート追加して連打の音拾いたいです
00:28:499 (1,2,3) - ここに連打じゃなくて00:28:387 - ここに連打いれたほうが音に合うと思います。
00:36:169 (2) - なぜ始点にwhistleを入れたんでしょう？ここでパターンから外れると違和感があるのでclapがいいと思います。
00:40:905 (3) - 1/2のほうがあってると思います。
00:41:808 (6) - と00:42:484 (2) - の終点にwhistleが欲しいです。
00:43:387 (4,1) - この音取りのほうがマッチしてません？ http://puu.sh/8TWWI.jpg
00:43:838 (1,2) - 00:45:642 (1,2) - ここの2か所finishで繋げてるので00:47:447 (1,2) -00:49:251 (4,6) - この2つもどっちもfinishにしてみてはどうでしょうか。

[Hard]
00:16:770 (1,2) - pref increase spacing a bit.
00:20:379 (1) - i want whistle.
00:49:702 (2,3) - switch to clap.
01:04:139 (2,3) - same as 00:16:770 (1,2) -
01:13:612 (4) - want whistle!!
01:15:868 (5,1) - same as 00:16:770 (1,2) -
01:23:988 (2,3) - same as above
01:28:499 (4) - pref switch to whistle head and end.

[Insane]
i don't like very much your diff. Because there is too much overmap, i point out only the pattern that i can't permit.
00:15:304 (2) - pref remove
00:43:161 (5,6,7,8,1) - try this http://puu.sh/8TXU6.jpg
00:51:958 (3,4,5) - use 1/2 pattern.
00:55:793 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - pref this http://puu.sh/8TZlF.jpg
01:12:033 (7,8,9) - same as 00:51:958 (3,4,5) -
01:17:221 (4,5,6,7,8) - remove (7)
01:21:281 (5,6,1) - same as 00:51:958 (3,4,5) -
01:22:184 (3,4,5,6,7) - same as above.
01:25:567 (2,3,4) - pref this http://puu.sh/8TZuJ.jpg

Sinch's Testplay
[alacat’s Normal] 00:25:342 (6) - 場所に違和感ある。

looks good.
Suimya
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Suimya
Thanks for modding Rare :3

Fixed everything on my Easy and Hard diff owo
S o r d a
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S o r d a
fixed everything
http://puu.sh/8UFSE.osu thanks!
alacat
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alacat

Rare wrote:

[Normal]
00:25:342 (6) - うーん、00:23:988 (4) - ここと角度合わせたほうが綺麗に見えるかなあ。ok!
00:28:048 (5) - 終点のwhistleと00:28:725 (6) - finishは合ってないと思う。俺ならどっちもclapにする。(6)に関しては同じ音でfinishがなってて個人的には違和感ある。 (5) clapに変えて、(6)はちょっと違う音あるからwhistleにした！
00:41:357 (3,4,5,6) - こっちのほうが好きだけど配置直すのめんどくさそうだしまかせます。 http://puu.sh/8TVpP.jpg ここね～いろんな音合って悩みどころ。。。他の人の意見も聞いてみたいからこのままで。
00:45:642 (2) - 00:49:251 (3) - 2つの終点のclap消したほうが好き。つけすぎた ;o; removed
01:13:161 (4) - 01:14:063 (5) - 正直ここらへんfinishうるさいと思う。全部whistleにしたほうが好き。 連続してるところ消した！
ありがとう！ 8-)

http://puu.sh/8V0qm.osu
Suimya
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updated both diffs owo/
Trust
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Trust
manaka best girl ~☆

gogo
Suimya
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Thanks for your star Trust >w</
RandF
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RandF
From my queue~

[General]
  1. combocolors are too similar to distingish them. (especially, combocolor 1, 2, 3)
[Easy]
  1. 00:10:905 (3) - x:364 y:84 for good flow
  2. 00:18:575 (1) - blanket correctly
  3. 00:51:056 (1,2) - you can make better flow. how about moving 00:51:507 (2) - to x:180 y:31 ?
[Hard]
  1. how about this rhythm?
  2. 00:18:349 (4,2) - stack?
  3. 00:44:627 (3) - I prefer to delete
  4. 01:19:702 (7,1) - DS 1.0x is better, imo
[alacat's Normal]
  1. 00:41:357 (3) - 1/2rhythmのつながるところで少し慌ててしまうので、このsliderは右に傾けてflowを良くした方が良いかもしれません
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[S o r d a's Hard]
  1. 00:16:319 (4) - 長いsliderが多すぎる気もするので、このような音とりはどうでしょう？
  2. 00:28:951 (5,1) - 微妙に角度がついているように見えるのですが、一直線上に配置した方がきれいだと思います
  3. 00:49:251 (4,5) - ここも一直線にした方がgood flowになって良いかもです
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  4. 01:10:229 (5,6,7) - ５が01:09:101 (3) - とstackされてないのであまりきれいな配置に見えませんでした。いっそ01:09:101 (3) - とのoverlapを避けた方が良いかもしれません
  5. 01:26:244 (6,7) - きちんとblanket
[captin's Insane]
  1. 00:43:612 (7,8,1) - I prefer curved pattern
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  2. 01:19:702 (1) - upward slider is better, imo
nice flower skin!!! kawaii~ :)
suit to this song~☆
~Good Luck~
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