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Avril Lavigne - Hello Kitty

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Topic Starter
Avena
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on יום שישי 23 מאי 2014 at 18:40:54

Artist: Avril Lavigne
Title: Hello Kitty
Tags: Pop Techno Dubstep Kuron-Kun Collab Collaboration
BPM: 128
Filesize: 19400kb
Play Time: 03:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. BREK (4.71 stars, 327 notes)
  2. Easy (2.08 stars, 154 notes)
  3. Kuron's Normal (3.76 stars, 218 notes)
Download: Avril Lavigne - Hello Kitty
Download: Avril Lavigne - Hello Kitty (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#5 Ranked Map
Thank you Gero for the video!
BREK: Done by me and Kuron-Kun
Normal: Done by Kuron-Kun
Easy: Done by me
Kuron-kun
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onotoleonide
don't map insane please
also your mp3 is shit
your bg is also shit, convert it to jpg
you're also shit
leave this game please
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
BREK
Gero
EDIT: here you have the video use -533 for the offset.

Mina saiko arigato, ka ka ka kawaii xDD!


Insane: WIP By Gero & Irreversible
Cum Cum kitty kitty ok no ~
pkk

Kuron-Kun wrote:

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best first post I've seen in my entire life

this makes me want to throw stars at the map
Topic Starter
Avena
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Aurele
what the fucking fuck is this
Ayesha Altugle
I approve of this mapset
Topic Starter
Avena

Gabe wrote:

what the fucking fuck is this
It's a kawaii.
Kazuya
o_O *org*sm*

Okay. My shit mod:

It's only ideas!

[Easy]

00:41:404 - Put circle here ?
00:45:154 - ^
00:47:498 (3) - Hmm. Delete and copy 00:45:623 (1) - slider here 00:47:498 After move here: Example: http://puu.sh/8AP9B.jpg ?
01:08:123 (1) - remove spinner and map the parts: 01:08:123 - --> 01:10:467 - ?
01:28:748 (5,6) - delete objects and put 1/1 sliders here: 01:28:748 - 01:29:686 - timeline: http://puu.sh/8APyi.png ?
01:32:029 - put circle here ?
01:53:123 (1) - Hmm slider shape: http://puu.sh/8APE9.jpg ?
02:00:623 - Move green line here: 02:15:623 ?
02:17:967 - put circle here?
02:50:311 (2) - Blanket http://puu.sh/8APN0.jpg ?

[Normal]
00:15:154 (1) - Hmm. delete slider, and put circle here: 00:15:154 - ?
00:16:092 (2) - delete circle, and put 1/1 slider here: 00:15:623 - ?
^^^^^Timeline: http://puu.sh/8APXM.jpg

00:17:029 (3) - delete, and put circle here: 00:17:029 - ?
00:17:498 - Put circle here ?
^^^^^ Timeline: http://puu.sh/8AQ2d.jpg

00:17:967 (5) - delete and put circle here: 00:17:967 - ?
00:18:904 (1) - move slider here: 00:18:436 - and add once repeat ?
^^^^^ Timeline: http://puu.sh/8AQ7y.jpg

00:30:623 (1) - add clap the slider end? http://puu.sh/8AQb9.jpg

01:45:623 (1) - Slider shape: Examples: http://puu.sh/8AQkD.jpg or http://puu.sh/8AQmB.jpg ?


02:35:779 (3) - delete and put circle here: 02:35:779 - ?
02:36:248 - Put 1/2 slider here ?
^^^^^Timeline: http://puu.sh/8AQxX.jpg

Put spinner here: 03:00:858 - end: 03:04:373 - ?

[Hard]

00:09:998 (1) - 1/4 slider + once repeat? http://puu.sh/8AQQV.jpg
00:27:576 (2,3) - evil antijump. xd
00:33:201 - put circle here ?
00:43:514 - ^
00:43:748 (1,2) - delete objects and put 1/1 sliders here: 00:43:748 - 00:44:686 - and circle here: 00:44:451 - ? Timeline: http://puu.sh/8AR1R.jpg It's better.
00:57:342 (1) - delete slider and put circles here: 00:57:342 - 00:57:576 - and 1/2 slider here: 00:57:811 - ? Timeline: http://puu.sh/8AR8u.jpg
01:19:842 (4,5,6) - ohh too little distance and little unreadable. :| It's only (bad) example, and little better: http://puu.sh/8ARfJ.jpg
01:21:014 - put circle here ?
01:58:748 (1) - Hmm. Remove spinner, map the parts?
02:54:529 (4) - change slider end here: 02:54:764 - ?

