thank Hinsvar
...I should've just said that I fixed everything.Trust wrote:
[Hinsvar's Normal]
- 00:26:328 - I really felt the need to release the slider here because of the significant beat and click something on that red tick where the vocal starts. A rhythm like this would feel most intuitive after how 00:22:471 (1,2) played: Sure.
- 00:56:757 - The default soft claps sound really loud for this kiai. I think it would be a nice effect if you lowered volume by 10% for this section since the music feels like it's building up to the next kiai which starts off more powerfully. ^
- 01:19:042 (3) - Whistle on the head fits with how you're using and makes sense with the music. Whoops, looks like I forgot that. Added.
- 01:19:900 (4) - Adding a whistle on the head to catch that bell sound would be consistent with how one was used for 01:23:328 (4). ^
- 01:33:828 (5) - Makes more sense to have this clap on the tail to follow the pattern. ^
- 02:31:471 (4) - Spacing inconsistency here, keep at the 1.4x interval Oops.
- 02:34:471 (1) - Removing NC here would be consistent with your combo patterning. Done.
- 03:01:900 (1,2) - Swapping these two on the timeline would fit the music better imo, also would be consistent with the rhythm you've been following for this section. ^
- 03:08:757 (1) - Rotate this slightly so the reverse end isn't slightly touching the head of 03:07:042 (1). ^
- 03:20:328 - Add a note here? The gap in the rhythm feels strange because there's no pause or break in the music that justify it. I think a continuous rhythm would feel better here since the beat is actually quite strong as well. ^
osu file format v12
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Title:Glitter (Starving Trancer Remix)
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Artist:Another Infinity feat. Mayumi Morinaga
ArtistUnicode:森永真由美
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Trust's thank very muchTrust wrote:
Aw yeah first mod. thank you mod
Red: Unrankable
Blue: Highly recommended/very questionable
Black: Suggestion
[General][Hard]
- There are 3 .osb files in your song folder, you should only have one. fix
- The dimensions of your background is 1365x768 which is just a pixel off of the 1366x768 widescreen recommendation. Here is the same background with the proper size: fix good photo
- Make sure Widescreen Support is toggled consistently for each difficulty. It is toggled for Hinsvar's Normal and Hard but not Insane. fix
Consider using AR7. I don't really think having the same AR as Insane makes for a good difficulty spread. fix [/list][*]00:13:900 (5) - There should be a NC here for the strong downbeat and pattern change. Also for the same reason mentioned in Insane, the reverse isn't covering a significant beat or sound so it would make more sense to just use two 1/1 sliders. fix [/list]
- 00:01:900 - Because the default soft sample-set is being used for this section, I would lower the volume to 40% or so like Hinsvar did so that the sliderslides aren't so noisy for this soft section. fix
[*]00:28:900 (4) - Why not just use another 1/4 reverse with 2 repeats? It makes the most sense to have one here because the sound the previous 1/4 sliders play to is the strongest here so it feels a bit strange to suddenly skip drum hits. fix [/list]
[*]00:44:114 (3) - Whistle on the head sounds good and fits the vocal nicely. nice [/list]
[*]01:34:471 (1) - Finish on the head instead of whistle because of the cymbal and compliment to the vocal. fix
[*]01:37:900 (4) - NC here to fit your pattern. fix
[*]01:40:900 (4) - Same suggestion as 00:28:900 (4). fix
[*]01:59:971 (4,1) - The jump between these two is really big and will be uncomfortable for a lot of players. Try and make the jump smaller. fix
[*]03:22:471 (1) - There should be a clap on the tail of this slider instead of the whistle. nice i can't see this
[*]03:41:328 (1) - A whistle on this spinner would fit well like Hinsvar did for his difficulty. fix
hard all fix
[Insane]I absolutely love this song~
- 00:01:900 - Same as mentioned for Hard, 40% volume for this section would fit better. fix
- 00:05:114 (1) - Remove the whistle, it's not emphasizing any sound in the music. It might be better to have on the head of 00:05:328 (2). fix
- 00:05:328 (2) - NC here would fit better with the music because of the strong vocal. Remove NC on 00:05:114 (1) to fix. fix
- 00:05:328 (2,3) - You can definitely make a cleaner blanket between these two. fix a lot
- 00:08:328 (4) - Remove the whistle on this would be a nice effect since it would differentiate the lower piano sound here. fix
- 00:13:900 (1) - This slider isn't reversing to an easily identifiable sound in the music and isn't very fitting. Consider changing to two 1/1 sliders here: fix,i also thank it is too easy
- 01:02:114 (4) - NC makes sense here because your new combos appear every strong downbeat and this combo covers two of them. fix
- 01:02:114 (4,5,6) - I don't really agree with a triplet here. I would delete 01:02:221 (5) and add a circle on 01:02:650 to fit the piano. fix,like this
- 01:07:042 (1) - The tail of this slider is going under the life bar, make sure to move it down. fix[/color]
- 01:13:900 (1) - Remove the whistle on the head. Just a finish here sounds a lot better. i thank add whistle is more fit,no fix
- 01:19:042 (4) - NC here follows your pattern because of the strong downbeat.
- 01:19:900 (6,7,8,9,10) - This stream would feel a lot better to play if it lead into the finish on 01:20:757. Try this rhythm:
sorry,i thank my stream is fit- 01:25:471 (3,4) - The spacing here doesn't make sense. There should be more space between notes 1/2 apart and noticeably less for 1/4. I highly recommended moving these sliders closer to 01:25:900 (1) like this:
fix- 01:26:757 (2) - The cymbal here is significantly softer than the previous one. I would lower the volume of this finish by 10~20% to fit the music better. fix
- 02:21:721 - A note here would be great because there is a triplet sound in the piano. fix,good stream
- 03:28:900 (7) - This should be moved closer to the previous slider to be properly read as a 1/4 rhythm.
