This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on יום שישי 23 מאי 2014 at 18:40:54

Artist: Avril Lavigne
Title: Hello Kitty
Tags: Pop Techno Dubstep Kuron-Kun Collab Collaboration
BPM: 128
Filesize: 19400kb
Play Time: 03:00
Difficulties Available:

1. BREK (4.71 stars, 327 notes)
2. Easy (2.08 stars, 154 notes)
3. Kuron's Normal (3.76 stars, 218 notes)

Download: Avril Lavigne - Hello Kitty
Download: Avril Lavigne - Hello Kitty (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#5 Ranked Map
Thank you Gero for the video!

don't map insane please
also your mp3 is shit
your bg is also shit, convert it to jpg
you're also shit
leave this game please
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
BREK

EDIT: here you have the video use -533 for the offset.

Mina saiko arigato, ka ka ka kawaii xDD!

Insane: WIP By Gero & Irreversible

Cum Cum kitty kitty ok no ~

Kuron-Kun wrote:

~ F ~

~ I ~

~ R ~

~ S ~

~ T ~

★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★

best first post I've seen in my entire life

this makes me want to throw stars at the map

first

what the fucking fuck is this

I approve of this mapset

Gabe wrote:

what the fucking fuck is this

It's a kawaii.

o_O *org*sm*

Okay. My shit mod:

It's only ideas!

[Easy]

00:41:404 - Put circle here ?
00:45:154 - ^
00:47:498 (3) - Hmm. Delete and copy 00:45:623 (1) - slider here 00:47:498 After move here: Example: http://puu.sh/8AP9B.jpg ?
01:08:123 (1) - remove spinner and map the parts: 01:08:123 - --> 01:10:467 - ?
01:28:748 (5,6) - delete objects and put 1/1 sliders here: 01:28:748 - 01:29:686 - timeline: http://puu.sh/8APyi.png ?
01:32:029 - put circle here ?
01:53:123 (1) - Hmm slider shape: http://puu.sh/8APE9.jpg ?
02:00:623 - Move green line here: 02:15:623 ?
02:17:967 - put circle here?
02:50:311 (2) - Blanket http://puu.sh/8APN0.jpg ?

[Normal]
00:15:154 (1) - Hmm. delete slider, and put circle here: 00:15:154 - ?
00:16:092 (2) - delete circle, and put 1/1 slider here: 00:15:623 - ?
^^^^^Timeline: http://puu.sh/8APXM.jpg

00:17:029 (3) - delete, and put circle here: 00:17:029 - ?
00:17:498 - Put circle here ?
^^^^^ Timeline: http://puu.sh/8AQ2d.jpg

00:17:967 (5) - delete and put circle here: 00:17:967 - ?
00:18:904 (1) - move slider here: 00:18:436 - and add once repeat ?
^^^^^ Timeline: http://puu.sh/8AQ7y.jpg

00:30:623 (1) - add clap the slider end? http://puu.sh/8AQb9.jpg

01:45:623 (1) - Slider shape: Examples: http://puu.sh/8AQkD.jpg or http://puu.sh/8AQmB.jpg ?


02:35:779 (3) - delete and put circle here: 02:35:779 - ?
02:36:248 - Put 1/2 slider here ?
^^^^^Timeline: http://puu.sh/8AQxX.jpg

Put spinner here: 03:00:858 - end: 03:04:373 - ?

[Hard]

00:09:998 (1) - 1/4 slider + once repeat? http://puu.sh/8AQQV.jpg
00:27:576 (2,3) - evil antijump. xd
00:33:201 - put circle here ?
00:43:514 - ^
00:43:748 (1,2) - delete objects and put 1/1 sliders here: 00:43:748 - 00:44:686 - and circle here: 00:44:451 - ? Timeline: http://puu.sh/8AR1R.jpg It's better.
00:57:342 (1) - delete slider and put circles here: 00:57:342 - 00:57:576 - and 1/2 slider here: 00:57:811 - ? Timeline: http://puu.sh/8AR8u.jpg
01:19:842 (4,5,6) - ohh too little distance and little unreadable. It's only (bad) example, and little better: http://puu.sh/8ARfJ.jpg
01:21:014 - put circle here ?
01:58:748 (1) - Hmm. Remove spinner, map the parts?
02:54:529 (4) - change slider end here: 02:54:764 - ?

Good luck! Go rank!

uhh i just took a look at that collab diff

my concern here is; is it really okay to not map out these big bass sounds?!?!

00:08:826 -
00:12:576 - this cuz it should be slider
00:16:326 -
00:20:076 - this cuz it should be slider head o3o

idk that's just my concern here

Here have this random horrible mod. feel free to not mod my map if this mod is terrible
Please note that these are all suggestions so do not kill me


oooooooook that's all, have fun mapping, responderino to my moderino, gracias

Kazuya-sama wrote:

o_O *org*sm*

Okay. My shit mod:

It's only ideas!

