1. Easy (2.62 stars, 92 notes)
2. Hard (4.84 stars, 177 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 256 notes)
4. Normal (4.05 stars, 118 notes)

1. Mako's Easy by Mako Sakata
2. Old Insane by me

Mako Sakata wrote:

Haloooo from my queue~

[General]
All volume -10~20% for some reasons It sounds too loud especialy on finish sound k
Maybe you need this costum hitclap-soft http://puu.sh/7cYve.zip especialy for this calm part 00:14:591 until 00:26:158 thanks
It'll be better if you use Normal sampleset plus drum costum sound or something, since the song is not really "calm" except the part I mention above and last part
You need a better BG resolution (1366x768) since you tick widescreen support, the curent BG a bit cracked if you force tou use widescreen support didn't found any, using 1280x720 now, since it's 16:9 tho
Why -TV size- ? why not like the others (TV Size) but in the album it shows as -Tv size- nvm, fix'd

[Easy]
00:23:989 (2,5,1) - Bad overlap
00:41:338 (1) - Almost out of screen, maybe you can move up a bit k
01:12:423 (1) - Delete clap? k
Maybe you can spread the DS more, the curent one is prety crowded

[Normal]
A bit hard, especially on this part 00:37:724 - until 00:46:399 - because a lot of stacking
I sugest not to have diffrent SV on Normal and why not use 1.00 SV? I think 1.20 on 160 BPM prety fast for Normal
Do you use 0.8 or 1.0 for DS? I find a bit unconcistent on some parts 1x SV * 0.8 DS = 0.8x SV * 1x DS
00:27:242 (2,4) - Bad overlap, move up (2) a bit k
00:25:435 - 00:25:073 - 00:46:037 - 00:46:399 - Useless green lines, delete?
00:33:387 (3,1) - You can blanket that better k
00:50:555 (3,5) - Maybe stack perfectly? sorry, my style :/
01:04:471 (2,3,4) - How about this rhythm? k
Too many stacking make me confuse

[Hard]
00:24:531 (1) - Delete clap? done
00:34:832 (1,2) - Blanket better? i love it the way
00:45:856 (3,2,3,1) - Not look so good ?

[Insane]
01:05:374 (2) - Delete clap fro head and place clap on tail k
01:06:097 (4) - Same as above ^

Good map
Aku buat Easy diff kalo mau dicoba http://puu.sh/7cZub.zip ekstrak aja semua

neonat wrote:

General

The colours of Combo 3 and Combo 4 are too similar. Furthermore, they are right after one another, it is really difficult to differentiate Whether or not there is a new combo other than the object number. You should at least have a separate combo colour in between them, if you want to keep those colours. changed

Easy

00:53:266 (2) - this slider is odd, I think instead have a circle at 00:53:266 and a slider from 00:53:627 to 00:53:989 - (I think it's because of the vocals, at least have a beat at a part of the vocals which I would suggest at 00:53:627 -) done in different way
01:05:917 (5) - remove the finish on the start of the slider done

Normal

00:53:447 (3) - change to a circle at 00:53:447 and a slider from 00:53:627 to 00:53:989 i like it
01:01:941 (2,3) - sounds off, maybe change to a different rhythm here? Like add a circle at 01:01:941 and a slider from 01:02:121 to 01:02:483 and shift 01:03:025 (4) - so that it starts at 01:02:844 and add a circle at 01:03:567 it's following the drum beat

Hard

00:11:338 (1) - this NC seems out of place done
00:38:447 (2) - NC here not 00:38:266 (1) - same with 00:39:893 (2) - and 00:40:615 (2) - etc. done

Insane

I am one who really concerns myself with rhythm, I think this Insane is pretty nice rhythm-wise, that's great. thanks

Good Luck

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from modding queue.

GENERAL
There might be a problem with some of your hitsounds and the music together, sometimes it sounds like theres 2 drums. Some parts of the song sound like there is drums on 1/4,3/4. I think its most apparent at 00:55:073 - 00:57:603 don't understand :/

EASY
Fine!

