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Bathory Witch
Hard, bo Normal wygląda spoko. I tak kijowy więc nie rób sobie nadziei na rankingową mapę dziecko wtorku. :D

00:46:988 (2,3) - popraw flow bo kijowy
00:50:625 (3) - ustaw tutaj punkt czerwony bo mnie krew zaleje...
01:03:352 (4) - 1/8 ci się zrypała XD
01:10:624 (4) - ^
01:19:715 (1) - rypnij kółko przed sliderem
02:06:988 (3) - usuń że gwizdek na końcu
Topic Starter
Krfawy
Jednak się na coś twoje pier... niczenie przydało raz w życiu.

Kazuya
Hello.

[Easy]

00:30:624 (2) - blanket: move: x 252 y: 284, and slider third (red) tick: x: 240 y: 204, and 4th (white) tick: x: 188 y: 148 ? result: http://puu.sh/8667y.jpg (better)
00:49:715 (1) - slider 2nd (white) point: x: 356 y: 284 and last tick: x: 300 y: 372 ? result: http://puu.sh/866Ab.jpg
01:12:443 (2) - Remove triple repeats! It's too hard for beginners. put 1/1 slider here: 01:14:261. timeline: http://puu.sh/868dy.jpg
01:36:079 (3) - add clap.
01:47:897 (1) - remove multi repeat. Change once repeat, and put circle here: 01:50:624 ?
02:02:442 (1) - blanket: Slider 2nd (center) tick: x: 448 y: 300 and last tick: x: 396 y: 208 ? http://puu.sh/868x4.jpg

[Normal/Hard]

If normal? (because it's too easy):

AR, HP, OD: change to 5

if hard? :

AR: -1 Change to 6. It's better!
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00:16:079 (7) - blanket: center point: x: 252 y: 112 and last tick: x: 332 y: 68.
00:16:988 (1) - ^ Center point: x: 336 y: 240 and last tick: x: 252 y: 280.
Result: http://puu.sh/868UY.jpg
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00:17:897 (2) - blanket: move slider here: x: 198 y: 334 and slider center point/tick: x: 186 y: 244 and last tick: x: 268 y: 204 result: http://puu.sh/8696S.jpg

00:29:715 (4) - move: x: 188 y: 68, and slider center point: x: 164 y: 160, and last tick: x: 224 y: 244

00:31:534 (1) - slider center point: x: 260 y: 56 result: http://puu.sh/869jm.jpg
00:43:806 (2) - remove circle
00:47:897 (3) - blanket: slider 2nd (center) tick: x: 380 y: 112 and last tick: x: 280 y: 200 result: http://puu.sh/869so.jpg
00:49:715 (2) - little better blanket: center point: x: 52 y: 164 and last tick: x: 104 y: 84 result: http://puu.sh/869yi.jpg
01:16:079 (3) - slider last tick: x: 424 y: 16
01:24:261 (3) - last tick: x: 344 y: 220
01:34:261 (2) - delete, and copy 01:33:352 (1) - note, and press CTRL + H result: http://puu.sh/869RE.jpg
01:35:170 (3) - delete, and create new 3/4 slider. Slider position: x: 164 y: 152. : http://puu.sh/86aai.jpg
First point: x: 204 y: 124 second red point: x: 256 y: 152, third point: x: 312 y: 124, last point: x: 352 y: 152.

01:36:079 (4) - move circle here: x: 256 y: 260 result: http://puu.sh/86ano.jpg
01:52:443 (3) - center point: x: 272 y: 196 and last point: x: 280 y: 296

Good luck! C :
Frostmourne
Some tweaking about spacing. This has potential and I'm sure I will recheck it later.
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Krfawy
Kazuya - Thank you so much for this AWESOME MOD! *______________* You're so prooooooooo! I want to mod like you! ;____________; I've not changed OD AR and HP because it's very slow map so I see no reason to make it a really hard map. But thank youuuuu! X33333 <3

Frostmourne - Thanks for a nice help with spacing in two moments when objects were very close to each other. And thank you so much for your time because you're the only one who helped me. Thank you! X3 Anyways I can see there aren't so many BATs who are willing to help: KSHR answered for my questions and Byakugan249 answered he's not going to take a BAT Request (haven't seen his status at his UP) but he answered for my questions too.