Good luck! Go rank!
Kibbleru
uhh i just took a look at that collab diff

my concern here is; is it really okay to not map out these big bass sounds?!?!

00:08:826 -
00:12:576 - this cuz it should be slider :D
00:16:326 -
00:20:076 - this cuz it should be slider head o3o

idk that's just my concern here
pkk
Here have this random horrible mod. feel free to not mod my map if this mod is terrible
Please note that these are all suggestions so do not kill me

Easy
  1. 00:40:936 (4) - consider making this a 1/1 slider so the end of the slider matches with the vocal repeating the word 'pretty'. At 00:45:154 - I think it's fine to leave a gap since there isn't anything noticeable going on in the vocal worth mapping. Anyways with the 1/1 slider, you can stack the end with the end of 00:42:811 (2) - if you're worried about overlaps:
  2. 01:28:748 (5) - at 00:38:123 - you have NC every two measures so here you should insert NC at 01:28:748 (5) - and remove NC at 01:30:623 (1) - .
    If you wish to follow the suggestion then also apply NC at 01:32:498 (3) - , remove NC at 01:34:373 (1) - , NC at 01:36:248 (2) - (well you get the idea).
  3. 02:24:061 (2,3) - I don't think this looks very good, maybe because of the small space between the end of the second slider and the previous slider body. Anyways, not sure what you could change this to.
Kuron's Normal
  1. 00:15:154 (1) - try shortening this to 00:15:389 - and remove NC, then add circle at 00:15:623 - with NC. These changes are intended to cut the vocal off before a new syllable starts by shortening the slider, then matching the start of the new syllable with the hit circle.
  2. 00:25:936 (6) - ctrl+g for better flow :D
  3. 00:36:248 (1) - I think ending the spinner at 00:37:654 - instead will be better so you can map the downbeat with a slider/hitcircle to create emphasis. At 00:38:123 - you can then add a hit circle or remap the part around it like this:
    In that picture I basically moved 00:38:592 (1,2,3,4) - 1/2 a beat back in time and added a 1/1 slider at 00:40:936 - . These changes accurately match the vocal
  4. 01:52:654 (6) - consider moving this back to 01:52:420 - and adding a circle at 01:52:889 - to match the vocal. The slider is for when she sings 'pretty pretty' since it seems to drag on/autotune/what
  5. 02:34:373 (1,2,3) - ...hm I think there are too many overlaps here, I think this was addressed in the previous mod though
Hard
  1. 00:04:373 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd prefer to have this going down instead of up, probably because when you tap to a beat you tap down, so it sort of seems logical for the notes to be going down. I have no idea what I just said, kill me now.
  2. 00:08:592 (2) - try shortening to 00:08:826 - then adding circle at 00:09:061 - . Ending slider early is done to match that bass sound thing, then the hit circle is to keep up with the beat/vocal.
  3. 00:16:326 - eh I guess you could add a hit circle here to match that bass sound, you could just stack it under the slider tail but I'm not sure if that's a good placement
  4. 00:38:826 (2,3) - this might look better if you just stacked them properly or have the hit circle hanging off towards the bottom instead of the top.
  5. 01:54:060 (5,6) - two objects directly on top of each other on timeline, I suppose you'd want to delete the hit circle
  6. 02:00:858 - just some random barely noticeable thing that I noticed: the break should be snapped to start at this place, like in the rest of your difficulties~
  7. 02:13:748 - same as above, the break thing whatever you call it should be dragged here somebody please tell me wtf this thing is called
Geroversible's Insane


  • HP and OD +1? I feel that OD 6 is too easy for an insane since most insanes are OD 7-8.
  1. 00:10:936 (5,6) - this might look better if you create more space between the two. Overall it will be more pleasing to the eye~
  2. 00:29:569 (2,3) - did you mean to stack these perfectly? They're off by a little

    Oh this difficulty isn't complete LOL ok nvm wow magic, how did this get removed when I update map

oooooooook that's all, have fun mapping, responderino to my moderino, gracias
Topic Starter
Avena

Kazuya-sama wrote:

o_O *org*sm*

Okay. My shit mod:

It's only ideas!

