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Halozy - Sentimental Skyscraper

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Hollow Wings
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年5月21日 at 2:03:40

Artist: Halozy
Title: Sentimental Skyscraper
Source: Touhou
Tags: Aqua Trytone hotaru Kanshou no Matenrou Emotional Skyscraper Cosmic Mind Hijiri Byakuren ts8zs
BPM: 183
Filesize: 12752kb
Play Time: 05:37
Difficulties Available:
  1. Myouren Hijiri (5 stars, 1518 notes)
Download: Halozy - Sentimental Skyscraper
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Aqua Trytone ほたる 感傷の摩天楼 (for app) ,,MH=Myouren Hijiri
bg & sb by me plz redownload before 2014/5/6
lyrics written by me, amazing? 字写得太难看别喷我hhh
thx GunS_N_Rose for recommending this song to me
thx ts8zs for Hard diff mapset
重拾阔别一个春秋的感动
special thx to SuperContact
SC大大!还记得这个图嘛?没错!我又挖出来了!!
犹记得在做绯想天之前就mp认识了sc大大,在某次找人试图的过程中偶尔知道了SC大大也是做过图的!而且全程帮助我完成了绯想天那张图!!当时对mapping圈子不是很熟悉的我有了这么一个手把手教我进步的人真是太重要了!!!而且本身也是个触手,能给出很多合理的playing意见,简直碉堡了有木有!
有时候觉得自己运气真是太好啦,在这种关键时刻能碰上这种关键人物。。。
后来由于mapping思路和进程遇到了瓶颈,做出来的图非常的生硬,这图就是其中之一,怎么改都改不好,SC大大却也是和耐心地帮我看了一遍又一遍,实在是太感动啦!!OVQQQ
后来就一直陪伴着我mapping之路,毫无保留地付出有木有!!内牛满面噗
传说目前5分钟就能app了,果断把这个图挖出来,打算仔细搞一搞,希望能将当时听到这首曲子的感动确实地表达出来
今后还请多多指教!!!OVQQQ
thx modding from
[new version]
  1. 【CSGA】Ar3sgice
  2. S o a p
  3. Chloe
  4. Regou
  5. tellertheworld
  6. _Erra_
  7. inverness
  8. Meramipop
  9. 【Twinkle】
  10. Kodora
  11. LKs
  12. imoutosan
  13. Scorpiour ------ bubbling #1
  14. Atrue ------ bubbling #2
  15. dkun ------ popping for diff name issue ------ rebubbling #2
  16. BeatofIke
  17. sjoy
  18. captin1 ------ ranking
[old version]
  1. gun_rose
  2. Touch hand
  3. SuperContact
thx testing from
[new version]
  1. GGBY:“飞起,其实有点儿带感”
  2. Jemmmmy:“难飞了,后面又飞起来了”
  3. wobeinimacao:“这种跳图,应该说这种bpm,还是蛮喜欢的”
  4. InabaTewi:“我只想说三个字,好好玩!>w<。不能自拔!”(欲拔不能hhh
  5. lmdsqx:“好听0.0,还是不会打滑条,有些跳太难了,简单点就好了”
  6. Kanon:“我觉得这图很吊,不仅玩的爽而且给人印象深刻”
  7. rrtyui:“AWESOME MAP”
  8. 【Twinkle】:“太屌了”
  9. 3468990:“wodetian,也是好难”
  10. Beckham:“我的妈”
  11. 【CSGA】Ar3sgice: 蜡烛)
  12. gxytcgxytc:“haonan a”
  13. Bless:“卧槽好鬼畜”
  14. Yakumo Yukari:“好难QAQ 图很不错!可以玩>.<”(ps:可以玩!
  15. Dsan:“4.16wocao 这简直丧失 EGG PAIN 倒是挺爽”
  16. Amamiya Yuko:“this map,very HW”“wocao這音效太神惹”
  17. ShallICompareThee:“有点厉害”
  18. Asarc:“好快啊”
  19. NightFiend:“第一pc表示很难,但是挺有趣:3”
  20. little Agile:“好好玩”
  21. Prophet:“我觉得挺坑的”
  22. Playing:“喜欢”
  23. Lunatic:“大跳好难ORZ”
  24. N a n o:“总体来说,爽”
  25. hard to freeze:“感觉这图摆的好乱。。”
  26. cool_killer:“orz 后面的好快。。”
  27. wonders:“发狂段的话美感有点不足,不过自成一段体系,应该没问题吧”
  28. QAQ:“QAQ”
  29. Ragnarok_404:“太触了lol”
  30. wcx19911123:“好像还行,就是前面有个地方太遮”
  31. Donato Chi-:“這首我玩不起來啦!!(早就偷玩過了”
  32. Scorpiour:“跟别人相比,你对于mapping的想法越多,你在基本功上的缺陷也就越明显”
  33. sammy711:“我没想到后面还有发狂段,做的很棒啊11”
  34. fanzhen0019:“最后太.. 最后太hw了”
  35. Frostmourne:“I care about spacings.. so jumps like this is not my type, it's fun though.”
  36. Bass:“awesome”
  37. GunS_N_Rose:“还不错 滑条感觉有点夸张 其他还好”
[old version]
  1. -H o n e y-
  2. Arthur_ King
  3. Dark and Hard
  4. F e n g
  5. Fionana
  6. GmeSyw
  7. gun_rose
  8. gxytcgxytc
  9. Hope
  10. JJburstOwO
  11. Kamina
  12. King
  13. Liselsia Cesarini
  14. Lunatic
  15. MelodiE
  16. Narcissus
  17. R o r o
  18. ShallICompareThee
  19. Shionji Yuuko
  20. SuperContact
  21. ts8zs
  22. Zbreak
  23. Zucker
  24. ------------------------AR10 changed
  25. masterkong
  26. SuperContact
old logs
3rd map, more and more hardworking this time!! Halozy's hotaru is my fav singer. \>w</
thx to gun_rose for recommending the song and timing support :3
thx to SuperContact for helping all things to complete this map, won't be a good thing without ur support in mapping and modding. OVQ
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beatmap - WIP - change mp3 at 2013/07/01
------Flask's Normal - WIP
------Ts8zs' Hard - done by ts8zs at 2013/06/29
------Insane - done at 2013/07/01
------HW'' - done at 2013/06/23
(used to be ar10 in HW'' diff but hey that's impossible to get rank huh? XD)
bg - WIP
sb - WIP
diy bg and sb again, wait and see. XD
顺便这图还没做完就去请人试图,然后被喷了无数次啊无数次,我简直要激活抖M属性了。。。
蛤蛤我一度把HW''的AR改成了10但我知道如果这样的话想rank是不可能的-.-|||
Hanatan
a nice song!a nice mapper!
Topic Starter
Hollow Wings