NORMAL
00:38:266 (1,2) - consider adding a circle at 00:38:085 to match the vocal with no hitsound addition moved, instead of adding note
00:41:158 (1,2) - same as above ^
00:44:049 (1,2) - same as above ^
I think the best effect here would be for one or two of them to have this but not all of them.

HARD
Fine!

INSANE
00:44:953 (5,1) - this part is right on top of itself, maybe change like this i think it's fine, since it's Insane diff

SPOILER

01:14:230 (2,4) - on top of itself again ^

That's all. Best of luck

popner wrote:

From new mapper queue.

[Insane]
00:03:025 (1,2) - put them like this won't affect the spacing consistency: okay

SPOILER

00:06:459 (2) - flows better if: done

SPOILER

00:10:073 (1,3) - try to avoid the overlap by using a new pattern. Example: done

SPOILER

00:16:399 - try to follow the sound here okay
00:28:326 (3,4) - flip them upside down to avoid the monotonous direction:

SPOILER

00:38:447 (3) - you used this kind of slider only for once. Maybe change the shape? okay
01:13:989 (1,2,3,4,5) - well done thanks
01:17:302 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - you can try making a similar pattern as 01:13:989 (1,2,3,4,5) - : nope, i love it xD

SPOILER

[Hard]
00:04:471 (1) - try to make it less curved, or use a new pattern: okay

SPOILER

You can call me back after finding more mods.

toybot wrote:

Found in #modreqs

[General]
01:24:170 (1) - this spinner for all diffs, either should be shortened to 01:29:049 - , or silenced right at the end, it's too loud found other way

[Easy]
I don't really see anything wrong
00:23:989 (2) - whistle at tail? no?
00:55:796 (2) - you should remove the clap on the last beat, sounds off ^

[Hard]
Make all kiai times the same. Since it's all mapped by just you. oh sorry, fix'd

00:20:013 (2,1) - try something like this? sorry, no

SPOILER

00:39:893 (1) - remove nc done
01:00:133 (1) - you could make this more interesting, like a short stream and then hold slider i guess no

SPOILER

I did screenshot here because puush stopped working ><

01:13:868 (1,2,3,4) - these are hard to hear. maybe raise their volume and turn them into drum? because them as soft with that one loud hitsound, like on (1)'s head is annoying. fix'd

[Insane]
00:20:194 (5) - move this to around x488 y116 no
00:28:688 (4) - move this somewhere else, looks bad when both 2 and 4 are on same; maybe move it to the right of 2? fix in other way
01:11:700 (1,2,3,4) - hmm, its a lot smoother movement if you ctrl+g 2 and 4.. okay
01:13:959 (1,2,3,4,5) - same thing about it being hard to hear fix'd

Anyway, nice work! Good luck on rank :p

1. 00:13:688 (5) - add whistle or clap?
2. 00:26:880 (3) - a little be too far from a previous note, how about move this to x=345,y=230?
3. 00:31:399 (1) - kinda same as above, move to x=360, y=192
4. 00:31:941 (1) - ^
5. 00:32:302 (2) - move to x=226, y=75, and rotate 5 deg anti-clockwise?
6. 00:39:170 (5) - move to x=436, y=114?
7. 00:48:387 (5) - add whistle or clap?
8. 00:48:567 (1) - add soft-finish on the head and end of the slider?
9. 00:49:109 (2) - add whistle?
10. 00:58:507 (2) - remove NC?
11. 01:00:133 (7) - ^?
12. 01:10:073 (4) - ^?
13. 01:14:832 (1) - add NC?

dosyeru wrote:

hi,
[Insane]