[Easy]

00:41:404 - Put circle here ? It's a well deserved break for an Easy, nope
00:45:154 - ^ ^
00:47:498 (3) - Hmm. Delete and copy 00:45:623 (1) - slider here 00:47:498 After move here: Example: http://puu.sh/8AP9B.jpg ? No dude, that ruins my bootiful blanket.
01:08:123 (1) - remove spinner and map the parts: 01:08:123 - --> 01:10:467 - ? Made to emphasise the music change.
01:28:748 (5,6) - delete objects and put 1/1 sliders here: 01:28:748 - 01:29:686 - timeline: http://puu.sh/8APyi.png ? Makes the rhythm feel a bit spammy, nty.
01:32:029 - put circle here ? Fitting break since its an Easy.
01:53:123 (1) - Hmm slider shape: http://puu.sh/8APE9.jpg ? Nah, I prefer it like this.
02:00:623 - Move green line here: 02:15:623 ? It needs to be there to end the kiai.
02:17:967 - put circle here? No due to the reasons pointed before.
02:50:311 (2) - Blanket http://puu.sh/8APN0.jpg ? Good catch, fixed.

[Hard]

00:09:998 (1) - 1/4 slider + once repeat? http://puu.sh/8AQQV.jpg This is a really god idea but I have no idea how to change it in the current pattern, if I change it, it messes up the flow and the spacing.
00:43:514 - ^ I'd rather not, Current pattern is pretty fine as it is.
00:43:748 (1,2) - delete objects and put 1/1 sliders here: 00:43:748 - 00:44:686 - and circle here: 00:44:451 - ? Timeline: http://puu.sh/8AR1R.jpg It's better. No, I did this to emphasise the vocals.
01:19:842 (4,5,6) - ohh too little distance and little unreadable. It's only (bad) example, and little better: http://puu.sh/8ARfJ.jpg Increased spacing a bit
01:21:014 - put circle here ? No, ruins the vocal emphasis I made.
01:58:748 (1) - Hmm. Remove spinner, map the parts? This rhtyhm is super strange, I'd rather leave it unmapped.
02:54:529 (4) - change slider end here: 02:54:764 - ? Fixed

Good luck! Go rank!

Thank you for the mod~

pkmnyab wrote:

Here have this random horrible mod. feel free to not mod my map if this mod is terrible
Please note that these are all suggestions so do not kill me

[notice]Easy

1. 00:40:936 (4) - consider making this a 1/1 slider so the end of the slider matches with the vocal repeating the word 'pretty'. At 00:45:154 - I think it's fine to leave a gap since there isn't anything noticeable going on in the vocal worth mapping. Anyways with the 1/1 slider, you can stack the end with the end of 00:42:811 (2) - if you're worried about overlaps: It emphasised the odd wobble sound in the back, I'd rather not change this.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:28:748 (5) - at 00:38:123 - you have NC every two measures so here you should insert NC at 01:28:748 (5) - and remove NC at 01:30:623 (1) - .
   If you wish to follow the suggestion then also apply NC at 01:32:498 (3) - , remove NC at 01:34:373 (1) - , NC at 01:36:248 (2) - (well you get the idea). Fixed, nice catch.
3. 02:24:061 (2,3) - I don't think this looks very good, maybe because of the small space between the end of the second slider and the previous slider body. Anyways, not sure what you could change this to. I really like the current pattern so I'll leave it unchanged.

Hard

1. 00:04:373 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd prefer to have this going down instead of up, probably because when you tap to a beat you tap down, so it sort of seems logical for the notes to be going down. I have no idea what I just said, kill me now. I have no fucking idea what you just said but it convinced me
2. 00:08:592 (2) - try shortening to 00:08:826 - then adding circle at 00:09:061 - . Ending slider early is done to match that bass sound thing, then the hit circle is to keep up with the beat/vocal. I know it works well with the bass, but it sounds odd to me.
3. 00:16:326 - eh I guess you could add a hit circle here to match that bass sound, you could just stack it under the slider tail but I'm not sure if that's a good placement Vocal emphasis, nty.
4. 00:38:826 (2,3) - this might look better if you just stacked them properly or have the hit circle hanging off towards the bottom instead of the top.
   
   SPOILER

   
   I just do that to measure the spacing properly, ingame, it looks just like a regular stack.
5. 01:54:060 (5,6) - two objects directly on top of each other on timeline, I suppose you'd want to delete the hit circle lol how did i even
6. 02:00:858 - just some random barely noticeable thing that I noticed: the break should be snapped to start at this place, like in the rest of your difficulties~
7. 02:13:748 - same as above, the break thing whatever you call it should be dragged here somebody please tell me wtf this thing is calledBreaktime Ending? Sure, fixed.

oooooooook that's all, have fun mapping, responderino to my moderino, gracias

I'll mod your maps today.
Now just gotta wait for Kuron to apply the mods~
Updated!

~ M i a u ~

The changes: http://puu.sh/8BKrA.osu

BREK

Hey! From M4M.