- 03:41:328 (1) - Same as mentioned for Hard, a whistle would fit well with this spinner.[/color] fix
Good luck!!
排列地方我會加緊努力...[Minakami Yuki] wrote:
From my queue of M4M
- Grey——Just some complaints.
- Black——My personal suggestions.
- Bold——Highly recommended.
- Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you'd better fix it.
[Hard]
- blanket都拉的太丑了,仔细拉下啊,00:18:614 (3,1) - 像这种……给人看到的第一眼印象分就拉低了 拉好了
- 00:20:757 (1,2,4,5) - 这里我建议还是用回1/1滑条 我用了1/2
- 00:43:042 - 推荐减速 FIX
- 01:10:471 (9) - NC FIX
- 01:16:257 (2,3,4) - 可能你是想摆跳但是这里摆的的确很有问题,建议是3,4还是按ds,4和后面的1摆一个跳,打起来更舒服 不錯
- 03:36:185 - 推荐减速 FIX
——- 节奏和音效没有什么问题,排列还是太粗糙,对空间的利用还不如normal
[Insane]
- 00:08:114 (3) - NC FIX
- 00:27:614 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 像这里的1/2单点可以摆的再有趣一点 FIX
- 00:43:042 - 推荐减速 FIX
- 00:47:542 (3,4,1) - 这个的flow不好,打着不舒服 因為减速的關係,大部分remap了
- 00:49:900 (5) - NC ^
- 00:55:900 (9) - 音乐虽然很轻不过我听到的钢琴音还是在1/2上而不在3/4上的 這個都能發現._. fix
- 01:12:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里明显不是1/4 馬上改回spinner
- 01:58:042 (5) - whistle
- 02:00:185 (4) - NC
- 02:01:471 (1,2) - whistle
- 02:03:400 (6) - ^ (这里钢琴音配点whistle啊,全是24clap听着太没意思,建议是再去找一个自定义音效的whistle用) 沒問題...fix
- 02:08:328 (4) - 挺明显的finish吧 這個我應該放錯了...fix
- 02:34:471 - 这里一段我就觉得挺适合放连打 放了2串連打
- 02:37:900 (3) - 去掉finish 感覺去掉的話,音效有點靜...NO FIX
- 02:54:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 节奏不对 http://puu.sh/7jVBC.jpg 節奏不錯.FIX
- 03:05:114 (5,1,2) - …… 應該是包不好? FIX
- 03:08:650 - add a note 不加...反而我把 03:07:792 - delet
- 03:19:685 (2,3) - blanket...... fix
- 03:36:185 - 推荐减速 fix
——- 我话糙理不糙,排列太粗糙不够用心是你这个图目前的最大问题,正五角星,四方跳,blanket摆不好,给modder的第一印象就很差,觉得这个mapper没有用心在作图。好好地仔细地修一下图的美观程度吧。
Good luck.
thank P o M u T aP o M u T a wrote:
Hi. m4m
[General][Hard]
- try add tag 'ed' and 'senya' 'ed' not need ,'senya' i would ask other modder to add
[Insane]
- soft-sliderslide2.wav add better your diff. so, sounds more good. add it
- 00:08:757 (1) - this slider seems weird. i think not need red point. also, try more beautiful blanket (2). only fix blanket (2)
- 00:28:900 (4,5) - remove (5) and, try this rhythm, more fit song. sorry...i like this rhythm
- 00:41:328 (1) - this is hard diff. bit far spacing imo. try reduce DS. fix
- 00:56:757 (1) - add finish slider head. I can hear catch symbals. fix
- 01:05:971 (2) - add whistle slider head. your pettern. yes
- 01:11:328 (1) - why add newcombo? because the song a waiting long time
- 01:37:257 (3) - add clap slider end. fix
- 01:40:900 (4,5) - same as above 00:28:900 (4,5) - . ^
- 02:00:185 (1) - add clap slider end. fix
- 02:03:185 (3) - ^ fix
- 02:16:900 (5) - ^ slider head. fix
- 02:51:614 (1) - add finish. i like this
- 02:56:757 (1) - add clap slider head. fix
- 03:10:900 (3) - add clap. fix
- 03:21:614 (2,3,4,5) - hard play imo... try reduce ds. fix
- 03:30:614 (4) - add clap. fix
- 03:31:042 (1,3) - add clap slider end. fix
good luck
- 00:04:257 (5) - add whistle slider end. done
- 00:24:828 (2) - this overlaps i don't like.. fix
my map: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/70945
I fixed everything from P o m u T a's mod except for 01:01:900 (2) since there is a stronger piano at 01:03:185, and the suggestion after it because I think the current position is quite fine already.[Minakami Yuki] wrote:
[Hinsvar's Normal]
Although the star rating system is changing now, but you can also make it easier? This should be sufficiently easy, IMO. Also, I'm not quite sure about how will the star rating rule changes after the calculation change, so uh...- 00:15:614 - add valume to about 55% here? Sure.
- 00:27:828 (1) - begin at 00:27:614 - ? ^
——- Fine.
osu file format v12
[General]
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TitleUnicode:Glitter (Starving Trancer Remix)
Artist:Another Infinity feat. Mayumi Morinaga
ArtistUnicode:森永真由美
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wmtokok wrote:
Mizukashii wrote:
here's a New BG if you want (suggestion)
i can find more if you want
thank...
but i don't need a new BG
when i need BG that i would find you
T_Terry_T wrote:
I came here from this modding queue, but damn: there's nothing to mod for me!