[Easy]

00:41:404 - Put circle here ? It's a well deserved break for an Easy, nope
00:45:154 - ^ ^
00:47:498 (3) - Hmm. Delete and copy 00:45:623 (1) - slider here 00:47:498 After move here: Example: http://puu.sh/8AP9B.jpg ? No dude, that ruins my bootiful blanket.
01:08:123 (1) - remove spinner and map the parts: 01:08:123 - --> 01:10:467 - ? Made to emphasise the music change.
01:28:748 (5,6) - delete objects and put 1/1 sliders here: 01:28:748 - 01:29:686 - timeline: http://puu.sh/8APyi.png ? Makes the rhythm feel a bit spammy, nty.
01:32:029 - put circle here ? Fitting break since its an Easy.
01:53:123 (1) - Hmm slider shape: http://puu.sh/8APE9.jpg ? Nah, I prefer it like this.
02:00:623 - Move green line here: 02:15:623 ? It needs to be there to end the kiai.
02:17:967 - put circle here? No due to the reasons pointed before.
02:50:311 (2) - Blanket http://puu.sh/8APN0.jpg ? Good catch, fixed.

[Hard]

00:09:998 (1) - 1/4 slider + once repeat? http://puu.sh/8AQQV.jpg This is a really god idea but I have no idea how to change it in the current pattern, if I change it, it messes up the flow and the spacing.
00:43:514 - ^ I'd rather not, Current pattern is pretty fine as it is.
00:43:748 (1,2) - delete objects and put 1/1 sliders here: 00:43:748 - 00:44:686 - and circle here: 00:44:451 - ? Timeline: http://puu.sh/8AR1R.jpg It's better. No, I did this to emphasise the vocals.
01:19:842 (4,5,6) - ohh too little distance and little unreadable. :| It's only (bad) example, and little better: http://puu.sh/8ARfJ.jpg Increased spacing a bit
01:21:014 - put circle here ? No, ruins the vocal emphasis I made.
01:58:748 (1) - Hmm. Remove spinner, map the parts? This rhtyhm is super strange, I'd rather leave it unmapped.
02:54:529 (4) - change slider end here: 02:54:764 - ? Fixed

Good luck! Go rank!
Thank you for the mod~

pkmnyab wrote:

Here have this random horrible mod. feel free to not mod my map if this mod is terrible
Please note that these are all suggestions so do not kill me

[notice]Easy
  1. 00:40:936 (4) - consider making this a 1/1 slider so the end of the slider matches with the vocal repeating the word 'pretty'. At 00:45:154 - I think it's fine to leave a gap since there isn't anything noticeable going on in the vocal worth mapping. Anyways with the 1/1 slider, you can stack the end with the end of 00:42:811 (2) - if you're worried about overlaps: It emphasised the odd wobble sound in the back, I'd rather not change this.
  2. 01:28:748 (5) - at 00:38:123 - you have NC every two measures so here you should insert NC at 01:28:748 (5) - and remove NC at 01:30:623 (1) - .
    If you wish to follow the suggestion then also apply NC at 01:32:498 (3) - , remove NC at 01:34:373 (1) - , NC at 01:36:248 (2) - (well you get the idea). Fixed, nice catch.
  3. 02:24:061 (2,3) - I don't think this looks very good, maybe because of the small space between the end of the second slider and the previous slider body. Anyways, not sure what you could change this to. I really like the current pattern so I'll leave it unchanged.