Easy
00:04:373 (1,2) - Perhaps make these notes into sliders? Said objects ending at 00:04:842 and 00:05:779 respectively.
00:09:998 (3) - I feel that the shape of this slider is kind of out of place. Please consider making this one curved.
00:22:420 (4) - This slider begins on a red tick and ends on a white one. Please consider making one note out of this, on 00:22:654 to mitigate the poor-sounding slider.
00:36:483 (3) - Perhaps curve this one as well?
00:41:404 - Add a note here, to follow the beat better.
01:08:123 (1) - Instead of this spinner, two sliders that follow the beat would be better fitting.
01:10:936 (1,2) - You might want to fix the blanket.
01:16:561 (5) - Rotate this slider? Selection centre, 11 degrees?
01:29:217 (2) - Try to put the red slider thing at 01:29:451
01:53:123 (1) - The red tick would be better suit at 01:53:592
02:13:748 - Make the break end at the last possible position, the thing you do creates some unnecessary life drain.
02:17:498 (3) - Turn this into a 1-beat slider.
02:37:186 (4) - Once again, I feel this slider would be better off rotated 11 degrees selection centre.
02:47:498 (2) - Make this slider curve and flow better into 02:48:435 (3)

Normal
Really love the kiai in this map. Rest not that much, but what's broken can be fixed!
00:06:248 (3,4,5) - I feel like following the vocals is too inconsistent. Either remove these notes, or start a NC.
00:09:998 (4) - Perhaps make this into a s-shaped slider without the uise of red ticks?
00:10:936 (6) - Maybe make this curve downwards, so it flows better into the next note.
00:11:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Make the combo like this to make changing tracks easier to read http://puu.sh/8BQ0I.jpg
00:20:076 (3) - Flip this slider on the horizontal axis?
00:20:076 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Combo like this? http://puu.sh/8BQgN.jpg
00:36:014 - Add a note here, stacked under 3.
00:53:592 - Right here you're not following K-K-K-Kawaii where you're doing it in the intro. Try to be consistent.
01:19:373 - Might want to add a note here.
01:43:983 - Same about K-K-K-Kawaii
02:13:671 - Same thing on ending the break (see easy)
02:26:873 (1) - End at 02:29:686
02:43:279 (3) - Curve this slider

Collab
00:07:654 (1) - This slider doesn't fit with the music
00:13:983 (1,2,3) - I feel like this spacing is quite harsh.
00:16:561 (2) - Lengthen this slider to the blue tick
00:35:311 (3,4) - I feel like this doesn't flow well.
02:32:264 (5,6,1) - You're starting to stack the notes here normally. You did it manually before. Please stay consistent.
02:52:889 - Add a note

Don wrote:

Hey! From M4M.

Easy
00:04:373 (1,2) - Perhaps make these notes into sliders? Said objects ending at 00:04:842 and 00:05:779 respectively. Nah, I like the current pattern better.
00:09:998 (3) - I feel that the shape of this slider is kind of out of place. Please consider making this one curved. It's priti ;~;
00:22:420 (4) - This slider begins on a red tick and ends on a white one. Please consider making one note out of this, on 00:22:654 to mitigate the poor-sounding slider. I did it for polarity reasons.
00:36:483 (3) - Perhaps curve this one as well? Nop
00:41:404 - Add a note here, to follow the beat better. It's an easy which means that 2/1 Are more than welcomed in it, unchanged.
01:08:123 (1) - Instead of this spinner, two sliders that follow the beat would be better fitting. It emphasises the music change better, nty.
01:10:936 (1,2) - You might want to fix the blanket. Slightly changed it..
01:16:561 (5) - Rotate this slider? Selection centre, 11 degrees? Why? It looks nice as it is.
01:29:217 (2) - Try to put the red slider thing at 01:29:451 - Doesn't really matter, unchanged.
01:53:123 (1) - The red tick would be better suit at 01:53:592 - Doesn't matter and was done intentionally.
02:13:748 - Make the break end at the last possible position, the thing you do creates some unnecessary life drain. It only starts draining from the first note, this only affects the HP Bar appearing and the dim.
02:17:498 (3) - Turn this into a 1-beat slider. It's an easy..
02:37:186 (4) - Once again, I feel this slider would be better off rotated 11 degrees selection centre. It actually fits for this one.
02:47:498 (2) - Make this slider curve and flow better into 02:48:435 (3) - It flows incredibly well now ._.

Collab
00:07:654 (1) - This slider doesn't fit with the music Yes it does, it emphasises the bzzzt sound
00:13:983 (1,2,3) - I feel like this spacing is quite harsh. Slider leniency makes this easy to play.
00:16:561 (2) - Lengthen this slider to the blue tick Ruins the clap
02:32:264 (5,6,1) - You're starting to stack the notes here normally. You did it manually before. Please stay consistent. That's because these are Kuron's parts, if he wants to do it normally, he can do it normally since ingame it looks the same.
02:52:889 - Add a note Made to emphasise the sound at 02:52:654 (6) -

Thank you for the mod~
Updated

Hello

Don wrote:

Hey! From M4M.