I suggest to remove the KT between 00:56:777 and 01:08:777 since the chorus is 10s or something after it, but aside from that diffs are good and cool.
Shooting a star for the great work.
Good luck with the ranking!
It's okay. I didn't post to receive KD!wmtokok wrote:
T_Terry_T wrote:
I came here from this modding queue, but damn: there's nothing to mod for me!
I suggest to remove the KT between 00:56:777 and 01:08:777 since the chorus is 10s or something after it, but aside from that diffs are good and cool.
Shooting a star for the great work.
Good luck with the ranking!
Thank you so much,but
i can't give you a KD for you
because i don't fix anything
Thanks for modding!Yuzu- wrote:
Hey~ From my modding queue.
I'm sorry if I misunderstood but your post was a bit confusing, what I thought I read was that you needed me for Normal difficulty. So here it goes~Hinsvar's Normal1- 00:01:920 (1) - you can angle it a bit better at 00:02:562 (2), just to make it a better curve Okay.
2- 00:07:062 (2,3) - It's not bad, but if you could somehow curve this into having 00:07:920 (3)'s curve flow right into 00:08:777 (4) it would look neat.
Something like http://puu.sh/8hy00.png. It felt good to me because it feels like you're doing 00:04:062 (4), then reversing the flow with 00:05:348 (1) and redoing the curve again. Nope; the curve is too strong, and it'll break the flow.
3- 00:10:277 (6) - Angle this into 00:10:920 (7), and then make it a curve into 00:12:205 (1). Okay for this.
4- 00:18:205 (5) - You can curve that into 00:19:062 (1), and do the same with 00:20:777 (2), making it go into 00:21:420 (3). I'm sure the curve is already good enough here...
5- 00:22:491 (1) - You don't have to, but having it curve to the other side looks better to me. It'd break the flow to 00:23:134 (2).
6- I'd prefer if you curved 00:25:062 (5), then repositioned 00:25:920 (1,2) to have 00:25:920 (1) blanket 00:26:562 (2). Did stuff around here.
7- 00:55:062 (2) - Curve this into 00:55:920 (3). You might also want to place it just a bit more to the left to help Sure.
8- I would prefer if you rotate 01:07:705 (2) clockwise, just to make some sort of movement to flow into 01:08:777 (1) Played around with the nodes instead.
9- 01:10:491 (1) - Try to make this start on top of 01:08:777 (1)'s finish (just to look more pretty) Okay.
10- 01:19:062 (3,4) - You can try to adjust that like what I suggested in 2-, to have it flow into 01:20:777 (1) ^
11- 01:27:634 (1) - Move this a bit further down and adjust the curve to make it less tight into 01:28:491 (2) ^
12- 01:58:491 (1) - This looks better if you invert it vertically. ^
13- 02:14:777 (4) - You could try to slightly curve it a bit better. ^
14- 02:17:348 (3) - Maybe something symmetrical with 02:18:205 (4) would look better Nope; I intend to have a diversity in slider shape so the diff won't be boring.
15- I'd personally prefer if you didn't have this shape here 02:19:705 (2). But I guess it could stay. ^
16- 02:23:562 (2) - Try to perfect this curve into 02:24:205 (3) Okay.
17- 02:30:205 (2,3,4,1) - Tried to take this part and slightly move things a bit around. Turned out like this: http://puu.sh/8hzFp.png (note that the highlighted slider on the back is 02:32:777 (1), which is now starting where 02:30:205 (2) ends. You'll then want to curve 02:32:777 (1) a bit better into 02:33:420 (2). Did another thing.
18- 02:56:777 (3) - You could try to curve this better into 02:58:062 (4). Done.
19- 03:10:491 (2) - Rotate clockwise to go into 03:11:777 (3). ^
20- 03:24:205 (4,5) - Might look better if both curves are turned to each other, because then you'll still have the pattern and 03:25:062 (5) will go into 03:25:920 (1). The flow here will break, so...
Also, you should turn on epilepsy warning AND your kiai time is a bit too big. You should try to take another look at it and see where you can improve.
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Yales wrote:
Hi,
Sorry, at the end of my mod, I restarted to mod the beginning of the map .
Also, thank you to say what you changed or not (and if possible, why you didn't).[General]
You should, indeed, reduce the kiai time, chose the key parts. i think it is a key parts of kiai now[Insane]
- 00:07:491 (1,2) - The spacing is quite intense for a slow part no? I suggest you to lower it special here ..no fix
- 00:08:134 (1,2) - ^ ^
- 00:16:920 (5,6,7) - This triple sounds quite odd to me, I'd rather put the triple on the next slider.-> 00:17:027 (6) -> 00:17:241 - like this: fix
- 00:51:205 (3,4,5,1) - ^ fix
- 00:22:491 (1) - The shape doesnt look good you should arrange the blanket. OK
- 00:23:777 (5) - same here, even if it's just a bit. more blanket with (4) fix
- 00:24:205 (1) - ^ OK
- 00:39:634 (1) - 00:40:920 (13) - This is up to you, but my point of view, is: this kind of shape stream plays bad. i think it is fit the song of rhythm.no fix
- 01:53:348 (1) - ^ ^
- 00:41:562 - You shouldn't ignore the note here, or at least, arrange the spacing of this note 00:41:777 (3) - not need.i use some jump prominent the rhythm. If i add this note will feel too bored no fix
- 00:55:920 (1) - 1/1 slider maybe You can't listen that have a piano song here? no fix
- 01:21:848 (4) - move to x:128 y:320 i move to X:116 Y:324 fix
- 01:37:277 (3,4,5) - The flow is pretty bad, try something like this maybe http://puu.sh/8jKay.jpg look good fix
- 01:56:777 (1) - Bad flow, try this http://puu.sh/8jKgC.jpg and you should add a NC on this slider as well. nice flow.but it skip the NC here ..fix
- 02:27:420 (6) - add a triple add
- 03:02:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - this star doesn't look like a star. You should redraw fix
- 03:03:634 (1) - I find the slider quite ugly A simple shape might be better fix
02:58:491 (1) - ^ and bad flow because of it fix- 03:19:705 (2) - I don't like the flow here neither, try this maybe http://puu.sh/8jKEi.jpg i like this no fix
- 03:40:277 (2,3,4,5,6) - I understand what you wanted to do, but this plays bad though, also I suggest you to put the same spacing quite high if you want to keep the same effect. fix
- 03:07:384 (4) - remove? fix
- 01:36:205 (1) - arrange shape? http://puu.sh/8jL56.jpg FIX
- 02:00:848 (7,4,5,6) - CTRL+H ; Ctrl+J OK
- 02:04:277 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
- 02:09:420 (2) - Move to x216 y:216 fix
- 02:09:848 (4) - ^ ^
Ok, that's pretty much it. I love the song and the map has some good points, but sometimes your flow is destroyed by the shape of your sliders/esthetic. Indeed, you should maybe pay more intention to it, especially because it;s a slow song you can clearly see it .
