Hi Kodora o/
[Hard]
00:02:139 (6,7) - Even though I can hear what they land on, I find them sound pretty noisy, and since the begin is really calm, I don't think such a rhythm is really recommendable.. How about just deleting the circle? After all, the piano on the blue tick is so quiet and hidden, so yeah.
Same goes to the other spots like this! 00:04:969 (6) - 00:07:232 (6) -
00:05:393 (1,2,3,4) - Any specific reason why this is not a perfect square, or .. anything else that is consistent? If you prefer it like this, then you can obviously leave it ! This just came to my mind while looking at it.
00:16:429 (5) - Hm, how about some Variation with the slider shapes?
http://puu.sh/7tX9D/88a1bd2cd5.jpg It would also flow pretty cool!
00:20:957 (8) - Well, I'm not so sure whether this spacing increasing is needed here, the jump indications aren't that good here, don't you think so? It would be better if you leave that Kind of stuff to places like here 00:23:221 (1) - .
00:23:221 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Might be me now, but why did you combo this with 3 circles? I think 00:24:352 - the sound here is a better indicator.
http://puu.sh/7tXhg/7c88911d37.jpg However; 00:25:484 (1) - this should be nc'd for sure.
00:29:446 (3,4,5,6,7) - This part seems rather unclean for me, first of all i'm not sure if 00:28:880 (2,3,4) - is blanketting or just a not proper made triangle, 00:30:295 (5) - then this etc. I hope you can clean it up a Little!
00:32:842 (1) - I'd increase the spacing a bit. But while we're at it; the rhythm gets quite boring (that's in the song given though) why not adding a triplet here?
00:34:540 (1,2,3,4) - I'm sure you're able to make better triangles!
00:41:897 (1) - What about a slowdown here? The song seems.. calmer
00:52:650 (1,2) - Yeah.. I'm not a fan of this at all, in most slow bpm Songs it sounds quite horrible.. I prefer 1/2 rhythm here definetly. I would say you should really Change this, but after all I can't force you.
00:54:631 (5,1) - ^
01:03:120 (1) - How it is now it seems like a bad stack, I would move it a bit more down to get a better effect!
01:10:053 - This one is overmapped!
01:12:741 (5) - This one doesn't even follow the consistency, so if you really insist keeping it i suggested :
http://puu.sh/7tXG1/a47287e2de.jpg 5 = 01:12:741 -
01:19:816 (1) - :/
01:23:353 (6) - This one is random, and I'd just like to say one Thing: if you like to add a triplet if it's not completely in the song, they most of the time work better if you start from red > White! But it's fine if it's actually in the song like : 01:25:475 -
Not much to say, sometimes I don't really like the flow, for example: 00:17:278 (7,1) - , but that's personal, I'm not a big fan of this rather straight flow!
(is it even finished, I really had the Feeling that I should mod this song now lol)