gun_rose wrote:

a nice song!a nice mapper!
do my best to get this ranked, wait and see~ :3

irc timing mod
16:12 Hollow Wings: 姥爷你下载过了吗-。-
16:12 Hollow Wings: 顺便那个什么
16:12 Hollow Wings: 我本来是直接用你的MP3
16:12 Hollow Wings: 谁知道你那个MP3
16:12 Hollow Wings: 是320k的,然后我又重新压了一下
16:12 Hollow Wings: 如果你下完了的话那就重新下一下吧,offset都变了
16:12 gun_rose: 看过了
16:12 gun_rose: 比我的好多了T T
16:12 Hollow Wings: 我要围观啊QVQ
16:12 gun_rose: 不过滑条形状有点丑!
16:13 Hollow Wings: 球重新下载然后打给我看QVQ
16:13 gun_rose: = =
16:13 Hollow Wings: 哎,老实说我是很喜欢蚯蚓怀涛的
16:13 Hollow Wings: 滑条
16:13 Hollow Wings: 重新下载~~~~
16:13 gun_rose: 。
16:13 *Hollow Wings is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/266361 Halozy - Sentimental Skyscraper]
16:14 gun_rose: 2分钟
16:14 Hollow Wings: 好~
16:17 Hollow Wings: 卧槽
16:17 Hollow Wings: 我更新一下
16:17 Hollow Wings: 点一下更新~~~
16:18 Hollow Wings: QVQQQQQQQQQ
16:18 Hollow Wings: QVQ
16:18 gun_rose: 。
16:20 gun_rose: offset不对吧
16:20 gun_rose: 感觉snap也有问题好像
16:20 Hollow Wings: 哎?
16:20 Hollow Wings: 是这样吗
16:20 gun_rose: 我去看看
16:21 Hollow Wings: 那你看看offset应该多少
16:22 gun_rose: 奇怪
16:22 gun_rose: 我问问
16:22 Hollow Wings: ?
16:24 Hollow Wings: 你看offset变成45准不准
16:24 Hollow Wings: 你发的我没看到
16:24 Hollow Wings: 我带哦先了
16:24 Hollow Wings: 掉线
16:25 gun_rose: offset
16:25 gun_rose: 调成60
16:25 gun_rose: 你看看
16:26 Hollow Wings: 嗯...
16:26 Hollow Wings: 好
16:26 Hollow Wings: 感觉也不错
16:26 Hollow Wings: 老实说这方面我有点弱
16:26 Hollow Wings: 你觉得准了那就好
16:26 Hollow Wings: 我改一下
16:26 gun_rose: 这也是别人告诉我的0 0
16:26 gun_rose: 他学乐器的
16:27 gun_rose: 教我调offset
16:27 Hollow Wings: 我也学乐器的,为啥我就这么弱
16:27 gun_rose: 我也是啊 我也弱
16:27 gun_rose: XD
16:27 gun_rose: 没深入
16:27 gun_rose: ;w;
16:27 gun_rose: 没错了 60
16:28 Hollow Wings: 改好了
16:28 Hollow Wings: 试试吧
16:28 gun_rose: 恩

thx for timing support~ :3
Gloria Guard
To be a good thing ~
Topic Starter
Hollow Wings

Gloria Guard wrote:

To be a good thing ~
more and more hardworking this time XD
Spencers
02:03:338 (1) -
02:04:814 (4) -
1-4感觉可以来个滑条X1.2...有一种递进的感觉
其他没什么好挑的...
图不错歌好听呢
Topic Starter
Hollow Wings

_Kaiser wrote:

02:03:338 (1) -
02:04:814 (4) -
1-4感觉可以来个滑条X1.2...有一种递进的感觉
其他没什么好挑的...
图不错歌好听呢
你发的时候图还没做完。。。kd先不给你了,如果可以请等我做完图了再来mod
你说的那个地方感觉没必要递进,sry,reject D:
Touch hand
irc mod
16:21 Touch hand: hi
16:22 Hollow Wings: 哦哦
16:22 Hollow Wings: 我开了个新坑,做了个难度
16:22 Hollow Wings: 想让你先看看0.0
16:22 Hollow Wings: 可以吗
16:22 Touch hand: 可
16:22 *Hollow Wings is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/266361 Halozy - Sentimental Skyscraper]
16:22 Hollow Wings: 我网速不太好,老是掉线
16:22 Touch hand: 嗯
16:23 Hollow Wings: 所以你说话我都会回的,没回估计就是我没看到0.0
16:23 Touch hand: 没有最近香草掉得频繁
16:27 Touch hand: 要认领么www?
16:27 Hollow Wings: 啊好啊
16:27 Hollow Wings: 我应该做哪里呢
16:28 Touch hand: 随便选一个没有人的就行
16:28 Hollow Wings: http://puu.sh/3n1Rt
16:28 Hollow Wings: 这是我的图
16:28 Hollow Wings: 哎,不是按顺序的吗
16:28 Hollow Wings: 没做过collab不太懂呢
16:28 Touch hand: 这个和刚才那个不一样么?
16:28 Hollow Wings: 一样的0.0
16:28 Touch hand: 表示insane偶尔跳一点无所谓www
16:28 Hollow Wings: 啊,已经下好了啊
16:29 Touch hand: 不一定要按顺序的
16:29 Touch hand: 我看文件名一样^
16:29 Touch hand: 那个74%了
16:29 Hollow Wings: 是吗
16:29 Hollow Wings: 那我做几段呢
16:30 Touch hand: 1段www
16:30 Hollow Wings: 好0.0
16:30 Touch hand: 选哪个呢www?
16:30 Hollow Wings: 我先把整个曲子听完吧0.0
16:32 Hollow Wings: 有一个地方分段是不是应该在01:44:586呢?
16:32 Touch hand: 诶我说呢
16:33 Hollow Wings: 第九个蓝线的位置好像也有点奇怪0.0
16:34 Touch hand: 第九个是哪个
16:35 Hollow Wings: 02:00:740
16:35 Hollow Wings: 好吧我也不知道是第几个QVQ
16:35 Touch hand: 不是从你看开始的么
16:35 Hollow Wings: 这样啊QVQ
16:36 Hollow Wings: 我听一下哦,好像每段风格都不一样呢QVQ
16:37 Hollow Wings: 00:50:997
16:37 Hollow Wings: 我做这个鸽子这段吧QVQ
16:38 Touch hand: 好,认领成功~
16:39 Hollow Wings: 做完怎么给你哦,是只要osu文件就行了是吗
16:39 Touch hand: 嗯
16:39 Hollow Wings: 对了我那个图QVQ
16:39 Touch hand: 嗯
16:40 Hollow Wings: 你什么感觉哦0.0
16:40 Touch hand: 我来试试
16:40 Hollow Wings: 有点难。。。
16:40 Touch hand: ……
16:40 Touch hand: 你都这么说了那我就看看算了……
16:41 Hollow Wings: QVQ。。。
16:41 Hollow Wings: 音效还没弄,就像让你看看排列什么的
16:43 Touch hand: 02:29:240 (1) - 这个nc去掉吧
16:43 Touch hand: 02:27:928 (1) -
16:44 Hollow Wings: 这是为了统一才加的。。。
16:44 Touch hand: 为了统一什么?
16:45 Hollow Wings: 比如你指出的这两个。。。
16:45 Touch hand: 这调是世末改吧……
16:45 Hollow Wings: 不过如果要去掉nc的话
16:45 Hollow Wings: 我去掉后面那个滑条的nc如何
16:45 Touch hand: 难度变化很大啊
16:46 Touch hand: 不过也算是一种风格啦
16:46 Hollow Wings: 难度变化?
16:46 Touch hand: 嗯……就是有的地方很简单有的地方很难啦
16:46 Touch hand: 不过也有种抑扬顿挫的感觉
16:47 Hollow Wings: 我大概就是想低潮简单点,高潮难点这样。。。
16:47 Touch hand: ……
16:47 Touch hand: 你低潮正常做就行……
16:47 Hollow Wings: 哎是这样么
16:48 Touch hand: 没关系……什么样的图都有人打
16:48 Hollow Wings: orz
16:49 Touch hand: 04:53:830 (1) -
16:49 Touch hand: 这个去掉没影响
16:50 Touch hand: 把绿线去掉然后转盘拉长点
16:50 Hollow Wings: 还要拉长?
16:50 Touch hand: 这个没必要follow的
16:50 Hollow Wings: 那样hr会不会吃力了点。。。
16:50 Hollow Wings: HP即使是7.。。但是这个转盘十几秒。。。
16:50 Touch hand: 我是说去掉最后那个4反
16:50 Hollow Wings: 好
16:50 Touch hand: 然后转盘拉到4反的头上
16:51 Touch hand: 04:53:830 -
16:51 Touch hand: 这里
16:51 Hollow Wings: 好的
16:51 Touch hand: 绿线去掉
16:51 Hollow Wings: 嗯
16:51 Touch hand: 排列很好
16:51 Hollow Wings: 多谢
16:51 Hollow Wings: 没有别的了吗
16:51 Touch hand: 逆时针转得很爽……虽然我不能打就是了
16:51 Hollow Wings: QVVQ
16:52 Hollow Wings: 那就多谢看图啦~
16:52 Touch hand: 还有就是按照梗来断nc有点太乱了
16:52 Hollow Wings: 但是感觉不加NC更乱。。。
16:53 Touch hand: 已经到达不需要follow的境界的神触……(指
16:53 Hollow Wings: 啊?QVQ??
16:53 Touch hand: 去骗kd~
16:53 Hollow Wings: 哎,还没做完呢~
16:53 Hollow Wings: 要不等我做完吧
16:53 Touch hand: 有kd就行www
16:53 Hollow Wings: QVQ
16:54 Hollow Wings: 那以后怎么办
16:54 Hollow Wings: 再来mod一次还能给kd吗
16:54 Touch hand: 不能了www
16:54 Touch hand: 不过我会check的www放心
Topic Starter
Hollow Wings