I didnt't point out everything about this cause I don't want to change your "style" neither. Indeed, I kinda like this "old" style. However, this is an example of the shapes I would make.
From 02:14:348 (2) - - to 02:16:920 (3) - (the last one is the selected note in blue) I lowered the AR for the screen.
I think your "style" maybe good.Also i should keep my "style" too.SO i use some idea in your style. thank
http://puu.sh/8jLM5.jpg
All my sliders here are made this way and I tried to make perfect blanket as you can see here: http://puu.sh/8jM44.jpg or here http://puu.sh/8jLTC.jpg
You can ofc use this pattern if you want to. It was just an example.
So yes, that's it, pretty much.
Good luck ~
ids wrote:
hi,来自m4m
HI 我在未來數天來MOD你的圖
[Insane]THANK YOU
- 00:01:920 (1,2) - 虽然影响不大,但还是建议头尾包好 OK https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1538806
- 00:04:277 (2,3,1) - 不是太美观 美觀FIX...但(3)這個滑條不打算拉直.. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1538808
- 00:12:205 (1,2,3,4) - 有点省事的感觉。。 這里我重新做過 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1538815
- 00:13:920 (1,3) - 3叠到1上 OK
- 00:16:491 (4) - 这一部分的重音只有这里留在尾部 不是在尾部... 在頭的位置
- 00:20:777 (1,2,3,4,1) - 不是规则的四边形 FIX
- 00:29:134 - SB闪现转换有点早,建议配合乐音往后挪到00:29:348 - 後退了
- 00:39:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 摆放和节奏需要重考虑 的確很有啟發..可是我想到一個比你這個應該更好 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1538825
- 00:41:348 (2,3) - 2换成滑条压蓝线,比较好听 個人覺得不太合適 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1538828
- 01:16:277 (4,5,6,7,8) - 形状不是太好看 FIX
- 01:32:777 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1调整到后四个中间 不了,這里是故意做星型
- 01:54:205 (9,10,11,12,13,1) - 减几个note比较好听 改了跟上邊差不多的 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1538837
- 02:39:420 - 同样闪现位置往后推半拍 這個問題不大
- 03:02:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - 调整下正五边形比较好看 這個樓上的MOD都有提到... 所以我已經FIX了
- 03:29:348 (1) - ctrl+g OK
- 03:32:777 (1,2,3,4) - ↑ 這個有點怪異 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1538815
- 03:40:277 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这里不适合渐离。。。 這個樓上的MOD都有提到... 所以我已經FIX了 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1538852
Thanks, guys!wmtokok wrote:
Hinsvar just see this of ids's mod
[Hinsvar's Normal]thank Hinsvar
- 00:04:062 (4) - 不建议忽略这个1/2音 --------------> i don't suggest that skip a 1/2 I don't want to make the rhythm more complex to follow the star difficulty rule...
- 00:24:205 (3,4,5) - 配合下00:22:491 (1,2) - ---------->reference 00:22:491 (1,2) - Sure.
- 00:27:634 (1) - 转盘起始往前半拍 ------------>spinner should be start on 00:27:420 - I want to follow the cymbal at 00:27:634.
- 00:39:420 - 同闪现调整 ------------>SB change (i fix it) Okay!
- 01:12:205 (1) - 这个难度转盘有点短,建议起始在这里 -----------------> the spinner is too short in this diff Eh idk, I feel that this is quite fitting enough in terms of length.
- 03:24:848 - 加note ----------> add note Started 03:25:062 (5) here instead.
- 03:38:562 (3,4) - 配合下人声 -------------> Please fit the vocal of people Since there's a loud instrument sound at 03:38:777, no, as it'll be awkward to leave that empty.