Hard
  1. 00:04:373 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd prefer to have this going down instead of up, probably because when you tap to a beat you tap down, so it sort of seems logical for the notes to be going down. I have no idea what I just said, kill me now. I have no fucking idea what you just said but it convinced me
  2. 00:08:592 (2) - try shortening to 00:08:826 - then adding circle at 00:09:061 - . Ending slider early is done to match that bass sound thing, then the hit circle is to keep up with the beat/vocal. I know it works well with the bass, but it sounds odd to me.
  3. 00:16:326 - eh I guess you could add a hit circle here to match that bass sound, you could just stack it under the slider tail but I'm not sure if that's a good placement Vocal emphasis, nty.
  4. 00:38:826 (2,3) - this might look better if you just stacked them properly or have the hit circle hanging off towards the bottom instead of the top.
    I just do that to measure the spacing properly, ingame, it looks just like a regular stack.
  5. 01:54:060 (5,6) - two objects directly on top of each other on timeline, I suppose you'd want to delete the hit circle lol how did i even
  6. 02:00:858 - just some random barely noticeable thing that I noticed: the break should be snapped to start at this place, like in the rest of your difficulties~
  7. 02:13:748 - same as above, the break thing whatever you call it should be dragged here somebody please tell me wtf this thing is calledBreaktime Ending? Sure, fixed.
oooooooook that's all, have fun mapping, responderino to my moderino, gracias
I'll mod your maps today.
Now just gotta wait for Kuron to apply the mods~
Updated!
Kuron-kun
Kazuya-sama's Mod

Kazuya-sama wrote:

o_O *org*sm*

Okay. My shit mod:

It's only ideas!

[Normal]
00:15:154 (1) - Hmm. delete slider, and put circle here: 00:15:154 - ? Why?
00:16:092 (2) - delete circle, and put 1/1 slider here: 00:15:623 - ? ^
^^^^^Timeline: http://puu.sh/8APXM.jpg

00:17:029 (3) - delete, and put circle here: 00:17:029 - ? ^
00:17:498 - Put circle here ? ^
^^^^^ Timeline: http://puu.sh/8AQ2d.jpg

00:17:967 (5) - delete and put circle here: 00:17:967 - ? ._.
00:18:904 (1) - move slider here: 00:18:436 - and add once repeat ? ...
^^^^^ Timeline: http://puu.sh/8AQ7y.jpg

00:30:623 (1) - add clap the slider end? http://puu.sh/8AQb9.jpg Ok!

01:45:623 (1) - Slider shape: Examples: http://puu.sh/8AQkD.jpg or http://puu.sh/8AQmB.jpg ? I prefer my shape :c


02:35:779 (3) - delete and put circle here: 02:35:779 - ? Nope
02:36:248 - Put 1/2 slider here ? Again
^^^^^Timeline: http://puu.sh/8AQxX.jpg

Put spinner here: 03:00:858 - end: 03:04:373 - ? This is inconsistent with other diffs (?)

[Hard]

00:57:342 (1) - delete slider and put circles here: 00:57:342 - 00:57:576 - and 1/2 slider here: 00:57:811 - ? Timeline: http://puu.sh/8AR8u.jpg Noooooo, it will like, break my flow, break my beautiful slider, and everything!!!!!


Good luck! Go rank!

pkmnyab's Mod

pkmnyab wrote:

Here have this random horrible mod. feel free to not mod my map if this mod is terrible

Kuron's Normal
  1. 00:15:154 (1) - try shortening this to 00:15:389 - and remove NC, then add circle at 00:15:623 - with NC. These changes are intended to cut the vocal off before a new syllable starts by shortening the slider, then matching the start of the new syllable with the hit circle. No no no, I prefer the way it is now.
  2. 00:25:936 (6) - ctrl+g for better flow :D Okie!
  3. 00:36:248 (1) - I think ending the spinner at 00:37:654 - instead will be better so you can map the downbeat with a slider/hitcircle to create emphasis. At 00:38:123 - you can then add a hit circle or remap the part around it like this
    In that picture I basically moved 00:38:592 (1,2,3,4) - 1/2 a beat back in time and added a 1/1 slider at 00:40:936 - . These changes accurately match the vocal Yes!
  4. 01:52:654 (6) - consider moving this back to 01:52:420 - and adding a circle at 01:52:889 - to match the vocal. The slider is for when she sings 'pretty pretty' since it seems to drag on/autotune/what wat.
  5. 02:34:373 (1,2,3) - ...hm I think there are too many overlaps here, I think this was addressed in the previous mod though I like my overlaps ):

~ M i a u ~


The changes: http://puu.sh/8BKrA.osu

BREK
Don
Hey! From M4M.