Touch hand wrote:

irc mod
16:21 Touch hand: hi
16:22 Hollow Wings: 哦哦
16:22 Hollow Wings: 我开了个新坑,做了个难度
16:22 Hollow Wings: 想让你先看看0.0
16:22 Hollow Wings: 可以吗
16:22 Touch hand: 可
16:22 *Hollow Wings is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/266361 Halozy - Sentimental Skyscraper]
16:22 Hollow Wings: 我网速不太好,老是掉线
16:22 Touch hand: 嗯
16:23 Hollow Wings: 所以你说话我都会回的,没回估计就是我没看到0.0
16:23 Touch hand: 没有最近香草掉得频繁
16:27 Touch hand: 要认领么www?
16:27 Hollow Wings: 啊好啊
16:27 Hollow Wings: 我应该做哪里呢
16:28 Touch hand: 随便选一个没有人的就行
16:28 Hollow Wings: http://puu.sh/3n1Rt
16:28 Hollow Wings: 这是我的图
16:28 Hollow Wings: 哎,不是按顺序的吗
16:28 Hollow Wings: 没做过collab不太懂呢
16:28 Touch hand: 这个和刚才那个不一样么?
16:28 Hollow Wings: 一样的0.0
16:28 Touch hand: 表示insane偶尔跳一点无所谓www
16:28 Hollow Wings: 啊,已经下好了啊
16:29 Touch hand: 不一定要按顺序的
16:29 Touch hand: 我看文件名一样^
16:29 Touch hand: 那个74%了
16:29 Hollow Wings: 是吗
16:29 Hollow Wings: 那我做几段呢
16:30 Touch hand: 1段www
16:30 Hollow Wings: 好0.0
16:30 Touch hand: 选哪个呢www?
16:30 Hollow Wings: 我先把整个曲子听完吧0.0
16:32 Hollow Wings: 有一个地方分段是不是应该在01:44:586呢?
16:32 Touch hand: 诶我说呢
16:33 Hollow Wings: 第九个蓝线的位置好像也有点奇怪0.0
16:34 Touch hand: 第九个是哪个
16:35 Hollow Wings: 02:00:740
16:35 Hollow Wings: 好吧我也不知道是第几个QVQ
16:35 Touch hand: 不是从你看开始的么
16:35 Hollow Wings: 这样啊QVQ
16:36 Hollow Wings: 我听一下哦,好像每段风格都不一样呢QVQ
16:37 Hollow Wings: 00:50:997
16:37 Hollow Wings: 我做这个鸽子这段吧QVQ
16:38 Touch hand: 好,认领成功~
16:39 Hollow Wings: 做完怎么给你哦,是只要osu文件就行了是吗
16:39 Touch hand: 嗯
16:39 Hollow Wings: 对了我那个图QVQ
16:39 Touch hand: 嗯
16:40 Hollow Wings: 你什么感觉哦0.0
16:40 Touch hand: 我来试试
16:40 Hollow Wings: 有点难。。。
16:40 Touch hand: ……
16:40 Touch hand: 你都这么说了那我就看看算了……
16:41 Hollow Wings: QVQ。。。
16:41 Hollow Wings: 音效还没弄,就像让你看看排列什么的
16:43 Touch hand: 02:29:240 (1) - 这个nc去掉吧
16:43 Touch hand: 02:27:928 (1) -
16:44 Hollow Wings: 这是为了统一才加的。。。
16:44 Touch hand: 为了统一什么?
16:45 Hollow Wings: 比如你指出的这两个。。。
16:45 Touch hand: 这调是世末改吧……
16:45 Hollow Wings: 不过如果要去掉nc的话
16:45 Hollow Wings: 我去掉后面那个滑条的nc如何
16:45 Touch hand: 难度变化很大啊
16:46 Touch hand: 不过也算是一种风格啦
16:46 Hollow Wings: 难度变化?
16:46 Touch hand: 嗯……就是有的地方很简单有的地方很难啦
16:46 Touch hand: 不过也有种抑扬顿挫的感觉
16:47 Hollow Wings: 我大概就是想低潮简单点,高潮难点这样。。。
16:47 Touch hand: ……
16:47 Touch hand: 你低潮正常做就行……
16:47 Hollow Wings: 哎是这样么
16:48 Touch hand: 没关系……什么样的图都有人打
16:48 Hollow Wings: orz
16:49 Touch hand: 04:53:830 (1) -
16:49 Touch hand: 这个去掉没影响
16:50 Touch hand: 把绿线去掉然后转盘拉长点
16:50 Hollow Wings: 还要拉长?
16:50 Touch hand: 这个没必要follow的
16:50 Hollow Wings: 那样hr会不会吃力了点。。。
16:50 Hollow Wings: HP即使是7.。。但是这个转盘十几秒。。。
16:50 Touch hand: 我是说去掉最后那个4反
16:50 Hollow Wings: 好
16:50 Touch hand: 然后转盘拉到4反的头上
16:51 Touch hand: 04:53:830 -
16:51 Touch hand: 这里
16:51 Hollow Wings: 好的
16:51 Touch hand: 绿线去掉
16:51 Hollow Wings: 嗯
16:51 Touch hand: 排列很好
16:51 Hollow Wings: 多谢
16:51 Hollow Wings: 没有别的了吗
16:51 Touch hand: 逆时针转得很爽……虽然我不能打就是了
16:51 Hollow Wings: QVVQ
16:52 Hollow Wings: 那就多谢看图啦~
16:52 Touch hand: 还有就是按照梗来断nc有点太乱了
16:52 Hollow Wings: 但是感觉不加NC更乱。。。
16:53 Touch hand: 已经到达不需要follow的境界的神触……(指
16:53 Hollow Wings: 啊?QVQ??
16:53 Touch hand: 去骗kd~
16:53 Hollow Wings: 哎,还没做完呢~
16:53 Hollow Wings: 要不等我做完吧
16:53 Touch hand: 有kd就行www
16:53 Hollow Wings: QVQ
16:54 Hollow Wings: 那以后怎么办
16:54 Hollow Wings: 再来mod一次还能给kd吗
16:54 Touch hand: 不能了www
16:54 Touch hand: 不过我会check的www放心
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Zweib
你为何如此屌!
Topic Starter
Hollow Wings

Zweib wrote:

你为何如此屌!
233
Fenarth
I love this song; hope it turns out well

You should change the preview time tho, I was going over all the halozy songs and almost skipped this one because it didn't sound "exciting" during the preview

I suggest 2:00:403 or 2:26:222

Those parts make me love the song instantly
Topic Starter
Hollow Wings

Fenarth wrote:

I love this song; hope it turns out well

You should change the preview time tho, I was going over all the halozy songs and almost skipped this one because it didn't sound "exciting" during the preview