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80,168,60205,6,0,B|132:136|132:136|192:176|272:152,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,328,61920,2,0,P|188:340|256:316,2,120,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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244,208,63634,6,0,P|304:216|368:192,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,120,64277,2,0,P|360:200|416:296,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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324,352,66848,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,288,67062,6,0,P|392:232|376:156,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,112,67705,2,0,B|276:84|276:84|236:104|188:76,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,192,68777,6,0,P|244:264|152:252,1,180,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
113,189,69634,2,0,L|97:77,2,90,6|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,259,70491,6,0,B|219:291|275:251|275:251|331:295|387:255,1,240,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72205,12,2,73491,0:0:0:0:
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184,100,79062,2,0,P|135:130|98:182,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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72,320,83348,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,352,83777,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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40,256,120205,2,0,P|28:200|44:132,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,48,121062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,156,121491,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,80,121920,6,0,P|484:172|456:272,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,316,122777,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,280,123205,2,0,P|232:252|228:216,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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116,52,124920,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,127277,12,4,128777,0:0:0:0:
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164,176,134777,2,0,B|216:176|252:192|252:192|284:152|352:132,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,160,135634,6,0,P|440:248|408:336,2,180,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,116,137134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,96,137348,2,0,B|204:100|180:136|180:136|132:120,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,292,138205,2,0,P|200:304|256:268,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,132,139062,6,0,L|472:128,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,196,139705,2,0,B|512:272|440:296|440:296|464:308|492:340,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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208,244,141205,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,132,141634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,256,142062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,368,142491,6,0,P|232:336|136:356,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,200,143562,2,0,P|116:172|132:96,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,24,144205,2,0,L|324:28,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,96,145062,2,0,P|372:152|352:220,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,288,145920,6,0,P|144:296|84:272,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,208,146562,2,0,P|64:120|144:60,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,156,147634,2,0,P|332:216|428:196,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,120,148491,2,0,P|420:188|456:296,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,348,149348,6,0,L|268:360,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,212,150205,2,0,P|216:164|284:124,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,84,151062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,252,151491,2,0,P|448:300|516:332,2,120,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,184,152777,6,0,P|196:180|136:148,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,80,153420,2,0,P|112:164|72:264,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,352,154491,2,0,L|348:344,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,252,155348,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,168,155777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,96,156205,5,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,156420,12,2,157920,0:0:0:0:
104,68,158777,6,0,P|64:180|112:292,1,240,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,171634,12,2,173348,0:0:0:0:
304,284,174205,5,8,0:0:0:0:
376,328,174420,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,272,174634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,104,175062,6,0,P|408:48|352:36,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,68,175705,2,0,P|192:104|116:52,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,212,176777,2,0,P|88:316|192:280,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,178062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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500,188,179134,2,0,L|504:52,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,20,179777,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,88,180205,2,0,P|220:100|168:68,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,72,180848,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,156,181062,2,0,P|96:220|68:280,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,360,181920,6,0,P|276:348|337:363,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,324,182563,2,0,P|388:240|424:144,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,36,183634,2,0,P|208:76|120:52,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,204,184705,2,0,L|36:264,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,120,185348,5,2,0:0:0:0:
136,252,185777,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,96,186205,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,232,186634,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,136,187062,6,0,P|476:244|412:352,1,240,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,304,188348,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,140,188777,6,0,P|280:72|372:84,2,180,6|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,292,190491,2,0,L|31:261,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,328,191777,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,268,192205,6,0,P|508:184|468:100,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,80,193062,2,0,B|348:64|272:100|272:100|212:68,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,193920,2,0,P|112:144|120:224,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,324,194777,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,188,195205,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,72,195634,6,0,P|124:104|80:184,1,180,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,324,196705,2,0,P|228:304|288:324,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,328,197348,2,0,P|432:304|492:200,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,228,199062,6,0,L|104:212,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,96,200348,1,10,0:0:0:0:
484,168,200777,2,0,P|512:276|420:360,1,240,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,324,202062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,228,202491,6,0,P|116:168|140:104,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,56,203134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,52,203562,2,0,L|436:40,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,120,204205,2,0,B|300:148|316:196|316:196|300:212|280:240,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,276,204848,2,0,P|132:212|152:128,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,48,205920,6,0,P|356:60|424:144,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,148,207634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,308,208062,2,0,B|232:344|280:284|280:284|336:332|392:272,1,240,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,112,209348,6,0,P|368:80|296:80,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,120,209991,2,0,B|184:144|112:100|112:100|60:120,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,284,211062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,336,211491,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,172,211920,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,284,212348,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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488,152,214062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,48,214491,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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72,88,215777,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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404,44,219205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,212,219634,6,0,P|332:288|208:256,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,221562,12,2,223062,0:0:0:0:
Thank your modappleeaterx wrote:
Hey, from #modreq
[General]
Still a lot of KIAI - maybe remove the KIAI at 00:56:777 ? OK remove it,i also think KIAI is more
[Hard]
00:05:991 (2) - move up 1 grid for a better blanket fix
01:01:920 (1) - move to x200,y156 fix
01:11:455 - maybe start spinner here for vocals (you can also leave it as it is) not a best here
01:34:491 (1) - move to x68,y224 fix
02:28:705 (3) - move to x348,y168 for spacing no fix
02:28:920 (4) - move to x368,y280 for blanket fix
02:29:134 (5) - move to x460,y212 if you did the 2 above not need
03:01:920 (1,2,3,4) - maybe try this? http://puu.sh/8mWUD.jpg i make other else
03:25:277 (3,4,5,1) - ^ similar to above? i move down some grid
[Insane]
00:02:562 (3) - better blanket? move slider to x328,y328 ( http://puu.sh/8mUBv.jpg ) NO FIX..i would like to keep my DS(1.2x)
00:04:277 (2,3) - move to x320,y100 and x360,y200 for a better spacing and blanket i just change other place of (3),because (2) should be blanket with (00:05:348 (1) - )
01:06:420 (5,6,7) - try this http://puu.sh/8mV0V.jpg not like it sorry ><
01:11:455 - same as hard not a best here
01:21:848 (4) - move to x120,y320 no fix,keep my DS(1.2x)
01:33:848 - add a note? gap feels a bit awkward it is my special rhythm,no fix
01:35:348 (5) - ctrl+g? NO
03:15:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i thought you'd make a star pattern here, maybe let the slider face the other way, and make a star http://puu.sh/8mW06.png that it ok ...but i make other thing from your idea,,thank
03:20:348 (3) - move to x412,y244 for a blanket fix
Nice map! - sorry for my terrible mod, hope it helped!