Easy
00:04:373 (1,2) - Perhaps make these notes into sliders? Said objects ending at 00:04:842 and 00:05:779 respectively.
00:09:998 (3) - I feel that the shape of this slider is kind of out of place. Please consider making this one curved.
00:22:420 (4) - This slider begins on a red tick and ends on a white one. Please consider making one note out of this, on 00:22:654 to mitigate the poor-sounding slider.
00:36:483 (3) - Perhaps curve this one as well?
00:41:404 - Add a note here, to follow the beat better.
01:08:123 (1) - Instead of this spinner, two sliders that follow the beat would be better fitting.
01:10:936 (1,2) - You might want to fix the blanket.
01:16:561 (5) - Rotate this slider? Selection centre, 11 degrees?
01:29:217 (2) - Try to put the red slider thing at 01:29:451
01:53:123 (1) - The red tick would be better suit at 01:53:592
02:13:748 - Make the break end at the last possible position, the thing you do creates some unnecessary life drain.
02:17:498 (3) - Turn this into a 1-beat slider.
02:37:186 (4) - Once again, I feel this slider would be better off rotated 11 degrees selection centre.
02:47:498 (2) - Make this slider curve and flow better into 02:48:435 (3)

Normal
Really love the kiai in this map. Rest not that much, but what's broken can be fixed!
00:06:248 (3,4,5) - I feel like following the vocals is too inconsistent. Either remove these notes, or start a NC.
00:09:998 (4) - Perhaps make this into a s-shaped slider without the uise of red ticks?
00:10:936 (6) - Maybe make this curve downwards, so it flows better into the next note.
00:11:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Make the combo like this to make changing tracks easier to read http://puu.sh/8BQ0I.jpg
00:20:076 (3) - Flip this slider on the horizontal axis?
00:20:076 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Combo like this? http://puu.sh/8BQgN.jpg
00:36:014 - Add a note here, stacked under 3.
00:53:592 - Right here you're not following K-K-K-Kawaii where you're doing it in the intro. Try to be consistent.
01:19:373 - Might want to add a note here.
01:43:983 - Same about K-K-K-Kawaii
02:13:671 - Same thing on ending the break (see easy)
02:26:873 (1) - End at 02:29:686
02:43:279 (3) - Curve this slider

Collab
00:07:654 (1) - This slider doesn't fit with the music
00:13:983 (1,2,3) - I feel like this spacing is quite harsh.
00:16:561 (2) - Lengthen this slider to the blue tick
00:35:311 (3,4) - I feel like this doesn't flow well.
02:32:264 (5,6,1) - You're starting to stack the notes here normally. You did it manually before. Please stay consistent.
02:52:889 - Add a note
Topic Starter
Avena

Don wrote:

Hey! From M4M.

Easy
00:04:373 (1,2) - Perhaps make these notes into sliders? Said objects ending at 00:04:842 and 00:05:779 respectively. Nah, I like the current pattern better.
00:09:998 (3) - I feel that the shape of this slider is kind of out of place. Please consider making this one curved. It's priti ;~;
00:22:420 (4) - This slider begins on a red tick and ends on a white one. Please consider making one note out of this, on 00:22:654 to mitigate the poor-sounding slider. I did it for polarity reasons.
00:36:483 (3) - Perhaps curve this one as well? Nop
00:41:404 - Add a note here, to follow the beat better. It's an easy which means that 2/1 Are more than welcomed in it, unchanged.
01:08:123 (1) - Instead of this spinner, two sliders that follow the beat would be better fitting. It emphasises the music change better, nty.
01:10:936 (1,2) - You might want to fix the blanket. Slightly changed it..
01:16:561 (5) - Rotate this slider? Selection centre, 11 degrees? Why? It looks nice as it is.
01:29:217 (2) - Try to put the red slider thing at 01:29:451 - Doesn't really matter, unchanged.
01:53:123 (1) - The red tick would be better suit at 01:53:592 - Doesn't matter and was done intentionally.
02:13:748 - Make the break end at the last possible position, the thing you do creates some unnecessary life drain. It only starts draining from the first note, this only affects the HP Bar appearing and the dim.
02:17:498 (3) - Turn this into a 1-beat slider. It's an easy..
02:37:186 (4) - Once again, I feel this slider would be better off rotated 11 degrees selection centre. It actually fits for this one.
02:47:498 (2) - Make this slider curve and flow better into 02:48:435 (3) - It flows incredibly well now ._.

