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ClariS - Colorful -movie MIX- [Osu|Taiko]

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Topic Starter
Moway
We'll see about the storyboard for the taikos, leaving for now.
UnitedWeSin
Standard diffs seem good to go.
captin1
wewt
Niko-nyan
gratz for your standard diffs Moway now you can ask Taiko BAT :) (let me help you for this too :D)
Topic Starter
Moway
bumping this, hopefully for Taiko BAT attention.
TKS
i will check this after the TWC.
captin1
huzzah!

tksalt the savior!
Sayuri-Hime
wow...all map´s are perfect :D

the jumps of the insane map would my view after a wee bit closer to be brought ;)

and sorry for my bad english ^^`
Topic Starter
Moway

TKSalt wrote:

i will check this after the TWC.
Thank you

Good luck with TWC~
TKS
very nice taiko diffs.
well, let me suggest some things for enhance the quality.


[ JuDa's Oni]
  1. HP+1?

  2. 00:22:240 (12) - => 00:22:577 - move here. このパターン自体に深い意味は無いと思うので、どうせならパートの後半に移動させた方が勢いが増すと思います。
  3. 00:32:437 (5) - change to d? should emphasize the next snaredrum.
  4. 00:43:055 (49) - => 00:42:886 - move here. sounds weird for me. 00:43:055 - this spot doesnt have a sound.
  5. 01:05:639 (5,6,7) - i prefer ddd in the same way as 01:02:942 (2,3,4) . kkd is a bit noisy.
  6. 01:17:100 (48,49,50,51,52) - if you want to fit the vocal or background music, i recommend ddkkd in either case.
  7. 01:23:757 (87,88,89) - del. no need 5-plet sound. after that, 01:23:673 (86) - finisher? sounds better /o/
  8. 01:29:403 - how about spinner here? ボーカルの音が凄く長いので物足りない感じがしました;;

[ JuDa's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:23:167 (15) - del? i feel that its excessive sound.
  2. 00:32:437 (3,4) - swap. i mean dkd here. you should fit the snaredrum. the current pattern is not reasonable for Muzu imo.
  3. 00:46:425 (1,2,3,4,1) - change all to d. it will be a good accent with 00:49:122 (1,2,3,4,1) -
  4. 01:23:673 (59) - finisher?
  5. 01:29:403 - spinner? same reaosn as Oni.
thats all.
after checking the my mod, please call me :)
JUDYDANNY
Red :arrow: Fix and Change as your suggestion.
Blue :arrow: No change. because there are other reasons put my patterns.
Green :arrow: Keep , or Changed by me giving your suggestions.

TKSalt wrote:

very nice taiko diffs.
well, let me suggest some things for enhance the quality.


[ JuDa's Oni]
  1. HP+1? :arrow: no changeで><

  2. 00:22:240 (12) - => 00:22:577 - move here. このパターン自体に深い意味は無いと思うので、どうせならパートの後半に移動させた方が勢いが増すと思います。 :arrow: OK!
  3. 00:32:437 (5) - change to d? should emphasize the next snaredrum. :arrow: no change.follow the back base pitch. 何度かテストやオートで検討しましたが、ここの00:32:268 (4,5) -  dk はフォローしたかったです>< ここまでの流れでも長い目で見た裏音のピッチの変化をとっているので;
  4. 00:43:055 (49) - => 00:42:886 - move here. sounds weird for me. 00:43:055 - this spot doesnt have a sound. :arrow: OK, なんかパートの流れの勢いでつい2連で作ってましたね;;
  5. 01:05:639 (5,6,7) - i prefer ddd in the same way as 01:02:942 (2,3,4) . kkd is a bit noisy. :arrow: 確かに、、 OK! Thanks :)
  6. 01:17:100 (48,49,50,51,52) - if you want to fit the vocal or background music, i recommend ddkkd in either case. :arrow: fixed~~
  7. 01:23:757 (87,88,89) - del. no need 5-plet sound. after that, 01:23:673 (86) - finisher? sounds better /o/ :arrow: fixed as your suggestoin :3/
  8. 01:29:403 - how about spinner here? ボーカルの音が凄く長いので物足りない感じがしました;; :arrow: ummm..OK 以前にも何度か言われたので変えてみます。 added spinner , delete some notes , add some timings(volume).

[ JuDa's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:23:167 (15) - del? i feel that its excessive sound. :arrow: yeap. deleted!
  2. 00:32:437 (3,4) - swap. i mean dkd here. you should fit the snaredrum. the current pattern is not reasonable for Muzu imo. :arrow: changed kdd=>kkd. prefer pitch down follow ><
  3. 00:46:425 (1,2,3,4,1) - change all to d. it will be a good accent with 00:49:122 (1,2,3,4,1) - :arrow: Goooooooood!
  4. 01:23:673 (59) - finisher? :arrow: finisher!
  5. 01:29:403 - spinner? same reaosn as Oni. :arrow: spinner & changed some pattern & notes.

    :idea: 01:01:762 -  バックベースの音のフォローでadd finisher , finisher追加しました
thats all.
after checking the my mod, please call me :)
Thanks for mod, TKSalt :) :) :)
http://puu.sh/7u8GI.zip
Topic Starter
Moway
updated
TKS
nice! :)

Circle'd by UnitedWeSin : p/2890877
Topic Starter
Moway
Thanks!
Minao
Hi!
(Owww Madoka <3)

Really great beatmaps :D
But still few little things to say-

> There is a problem (I suppose it is one) with the storyboard near to 01:13:322 . The background disappears :o
> I think combo colors can be improved because saturations / luminosity are too differents between colors. Exemples:
[Puella Magica Set] <- my fav
Combo1 : 97,24,95
Combo2 : 247,111,206
Combo3 : 51,111,208
Combo4 : 128,0,45
Combo5 : 235,192,46

[Pale Set]
Combo1 : 188,188,188
Combo2 : 255,159,255
Combo3 : 94,174,255
Combo4 : 245,112,158
Combo5 : 255,255,128
It's your colors but all pale at the same point.

[Saturated Set]
Combo1 : 150,150,150
Combo2 : 255,98,255
Combo3 : 0,116,232
Combo4 : 244,0,104
Combo5 : 253,220,36
Your colors but saturated at the same point.

> The background seems to be in a not that good quality. Then I think the green of the grass is weird with the combo colors (actual and suggested). Maybe you can search for another one? As you want :)

Good luck for ranking! :)
Topic Starter
Moway
I will change the combo colors to the saturated set when the next BAT checks. BG will stay the same though.
BeatofIke
This version recently got ranked, so you need to wait a week.
Topic Starter
Moway
It's been a week since the other one was ranked, so I guess this is okay to go now?
BeatofIke
The file "sb\creator.png" is unused. Please remove it.
You replaced the wording from "Beatmap by Moway" (sb\creator.png) to "difficulty by Moway" (sb\moway.png)
Once you fix that, call be back!
Topic Starter
Moway
okay should be good to go!
BeatofIke
Ranked!
Ozato Fumika
Gratz!! awesome map as always :D
-Neipezi
omedeto'w'
Guy
yay :)
captin1

Guy wrote:

yay :)
Andrea
Congrats!

Sorry that I couldn't get to this ><
Lust
congratulations!
Oyatsu
Wow! So nice! My first SB work :D
Congratz! Moway :)
toara_fict
Gratz :3~
mintong89
gratz!
AllStar12
Congrats!! \:D/
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