15634,-100,4,2,0,55,0,1
15741,-100,4,2,0,55,0,0
56777,-100,4,2,0,65,0,1
56884,-100,4,2,0,65,0,0
thank your modProject Railgun wrote:
hello from #modreqs
[General]
- Optional: Add Burst Kiai at 00:15:634 - since it is first Chorus (at start). i think 75% of vol. is OK,and this is a main part
15634,-100,4,2,0,55,0,1
15741,-100,4,2,0,55,0,0- 00:56:777 - This is not part of the chorus. Either A) Remove this Kiai or B) Make this a Burst Kiai. For Hinsvar's diff?
56777,-100,4,2,0,65,0,1
56884,-100,4,2,0,65,0,0- 02:08:777 - I strongly suggest that you remove this kiai (Burst Kiai does not seem to fit). Fix...
- 02:36:205 - Remove this Kiai, there is no emphasis of chorus that would invoke it. ^ fix too
- Keep the Kiais at 01:13:920 - and 02:55:062 - as these are part of the Main Chorus. i keep on 3 kiai time
Good luck~
AndreasHD wrote:
[General] First of all, I just wanna say that I like the song
I'd rather set the preview point here 01:13:920 because it's chorus. it that OK...no fix
I hope Im not too nazi in my mod.. The major mod has been done, this is a minor one.
By the way, Im not going to mod the StoryBoard in this post.
[Hard]
00:09:205 here you could form the approach circle better. fix
00:10:920 (2) - To place this note under a slider is a little harsh for a fix
'Hard' in my opinion.
00:11:562 (4,1) - Spacing between these two are too much compared to the rest. fix
00:22:062 (4) - Don't new combo here. OK
00:22:491 (6) - New combo. OK
00:29:134 (5) - This is very hard to read for "hardplayers", try to spread out OK
(4) (5) and (6).
00:42:205 (3) - Spacing too small compared to (1) and (2). fix
01:09:205 (2) - New combo. good idea
01:09:634 (1) - New combo here aswell. good idea
01:17:348 (1) - This spcacing is way too much for 'hard'. i agree with you
01:41:134 (5) - Spread out this note. (As mentioned before). fix
02:16:920 (4) - Too much spacing. OK
03:35:777 (4) - Too much spacing. i think player can easy that play on this flow,no fix
[Insane]
I would set the OD (overall difficulty) to 8 instead of 7, because it's Insane, and it's gonna feel better too. fix
00:16:491 (4) - This slider can be better, if you look at the picture, you can see what I mean, try to form it after the approachcircle. fix
00:19:705 (2) - Just drag it one tick to the right, only if you want a more perfect map, all though, personally I didn't like the flow of those two sliders,but you can keep them. change other flow
00:59:348 (5) - Snap this note to the end of the slider properly. fix
01:17:348 (1) - This slider can feel so much better if you make it more like this: fix
01:32:348 (5) - Try to not overlap this with (3) fix
01:32:562 (6) - This is not in the center of the starpattern, but if you do what I told you above, "not overlap", then it should work out. Or atleast be better. fix
01:40:062 (3,4,5) - Drag all of these one tick up, because of the spacing between these three: 01:39:634 (1,2,3) - fix other else
02:21:420 (4,5,6) - The spacing of these three notes are extreme compared to
the rest of the map, consider changing the spacing smaller. fix
thanks a lotPereira006 wrote:
hello hello
[Insane]
Hitsound:
00:04:277 (2) - Remove whistle in end slider, is don't fit you style hitsound and this music FIX
00:19:920 (4) - missing add whistle add
00:52:705 (3,4,5) - this could add all whistle, there higher melody, sense a lot IMO good idea
03:05:777 (2) - missing add clap in start slider add
03:32:134 (4) - missing add clap in end slider add
Gameplay:
01:01:920 (5,1) - change new combo, http://puu.sh/b9osF/07552aca0e.jpg better lot FIX
01:40:491 (5) - isn't perfect align with 01:41:134 (6,7,8) and 01:40:277 (4) FIX@@
03:41:134 (6) - inconsistency spacing with 03:40:491 (3,4,5) FIX
stuff cool
[Hard]
Hitsound:
02:56:777 (1) - missing add whistle in start slider add
03:23:134 (2) - missing add whistle in end slider add
Gameplay:
00:42:420 (4) - I see my eye, this place isn't same place with 00:42:848 (6) no fix,because i feel it is same@@
nothing wrong here, look good
this kiai is so weird, I know is guest, but very very weird and is not sense here....
and that hitsound whistle the custom 1 is ruin this diff a lot, example the second kiai part, that lot whistle in tick red I not like and 01:55:920 at 02:08:084 that whisle is not sense...