Normal
Really love the kiai in this map. Rest not that much, but what's broken can be fixed! ):
00:06:248 (3,4,5) - I feel like following the vocals is too inconsistent. Either remove these notes, or start a NC.Ye
00:09:998 (4) - Perhaps make this into a s-shaped slider without the uise of red ticks? Good idea.
00:10:936 (6) - Maybe make this curve downwards, so it flows better into the next note.Nope.
00:11:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Make the combo like this to make changing tracks easier to read http://puu.sh/8BQ0I.jpg No.
00:20:076 (3) - Flip this slider on the horizontal axis? No.
00:20:076 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Combo like this? http://puu.sh/8BQgN.jpg Noooo.
00:36:014 - Add a note here, stacked under 3. Why?
00:53:592 - Right here you're not following K-K-K-Kawaii where you're doing it in the intro. Try to be consistent. There is no K-K-K-Kawaii in the intro \:D/
01:19:373 - Might want to add a note here. I don't like a note there.
01:43:983 - Same about K-K-K-Kawaii Yes.
02:13:671 - Same thing on ending the break (see easy) "It only starts draining from the first note, this only affects the HP Bar appearing and the dim."
02:26:873 (1) - End at 02:29:686 Sounds better ending at 02:29:569
02:43:279 (3) - Curve this slider Stick sliders are beautiful ;w;

Collab
00:35:311 (3,4) - I feel like this doesn't flow well. But it flows...

Hello

http://puu.sh/8CXOo.osu

Hi!




I think this is it.. That's not a lot I'm sorry, it's already a good mapset though!
Good luck!

PS: Wow, I was hoping for a M4M but someone was faster it seems, nvm

Yales wrote:

Hi! Hello

[Kuron's Normal]

1. 01:09:998 (1) - I would copy paste 01:10:701 (2) - and ctrl+h ; ctrl+j the cursor would make a clearer up and down.. No, sorry ):
2. 01:33:436 (3) - ^ but it fits better probably because of the lyrics x). wut

• [Collab]

  1. 02:29:920 - Han http://puu.sh/8DjQF.jpg (with a really slow volume (if you like though xD) it's just moe. I don't know, will think about it.
  2. 02:39:529 (4) - the blanket isn't perfect and I can see it! fuck the blankets.
  
  I think this is it.. That's not a lot I'm sorry, it's already a good mapset though!
  Good luck!
  
  PS: Wow, I was hoping for a M4M but someone was faster it seems, nvm

Thanks for modding.

The changes: http://puu.sh/8Ev1N.osu

Mod request from my queue


BREK

General

1. wHAT the fuck man, there's a collab but no storyboarded parts name? wHO the fuck is mappING WHat? You no fix this, I'm gonna fucking kill you and shit you tonight ya little prick. Fucking die you fucking shit. You're fucking dead, kiddo.
2. This ain't dubste.p
3. good bg but no boobs or w/e so i don't like, you must change.
4. Hitsounds are too discreet. You do need to turn up the volume in some parts
5. 02:24:061 - FUCKFUCKFUCKFUCK

Easy

1. 00:45:623 (1,3) - Not good. At least try not to overlap the sliderstart
2. 01:18:436 (3,4) - Blanket not symmetric enough
3. 02:34:373 (1,2) - Not blanket-ing enough
4. 02:39:998 (3,1) - Little bit too close, move a bit?

Normal

1. 02:34:373 (1,3) - Eh I don't think this is nice. I hope I could give a suggestion of better placement but these spacing just ain't my style )-:

kuron-kun pls
gatas

BREK

1. 11:22:333 - BREK
2. Maybe OD7 won't hurt much.
3. 00:07:654 (1) - Drumwhistle didn't really fit anything
4. 00:16:326 - Eh why miss a note here? Add please
5. 00:17:498 (1,2,3) - Please don't overlap. Space it apart, this is a Hard diff anyway so don't worry
6. 00:25:467 (1,2) - Instead of this, a ▬ ● ▬ pattern would fit better imo
7. 00:26:404 (3,1) - Too close.
8. 00:33:201 - hah why empty note again
9. 00:43:514 - Add note pls u (stack it with (2) so it'll still flow so fucking good)
10. 01:14:217 (2,3,4) - Eh another overlap. Fix pls.
11. 01:23:358 (1,2) - Undermapping. You're mapping to the vocal anyway, while the music beats very clearly in the background. Why?
12. 02:19:373 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - For a variation in pattern how about ▬ ▬ ▬▬▪▬▬ ● ▬ ▬▬ pattern. I hope you know how to read this (just relate to the notes I'm highlighting here) anyway ▬▬▪▬▬ is a 1/1 slider with repeat
13. 02:45:623 (1,2,3) - Eh I hate these kind of thing '-' is that you Kuron-kun?
14. scrub

Starred because good bg
kd pls

Yales wrote:

Hi!