I suggest 2:00:403 or 2:26:222

Those parts make me love the song instantly
2:00:403 is strange, 2:26:222 is fine.
but i must say that the preview point right now is the most awesome part in this song ever, so i don't think it should be changed at all.
oh, maybe u should redl the map coz i've change the mp3 file at July 1st. :3
thx for ur suggestion anyway
rrtyui
pro.......
[Twinkle]

rrtyui wrote:

pro.......
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

rrtyui wrote:

pro.......
[带刺的铁球]
diff name ..MH -> ,,MH
话说啊我觉得某些段这么全屏都是跳, 还不如开cs5然后摆些正常的。不然看着就觉得乱..
00:42:123 (2) - blanket都没摆好233
00:46:222 (3) - 00:54:582 (8) - 这一段的折线连打我觉得摆的不好.. 最好是带弧度的, 不然就像00:38:926 (8,9,10,11,12) - 这样。对于连打来说直的一段一段不太好, 又不是滑条。
01:13:271 (1,1) - 不做成对称的吗..
01:41:304 (2) - 移到x:181 y:225差不多这附近..
02:05:454 - 这一段的梗挺赞
02:21:140 - 这里别空啊
02:48:681 (5) - 建议去掉这个, 这里有些不爽的感觉 我觉得是位置问题, 你换个地方试试..
04:43:271 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - flower
最后一段 妈呀简直deltamax
连打的美观方面还需要改进, 嘛.. 这一点著名连打图系列都做的不错 比如FDFD muya那几个 8bit什么的

最后啊我说一下

你上次说我maybe rosykiss那图其实我都能过 (), 而且我也是每个梗都试过几次的
但是你这图这么难还用HP7这就比较莫名了
是想让这图变成对99.8%的osu玩家都是观赏图的存在吗

不如快来加入我HP3神教吧1111111
Topic Starter
Hollow Wings

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

rrtyui wrote:

pro.......
[带刺的铁球]
diff name ..MH -> ,,MH 有没有尖角朝上的啊,朝上的才对啊不然不对啊OVQ
话说啊我觉得某些段这么全屏都是跳, 还不如开cs5然后摆些正常的。不然看着就觉得乱.. 到底哪个不如哪个啊。。。cs5的正常图不缺人做
00:42:123 (2) - blanket都没摆好233 fixed
00:46:222 (3) - 00:54:582 (8) - 这一段的折线连打我觉得摆的不好.. 最好是带弧度的, 不然就像00:38:926 (8,9,10,11,12) - 这样。对于连打来说直的一段一段不太好, 又不是滑条。 不改,要的就是这个风格
01:13:271 (1,1) - 不做成对称的吗.. 我讨厌对称
01:41:304 (2) - 移到x:181 y:225差不多这附近.. 我动了3,没动2
02:05:454 - 这一段的梗挺赞 我也觉得挺赞
02:21:140 - 这里别空啊 这里不知怎么就想空着啊OVQ
02:48:681 (5) - 建议去掉这个, 这里有些不爽的感觉 我觉得是位置问题, 你换个地方试试.. 钝角跳谁都会不爽的,这梗不会动。顺便榕榕兔有一半的断掉retry是在这个梗上
04:43:271 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - flower @花花
最后一段 妈呀简直deltamax 哪有,显然这个简单多了,deltamax那个bpm能看?
连打的美观方面还需要改进, 嘛.. 这一点著名连打图系列都做的不错 比如FDFD muya那几个 8bit什么的 连打图没做过,不过我觉得现在这图连打柑橘都还行啊。你举的那几个例子都是以规则谱面为尊的mapper,可惜我视各种规则图形为粪土。。。想到就用,一般不会去刻意摆什么规则图形。。。

最后啊我说一下

你上次说我maybe rosykiss那图其实我都能过 (), 而且我也是每个梗都试过几次的 抱歉我说的过了,可能是我思想还是太禁锢,放不开
但是你这图这么难还用HP7这就比较莫名了 HP7毫无问题,ex diff不是给所有水平阶层玩家玩的,此图一般小触努力一下即可pass
是想让这图变成对99.8%的osu玩家都是观赏图的存在吗 目前我找的tester都能打,而且我从来不做观赏图

不如快来加入我HP3神教吧1111111hp3.。。我记得chips的hp确实蛮低的,嘛具体情况具体分析啦,这图没你想象中那么难,不如说是我所有脑洞图里最简单的一张

thx for modding! 第一次被ar3姥爷喷了哭瞎OVQ
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
第一次被ar3姥爷喷了哭瞎OVQ

蜡烛233
S o a p
妈的这图怎么摸啊超出我水平范围
[MH]
00:21:632 (1) - 和01:56:058 (1) - 转盘是不是略短啦,奥拓君只能转到1000
00:22:288 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 虽说这些声音很小但是也加上whistle嘛
01:29:829 (4,5) - 没对准
02:30:812 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这边滑条不太好看啦感觉
03:25:730 (1) - ^
03:52:124 (1) - 加个03:10:156 (1) - 的音效吗?带感
02:27:861 (4,5) - 分别ctrl+g?
后面感觉就是满屏乱跳了 不过说实在的整体滑条都有点不好看啊,看上去像是老图的那种滑条或者随手一拉(
妈的这图怎么摸啊超出我水平范围x2
Topic Starter
Hollow Wings

S o a p wrote:

妈的这图怎么摸啊超出我水平范围 你什么范围orz
[MH]
00:21:632 (1) - 和01:56:058 (1) - 转盘是不是略短啦,奥拓君只能转到1000 还好吧,没事,tester都能转出300
00:22:288 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 虽说这些声音很小但是也加上whistle嘛 不想加呢。。。0.0
01:29:829 (4,5) - 没对准 对准?平行吗?稍微调了下
02:30:812 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这边滑条不太好看啦感觉 我好喜欢这种滑条的0.0
03:25:730 (1) - ^ 这个修了下
03:52:124 (1) - 加个03:10:156 (1) - 的音效吗?带感 这里不加了,那个我只加了三段主kiai
02:27:861 (4,5) - 分别ctrl+g? nope
后面感觉就是满屏乱跳了 不过说实在的整体滑条都有点不好看啊,看上去像是老图的那种滑条或者随手一拉(第一不是乱跳,第二不是随手拉滑条,嘛我倒是很喜欢现在这个风格的,某种程度上来说也是猎奇了hhh
妈的这图怎么摸啊超出我水平范围x2你什么范围orz x2
thx for modding!
lightr