You gameplay is good, but hitsound need better
Any question ask me
Best good luck
thanks No_GuNo_Gu wrote:
from my M4M queue.no bub round
[Normal]
fine
[Hard]
00:13:920 (1) - 好像没折返上的音? remove了
00:25:491 (3) - 间距不等 而且这边整个pattern也不是特别好 FIX
00:27:634 (1,2,3,4) - 仔细听听连打不少是加clap的。记得改小点音量 而且我觉得可以3也复制前面直接顺下来 音量改為50%
01:08:777 (1,1,2,1,2,3,1) - 有点乱乱的。。hard不建议这样 FIX
01:21:420 (4,1) - 跟前面overlap。而且感觉1的形状好像没什么意义。。 FIX
02:07:062 (1,1) - Hard最好还是别太近吧 虽然没原则性规定但是这样很容易跪 delete了了(1)
02:09:420 (3,4,5,1) - 等距? OK
02:13:920 (1,2,3,4,5) - 用compose里面的工具重新弄一个吧 FIX
02:18:634 (3,4,1) - 有点微妙啊。。说34一起吧,间距还有点大,说341在一起吧,间距还不等。我觉得要不34放近点然后4到1算一个跳或者341等距 不錯...我選用前者的方法
02:20:777 (1,2,3,4) - 不如第一个slider转3次90° 最后一个用scale缩一下 FIX
02:39:634 - break停这里 這個我看不懂,估計應該是Break在這裹開始吧..FIX
有些地方跳大了点不过BPM比较低应该还可以 我修改了大部分的跳位
[Insane]
00:41:991 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 不放五角星吗 決定改用別的梗
00:51:420 (4,5,1,5,6,1) - 可以叠。。不然误导性太强 FIX
01:58:062 (5,1) - 这个overlap 這個是故意的...可以不改嗎?
03:02:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - 还是用compose里面的工具重新弄一下 FIX
03:09:848 (5,6,7) - 不正啊 這個我嘗試修改一下
整张图都是没什么大问题但是小毛病不少。。跳设计的有种满天乱飞的感觉,很多图形摆的也很随便。跳这东西一个一个mod是mod不过来的。需要自己多看图打图感受才明白。不过第三张图的话这样也很不错了
thanks CelsiusLKCelsiusLK wrote:
Hello there from my modding queue
[Insane][Hard]
- 00:07:491 (1,2) - I think spacing is too high here same with 00:08:134 (1,2) - 2.7X>2.5X
- 00:21:634 (5,6) - Prefer to stack so it not too confuse to play i not think this is too confuse._.
- 00:27:634 (1,2) - How about this? http://puu.sh/bf4bP/5e8851c9f2.png better cosmetic OK
- 00:41:348 (2,3) - Prefer to stack so it not too confuse to play. Hmm.. I think this you style so I will stop modding about this beat spacing after this change
- 00:47:134 (2,3,4) - Should line up for better flow OK
- 00:58:062 (4) - For better cosmetic move this to x=256 y=215 i move this to x=272 y=212,because i would like to keep on the DS
- 01:59:777 (3) - y=320 to line up 01:59:777 (3,5,6,8) - so it will consistent with 02:00:205 (4,7) - fix
- 02:09:420 (2,4) - x=208 y=211 for better cosmetic OK
- 02:21:848 (7) - Prefer to line up with 02:22:062 (8,9,10,11,1) - so you will get better flow http://puu.sh/bf4C7/967c80cd03.png FIX
- 03:25:277 (3,1) - Improve curve a bit make it curve same like this http://puu.sh/bf4Ne/4b3586916a.png fix
- 03:30:205 - Feel empty add a note here fix
I think you can improve in cosmetic for this diff[Hinsvar's Normal]
- 00:21:634 (3,4,5) - Move to x=322 y=136 for better cosmetic move to other place
- 02:32:134 (4,5) - Spacing here is not consistent with 02:31:705 (2,3) - you should copy-paste 02:31:705 (2,3) - OK
- 02:24:205 (1) - Move to x=359 y=212 for better diamond shape here 02:23:562 (3,4,5,1) - OK
Not many suggestions for this diff
Very nice Normal
Overall
Good map but you can improve in cosmetic that's all
Good luck
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thanks a lot of SatelliteSatellite wrote:
Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]
- Tag : Remve "senya" because, It is not announced in a formula. ( I know Mayumi Morinaga = senya but... ) done my diff
- You should be PreviewTime set "15420" Please check all diff.done my diff
[Hard][Insane]
- HP Drain -1 for mapset balance. OK
- 00:04:920 (1) - Remove whistle on slider head. There is no sound that whistle sounds in this point. OK
- 00:13:920 (1) - It is rhythm not to match music. Try this? this rhythm very cool...fix!!!
- 00:25:705 (4) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. Try to move X:292 Y:56 nice
- 00:42:205 (3,4,5,6,1) - I think that it is considerably difficult in the Hard diff. It is desirable to change one to slider. change
- 00:43:062 - ~ 00:56:562 - Slider velocity multiplier : *0.5. It is hard to play one becoming slow suddenly. Please Remapping *0.75 fix
- 01:03:420 (4,1) - The flow feels a bit blah. Try an arrange like this. cool
- 01:05:991 (2) - Not fit this rhythm. Change this. not good...i feel empty of this rhythm,i try to other rhythm
- 01:09:634 (5) - Missed finish on purpose? I think a finish fits better anyhow. (slider head) add
- 01:10:491 - Changed *0.75 The reason is the same as other points. OK
- 01:17:134 (4,1) - Why do you use Jump? it is same of 01:24:848 (2) - rhythm,so i would like to jump@@
- 01:26:777 (3,4) - Not too fond of the straight flow here. Try an arrange like this. nice!!!!!! www
- 01:28:920 (3,4,1) - It is mere suggestion. why you can think this nice idea!!! fix now!!