1. 00:13:688 (5) - add whistle or clap? whistle
2. 00:26:880 (3) - a little be too far from a previous note, how about move this to x=345,y=230? no
3. 00:31:399 (1) - kinda same as above, move to x=360, y=192 ^
4. 00:31:941 (1) - ^ ^
5. 00:32:302 (2) - move to x=226, y=75, and rotate 5 deg anti-clockwise? ^
6. 00:39:170 (5) - move to x=436, y=114? i did it on purpose
7. 00:48:387 (5) - add whistle or clap? whistle
8. 00:48:567 (1) - add soft-finish on the head and end of the slider? kay
9. 00:49:109 (2) - add whistle? a bit noisy, so no
10. 00:58:507 (2) - remove NC? i guess no
11. 01:00:133 (7) - ^? ^
12. 01:10:073 (4) - ^? ^
13. 01:14:832 (1) - add NC? sorry no

that's it, Good insane diff <3

Knotts wrote:

From my modding queue

[Insane]

1. 00:36:097 (6) - Remove clap? nope, bit syncing with song
2. 00:45:495 (1) - Hard to read for me. Maybe add a circle at 00:45:314 ? i guess no, sorry
3. 00:49:109 (2) - wouldn't it make more sense to start the NC here? The music changes here and you can see the circle better. moved 1 grid left instead
4. 01:02:302 (1) - Clap on tail? whistle sounds better here
5. 01:02:483 (2) - Remove clap on head? done
6. 01:05:374 (2) - Remove clap on head? ^
7. 01:08:085 (1) - add clap on tail? whistle sounds better here
8. 01:08:266 (2) - remove clap on head? done

[Hard]

1. 00:53:989 (2,3) - Pretty boring compared to the rest of your map. Maybe do something like this? (pretty lame example) done
   
   screenshot

   
2. 00:56:880 (2) - looks like your map's weirdly timed. The beat and the circle don't match each other at 25%.

1. Design: remove '' Widescreen support'' (This for have SB map)
2. Tag: add ''坂部剛 Sakabe Tsuyoshi '' and '' 渡部紫緒 Watanabe Murasaki cho ''

tellertheworld wrote:

From Teller's team modding queues ( ･´ω･｀)

[General]

• 
  

1. Design: remove '' Widescreen support'' (This for have SB map) done
   
2. Tag: add ''坂部剛 Sakabe Tsuyoshi '' and '' 渡部紫緒 Watanabe Murasaki cho '' any reason for this?

Insane

1. 
   Compose
2. 00:23:808 - the slider should shorten 2/4. I think u can follow the 'di' sound.↓ will thinking of it,since i have no idea with the spacing
   
3. 00:24:170 - add circle↑ ^
4. 00:25:615 (1) - I think that should not use rebound slider here.The rhythm is not change here so do not make SV slow. it's intentional, it's my style anyway ;D
5. 00:35:374 (4,5) - there is not change the rhythm here. I think u dont space here. it's a trap!! /hides
   
   
   Timing
6. 00:14:591 - vol 35% (but may be my hitsound different) x
7. 00:38:447 - vol 35% (but may be my hitsound different) ^
   
   hitsound
8. 00:13:417 (2) - add Clap already?
9. 00:14:953 - mute in the slider end. hmm?
10. 00:37:724 (1) - add Finish already?
11. 00:38:989 (4) - remove Clap no
12. 00:39:170 (5) - add Clap ^
13. 00:48:387 (5) - remove Whistle and add Clap done
14. 01:11:248 (2) - add Clap i guess no

Hard

• 
  General

1. Please remove the green line if u dont need. okay
   
   Compose
2. 01:02:302 - circle here. keep it smooth. it will be harder
   
   hitsound
3. 01:09:531 (1) - add Finish already?

Normal

• 
  General

1. Please remove the green line if u dont need. same as hard

Easy

• 
  General

1. Please remove the green line if u dont need. same as normal
   
   Compose
2. 00:11:158 (1) - start at 00:11:338 - and end in 00:11:700 - i guess it's fine

nice map~ (╯°□°)╯彡
go to rank it~

Tuxdude143 wrote:

Right, lets have a look then

Easy mode:
Move along, nothing to see here! Everything looks great! thanks

Normal mode:
Looking great! Can't see any problems. thanks

Hard mode:
Only one thing to mention here. The slider at 00:12:242 with an end point on top of another sliders body. That is a big design no no so that may want to be fixed. huh? i will come thinking of it later ;D

I wish you the best of luck in getting your map ranked!