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

带刺的铁球
Chloe
as ingame request 因为AFK了所以随便看看 求体谅QAQ

00:27:533 (1,2,3,4) - 类似00:27:861 (2,3) - 这种靠的略近
00:33:845 (7) - 大部分白线3连其实很违和 这边也是 代打的时候和听的时候都能感受到 你看这种00:34:911 (7,8,9) - 红线的就没有
00:43:271 (1,3) - 00:43:599 (3,5) - 这俩间距不一样 nazi
01:10:649 (1) - 这种滑条建议各种弧度和鸡吧 原因是因为你这里的SV 建议强化FLOW 少一点个人想法 或者就不要这样提升SV 你现在这样虽然我觉得很神 但其实真的是为了鬼畜 为什么我不讨厌0108 因为他虽然比较难而且间距和SV都比较大 但是他用各种滑条来平衡整个DIFF的难度 你现在这些图 颇有些相似于我早期偶像的图http://osu.ppy.sh/s/42593 别的滑条我也不一一指出了吧 单点不错
01:30:156 (5) - 建议弄个锚点http://puu.sh/8A7ae.jpg 01:35:402 (3,4) - 弯一点 我想了想还是稍微点2个吧
01:32:370 - add http://puu.sh/8A7b0.jpg

神图 射星 add fav.....
hard to freeze
how to play this map i can only play it with nofail
Regou
太牛了 只好默默占個坐位支持下
ryza
nice map :) but needs OD9 i think!!
Topic Starter
Hollow Wings

Chloe wrote:

as ingame request 因为AFK了所以随便看看 求体谅QAQ 噗噗让你看这图真是辛苦你了orz

00:27:533 (1,2,3,4) - 类似00:27:861 (2,3) - 这种靠的略近 调了下位置
00:33:845 (7) - 大部分白线3连其实很违和 这边也是 代打的时候和听的时候都能感受到 你看这种00:34:911 (7,8,9) - 红线的就没有 哎。。。为何你们都讨厌白线开打的连打。。。我只是想试试的说OVQ
00:43:271 (1,3) - 00:43:599 (3,5) - 这俩间距不一样 nazi 尴尬了。。。这肿么改。。。organization都锁死了的说OVQ
01:10:649 (1) - 这种滑条建议各种弧度和鸡吧 原因是因为你这里的SV 建议强化FLOW 少一点个人想法 或者就不要这样提升SV 你现在这样虽然我觉得很神 但其实真的是为了鬼畜 为什么我不讨厌0108 因为他虽然比较难而且间距和SV都比较大 但是他用各种滑条来平衡整个DIFF的难度 你现在这些图 颇有些相似于我早期偶像的图http://osu.ppy.sh/s/42593 别的滑条我也不一一指出了吧 单点不错 233,我不打算学0108,即使他的比较科学。某些滑条确实看上去不怎么样,但我都是顺着自己的感觉来摆的,打了一下感觉也不错 稍微修整了几个
01:30:156 (5) - 建议弄个锚点http://puu.sh/8A7ae.jpg 纳尼这是为啥?!OVQQQ
01:35:402 (3,4) - 弯一点 我想了想还是稍微点2个吧 改成互相平行了
01:32:370 - add http://puu.sh/8A7b0.jpg 这个不想加。。。

神图 射星 add fav..... 卧槽。。。射了10星哭瞎了OVQ!!! 多谢orz亚历山大不rank对不起你那么多星星但是柑橘我rank图前途堪忧啊orzzz
thx for modding!

hard to freeze wrote:

how to play this map i can only play it with nofail mai ruo ke chi


Regou wrote:

太牛了 只好默默占個坐位支持下 球mod啊!!!OVQQQ


Silynn wrote:

nice map :) but needs OD9 i think!! od9...... hmm, idk if that's appropriate to the map itself coz there're lots of jump pattern in it and higher od make it a bit too hard to play. i've found lots of testers and all showed that od7 is good enough to everybody... so let it be like this imo 0.0 thx for the suggestion anyway! and thx for taking care of this map :3
Horo
fun map! nice flow and power! gogo rank!
waxman

rrtyui wrote:

pro.......
Regou
來送個mod,沒kd好慘情
[..MH]
->,,MH(HW``)
00:36:550 (2,3,4,5,6) - 我被坑到了難道是我太弱QWQ
01:19:664 (5) - 我覺得這個太靠近了,打起來不爽
01:22:615 (1,2,3,4) - (建議)敢不敢再雞巴一點
01:26:222 (5,1) - 這重疊神醜啊 要不就疊住其中一個尾巴 兩個都疊住簡直U#(*&#(*%&(*@&%#)(
01:32:615 (6,7,1,2) - 哦草這個真是醜.... 我覺得後面那組的slider改一下應該會比較好看(比方說 弄下弧度?
下面一大段單點gj,好棒
02:33:435 (1,2,3) - 這組基本上也是外形問題,可是不改也沒關係啦
02:43:927 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - GJ!!!!!!
03:11:960 (3) - ???
03:12:288 (5) - ????????????
03:27:206 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 這裡的減速有點莫名 明明是副歌 感覺可以做的比較激情的
老實說就我看來這組弄正常spacing就好,不要刻意跟前面那段單點啊
03:29:009 (1,2,3,4) - 後面這組倒是挺合歌的
04:01:960 (3,4,5,6,7) - (nazi)spacing注意一下 現在排的不好看
04:45:238 (1,2) - 這個跳感覺沒什麼必要了 我的感覺是隨意亂跳了
04:46:550 (1,2) - 這個倒是可以,因為背景第二個音軌出來了(前面那個被你的hitsound遮蓋了,沒出來)
04:47:207 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 這個...嘛 我覺得有點傻逼了....就是單純複製之後然後改大spacing的 我不太喜歡
04:51:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這個排列看起來也是不太討好了...
最後那段是end of world, gj!!!
why so diao
Topic Starter
Hollow Wings