Collab
00:07:654 (1) - This slider doesn't fit with the music Yes it does, it emphasises the bzzzt sound
00:13:983 (1,2,3) - I feel like this spacing is quite harsh. Slider leniency makes this easy to play.
00:16:561 (2) - Lengthen this slider to the blue tick Ruins the clap
02:32:264 (5,6,1) - You're starting to stack the notes here normally. You did it manually before. Please stay consistent. That's because these are Kuron's parts, if he wants to do it normally, he can do it normally since ingame it looks the same.
02:52:889 - Add a note Made to emphasise the sound at 02:52:654 (6) -
Thank you for the mod~
Updated
Kuron-kun
Hello

Don wrote:

Hey! From M4M.

Normal
Really love the kiai in this map. Rest not that much, but what's broken can be fixed! ):
00:06:248 (3,4,5) - I feel like following the vocals is too inconsistent. Either remove these notes, or start a NC.Ye
00:09:998 (4) - Perhaps make this into a s-shaped slider without the uise of red ticks? Good idea.
00:10:936 (6) - Maybe make this curve downwards, so it flows better into the next note.Nope.
00:11:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Make the combo like this to make changing tracks easier to read http://puu.sh/8BQ0I.jpg No.
00:20:076 (3) - Flip this slider on the horizontal axis? No.
00:20:076 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Combo like this? http://puu.sh/8BQgN.jpg Noooo.
00:36:014 - Add a note here, stacked under 3. Why?
00:53:592 - Right here you're not following K-K-K-Kawaii where you're doing it in the intro. Try to be consistent. There is no K-K-K-Kawaii in the intro \:D/
01:19:373 - Might want to add a note here. I don't like a note there.
01:43:983 - Same about K-K-K-Kawaii Yes.
02:13:671 - Same thing on ending the break (see easy) "It only starts draining from the first note, this only affects the HP Bar appearing and the dim."
02:26:873 (1) - End at 02:29:686 Sounds better ending at 02:29:569
02:43:279 (3) - Curve this slider Stick sliders are beautiful ;w;

Collab
00:35:311 (3,4) - I feel like this doesn't flow well. But it flows...
Hello

http://puu.sh/8CXOo.osu
Saoji
Hi!

[Easy]
  1. 00:08:123 (3) - I find the shape of this slider a bit.. random, try to copy paste 00:08:123 (1) - and ctrl+h ctrl+j (http://puu.sh/8Dh4l.jpg)
  2. 00:41:404 - Adding a note might be nice here since you added one here 00:40:936 (4) - while she's saying twice "pretty" so it would make sense to click twice..you know what I mean? (and it would be more constant with the following part).
  3. 00:56:873 (3) - It may be on a strong white tick, it doesn't sound catchy to me (as if it was on a red tick) try something like this maybe http://puu.sh/8DhAA.jpg (and add a clap on the big slider maybe)
  4. 01:35:779 - I would maybe add a note..

[Kuron's Normal]
  1. 01:09:998 (1) - I would copy paste 01:10:701 (2) - and ctrl+h ; ctrl+j the cursor would make a clearer up and down..
  2. 01:33:436 (3) - ^ but it fits better probably because of the lyrics x).