[Easy]

1. 00:08:123 (3) - I find the shape of this slider a bit.. random, try to copy paste 00:08:123 (1) - and ctrl+h ctrl+j (http://puu.sh/8Dh4l.jpg) I find it fine, unchanged.
2. 00:41:404 - Adding a note might be nice here since you added one here 00:40:936 (4) - while she's saying twice "pretty" so it would make sense to click twice..you know what I mean? (and it would be more constant with the following part). I like the current undfermapped way, unchanged.
3. 00:56:873 (3) - It may be on a strong white tick, it doesn't sound catchy to me (as if it was on a red tick) try something like this maybe http://puu.sh/8DhAA.jpg (and add a clap on the big slider maybe) It follows the music better imo, unchanged.
4. 01:35:779 - I would maybe add a note.. Same reasoning as previous part.[/*:m:1337]

[Collab]

1. 00:09:529 (5,1) - try to ctrl+h those sliders. It looks a bit weird because of the triple before the first one which encourages to go in the opposite direction. . The BPM is slow, so it doesn't really matter anyway, but I think it would still play better and it wouldnt change the idea..What?
2. 00:38:944 (2) - Try to move at x:356:y:188 for the same reason as my first point. You did it pretty nicely almost everywhere else so I guess you care about it. People just don't understand manual unstacking eh?
3. 01:20:311 (6) - Ctrl+J to create a better flow with this slider 01:21:248 (1) - Intentional broken flow.
4. 02:29:920 - Han http://puu.sh/8DjQF.jpg (with a really slow volume (if you like though xD) it's just moe. This is a really cool idea but I don't like mapping vocals that aren't backed up by any music.

inverness wrote:

Mod request from my queue

Guide

Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

Additional notes:
I cannot mod another game modes.
Please reply to my mods, I always looking forward to the replies so I could improve better.
If you think one or more points on my mod is unclear, feel free to ask about it.

BREK

General

1. wHAT the fuck man, there's a collab but no storyboarded parts name? wHO the fuck is mappING WHat? You no fix this, I'm gonna fucking kill you and shit you tonight ya little prick. Fucking die you fucking shit. You're fucking dead, kiddo. Maybe you could make it? ;3
2. This ain't dubste.p Yes it is
3. good bg but no boobs or w/e so i don't like, you must change. It's compensated by horribly big eyes
4. Hitsounds are too discreet. You do need to turn up the volume in some parts
5. 02:24:061 - FUCKFUCKFUCKFUCK

Easy

1. 00:45:623 (1,3) - Not good. At least try not to overlap the sliderstart no go away i like it.
2. 01:18:436 (3,4) - Blanket not symmetric enough fixed
3. 02:34:373 (1,2) - Not blanket-ing enough Go away inverscrub o3o
4. 02:39:998 (3,1) - Little bit too close, move a bit? Fien, tweaked it a tiny bit

BREK

1. 11:22:333 - BREK
2. Maybe OD7 won't hurt much. k
3. 00:07:654 (1) - Drumwhistle didn't really fit anything Emphasises the TSSSS
4. 00:16:326 - Eh why miss a note here? Add please bcuz vocals
5. 00:17:498 (1,2,3) - Please don't overlap. Space it apart, this is a Hard diff anyway so don't worry Slidercuts best cuts, pls.
6. 00:43:514 - Add note pls u (stack it with (2) so it'll still flow so fucking good) Added
7. 01:14:217 (2,3,4) - Eh another overlap. Fix pls. go away
8. 01:23:358 (1,2) - Undermapping. You're mapping to the vocal anyway, while the music beats very clearly in the background. Why? I really like the way it currently plays, unchanged.
9. 02:19:373 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - For a variation in pattern how about ▬ ▬ ▬▬▪▬▬ ● ▬ ▬▬ pattern. I hope you know how to read this (just relate to the notes I'm highlighting here) anyway ▬▬▪▬▬ is a 1/1 slider with repeat Dude, but then it ends on a big white tick ._.
10. 02:45:623 (1,2,3) - Eh I hate these kind of thing '-' is that you Kuron-kun? No it's me go away o3o
11. scrub

Starred because good bg
kd pls

Thank you for the mods~

I'll make the SB names, just remind me.
And still this ain't dubstep. It's just an EDM-pop music with some wobbles on it (which didn't qualify enough to be a dubstep)
owell w/e you could keep it actually

kd pls

inverness wrote:

I'll make the SB names, just remind me.
And still this ain't dubstep. It's just an EDM-pop music with some wobbles on it (which didn't qualify enough to be a dubstep)
owell w/e you could keep it actually

kd pls

Actually, Avril stated that this IS dubstep, it's just horrible dubstep ;3

inverness wrote:

Mod request from my queue

Guide

Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

Additional notes:
I cannot mod another game modes.
Please reply to my mods, I always looking forward to the replies so I could improve better.
If you think one or more points on my mod is unclear, feel free to ask about it.