Setsurei wrote:

IRC M4M

chatlog

2014-03-13 20:22 Setsurei: offset -14
2014-03-13 20:22 Setsurei: jadi offset 120
2014-03-13 20:22 wendao2000: BPM fine?
2014-03-13 20:23 Setsurei: fine
2014-03-13 20:23 Setsurei: dicoba dulu, cocok ga
2014-03-13 20:24 wendao2000: awal-awal kecepetan, belakangnya fine
2014-03-13 20:24 wendao2000: *-*
2014-03-13 20:25 Setsurei: berarti antara itu
2014-03-13 20:25 Setsurei: +7 coba
2014-03-13 20:25 Setsurei: 127
2014-03-13 20:25 Setsurei: soalnya tadi aku cuma check bagian reffnya
2014-03-13 20:26 wendao2000: 00:25:609 (1) - try it here with 25% playback
2014-03-13 20:26 Setsurei: seems fine
2014-03-13 20:26 Setsurei: itu kan drumnya emang lagi finishing
2014-03-13 20:27 wendao2000:
2014-03-13 20:27 Setsurei: aku lupa nama istilah, aku dulu belajar drum lol
2014-03-13 20:27 wendao2000: o.o
2014-03-13 20:27 wendao2000: D;
2014-03-13 20:27 Setsurei: 00:26:512 -
2014-03-13 20:27 Setsurei: pas kok
2014-03-13 20:28 Setsurei: ini sempet kamu encode ganti bitrate?
2014-03-13 20:29 wendao2000: pernah, setelah ungrave ini map o.o
2014-03-13 20:30 Setsurei: I see
2014-03-13 20:31 Setsurei: kalo ngerasa miss, I prefer 2 offset
2014-03-13 20:32 Setsurei: soalnya 134 di 20 detikan udah miss
2014-03-13 20:33 wendao2000: yap, makanya bingung
2014-03-13 20:33 wendao2000: ini pake beberapa BPM checker, hasilnya beda-beda
2014-03-13 20:33 wendao2000: orz
2014-03-13 20:33 Setsurei: sementara 127 aja offsetnya (ambil tengahnya antara depan dan reff)
2014-03-13 20:33 wendao2000: bingung, dan akhirnya menetap di BPM 166
2014-03-13 20:34 wendao2000: okay
2014-03-13 20:34 Setsurei: don't trust BPM
2014-03-13 20:34 Setsurei: checker
2014-03-13 20:34 wendao2000: quite accurate tho
2014-03-13 20:35 Setsurei: aku gak pernah pake BPM checker, selalu pake T di timing tab lol
2014-03-13 20:35 Setsurei: kecuali dulu2 pas jaman awal mapping
2014-03-13 20:36 Setsurei: 00:05:187 (1,1) - why DS inconsistency
2014-03-13 20:36 wendao2000: diff?
2014-03-13 20:36 Setsurei: easy
2014-03-13 20:37 Setsurei: 00:25:789 (5) - geser ke atas dikit (kalo bener2 mau blanket slider sebelumnya), overlap border 00:23:982 (2) -
2014-03-13 20:38 wendao2000: done
2014-03-13 20:38 Setsurei: 00:26:151 (1,2,3) - rapi sih, tapi kayaknya mepet posisinya (cramped flow)
2014-03-13 20:39 Setsurei: 00:27:235 (2) - geser ke kanan bawah dikit, 00:27:596 (3) - geser kebawah
2014-03-13 20:39 Setsurei: 00:28:681 (4) - follow
2014-03-13 20:40 wendao2000: done, and done
2014-03-13 20:40 Setsurei: http://puu.sh/7tBbo.jpg
2014-03-13 20:41 Setsurei: 00:38:440 (1,2) - ini sebenernya mau dibikin blanket?
2014-03-13 20:41 wendao2000: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1412768
2014-03-13 20:41 wendao2000: nope, it's intentional
