1. Easy (1.23 stars, 67 notes)
2. Hard Plus (2.94 stars, 203 notes)
3. Hard (2.62 stars, 179 notes)
4. Maruk's Insane in 2015 (3.53 stars, 277 notes)
5. Maruk's Insane in 2016 (3.93 stars, 276 notes)
6. Normal (1.64 stars, 97 notes)

1. 00:11:429 (3,4) - To do this, change it http://puu.sh/8eLXB.jpg
2. 00:20:520 (5,1) - So long nothing in time add another circle , slide or break time
3. 00:29:383 (7,8,1) - add circle between there
4. 01:17:338 (2,3) - unnatural this part
5. so many spinner i think ~ xD

1. 00:18:020 (3) - unnatural this
2. 00:47:792 (1,1) - change on spinner
3. 00:54:838 (1,2) - so fast , chage it . http://puu.sh/8eMkP.jpg
4. 00:58:474 (1) - so fast , change your slow one beat
5. 01:02:110 (1) - unnatural this, change it http://puu.sh/8eMtK.jpg
6. 01:05:747 (1) - so fast , change your slow one beat
7. 01:09:383 (1,2,3) - unnatural this, change it http://puu.sh/8eMz2.jpg

• 
  00:02:338 (5,6) - unnatural tihs http://puu.sh/8eMR4.jpg
  00:05:179 (2,3,4) - beat is so fast http://puu.sh/8eMUO.jpg
  00:06:997 (1,2,3) - unnatural this part
  00:17:565 (3,4) - unnatural this part
  00:30:747 (3,4) - unnatural this part
  00:33:815 (3,4) - unnatural this part
  00:36:883 (3) - unnatural this part
  00:39:383 (8) - beat is fast , Chage your slow one beat
  00:40:520 (2,3,4,5,6) - unnatural this part
  00:58:360 (1) - unnatural chage circle please
  01:01:201 (3) - unnatural beat
  01:02:110 (1,2,3,4) - unnatural this part
  01:05:974 (3,4,5,6,7) - this part is unnatural , chage it
  01:09:610 (6,7) - unnatural this part
  01:13:247 (3,4) - unnatural this part

• 
  00:05:179 (2,3,4,5) - unnatural this part
  00:25:747 (3,4,5) - unnatural this part
  00:29:383 (6) - unnatural this part
  00:30:747 (2,3) - unnatural this part
  00:33:020 (4,5) - delet the circle and Increase the slider
  00:39:270 (3) - unnatural beat
  00:40:520 (1,2) - unnatural this part
  00:51:429 (2,3) - unnatural this part
  00:58:360 (1) - delet it
  01:01:997 (4) - delet it
  01:16:315 (1) - unnatural this part

Einess wrote:

Hi ~

[Easy]

1. 00:11:429 (3,4) - To do this, change it http://puu.sh/8eLXB.jpg
2. 00:20:520 (5,1) - So long nothing in time add another circle , slide or break time
3. 00:29:383 (7,8,1) - add circle between there
4. 01:17:338 (2,3) - unnatural this part
5. so many spinner i think ~ xD

[Noraml]

1. 00:18:020 (3) - unnatural this
2. 00:47:792 (1,1) - change on spinner
3. 00:54:838 (1,2) - so fast , chage it . http://puu.sh/8eMkP.jpg
4. 00:58:474 (1) - so fast , change your slow one beat
5. 01:02:110 (1) - unnatural this, change it http://puu.sh/8eMtK.jpg
6. 01:05:747 (1) - so fast , change your slow one beat
7. 01:09:383 (1,2,3) - unnatural this, change it http://puu.sh/8eMz2.jpg

[Hard]

• 
  00:02:338 (5,6) - unnatural tihs http://puu.sh/8eMR4.jpg
  00:05:179 (2,3,4) - beat is so fast http://puu.sh/8eMUO.jpg
  00:06:997 (1,2,3) - unnatural this part
  00:17:565 (3,4) - unnatural this part
  00:30:747 (3,4) - unnatural this part
  00:33:815 (3,4) - unnatural this part
  00:36:883 (3) - unnatural this part
  00:39:383 (8) - beat is fast , Chage your slow one beat
  00:40:520 (2,3,4,5,6) - unnatural this part
  00:58:360 (1) - unnatural chage circle please
  01:01:201 (3) - unnatural beat
  01:02:110 (1,2,3,4) - unnatural this part
  01:05:974 (3,4,5,6,7) - this part is unnatural , chage it
  01:09:610 (6,7) - unnatural this part
  01:13:247 (3,4) - unnatural this part

[insane]

• 
  00:05:179 (2,3,4,5) - unnatural this part
  00:25:747 (3,4,5) - unnatural this part
  00:29:383 (6) - unnatural this part
  00:30:747 (2,3) - unnatural this part
  00:33:020 (4,5) - delet the circle and Increase the slider
  00:39:270 (3) - unnatural beat
  00:40:520 (1,2) - unnatural this part
  00:51:429 (2,3) - unnatural this part
  00:58:360 (1) - delet it
  01:01:997 (4) - delet it
  01:16:315 (1) - unnatural this part

[Want to say]

That does not look a whole beat~

I look forward to a good fix.


Good luck with your map~ xD


Kudos lf help would be appreciated ~ ! xD

skaiys wrote:

Easy:

00:30:292 (8,1) - I think it's better to replace these two with a slider


Normal:

00:56:201 (3) - i dont really know how to say it but the slider here kind of breaks the flow and seems abrupt

Hard:

00:30:747 (3) - shorten this slider by 1 beat then
00:31:315 (4) - move this slider down 1 beat
00:50:292 (4) - move this down a bit so it has equal distance between all 3
01:00:974 (3) - move this into the middle of both sliders
01:10:974 (2) - move slightly down right
01:14:838 (7) - move slightly left

Hard plus

00:53:020 (8) - move slightly down
01:04:838 (7) - align properly with end of slider

hope this helps :p