BREK

General

1. wHAT the fuck man, there's a collab but no storyboarded parts name? wHO the fuck is mappING WHat? You no fix this, I'm gonna fucking kill you and shit you tonight ya little prick. Fucking die you fucking shit. You're fucking dead, kiddo.
2. This ain't dubste.p
3. good bg but no boobs or w/e so i don't like, you must change.
4. Hitsounds are too discreet. You do need to turn up the volume in some parts
5. 02:24:061 - FUCKFUCKFUCKFUCK

Normal

1. 02:34:373 (1,3) - Eh I don't think this is nice. I hope I could give a suggestion of better placement but these spacing just ain't my style )-: EVERYONE HATES MY OVERLAPS

kuron-kun pls invernessssss
gatas meow

BREK

1. 11:22:333 - BREK BREK
2. 00:25:467 (1,2) - Instead of this, a ▬ ● ▬ pattern would fit better imo I don't find this good ):
3. 00:26:404 (3,1) - Too close. Actually it's not too close
4. 00:33:201 - hah why empty note again because priti do this and it's funny
5. 02:45:623 (1,2,3) - Eh I hate these kind of thing '-' is that you Kuron-kun? I hate '-'
6. scrub

Starred because good bg
kd pls

thx for modding yeah

fuck fuck fuck

Hi guys!

Promised a shitty mod to Preetee !

[General]
Fix letterbox conflits

[Easy]
02:24:061 (2,3) - Blanket my dear : Click
02:26:756 (1) - Spinner should end on a white tick instead of a blue tick.

[Normal]
01:19:373 - Add a circle here ? It's not overmapped.

[Hard]
Dunno if this diff's name is rankable.
00:24:529 (4) - I'd CTRL+H this
01:05:779 (4,5) - 1/6 beats here ? Just put one slider instead of 2 objects !
02:26:873 (1) - White tick please


Sorry if my mod was useless , I haven't found a lot of things cause the mapset is kind of brilliant !
Good luck /O/

Secretpipe wrote:

Hi guys!

Promised a shitty mod to Preetee !

[General]
Fix letterbox conflits AIMod is a derp, there was no conflict of Letterbox. Fixed the Widescreen though.

[Easy]
02:24:061 (2,3) - Blanket my dear : Click Spot on for me, unchanged.
02:26:756 (1) - Spinner should end on a white tick instead of a blue tick. I still believe that should be on the blue tick, I'll ask someone professional about it.

[Hard]
Dunno if this diff's name is rankable. I asked around and it is actually rankable.
02:26:873 (1) - White tick please Same as stated in Easy.


Sorry if my mod was useless , I haven't found a lot of things cause the mapset is kind of brilliant !
Good luck /O/

Sorry, but no change~
Thanks anyways :3

Yo, as requested.

[General]

1. I would fade the bright-pink colour a bit. It seems to be a bit too bright and may hurt eyes a bit while playing.
2. Consider adding Collab and Collaboration to the tags. Those who like mixed styles may look for your map!

[Easy]

1. There're some 1/2 sliders which may feel a bit too hard for beginners. Also, you have some 2/1 gaps which also may trouble somebeginners, so I'd go with OD2.
2. 00:10:467 - in oder to point out the clap, I would curve the slider a bit, at this point. Example.
   Note: sseems like you can do the same for some more sliders, so, please check the diff and see what can you do.
3. 00:13:748 (3,4,1) - you don't use a lot of stacks normally, do you? The stack here feels a bit out of your style and looks rather confusing for the beginners. Why don't you change into a simple triangle-shaped pattern, which'd flow better and be more readable? example
4. 00:32:498 (3) - minor - looks a little bit offscreen. Moving it up a bit would definetly make it more readable and rankable.
5. 00:41:404 - I would place here a circle to emphasize the repetition in vocals. We can clearly hear "priti~ priti~" so, placing two circles would fit with the song perfectly.
   Note: same applies for some ore patterns. Since you're pretty experienced it shouldn't be a trouble for you to fix them all. Feeling confused? Just contact me in-game and I'll help you with that!
6. 00:47:498 (3) - minor - I would recommend you to avoid such patterns since they trouble beginners and look quite messy. How? Do you like blankets?
7. 01:29:686 - minor - I think that the red nod on the slider is suppoded to reflect the clap in the music, Please, change the shape, so the slider would fit with the song a bit better.
8. 01:39:998 (6) - feels like you've missed a new combo there. The slider sounds different from what you've had earlier in this combo and the comboing feels rather inconsistent, imo.
9. 02:48:435 (3) - you didn't use such whistles before and it doesn't sound good with the vocals/music. I would ask you to remove the whistles, please!
10. 02:54:998 (3,1) - the flow heree is not really intuitive and beginners may mistakenly hit the slider's tail. Consider moving it somewhere else to make the pattern a bit more suitable for the easiest diff.
    
    I don't really agree with the way how you ignore some vocals. Vocals are really important and a lot of beginners try to stick to them, therefore, ignoring vocals is not a good idea, imo. Also, some of the patterns were quite messy. from my point of view. In general, this is a great diff, but you could make it even better!