2014-03-13 20:42 Setsurei: I see, ok
2014-03-13 20:42 wendao2000: biar 00:38:441 (1,2) - revert-able jadi 00:41:332 (1,2) -
2014-03-13 20:42 wendao2000: ACTION malas
2014-03-13 20:42 wendao2000: ;3
2014-03-13 20:42 Setsurei: lol
2014-03-13 20:42 Setsurei: I know those two are the same
2014-03-13 20:42 Setsurei: makanya aku tanya dulu
2014-03-13 20:43 Setsurei: 00:50:013 (2) - how about end it here 00:50:736 - ?
2014-03-13 20:45 wendao2000: i guess no
2014-03-13 20:46 Setsurei: ok then
2014-03-13 20:46 wendao2000: sounds storyboard incoming
2014-03-13 20:46 Setsurei: video + SB = lag
2014-03-13 20:48 Setsurei: Normal
2014-03-13 20:48 wendao2000: DL
2014-03-13 20:48 wendao2000: D;
2014-03-13 20:48 Setsurei: 00:05:187 (1,1) - DS
2014-03-13 20:49 Setsurei: itu part depan 0.8, abis itu belakang 1.0..
2014-03-13 20:50 wendao2000: noep, all `
2014-03-13 20:50 wendao2000: ~1.0x
2014-03-13 20:50 wendao2000: *~0.8x
2014-03-13 20:50 Setsurei: `-`
2014-03-13 20:50 Setsurei: ok then
2014-03-13 20:50 wendao2000: itu jadi 1.0x gara-gara 0.8x multiplier
2014-03-13 20:50 Setsurei: oh, aku sih ga perhatiin multiplier lol
2014-03-13 20:50 Setsurei: 00:17:476 (1) - btw not a perfect blanket
2014-03-13 20:50 Setsurei: move to 96 196
2014-03-13 20:52 wendao2000: have other placement?
2014-03-13 20:52 Setsurei: wait
2014-03-13 20:52 wendao2000: soalnya 00:16:031 (1,2,1) - itu triangle pattern, but it's okay if no other placement
2014-03-13 20:53 Setsurei: 00:16:030 (1,1) - soalnya this
2014-03-13 20:53 Setsurei: ekornya gak pas di blanket sama 00:17:476 (1) -
2014-03-13 20:53 Setsurei: gpp sih kalo ga mau pindah
2014-03-13 20:53 Setsurei: karena ga kasat mata
2014-03-13 20:54 Setsurei: 00:37:717 (1,1,2) - ini aku ga yakin apa diperbolehkan di normal diff
2014-03-13 20:54 wendao2000: hmm, lemme use 5 nodes
2014-03-13 20:54 wendao2000: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1412782
2014-03-13 20:55 Setsurei: 00:42:235 (1,2) - this is confusing, after reverse langsung hit on stacked
2014-03-13 20:55 wendao2000: 00:37:718 (1,1,2) - it's fine as long as BATs not complain
2014-03-13 20:55 wendao2000: ACTION runs
2014-03-13 20:55 Setsurei: lol
2014-03-13 20:55 Setsurei: 00:45:126 (1,2) - same case
2014-03-13 20:56 Setsurei: 00:57:958 (1,3) - pasti ini copy paste
2014-03-13 20:57 wendao2000: noep, kebiasaan bikin slider gituan
2014-03-13 20:57 wendao2000: D;
2014-03-13 20:57 Setsurei: 01:02:295 - add note and then 01:02:295 (3,4) - ctrl G then reposition
2014-03-13 20:58 wendao2000: slider note slider, ga kesusahan itu D;
2014-03-13 20:58 Setsurei: kalo di ctrl G jadi slider,slider, note
2014-03-13 20:59 Setsurei: http://puu.sh/7tBKa.jpg
2014-03-13 21:00 wendao2000: [http://puu.sh/7tBMd.jpg how about this]