Regou wrote:

來送個mod,沒kd好慘情 求不到mod更惨hhh好友列表问了一圈只有三个人答应摸我图谁比我更惨
[..MH]
->,,MH(HW``) 好吧果然还是改了
00:36:550 (2,3,4,5,6) - 我被坑到了難道是我太弱QWQ 这是日常梗
01:19:664 (5) - 我覺得這個太靠近了,打起來不爽 不近的,4是奇数折返,滚轮回到头才能出300,移太早会出100的
01:22:615 (1,2,3,4) - (建議)敢不敢再雞巴一點 这没那么难,只不过很容易出100倒确实
01:26:222 (5,1) - 這重疊神醜啊 要不就疊住其中一個尾巴 兩個都疊住簡直U#(*&#(*%&(*@&%#)( 纳尼我觉得还好啊。。。稍微调了下位置
01:32:615 (6,7,1,2) - 哦草這個真是醜.... 我覺得後面那組的slider改一下應該會比較好看(比方說 弄下弧度? 这可是全图最坑人的梗,不太想改0.0
下面一大段單點gj,好棒 我也觉得好棒
02:33:435 (1,2,3) - 這組基本上也是外形問題,可是不改也沒關係啦 个人还是挺喜欢的
02:43:927 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - GJ!!!!!! 111111
03:11:960 (3) - ??? 萨克斯
03:12:288 (5) - ???????????? ^
03:27:206 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 這裡的減速有點莫名 明明是副歌 感覺可以做的比較激情的 憋在一个地方再跳出去才能让后面那个大跳显得更爽,全是大跳后面有的是,这边老实说也是follow feeling在作图,所以就想这么摆了
老實說就我看來這組弄正常spacing就好,不要刻意跟前面那段單點啊 对于读图对图本身的影响柑橘各个人见解都不同,这里我还是坚持这样
03:29:009 (1,2,3,4) - 後面這組倒是挺合歌的 233
04:01:960 (3,4,5,6,7) - (nazi)spacing注意一下 現在排的不好看 这是用工具做的,管他呢。。。
04:45:238 (1,2) - 這個跳感覺沒什麼必要了 我的感覺是隨意亂跳了 其实04:45:238 (1,2) - 是一组,04:45:566 (3,1) - 是一组,只不过nc把它们分开了,这里柑橘还行
04:46:550 (1,2) - 這個倒是可以,因為背景第二個音軌出來了(前面那個被你的hitsound遮蓋了,沒出來) 其实就是想重复一下这个跳,ds跟的vocal而已
04:47:207 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 這個...嘛 我覺得有點傻逼了....就是單純複製之後然後改大spacing的 我不太喜歡 没事,前面你认为是神梗的梗也有人说是傻逼梗,这图各种梗我都砸进去了,神梗和傻逼梗都是相对于个人而言的所以就让他去吧
04:51:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這個排列看起來也是不太討好了... 实际打了这梗你就会发现超爽
最後那段是end of world, gj!!! hhh233
why so diao 看rp了
thx for modding!
pw384
我说难怪我的图下下来就是not submit 原来改diffname了啊
Best diffname in 2014!
Fushimi Rio
好图 加油
-Teina-
..MH
  1. 00:33:845 (7) - 移高小小 和00:33:763 (6,1) - 成一直線 會更美觀?
  2. 01:33:107 - 這裡節奏好似沒有斷開 個人覺得不需要漏一個空白(或者 將01:32:779 (7) - 反彈多一次 ,但會令01:33:435 (2,6) - 變得奇怪 所以不建議)

神曲..

沒什麼幫得上忙 給你一個TESTPLAY吧
_Erra_
:!:NM from my queue!:!:

[,,MH]

● 00:22:288 - 00:34:255 - in the all object what in white tick add clap
Example: 00:22:288 (1,2,3,4) - need add clap, just hear a rhythm

● 00:53:025 (4,5,6,7) - Don't hide under slider

● 01:05:402 (1) - i think this looooong slider not good idea

● 01:08:025 (1) - ^

● 01:10:649 (1) - ^

● 01:26:550 (6,7,8) - maybe add cricles?

● 02:36:222 (2) - move to x:160 y:60

● 04:13:435 (3,4,3,4,1,5,7,3,1,3) - maybe add whistle of normal?

Mod is little but i very like you map, doesn't have a serious warnings but in some places need work with HS

Good luck!
69653863
Mod request from my queue

Guide
Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

Additional notes:
I cannot mod another game modes.
Please reply to my mods, I always looking forward to the replies so I could improve better.
If you think one or more points on my mod is unclear, feel free to ask about it.

Hello!