WOW. One huge helper and a BAT who helped. Such a nice day! XD
Bathory Witch
W relaxie jest slider: 00:47:897 (2) - Weźże zmień to. Na PW wyślę ci koordynacje na to... Walić tutaj masz: start x:20 y:212; środek: x:56 y:300; koniec: x: 180 y:308

RUSZ DUPĘ I ZMIEŃ TO MÓWIĘ CI O TYM SLAJDERZE CZWARTY RAZ.
Topic Starter
Krfawy
MORDA. Zmieniłem. : /
Pappy
Kij ci w cyce Krfawy tępa ściero ;__; Zaraz rankingowe będzie w jakiś miesiąc a moja mapka pół roku tysionc lat se siedzi w pendingu i nicz tylko BATy od CtB i Taiko :CCCCCCCC Ucz mnie mapować ;_; Kc tą mapkę ;-;
Silverboxer
[Relaxing]
00:06:079 (1) - fix the slider anchors, try something like this: http://puu.sh/87gAS.jpg
Also I think this is bad flow with the previous slider, maybe somewhere around here is better: http://puu.sh/87gQY.jpg
00:20:624 (1) - bad flow, rotate 180 and then reflect over the y-axis to fix this problem and the next one. Looks like this: http://puu.sh/87hmK.jpg
00:23:352 (1) - remove repeat, there should be a NC at this slider end
00:26:079 (1) - tide up this slider shape. The last slider anchor should be in the center of the hitcircle
00:30:624 (2) - I know it's for the slider blanket but try to keep DS as consistent as possible, especially because it's an Easy difficulty.
00:36:988 (2) - bad flow, bad DS
00:41:533 (2) - too far from last slider
00:52:442 (2) - ctrl+h and adjust? I don't like how this looks behind the previous slider
01:11:533 (1,2) - overlap isn't very neat, change to this: http://puu.sh/87hYB.jpg
01:17:897 (3) - make more symmetrical S sliders. Use the x-axis as a guide and look at the coordinates of anchor points. You don't have to make sliders like I do, but here's my method:
Symmetrical Sliders
1. Draw the basic shape of your slider


2. Put first anchor at x:0, y:192, and put the last anchor at any point you want on y:192


3. Divide the x value of the last anchor by 2, and this is where the middle of your slider will be (where you will make the symmetry around)

4. Move other anchor points around to make it symmetrical, based off of wherever your midpoint is (x:96 for this slider) and adjust until it's perfect


This works with any symmetrical slider shape.
01:38:806 (2,3,4) - this DS might be confusing for beginner players. Most likely not, but the notes are still much too close together
Lots of other problems with the distance snap, this is the only big problem with your map. An Easy map should almost always use consistent distance snap, beginner players won't know any better.

[Heavy]
Might mod this diff some time as well. But I think you can solve most of the distance snap problems yourself, and you can fix slider shapes now that you know how :)
Squichu
Hi, mod from my queue ~
better late than never, haha. x:

[General]
  1. blue as combo colour doesn't really work nicely with the other colours and the background, imo, consider choosing another one?
[Relaxing]
  1. hmh, might sound rude, but imo 2.0 SV for a Normal diff is too high. maybe it's just me, but I'd expect the diff to be slower and calmer, especially cause of the bpm.. but that's up to you to decide. I just don't think the SV fits the song. >:
  2. use constant DS for a Normal diff. some people don't think it's necessary, but that ensures readability for beginner players.
    plus, this is the easiest difficulty on the mapset, so constant DS is essential, you had to fix:
    00:07:442 (2,1) -
    00:20:624 (1,2,1,2) -
    00:27:897 (1,2,1) -
    00:35:170 (1,2,1,2) -
    00:43:352 (1,2,1) -
    00:53:352 (1,2,1,2) -
    01:00:624 (1,2,1) -
    .. well, it's a lot. stopping here, but you should look through your diff and fix all errors
    I know AIMod doesn't list them up. but AIMod is not that reliable anyway. x:
  3. 00:07:442 (2) - the reverse doesn't really fit the music here, I'd suggest to replace this with a single slider or a single circle at 00:07:897
  4. 00:16:079 (4) - consider adjusting the 'curve' here, so it doesn't overlap with 00:14:261 (2) - or is a bit further away in general
    if you have a bit more space between two objects it greatyl improves readability (and looks better in general, imo)
  5. 00:17:897 (1,2) - this might be too hard to read for the easiest diff. blue ticks are 'offbeat', so you shouldn't end on them in E/N diffs
    They just feel unnatural to play, so beginners can't really play them.
hmh, I think you have a lot to do with fixing the DS errors. - if you do that.
If you don't fix DS, pm me please, so I can go into detail with other minor things. There's no point in doing that atm, cause you have to move half of the diff around.. :c

[Heavy]
  1. I'd suggest to rename this diff. o.o It doesn't really have any connection with "Relaxing", I think..?
    "Challenging" might be more fitting, but that's ofc up to you. c:
  2. also, consider fixing some DS issues. it works far better for a Hard diff to not stick to DS all the time, but for example at 00:04:261 (4,5,1) - 4 and 5 have a distance of 1.6, but 5 and 1 have 2.8. they're supposed to have the same, since they're the same distance on the time line. in the following at 00:08:806 (5,1) - they have 1.3.. so yeah, that's quite confusing. >:
    plus, it doesn't match the song too well, I think. It should feel smoother and less 'hectic'. It's not really fast-hectic, but there are a lot of chanes in speed cause of the jumps and inconsistent DS.
otherwise this diff looks really nice. you use slider shapes well, just the DS.... hm. owo

anyway, pm me if you have questions or want me to go more into detail!
and good luck. :3 *squee*
Topic Starter
Krfawy
Thanks for your mod. It's not really late and I really appreciate that you could do it for me. Thank you sweetie! o3o I had some thoughts so I PMed you. :3