[Collab]
  1. 00:09:529 (5,1) - try to ctrl+h those sliders. It looks a bit weird because of the triple before the first one which encourages to go in the opposite direction. . The BPM is slow, so it doesn't really matter anyway, but I think it would still play better and it wouldnt change the idea..
  2. 00:23:123 (1,2,3,4) - The pattern looks a bit odd to me as well. Try something like this. http://puu.sh/8Dj56.jpg (I reduced the AR for the screen)
  3. 00:30:154 (4) - Ctrl+H ?
  4. 00:38:944 (2) - Try to move at x:356:y:188 for the same reason as my first point. You did it pretty nicely almost everywhere else so I guess you care about it.
  5. 01:20:311 (6) - Ctrl+J to create a better flow with this slider 01:21:248 (1) -
  6. 02:29:920 - Han http://puu.sh/8DjQF.jpg (with a really slow volume (if you like though xD) it's just moe.
  7. 02:39:529 (4) - the blanket isn't perfect and I can see it!

I think this is it.. That's not a lot I'm sorry, it's already a good mapset though!
Good luck! :)

PS: Wow, I was hoping for a M4M but someone was faster it seems, nvm :(
Kuron-kun

Yales wrote:

Hi! Hello

[Kuron's Normal]
  1. 01:09:998 (1) - I would copy paste 01:10:701 (2) - and ctrl+h ; ctrl+j the cursor would make a clearer up and down.. No, sorry ):
  2. 01:33:436 (3) - ^ but it fits better probably because of the lyrics x). wut

  • [Collab]
    1. 02:29:920 - Han http://puu.sh/8DjQF.jpg (with a really slow volume (if you like though xD) it's just moe. I don't know, will think about it.
    2. 02:39:529 (4) - the blanket isn't perfect and I can see it! fuck the blankets.

    I think this is it.. That's not a lot I'm sorry, it's already a good mapset though!
    Good luck! :)

    PS: Wow, I was hoping for a M4M but someone was faster it seems, nvm :(
Thanks for modding.

The changes: http://puu.sh/8Ev1N.osu
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Mod request from my queue

Guide
Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

Additional notes:
I cannot mod another game modes.
Please reply to my mods, I always looking forward to the replies so I could improve better.
If you think one or more points on my mod is unclear, feel free to ask about it.

BREK

General
  1. wHAT the fuck man, there's a collab but no storyboarded parts name? wHO the fuck is mappING WHat? You no fix this, I'm gonna fucking kill you and shit you tonight ya little prick. Fucking die you fucking shit. You're fucking dead, kiddo.
  2. This ain't dubste.p
  3. good bg but no boobs or w/e so i don't like, you must change.
  4. Hitsounds are too discreet. You do need to turn up the volume in some parts
  5. 02:24:061 - FUCKFUCKFUCKFUCK
Easy
  1. 00:45:623 (1,3) - Not good. At least try not to overlap the sliderstart
  2. 01:18:436 (3,4) - Blanket not symmetric enough
  3. 02:34:373 (1,2) - Not blanket-ing enough
  4. 02:39:998 (3,1) - Little bit too close, move a bit?
Normal
  1. 02:34:373 (1,3) - Eh I don't think this is nice. I hope I could give a suggestion of better placement but these spacing just ain't my style )-:
kuron-kun pls
gatas

BREK
  1. 11:22:333 - BREK
  2. Maybe OD7 won't hurt much.
  3. 00:07:654 (1) - Drumwhistle didn't really fit anything
  4. 00:16:326 - Eh why miss a note here? Add please
  5. 00:17:498 (1,2,3) - Please don't overlap. Space it apart, this is a Hard diff anyway so don't worry
  6. 00:25:467 (1,2) - Instead of this, a ▬ ● ▬ pattern would fit better imo
  7. 00:26:404 (3,1) - Too close.
  8. 00:33:201 - hah why empty note again
  9. 00:43:514 - Add note pls u (stack it with (2) so it'll still flow so fucking good)
  10. 01:14:217 (2,3,4) - Eh another overlap. Fix pls.
  11. 01:23:358 (1,2) - Undermapping. You're mapping to the vocal anyway, while the music beats very clearly in the background. Why?
  12. 02:19:373 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - For a variation in pattern how about ▬ ▬ ▬▬▪▬▬ ● ▬ ▬▬ pattern. I hope you know how to read this (just relate to the notes I'm highlighting here) anyway ▬▬▪▬▬ is a 1/1 slider with repeat
  13. 02:45:623 (1,2,3) - Eh I hate these kind of thing '-' is that you Kuron-kun?
  14. scrub
Starred because good bg
kd pls
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