General
  1. Storyboard:
    1. White.png is way too heavy. They're 1366x768 and formatted in PNG, this causes a very significant increase in SB load. You'd better resize them to 1x1 and vectorscale them in .osb into 1366x768 to maximize SB load saving. Do the same thing to black.png
    2. Effect.jpg is just a pulsing sprite. I suggest you resize the dimensions to half and rescale it in editor as it could save SB load
    3. Lightning.png had a lot of unnecessary transparency. You could actually crop it up to 600px
  2. What's with the difficulty name, I can't understand it
i
  1. For app maps with streams it is very advisable to use HP6 (Trust me, you don't want to fail after halfway the map by just missed some notes)
  2. 00:21:632 (1) - The way it ends just a blue tick away from next note is just too much.
  3. 00:27:206 (5,6) - Ctrl+G this, then
  4. 00:27:533 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/8CeuH.jpg this. These would flow better
  5. 00:29:829 (6,7) - Ctrl+G?
  6. 01:12:779 (1,2,3) - I don't see any reasons why this is placed here.
  7. 01:42:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't like this, stack instead maybe?
  8. 01:56:058 (1) - Again, nope.
I think I'll leave the rest to other modders as I'm fine with them. Good luck.
Sorry I can't help much.
Topic Starter
Hollow Wings

tellertheworld wrote:

..MH
  1. 00:33:845 (7) - 移高小小 和00:33:763 (6,1) - 成一直線 會更美觀? 微调了下
  2. 01:33:107 - 這裡節奏好似沒有斷開 個人覺得不需要漏一個空白(或者 將01:32:779 (7) - 反彈多一次 ,但會令01:33:435 (2,6) - 變得奇怪 所以不建議) 这里我确实是故意gap的

神曲.. 神曲渣图么噗

沒什麼幫得上忙 給你一個TESTPLAY吧 回头看0.0

_Erra_ wrote:

:!:NM from my queue!:!:

[,,MH]

● 00:22:288 - 00:34:255 - in the all object what in white tick add clap nope for that's too noisy the the silent part of the song 0.0
Example: 00:22:288 (1,2,3,4) - need add clap, just hear a rhythm

● 00:53:025 (4,5,6,7) - Don't hide under slider nope, it's ok during testing

● 01:05:402 (1) - i think this looooong slider not good idea i love it 0.0

● 01:08:025 (1) - ^ ^

● 01:10:649 (1) - ^ ^

● 01:26:550 (6,7,8) - maybe add cricles? hmmm? orz

● 02:36:222 (2) - move to x:160 y:60 nope for the composing organization

● 04:13:435 (3,4,3,4,1,5,7,3,1,3) - maybe add whistle of normal? that's still silent part imo... 0.0

Mod is little but i very like you map, doesn't have a serious warnings but in some places need work with HS i'm pretty sure the hs work now is good enough... and i'm glad u like it 0.0

Good luck! thx www

inverness wrote:

Mod request from my queue

Guide
Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

Additional notes:
I cannot mod another game modes.
Please reply to my mods, I always looking forward to the replies so I could improve better.
If you think one or more points on my mod is unclear, feel free to ask about it.

Hello!

General
  1. Storyboard:
    1. White.png is way too heavy. They're 1366x768 and formatted in PNG, this causes a very significant increase in SB load. You'd better resize them to 1x1 and vectorscale them in .osb into 1366x768 to maximize SB load saving. Do the same thing to black.png u r right, fixed
    2. Effect.jpg is just a pulsing sprite. I suggest you resize the dimensions to half and rescale it in editor as it could save SB load i arranged it for a long time, it's good now
    3. Lightning.png had a lot of unnecessary transparency. You could actually crop it up to 600px sry for didn't notice this, fixed
  2. What's with the difficulty name, I can't understand it it's another way to call me orz
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  1. For app maps with streams it is very advisable to use HP6 (Trust me, you don't want to fail after halfway the map by just missed some notes) nope for almost all pro can easily pass this with high acc, and i think most of players can pass this when trying hard to do it. what's more, i think an extra diff is not made for all levels players, noobs can't play extra diff, that's true.
  2. 00:21:632 (1) - The way it ends just a blue tick away from next note is just too much. i don't think this is an unrankble pattern. players can give 300 result to both these spinners and notes after them easily.
  3. 00:27:206 (5,6) - Ctrl+G this, then nope...
  4. 00:27:533 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/8CeuH.jpg this. These would flow better nope, i think now is better
  5. 00:29:829 (6,7) - Ctrl+G? nope
  6. 01:12:779 (1,2,3) - I don't see any reasons why this is placed here. notice 01:12:124 (1,2,3,4) - and 01:12:779 (1,2,3,1) - in the same time, u will see.
  7. 01:42:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't like this, stack instead maybe? nope, i love it. 0,0
  8. 01:56:058 (1) - Again, nope. ^
I think I'll leave the rest to other modders as I'm fine with them. Good luck.
Sorry I can't help much. still helped very much in sb working! thx a lot! 0.0
thx for modding!
MeraMiPoP_old
妈呀好难, 我好弱打不了orz 我看看音效好了
歌词的字是你自己写的吗, 好萌wwww

,,MH
背景右下角的字可以转过来wwww
01:04:502 - 这里背景突然变亮, 显得歌名那个对比度比较弱, 就有些乱, 换个颜色或许会好些?
02:21:795 (5) - 这里可以加clap 0.0
02:24:091 (1) - 滑条尾可以加个clap
02:25:566 (1) - 这一串可以把中间的clap去掉, 直接用个normal音效什么的..
02:45:402 (1) - 漏了个finish?
02:49:829 (4) - hi阿跳投加个whistle
02:51:140 (4) - 加个whistle
02:53:107 (1) - ^
02:54:747 (3) - 加个whistle什么的?
03:02:453 (2) - 如果用单点表现效果似乎会好一些.. 话说我发现滑条球也会变色了ww
03:14:583 (3) - 去掉clap吧~
03:16:878 (2) - 加个whistle
03:35:238 (3) - 应该是clap?
03:43:927 (7) - 加个whistle
03:49:173 (1,2) - 这两个的滑条头加上whistle
03:52:124 (1) - 加上那个哗~一下的声音www
04:09:336 (1) - 漏了个finish? 这里应该是不同的pattern换音效吧 o.o
04:19:992 (3) - 滑条头加上finish
05:16:715 (4) - 这个50%太低了啊..
05:19:992 - 这个tick音好奇怪.. 控制一下音量吧o.o tick相对低一点音量比较好
05:18:682 (1) - addition:auto clap+finish

加油www
tukamoto7km
SB xDD so nice :D so cool 8-)
InabaTewi
窝的大屌已经饥渴难耐了
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