[Normal]

1. 00:35:311 - both the 3/2 gap and the ignored vocals feel rather confusing. Consider placing a circle here or turning 00:35:076 (2) - into a slider to map the beat here, please!
2. 01:00:858 (4) - perhaps, you can remove the circle here. First of all, the pattern feels a bit too hard since there're so many 1/2s. Secondly, comparing to the vocals on 01:00:623 - and 01:01:092 - the beat here is way too quite.
   Note: you can also ignore 00:59:920 (2) - to be consistent with 01:03:670.
3. 01:12:342 - the clap here is almost ignored. Try to emphasize the clap by changing the appearanc of this slider? Example!
4. 01:19:373 - it seems qute confusing to have this beat ignored. The sudden change to 2/1 rhythm feels out of place and the drums here are retty loud. Consider mapping it, please.
   Note: 01:56:404 - one more missed circle. During the previous kiai pretty similar beat was mapped and your rhythm was much more intensive. Please, place a circle here to keep consistency and to follow the vocals better.
   
   The diff was quite nice. Though it felt more like a Normal+ and looked a bit messy sometimes, that was a pleasure to play it and your patterns very interesting!

[BREK]
The diff name is not really song related and does not look really appropriate. Change it to something more related to the song, please!

1. Let us know where are yours and where are Kuron-Kun's parts. Let the players know your names!
2. Please, set OD to 6 due to the usage of 3/4 and 1/4 patterns the diff may be a bit tricky sometimes. Also, it'll help you to keep the spread balanced!
3. 00:44:217 (2) - divide it into an 1/2 and 1/1 slider. It'll help you to follow "with meeeee" in the vocals. Need an example>
4. From 00:49:373 and to 00:51:248 - this part was mapped in the easier diffs, so covering it with a spinner at the hardest diff appears a bit illogical to me. You can make some awesome stuff there, show us more of your creatibvity, guys!
   Note: same applies for a few similar patterns. I think you already know which ones.
5. 01:06:248 (1) - minor - the overlap with the DEFAULT- HP-Bar looksrather untidy.It's not a big deal, but avoiding that overlap sounds like a good idea to me!
6. 01:35:311 (4,5) - please, use two 1/2 sliders there instead. It will help you to follow the repetition ("silly~ silly~") in the vocals and also it sounds better with the drums!
7. 02:00:623 (1) - not a big deal, but i would just drag the beginning of the break here. Having a note, just one note, after the spinner is rather cruel and some players may get mad
   
   I like what you did therebut it may need a few more mods to make it perfect. Though it's a good diff even as it is now.

Pretty nice mapset. Some more mods would make it even better, but I do like it even now!

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Best of luck!

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, as requested.

[General]

1. I would fade the bright-pink colour a bit. It seems to be a bit too bright and may hurt eyes a bit while playing. I faded the pink color a bit due to it being too strong when compared to the rest of the colors.
2. Consider adding Collab and Collaboration to the tags. Those who like mixed styles may look for your map! Alrighty.

[Easy]

1. There're some 1/2 sliders which may feel a bit too hard for beginners. Also, you have some 2/1 gaps which also may trouble somebeginners, so I'd go with OD2. I can't understand this logic, Beginners are not supposed to FC or SS an Easy, they are supposed to learn through it.
2. 00:10:467 - in oder to point out the clap, I would curve the slider a bit, at this point. Example. Great idea, done.
3. 00:13:748 (3,4,1) - you don't use a lot of stacks normally, do you? The stack here feels a bit out of your style and looks rather confusing for the beginners. Why don't you change into a simple triangle-shaped pattern, which'd flow better and be more readable? Doneexample
4. 00:32:498 (3) - minor - looks a little bit offscreen. Moving it up a bit would definetly make it more readable and rankable. Fixed
5. 00:41:404 - I would place here a circle to emphasize the repetition in vocals. We can clearly hear "priti~ priti~" so, placing two circles would fit with the song perfectly. Pretty much all modders told me that so, fine, fixed.
6. 00:47:498 (3) - minor - I would recommend you to avoid such patterns since they trouble beginners and look quite messy. How? Do you like blankets? I personally don't find this really confusing, but I'll ask more people.
7. 01:29:686 - minor - I think that the red nod on the slider is suppoded to reflect the clap in the music, Please, change the shape, so the slider would fit with the song a bit better. I really like the current shape, unchanged.
8. 01:39:998 (6) - feels like you've missed a new combo there. The slider sounds different from what you've had earlier in this combo and the comboing feels rather inconsistent, imo. I don't like putting a new combo on a single note so I just put it on 01:38:123 (4)
9. 02:48:435 (3) - you didn't use such whistles before and it doesn't sound good with the vocals/music. I would ask you to remove the whistles, please! It's to emphasise the high pitched wubs
10. 02:54:998 (3,1) - the flow heree is not really intuitive and beginners may mistakenly hit the slider's tail. Consider moving it somewhere else to make the pattern a bit more suitable for the easiest diff. Fixed
    
    I don't really agree with the way how you ignore some vocals. Vocals are really important and a lot of beginners try to stick to them, therefore, ignoring vocals is not a good idea, imo. Also, some of the patterns were quite messy. from my point of view. In general, this is a great diff, but you could make it even better! I usually ignored the vocals due to a heavy emphasis on the music itself or just to give the players a small 2/1 Break, I really don't like putting constant 1/1 for a while on an Easy because it can get extremely tiring, even on 128BPM