2014-03-13 21:00 Setsurei: 2 nya di 01:01:934 - ?
2014-03-13 21:01 wendao2000: yep
2014-03-13 21:01 wendao2000: vocal-beat-vocal-beat
2014-03-13 21:01 Setsurei: thats fine too
2014-03-13 21:01 wendao2000: that's my style D;
2014-03-13 21:03 Setsurei: 01:09:524 (1,2,3) - I know you did a triangular here, but I don't like the overlap. 01:10:789 (3) - rotate dikit (selection centre -46)
2014-03-13 21:04 wendao2000: [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1412801 YEY THIS KIND OF SLIDER AGAIN!!!]
2014-03-13 21:05 Setsurei: [http://puu.sh/7tBUt.jpg D:]
2014-03-13 21:05 wendao2000: noep, i will change the shape later
2014-03-13 21:05 Setsurei: lol
2014-03-13 21:06 Setsurei: Hard
2014-03-13 21:06 Setsurei: 00:12:784 (1,1) - x 453 y 279 (biar pas tengah slider)
2014-03-13 21:08 Setsurei: 00:15:676 (3,1) - not a perfect blanket, curvenya di benerin dikit 00:16:037 (1) - move to x 232 y 312, then adjust the tail to x 324 y 144
2014-03-13 21:09 done *in other way*
2014-03-13 21:10 Setsurei: lol
2014-03-13 21:10 wendao2000: 00:14:043 (2,1,2,3,1) - coz this is a pentagon shape!!!
2014-03-13 21:10 wendao2000: ;D
2014-03-13 21:10 Setsurei: but this is not included on pentagon 00:16:037 (1) -
2014-03-13 21:10 Setsurei: ACTION runs
2014-03-13 21:11 Setsurei: owait
2014-03-13 21:11 Setsurei: iya sih
2014-03-13 21:11 wendao2000: D:
2014-03-13 21:11 Setsurei: ketutup (2)
2014-03-13 21:12 Setsurei: 00:45:133 (2) - 94 85
2014-03-13 21:12 Setsurei: 00:48:567 (1) - 16168
2014-03-13 21:12 wendao2000: aw, fix'd
2014-03-13 21:12 Setsurei: 00:48:567 (1) - 161 68
2014-03-13 21:13 wendao2000: wtf
2014-03-13 21:13 Setsurei: :>
2014-03-13 21:13 wendao2000: done
2014-03-13 21:13 Setsurei: 00:54:712 (4) - 384 280
2014-03-13 21:13 wendao2000: done
2014-03-13 21:14 Setsurei: 01:16:399 (3) - tail 283 147
2014-03-13 21:15 Setsurei: or just move to 368 260 without moving the tail
2014-03-13 21:21 Setsurei: 00:36:090 (6,1) - imo prefer stacked because 1/2 beat differences while 00:35:367 (4,5,6) - is 1/1 beat differences
2014-03-13 21:22 Setsurei: btw itu insane
2014-03-13 21:23 Setsurei: 00:49:102 (2) - sengaja ga stack ekor? kalo ga sengaja move to 136 212
2014-03-13 21:27 Setsurei: 00:49:825 (3) - nazi, red point 325 180, 2nd white point 299 128, tail point 245 131
2014-03-13 21:30 Setsurei: 01:16:392 (1) - 404 308 (so it shaped x with 01:15:849 (1) - )

overall, nice map good luck

17:46 wendao2000: 00:49:103 (2) - intentional || 00:49:827 (3) - why it's nazi? ;; || done *in other way*
17:47 Setsurei: lol nazi because it's just a blanket fix
17:49 wendao2000: ic, okay 8)
17:49 wendao2000: thanks for modding btw
17:50 Setsurei: kan M4M 8)
17:50 *wendao2000 runs

will update after do some experiment with sounds storyboard