PS.: But you're not rude. XD
Bathory Witch
Hard

00:14:942 (4,5) - rusz na (292;364) i zrób slider z drugiego kółka: punkt pierwszy wiesz jak; drugi punkt: (371;360); trzeci punkt: (316;268)
01:07:897 (2) - na końcu samym daj gwizdek
01:09:943 (3) - usuń slider a na 01:10:397 zrób kółko na początku slidera
01:28:352 (2) - usuń kółko
01:46:079 (2) - ctrl + g
01:50:170 (3) - usuń kółko
01:53:352 (4) - parametry dwóch ostatnich punktów w sliderze: (216;366) i (172;273)
02:02:443 (7) - ustaw na (184;168)

Tak, pamiętam o Hymnie. :P
Frostmourne
The easiest diff must (or should totally) be snapped with the same spacing throughout the map. Suppose you are using 1.0x spacing (see on the right top of the screen) you will have to adjust them one by one and make these 2 numbers similarly equal (0.95x~1.05x approximately)

The Relaxing diff has some consistent spacings that I will point out (The other diff will be ok as is)

Relaxing
00:07:897 (2) - wrong spacing
00:14:260 (1) - wrong spacing
00:22:442 (2) - wrong spacing
00:26:079 (2) - wrong spacing
00:30:625 (2) - wrong spacing
00:36:988 (2) - wrong spacing
00:41:533 (2) - wrong spacing
00:46:079 (2) - wrong spacing
00:55:169 (2) - wrong spacing
00:59:715 (2) - wrong spacing
01:04:261 (1) - wrong spacing
01:10:624 (2) - wrong spacing
01:15:170 (1) - wrong spacing
01:16:988 (2) - wrong spacing
01:20:624 (4) - wrong spacing
01:25:624 (2) - move right 1 grid
01:38:806 (2) - wrong spacing
01:44:261 (1) - wrong spacing
01:47:897 (1) - wrong spacing
01:51:533 (1) - wrong spacing
01:55:170 (1) - wrong spacing
01:56:988 (2) - wrong spacing
02:00:624 (2) - wrong spacing
02:04:261 (2) - wrong spacing
02:05:170 (3) - wrong spacing
02:07:897 (2) - wrong spacing

Challenging
AR6 is already enough for this, please change it from 7 => 6
Rhythms used in this are a bit repetitive but I don't mind as long as they follow song. Just something you could spice them in future maps.
02:04:261 (3) - try this shape instead? The curved area would look better and is less iffy.

forum-pm me after fixing these and I will give it a recheck.
Topic Starter
Krfawy
Fixed all... I think it's better now. D:
Frostmourne
I guess that's it.
Good luck :>
Ollapeu
Go Go Go. <3 To się dzieje. ^w^
deejaydray
bubbleeeeeeeeeeeeeeed !!! <3 go go Krfawy! :3
Bass
Pappy
NIENAWIDZĘ CIĘ XDDDDDDDDDDD

GRATKI XDDDD
BeatofIke
Pretty relaxing and straight-forward map.
Ranked!
Pappy
XDDDDDDDDDDD GRATKI XDDDDDDDDDDDD
BeatofIke
Enjoy your first ranked map! :)
Ollapeu
Boże!!! Gratuluję!!! Twoje marzenie się spełniło. :3

Gratz. ^w^
Galkan
CO JA WIDZĘ TO JA NAWET NIE
deejaydray
CONGRAAAAAAAAATSSSSSSS !!! <3
Kazuya
Gratz Krfawy. : D
Topic Starter
Krfawy
Guuuuuys, I love you aaall! <3
Cydros
Gratki HEHE XD
Astar
10/10 najlepszy mapset
Kamikaze
Moje marzenie się spełniło, zawsze chciałem zagrać nutę z Klanu na osu XDDDDD
Stefan
Not sure but I smell kind of polish trolling here. Congratulations!
AmaiHachimitsu
Where is the opening vid?
Topic Starter
Krfawy
-Kamikaze- - Czuję się zaszczycony mogąc zaspokoić twą potrzebę. XDDDDDDD
Stefan - XDDD
AmaiHachimitsu - Bejbe, gdybym dał video, komputer całkiem by mi rozsadziło... Mój Pecet nie jest w stanie wytrzymać tak ekstremalnej przyjemności jak wideo w mapie. ;<

Jeeej! Cieszę się że mój mapset się Wam podoba! XDDD
Pappy

Stefan wrote:

Not sure but I smell kind of polish trolling here. Congratulations!
"Klan" is the best polish anime, not sure it is trolling. Plz have respect because Ryszard Rynkowski is rolling in grave [*]

EDIT:
Nightcore mix (mixed and mapped by me skin by cookiezi plz) XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Marcin
I
Don't
Even
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