[BREK]
The diff name is not really song related and does not look really appropriate. Change it to something more related to the song, please! NEVER

1. Let us know where are yours and where are Kuron-Kun's parts. Let the players know your names! inverness is working on it
2. Please, set OD to 6 due to the usage of 3/4 and 1/4 patterns the diff may be a bit tricky sometimes. Also, it'll help you to keep the spread balanced! k
3. 00:44:217 (2) - divide it into an 1/2 and 1/1 slider. It'll help you to follow "with meeeee" in the vocals. Need an example> I personally prefer the current way, unchanged.
4. From 00:49:373 and to 00:51:248 - this part was mapped in the easier diffs, so covering it with a spinner at the hardest diff appears a bit illogical to me. You can make some awesome stuff there, show us more of your creatibvity, guys! It was done due to it being a reletively long, So putting it on the easier diffs would be too challenging.
5. 02:00:623 (1) - not a big deal, but i would just drag the beginning of the break here. Having a note, just one note, after the spinner is rather cruel and some players may get mad It was done for the heavy impact of the finish sound, a break start doesn't have as much impact, thus making it not fitting.
   
   I like what you did therebut it may need a few more mods to make it perfect. Though it's a good diff even as it is now.

Pretty nice mapset. Some more mods would make it even better, but I do like it even now!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

Thank you for the really useful mod Bakari~

I starred it cause the map is kawaii

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, as requested.

[Normal]

1. 00:35:311 - both the 3/2 gap and the ignored vocals feel rather confusing. Consider placing a circle here or turning 00:35:076 (2) - into a slider to map the beat here, please! Nope.
2. 01:00:858 (4) - perhaps, you can remove the circle here. First of all, the pattern feels a bit too hard since there're so many 1/2s. Secondly, comparing to the vocals on 01:00:623 - and 01:01:092 - the beat here is way too quite. Done!
   Note: you can also ignore 00:59:920 (2) - to be consistent with 01:03:670.
3. 01:12:342 - the clap here is almost ignored. Try to emphasize the clap by changing the appearanc of this slider? Okie! Example!
4. 01:19:373 - it seems qute confusing to have this beat ignored. The sudden change to 2/1 rhythm feels out of place and the drums here are retty loud. Consider mapping it, please. As said before, this normal is a bit "hard" with the 1/2 notes, I don't think every beat needs to be mapped, and particularly don't think this is confusing.
   Note: 01:56:404 - one more missed circle. During the previous kiai pretty similar beat was mapped and your rhythm was much more intensive. Please, place a circle here to keep consistency and to follow the vocals better. ^
   
   The diff was quite nice. Though it felt more like a Normal+ and looked a bit messy sometimes, that was a pleasure to play it and your patterns very interesting! Thank you I guess.

[BREK]
The diff name is not really song related and does not look really appropriate. Change it to something more related to the song, please! BREK

1. Let us know where are yours and where are Kuron-Kun's parts. Let the players know your names! inverness pls
   Note: same applies for a few similar patterns. I think you already know which ones.
2. 01:06:248 (1) - minor - the overlap with the DEFAULT- HP-Bar looksrather untidy.It's not a big deal, but avoiding that overlap sounds like a good idea to me! But it's rankable ):
3. 01:35:311 (4,5) - please, use two 1/2 sliders there instead. It will help you to follow the repetition ("silly~ silly~") in the vocals and also it sounds better with the drums! But 01:33:436 (3) -
   
   I like what you did therebut it may need a few more mods to make it perfect. Though it's a good diff even as it is now.

Pretty nice mapset. Some more mods would make it even better, but I do like it even now!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

Thank you <3 ~

The changed: http://puu.sh/8MDko.osu

yay!

what!? D:

Hi there~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

1. JPG format is recommend for the bg due to the size

[BREK]

1. 00:16:326 - i suppose here could be a note due to both the drum and the vocal
2. 01:11:639 - also heard weird a little here since you chose to follow vocal a blank is not pretty appropriate i think
3. 01:28:279 (3) - for this kinda pattern i may choose to a ctrl+g here, also 01:36:717 (2) - ..etc
4. 01:34:842 (2,3) - i suppose a slider here may be better
5. 01:45:623 (1,2) - the beat here is
   
6. 02:00:623 (1) - compared with a soft note, a delayed break is better
   

that's all, i recommend to find several mods more and then call me back to recheck

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

1. JPG format is recommend for the bg due to the size Fixed

[BREK]

1. 00:16:326 - i suppose here could be a note due to both the drum and the vocal Added
2. 01:11:639 - also heard weird a little here since you chose to follow vocal a blank is not pretty appropriate i think Added
3. 01:45:623 (1,2) - the beat here is Fixed
   
4. 02:00:623 (1) - compared with a soft note, a delayed break is better This isn't a soft note, it's a drum sound that has heavy impact, a break start doesn't have as much impact as this.
   

that's all, i recommend to find several mods more and then call me back to recheck

Thank you for the mod~
Updated ^^