- 01:33:205 (2,3) - Try " CTRL+G " is more better. OK
- 01:36:205 (1,2,3,4) - I feel tight. Please use this cord. OK
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396,160,97277,2,0,P|428:188|464:200,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:- 01:56:348 (3,4) - Jump does not fit it here. i change it to jump (3) only
- 02:19:062 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Suggestion to clean it more. Please use code. it if you understand yes...really clean a lot
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144,204,142062,2,0,L|160:168,3,40,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:- 02:33:420 (2,3,1) - Do you use the triangle? OK
- 02:37:062 (2,3) - It is a very quiet part. You should employ a slider. (add green line and use slider velocity multiplier *0.75 ) OK,but i try my rhythm
- 03:02:134 (2) - Move X:156 Y:248 and 03:02:348 (3) - Move X:236 Y:188 mean a quadrangle. fix
- 03:36:205 - ~ 03:36:205 (1,2) - Slider velocity multiplier : *0.5. It is hard to play one becoming slow suddenly. Please Remapping *0.75 OK
- 00:02:562 (2) - Add whistle on slider end. add
- 00:04:920 (3) - Remove whistle on slider end. whistle does not match the breathing point imo. OK
- 00:10:920 (2) - Remove whistle on slider head. and Add whistle on slider end. OK
- 00:16:170 (3) - Remove note. You must not put note in the point where there is not a sound. fix
- 00:41:455 - and 00:41:562 - add note. add
- 00:43:062 (1) - Move X:252 Y:36 OK
- 00:54:205 (3,4,5,6) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. OK
- 00:55:062 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It is hard to read this stream. Try an arrange like this. OK
- 00:55:920 (1,2) - Add whistle on slider end. add
- 01:01:491 (3,4) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. Try " CTRL+G " more better flow imo. good flow
- 01:07:062 (1) - Not too fond of the straight flow here. Try this. nice:D
- 01:09:312 (6) - Overmapped remove note better. i make other thing here
- 01:25:062 (3) - Nazi. Please do Mapping more neatly. (Blanket) OK
- 01:34:062 (1) - Remove New Combo and Add New Combo here 01:34:491 (3) - fix
- 01:40:491 (5) - I kinda want a regular soft whistle here. (slider end) OK-0-
- 01:58:062 (5,1) - This slider should be further from the previous slider even if you have placed it there to make a blanket together with "place" sliders. OK
- 02:24:098 (2) - Distance Snap is broken. It's hard to read. fix
- 02:25:812 (8) - Only in here, why is Distance 1.1? I think should be use "Distance 0.8" fix
- 02:56:455 (6) - Move 02:56:670 - here. Please listen to melody. good!!!
- 03:00:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Do not fit a melody. Please listen to music well. good rhythm ...fix
- 03:03:205 (5) - I kinda want a regular clap here. add
- 03:13:920 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same as 03:00:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - OK
- 03:21:098 (4) - Remove note. only this. OK
- 03:24:098 - Add note. add
- 03:27:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as 03:00:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - OK
Nice mapset ! "Hard" and "Insane" diff need more work. Get 2-3 more mods and then call me back again
I'll recheck you are map :3 Good Luck. OK
AndreasHD wrote:
First, you need to change the timing of you'r kiai so it's the same as the other difficulties. I'll leave this to wmtokok.
00:08:777 (1) - New Combo. Done.
01:00:205 (1) - Drag this one tick to the right, just so the spacing get's right. ...I think it's fine here.
01:39:205 (4) - Drag this two tick down, so it get's the right spacing. Fixed.
Pereira006 wrote:
[Hinsvar's Normal]
Hitsound:
01:01:920 (2) - missing add whistle in end slider There isn't anything to emphasize.
01:14:562 (2) - ruin me... remove whistle What?
01:17:348 (1) - in end slider, that whisle ruin me a lot, i don't like Fits the song though.
Gameplay:
00:08:777 (4) - this could put new combo color right? The lyrics and song is change Yep.
01:10:491 (1) - (nazi) the end point need grid 1 down to perfect shape in first point Already perfect as is.
02:24:205 (3) - (nazi) the end point need grid 1 up Okay.
Thanks!Satellite wrote:
[Hinsvar's Normal]
- 00:04:062 (4) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Why do you respond suddenly in Back Melody? I think more better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. Did something similar.
- 00:09:420 (5,6,7) - Same as above. ^
- 00:15:205 (3) - Remove whistle. whistle does not match the breathing point imo. Done.
- 00:18:848 - add note? I think same as point 00:17:134 - ^
- 00:19:062 (1) - The fact that you don't use any hitsound for that drum that goes every white tick in this section makes me sad, but oh well. Wait, there is one? I'm sure I'm not hearing any drums.
- 00:52:920 (4) - Distance snap is not indicated. Please check this. Fixed.
- 01:08:777 (1) - Is New Combo of this point really necessary? I think not need. Remove New Combo better. ^
- 01:13:920 (1) - Too soon after a spinner. It definitely doesn't give players enough recovery. ^
- 01:20:562 - Add note. It is necessary for securing of constant rhythm. ^
- 01:23:991 - Same as above. ^
- 01:26:777 (6) - Do you not make form more neatly? Please think to see Grid. ^
- 01:37:705 - Add note. The reason is the same as other points. ^
- 01:38:562 (2,3,4) - Try an arrange like this. I think that more better. ^
- 02:01:705 - Add note. The reason is the same as other points. ^
- 02:09:420 (1) - Too soon after a spinner. It definitely doesn't give players enough recovery. | I'm very sure a 3/2 beats of gap should be fine and not too soon.
- 02:14:777 (4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. Where's the link or picture? lol. I think I know what do you want though, so changed.
- 02:54:634 (3) - Add "Sampleset : D + Clap. Only Drum sampleset without a clap should be fine, I think.
- Difficulty is anxious about a thing more than 1.99 I still think that this is easy enough though, so no worries.
osu file format v13
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